第一篇：2010年各省市(北京)高考书面表达改编短文改错及模拟演练
(2010 北京)假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华，利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Last weekend, I helped my grandparents preparing their trip to Beidaihe.On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched for the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel informations.In the afternoon, I went to the train station and manage to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there were a long queue.After the dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things what my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map.The next morning, I went to the station to see them out.Wave goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a pleased journey.69.模拟演练四十三
Play computer games takes up the teenagers too much of time these days.Some are even always playing computer all day instead of studying.So I think computer games should got rid of.They’re anything but a waste of time, money and energy.Teenagers who should do some valuable things like reading, studying and go to museums.What’s worse, some games are unhealthy and violence, which are bad for both physical or mental health of the young.Therefore, computer games bars should be banned from our cities and towns.70.模拟演练四十四
My mother was a village woman.She had very few education, but she knows knowledge is important.She often asks me how I get along well with my studies and encourages me study hard.My mother does everything which she can for me so that I can spend more time in my study.Once she was badly illness.When I got home to see her at night, I found the light was still on and Mother was sitting in bed, made new clothes for me!I was so deeply moved that tear came to my eyes.Such is my mother, a kind and hard-working woman.I’ll love her to forever.80.模拟演练四十五
Before you do everything, smiling first.If you show your unhappy face, he’ll be unhappy too.So show your smile, you will get his help.But it seems difficult of you to smile when you are sad.Don't afraid.Make up your mind to trying once and you’ll find you’re better in heart.Smile is also a kind of language what cannot be heard, but others can know it’s meaning.When you met your friends in the morning smile means “Morning!”.When you will fail, the friend’s smile means “Having another try!”.81.模拟演练四十六
Many young boys and girls had the habit of smoking, though they are middle school student.As we all know, smoking do harm to human beings.More and more people have realized that how serious this problem is.But they are never boring with it.Some people think smoking is a kind of fashion, and the others think smoking can refresh himself.In fact, smoking causes much illnesses.Meanwhile, smoking is the waste of money.What’s worse, careless smokers may cause danger fires.82.模拟演练四十七
It’s important of us to keep healthy.But do you know what to keep healthy? Well, Li Ming gives us a good example.He often takes exercises.He likes sports such as swimming, running and plays basketball.He takes care of him very well.He goes to the bed at ten in the evening and gets up at six in the morning.He takes a bath every day and wash his hands before meals.When have meals, he eats all kinds of healthy food such as fish, meat and vegetable.After meals, he also eats a lot of fruit.So he is health and strong.
第二篇：补课短文改错练习.和书面表达doc（最终版）
短文改错练习
（一）Mr Zhu was my math teacher when I study in primary school.He was very
strictly with us and that I never saw him smile in class during the first few
weeks.One day I suddenly got terrible headache at his class.I felt very horrible
that I couldn`t help crying.Mr Zhu stopped his teaching and walking to me，“What`s wrong? ”he asked gently.Heard what had happened, he immediately
put me on his back but carried me to the hospital.The doctor treated me
in time and I recovered soon.Seeing this, Mr Zhu smiled at me and said
“I am so glad you are better now!” Oh, how a bright smile!I learned from
that experience he was really a kind-heart man although he looked very serious.书面表达练习
（一）假定你是李华，你所在的学校要以A good teacher为主题举行一场英文演讲赛，请根据以下要点些一篇演讲稿，介绍你所喜欢的一位老师。要点：1.对学生的关爱2.能力与责任心
要求：1.词数100左右（开头和结尾以为你写好不计入词数）
2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯
Hello everyone.It is a great pleasure for me to be here today.________________
That`s all.Thank you for your attention.Hello everyone.It is a great pleasure for me to be here today.My English teacher Mrs zhang is a good teacher in my mind.She loves us and Treat us as her own children.Patient and responsible,she is always ready to help Anyone poor in English and encourage them to catch up with the others.And she is happy whenever we make progress.She loves English and really enjoys teaching.Learning a foreign language may be boring,but it becomes interesting in Mrs Zhang`s class,because she has a way to make her class lively and sometimes full of humor.She aims to improve our proficiency in listening,speaking,writing and reading.The results are impressive.That`s all.Thank you for your attention.
第三篇：2012 年各省市高考英语书面表达试题 1
2012 年各省市高考英语书面表达试题汇编 1、2012 年新课标（大纲全国 I 卷）（河南、宁夏、海南卷、黑龙江、吉林、河北、山西、新疆、云南、内蒙古）第二节书面表达满分 25 分 假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡Singapore举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括: 1.自我介绍包括英语能力 2.参加意图介绍中国、了解其他国家 3.希望获准.注意: 1.词数 100 左右: 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。内容要点: 1.个人情况包括英语能力2.参加意图介绍中国、了解其他国家 3.希望获准 4.合适的结尾
五、One Possible VersionDear Sir or MadamIm Li Hua a middle school student from China.I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted onthe Internet and I am interested in it.I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take partin it.Ive been learning English for 10 years and I speak fluent English.What is more IJI be able to tell students fromother countries about China and learn about their countries as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of yoursummer camp.Looking forward to your replyRegardsLi Hua
2、大纲全国 II 卷第三节 书面表达 30 分 假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教 Susan 参加，要点包括： ⒈ 时间：周五晚 8 点至 9 点 ⒉ 地点：学生俱乐部 ⒊ 内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等 ⒋ 要求：备小礼物 注意：⒈ 词数 100 左右，开头语已为你写好；⒉可以适当增加细节，以便行文连贯。Hi Susan Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday．参考答案 Hi Susan Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday． We Wed like to invite you to the party． want to give hima surprise so please keep quiet about it．Well gather at the Students Club at 8 p.m.this Friday after the eveningclasses．And its going to last about an hour．We each will prepare a little present．When he comes well light thecandles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him．Then the cake will be cut and well sing songs and playgames．Itll be nice to see how excited he will be．Im sure youll have a good time at the party too.Yours Li Hua
3、北京卷第一节 情景作文（20 分）假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，校报英文版正在开展“续写雷锋日记”活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，将你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来，向校报投稿。注意：1.日记的开头已为你写好。2.词数不少于 60。Saturday，June 2 Fine This morning第二节 开放作文（15 分）请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于 50。You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim.Now you are telling him how youunderstand the picture and what makes you think so.4、上海卷，回家后你用英语写了一篇 上周一，你在一所小学观摩了小女孩 Amy 所在班级的两堂绘画课（如图所示）日记，内容包括：● 对两堂绘画课的具体描述；● 你从中获得的启发。5、2012 年天津第二节：书面表达（满分 25 分）假设你是李津，你的美国朋友 Chris 就读于天津某国际学校。他熟悉中国文化，特别是戏曲文化。8 月 5 日下午 2:00 在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧《梁山伯与祝英台》。请你根据以下提示，用英语给 Chris 写一封电子邮件，邀请他一起观看演出。提出邀请并简述原因； 提出观剧后活动建议（如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等）请求对方回复注意： 1.请使用规范英语，词数不少于 100； 2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：越剧：Shaoxing Opera《梁山伯与祝英台》 Butterfly Lovers 天津大剧院 Tianjin Grand TheaterDear Chris I have good news to tell you.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Jin
6、安徽卷第二节 书面表达满分 25 分 假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流，主题是高中生对文，理科的选择。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，向他们介绍你所做的选择，并说明选择的理由。注意：1.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.词数 120 左右； 3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。参考词汇：文科 arts理科: scienceGood afternoon everyone.Welcome to our school _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThanksOne possible versionGood afternoon everyoneWelcome to our school High school students are faced with a choice between arts and science.It was not an easychoice for me to make.After careful consideration though I decided on science as my main subject of study.Thereasons are as follows.First science graduates are in greater demand than arts ones in China.Second the science major can help me achievemy childhood dram of becoming a scientist.Third my parents wish me to study science at college because they believeI will have a brighter future as a science student.Last but not least my physics teacher is my role model whoseinfluence on me had a lot to do with my decision.It is for these reasons that I finally made my choice.Thanks！
7、浙江卷第二节：书面表达（满分 30 分）你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动，该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句（quote）并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子： “Your future depends on many things but mostly on you”：请按下列要求用英语写一篇 100-120 个词的短文：
1、针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法；
2、举例说明理由注意：短文的开头已给出（不计词数）In the English Reading Week one of my classmates recommended a quote to us which goes like this: quot Yourfuture depends on many things but mostly on you.quot______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案One possible student version In the English Reading Week one of m classmates recommended a quote to us which goes like this: quotYour futuredepends on many things but mostly on you.quot I cant agree more with this view.Its true that our future is determined bymany things such as opportunities and help from others but our own attitude determination and hard work play amore important role.In other words we are the master of our own future.Take Abraham Lincoln for example.He was born in a poor family and only received a limited education in hischildhood.Yet through his painstaking efforts he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America.Evento this day Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world.Therefore I firmly believe that ourfuture is in our own hands.8、山东卷第二节 写作（满分 30 分）假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文： 参加英语角的益处； 坚持写英语日记的作用； 英文阅读网站（EnjoyReading）对你的帮助。注意：1.词数：120-150； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
9、福建卷第二节书面表达满分 25 分）假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者；以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻谙根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。内容要求： 1.描述漫画内容；2.发表个人感想。注意： 1.短文标题与开头已给出不计入总词数； 2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯 3.词数 120 左右 4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇: 告示牌 sign Mind Your Behavior in Public PlacesLast Sunday I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.参考范文 Mind Your Behavior in Public PlacesLast Sunday I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.The park was full of freshness and beauty ofspring with the sun shining and birds singing.When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around something unpleasantcaught my eye.A young couple in a boat were eating talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in theworld.Whats worse they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake totally ignoring the noticeable sign quotNo Litteringquotnearby.What a shameSuch behavior left me deep in thought.If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did the lake will beseverely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin.I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places.Onlyin this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.10、陕西卷第三节 书面表达 满分 30 分 假定你是李华。下面的图画描述了教师节那天你们班组织的一次活动，请根据写作要点并参考图画内容，为校刊“英语角”版面写一篇短文。写作要点： 1．活动的策划；2.教室的布置；3.活动的内容；4．你的感想。注意： 1．短文词数不少于 100； 2．开头部分已写好，不计入总词数； 3．可根据情况增减细节，详略得当。Ms.Li our English teacher must have found it strange on Teachers’ Day she did not receive a single greeting card from us students.She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her.参考范文Ms.Li our English teacher must have found it strange on Teachers’ Day she did not receive a single greeting cardfrom us students.She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her.As Teachers’ Day was approaching our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for a change thisyear.On the afternoon of September 10，some of us decorated our classroom with paper flowers and balloons andothers went to buy cakes drinks and fruits.The blackboard was decorated with beautiful words which read “HappyTeachers’ Day”Entering the classroom Ms.Li was surprised to find we were standing in line clapping hands and saying loudly“Happy Teachers’ Day” Wang Hua our monitor presented her with the prepared flowers.Some of the girls sang songsfor Ms.Li and three boys showed their Gongfu talent.Before we left we enjoyed a new English song by Ms.Li.Ms.Li spent a wonderful time with us but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all her hard work andguidance.11、重庆卷第二节 书面表达（满分 25 分）某国际网站提供个人闲置物品交换服务。现在，你打算通过该网站将自己的一件闲置物品与他人交换（exchange）。请你用英文在该网站上发帖，发布物品交换信息。内容应包括： 你将拿出什么物品进行交换 具体介绍该物品 你希望换回什么物品 请愿意交换的朋友给你留言 注意：（1）词数 100 左右；（2）格式不限；（3）文中不得使用考生真实姓名和学校名称。
12、四川卷书面表达（满分 35 分）假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师 Ms Li 希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。
1、对英语学习的认识；
2、自己目前的英语水平；
3、自己英语学习存在的主要问题；
4、对英语教学的两点建议。注意：词数 100 左右；信的开头和结尾已给出。Dear Ms Li ppy ve ou s I’m very ha to ha y a our E e nglish t acher.ou Thank y Li HuaOne Possible Version:Dear Ms Li I am very happy to have you as our English teacher.As the world is becoming a global village English is getting more and more important so mastering Englishmeans we can see the world through a new window.My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heartand that I often feel nervous when speaking English.I really hope that you can give me good advice on how tomemorize new words.Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking.I believe we can make muchprogress in English with your help.Thank you Li Hua
13、湖北卷第二节：短文写作共 I 题；满分 30 分 请根据以下提示，并结合小例，用英语写一篇短文。You cannot choose what you are given but you can choose how you make use of it.注意:①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； ②除诗歌外，文体不限 ③词数为 120 左右。参考答案Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school.Disappointed as I feltat the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom I found the teachers patient and considerate.Besides Ienjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class.I decided to make the best of it.I worked hard and got along well with myteachers and classmates.Whenever I had difficulties they were always available.Soon I became one of the top students in my class whichgreatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.14、广东卷III 写作（共两节，满分 40 分）第一节 基础写作（共 1 小题，满分 15 分）你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。【写作内容】请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物 姓 名：Allan Stewart 国 籍：澳大利亚 出生日期：1915 年 3 月 7 日 世界纪录：2006 年获硕士学位时年龄最大 学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。第一个学位：1936 年获得 第二个学位：医学博士 第三个学位：80 多岁时决定学习法律，2006 年获得硕士学位。第四个学位：2012 年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习时间，受到老师表扬。硕士学位：master’s degree 博士：doctor 【写作要求】只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。Allan Stewart an Australian old man born on March 7 1915 is already the holder of the world record for beingthe oldest graduate.He thinks it is never too late to challenge oneself to achieve something worthwhile.He got his firstdegree in 1936 later along with a doctor’s degree of medicine.He decided to study law in his eighties and he got themaster’s degree in 2006 which was his third degree.In 2012 he received his fourth degree by network learning whowas praised for his proper arrangement on his study schedule.Born on March 7 1915 Allan Stewart an Australian old man is already the holder of the world record for beingthe oldest graduate.He thinks it is never too late to challenge oneself to achieve something worthwhile.He got his firstdegree in 1936 later along with a doctor’s degree of medicine.He decided to study law in his eighties and he got themaster’s degree in 2006 which was his third degree.In 2012 he received his fourth degree by network learning whowas praised for his pr.
第四篇：高考模拟英语书面表达学情分析及写作策略
高考英语书面表达学情分析及写作策略
株洲市第十三中学英语老师柳芳
摘要: 高考英语书面表达一直以来是学生应试的心腹大患，本人针对学生的写作情况进行分析，总结出一些英语写作的基本技巧及平时英语学习中的英语书面表达中的培养方法。
关键词: 高考英语书面表达教师
高中英语课程的总目标之一是培养学生的综合语言运用能力；语言技能和语言知识是综合语言运用能力的基础。而高考英语书面表达正是对高中英语课程总目标考察的重要体现,它旨在测试最基本的英文表达能力，主要看学生是否能够运用所学的英语知识和掌握的基本技能正确进行表达。因此，命题者在编拟试题时，总是力求使学生对写作的目的、体裁、对象、内容及字数等一目了然。试题提供的信息一般为汉语提示，表格,图画或英语短文,在我们湖南省内的学生,更是体验了开放式作文----即提供一个topic(话题)，由学生围绕话题自由想象发挥。试题的难度适中，要求学生做到“内容切题，文理通顺，语言准确，无语法错误”。
在本人工作以来的六年英语教学过程中，对学生的英语作文有一些认识。
一学生写作常见错误
1、审题不清。由于考试时间紧迫，学生答题心切、审题不严谨，导致走题或重要点遗漏，作文不合要求。
2、时态和人称混乱。学生在写作时总是容易忘记时态与人称的正确运用，有时通篇一个时态不管事情发生先后，而有时同一篇文章中会出现一、二、三人称的现象。
3、中式英语（Chinglish）。原因是学生的母语在英语学习中产生的负迁移作用占了主导地位，以致写出的句子不合英语的表达方式和英美人的行为习惯。
4、文不对题。随意添加题外信息，将自己丰富的想象力不适当地用到某一细节上，画蛇添足。
5、冗言。主要是学生用词累赘，短文中写了无关紧要的词语。
6、不规范。不少学生没有养成正确使用拼音文字习惯，常在大小写、名词复数、动词形态变化、比较等级，以及标点符号等方面漏洞百出。
7、词汇错误。不少学生在单词拼写，同义词语的选择、短语搭配和习惯用法等方面出现了错误，其中词汇拼写错误最为普遍。
8、断句不清且复杂。对句子结构不了解，以致写出的句子在结构上残缺不全，充其
量只能是一个短语或从句等。或在在一句话中揉进过多的内容，写出的句子相当繁杂，以致逻辑混乱，语言不畅，表意不清。
9、卷面不洁。由于学生不打草稿，对文章缺乏整体构思，以致行文逻辑混乱，涂改
现象随处可见，这样的答卷令评卷人生厌。
二书面表达的基本原则
鉴于上述问题，本人认为书面表达的基本原则应该是：
1、以英语基本句型为准绳展开书面表达；要提高作文等级，平时学生还可适当背诵
一些高级句型。如：
1).I am the very person that you want.2).It is common / obvious / apparent / important / necessary /…..that ….3).What shocks / surprises / benefits / worries / interests / impresses / excites sb is
that …….4).As we all know, ………..5).Many people hold the view that …………。On the other hand, some people have the
opposite opinion that …..6).The reason why…………..is that …………..例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air.7).~~~ the + ~ est + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read,etc)
~~~ the most + 形容词 + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen(known/heard
/read,etc)
例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.8).An advantage of ~~~ is that ……………（...的优点是...）
9).There is no doubt that ……………（毫无疑问的...）
10).From the picture, we can see a phenomenon that …
2、从表达信息的角度组织材料，而不是对说明文字本身进行翻译。如果遇到难以表
达的短语或句子应设法化难为易。若内容上正面说有困难，可试着从侧面或反面着笔，切忌死扣字眼。
3、根据自己英语语言的实际驾驭能力，选择自己熟悉的表达方式，句式上尽量写得
简单明确，做到不确切的句型不用，不熟悉的语法不用，不熟悉的词汇不写，切忌舍
简求繁，生搬硬套。
4、在语言表达上，先求“达”再求“雅”。一则具有“完整内容，正确的语言，规范的书
写和格式”的书面表达便是一篇上乘佳作。
5.文章写完后，要养成自我检查的习惯。花一到二分钟时间检查作文的要点有无遗
漏，时态和人称是否正确，动词的单数第三人称，名词单复数，固定搭配，大小写及
标点符号。做到百密无疏。
三英语学习中的书面表达能力的培养
水滴石穿，非一日之功，冰冻三尺，非一日之寒。要培养学生的书面表达、交际能力，教师必须从早抓起，从基础抓起。
第一、先从造句，汉泽英，句型转换，缩写课文和看图写话练起，一直到连贯地写出一段话。训练中要始终坚持注意单词的拼写、大小写、标点符合动词的形态变化等最基本的东西。
第二、教师要加强学生遣词造句的训练，熟练掌握常用的简单句的五种基本类型以及并列句、主从复合句等句型，了解英语习惯用法，学会用好动词，不生搬硬套英语词汇。对大纲中出现率较低的消极词汇要在搞清其内涵和外延的情况慎重选用。一般情况下，提倡使用自己能驾驭的初级词汇，以小词求大意。
第三，教师要教会学生使有多种表达法。要从表达信息的角度去组织文字，表示同种思想往往有许多不同的方式。常见的方式有：①句型转换。②关键词语、短语的替换。③主客体的变换。④动态与静态的互换。⑤正面叙述与侧面、反面表述的变换。⑥语态的转换。⑦简单与复合句的转换。⑧正常语序与倒装句的转换等等。见下例： ①Would you please close the door? ——I wonder if you can close the door?
②Quit a few months went by, and I failed to get the thing——Many months passed, and I didn„t succeed in getting the thing.③Our school was founded in 1950——1950 saw the founding of our school.（主客体变换）
④He smiled again ——another smile appeared on his face.⑤Education is free for all the children here——all the children here can receive school education without pay
⑥The earthquake killed as many as 1000 people-----As many as 1000 people was killed in the earthquake.⑦She is the excellent student and always wins the scholarship-----She is the excellent students who always wins the scholarship.⑧We can succeed only in this way------Only in this way can we succeed.如果学生掌握了以上等句式的转换方法，就可以在应试中根据自己对上述表达方式的熟练程度，做到扬长避短，写出自己最有把握的句子。
第四，教师要教会学生掌握一般文体的格式，开头及结尾用语及写作要求，特别是对时态的要求。善于运用常见的表示句子过渡的用语，如表递进（also, besides, as well as, in addition,），表转折、让步（yet, however, though, even though, on the other hand „），表总结（in a word, in short, on the whole „），此外学生还需了解书面表达的基本原则、步骤、注意事项以及常见的错误。
第五，教师要训练培养学生书面表达的解题技能。从书面表达解题步骤分析，可分五步进行：
第一步：在认真审题的基础上，将题目规定的要点译成英语。这样可以避免要点的遗漏，还可以防止随意发挥的现象产生。完成该步骤时，要注意紧扣指令中的语句并注意使用自己最熟悉的表达方式。
第二步：将要点扩展成句。完成该步骤时，一要搞清谓语动作的发生者选择好适当的主语；二要搞清楚谓语发生的时间，选择合适的时态；三要注意句子结构的简洁。
第三步，根据句子的内在联系或事件发生的先后顺序重新排序组合。
第四步，连接所有的句子形成短文。完成该步骤时，一要注意体裁格式符合要求；二要注意句子与句子之间的过渡要自然，即在需要之处加上适当的表示并列、递进、因果、转折等关系的联词；三要注意根据行文逻辑进行适当分段。
第五步，复读验证。通读全文，看看要点是否齐全，行文是否流畅，字数是否符
合要求。切忌草率定篇，盲目收场。
上面的五大步骤，保证了解题过程程序化，就象套公式一样，每一步骤只解决一两个问题，既确保文章符合题目要求，不漏写、多写，又不会出现文不对题的混乱现象。由于每个步骤思考的问题单一集中，语言上的差错可能性大大减少，同时又避免了反复、节省了考试时间。
总而言之，书面表达在高考英语中占着很重要的一席之地，同时它也是学生很容易把握的一个题型，只要平时多以练习，注意步骤，背诵佳句，在练中升华写作技巧，丰富经验，就能攻破高考英语的英语作文关。
参考书目：
[1]英语三年高考五年模拟首都师范大学出版社2005.10
[2]吴如明等“高中英语课堂指导”2003.9
[3]中小学外语教学2008.6
[4]英语创新设计高考总复习2008.2
二00 八 年 十 月
第五篇：2016高考英语二轮复习冲刺第6练 阅读+七选五+语法填空+短文改错+书面表达
第6练 阅读＋七选五＋语法填空＋短文改错＋书面表达
Ⅰ.阅读理解
A
体裁：记叙文 话题：日常生活 词数：310 时间：6′
Doris Carvalho，a woman from Tampa，America has come up with an original way of combining her two greatest passions—veterinary science(兽医学)and fashion.She recycles dog hair and changes it into high－end designer handbags.Doris loves her new job so much that she hopes to change it into a business—she's currently running a Kickstarter campaign to raise $15，000 toward that purpose.That's just enough money to make her first line of 30 handbags and pay for marketing.“These handbags prove that high－end can be made eco－friendly from your pet for you，” she pointed out.“I turn dog hair that would be rubbish anywhere else in the world into these handbags.I use it to make the thread.It's reused and recycled.”
It takes Doris about 50 hours to complete each one handbag without any machines.She needs about two pounds of fur per handbag and she insists that the completed handbag is as soft as any other fur.It is priced at $1，000，but she says that the price would go down if the products were to ever go into mass production.“I hope in the future I can make it cheaper and sell much cheaper for everyone，” she said.We aren't sure how well these handbags are selling，but according to Jaime Calderbank，owner of One Lucky Dog in St.Petersburg，it all depends on how much people are willing to display their love for their dogs.“I think a few of them that really love their dogs would like something like that，” she said.Doris has managed to raise just $350 ever since she started the campaign，but she has 50 days to reach her $15，000 goal.“I hope people who like the campaign can help，” she said.“Any contribution is welcome.” 【语篇解读】 Doris Carvalho用废弃的狗毛做成高端手提包。1．What do you know about Doris Carvalho? A．She makes handbags from dog hair.B．She is studying veterinary science.C．She studied fashion design in college.D．She raises homeless dogs in her hometown.答案 A [细节理解题。根据第一段“She recycles dog hair and changes it into high－end designer handbags.”可知，Doris Carvalho用狗毛做手提包。] 2．Why did Doris Carvalho start the Kickstarter campaign? A．To let more people know her handbags.B．To collect dog hair to make handbags.C．To help protect the environment.D．To raise some money for her business.答案 D [细节理解题。根据第二段“...she hopes to change it into a business—she's currently running a Kickstarter campaign to raise $15，000 toward that purpose.”可知，Doris Carvalho想要把用狗毛做手提包当成一项事业，所以她开展了Kickstarter campaign这项运动来筹钱。] 3．It can be inferred from the passage that ________．
A．it is not easy to reuse and recycle dog hair B．dog hair is the most suitable material for handbags C．what Doris has done benefits the surroundings D．no one supported Doris Carvalho's campaign 答案 C [推理判断题。根据第三段内容可知，Doris Carvalho把被当作垃圾的狗毛做成手提包，这使得狗毛被回收和再利用，由此可推知，Doris Carvalho的手提包对环境有益。]
B
体裁：记叙文 话题：人与自然 词数：320 时间：7′
All trade in five named species of sharks is to be regulated(管制)from now on.Without a permit，the sale of their meat or fins(鳍)will be forbidden.The regulation was agreed last year at a meeting of the Convention on International Trade in Endangered Species in Thailand.According to the rules，the whitetip(白鳍鲨)，the porbeagle(鼠鲨)，and three varieties of hammerhead will be protected.Besides，manta rays(比目鱼)，valued for their gills(鳃)which are used in Chinese medicine，will also be protected.The action is seen as the most important one in the 40－year history to protect these species.“Regulating international trade in these shark and manta ray species has a great effect on their survival and is a very clear way of helping to protect sharks and our oceans，” said Secretary General John Scanlon.“The practical steps will involve issues such as limiting export levels，and identifying the fins，gills and meat that are in trade.This may seem challenging，but by working together we can do it and we will do it.”
Under the rules，all trade in these sharks and rays across 180 countries will not be allowed unless they have got their permits given by the national related organization.As a matter of fact，trade in shark fins has already decreased greatly as a result of campaigns to raise awareness.Recently it has been reported that sales have gone down by 70%.Earlier this year the hotel giant，Hilton Worldwide stopped serving shark fins at its 96 owned and managed Asia－Pacific hotels.However，Denmark，Canada，Guyana，Japan，Iceland and Yemen have all announced they will not follow the new rules and will continue to fish for some or all of these species.Under the regulations though，they are only able to trade with other countries that are also ready to ignore the rules.Officials point out that for such a questioned issue，the number of countries which is going to continue the trade is small.【语篇解读】 去年在泰国的一个国际会议上，与会人员通过了保护鲨鱼和比目鱼的规定。人们需要获得许可证才能捕杀和交易鲨鱼。
4．The purpose of putting the new rules into force is to ________．
A．limit people's trade in ocean animals' meat B．protect some species of sharks against over fishing C．let fishers know the importance of protecting sharks D．prevent big hotels from serving sharks' meat 答案 B [细节理解题。根据第一、二段内容可知，实施新规定的目的是保护五种鲨鱼和比目鱼，只有获得许可，人们才可以捕捞和贩卖这些鲨鱼。] 5．Which of the following doesn't belong to species of sharks? A．The manta ray.B．The porbeagle.C．The whitetip.D．The hammerhead.答案 A [细节理解题。根据第二段“According to the rules，the whitetip，the porbeagle，and three varieties of hammerhead will be protected.Besides，manta rays...”可知，比目鱼不属于鲨鱼。] 6．What can be inferred from John Scanlon' s words in Paragraph Four? A．The regulation may have some negative effects on sharks.B．The export of sharks' meat will be called off in some periods.C．It's nearly impossible to carry out the regulation worldwide.D．Officials are confident that the regulations have a promising future.答案 D [推理判断题。根据第四段“This may seem challenging，but by working together we can do it and we will do it.”可知，John Scanlon认为虽然很具有挑战性，但是只要人们一起努力，保护鲨鱼的行动就会成功，由此可推知，官方对新规定的前景很看好。] 7．Hilton Worldwide is a good example of ________．
A．people's getting their permits to trade in shark fins B．a successful company's managing its wealth C．people's beginning to stop eating shark fins D．people's raising awareness to protect sharks 答案 D [推理判断题。根据第六段内容可知，随着保护鲨鱼意识的提高，鲨鱼交易已经大幅度减少了。希尔顿酒店停止向顾客出售鱼翅，这给提高保护鲨鱼意识做出了好的表率。] Ⅱ.根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。A fear of heights is a common feeling that is easy to understand.According to many psychologists，a fear of heights is one of only two natural fears.__8__If you are on the edge of a cliff，it is useful to be a little afraid.If you are not afraid，you could walk too close to the edge(边缘)and fall off.Having a fear of heights is good because it protects us from real danger.__9__They experience strong fears even inside a safe environment such as a tall building，which is not a common response and it is not helpful.John Adams，an English teacher，has a strong fear of heights that makes his life very difficult.“As long as I can remember，I have had a powerful fear of heights.__10__For example，when I was with friends in Paris，I became terrified while going up the Eiffel Tower.I was almost crying and I felt embarrassed for the rest of the vacation，Adams said.Fortunately，having an unreasonable fear of heights can be corrected.__11__The most effective way seems to be getting the person to acknowledge(承认)their fear，for example，by encouraging them to go to the top of tall buildings，hike up tall mountains，or stand on a high bridge.__12__When people face a threatening situation，taking slow，deep breaths can help slow the heart rate and increase the oxygen flow to muscles to keep from tensing(紧张)up.If possible，a few minutes of meditation(沉思)may be effective in reducing some tension.It is important to remember that a fear of heights is not unusual and can be treated.A．Another way to overcome a fear of heights is to learn to control the physical symptoms.B．However，some people have an unreasonable and unhealthy fear of heights.C．One way to defeat your fear of heights is to do an activity that involves nothing but heights.D．There are a number of ways that can be achieved.E．It can completely ruin a vacation.F．The other is a fear of loud noises.G．Nearly everyone experiences some degree of panic when facing heights.答案
8．F [根据上文“...a fear of heights is one of only two natural fears.”可知，恐高是两种天然的恐惧之一，另一种是对大的噪音的恐惧。] 9．B [根据下文“They experience strong fears even inside a safe environment such as a tall building...”可知，然而有些人会对高度产生过度的恐慌，他们甚至在比如较高的建筑物里也会感到强烈的恐惧。] 10．E [根据下文“...when I was with friends in Paris，I became terrified while going up the Eiffel Tower.I was almost crying and I felt embarrassed for the rest of the vacation...”可知，John Adams因为恐高而使得自己在巴黎的假期过得很糟糕。] 11．D [根据上下文“...having an unreasonable fear of heights can be corrected...The most effective way seems to be getting the person to acknowledge their fear”可知，过度地恐高是可以被改正过来的，有许多方法可以做到这一点。最有效的方法就是让人承认他们的恐惧。] 12．A [根据下文“...taking slow，deep breaths can help slow the heart rate and increase the oxygen flow to muscles to keep from tensing up.”可知，另外一种方法就是控制体征，比如慢慢地深呼吸来降低心率，让更多的氧气流向肌肉来避免紧张。] Ⅲ.阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。
A boy trembled in the cold winter，__13__(wrap)his arms around himself on a bus stop bench.He __14__(wear)warm clothes and the temperature was －10℃.A heartbreaking scene!But the good deeds of the ordinary people who witnessed __15__11－year－old Johannes were both joyous __16__ inspiring.A woman，sitting next to the boy，discovered he was __17__ a school trip and was told to meet his teacher at the bus stop.She __18__(self)covered her own coat around his shoulders.Later，__19__ woman at first gave him her scarf，and then wrapped him in her large jacket.Throughout the day，more and more people offered Johannes their gloves and even the coats off their backs.__20__(actual)，it was a hidden camera experiment by Norwegian charity SOS Children's Village as part of their winter campaign to collect __21__(donate)to help Syrian children get through the winter.Synne Ronning，the information head of the organization，also noted that the child was a volunteer who was never in any __22__(dangerous)during the filming.【语篇解读】 这是一篇记叙文阅读。文章主要讲述了一个11岁男孩在汽车站得到好心人的帮助，通过这件事挪威SOS儿童村发起救助贫穷的孩子温暖过冬的活动。
13．wrapping [考查非谓语动词用法。根据句子的主语a boy是wrap的动作执行者，应填现在分词，故填wrapping。] 14．wasn't wearing [考查时态。根据前文的tremble应是没有穿暖和的衣服，指当时正在进行的动作，应用过去进行时。故判断应填wasn't wearing。] 15．the [考查冠词。根据前文这个11岁的孩子应是第二次出现，应特指，故填the。] 16．and [考查连词。根据空前后是并列关系。故填and。] 17．on [考查介词。根据下文的school trip应是进行，on a school trip进行学校郊游。故填on。] 18．selflessly [考查副词。根据空后的cover判断填副词形式。故填selflessly。] 19．another [考查限定词。根据语境，应是又一个妇女。故填another。] 20．Actually [考查副词。根据空后的标点符号，应是填副词，可知填Actually。] 21．donations [考查名词用法。根据空前的动词collect，应填名词形式。故填donations。] 22．danger [考查名词。根据空前的in 和any应填名词形式，故判断填danger。] Ⅳ.短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There are some voices claimed Lei Feng's spirit has gone out of style in today's society.They think nowadays people should seek more practically things，such as fame，money or a comfortable life.To them everything is more important than those things.However，there are some other people still believe in the spirit of Lei Feng is important in modern society.I agree with the second views.The great soldier's story has a strong influence on people's ideas，values and ways of life on the past.Now we still need it to make us becoming better people so that we can live meaningful lives.答案
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claimed Lei Feng's spirit has gone out of style in
claimingtoday's society.They think nowadays people should seek more
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who/that the spirit of Lei Feng is important in modern society.I agree with the second viewshas.The great soldier's story a strong influence on people's ideas，values viewhadonbecomingand ways of life the past.Now we still need it to make us better inbecomepeople so that we can live meaningful lives.Ⅴ.书面表达
你班将举行一次以“珍爱生命，遵守交规”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你按拟定的提纲用英语写一篇演讲稿。
1．经济发展，私家车增加；
2．违章驾驶，事故频发(主要原因为酒驾、超速和闯红灯)； 3．提高安全意识，并采取有力措施。注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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本文是限内容、给提纲的控制性作文，由于是写当下的社会现象，所以时态要以一般现在时为主。内容要符合英语习惯。比如：“私家车增加”要用英语表达为“越来越多的人拥有私家车”。主谓宾状各个成分要完整；“事故频发”使用happen或take place，且只能用主动语态不能用被动语态；“采取措施”用英语表达为“take steps(measures/action)”。【参考范文】
With the rapid development of China's economy，more and more people own their private cars.Some drivers don't always obey the traffic rules，so traffic accidents are often happening.A recent survey shows in 2012 there are 26 million traffic illegal acts，an average of over 70 thousand a day.Behind the numbers，we can see the seriousness of our country's road safety.The main reason for traffic accidents is drunk driving.Besides，running the red light and speeding also result in this situation.In my point of view，we must take immediate action to reduce the traffic accidents.For example，drivers should be punished without mercy.At the same time，the government should call on people to obey the traffic rules.Only when we cut down the traffic accidents can we live a happier life.[亮点点击] 此篇文章结构完整，短文使用了较灵活的句式，如简单句、并列句、状语从句和倒装句等，使文章长短句结合，错落有致。同时，重点突出，详略得当。
亮点短语和词组：with the rapid development of，an average of，running the red light，without mercy，take action，call on，cut down，live a happier life。
高级句式：倒装句(Only when we cut down the traffic accidents can we live a happier life.)；被动语态(For example，drivers should be punished without mercy.)。
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