2009年12月大学英语四级真题作文及点评

第一篇：2009年12月大学英语四级真题作文及点评

2009年12月大学英语四级真题作文范文及点评

题目：Create a green campus 1.建设绿色校园十分重要 2.绿色校园不仅指绿色环境

3.为了建设绿色校园我们应该……

新东方版范文(一)

It is of great importance to make and maintain a green campus in our university or college.Obviously, a growing number of people are beginning to realize that it is our duty to do that in the present days, since the concept of “a green world” has become the focus of the society.The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.To begin with, the development on the campus is to be sustainable and recyclable.Some of the authorities' budget should be on how to reduce of the waste.What's more, we'd better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us.Thus the idea of environmental protection may become a common occurrence in our daily life.It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to protect our campus from waste and pollution, and hence these activities are to play an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.Certainly, there is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campuses.(字数：167)

点评：本次作文还是延续四级一贯成熟的风格，偏重校园生活。当然也结合了时下流行的话题，绿色环保。上面这篇文章尽管有些不妥当之处，但能较好的符合四级考试作文的核心：无论题目怎么变，都是以考察学生的语言为核心，不是考查思维和知识面的。所以只需关注语言的应用就行了。还是可以灵活套用固定的套路，中心句＋逻辑词的方式，做到不变应万变。相信大多数同学应该能够习惯的应用新路老方法走的思路。但是，还是这句话，无错表达才是四级语言表达合格的核心。

新东方版范文(二)

In recent years, extravagance and waste have become increasingly serious in some of the university campus.We can see that papers, bottles and cans are thrown away after use;food is wasted just because of its poor taste;clothes are discarded simply owing to their old fashion.As a consequence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on creating a green campus.There are at least two criteria to distinguish what is green campus.On the one hand, natural resources must be conserved and made full use of, for example, we, as college students, should take the wise use of papers and second-hand textbooks into account.On the other hand, education to build up thrift habits must be promoted by relevant departments and professionals at various levels.Accordingly, it is necessary for us to take effective steps.For one thing, university authorities should respond with the demand for more rigid conservation of our natural resources, such as water, electricity, and so on.For another, we should enhance the awareness of college students that creating a green campus is of utmost significance to both our society and ourselves.恩波版范文 范文：

Create a Green Campus “Green campus” is, to some extent, a relatively new concept to us.It not only means creating a green environment on campus, but also refers to that the students should be educated and have an environmental sense in their mind.Of course, this concept is very important for the students because it sets goals toward the future of the world.The young generation is under the burden of severe environmental problems and the hopes of environmental improvement are lying in them.Therefore, campus plays a more important role in educating the young generation.The creation of “Green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part in various environmental protection activities;most importantly, students will be educated to take environmental problems seriously as their own mission and responsibility.Under such stimulations, students may grasp the chance to learn every necessary course for the harmonious and sustainable development of the world.To bring “green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken.First, based on its education function, campus should bring the theory of “sustainable development” into classrooms, set environmental management rules and conduct environmental education activities.Second, campus also needs to strengthen its ties with the society, tries to communicate with parents and experts so as to ensure that students could have a better participation in the practical activities.Only by the co-efforts of the whole society could “green campus” work smoothly and bring benefit to people's well-beings.恩波版真题作文点评

此次的作文题目出的相对生僻，因为大多数考生对于“绿色校园”这个概念不大熟悉，这可能是最大的障碍，给考生着手写作文带来一定的困难。尽管“绿色校园”概念相对生僻，但此题中寓含的另一个概念“环境”却不可忽视，因此，考生应当从环境问题着手，着重点放在校园在“环境保护”中所起的重要作用，这样问题就能够迎刃而解。

首先要理清概念。“绿色校园”不仅指校园的绿色环境，“绿色学校”是指学校在实现其基本教育功能的基础上，将以可持续发展理论为导向，在全面的日常工作中将可持续发展思想纳入管理中，通过制订环境管理制度，开展有效的环境教育活动，创设环境保护的文化氛围，促进师生、家长和专家参与环保和可持续发展的实际行动，全面提高师生的环境素养，共同为社会的可持续发展做出贡献。从概念就能看出“绿色校园”的重要性。

其次要弄清“绿色校园”的重要性。“绿色校园”不仅仅是带领学生参与各种环境保护活动，更重要的是教育学生，使学生具有环境意识，从而使学生从自己意识的角度来理解当前的环境问题，为未来的环境改善打下坚实的基础。

最后就是要采取的措施。要很好地建设“绿色校园”光靠学校自身是不够的，这需要全体社会的动员与支持。只有在整个社会的共同努力下，“绿色校园”才能充分发挥其作用。从学校的角度来讲，学校应当在学校全面的日常管理工作中纳入有益于环境的管理措施，并持续不断地改进，充分利用学校内外的一切资源和机会全面提高师生环境素养的学校；鼓励师生的民主公平地共同参与学校环境教育活动，加强学校与社区的合作和联系，在实践参与的过程中发展面向可持续发展的基本知识、技能、态度、情感、价值观和道德行为，即提高全体教职员工和学生的环境素养，落实环保行动。

从总体写作来看，这篇作文总的可以分为三段：

第一段：着重写“绿色校园”的概念，从其概念引出“绿色校园”的重要地位。

第二段：此段的重点就是“绿色校园”的重要性，它能够促进学生们积极地参与到实际的环境问题中去，而且还能树立学生们的环境保护意识，对社会做出重大的贡献。

第三段：鉴于“绿色校园”的重要性，我们应当采取什么措施来建设“绿色校园”，把“绿色校园”的作用发挥到最大。

文都版范文 范文：

I am the part of the Green Campus

The Olympic Games was hold in our country last year.“Green and Environment-protecting ” is one of the Three Themes of it.Our government has made a great effort in order to protect the environment, build more green project to keep the ecological balance, push the recycling economy, and protects the water resource.As a university student, we should play an active role in the actions aimed at the realization of green and environment-protecting home and.We will start it from ourselves, our classmates, our friends and other people around us.We can stop cars running through our campus streets.And in the bathrooms, we will never leave the water running on after using.We will never throw things everywhere without thinking, They are wrong.These things are taking place everyday everywhere in our school.So, let's begin to act!Don't talk loudly in public places.Turn off the water tap after using it.After washing the clothes, use it to flash the toilet.Go to school by bike or by bus instead of by private car.Save your pocket money and contribute to environmental protection organizations.Collect waste paper or bottles for recycling.Plant more trees and flowers.We can start from every little thing around us to truly realize the green campus.Publicize the theme of green and environment-protecting, and let us really reach the “Green and Environment-protecting” goal in our generation.This is the responsibility of everyone who loves life and peace.文都版真题作文点评

作文是绿色校园的问题，包括在文都我们每一次对作文从三个角度去做预测，一个是结构，一个是主题，一个是它的材料，进行一个预测，但是这一次我总结有点对不起我的学生，因为这次尽管结构，首先第一个就是我们的绿色校园的重要性;第二是绿色不仅仅是环境的问题，也是列举的问题，除了环境以外还有什么别的方法，第三是怎么去做，其实这个结构老师在预测的过程中预测到了，但是主题坦白地说这一次徐可风没有预测中，还好后面的材料那块，我是给了学生五个材料，其中有一个怎么哥本哈根的会议闹得很凶的，气候跟绿色那是可以接上轨的，这次听过我的课的学生在重要性上可以来这么一句话，如果说哥本哈根会议是很重要的的话，那么建设绿色校园也必然很重要，有了这么一句就跟时实有一个结合，这就是个亮点，怎么说找亮点这就是亮点，所以上结构上我们是预测中，在主题上没有预测中，但是在材料上怎么说吧也中了(笑)。写作这一块大概是这么个情况，但是我现在很担心一个问题，同学们在考场上的时候思路打不开，我一直很担心这个问题，尽管知道一个结构但是思路打不开，现在我们就结合我们这次写作的讲得细一点。第一个关于重要性这块，我觉得我们在思路说可以不可以去联系一些我们在校园里看到的能够跟绿色环保扯得上关系的一些现象，大家是不是可以看到校园里面的湖、池塘飘的可口可乐、康师傅的塑料瓶，这些是不是体现出一种对环境一种很污染，这肯定是不绿色，我们每次晚上看到校园里面的教学楼灯光很辉煌，一看是不是很多学生都在自习啊，是不是很多学生在很认真地学习呢，到了教室一只鬼都没有，就是开着灯光，这就浪费了一种电，是不是也是不绿色的体现，我发现有一些尤其是男孩子，他们我不知道他们洗一双袜子用多少水，但是我感觉他洗一双袜子的水够我洗个洗澡，这是不是也是一种浪费，对资源的不重视，就是不绿色的行为，其实这些我们都可以结合身边的校园的事情去表达，一下子你的思路就打开了。

关于第二点绿色不仅仅是指环境的问题，我们可以再想想绿色还包括什么呢?刚刚除了提到的一些浪费的问问题，再想想，是不是包括刚刚考完试的同学有没有作弊过呢，这作弊是不是不诚实的问题，从道德的角度来说也是个不健康的，只要不健康的我们都可以把它称为不绿色，这些也可以结合去谈，是道德上的东西，还有有一次我突然想起来有一次我去检查宿舍，到宿舍里面去看进一个男生的宿舍，进之前我在走廊上听男生一直在发出一些感叹声，我进去一看一大批男孩子围着一个电脑不知道看什么，我进去说，我说你们在看什么内容，他们一看到我立刻就闪开了，感觉脸色有点不太好意思，我走过去看看电脑屏幕一看什么都没有。我当时想为什么我一来大家就全部闪开了吗，他们说是普通网页，徐老师也曾经年轻过，不要骗我，他们在上网看什么很清楚，这是不是也是不绿色的东西，东西这些除了环境以外，我们的道德，我们的上网，包括我们说话的习惯，我们说话的很多的学生尤其是男同学说话很有个性的，动不动就是一些国骂，其实在英文里面有一个词专门叫F words,那个单词我们不用说出来了，这种是不是是一个语言上的不绿色的表现，所以我觉得这里第二段的内容会写得内容非常非常多，敢于展开你的思路。

第三段是怎么去做，才能够比较的绿色，对绿色校园应该怎么去做，对于这一块我们首先可以地点从环境上保护环境，第二从节约上，节约电力，节水。

第二篇：最新大学英语四级真题作文

2012年6月四级作文

On Excessive Packaging

Nowadays the phenomena of excessive packaging of goods are prevailing in our society: clothes swathed in tissue paper, placed in cardboard box and finally wrapped in well-designed plastic bags, imported bottles of grape wine packed in wooden boxes, fruits put in hand-woven baskets, to name but a few.There are several causes of excessive packaging.The first reason is that a large number of companies believe that they can attract customers’ attention and stimulate their purchasing desire by over-packaging their goods, thus gaining more profits.On the other hand, quite a number of consumers mistakenly hold that the more delicate the package is, the better the quality will be, thus encouraging excessive packaging.In my point of view, excessive packaging has disastrous consequences, including the loss of precious resources, excessive consumption of water and energy, and unnecessary extraction of scarce land for landfill.To solve the problem, it’s necessary to take the following measures.First, laws and regulations must be made to restrict excessive packaging of companies.In addition, we need to raise consumer’s awareness that excessive packaging doesn’t equal to high quality and advocate packaging recycling.【解析】

本次作文的话题是“过度包装”，话题不断新，考生应该都比较熟悉。写好本篇作文的关键在于紧跟题目所列提纲：现象——原因——看法和建议，确定相应的写作结构。重点分析产生此现象的原因有哪些，把最重要的两三点罗列下来。最后，根据分析出的原因提供相应的建议。

范文首段开门见山，首先一句话总结如今社会上过度包装现象盛行，而后举出一些实例补充说明。

第二段重点从公司和消费者两方面论述产生过度包装的原因。公司方面是为了吸引顾客，刺激消费，赢取更多的利润；消费者方面是认为包装越精美，质量越好这种错误的消费意识。

接下来作者表明自己的看法，认为过度包装会导致很多问题：稀缺资源的流失；水，能源的过度消耗以及产生不必要的垃圾场等。

2011年12月四级作文

Directions: You're allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world.I’ve done it hundreds of time.”You'd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.Outlines:

1.坚强的意志是成功的重要保证。

2.意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命，3.学生也是这样，不刻苦学习，终究不会成为有用之才

Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will

With the coming of a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, the issue of how to succeed has aroused growing concern in the public.Although there are thousands of ways to success, in my opinion, a strong will is the important guarantee of success, just as a proverb says, “Where there is a will there is a way”.The long history of human being has proved that only those who have a strong will can fulfill great mission and achieve success at last.Nothing succeeds without a strong will.Take Mao Zedong, one of the great founders of the People’s Republic of China, as an example.If without the strong will to save Chinese people from heavy disaster and build a prosperous, democratic and civilized new country, how could he drive Japanese out of China and become such a famous leader in the world?

If we as a student want to be successful in the future, the strong will on hardworking is the most important.Nowadays, we have been entering an information age with rapid update of knowledge.Who firstly seizes and keeps up with the development of advanced information can succeeds at last.Therefore, studying hard to get more knowledge and improve our ability to handle complicated problems as possible is the only way to lay the solid foundation of future success.Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will

“Where there is a will, there is way” is an old proverb which almost everyone knows, but not all understand it so well.Actually, it means that if you are really resolved to do something, no matter how difficult it might be, never give up.In fact, strong will is a kind of good quality which successful people should own.A great man is always one who has a firm resolution and an inflexible spirit.One will never succeed all his life without a firm will to get the final victory.As a rule, great tasks are accomplished by men of strong will.For example, Dr.Sun Yatsen, the founder of the Republic of China, set the Chinese people free from the Manchurian rule through a long period of hard struggle.Many of his attempts failed and many of his followers were killed, but he had an inflexible spirit and stuck to his cause.Finally, he made the revolution of 1911 a success.The same is true of men in all walks of life.It is quite obvious that there is nothing difficult in the world, if you make up your mind to do it, you will certainly accomplish your end.That stands to reason.So as for students like us, we should have a good attitude towards failure.Facing with difficulties and failures, keep heads up and never give up.Besides, we should make full preparation, though strong will help us overcome the difficulties, it is not for person who has no preparation.2011年6月大学英语四级考试

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Doing Shopping Online

With the development of the Internet, shopping is no longer a tiring thing.Just click your mouse to choose the articles you like, and the purchase is done.You don't even have to step out of the room.It seems all easy and quick.However, people's opinions vary on this trend.Some believe that on line shopping is time and money saving.With plentiful selection options, they can buy whatever they like at any time convenient.Still others insist that mis-purchasing alone is annoying enough, not to mention the credibility of the sellers and the safety of their accounts.In my opinion, the convenience and excitement of on line shopping is beyond all doubts.In the meantime, we must always bear in mind that certain traps do exist, so we'd better make sure the sellers are trustworthy before buying.In addition, we should also guard ourselves from the potential hackers who might steal our account information.文章点评：

这是一篇“中等偏上”的学生作文。本文先对网购热潮进行简介，引出全篇；接着对网络购物的正反两方面进行对比；最后提出自己的看法结束全篇。整体看思路清晰，逻辑严密，行文流畅，用语较为地道。

下面说一下这篇文章的有待提高之处：

1.文章结构上，能看得出该同学试图采用议论文的“三段式”（提出问题、分析问题、解决问题）。但是，以“With the development of the Internet”为开首语，有些落入俗套，有硬套模板的嫌疑。稍加注意，应该能写出更好的句子。

2.微观语言点方面，有些语句稍显啰嗦，比如With plentiful selection options„ 简化成With plentiful selections„ 更好，意思没有丝毫减损，表达力反而增强许多。

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With the help of the ever rapid development of internet technology, online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities.Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons.From the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who don't have much spare time.Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home.For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who don't have much circulating funds.They don't have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode.However, there are still some defects in online shopping.First, lace of face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy.Second, people will lose the fun of bargain.It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society.It's of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping.Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated.点评：

本次四级作文探讨的是最近的热点话题之一——互联网网购。目前网购的风靡程度是众所周知，因此，考生对于该话题还是比较熟悉的。但是，比较特殊的是，题干所列出的要求的是考生从一个客观的角度来阐述该话题，而不是简单陈述自己的意见。所以，考生应当审清楚题，在写作时不仅仅要列出网购的优点，还必须给出相应的缺点。

按照四级作文的要求，考生在第一段时应该总述现象并引出话题；

第二段考生应当从正反两方面来论述网购，分别铺陈其优缺点；关于优点，网购的优点很多，考生可择其最突出显著的方面来阐述，比如说网购可以节省很多时间；网购可以节省很多成本开支等；其次，缺点方面考生可以把重心放在诚信方面；为了不至于跟优点相比，缺点方面太轻，考生可以考虑稍微提一下其他缺点，比如说与传统购物相比，网购少去了很多砍价的乐趣；

第三点要求考生对于第二段列出的缺点给出自己的建议。此处我们可以根据第二段列出的缺点方面给出相应的防范应对措施。

整篇作文话题比较好展开，难度不大，只要考生审好题，列出相应点，相信作文不会他是难题。

2010年12月大学英语四级考试

How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?

1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切

2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……

Nowadays, an increasing number of families in China have only one child.Most parents love and care for children so much as to help children deal with every problem.Consequently, children get used to depending on their parents in everything and lack the ability to solve problems independently.There are some effective ways for parents to help their children to be independent.To start with, parents should give their children more chances to experience the world and life around them.Thus their children can enhance the capability to overcome the difficulties and handle problems independently.In addition, parents should offer enough assistance when their children need advice.In this way, they depend on their parents in a right way and can solve problems independently when they face the same one next time.Last but not least, parents should allow

their children to make decisions independently.From the above discussion, I strongly believe that parents should help their children to be independent by instructing them in a proper way rather than planning and considering everything for them.2010年6月大学英语四级考试

Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling

1.如今不少学生在英语(论坛)学习中不重视拼写，2.出现这种现象的原因是…

3.为了改变这种状况，我认为….Nowadays, students attach little importance to the spelling of words in the process of English study.This phenomenon greatly influences students’ writing and brings on worries among teachers.There are possibly three reasons contributing to this phenomenon.First, exam-oriented education makes students pay little attention to spelling.Second, some teachers should also be responsible for it because they don’t emphasize the importance of spelling during teaching.Last but not least, some students are too lazy to recite words.Since spelling is one of the most important factors in English study, due attention should be given to it.As I see it, first, exams should be modified to add spelling into it.Then, schools should establish effective mechanisms to help teachers as well as students to realize the importance.Finally, students should be interested in word spelling.Only in this way, can we surely realize the importance of spelling and make improvement.2009年12月大学英语四级作文

Creating a Green Campus

1.建设绿色校园很重要 2.绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境3.建设绿色校园，我们应该……

Recently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has become a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our society.The concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s mind.Campus plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on students’ various environmental protection activities after their graduation.What’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to solve.To make “green campus” come true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable campus.Secondly, it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the waste.Last but not least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the co-effort of the whole society.2008年12月四级作文

Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags1、一次性塑料袋的使用。

2、一次性塑料袋带来的问题。

3、限制一次性塑料袋的意义。

In our daily life, most people use disposable plastic bags for shopping and other purposes.However, the excessive use of disposable plastic bags has resulted in a great damage to our environment.The problems brought by disposable plastic bags are various, ranging from environment to people's health.In the first place, it takes years for the plastic products to decompose and be absorbed by the soil.Secondly, the use of disposable plastic bags will indirectly do harm to people's health.Sometimes people buy hot food packed into disposable plastic bags for saving time to wash their dining utensils.Yet they are not informed of the chemical material the bags release in high temperature.Therefore, they are also eating the poisonous stuff while enjoying the tasty food.It's enlightening and significant that our government has banned the use of disposable plastic bags officially, and people will be charged for the use of such bags.This action is reducing the consumption of bags to a great extent.It is a great measure for the sustainable development of our earth.满分作文实录

Education, which gets children ready for challenges in the future, is of vital importance to them.Nowadays, more and more parents tend to send their kids to art classes to make sure that they will maintain an advantageous position in the increasingly fierce competition, which has given rise to a wide range of controversy.Some people support this idea, arguing that it will give the children a well-rounded education.In contrast, those who criticize the idea contend that it will do harm to the children rather than benefit them.From my point of view, the above-mentioned issue should be approached through a thorough analysis of the specific situation at hand.On one handclasses.Firstly, art classes can provide the kids with an effective way to relax themselves after a whole day’s tedious study.By listening to music or drawing some pictures, they can relax themselvesand return to study with renewed vigor.Secondly, children will have more opportunities to learn a different kind of culture if they take art classes.By being exposed to art, they are able to broaden their horizons.As a matter of fact, many subjects are interrelated(at)such a tight level that the study of one subject may help that of another.For example, the practice of drawing pictures may promote children’s understanding of geometry and math.Thirdly, children will have more chance to make different kinds of friends by taking art classes, which is very important to their mental health.On the other hand, parents should never force their children to take art classes if they show no interest or talent in art.Children may feel depressed or even refuse to take other classes if they are forced to learn art lessons against their own will.Only when they are indeed interested in art can we

In conclusion, whether parents should send their children to art classes should be determined by children’s interests.If they like, we may let them take the classes.But if they have no interest, parents should respect their will.(368 words)

2009年6月大学英语四级考试作文

（1）现在越来越多的博物馆向公众开放（2）有人认为会带来很多问题。（3）我认为…

Free Admission to Museums?

An increasing number of museums are open to the public for free in our daily life nowadays.However, no consensus is reached among the public on the influence it brings about on the museums and the visitors involved.Some people hold the opinion that free admission to museums will contribute to numerous problems ranging from the spoiling of the environment to the damage to the facilities of the museums.It is known that some visitors will throw away the garbage here and there, which will do great damage to the surroundings of the museums.What’s worse, it will take a lot of time and effort for the museums to fix the facilities destroyed by the little kids who come to the museum without company of their parents.However, there are different opinions on whether visitors should enjoy free admission or not.Some people maintain that visitors can acquire new knowledge and enrich their lives by visiting various museums.As far as I am concerned, just as every coin has two sides, it is true to the above phenomenon.Therefore, we are expected to take measures to educate the public to observe the rules and regulations when visiting the museums.Thus, more and more individuals will enjoy a favorable environment.2008年6月21日四级作文题目：

1.娱乐活动多种多样，2.娱乐活动可以使人们受益，也可能带来危害

3.作为大学生，我认为

Recreational Activities

In people’s daily life, there are various recreational activities apart from studying or working, ranging from Karaoke or dancing to computer games or sports games.Such activities are beneficial as well as harmful to us.On one hand, they can help us not only build our body and mind but also improve our communication and understanding with friends because most of these activities are done with others.On the other hand, if we spend too much time on singing, dancing or other games, we might fail to concentrate on our duties such as studying or working, which in turn may lead to further consequences.As far as I’m concerned, recreational activities should be done within a certain limit so that we can keep a proper balance between recreation and studying or working life.

第三篇：大学英语四级作文真题解析

大学英语四级作文真题解析

四级的题型包括论说文、说明文、记叙文。2017年6月份我们考的是考应用文，卖的是二手车、二手电脑，12月份考的是文字当中的A或者B的形式，到底是工作还是考研，到底是国企还是外企。2017年12月考到的是大家关心的医闹问题，同学感觉到这个问题比较伤感。医闹怎么说?我们可以翻成“医疗的一些问题、争端或者冲突”等等。这是第一套题。第二套题，讲的是所谓的老师和学生之间的关系如何营造。第三套题，父母和孩子的关系。

大家发现这道题从审题的难度来讲基本长没有什么难度，基本上是初中、小学词汇，题干不会出现什么问题。“How to”题型已经考过三次，重点在如何(how)，也就是说我们重点是方法。从内容上来讲，但是发现这三道考题之间的关系是大家非常熟悉的话题，比说医闹关系，医生和患者之间的关系，老师和学生的关系，这是教育的话题，再比如家长和孩子之间的关系等等，所以从题材到内容来说都是四级考生已经必备的知识要素。

我们的四六级的写作满分是15分，包括两部分，第一是奖励分，第二是基本分的部分。

首先，奖励分是卷面的问题，大家都喜欢美的事物。也就是说要保持卷面清晰，给老师留下好的第一印象。第二是基本分。这里包括三部分。

第一是文章的结构。

我们在写作文的时候分三个层次，总分总的原则，第一自然段我们一定要进行引题部分，第二是分析，第三是总结。第一段把医患关系，家长和孩子关系，学生和老师的关系等等，这些核心的主题词引导出来。

第二是分析。根据不同文章的要求，不同文章的题材进行分析的过程。重点在方法、建议的措施上。所以这个文章中间分析的环节，重点讲的是建议、措施和方法。

第三是总结。注意要加上所谓逻辑关系词。比如三个方法，或者是三个建议的措施，三个原因，三个危害等等。

这是英语考试，大家一定要想清楚我们每句话首先保证的是准确，其次保证的是漂亮。如何保证准确漂亮?第一个是词的运用，我们在刚才的文章当中，是否出现了“重要important”这个单词，你可以换一些高级的词汇essential，当你把这些常见的单词进行高级化的替换以后，你的分值就会提高。再说一下句型的文化。好的文章，不仅是句子准确，还要考虑句子的高级化。比如说你是否运用了非谓语动词等高级语法。

第四篇：历年大学英语四级作文真题及

1995年1月

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Can Money Buy Happiness?

You should write no less than 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.有人认为金钱是幸福之本(source of happiness)

2.也有人认为金钱是万恶之源(root of all evil)

3.我的看法

[范文]Can Money Buy Happiness?

Can money buy happiness? Various people have various answers.Some people think that money is the source of happiness.With money, one can buy whatever he enjoys.With money, one can do whatever he likes.So, in their minds, money can bring comfort, security, and so on.Money, as they think, is the source of happiness.But there are still a lot of others who think that money is the root of all evil.Money drives people to steal, to rob, and to break the law.A lot of people became criminals just because they were in search of money.And in the Western countries, there is nothing that can’t be bought by money.Many people lose their own lives when hunting it.I think that money is essential to life and we cannot do without money.But even though money is necessary to life, it can’t buy happiness.Happiness is not something that can be measured by money.It is a state of mind.One can have plenty of money, with which he can buy whatever he wants, and at the same time he is not happy because he is never satisfied or he is troubled by various kinds of problems.Therefore, although money is necessary for a happy life, it can’t buy happiness.1996年1月作文题目及范文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Two-day Weekend.You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.双休日给大学生带来的好处。

2.双休日可能给大学生带来的问题。

3.我应当怎样过好双休日。

[参考范文]The Two-day Weekend

The two-day weekend has brought a lot of benefits to college students.It not only offers us more time to get rid of tiredness and have a good rest, but also gives us more chances to take up some hobbies, such as fishing, reading, or gardening.From these activities we can learn many things outside the classroom, which will add to our knowledge.Despite the convenience it brings us, the two-day weekend has also given rise to quite a few problems.The most serious one is that the weekdays are filled with more lesson, sometimes too many.Because our classes are limited to Monday through Friday, we have to take more lessons each day than in the past.This leaves us little time to catch our breath during the weekdays.In order to benefit most from the two-day weekend, I have decided to make a good plan for the two-day weekend.Of course I should take this chance to relax.But during

the weekend, I will still set aside enough time to study.By doing so ii can have a good time as well as make progress in my studies.1996年6月作文题目及范文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Global Shortage of Fresh Water.You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.人们以为淡水是取之不尽的(提示：雨水、河水、井水......)

2.实际上淡水是非常紧缺的(提示：人口增加，工业用水增加，污染......)

3.我们应该怎么办

[范文]Global Shortage of Fresh Water

Many people believe that the world’s supply of fresh water will never be used up.They think that fresh water comes from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use.Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.As a matter of fact, the earth is short of fresh water.Furthermore, with the rapid growth of the world’s population, the rising demand for water by industry, and the serious pollution of our surroundings, the world is facing the danger of running out of fresh water.Actually, in some big cities, fresh water cannot meet the daily needs.Therefore, to find new ways to save water is an urgent task.First, we should pass strict laws to control any waste of water.Second, scientists must work even harder to purify sea water and polluted water, and try to find substitutes to reduce the use of fresh water.1997年1月作文题目及范文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes tow rite a composition on the topic Practice Makes Perfect.You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.怎样理解“熟能生巧”?

2.例如：在英语学习中......3.又如......[范文]Practice Makes Perfect

The famous saying “Practice makes perfect” is widely accepted today.It means if we practice unfamiliar things again and again, we’ll be able to perform it perfectly.The practice of learning English is a good example.We are not living in an English speaking country.So, in order to learn it well, we need extra practice, such as reading English books, going to English corners, or communicating with foreigners.Only sitting at the desk cannot lead to the mastery of English.As another example, if we want to be skilled in using the computer, we also need to practice using it.Some children become little experts in computer, just because they play with it everyday.On the contrary, if we just stick to books, we will still feel confused when using computers.Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that practice makes perfect.1998年1月大学英语四级作文题目及范文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition

on the topic Harmfulness of Fake Commodities.You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品(fake commodities)。为什么会有这种现象?

2.举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人、社会等的危害。

[范文]Harmfulness of Fake Commodities

In recent years, a lot of fake commodities have appeared in the market.These fake commodities have done great harm to the consumers and the society.Since the policy of reform was implemented, China’s economy has improved.A lot of people getting richer, and their living conditions are getting better.But still some of them are not satisfied.They dream of getting rich overnight and living a heavenly life, which, of course, is impossible to achieve by fair means.So they risk breaking the law to produce the market take commodities.Once these fake commodities enter the market, they will do immeasurable harm to the society.The direct victims are the consumers.As the quality of the fake commodities is always very poor, the consumers may suffer great losses.Certain fake commodities, such as food and medicine, will cause irreparable harm to the health and well-being of the consumers.Fake commodities also cut into the profits of the brand-name-owners.Since the fake ones are cheaper, people tend to be reluctant to buy the genuine ones.1999年1月作文题目及范文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Don’t Hesitate to Say “No”.You should write at least 100-160 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.别人请求帮助时，在什么情况下我们会说“不”

2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”

3.该说“不”时不说“不”的坏处

[范文]Don’t Hesitate to Say “No”

In our daily life, there are many occasions on which we should not hesitate to refuse when asked for help.For one thing, when it is beyond our ability, we should give a direct reply “no”.For another, we the thing we are asked for is unreasonable or even illegal, we should say “no” without hesitation.However, it is not the case in our real life.Many people prefer to say “yes” when they should say “no”.Some are afraid to lose their face, since they think refusal means their inability.Some people are afraid to offend their acquaintances’ face, such as their friends, relatives and so on.In fact, doing so is quite harmful.If you agree to do the things beyond your ability, the result will only be worse.The other might as well have asked another person who can help.And if you agree to do the unreasonable or even the illegal favors, such as cheating in the exam, you are in fact not helping the other but hurting him.You yourself will get into trouble too.1999年6月作文题目及范文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading Selectively Or Extensively? You should write at least 100 words，and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.有人认为读书要有选择

2.有人认为应当博览群书

3.我的看法

[范文]Reading Selectively Or Extensively?

Some people think when we read we should read selectively.That is to say, we should select some books we are interested in and ignore the others.Reading selectively can help us concentrate our limited time and attention on those selected books.Others think we should read extensively.No matter what kind of book it is, we should look it over.We should read various kinds of books, whether we are interested in them or not.They maintain that reading extensively can help to enlarge our view and grasp the general knowledge in different fields.In my opinion, the two reading ways have their roles respectively in our reading.However, the disadvantages of each methods are easy to see.If we only read the books we select or prefer, the framework of our knowledge may not be complete.Our knowledge would be rather limited.And if we read without selection, we may not have so much time and energy to be specialized in one particular field.Therefore, the combination of the two methods is more reasonable.2000年1月作文题目及范文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance My College Education.You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.上大学的费用(tuition and fees)可以通过多种途径解决

2.哪种途径适合于我(说明理由)

[范文]How I Finance My College Education

Several years ago new tuition fee policy was put into practice and college students were asked to pay a certain sum of money.And now, all the students, no matter what subjects they are engaged in, must pay for tuition.There are many ways for a student to finance his college education.Most students ask their parents to pay the tuition fee and pay for their books, accommodation and other cost.A student can also apply for the scholarship.Most universities set up scholarship to offer money to the poor students who do well in entrance exams and reward those who do well in entrance exams and reward those who work well at university.A student can also apply for the low-interest loans.In addition to the above, taking part-time jobs is also a common way for a college student to get money to pay part of his tuition and fees.So far as I’m concerned, I’d prefer earning the scholarship.This means I must study hard and be a top student, which has always been my goal.After all, the task of a student is to study.And in addition to solving my financial problems, getting the scholarship can also prove my ability and is good for my future.2001年1月作文题目及范文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 100 words，and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

1.面试在求职过程中的作用

2.取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是......[范文]How to Succeed in a Job Interview?

Nowadays, in an ever tighter job market, great importance has been attached to an interview by both the employer and the applicant.The interview, so to speak, has become indispensable for getting a satisfactory job.On the one hand, the interviewer can take advantage of the occasion to learn about the candidates, such as their work experiences, education and their personalities, so as to pick out the right person for the company.On the other hand, the interviewee can make use of the opportunity to get to know the job he is going to take up, the salary, the working conditions and many other things about the job he is interested in.Therefore, the job interview is very important to a job-hunter.But how can one succeed in it? Firstly of all, the interviewee must pay attention to his or her appearance.The first impression is always where we start.Get dressed properly and neatly.Secondly, good manners are equally important.Don’t be too proud, and neither too timid.Just be courteous.Thirdly, the interviewee must demonstrate his aptitude and skills for the job and his knowledge about eh job-related areas.Be confident.Last but not the least, the interviewee ought to be honest about his or her personal as well as academic background, for honesty is the best policy.To sum up, the job interview is indeed important, but there is no need to be nervous.As long as the interviewee has the ability for the job, with careful preparation and a fairly confident and honest performance, his or her success can be ensured.2002年1月作文题目及范文

假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼有而有之。

[参考范文]

January 12th, 2002

Dear Mr.President，I’m very lucky to attend this world-famous university, but I’m afraid I’m not content with the canteen service on campus.Firstly, the quality of the dishes should be improved.Undoubtedly, there are a lot of delicious dishes, but all the year round, they are the same.More and more students are complaining about eating the same food each day.So I think the most urgent problem is variety.Secondly, the price is a bit too high.Many of us hope that the canteen can provide us with not only delicious but also cheaper food.Finally, the environment is so noisy that we can’t enjoy our meals in good mood.I suggest that there be some soft music to help us relax.These suggestions are not just of my own, but also of may other students.We hope our respectable president will pay attention to our suggestions.By the way, the canteen workers are very patient and always smiling.So I think

if our university offers them better conditions, they will offer us better service.Best wishes，Li Ming

2003年1月作文题目及范文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest.You should write at least 100 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象

2.诚实利人利已，做人应该诚实

[范文]It Pays to Be Honest

Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society.For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers;some students cheat in the exams.Dishonest people are short-sighted.Those who sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers won’t buy their products any more.As a result, they will lose their fortune or even be sent to prison.By contrast, honest people gain a lot.Those who always tell truth or keep to their promise not only let others trust them but gain respect from other people as well.Such persons are sure to have a lot of good friends.Because they are trustable and respectable, everyone is eager to make friends with them, Besides, it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job.Generally speaking, every employer wants his employees to be honest.So we can say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later.In a word, honesty wins trust, respect and honor.So it is important that we should be honest.2003年6月作文题目及范文

[要求]假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点：

1、车祸发生的时间及地点

2、你所见到的车祸情况

3、你对车祸原因的分析

[参考范文]An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident

My name is Liming.I am studying at college.A week ago I saw a traffic accident , which is still vivid in my mind.It was at about 9:00 on Saturday morning, June 15th, when I went out of the university to visit a friend of mine at another university.I was walking leisurely on the sidewalk when I heard a loud crash of two vehicles just at the T-junction about 10 meters away.Two taxis crashed together.It was a traffic accident.I went up and found that the two taxis were badly damaged.Both hoofs were out of shape.One door of a car was knocked off and lying on the road.One driver was blooding and another was shut in the taxi.Some people were trying to help the driver get out of the damaged car.One man was calling to the traffic policeman station.A lot of cars were jammed on the road.From the stopping track on the road, it is clear that the two taxis were driving too fast.But it is just one of the reasons.In my opinion, the taxi drivers are

eager to take more passengers and make a little more money.On the other hand, both drivers don’t show concern for one another.Both of them wanted to run in front of another.Therefore, the accident is inevitable.So far, we should let the drivers keep it in their mind that a little slower, a little safer.Taking care of other’s lives means taking care of your own life.2004年1月大学英语四级作文题目及范文

1.建议报考的专业及理由

2.报考该专业的基本条件

3.应当如何备考

[参考范文]A Letter in Reply to a Friend

December 27, 2003

Dear sir，When it comes to which major you should choose, I propose that you apply for the major of English.To begin with, English is the most popular language in the world, which is widely used in all fields such as teaching, translation, foreign trade and so on.What’s more, it goes without saying that English majors are more likely to find a good job in the tighter and tighter job market.In order to study at English Department, you have to meet the following requirements.In the first place, you have to spend a lot of time on it, just as the old saying goes, “Practice makes perfect”.In the second place, the basic skills of reading, writing, listening and speaking are necessary, because they are the foundations for your future study.Last but not the least important, you need an intense interest in learning English since “interest is the best teacher.”

As far as the preparation work is concerned, you should first of all review all the required vocabulary.In addition, you’d better spend some time on reading and writing.Only through these measures can you hope to enroll in our university.Yours，Li Ming

2004年6月作文题目及范文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction.You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines:

Your role: a tour guide

Your audience: a group of foreign tourists

Your introduction should include:

● some welcoming words

● the schedule for the day

● a description of the place the tourists will be visiting(e.g.a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.)

You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.[参考范文] a tour guide

Good morning, ladies and gentleman, welcome to Beijing.To begin with, I would like to introduce myself: I am the tourist guide from China Travel Service and it’s

great honor to stay here with all of you for a whole day.Just as the old saying goes, “It is always a pleasure to greet a friend from afar”，I wish all of you to enjoy yourselves during this trip.The following is schedule of the day.The first spot we are going to visit is the Great Wall, the grandest fortification in ancient China.The next sight to look around is the Ming Tombs, which is one of the best-preserved tombs for 13 emperors in Ming Dynasty more than one thousand years ago.In the afternoon, we will go for the Summer Palace, the royal park for Chinese ancient emperors.Currently we are on the way to the Great Wall.Dating back to the seven century B.C., the Great Wall is constructed by respective states for fortifying against invasion of neighboring states.By the reasons of long history and its length, it becomes one of the eight wonders in the world and represents the highest wisdom and crafts.From the top of the Great Wall, we can enjoy a magnificent view of continuous mountains, green trees and blooming wild flowers.It is no doubt that one says, “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man”。

Above is my introduction to the Great Wall.If any of you have questions, please feel free to ask me at any time.2005年1月作文题目及范文 你认为自己具备是什么条件(能力，性格，爱好)可以胜任学生会主席工作，2 如果当选你将会为本校同学做什么?

[范文]A Campaign Speech

Today I am very glad to run for the president of the students‘ union.I am junior in Chemical Department.Since I came into the university, I have always been the monitor of my class.I have done a very good job for my classmates, and my classmates and my tacher all give me a good praise.I am good at communication and organizing.And I like to help others.Moreover, I have a varity of hobbies,for example, basketball, football, pingpong, etc.I am sure that I am qualified for this position.If I become the president, I will try my best to do well.I will organize some siutable activities for you.I will do many things for you to reache your demands as well.I am sincerely hope you will give me a chance, and please believe me that I will be a good president.Thank you.2005年12月24日作文及范文

Part V.Writing(30 minutes)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at Least 120 words following the outline given below :

1.名校校园正成为旅游新热点

2.校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同

3.我认为„„

[参考作文]Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?

[参看范文一]

One can always find visitors taking pictures and enjoying the scenery in

university compus.During the May Day Holiday, National Day Holiday, summer and winter vacations, many University campuses become popular tourist sites.In my opinion, university campus should be open to tourists.In fact, there are many royal gardens and parks, all of them obviously better than the scenery in the Universities.Why do you think people prefer visiting here with their children? That is because it is a dream goal for many Chinese parents and young ambitious students.Besides this, as more tourists come to visit universities, these universities can widen their influence as well and they can also make some profit from the tourism.In a word, I think the university compus should be open to the tourists

[参看范文二]

In university compus, especially in some famous ones, such as Peking University and Qinghua University, tourists are always seen looking around everywhere.Although most of them visit with hope and repect, I think university compus should not be open to tourists.First, tourists' visit will disturb the normal teaching.They always get into teaching buildings, libraries and so on.They will make noise and throw rubbish everywhere.Second, some tourists trample grass to take photos, and sculpture on trees to leave words.These will affect the environment of the compus badly.The university is a holy place for study, not for tourism.So It should not be open.2006年6月作文及范文

An anouncement for a voluntary program:

1、校学生会将组织一次暑假志愿者活动,现招募志愿者

2、本次志愿者活动的目的,内容,安排等

3、报名联系方式

[参考范文]

The student union is launching a campaign against drunken driving in the city and participation in the activity will be totally on voluntary basis.We want you to join us as voluntees.In view of the ever-increasing car accidents and deaths caused by drunking driving over the past 5 years, the campaign is designed to help car drivers to be aware of the danger of drunken driving, prommote responsible driving and urge the local authorities to introduce a designated driver program.We are going to print posters and pamphlets, make banners and signs and send petition letters to the officials of local government.The tasks also include posting posters on streets, distributing the pamphlets among car drivers and mailing the letters to local officials.The event will last ten days, from July 10 to 19, 2006.Any students of this school who are physically energentic, mentally enthusiastic about public affairs and socially committed to local road safety and awarnesss of drunken driving are eligible for the the event.For signing up for the campaign please contact us at 12345678.Please get involved, today!

2006年12月作文及范文

作文题目：

1、许多人喜欢看cctv 春节晚会；

2、但有的人认为应该取消；

3、你的看法

范文：

The Spring Festival Evening Get-Together has been held in China for over two decades, which seems to have been an indispensable company during the traditional New Year’s Eve for a great number of people, who appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it, as more diverse life styles have emerged nowadays.Some prefer to go to a fancy restaurant to enjoy a gourmet meal;some intend to go on a vacation to an incredibly exotic destination for a novel and thorough relaxation;others may have even more post-modern notions, like go bunging, hiking, or cycling for entirely new different experiences, forgetting all about the Spring Festival.To me, the Evening Get-Together is supposed to be here to stay.It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities.Besides, with such a gathering, family members will have a perfect opportunity to enjoy more fun and happiness, for nowadays most people are so engaged in their daily businesses that they can rarely find any extra time to stay with their family, which, if not properly adjusted, might add further to the already worsening situation of the values of Chinese families.2007年12月作文及范文

1、各大学开设了各种各样的选修课

2、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课

3、以你自己为例„„

[参考范文]

范文一

Nowadays, there usually exists a wide selection of electives for college students to choose from.However, students have quite different plans for their future so they always end up learning courses based on their own ideas.Some students may choose to learn a certain course in order to obtain an extra certificate for their job hunting after graduation.Because they assume that some more knowledge could ensure more chances of winning in finding a good job.Others may have their choice made just for fun.They tend to hold the idea that college life could be more colorful if they could widen their knowledge through elective courses.As far as I’m concerned, I’m inclined to choose electives based on both the value of the courses and the interest of my own.范文二

Nowadays many college students prefer to have electives in their spare time because the courses can offer a variety of skills and abundant knowledge apart from what they learn in the daily courses.There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects.To start with, many students want to get another degree besides their own, so that they can have more competence when they seek a job.Furthermore, as for me, I don’t care about degree or job, I just want to obtain some necessary skills to make my college life worthwhile.What I’m concerned most is how to own more skills that may be necessary for my future.Finally, some students want to learn anything that is different from what they are learning now.The science students, for example, want to know about Shakespeare while the art students want to tell how a vehicle works and how to deal with it when it breaks down.So, they can all get what they think is useful to their college life.On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of multi-demand of the employment market.There is still a long way for us to improve the elective itself, but as a student myself, I find it rewarding and interesting.范文三

What Electives To Choose

With the reform of Chinese higher education, more and more colleges and universities put emphasis on nurturing students’ abilities.As a result, elective courses are available not only for excellent academic performers but also for students about the average level.Certainly, students have different reasons to choose their own electives.For some, practical skills are the essence of college education, and therefore, courses on computer science, marketing, and finance are highly preferred.On the other hand, others may hold the idea of liberal education and electives concerning literature, history, and philosophy are the most welcome.Take me as an example: being a disciple of free education, I stand for the notion that university is not a place for survival skills, but a palace of knowledge and critical reasoning.Although my major is chemistry, the electives I attend most frequently are English literature, an Introduction to Classic Music, and Different Schools of Western Painting.They really widen my horizon.Free admission to museums

越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么?

也会带来一些问题

你的看法

[参考范文]

Free Admission to Museums(满分版)

Nowadays, an increasing number of museums are admission-free to visitors home and abroad.The hidden reason behind this is not hard to analyze as there’s a growing awareness for the authorities regarding the urgency of popularization of culture, knowledge and history with every average person in our society.Only with free access to this live ‘database’, can most people fully enjoy what museums could offer to them.However, free admission to museums might lead to some social problems as well.The most obvious problem is that it might give museums a very heavy economic burden which directly impedes the sustainable development of these organizations.As a result, our government has to work out other ways to collect funds from different

channels, which might be difficult to operate or control.On the other hand, free admission attracts too many visitors, some of which might not be well-purposed and do some conscious or unconscious damage to the valuable treasures which used to be well-preserved in the museums.As a university student, I am in favor of the free-admission conduct.Yet it is proposed that some measures should be taken to solve the potential problems caused by it.For example, museums can make some regulations to guide the behavior of visitors or set some ‘closed’ days for museums for regular maintenance.Only in this way can free-admission to museums become a long-lasting phenomenon and have sustainable development.2010年

Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……

How Should Parents Help Children to be Independent

Nowadays, there is a growing concern over such a phenomenon, that is, some parents take care of almost everything concerned with their children, including study, work, marriage.Some parents believe that this is love, however, it is only to destroy

children’s independence thoroughly.For the future of the next generation, more efforts should be made by parents to help their children to be independent.The fundamental one is to cultivate the awareness, namely, the importance and necessity of being independent, which is supposed to begin from childhood.Children should be taught that no one can be stronger and more helpful than themselves in this world.The quality of independence is so indispensable for us that parents had better act as a tutor, not a dictator.And only with parents’ trust, can the next generation accumulate confidence step by step.In recent days, we have to face a problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.--------(说明A的现状)．

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解决方法一).For another-------------(解决方法二).Finally,--------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解决方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(带来的好处).2011年6月

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Onl

ine Shopping.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚

2.网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题

3.我的建议 [参考范文]

Online Shopping

Nowadays, with the rapid development of information technology, online shopping has gained great popularity among more and more web users.For example, it is fashionable for youngsters to purchase daily essentials, such as books, clothes, electrical equipment, on some famous website, like Taobao, EBay and Alibaba.Undoubtedly speaking, online shopping has many advantages.Firstly, compared with traditional shopping, it’s very convenient.What you need to do is just clicking your mouse and waiting instead of going out by foot or driving.Secondly, more choices than real store are another attraction to customers.However, in spite of convenience and more choices of online shopping, we cannot turn a blind eye to its disadvantages.Obviously, quality problem is its first disadvantage.It’s common that articles aren’t so good just as they are described online that customers always buy fake commodities.In addition, it’s troublesome and annoying for many customers to make a change when they are not satisfied with what they bought online.As a college student, I like online shopping but I expected that effective measures should be taken to make it better。Specifically speaking, government should work out strict regulations and rules to prevent unfaithful and unlawful activities of online shop owners.Only by this way can online shopping become really safe and attract an increasing number of customers.

第五篇：10个大学英语四级真题作文及

1.2008年12月20日四级作文：

Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bag

本次四级考试考查的是一次性塑料袋的使用问题。环保问题，是今年的热门话题之一。此次作文属于问题解决性的作文，相对比较简单，提出问题-分析问题-解决问题

答题思路：

1． 一次性塑料袋给人们生活带来便利。广为使用。

2． 由此带来的问题，举例子。

3． 限制使用塑料袋的意义，理论与实际相结合。

范文：In modern world, Disposable plastic bags were once widely used in China.People used to take it for shopping and shopping assistants often provided free plastic bags for our convenience.For a while, life without them seemed unimaginable for most of us.However, disposable plastic bags do bring severe damage to our environment and lot of harms to life.First and foremost, they are abandoned everywhere.It cannot be absorbed which will have great influence for the environment.Finally the pollution brought by plastic threat to our species life.To sum up, it is meaningful to limit the use of disposable plastic.It’s significant that our government has banned the use of disposable plastic bags officially, and people will be charged for the use of such bags.This action is reducing the consumption of bags to a great extent.Everyone in this society should contribute some effort to the improvement of the environment.We should protect our earth and living environment to make a better life.2.2008年6月英语四级作文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Recreational activities.You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1.娱乐活动多种多样

2.娱乐活动可以使人们受益，也可能有危害性 3.作为大学生我们的看法

段落布局：

第一段：引出谈论的事物及话题

第二段：①任何事物都有两个方面 ②分清主次地列明优点与缺点 第三段：表明自己的观点

范文：With the dramatic development of our society and our living standard, there are a variety of recreational activities coming to our lives.Some may go to KTV with their friends on weekends to get relaxed after five-day intense work.Meanwhile, others might choose to surf the internet to kill time and appreciate vast resources on the internet.Everything has two sides just like a coin, and entertainment is no exception.On the one hand, amusement activities can enrich our lives, broaden our horizon, and cultivate our mind.On the other hand, we could wasted and our mind contaminated if we fail to approach recreation properly.As far as college students are concerned, we are supposed to take advantage of the benefits from diverse entertainment activities.In addition, it is essential to be self-disciplined and steer clear of the adverse influences.3.2007年12月英语四级作文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the topic of Elective courses to choose.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:

1、各大学开设了多种多样的选修课

2、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课

3、以你自己为例…… 段落布局：

第一段，即议论文当中的引言段，要引入文章所谈论的话题“多种多样的选修课”

第二段，即议论文当中的主体段，谈论文章讨论的分论点，即“选择不同选修课的各种原因” 第三段，即议论文当中的结论段，总结文章，表达观点，即“以自己为例……” 范文：Elective courses to choose

With the remarkable educational reform and the increasing students’ demand, universities strive to offer a variety of elective courses for students to choose.Some higher institutes provide the optional course of cross-cultural communication, and some colleges have computer science on the curriculum of elective courses There are numerous reasons for students’ selection of the courses, and I would like to explore a few of the most significant ones here.In the first place, students tend to take personal interest into consideration when they opt for an elective course.Possibly, that’s why cross-cultural communication course is so prevailing on campus.Additionally, some undergraduates attend certain optional courses for their career prospects and future development.Last but not least, to make up for their required credits is another universal reason as students select a course at random.As far as I am concerned, picking up an elective course, I am inclined to give priority to personal interest.I am taking geographic research and discovery course in that I’ve been greatly keen on science since I was a kid.4.2007年6月英语四级作文 题目： 学生加入社团的欢迎辞

1.活动主要内容

2.加入好处

3.如何加入 参考范文：

Welcome to English Club!It could serve as a platform to show your outstanding abilities and help you develop a range of great skills.You can be involved in a variety of activities including staging musical dramas, holding group discussions and watching Oscar-winning movies.These extra-curricular activities could offer you ample opportunities.First, your active participation is helpful to strengthening the sense of responsibility and managing interpersonal relations.Second, various activities organized by us could raise your level of proficiency in English.A good command of English empowers you to enjoy decided competitive edge over your peers.You can file a written application to our staff office or email us via bonoo@diandian.net.The deadline for entries is Sept.25th.Come on, join us now!5.2006年12月英语四级作文

作文题目：

1、许多人喜欢看cctv 春节晚会；

2、但有的人认为应该取消；

3、你的看法

范文：The Spring Festival Evening Get-Together has been held in China for over two decades, which seems to have been an indispensable company during the traditional New Year’s Eve for a great number of people, who appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it, as more diverse life styles have emerged nowadays.Some prefer to go to a fancy restaurant to enjoy a gourmet meal;some intend to go on a vacation to an incredibly exotic destination for a novel and thorough relaxation;others may have even more post-modern notions, like go bunging, hiking, or cycling for entirely new different experiences, forgetting all about the Spring Festival.To me, the Evening Get-Together is supposed to be here to stay.It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities.Besides, with such a gathering, family members will have a perfect opportunity to enjoy more fun and happiness, for nowadays most people are so engaged in their daily businesses that they can rarely find any extra time to stay with their family, which, if not properly adjusted, might add further to the already worsening situation of the values of Chinese families.6.2005年12月英语四级作文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at Least 120 words following the outline given below :

1．名校校园正成为旅游新热点

2．校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同

3．我认为…… Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?

［参看范文一］

One can always find visitors taking pictures and enjoying the scenery in university compus.During the May Day Holiday, National Day Holiday, summer and winter vacations, many University campuses become popular tourist sites.In my opinion, university campus should be open to tourists.In fact, there are many royal gardens and parks, all of them obviously better than the scenery in the Universities.Why do you think people prefer visiting here with their children? That is because it is a dream goal for many Chinese parents and young ambitious students.Besides this, as more tourists come to visit universities, these universities can widen their influence as well and they can also make some profit from the tourism.In a word, I think the university compus should be open to the tourists ［参看范文二］

In university compus, especially in some famous ones, such as Peking University and Qinghua University, tourists are always seen looking around everywhere.Although most of them visit with hope and repect, I think university compus should not be open to tourists.First, tourists’ visit will disturb the normal teaching.They always get into teaching buildings, libraries and so on.They will make noise and throw rubbish everywhere.Second, some tourists trample grass to take photos, and sculpture on trees to leave words.These will affect the environment of the compus badly.The university is a holy place for study, not for tourism.So It should not be open.7.2005年6月英语四级作文

Teacher’s Day ：

1.向老师致以节日的问候。

2.回忆件老师的教诲中难忘的事情。

3.我如何报答老师。

［参考范文之一］

This is Teachers’ Day and a time to be grateful to all teachers.This profession deserves the special recognition and respect.There is no more appropriate time than this to honour you and others in your chosen field.You have my eternal gratefulness.Have a happy Teachers’ Day.The whole secret of the teacher’s force lies in the conviction that men are convertible.Teacher, who educate children, deserve more honor than parents, who merely gave them birth;for the latter provided more life, while the former ensure a good life.What sculpture is to a block of marble, education is to the soule.My heartfelt thanks to you, dear teacher.On the voyage of life, you have kindled the light of hope for me.What you have done enriches my mind and broadens my view.On this day I honour you sincerely.No one deserves a bigger thank you than you.One day is hardly enough to show our gratitude.［参考范文之二］

National Teacher Day is always the Tuesday of the first full week of May.And it is always for our students to give our special thanks to our lovely teacher.I still remember last year when I was feeling lost,down and out,I had no idea about about my life,my love,my study even doubt why I was here in the world.So then came so much wine ang smoke,I was tired,physical and mental.I even wanted to end my life just jumping from the top of our buliding.Then my teacher came to me, she said she knew what I was afraid of, she aslo told me that’s very common like many yong people of my age.She told me to call her anytime I need her help.I did so ,we often chat ems and made some phone call.I just can’t remember when come the mirical.I have found myself now!

Another teacher’s day,to all the teachers,to our parents.［参考范文之三］

The Once per year ’s Teacher’s Day will come soon.At first, I will extend the greeting of festival to my teacher.Last week, I suddenly had a stomachache terribly in the school.My teacher was very worried, sent me to the hospital in a hurry.After checking , doctor verified that I have got the acute enteritis.My teacher came with me all the night in the hospital, so kind as to look after me.My teacher fed me food and medicine on time.After struggling with the serious illness in one days and one nights, I left hospital.Then my teacher helps me to make up a missed lesson of English in a few days in succession.I express gratitude to my teacher, I can’t recover so fast without my teacher.Because of my teacher I can participate today’s CETD.I want to repay my teacher.No present can express my grateful feeling to my teacher.And the best repayment is that I can pass the CETD this time.8.2005年1月英语四级作文

1.你认为自己具备是什么条件（能力，性格，爱好）可以胜任学生会主席工作，2 如果当选你将会为本校同学做什么？

A Campaign Speech

Today I am very glad to run for the president of the students’ union.I am junior in Chemical Department.Since I came into the university, I have always been the monitor of my class.I have done a very good job for my classmates, and my classmates and my teacher all give me a good praise.I am good at communication and organizing.And I like to help others.Moreover, I have a Varity of hobbies, for example, basketball, football, ping pong, etc.I am sure that I am qualified for this position.If I become the president, I will try my best to do well.I will organize some suitable activities for you.I will do many things for you to reach your demands as well.I am sincerely hope you will give me a chance, and please believe me that I will be a good president.Thank you.9.2004年6月四级作文题及范文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction.You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines: Your role: a tour guide Your audience: a group of foreign tourists Your introduction should include:

some welcoming words

the schedule for the day

a description of the place the tourists will be visiting(e.g.a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.)You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.范文：

Good morning, ladies and gentleman, welcome to Beijing.To begin with, I would like to introduce myself: I am the tourist guide from China Travel Service and it’s great honor to stay here with all of you for a whole day.Just as the old saying goes, “It is always a pleasure to greet a friend from far away”，I wish all of you to enjoy yourselves during this trip.The following is schedule of the day.The first spot we are going to visit is the Great Wall, the grandest fortification in ancient China.The next sight to look around is the Ming Tombs, which is one of the best-preserved tombs for 13 emperors in Ming Dynasty more than one thousand years ago.In the afternoon, we will go for the Summer Palace, the royal park for Chinese ancient emperors.Currently we are on the way to the Great Wall.Dating back to the seven century B.C., the Great Wall is constructed by respective states for fortifying against invasion of neighboring states.By the reasons of long history and its length, it becomes one of the eight wonders in the world and represents the highest wisdom and crafts.From the top of the Great Wall, we can enjoy a magnificent view of continuous mountains, green trees and blooming wild flowers.It is no doubt that one says, “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man”。

Above is my introduction to the Great Wall.If any of you have questions, please feel free to ask me at any time.10.2004年1月四级作文题及范文

Directions:

1．建议报考的专业及理由

2．报考该专业的基本条件

3．应当如何备考

When it comes to which major you should choose, I propose that you apply for the major of English.To begin with, English is the most popular language in the world, which is widely used in all fields such as teaching, translation, foreign trade and so on.What’s more, it goes without saying that English majors are more likely to find a good job in the tighter and tighter job market.In order to study at English Department, you have to meet the following requirements.In the first place, you have to spend a lot of time on it, just as the old saying goes, “Practice makes perfect”.In the second place, the basic skills of reading, writing, listening and speaking are necessary, because they are the foundations for your future study.Last but not the least important, you need an intense interest in learning English since “interest is the best teacher.”

As far as the preparation work is concerned, you should first of all review all the required vocabulary.In addition, you’d better spend some time on reading and writing.Only through these measures can you hope to enroll in our university.