第一篇:七大原则助你写出大学英语四级作文加分句
七大原则助你写出大学英语四级作文加分句
一、长短句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar。
如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、主题句原则
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句).Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly。
三、一二三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
四、短语优先原则
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其
一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然 会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点-精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其
二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
I cannot bear it。
可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it。
I want it。
可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it。
这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。
五、多实少虚原则
原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:
走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!
六、多变句式原则
1)加法(串联)
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar。
如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm。
其它的短语可以用:
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2)转折(拐弯抹角)
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition。
The coat was thin, but it was warm。
更多的短语:
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3)因果(so, so, so)
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
The snow began to fall, so we went home。
更多短语:
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
举例:This is what I can do。
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure。
同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
When to go, Why he goes away…
5)附加(多此一举)
如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine。
I don't enjoy that book you are reading。
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going。
其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句-借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you。
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides。
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.(气势恢宏)
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、挑战极限原则
既然是挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills。
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China。
第二篇:大学英语四级作文万能
大学英语四级作文模板:解决方法题型
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径
1. 问题现状
2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(说明A的现状).Second,---------------(举例进一步说明现状)
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解决方法一).For another-------------(解决方法二).Finally,--------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解决方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(带来的好处).大学英语四级作文模板:对比选择型作文模板
When it comes to ____ ,different people hold different views.Some contend that____.For one thing,____.For another,___.In spite of all these claims, others maintain that ____,They point out that____.Another instance often cited is that____.It’s no easy task to find a satisfactory answer to the issue.As for me, there’s some truth to both arguments.It’s advisable to ______.大学英语四级作文模板:说明利弊题型
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)
1. 说明事物现状
2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)
3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(A的优点之一).Besides-------------------(A的优点之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法).
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------(对前景的预测).)
大学英语四级作文模板:现象解释型作文模板:
Recently, ____What amazes us most is_____.It is true that _____.There are many reasons explaining ______.The main reason is_____,What is more, _____,Thirdly, _____.As a result, _____.
Considering all these, _____.For one thing, ____For another, ____.In conclusion, ____.
大学英语四级作文模板:议论文的框架
(1)不同观点列举型(选择型)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand,___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文题目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___优点一______.And secondly ___优点二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺点一______.In addition, ____缺点二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.(3)答题性议论文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文题目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know,there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途径一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)谚语警句性议论文
It is well known to us that the proverb: “ ___谚语_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____谚语的含义_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)
A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..大学英语四级作文模板:问题解决型作文模板:
With the ____of____,So it is of great importance for us to____.On the one hand____, On the other hand____,However, we have figured out many ways to _____.Firstly, ____So long as____.Secondly____, Thirdly____.In fact____, That is because ____.In a word,________ .
opinion is both sound and well-grounded.大学英语四级作文模板:实用性写作(申请信)
Your address
Month, Date, year
Receiver''s address
Dear...,I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in....And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising..../ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed.On the one hand,....On the other hand,....I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview.I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours,X X X
大学英语四级作文模板:对比观点题型
(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
1. 有一些人认为。。
2. 另一些人认为。。
3. 我的看法。。
The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).But others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点).The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.[NextPage]
(2)给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点
Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一).For example, they think ②-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二).
Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).
大学英语四级作文模板:现象说明文
Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is true that__________.There are many reasons explaining__________________________.The main reason is____________________.what is more_________________________.Thirdly__________________________.As a result_______________.Considering all these,________________________.For one thing_____________________,for another________
____.In Conclusion____________________.一种事物或现象(负面意义倾向)
大学英语四级作文模板:阐述主题题型
要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述。
1. 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义。
2. 分析并举例使其更充实。
The good old proverb----------------(名言或谚语)reminds us that----------------(释义).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,-----------------(理由一).For example,-------------------(举例说明).Secondly,----------------(理由二).Another case is that---------------(举例说明).Furthermore ,------------------(理由三).
In my opinion,----------------(我的观点).In short, whatever you do, please remember the saying------A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.
第三篇:2017大学英语四级作文
2017四级写作必背范文、句型、模板
1、就业
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Jobs for Graduates.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、大学生难找工作,2、原因很多,3、解决的办法。
Job hunting has always been a headache for college students.Though many graduates are employed right after graduation, some are not.Most serious of all, some still have no idea where to go working even a long time after graduation.The reasons for this phenomenon are various.On the one hand, a few years ago colleges and universities enrolled so many students in popular majors, such as economy, finance and so on that the number of graduates was greater than the need in the market.On the other hand, most graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable job to do than go to the country.I reckon this problem can be solved if both colleges and students take measures.First, they should research the market and develop special skills to suit its need.Second, students’ attitude towards employment should be changed.They should go to small cities and country.There they can also give full play to their professional knowledge.In a word, if we pay much attention, the situation can be improved.找工作对很多大学毕业生来讲已经变成了非常头疼的问题。尽管很多人在毕业之后马上找到工作,还是有些人没有找到。最为严重的是,有些人在毕业很长时间之后,还不知道去哪找工作。
产生这一现象的原因有很多。首先,几年前各大学院和大学录取了这么多经济、金融等热门专业的学生,以至于毕业生的数量超过了市场需求。其次,大多数大学生宁愿待在大城市,找不到合适的工作,也不愿去小城市和乡村。
我认为如果大学和学生都采取有效措施,这个难题可以解决。首先,大学应该通过市场调查来发展学生的特殊技能以适应需求。其次,学生的就业观念应该转变。他们应该去小城市和乡镇,在那里他们可以充分发挥自己的专业理论知识和实践技能。总而言之,如果我们更加重视,这种状况可以得到改进。
2、出国留学
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Studying Abroad.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1)目前很多中国学生出国留学,2)出国留学的好处,3)我的看法。
Nowadays, going abroad for studies is enjoying a striking popularity among adolescents.Importance should be attached to studying abroad.There are a great many advantages of studying overseas.First and foremost, living and studying abroad offers students a different perspective of the world.On a university campus, international students are likely to encounter their counterparts from various countries and areas and are exposed to diverse ideas and values.What is more, overseas experience is the best opportunity for the real-life use of foreign languages.There is no better opportunity to improve second-language skills than living in the country in which it is spoken.Generally peaking, it is my view that although going abroad is expensive and perhaps painful, the payoff is worthwhile.In the first place, in addition to knowledge, overseas students can gain precious experiences that those who stay at home will never have.Furthermore, overseas experience, frustrating and painful as it may be, is conducive to the growth of adolescents.目前,出国留学在年轻人中间非常流行。我们应该充分重视留学问题。
出国留学有很多好处。首先,国外生活和学习为学生提供了一个看待世界的不同视角。在大学校园中,国际学生很可能遇到来自不同国家和地区的同伴,并且面临迥异的观念和价值。此外,海外经历是外语在实际生活运用的最佳时机。没有什么比住在母语国家提高第二外语技能的更好机会了。
总之,我认为尽管出国留学很昂贵,并且可能会痛苦,但这种付出是值得的。首先,除了知识之外,留学生可以获得留在国内的学生永远无法获得的宝贵经验。其次,尽管留学经历可能使人沮丧痛苦,然而这对年轻人的成长是有益的。
3、社会实践
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Social Practice of College Students.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below: 1)各大学在假期都会组织学生参加各种社会实践活动,2)这些活动给大学生带来了哪些好处,3)参加社会实践活动应该注意些什么。
Social Practice of College Students Nowadays a large number of universities encourage and organize students to take part in social practice activities.During the holidays, students in mounting numbers choose to be the volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other practical activities alike.It is obvious that social practice is playing an increasingly essential role in China’s college education.Undoubtedly, college students have benefited a lot from social practice.Above all, they are provided with more opportunities to contact the real world outside campus.What is more, in social practice activities, students can apply their theoretical knowledge to the solution to the practical problems.So their practical skills are improved greatly.Besides, social practice helps strengthen students’ sense of social responsibility.Considering the above-mentioned, it is necessary for college students to participate in social practice.However, social practice may bring some problems.For example, some students spend too much time in taking part-time jobs so as to ignore their study.Hence, we should try to balance the relationship between social practice and study.现在很多大学鼓励并组织学生参加社会实践活动。在假期,越来越多的学生选择去做志愿者,兼职打工或参加其他类似的实践活动。显而易见,社会实践在中国大学教育中正在发挥日益重要的作用。
毫无疑问,大学生从社会实践中受益匪浅。首先,他们有更多机会接触校园之外的真实世界。其次,在社会实践活动中,学生能把他们的理论知识用于解决实际问题。因此他们的实践技能得到极大提高。此外,社会实践有助于增强学生的社会责任感。考虑到上述论证,大学生必须参加社会实践活动。然而,社会实践可能带来一些问题。例如,有些学生花费太多时间兼职打工,以至于忽视了他们的学习。因此,我们应该努力平衡社会实践与学习之间的关系。
4、网络游戏
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Online Games.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)现在有些大学生沉迷于网络游戏,家长和学校对此忧心忡忡,2)但有人认为网络游戏并非一无是处,3)你的看法。
Online Games As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students.A great many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games.But as we see, some students lacking self-discipline are too much indulged in these games so that their health and academic performances are affected.This phenomenon has caused much worry from the teachers and parents.However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful.They can train the ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly.Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science.More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly.From my point of view, online games are a wonderful entertainment if you play them in a reasonable way.When they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at once.Yet if you have enough self-control over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them.作为现代电脑与网络的产物,在线游戏在大学生中间已经变得非常流行。很多学生喜欢来自于这些游戏的极大快乐与满足。但是我们看到,一些缺乏自律的学生太沉迷于这些游戏,以至于影响了他们的健康和学习成绩。这种现象已经在教师和家长中引起极大忧虑。
然而,有人认为在线游戏并不总是有害。它们可以训练年轻人对事物的快速反应能力。此外,它们可以激发年轻人的想象与对电脑的兴趣。更为重要的是,它确实给大学生带来快乐并极大地减轻他们的压力。
在我看来,如果你以适当的方式玩在线游戏,这是一种极好的娱乐。当它们太影响学习的时候,你最好立即放弃。然而如果你对他们有足够的自制,你当然可以从中获得真正的快乐并受益匪浅。
5、考证热
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Certificate Craze on Campus.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below: 1)近几年大学校园内出现“考证热”,2)产生这一现象的原因,3)你的看法。
Certificate Craze on Campus In recent years, to get a certificate has become a new craze among college students.Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, quite possibly, you may get the answer that he is preparing for a certificate of some kind.Why does this craze appear? There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon.To begin with, it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates.With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market.How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe.Furthermore, diploma and certificates are still vital standards by which a good many employers measure a person’s ability.In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily prove one’s ability.Being crazy in getting certificates blindly is nothing but wasting time.To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability but not getting a certificate of no practical value.近年来,考证在大学生中已经变成一种新的热潮。只是在校园中随机询问一位学生他或她在忙什么,你可能就会得到这样的答案:他正在准备考取某种证书。为何出现这种热潮?
这种现象主要有两点原因。首先,正是就业压力使得大学生去考取更多证书。随着大学的扩招,更多毕业生不得不面对就业市场的激烈竞争。一个人如何使自己更具竞争力?可能就是更多证书在手。此外,学位和证书仍是很多单位衡量个人能力的重要标准。为了改善就业条件,学生们迫使自己不断参加考试。
在我看来,由于证书并不一定证明某人的能力,我们应该更加理性面对证书。盲目地热衷于获得证书只是浪费时间。总之,我们应该重视提升能力,而不是获得没有使用价值的证书。
6、节俭
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Extravagant Spending on College Campus.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below: 1)很多大学生每月的花销越来越高,根本没有节俭的概念,2)分析产生这一现象的原因,3)我的看法。
Extravagant Spending on College Campus According to a survey, in recent years the monthly expenditure of a college student has been on the sharp rise.Many college students have no concept of thrift in their mind.They take it for granted that they spend money from their parents before they enter into the society.This extravagant spending is primarily caused by the following factors.First of all, nowadays most of the students are the only children of their families.They are the apple in their family’s eyes and naturally get more care and pocket money.In addition, with the improvement of living standards, parents can afford higher expenditure of their children.Moreover, some students like to pursue fashion and trends, which tend to need more money.Finally, campus love is also a possible factor causing extravagant spending.From my point of view, a college student, as a pure consumer, should learn to be thrifty.We should limit our expenditure on daily necessities but not buy whatever we want regardless of their prices.The habit of thrift can help us form right values and is favorable to our future development.根据一项调查,近年来大学生每月花销已经急剧增加。很多大学生脑中根本没有节俭的概念。在走入社会之前,他们想当然地花费父母给的钱。这种浪费花销主要由以下原因引起。
首先,现在大多数学生是家里的独生子女。他们是父母眼中的宝贝,自然得到更多关心和零用钱。其次,随着生活水平的提高,父母能够承担孩子更高的消费。此外,一些学生喜欢追求时尚和潮流,这也易于需要更多钱。最后,校园恋爱也是造成浪费花销的另一可能原因。
在我看来,一名大学生作为纯消费者,应该学会节俭。我们的支出应该限制在日常必需品,而不是不顾价格购买我们想要的一切。节俭的习惯能帮助我们树立正确的价值观,并有利于我们的未来发展。
7、挫折
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Frustration Education should be Strengthened among College Students.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline:
1)加强挫折教育十分重要,2)举例说明你的观点,3)为了加强挫折教育,我们应该怎么做
Frustration Education should be Strengthened among College Students It is universally acknowledged that college students should be guided correctly to face frustrations in life.Frustration is inevitable during our life, and frustration education should be carried out among colleges and universities.The truth of it is deep and profound.A great many remarkable illustrations contribute to this argument.A case in point is that there are an increasing number of college students committing suicide each year when confronted with some kind of frustration.This is close to suggest that strengthening frustration education allows of no delay.As a matter of fact, it seems that successful people tend to be good at dealing with frustrations.Moreover, most of the students are often annoyed and discouraged by frustrations instead of drawing lessons.Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that frustration education is essential to the college students.But what is worth noting is colleges should also provide psychological service for the students while giving frustration education.To conclude, college students should be guided in the right path when facing setbacks in life.普遍公认我们应该正确引导大学生面对生活中的挫折。挫折在我们生活中必不可少,而挫折教育应该在学生和大学中展开。其中的道理非常深刻。
很多值得注意的例子支持上述论证。一个恰当的例子就是当面对某种挫折的时候,每年自杀的大学生越来越多。这充分证明了加强挫折教育刻不容缓。事实上,成功人士似乎倾向于擅长面对挫折。此外,大多数学生经常被挫折所烦恼和沮丧,而非吸取教训。
根据上述论证,我们可以得出结论:挫折教育对于大学生十分重要。但值得注意的是,在进行挫折教育的同时,大学也应为学生提供心理服务。总之,在面对生活中的挫折时,我们应该对大学生给与正确引导。
8、报考公务员
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Test for Civil Servants.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below: 1)近几年兴起了一股报考公务员的热潮,2)分析产生这一现象的原因,3)你的看法。
Test for Civil Servants In recent years, there are people in expanding numbers who have participated in the test for civil servants.Millions of students choose civil servant as their most ideal occupation after graduation.And among them, the high-educated, like masters and doctors, take quite a large percentage.The craze in civil servant test has attracted widespread attention.The following fundamental causes can account for this kind of craze.First and foremost, nowadays college students face great employment pressure.Civil servant, as one of the most stable professions in today’s China, becomes their preferable choice.Moreover, recently, the welfare and salary of civil servants have been improved greatly, which undoubtedly attracts many people.Last but not least, the high social position of civil servants is a crucial factor drawing many people to take part in the civil servant test.In my opinion, this craze in civil servant test will continue in the following years.However, from the long run, it does not do good to the development of our nation.If most high quality talents gather in the government departments, it might lead to a waste of resources.Accordingly, both the individuals and the government should have a more objective recognition of the civil servant test craze.近年来,越来越多的人开始参加公务员考试。数以百万的学生选择公务员作为他们毕业后最理想的职业。在他们中间,硕士和博士等高等教育者占据相当大的比例。报考公务员的热潮已经引起广泛的关注。
下述主要原因可以解释这种热潮。首先,现在大学生面对巨大的就业压力。公务员作为当今中国最稳定的职业之一,成为他们的首选。其次,近年来公务员的福利和待遇已经极大改善,无疑吸引了很多人。最后,公务员较高的社会地位也是吸引很多人报考公务员的一个重要原因。
在我看来,报考公务员的热潮在未来几年中仍将继续。然而,从长远来看,这对我们国家的发展并没有好处。如果大多数高素质人才聚集中于政府部门,这可能导致一种资源浪费。因此,个人和政府都应对报考公务员的热潮有一种更客观的认识。
9、互联网
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Internet.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、互联网使用的现状,2、大学生是否应该使用互联网,人们的看法不同,3、我的看法。
In recent years, people are developing an inseparable relationship with Internet.As is known to all, it is convenient for us to click the mouse when surfing on line, either to entertain ourselves or to meet the work’s needs.On the one hand, no one denies that Internet is currently one of the most useful media in our daily life.As a college student, I get on line every day to exchange information through e-mails with my net friends.But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain a regular and wholesome lifestyle.Thus, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence.After all,Internet is invented to enrich our life, and to improve the efficiency of our work rather than shackle us with a chain.近年来,人们与互联网之间的关系变得越来越不可分割。众所周知,无论是为了自我娱乐还是适应工作的需求,对我们来说,在网上冲浪时点击鼠标非常方便。
一方面,不可否认互联网现在是我们日常生活中最有用的媒体之一。作为一名大学生,我每天上网借助电子邮件和我的网友交流信息。但另一方面,很多人承认他们太沉迷于网络,以至于无法保持一种正常和健康的生活方式。
因此,我们很有必要以一种合理的方式使用互联网,避免过度沉迷。毕竟,人们发明互联网是为了丰富我们的生活,提高我们的工作效率,并非用锁链束缚我们。
10、重点句型
1)Numerous illustrations can be given ,but this one will suffice.2)
As far as I’m concerned
From my perspective
First and foremost
furthermore
last but not least
In the first place
in addition
what’s more
Generally speaking
in conclusion
On the one hand
on the other hand 3)As is vividly revealed in the picture above.4)To prevent this phenomenon from worsening.5)There is a widespread humorous saying ,11、模板
对立观点型:
1)People’s opinions are always different ,once they talk about...some people
Maintain that...,while the objectors think that...2)Those who hold the first opinion suggest...,in contrast , others argue that...3)AS far as I am concerned, I prefer the latter(former)opinion.On the one hand...问题解决型:
1)Nowadays, there is a growing concern about...,so it is a great importance for us to...As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.2)To this problem, in my mind,there are at least the following three approaches...3)Generally speaking,...Anyway,I am confident that a bright future is awaiting us when all of us make joint efforts to solve this problem 图表作文:.1)As is vividly revealed(shown)in the picture(chart)above...(描述图画)What this cartoon typically reveals is that people nowadays...(指出问题)2)分析图表变化的原因
3)谈自身的看法,解决问题的方法,对社会生活的影响 观点论证类:
1)
Everything has two sides and...is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.2)The reasons are as follows.3)From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive the conclusion
that...4)From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.5)To make myself as clear as I can, I should give my standards for...(为使我的观点更加清楚,我给出了我关于......的标准)
第四篇:大学英语四级作文
The Most Impressing Course in My College Life
During the two years of college life, I have attended many special courses, among which the most impressed one is psychology.I still remembered the days when I was fed up with my major Math, which frustrated me so much.Till I fortunately select one of the most fascinating optional courses lectured by Professor Wang.Time gone back to the first class of Mr.Wang, I found a little old man came in the classroom with a thick book of psychology.Mysteriously, I first unveiled and explored the myth within it by the vivid demonstration of Mr.Wang, and became fascinated with this course.In the following days, it Mr.Wang's lectures give us an insight into psychological phenomenons reflected in ordinary people’s daily lives by illustrating examples in reality.To be frank, it is the psychology class that enlightens my soul of exploring the unknown world and stimulate my desire to learn.Undoubtedly, psychology is the most impressing course for me in college.WeChat, also called Weixin in Chinese, is a social mobile application with voice and text messaging communication services.The app of WeChat is available on Android and iPhone phones covering people from more than 100 countries.WeChat has become increasingly popular among people of all ages, especially in China, because of its instant messaging and multifunctions.WeChat provides some basic functions, including various ways of instant messaging, such as text messages, voice messages, walkie talkies and free stickers.Users can also send pictures, videos, namecards, coupons and lucky money packages to anyone in the contact lists.Besides, WeChat enables group chat, free call, video call, moments sharing and so on.As WeChat supports wifi and 3G network, users can make some free calls or video calls easily by pressing the specified button, which just costs a little.In addition, WeChat holds many other attractive functions.For instance, the user can pay via WeChat.Wechat supports users to register as a public accounts.In China, WeChat public accounts have become a common service or promotion platform for the government, news media and companies.Specific public account subscribers utilize the platforms for different aspects, like hospital preregistration and credit card service, etc.Combining convenient multifunctions and low cost, WeChat seems to seize the chance to get great popularity throughout the world.As it keeps the ability of creativity and updates the functions periodically, more and more people are likely to become WeChat users, and that makes the earth becomes a much smaller world.As a humorous saying goes “Quitting smoke is the easiest thing in the world, I have done it hundreds of times”.It reminds me that a strong will plays a significant role in our life.I firmly believe that “Where there is a will, there is a way”.In terms of the academic performance, a strong will exerts a great influence on student’s academic performances.A strong will of acquiring the knowledge and resisting the temptation of entertainment motivates students to try their best in order to pursue the academic excellence.When it comes to the musical mastery, it is well known that the key to acquiring proficiency in musical instrument is a strong will of repetition.For example, the famous pianist Lang Lang plays the piano from 5am every day and practices over and over again.From my perspective, in order to achieve success, we must exercise our perseverance and strong willpower.For us university students, we need to get prepared, take things seriously, try to cultivate our strong will, and pursue our goals through persistence.范文:l 范文一:
The Importance of Reading Literature
As is humorously portrayed in the cartoon, a teacher is handing a classic literature book to a student, asking the student to “just read it as if you are reading a long text message.” Obviously, the symbolical meaning of this picture is to show us the importance of reading literature.It should be generally acknowledged that classic literature plays a significant role not only in preserving the essence of great minds but also in enhancing the quality of one's life.To begin with, literature as the collection of great minds will help us enormously broaden our horizons, experiencing things we won’t have the chance to do as well as lives we won’t be able to enjoy.What is more, those fine stories selected and conveyed by the great author, although happened in the past, still carry some useful information and implication for our daily lives.In addition, the beautiful words and sentences flowing in the pages of excellent literature can greatly ease our tiredness, making us feel easy and quiet.Therefore, we ought to fully realize the importance of reading literature.Just as the teacher in the picture puts, reading literature should be as easy and common as reading text messages.Facing the coming challenges in the days ahead, we need to equip us with not only science but also literature by which we can beautify our life and the world.Whether to take a job or go to a graduate school? 来源:2017年四级真题话题:校园创建者:河北科技大学于晓芳有范文
要求:
Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to take a job in a company and the other to go to a graduate school.You are to make a choice between the two.Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.范文:
Job hunting becomes increasingly tough for college graduates, for the larger number of graduates doesn’t balance with the limited job opportunities.As a result, more and more graduates choose to further their study.For me, I prefer going to a graduate school to continue my education.From a personal perspective, further education can equip me with more solid and profound knowledge for my future job, so the education in a graduate school can actually serve as a stepping stone in my future job hunting.On a community level, the experience of internship during school can also well develop my social skills of communicating and cooperating with my workmates.In a larger sense, the increasingly competitive job market is gradually raising its standards for the job hunters.Taking all these into account, the advantages seem to lie with the candidates with higher degrees.2016年12月四级真题作文第一套:就业还是创业
来源:2016年四级真题话题:就业创建者:嘉应学院陈昭霞有范文
要求: Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay.Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business of your own.You are to make a decision.Write an essay to explain the reasons for your decision.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.范文: 范文一:
Upon graduation, virtually all college students will confront the problem of the career choice,which is truly a tough choice.Students' opinions differ greatly on this issue.Some hold that priority should be given to start a business of your own, but others take the attitude that finding a job is the best choice influencing their future.As to myself, I prefer the latter view.An opportunity to start a business exerts a tremendous fascination on a great number of people, with no exception to me.In my view, With the competition in the job market becoming increasingly fierce for college graduates,some ambitious students have tried their hands at launching their own businesses.Over the years,there have been many successful cases of student entrepreneurship and such attempts should be encouraged and promoted by both the universities and the society at large.What’s more, college students who start businesses are pioneers,among whom will be born China’s future business leaders.Faced with unknown challenges, they are audacious enough to embark on a perilous journey while most of their peers enjoy stable salaries by working as white-collars at high-end office buildings.All in all, the essential difference between the students who find a job or those students who create their own businesses is that the former are docile followers whereas the latter are aggressive trailblazers.For this reason,business-launching college graduates are more admirable, and thus they command our deep respect.范文二:
Much controversy has been aroused about whether the students should find a job or start their own business after graduation.Taking a look around, we can find that some graduates bustle around job markets, while others choose to run a shop on TMall.However, I prefer the former choice.From my perspective, there are good reasons to find a job in the first several years after their graduation.First and foremost, if a graduate intends to accumulate working experience and learn from the seniors, it is advisable for him to find a job.It is an undeniable fact that the theoretical knowledge will provide the graduates with the ability to consider things comprehensively, however, only under the integration with practice can the rigid knowledge be useful for their future development.Inevitably, doing something small is the premise of undertaking something great.Take Jack Ma, the founder of Alibaba and taobao, for example.He also finds some jobs before establishing his own career, laying a solid foundation for his later success.Consequently, it is of great necessity to find a job after graduation.I firmly believe that it will continue to bring about more returns to our life and future.范文三:
In the past two years of my college life, I have never ceased to think what kind of work I shall take up upon graduation.Although my ideas are not consistent, I have now decided to start a business of my own as my lifelong career.A variety of factors have led me to make this decision over other more lucrative ones.To begin with, running my own business means freedom and independence.As a person having my own business, I am free to use my own ideas and make my own decisions, a privilege not everyone can have, even those with highly-paid positions.More importantly, I like starting my own business in that it offers a certain peace of mind.No more rushing to catch a morning bus, no more anxiety to please a boss, no more worries about your paycheck which is steady, if not handsome.Nothing, not even a big salary, can equal the satisfaction of being your own boss and a gentle peace of life.亮点词汇: cease停止
take up从事
upon graduation毕业时
consistent连续的lifelong终生的 career职业
a variety of 很多
factor原因
lucrative诱惑性的to begin with首先
freedom自由
independence独立
privilege特权
highly-paid position高薪职位
more importantly更为重要的是
in that由于
peace安静
rush匆忙
paycheck收入
steady稳定的 handsome丰厚的、英俊的
equal抵得上
gentle安宁的2016年12月四级真题作文第三套:就业还是考研
来源:2016年四级真题话题:就业创建者:嘉应学院陈昭霞有范文
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay.Suppose you are two options upon graduation: one is to take a job in a company and the other to go to a graduate school.You are to make a choice between the two.Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.写作指导:
这次的四级作文再次考了和大学生生活极为紧密的话题——大学毕业后的选择:工作还是读研,这是每个大学毕业生都会面临的选择题。构思本题可以从以下思路入手,首先开篇明确自己的选择;中间段落具体阐述自己做出这样选择的原因。罗列两个原因时,可以用firstly, secondly, on one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another等引出。表达时,逻辑要清晰,语法及词汇要正确。结尾段说明无论哪一种选择本身并无对错之分。
破题思路:
第一段:话题描述。
第二段:表明观点+阐述原因。
第三段:观点结论。
范文: 范文一:
To Take a Job in a Company or to Go to a Graduate School
Upon graduation, virtually all college students will confront the problem of the career choice,which is truly a tough choice.Students' opinions differ greatly on this issue.Some hold that priority should be given to taking a job, but others take the attitude that going to a graduate school is the most critical factor influencing their future career choices.As to myself, I prefer the latter view.A higher educational background exerts a tremendous fascination on a great number of people, with no exception to me.This phenomenon that the graduates have difficulties in finding job after their graduation can easily be found anywhere in our daily life, especially on campus.On the one hand, with the improved high education of Chinese college students, there are more and more graduates every year.On the contrary, job vacancies don’t increase that fast.There are more people, less food, which is the exact description of the hard condition.On the other hand, an increasing number of people go on to pursue their master and doctor degree;more and more Chinese oversea students come back to China to hunt for better working chances.It is obvious that the competition is more and more fierce.Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to improve our own competitiveness.That is the secret of success in the future employment market after our graduation.范文二:
To Take a Job in a Company or to Go to a Graduate School
Job hunting becomes increasingly tough for college graduates, for the larger number of graduates doesn’t balance with the limited job opportunities.As a result, more and more graduates choose to further their study.For me, I prefer going to a graduate school to continue my education.From a personal perspective, further education can equip me with more solid and profound knowledge for my future job, so the education in a graduate school can actually serve as a stepping stone in my future job hunting.On a community level, the experience of internship during school can also well develop my social skills of communicating and cooperating with my workmates.In a larger sense, the increasingly competitive job market is gradually raising its standards for the job hunters.Taking all these into account, the candidates with higher degrees enjoy greater advantage over college undergraduates in job hunting.As the famous saying goes, slow down to speed up.That is to say, further study may slow us down when entering the job market, but it does speed us up on our way to success!
范文三:
To Take a Job in a Company or to Go to a Graduate School
Upon graduation, virtually all college students will be confronted with the problem of the career choice.Students' opinions vary greatly on this issue.Some maintain that first priority should be given to taking a job, but others advocate that it is advisable to go to a graduate school which will exert a tremendous impact on their future career success.Facing these two options, I will choose to take a job in a company.There are mainly two reasons for my choice.On one hand, I am eager to apply what I’ve learned to practice since I have got so many years’ schooling.Moreover, I am somewhat tired of the “ivory tower” life and ready for the “real world” life, for I assume that I can learn more from getting in touch with society.On the other hand, my family needs my financial support, because my parents are getting older and older and making less and less.Though it doesn’t take much to pursue my further study, I cannot support my parents financially if I choose to go to a graduate school.To sum up, to take a job in a company meets my desire of learning from practice and support my parents financially, which is a better choice for me.范文四:
To Take a Job in a Company or to Go to a Graduate School
For undergraduates college students, deciding what to do upon graduation can be a tough decision to say the least.From my point of view, I prefer to pursue postgraduate study.My choice can be attributed to the following two driving forces.For one thing, I want to continue my studies for their own sake because I love what I am doing.In fact, having a passion for my subject is possibly the best reason for going into postgraduate education.For another thing, entering into a postgraduate school, I can improve my job prospects.Specializing at postgraduate level can make you a stronger job applicant.Actually, when it comes to university graduates’ career choice, there is no right or wrong choice for everyone.Rather, each student must reach his or her own conclusion.Learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission.来源:2016年四级真题话题:人生创建者:天津职业技术师范大学骆玮有范文
要求:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “ Learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission.” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of lifetime learning.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.范文:
It is often said that learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission.The saying indicates the importance of lifelong learning, which we have been lectured over and over again.Lifelong learning is crucial to our life and career in modern society.Living in the information age, we have to keep pace with the times through ceaseless learning;otherwise, we'll be too outdated to seize any opportunities.For example, a taxi driver who learns to use a Texi App such as Didi can make much more money than those who don't;a housewife who opens a shop online can even out-earn a white-collar worker.All of their success can be attibuted to their constant learning in addition to the progress of technology.As an old saying goes, it is never too old to learn.Thus, learning is an attitude regardless of age.Only through learning ceaselessly can we achieve our potential and live a better life in this rapidly developing society.(2014年12月四级真题)The most impressive course in college 来源:2014年四级真题话题:校园创建者:天津职业大学吴媛有范文
要求:
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a course that has impressed you most in college.You should state the reasons and write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.范文:
The Most Impressing Course in My College Life
During the two years of college life, I have attended many special courses, among which the most impressed one is psychology.I still remembered the days when I was fed up with my major Math, which frustrated me so much.Till I fortunately select one of the most fascinating optional courses lectured by Professor Wang.Time gone back to the first class of Mr.Wang, I found a little old man came in the classroom with a thick book of psychology.Mysteriously, I first unveiled and explored the myth within it by the vivid demonstration of Mr.Wang, and became fascinated with this course.In the following days, it Mr.Wang's lectures give us an insight into psychological phenomenons reflected in ordinary people’s daily lives by illustrating examples in reality.To be frank, it is the psychology class that enlightens my soul of exploring the unknown world and stimulate my desire to learn.Undoubtedly, psychology is the most impressing course for me in college.The most interesting place in your campus 来源:2014年四级真题话题:校园创建者:江苏大学陈婷有范文
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following question.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your campus, what is the most interesting place you would llike to take him/her to see and why?
范文:
Culture Square
I am excited to hear that my foreign friend, Bill, is coming to visit my campus and cannot wait to express my welcome.Hereby I'd like to recommend to him the culture square on the campus,whhich is of great interest and enjoyment to give it a try.The culture square is the heaven for students where a variety of colorful activities are available to add extra pleasure to their monotonous routine.Besides, people are always free to engage themselves in any of these activities that fascinates them.I am quite confident that Bill will find it beneficial to communicate and interact with other students.Moreover, as a major part of the campus culture, the culture square offers whoever wants to get an insight into the campus an opportunity to know better the campus culture.In a word, the culture square, a world full of vigor and vitality, a window through which individuals can get a clear picture of the campus culture, is definitely a place worth visiting.I'm convinced that Bill will have a lot of fun there and will enjoy the wonderful experience.卷三:
感谢信:感谢在你困境中(困难时)帮助过你的一个朋友。
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to your friends who helped you most when you were in difficulty.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.范文: Dear Walt,I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your help.I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi.Most importantly, if it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid, I fear that the consequences might have been much serious.Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.Although nowadays people in mounting numbers talk about the need to be unselfish, we see very few people practice what they preach.If there were more people like you, this world would be a much nicer place.My thanks to you for the help you render me are beyond words.Yours faithfully,(2015年6月四级真题)How Will Our Life Go on without Internet? 来源:2015年四级真题话题:生活创建者:嘉应学院陈昭霞有范文
要求:
Directions:for this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture above.You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on this kind of modern life.You should write at least l20 words but no more than 180 words.2.png 破题思路:
第一段:描述漫画内容,引出文章主题:电脑的使用越来越广泛,使用的时间也越来越长。
第二段:分析该现象的原因。
第三段:提出措施解决。或得出自己的结论。
范文:
How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?
This picture vividly describes that the person uses a computer all day long even when he falls asleep at night.What the cartoon conveys is the impact of computers on people.Computers exert an enormous influence on people.Some people assert that computers have made life more complex and stressful, while some people believe that computers have made life easier and more convenient.Now many of my classmates like to surf the Internet in their free time.I think Internet can bring us both advantages and disadvantages.For example, if I have some trouble studying,I can surf the internet to find more helpful information.However, Internet can bring about some problems at the same time.In a word, in spite of the fact the computer seems to have made life more complex and stressful, I feel that the advantages are more obvious, which have become an integral / indispensable part of everyday life.How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?
As is depicted in the cartoon, modern life has been dominated by computers.No matter where the young man is, the only friend he has is a computer.Even when he sleeps, what is in his dream is still the computer.Apparently,the cartoon aims to reveal the fact that the computer has begun to play a negative role in the modern life.The reasons why modern people are tied up with computers are as follows.To begin with, they have become increasingly busier in making money;therefore, they need a quick way to alleviate their pressure and exhaustion.Moreover,computers can assist people to deal with complicated working stuff,make friends, and entertain themselves.To sum up, this lifestyle is absolutely imperfect.In order to lead a healthy life,we are supposed to do more exercises and expose ourselves to the tangible world.Meanwhile, it is high time that we turned the computer off and talked with our friends and familily face-to-face.Only in these ways will modern life become more beautiful for you and me.XXXX
第五篇:大学英语四级作文
四级作文模板
一、观点陈述类作文
There is no consensus of opinions among people about _____(争论的焦点).Some people are of the view that _____(观点1),while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that _____(观点2).人们对_____(争论的焦点)的观点不尽一致。有人认为_____(观点1),另外一些人则持不同观点,认为_____(观点2)。
As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all, _____(论据1).Furthermore, _____(论据2).Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is, _____(论据3).就我而言,我支持前 / 后一种观点。理由显而易见:首先,_____(论据1)。其次 _____(论据2)。最重要的一点是 _____(论据3)。
A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that_____(总结观点).As a college student, I am supposed to _____(表决心).综上所述,可以得出一个结论,_____(总结观点)。作为一名大学生,我将_____(表决心)。
(注:第二部分也可以只写两条论据。)
二、原因分析类作文
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social / economic / environmental problem._____(某种问题 / 现象).has increasingly become a common concern of the public.There are a couple of reasons booming this problem / phenomenon.近来,上出现了一种日益严重的问题 / 现象,_____(某种问题 / 现象)引起了人们的普遍关注。造成这一问题 / 现象的原因有很多。
The first and most important reason is that_____(原因1).There is another reason that deserves some words here._____(原因2).最重要的一个原因是_____(原因1)。另外一个值得注意的原因是_____(原因2)。
A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent _____(某种问题 / 现象)from bringing us more harm._____(措施1);_____(措施2).if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.我们应该采取一系列的措施来防止这一问题 / 现象给我们带来危害。_____(措施1);_____(措施2)。如果我们继续忽略这个问题,将会涌现出更多问题。
(注:如果提纲第三部分没有要求给出具体的解决办法或措施,最后一部分中的措施1,2可不写。)
三、利弊比较类作文
(1)利大于弊
With the development of science and human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into reality.Some of them have positive effects on our life, but some are distasteful.The phenomenon of ______(某种现象)is an example.随着科学发展和人类文明的进步,出现了很多以前从未出现过的新事物。有些给我们的生活带来了积极影响,有些则令人不快。______(某种现象)就是一个例子。
Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.On the one hand, ______(优点 / 利1).On the other hand, ______(优点 / 利2).Every thing in the world has its own two sides.Without exception, it has both advantages and disadvantages.One of the important disadvantages is that One of the important disadvantages is that ______(缺点).总的说来,它有如下优点:一方面,______(优点 / 利1);另一方面,______(优点 / 利2)。任何事情都有两面性,它也不例外,有其优点 / 利和缺点 / 弊。其中最大的一个缺点就是______。
But all in all, I would say the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.With the advance of society, if we encourage the merits and eliminate the drawbacks, all people will enjoy a better life.但是,总的说来,我认为其优点 / 利大于缺点 / 弊。随着社会的发展,如果我们能对此善加利用,所有的人都能生活得更好。
(注:这个模板适合写优点大于缺点,即利大于弊类的作文。如果缺点大于优点,弊大于利,可参看以下模板)
(2)弊大于利
With the development of science and human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into reality.Some of them have positive effects on our life, but some are distasteful.The phenomenon of ______(某种现象)is an example.随着科学发展和人类文明的进步,出现了很多以前从未出现过的新事物。有些给我们的生活带来了积极影响,有些则令人不快。______(某种现象)就是一个例子。
The negative aspects are apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that ______(弊端
1).To make matters worse, ______(弊端2).其负面影响 / 弊端是显而易见的。其中最主要的一个弊端是______(弊端1)。更糟糕的是, ______(弊端2)。
On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of the progress of the modern society.There is still a long way for us to improve / eliminate ______(某种现象)and make our life more comfortable.总的说来,这一现象是现代社会发展的后果之一。要改进 / 消除 ______(某种现象),使我们的生活更加舒适,还有很长的路要走。
附1:经典的替换词
1.people / person---individuals / characters / folks
2.good---positive / favorable / promising / perfect /excellent / outstanding
3.bad---dreadful / unfavorable / poor/ adverse
4.many---an army of / an ocean of / a variety of
5.some---a slice of / quiet a few / several
6.thing---affair / business / matter
7.think---take the attitude that / hold the view that /it is universally acknowledged that
8.in my opinion---for my part / from my own perspective / to my mind
9.cause---give rise to / lead to / result in
10.attractive---appealing/ tempting/ fascinating/ charming
附2:常用谚语(议论文)
1.As a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”.2.As a proverb says, “Honesty is the best policy.”.3.As a proverb says, “Where there is will there is a way.”
4.As a popular saying goes, “A man is known by the company he keeps.”
5.As is known to all, “No pains, no gains”.6.To open a book is always beneficial
7.All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.8.Knowledge is power.9.More haste, less speed.10.A good beginning is half done.11.Time and tide wait for no man.12.It’s never too late to learn.13.Easier said than done.14.Actions speak louder than words.15.Opportunity knocks at the door only once.16.A life without a friend is a life without a sun.17.God helps those that help themselves.18.Early to bed, and early to rise, makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.19.Never put off until tomorrow what can be done today.20.Each man has his limitation.