中考英语作文范例+点评

第一篇：中考英语作文范例+点评

中考英语作文范例：我们的住宅小区

Our Housing Estate 我们的小区

There are many nice housing estates in Pudong New Area.Our housing Rainbow Estate, is one of them.浦东新区有很多漂亮的小区，我们的小区——彩虹小区，是其中之一。

You can see three in the middle.There is a beautiful garden in front of Block 2.In the gardon there is a.There is a shop on the right of Block 1.A big playground lies on the left of Block 3.You can see many men, women, boys and girls having exercise there.小区中间有三条街道。在第二条街道前面是一个美丽的花园，花园里有个喷泉。在第一条街道的右面是一个商店，而第三街道的左边是一个巨大的运动场，可以看到男男女女在那边做运动。

There is a small in our housing estate.It is and comfortable for us to live in our housing estate.在我们的小区有一个小小的幼儿园。对于我们来说，住在小区十分方便和舒服。点评：文章的结构与布局较合理，有一定的顺序，层次分明。

中考英语作文范例：我们的语音室

编辑点评：中考英语作文的另一种类型是说明文。说明文是就某一件事说明清楚，一般总是以空间顺序展开的。写物的文章常用“某处有某物”的句子表示物的存在。

说明文是就某一件事说明清楚，一般总是以空间顺序展开的，可以自上而下，自左而右，从里到外，从整体到局部等等。写物的文章常用“某处有某物”的句子表示物的存在。常用的句型如： There be...I have got a/ an...It is red/ green/ colour/ round...I like...best.It looks like...I like it very much.I will keep it forever.Our Language Lab 我们的语音室

There is a language in our school.It's on the third floor.It's big and clean.我们学校有一个语音室，它位于三楼，大而整洁。

There are 50 desks and 50 chairs in it.There are 50 computers and a in it.There are 50 s on the desk.语音室里有50张桌椅，50台电脑和一个操纵台，桌子上还放着50副耳机。

Every week we have our English lessons here.We watch , TV, video and listen to tapes.Then the teacher asks us questions.We like our language lab and always keep it clean and tidy.我们每周都会在这儿上英语课，我们在这里看幻灯片，电视，视频和听磁带。然后老师会向我们提问。我们很喜欢这个语音室，并且总是保持它的干净整洁。

点评：这篇文章写了“我们的语音室”,按照一定的空间顺序，先写设备，再写功能，让人对语音室的概貌有一个全面，准确的了解。

中考英语作文范例：温泉让我得到休息

编辑点评：中考英语作文叙事文章要拿高分，除了要说清楚整件事情的来龙去脉，更关键的是要说得生动有趣，让评卷人获得情感上的共鸣。我们仔细观察下今天的作文范例是如何做到这一点的吧。

Hot spring Let Me Have A Rest 温泉让我得到休息

We took off our coats and ran quickly into the spring.When I first put my feet into the water.I cried out, “Wow, it is hot!” I didn't know the water was so hot, and I was a little that it would burn me...So I walked carefully into the spring.One step,two...I felt the heat slowly ing up my body.我们脱下外套，快速奔向柠檬泉，当我第一次把脚伸进水中时，我大声喊道：“哇，水是热的！”我一开始不知道水如此热，所以我有点儿担心会被热水烫到。于是，我小心翼翼地走进温泉，一步，两步......我能感觉到热量慢慢地进入我的身体。

点评：要写出生动有趣的事，除了把事情的来龙去脉说清楚，还一定要注意增加文章的细节，这是必不可少的，丰富的细节描写能为你的文章增色不少，使人读起来具有一种身临其境的感觉。另外，本篇时态运用十分得当，整篇文章的动词过去时一脉相承。

中考英语作文范例：我最好的朋友

编辑点评：中考最后一大版块通常是作文(也称写话)，今天我们来看看记叙文中描写人的一个范例。描写人的方面有很多，介绍姓名、年龄、职业、兴趣爱好、外貌、特长等，我们看看这篇文章注重的是哪一方面。My Best Friend 我最好的朋友

My best friend is one of my s.Her name is.Every day, we go to school together and go back home together.We often help each other and learn from each other in study.我最好的朋友是我的一个同班同学，她的名字叫玛丽。我们每天一起上学，一起回家。我们经常互相帮助，并向对方学习。

We have the same-ing s.She has many nice stamps.She is very proud of them.Sometimes she gives some of them to me.I think she is a very good girl.We will be good friends forever.我们有着相同的爱好——集邮。她有很多漂亮的邮票，并为此十分自豪。有时，她会把其中的一些邮票给我。我认为她是个非常好的女孩。我们会成为永远的朋友。

点评：这是一篇记人的叙述文。先交代了My Best Friend是谁，接着通过事例交代了为什么“我们是最好的朋友”。最后阐述了主题。

中考英语作文范例：我的班主任

编辑点评：记叙文是中考作文的一个主要题型，它的写作要求是重点突出，用词得当，60词左右，我们来看看今天这篇描述老师的文章是怎么写的吧，另外还有常用句型奉上哦。

My Class Teacher 我的班主任

My class teacher is Mr.Wang.He is but kind.He has taught us Chinese for two years.我的班主任是王老师，他是一个要求严格而亲切的老师。他已经教了我们两年语文。He always tells us to study hard but not all the time.Sometimes he plays with us.He says, “All work and no play makes Jack a boy.” I think he is a good.他总是告诉我们要好好学习，但不是时时刻刻学习。有时他会和我们一起玩。他说：“只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。”

我觉得他是个很好的班主任。

点评：这篇文章取材的是身边熟悉的人，作者也有东西可写，更具有可读性。另外，写人时把主语稍作调整，读起来轻松多了。

I am a 15-year-old girl.My name is.Now I am studying in the middle school.I want to be an because I think it is a funny and exciting job...写人的常见句式如： This is my friend, Mary.She is...years old.She is a teacher/ an artist/ a singer...She/ He gets up at 6/5.../ early/ late.She/ He has sports at school.She/ He likes...She/ He is strong/ fat/ / kind/ thin/...She/ He looks like...She/ He is good at English/ maths/ Chinese/ physics...中考英语作文范例：我的班会

编辑点评：前面介绍了写人的作文，今天，我们看看叙事的作文又是怎样的呢。写事一定要交代时间、地点、人物、情节，这跟语文中的记叙文其实是相通的。先来观察下面这篇范文吧。Our Class Meeting 我们的班会

Last Friday afternoon we had our last class meeting in our classroom.All the students and our class teacher took part in it.上周五下午，我们在教室举行了最后一次班会。班上的所有同学和班主任都参加了。We held a warm about our future life.Each of us spoke at the meeting.After the discussion, we all to study hard so as to make our life better and better.我们热烈讨论了今后的生活，每个人都在会上积极发言。讨论完后我们都下定决心好好学习，让我们的生活更加美好。

点评：这篇文章条理清楚，记叙完整，短短的五句话有简单句，也有复合句，交代了时间、地点、人物、原因、经过、结果六要素。常用的叙事句型有：

It took place/ happened...Last week/ year/ Monday/ Tuesday...One Friday morning...中考英语作文范例：树为什么重要

编辑点评：今天我们来看看议论文的写法吧。议论文要有自己的观点，要有论证过程，强调观点。先来读一读这篇范文吧。Why Are Trees Important 树为什么重要

Trees are very important to us.Do you know why? Let me tell you.树对于我们非常重要，你知道为什么吗？让我来告诉你吧。

Trees take in from the air and make.That's important.People and animals need oxygen to live.Many small animals and s live in the trees.Some of them also get food from trees.Trees can also stop water and from going away.If we have a lot of trees, we stop s from being large.I think this is very important.You know, trees are green.They can make our country even more beautuful.树木可以吸收二氧化碳，并释放氧气，这非常重要。人类和动物需要依靠氧气生存。很多小动物和昆虫居住在树里，有些从树里获取食物。树木还可以防止水土流失。如果我们有很多树就可以阻止沙漠扩大。我认为这非常重要。众所周知，树是绿色的，它们能使我们的国家更加美丽。

Trees are our good friends.We should plant more trees and take good care of them.树是我们的好朋友。我们应该种更多的树，并好好照料它们。点评：文章先阐明观点，接着论证，最后重申自己的观点。

中考英语作文范例：英语回信

编辑点评：写信是为了交流，有来信，必然也会有回信。在上期，我们介绍了英文书信的写法，今天我们来看看回信在格式和内容方面又要注意哪些问题呢。

Dear Bob, 亲爱的鲍勃，Yesterday I heard from you.I am very glad to be your pen friend.My name is Peter Zhang.I am sixteen years old.I live in...昨天我收到了你的来信，我很高兴成为你的笔友。我的名字叫张彼德。我今年十六岁，我住在......I am a middle school student, too.I like English and maths very much.I also like sports.I am good at singing.I know a little about America.Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? 我也是一名中学生，我非常喜欢英语和数学。我还喜欢体育运动，我很擅长唱歌。我对美国的了解不多，下次来信时能多跟我聊聊你们国家的事吗？ Please write to me soon.期待着你的来信。Yours 你的

Peter Zhang 张彼德

点评：回信简洁明了，句子间的衔接自然、紧凑，文中作者把自己的情况大致向美国朋友作了介绍，达到了回信的目的。

中考英语作文范例：通知的翻译

编辑点评：看完了书信的写作，接下来该说说便条的写作了。其实便条的用处还是挺大的，请假要请假条，留言要留言条，备忘也要有个备忘录，今天的作文范例就是关于一则“观众须知”的英文便条解释。

假如你陪你校的外籍教师Smith先生去音乐厅听音乐，在门口的布告栏里看见一张观众须知，内容如下： 观众须知

1、一人一票，凭票入场；

2、场内严禁吸烟；

3、食品和饮料请勿带进场内；

4、演出时请勿照相；

5、演出时请勿使用传呼机和移动电话；

6、提前30分钟入场。

Smith先生不懂中文，他很想知道布告栏里写着什么。现在，请你把观众须知的内容用英语告诉Smith先生，并把要讲的话写出来。

Mr.Smith, it is a notice to the.It says that we should enter the concert hall 30 minutes earlier before the concert starts.to the hall is by ticket only, each one each ticket.史密斯先生，这是一则观众须知。上面说我们应该在音乐会开始前30分钟入场，每人凭票进入。

As a rule, food or drink should not be taken into the hall.Of course, smoking is not allowed in the hall either.按照规定，食品和饮料不得带进场内，吸烟也是不允许的。

Please don't bring your with you because no photos can be taken during the concert.And what is more, and mobile phones must be off during the concert.请不要携带数码相机入内，因为场内严禁拍照。另外，音乐会期间，传呼机和手机必须关闭。点评：文章的用词和句式有一定的难度，特别是关联词的运用，如of course，as a rule，and what is more使文章读起来朗朗上口，层层紧扣，环环递进，体现了作者较高的写作技巧和水平。

中考英语作文范例：节约用水

编辑点评：节约用水是保护环境的重要一步，因此也是一个常谈的话题，如何在中考作文几十个单词的范围内把这个主题写好是，是一个值得下功夫思考的问题，我们看看这篇范文是如何做到的。Saving Water What do we use water for? 2 Why water is very important in our daily life? 3 How do we save water? 参考范文

As we all know, water is in our daily life.We drink water every day, we use water to wash things and cook food, we also use water to make machines.People can't live without water.我们都知道水对于日常生活的重要性。我们每天喝水，用水洗东西和烹制食物，我们还用水来制造机器。离开水，人类就无法存活。

Though about 75% of the earth is covered with water, only 3% of it is water.So we must save water by having a instead of a.We can save water by

taps immediately and we can also save water by not washing under a running.虽然地球75%都被水覆盖，但其中只有3%是淡水。所以我们应该用淋浴代替泡澡来节约水，同时及时修好滴水的水龙头，并且不要开着水龙头洗东西。

中考英语作文范例：学会互助

编辑点评：人与人之间是和谐共处的，也是要互相帮助的，如何就这一话题展开叙述，让你的作文拿高分呢？一起来看看今天的范文是怎么写的吧，注意文中的用词和结构哦。Everyone Needs Help Did you get any help from others? 2 Did you give any help to people when they needed? 3 Tell your story 参考作文

In our daily life, we are with different kinds of people, no matter at home, in school, or at some other places.Everyone needs help, I think.And only who are willing to help others will also be helped.在我们的日常生活中我们会遇到各种各样的人，无论是在家里、学校，还是在其他地方，我觉得我们都需要帮助。并且只有那些愿意帮助他人的人会获得别人的帮助。

One day I saw a little girl in the street carrying a heavy schoolbag on her back.She was walking happily.一天，我在街上看到一个背着沉重书包的小女孩，她正开心地走着。

Then suddenly an old man fell down while he was crossing a street.She ran towards him at once, but she was too short to help him to stand.I helped her and we together brought the old man to safety.He thanked us over and over.I think the little girl was, though very young, a very person.突然，一位老人在穿过街道时摔倒了。她迅速地奔向老人，但是她太矮了，没法把老人扶起来。我过去帮助她把老人扶到安全地带。老人一再感谢我们。我觉得这个小女孩虽然年轻，但是一个很热心肠的人。

中考英语作文范例：毕业离校

编辑点评：前面我们提供了各种类型的中考英语作文范例，不知道大家掌握了其中的写法没有呢？从这期开始，我们为大家精选了一些写作参考题目和写作纲要，供大家练习。Write a passage of at least 60 words on the following topic according to the given information.Leaving School Old school life 2 Teacher(s)and schoolmate(s)3 Future plan 参考作文

I don't want to leave school, because my old school life was full of fun and I had many good friends in my old school.我不想毕业，因为我的校园生活丰富多彩，我在学校有很多好朋友。

We used to share our lunch together.We used to play ball games together.We often did some during the holiday.All of my teachers and are very friendly and helpful.Now I have to leave school, I hope I will keep in touch with them and my new school life will be more.我们曾一起共享午餐，也曾一起做球类运动，我们还经常在假日里一起做调查。所有的老师和同学都很友善，并给予帮助。现在我即将毕业，我希望能和他们保持联系，也希望新的学校生活能更加有趣。

第二篇：中考英语作文及点评：自由作文1

中考英语作文范文及点评：自由作文1

【习作要求】

Write eight or more sentences about the season you like best.【参考范文】

I like winter best.Though it is very cold, it is good for

skating.I often go skating on Sundays with my father.When it snows, everything turns white.Trees and houses are covered with thick snow.How beautiful the world looks!My friends and I like to make snowmen.Sometimes we make snowballs and throw them at each other.That's a very interesting game.I like winter holiday very much because the Spring Festival is the happiest time of the year.【名师点评】

作者用流畅的语言描述了冬天的景色。全文意思表达清楚，结构紧密。

第三篇：中考英语作文及点评：自由作文3

中考英语作文范文及点评：自由作文3

【习作要求】

请以My….为题写一篇短文。要求：有时间、地点、人物，字数不少于80个单词。

【学生习作】

【名师点评】

第四篇：中考英语作文及点评：自由作文1

中考英语作文范文及点评：自由作文1

【习作要求】

Write eight or more sentences about the season you like best.内容要点

1．四个季节中任选一个季节。

2．被选季节的特点（气候、时间、事物、活动等）。

3．人们在此季节所从事的活动。

4．作者自己喜爱的活动和感受。

【参考范文】

I like winter best.Though it is very cold, it is good for

skating.I often go skating on Sundays with my father.When it snows, everything turns white.Trees and houses are covered with thick snow.How beautiful the world looks!My friends and I like to make snowmen.Sometimes we make snowballs and throw them at each other.That's a very interesting game.I like winter holiday very much because the Spring Festival is the happiest time of the year.【名师点评】

这是一篇描写季节的文章，文章难度一般。要求从自己的角度描写季节和感受季节。应注意以下几个问题：

(1)确定全文的时态。此文一般选用一般现在时。

(2)除了对季节的描述，一定要有自己的见解，这是得分的重要内容和关键所在。

作者用流畅的语言描述了冬天的景色。全文意思表达清楚，结构紧密。

第五篇：中考英语作文及点评：自由作文2

中考英语作文范文及点评：自由作文2

【习作要求】

Write about what you are going to do after you leave school.【参考范文】

When I finish school, I want to be a teacher.Though teachers are poorly paid and they have no power, teachers are kind, respectable and learned, like angels.They lead the pathway to succeed.It's quite sure that teachers are very important in modern world.We can't develop our country without knowledge.Teachers teach us knowledge.I like all of my teachers in my school.I would like to be an English teacher.It's very important for the students to learn English well today.I'll try my best to be an ideal teacher.My students can make our country better in the future.【名师点评】

这是一篇阐述观点的议论文，作者用简洁而流畅的语言表达了长大后想成为一名老师的愿望。论据充分，观点明确，并且字里行间渗透了对祖国的无比热爱之情和把祖国建设更加美好的决心。