留学文书指导推荐信

第一篇：留学文书指导推荐信

Dear admissions committees professor,I amGrade 2008 counselor of electronic engineering college of Electronic Science and Technology University.Here I am honored to recommend XXX whom I am very proud of to your school to study.As the Grade 2008 counselor of electronic engineering college managing 1048 students,I am mainly responsible for the idealogical and political education and daily behavior management of the students for the whole four-year university life,and guide the students to take part in the postgraduate entrance exams and take up an occupation.For the four years,I have witnessed her growth from a green girl into a bold,strong,outstanding,innovational practitioner.On the job interview of the counsellorassistant in October 2008,XXX who first entered college performed high passion to the student work and made a deep impression on me.So,I immediately decided to hire her.And in the later contact, her hardwork and persistence are beyond my expectation.At the first, she is not a talent-excellent student.And at that time,she did not master the use of Office Excel, and the speed of the words input also was only 30 words per minute,so that the other counselors questioned her ability.She still teether insisted and said: “Give me some time, I will let you see my progress.” God helps those who help themselves.After a-week self-study and practice,her input speed increased to 120 words per minute, and she could quickly make perfect student data storage form.So,she wined affirmation and praise of the whole counselors' in the office.In the next work of the assistant,she learned in face of the difficulty to find the problem quickly and orderly,and put forward the ideas of the solution to the problem and organize everyone to do their own work in together.In 2010,after my commending,she became the assistant of the practic branch of teaching affairs department.However,she is not only outstanding in the office,but also in the competition field of literary sports.As the leading singer of the chorus in the school chorus competition,she got the first prize scholarship and defeated the 17 colleges.she is the champion of the three women basketball game of Electronic Science and Technology University and the third place in the women volleyball match.And she was successful to be the site commentator for Fifth National University Western Division of Freescale Smart Car Competition,and wined a round of applause for her humor explanation and rich experience.The most surprised me is her humanities concern to the society.She grew up in Shanxi province where is the coal mines province of China,and witnessed the frequent explosion accident of the mine.Growing in the strong culture of Yellow River,she profoundly understands how valuable of every fresh life.In the summer of 2009,she took part in the consolatory practice for the post-disaster reconstruction to help the victims to establish the confidence to live,and then she got the prize of the outstanding individual in the university summer practice.She also established a good interpersonal relationship network for her optimistic,humourous,honest personality.In addition,XXX also has made brilliant achievements in thory course,and in science and technology innovation.It is her struggling dearm of many years to enter the MIT for further study.She is also the one who has the comprehensive quality of thinking and operating which your school needs.So,I solemnly commend this student to your school.If you need more information about this student,please call me.Yours sincerely,YYY

第二篇：本科留学文书写作指导

本科留学文书写作指导

(一):CommonApp中的Essay

What---什么是Essays？

本科申请需要提交的全套申请材料里，Essays是个关键点，直接决定申请结果，同时也是学生最难把控的难点。不同高校要求的Essays各不相同。所以，在预备申请材料之前，就应该事先做好选校工作，确定目标学校，然后熟悉目标学校的全套申请表格和具体申请要求。为方便起见，美国越来越多的高校现在采用the Common Application（通用申请表，见附件1），同时各个学校会要求再提交一份Common Application Supplement（补充申请表，例如：附件2中的Yale Common Application Supplement）；对于国际生，还要填写一份IS，即International Supplement（国际生补充申请表，见附件3）。IS也属于the Common Application的一部分。

The Common Application(通用申请表)里，有两个写作项：Short Answer（一篇不超过150词的短文）

Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below or on an attached sheet(150 words or fewer).（简述一项课外活动或工作经历）Personal Essay（一篇不少于250词的作文）

Please write an essay(250 words minimum)on a topic of your choice or on one of the options listed below.Please indicate your topic by

checking the appropriate box.This personal essay helps us become

acquainted with you as a person and student, apart from courses, grades,test scores, and other objective data.It will also demonstrate your ability to organize your thoughts and express yourself.（除了课程、分数等客观数据以外，作文可以帮助我们更好地了解你作为一个学生和一个人的各个方面。它也能展示你组织思想和表达自己的能力。从以下题目中任选一题。）

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① Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.（评述一次重要的经历、成就、冒险或面临的道德困境，及其对你的影响。）

② Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you.（讨论一个你个人、地区、国家或国际事件及其对你的重要性。）

③ Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence.（说明一个曾经对你有重要影响的人，并描述他/她对你产生了怎样的影响。）④ Describe a character in fiction, a historical figure, or a creative work(as in art, music, science, etc.)that has had an influence on you, and explain that influence.（描述一个曾经对你产生过重要影响的小说人物、历史人物、或者艺术、音乐、科学等创作性作品。同时描述他/她对你产生了怎样的影响。）

⑤ A range of academic interests, personal perspectives, and life

experiences adds much to the educational mix.Given your personal background, describe an experience that illustrates what you would bring to the diversity in a college community, or an encounter that demonstrated the importance of diversity to you.（学术爱好、个人观点、生活经验都能有效增加教育群体多样性。说明你的个人背景，描述一个个人经验，由此说明你能增添大学的多样性，或者说明一个文化多样性的校园对你的重要性。）

⑥ Topic of your choice.（自选话题）

第三篇：出国留学长篇文书中英文指导

出国留学长篇文书中英文指导

Common 长篇

1.Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.描述你的一次有意义的经历、成就、完成的任务或者面对的一次道德困境。

2.Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you.选择一个关于个人的、本土的、国家的或者国际的议题讨论，并说明这个问题对你的重要性。

3.Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence.描述一个对你产生重要影响的人。

4.Describe a character in fiction, a historical figure, or a creative work(as in art, music, science, etc.)that has had an influence on you, and explain that influence.选择一个小说人物、历史人物或者一件作品(艺术、音乐、科学等作品)，对它进行描述并且 说明它对你的重要影响以及原因。

5.Given your personal background, describe an experience that illustrates what you would bring to the diversity in a college community, or an encounter that demonstrated the importance of diversity to you.说明你的个人背景、经历对大学可能带来的影响，或者阐述这种多样性对你的重要性。写作难点：如何选题。

2、4题是议论文;2题容易偏题;

1、5题相对易写，但也要做到出彩、不落俗套。

写作要领： 反映一个中学生从不成熟到逐渐成熟的成长心路。

【精彩例文】

Becoming a Real Man

My mother said she never thought about me as an athlete.I did not, either.When I was little, I often got sick and would stay inside the house instead of playing wildly with other boys.I，the “science guy,” spent much time watching science programs and enjoyed being set as a good example in my neighborhood.Then, my parents brought me to Macau when I was fourteen.We walked on the streets of Macau and happened to see a Manchester United Football Club store.About twenty Manchester fans were wearing the red team shirt and were watching a game on TV cheering for their team.I stopped and stared at those red spots that were jumping, yelling and smiling at one another, and I could feel the passionate flame hidden in my body was kindled;I belonged there.Turning to my mother, I asked for a red Manchester United shirt with my name on it.She was stunned by my request and warned me that I couldn' t have anything else if she bought me this one.Without any hesitation, I agreed, and this red shirt was the only thing I brought from Macau.Back at school, I immediately joined the football club.Everyday I spent there made me feel lucky that I had the chance to get to know this wonderful sport.Pass, shoot, and gain a point;it was great to freely run across the sports field and I felt like a hero.Unbelievably, half a year later, the “science guy” became the assistant-coach of our school women ’ s football team.Proving my talents in athletics, I was selected to take part in the sports meets in my last year in the junior high school.Enrolled in two games, I aspired to win two gold medals for my class.I did win the long jump, but I sprained my ankle in my last jump.My head-teacher asked me to give up the 4* 100m relay race the next day;however, seeing there was no replacement for me, I decided to take part in the competition anyway.I was the last runner of my team, and by the time I got the stick from the third runner, our team was almost 300m behind.The idea of “game over” flashed in my head but then smashed by me.My classmates watching the game beside the track used all their strength to shout, “Run，YZ!Get past them!You can do this!Come on!”

“Yes, I can do this.I won’ t let you down，” I said to myself.Bearing the pain from my ankle, I tried my best to pass the students ahead of me one by one.Six, five, four, three, two, one left, the whole class ran to me and held me up!The silver medal that hung from my neck shined even over the golden one.The green and red sports field left me with great pleasure.The days I spent with it were rewarded with strength, determination and responsibility, which helped me grow up into a real man.【成为一个真正的男人】

妈妈说她从没想到我会成为一个运动员。我也没想到。当我很小的时候，我经常生病，因此我只能待在屋子里，不能和其他男孩子一块疯玩。我成了一个“科学男孩”，花很长时间去看科学节目，乐于被街坊四邻当作好孩子的典型。

在我14岁的时候，爸爸妈妈带我去澳门玩。我们走在澳门的街道上，碰巧看到了一家英国曼联足球俱乐部的商店。大概20个曼联球迷穿着红色的队服，一边观看球赛，一边为他们的球队加油。我停下脚步。那些跳着、叫着、大叫着的红点在我面前晃动，让我感受到自己体内一直被压抑的热情被点燃了。我属于他们。我向妈妈央求要买一件印有我名字的曼联队服。妈妈对我说如果我买了这件队服就不能再买其他东西了。我毫不犹豫地答应了，这件红色的队服就是我从澳门买回的唯一东西。

回到学校，我马上加入了足球俱乐部。在那里度过的每一天都让我感到自己很幸运能够有机会了解这项精彩的运动。传球，射门，得分，自由地跑遍全场的感觉太棒了，让我感觉自己像是个英雄。半年 之后，那个曾经的“科学男孩”竟然变成了学校女子足球队的助理教练。

我的表现证明了我的运动天分，在初中的最后一年，我被选中参加运动会。我报了两个项目，信心十足地要为我的班级赢得两枚金牌。我赢得了跳远比赛的第一名，我却在最后一跳的时候扭到了脚踝。班主任让我放弃第二天的4*100米接力比赛，然而在得知没有人可以替代我参赛的消息时，我决定依 然参加比赛。我是全队的最后一棒，当我从第三棒手中接过接力棒的时候，我们队落后其他队伍300米远。“追不上了”这几个字在我脑中一闪而过，但立刻被我击碎了。观看比赛的同学们用尽全身力气为我加油，“加油啊，YZ!超过他们!你能超过他们!加油!”

“对，我能超过他们。我不会让你们失望的。”我对自己说。尽管脚踝疼痛难忍，我依然用尽全力 超越我前面的每个对手。六个，五个，四个，三个，两个，还剩一个，全班同学跑向我把我举了起来!我胸前的银牌比那枚金牌更加璀璨。

红绿色交织的运动场给我带来了无比的欢乐。在这里度过的日子让我收获了力量，坚定的信念和责任感，它帮助我成长成一个真正的男人。

【佳文精评】

这是一篇读来感觉很“man”的文章。文章开始叙述了作者从一个“科学男孩”向一个运动男孩转变的机缘巧合。通过对热情的曼联球迷的细致描写，读者仿佛也感受到了体内潜藏的激情被点 燃。然而难能可贵的是，作者与运动的结缘并没有停留在激情层面。通过第二个参加运动会的实例，作者进一步告诉读者运动不仅让作者找到了人生的乐趣，也获得了

难得的成长。文章末段作者用三个词概括了这种成长--strength(力量)，determination(坚定的信念)，responsibility(责任感)，这也正是一个男孩成长为一个男人所应该具备的品格。苹果公司创始人史蒂夫•乔布斯曾经说过“当你向前看，你无法预见所有的点能否连成线;而当你向后看，你会发现也许所有的点已经 连成了线。”写文章实际上就是一个向后看的过程，将所有的点连成一条主线就会是一篇精彩的文章，一个精彩的成长故事。

第四篇：出国留学长篇文书翻译指导篇

出国留学长篇文书翻译指导篇：羽毛球

Common 长篇

1.Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.描述你的一次有意义的经历、成就、完成的任务或者面对的一次道德困境。

2.Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you.选择一个关于个人的、本土的、国家的或者国际的议题讨论，并说明这个问题对你的重要性。

3.Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence.描述一个对你产生重要影响的人。

4.Describe a character in fiction, a historical figure, or a creative work(as in art, music, science, etc.)that has had an influence on you, and explain that influence.选择一个小说人物、历史人物或者一件作品(艺术、音乐、科学等作品)，对它进行描述并且 说明它对你的重要影响以及原因。

5.Given your personal background, describe an experience that illustrates what you would bring to the diversity in a college community, or an encounter that demonstrated the importance of diversity to you.说明你的个人背景、经历对大学可能带来的影响，或者阐述这种多样性对你的重要性。写作难点：如何选题。

2、4题是议论文;2题容易偏题;

1、5题相对易写，但也要做到出彩、不落俗套。

写作要领： 反映一个中学生从不成熟到逐渐成熟的成长心路。

【精彩例文】

Ideas are extremely important, especially those that are creative, original and bold.After my experience in organizing a badminton tournament at school, however, I realized that turning an idea into reality is challenging but even more meaningful than the idea itself.An idea is not the end of a story;it should also include a lot of hard work to put the idea into practice.Badminton is one of my favorite sports that I，ve been playing since 8-years-old.However, after entering high school, I could hardly find time to play badminton due to the heavy academic load, not to mention the lack of a game court.Then in the second semester of the tenth grade, a new stadium was constructed at our school which got me excited with the idea of a badminton match on campus.I told people about my idea and we all dreamed about it.But six months passed and nothing happened.Finally, I couldn’ t wait anymore;my friends and I will make a badminton tournament ourselves.With the support of many students, I went to ask for permission from our principal.Rather than objecting to my ideas, he came up with a series of questions about financial support, qualified referees, and safety issues.These were really beyond my expectations that I had not planned for.Motivated by the desire for the games, I faced the challenge.With the guidance of my father, I came to understand that enthusiasm alone could not convince the principal to allow the games;I needed to come up with a plan.So, I searched the Internet and consulted teachers, and finally worked out a plan that I presented to the principal.This time I was fully prepared to answer any questions the principal shot at me.After a few rounds, I got my answer: YES.With the permission, my friends and I began to prepare the badminton games with every single detail: registering players, preparing the court, making the rules, training referees and so forth.Unfortunately, winning the principle ’ s favor was not the only obstacle.Since it was a school wide tournament, it was very time consuming.A few months before the games, some of my teammates dropped out because they could not balance their academic studies.So at the most crucial moment, I called together my fellow teammates and told them frankly that I could not follow through with the tournament without their support.I proposed that we should setup a study partnership to find time to study together as well as continue to prepare for the game to free our parents from their concerns.My teammates agreed, and we encouraged one another that we could do it.Finally, after so many obstacles, the tournament finally took place and over one hundred students from all four grades participated.This event taught me the skills needed to organize a large event in which every little step and detail counted.Having an imaginative idea is a valuable characteristic, but critical thinking and practical skills are also indispensable to success.Without the collective effort of my great team, however, my idea of the badminton tournament never would have come alive.Now, a badminton club is set up and is in preparation for next year’ s tournament.Perhaps I should pass on some tips to the new leader of the club.【羽毛球】

想法是非常重要的，特别是那些有创意的、全新的、大胆的想法。然而，当我在学校组织了一次羽毛球联赛之后，我意识到将想法变为现实的过程可能会遇到很多困难，而这也比想法本身更有意义。想法不是故事的结局，故事的结局应该是通过艰苦的努力将想法实现。羽毛球是我最喜欢的运动之一。从八岁开始，我就练习打羽毛球。然而，上了高中之后，我发现繁重的课业负担让我很难找到时间打羽毛球，而且学校里也缺少打羽毛球的场地。于是在10年级的第二学期，当我看到学校建成了一座新体育馆，我的脑海中涌现出了在学校举办一场羽毛球比赛的想法。我把 这个想法告诉了很多同学，我们都很期待。然而6个月过去了，什么进展也没有。

终于，我坐不住了。我和朋友们决定自己动手筹办一次羽毛球比赛。在很多同学的支持下，我向校长 提出了举办羽毛球比赛的想法，请求他的允许。他没有拒绝我，但是却提出了一连串的问题：经济支持，从哪里找到合格的裁判员以及安全问题等等。我从没想到校长会问我这些问题，我一点准备也没有。

想要举办羽毛球比赛的愿望让我决定接受挑战。在爸爸的指导下，我开始明白单凭热情是不能说服校长允许举行这次比赛的。我需要拿出一个方案来。所以，我在网上进行搜索，并且咨询了老师，终于 提出了一个方案。我把方案拿给校长看，这次我有了充分的准备迎接校长的每个问题。

经过了几个回合，我得到了校长的答案：同意!

得到了校长的允许，我和朋友开始着手准备每个细节：登记运动员，准备场地，制定规则，培训裁判员等等。不幸的是，获得校长的首肯并不是我们遇到的唯一问题。

因为这是一次全校性的比赛，准备起来非常耗费时间。比赛前的几个月，我的几个团队成员相继退出，因为他们没办法平衡繁重的学习负担和工作压力。在这个关键的时刻，我把所有的团队成员召集起 来，诚恳地告诉他们如果没有他们的帮助，我无法一个人举办这次

比赛。我提议我们建立一个固定的合作制度，一起学习，一起筹备比赛，这样让我的父母不再担心。我的队友们同意了，我们相互鼓励，坚信我们一定可以做到。

终于，克服那么多的困难后，联赛终于开始了，四个年级总共超过100名学生参加了这次比赛。这 次经历教会了我举办一场大型活动所需的技能，让我懂得每一步、每一个细节都需要被仔细考虑。有一个充满想象力的想法是很可贵的，但是批判性思维和实践能力也是成功必不可少的因素。如果没有团队合作，我举办羽毛球比赛的想法可能永远不会成为现实。现在，我们建立了一个羽毛球俱乐部，并且正 在筹备明年的比赛。或许我可以给俱乐部的下一任主席留下一些建议。

【佳文精评】

不以情动人而以理服人，读完这篇文章大概会有这样的感觉。想法和实践孰轻孰重一直是人们在探讨的问题，作者则结合自己的亲身经历给出他的答案——有想法固然可贵，但实践能力却是获得成功所不必不可少的。文章第一句话就点明了这一点，随后通过详述自己举办羽毛球比赛的细节 来证明这个观点。从只有一个模糊的概念而回答不上校长的任何一个问题到拿出细致的方案并且克服所有的困难，作者娓娓道来，将这个大家原本就很熟悉的道理讲得生动翔实，令人信服。无论是以情动人，还是以理服人，都能够成就一篇佳作。

第五篇：留学文书写作

留学文书在申请过程中的重要性

在考托、考g一族经历了少则数月，长则一两年的痛苦准备和考试的洗礼后，取得了toefl和gre（gmat）成绩，这也只是说明他（她）具备了申请国外大学研究生的资格，达到了申请的基本要求。可是在申请旺季，每所学校的教授面对的是成百上千符合基本申请条件的申请者，大家toefl、gre的成绩普遍都很高。你如何能够脱颖而出，得到洋教授的青睐呢？教授和您相隔万里，对你的印象、评价完全来自于你所提供的申请材料，所以申请文件所能提供的信息更加重要，几乎成为洋教授评判学生的最重要标准。

好的申请文件能够充分反映您的专业水平和人格魅力，并因此在一定程度上弥补语言考试成绩和其它方面的不足；差的申请文件轻则埋没自己的优秀素质，重则让人怀疑您亮丽的成绩背后是否有弄虚作假，从而导致您功亏一篑。

洋教授要不要给您录取和资助，最主要的要看您有没有在相应专业上的水平、才华、成就、潜力、抱负和追求。也经常要看您的人格魅力和力量。这些都需要您用申请文件去反映。他们要不要读完您的申请文件，要看您文件的内容是否感人、语言是否精当。

文书写作的主要内容

留学文书写作主要包括：自述信或学习计划（personalstatement,statementofpurpose,studyplan,etc.）、本科和mba所需的essay、推荐信（recommendationletter）、简历（resumeorcv）的写作。这部分文件是超越统计数字（gpa，tg成绩）之上，是展示申请者学习计划、职业目标、专业素质、综合素质和个性的材料，是留学申请的最核心的部分，是学校录取委员会做出录取决定的主要依据。同时，这部分也是中国学生所最不熟悉，最不擅长的。

留学、移民文书包装

自荐信(personalstatement,statementofpurpose)

推荐信(letterofrecommendation)

简历(resume)

mba短文(mbaessays)

签证文件写作服务

签证自述信(coverletterforvisaapplication)

拒签申诉信(appealletter)

学习计划(studyplan)

文书写作的服务流程

（1）签约、交初稿

申请者需首先与新起点前程公司签订《文书修改服务合同书》。可在同时或此后择日提交打印稿及软盘，也可以通过e-mail提交初稿。

注意：

???我们希望大家尽快提交初稿。我们是按交初稿的先后顺序来安排稿件的处理进程的，而非按照签约时间。

最好是整套文件。由于文件之间的互补性，整套文件有助于客户经理及写稿老师更全面地了解一个人。

（2）审稿

初稿首先交到客户经理手中，由他们进行第一道审查。我们的客户经理全部都是训练有素的，对留学程序和申请要求非常了解。他们一般都具有名校英语系本科或研究生以上的英文水平，对英语文章的质量具有高度的鉴赏能力。

（3）谈稿

客户经理在对您的初稿进行第一道审查后。如发现内容或思路有不足，他们会与您进行谈稿，谈稿的目的在于使客户更深刻的认识自己、认识自己所申请的专业，帮助您打开、调整思路，启发您发掘出自己的优势和独特点。

（4）补稿

谈稿后客户即可按照与客户经理达成的共识补充素材，充实内容。当客户提供的补稿再次交到客户经理的手中，他们会再进行审查，如客户经理认为您提供的补稿内容、素材已充分后，将材料转给专业改稿老师修改。客户经理根据客户的具体情况组织一个或多个老师进行精心修改。

（5）改稿

我们的专业改稿老师由学贯中西的中、外专家组成。他们运用自己的知识、写作技巧从结构、内容和语言多方面对你的文件进行修改，帮助你最充分地展示你的能力、水平和人格魅力。

改稿老师修改完毕后，稿子回到客户经理手中，由客户经理再次认真审查，以核实是否达到公司所规定的要求。如没有，会将稿件连同进一步修改的意见退回给老师，要求老师继续或重新修改，直到客户经理满意。同时负责质量控制的老师也将对改后稿进行抽查。

（6）取稿

当客户经理满意稿件的质量后，会立即通知客户来办公室领取稿件。客户取稿时将有20分钟阅读时间，如果不满意，可以拒绝接受，并获得75%的退款。客户也可以在接受稿件后，在一周之内一次性提出进一步的修改意见，我们保证一次性修改。