第一篇：最新高考满分作文精选(二)
最新高考满分作文精选(二)
[考场佳作]2009高考优秀作文『湖南卷』
踮起脚尖
人被躯壳的长短而左右，因羞愧或甘心于三尺之躯而自修囹圄，从某种意义上来说，是盲了自己的心。
人到达这样那样的高度，对低处多少有了鄙夷，然而更吸引眼球的在于仰望时的那方景致。生活的阶梯上，人各拥其位，这高度或成阻碍，或与期望值尚有一段距离。聪明的人啊，在暂无法登往高处时，学会了，踮起脚尖。
有弹性的不光是身体，还有心。又或许，我们能理解为，踮起脚尖不过是某类外化，真正的内核是我们的那颗渴望攀升的心。
我想起了登埃菲尔铁塔。它那么自然而然地平地而起。在塔下仰望塔尖，扶住帽子，抬起头，踮起脚。眼再抬一寸，脚再高一厘，望见的不过是塔身。眼睛到不了的地方，让心到达。搭乘塔内的货车，在尖顶与自己的心会合。方才的踮脚虽是徒劳，可心中所升腾的征服感最终引我站在这里。巴黎城慵懒地在塞纳河畔小憩，正午的城市在午睡，而我的心却在狂跃不止。我再次踮起脚尖，让猎猎的风灌满我的胸膺。
原来，人踮起脚，是要去望向更远的风景，去吸进一口常日里所缺少的高处的活泼。踮起脚，把希冀已久的梦揽入怀中，入目之景，春深夏浅之间，年轻的心在旷野中引吭高歌!澳网冠军小威倔强地说，叩开成功之门的是有力的网球而非网球裙。她自知没有库娃俏丽的脸蛋，但在她的人生征程中，哪怕前半程充斥着不堪入耳的嘲讽，她也从不低下她骄傲的头。这份骄傲是成熟的独白。“妈妈默许我趴在小木屋的窗边发一下午的呆”，她回忆着：“她知道我没有发呆，我是在眺望远方。”
李安自觉在台湾待得过久，他的创作灵感逐渐消退。没有人知道隐没的那些年他读了多少书，走过了多少城市，只看到他的身影伴随《断背山》与《色戒》浮出。被岁月打磨得愈发刚毅的面容，被时光铸就的更沉稳的步伐。他还依旧带着淡淡的笑容说，他不甘临摹，他只想往前走，走自己的路。
人借助于身体与世界连线，然而没有一个人愿意在心为形役的人生境遇中来回兜圈。踮起脚尖，撷一手高枝的果珍，让梦境延伸，与现实交汇!
【评点】文章前三段引论舒缓，不仅切合题意，且认识水平超出一般。本论部分以自己登埃菲尔塔经历、小威的独白、李安的“向前走”三例论证自我提升之意义，紧扣主题，前
后连贯，且暗含有“身一心一行”的层进意味。结论部分归纳准确，有力地呼应了前文。结构严谨，语言流畅，切合议论文文体要求。
奶奶的个子不是很高，近70岁的年纪压得她愈加矮小，可总有些东西在高处，这时，奶奶不得不踮起脚尖。
父母外出工作，小时候一直都是奶奶带着我，我也甘心地跟着奶奶，奶奶的慈祥与和蔼就像童话时的仙女奶奶一样。那时，家里有个大柜子，我知道，那柜子上层有许多零食，可当时不够高的我就是踮起脚尖也是望尘莫及。一次，我终于想到一个办法，找来一根长杆，踮起脚尖，使劲儿地把上面的东西往下拨，大概是太用劲儿，上面的东西哗哗商落，除了零食，还有许多书都一股脑儿地砸下来，我来不及防备，就打得哭了起来。奶奶闻声而来，看见满地都是七零八落的东西，明白了缘由，轻声地安慰我，将地上的零食放到我手里。第二年，奶奶拉着我走到一个小柜子面前，原来奶奶已把零食装进这里面，我便不用拿工具，甚至不用踮脚尖了。
不知不觉，我已经长得比奶奶高了许多，许多对我来说，很轻松的动作，奶奶却得踮起脚尖，艰难地完成。
一次数学课，总觉得有个人头在窗户外晃来晃去。教室的窗有些高，而且贴了一层膜，要想看到里面的情形，个子稍矮的都得踮起脚尖。看那身影有些熟悉，我请假出去看看。是奶奶，她往前倾着身子，使劲地踮起脚尖，努力地探着头往教室里看，可总也不够，她又踮直了脚尖。我一出来，她似没晃过神来，仍然保持着踮起的姿势，如同一位芭蕾演员，只是没着装，手里还提着送来的水果。我呆住了，没有说话，等回过神来，奶奶已站在身边，额头上布满了汗珠，几丝头发顺着汗水贴着，奶奶笑着。我从口袋里拿出纸巾递给奶奶，奶奶笑得更加灿烂了。等奶奶别过身去，我的眼泪流了下来，奶奶却突然转身了，看见了正在哭的我，赶忙跑过来，问我发生了什么，我连说着没事。
在奶奶的执拗下，我先进了教室，可总有一个人影仍在窗口晃来晃去，我知道，是奶奶，她还是不放心，我装着认真听讲，等过了十几分钟，人影离开，我趴在桌子上，泪又肆无忌惮地流出来了„„奶奶又多站了十几分钟，又踮起了脚尖十几分钟„„
时光流过，奶奶愈加矮小，需要踮起脚尖的时候也越来越多，可我长高了，长壮了，绝不要奶奶辛苦地踮起脚尖，我可以趴下来，奶奶踮起的脚尖不过是我身躯的高度。
【评点】文章由实到虚，两代人的“踮起脚尖”隐含一种生命承续的象征意义，使文章具有一定的历史感。主旨表现奶奶对我的深切关爱。切合题意，中心突出；特别是写奶奶踮起脚尖在教室窗外看我的镜头感情真挚，表现细腻，富有感染力。文章主体在描写两个画面，表达方式切换自然，语言大致流畅，符合记叙文文体要求。
发展等级可从“形象丰满”“文句有表现力”等方面计l0分。计分：内容24分+表达22分+发展l0分=56分。
第二篇：四川高考满分作文二【2011】[定稿]
2011年四川高考满分作文【二】：总有一种期待
月唱千年，折转芳菲知暮是。梦回落帐，舞尽笙歌罢人间。间不断，期待依然。
一题记
秋水阁里声声慢，一世沉香落锦弦。总有一种期待，天上人间。总有一种期待，刻尽了绝代的芳华。那是一片脂红胭白，翠绮罗裳遮不住春韵初绽，冗复屏风掩不住身子风流。却偏有这样的人儿，无奈葬花泪不语，直至暮合月升，黯然神伤。她在期待，不惜鲜血浸染了罗娟。庆幸的是，他没有负她，纵然榻上的俏佳人似玉如花。他们有共同的期待，正是这份期待让他愤然离去，却也让她相思成疾，魂断香消。世道的悲情剧，遗恨的大观园。这期待耗损了今生韶光，来世红颜。
总有一种期待，绘触了乱世的壮志豪情。那是一片硝烟弥漫，三分天下，各立为王。燎原的战火湮没了乱世的儿女情长，小乔倾城的姿颜难留他去意坚决。赤壁的熊熊烈火烧尽了荒芜，奔驰的战马踏过了断壁残垣。他期待，勃勃的野心在这片莽原上腾起，那是宿命的安排。豪情壮志自难当，把酒当歌不思量，直至他落马身亡。这期待，铸造了乱世的赤血男儿。
总有一种期待，落定了隔世的旷古英魂。渌水亭外婉转莺啼，啼不尽，如水的哀思。目畔畔秋若芷水，怎抵愁思难为北来难为东，本是性。情中人，无奈命运捉弄，紫禁城铜墙铁壁，寸步难行。但他没有舍弃自己，只为那至生的期待。江南多情女，一梦知红妆。他终于开始反抗，反抗这世事苍凉。然而，当绚丽的烟花飘飞了灰烬，自由的天空停止了翻飞的心跳，一场烟梦就此终结。这期待，演绎了一场亘古的离殇。
总有一种期待，似那一片无垠的草原，在我的心里延伸着。春去秋来，绿草和花海永远只在瞬间。此时此刻，已是金秋季节，草色开始枯黄，白霜已经迷茫，鸿雁又在南飞。皑皑白雪已经在远方的山巅闪现。不过，这不要紧，我的期待并不在于绿色的草叶之上，也不在于摇曳的露珠之间，唯有那深深扎根大地而又默默无闻的草根，才是草原上真正可以超越冬天的期待。多少年来，多少人踢踢踏踏骑着马儿走过草原，奔向世外桃园，寒冬来了，一切都成了过眼烟云，唯有大地深处手握着手，心连着心的草根，才是我心中真正的“期待”。
总有一种期待，盛开着千古余香。
范文二：
总有一种期待
总有一种期待，属于你我。芸芸众生，我们都有梦。我们因梦而生，为梦奋斗，含梦而笑。——题记
总有一种期待，属于你我。旖旎的大干世界接受了无知的我们，那是生命最初的开始。不知从哪一天起，我们学会了思考，学会了表达自己的情感，学会了仰望无边无垠的天空。我们在那时埋下了一粒希望的种子，静静期盼，等待着它破土而出的那一刻，光芒四射，刺痛了周围所有人的眼睛。年少轻狂的一颗颗有力跳动着的心，满是对未来的期待。
总有一种期待，属于你我。阳光不会永远眷顾我们，有时也会变幻莫测，忽而一阵倾盆大雨，摧残着我们心中跳跃的火苗般的期待。有时似乎在那一瞬火苗将要夭折，但它忽明忽暗，却从未被泯灭。那种期待已根植在我们身体里，不是一些暴风雨就可以轻易把它连根拔起。
总有一种期待，属于你我。我们期待梦想绽放的那一天，将是幸福的彼岸。累了，不敢休息；怕了，不愿退缩；败了，不想放弃。这一切，源于那种期待，源于那种执著，源于那种不可言表的对生命升华的热情和追求。而这一切，又都是来自于最初的梦想和最终的期待。
总有一种期待，属于你我。真正到了我们心中一直期待的那一天时，却有一种巨大而空洞的失落感在心底油然而生。又不由得反问自己，我一直期待的，真的是这个么？是期待成为万众瞩目的焦点，还是享受物欲横流的生活？似乎是，又都不是。
在时间的磨砺下，我们终会明白，我们期待的原来并不是最终的结果，所以在最后一刻会感受到失魂落魄。
我们的期待，全部幻化成这个痛苦，快乐而有意义的过程。能让我们的生命得到升华的，唯有梦，和梦想绽放的过程。
总有一种期待，属于你我。这是一种无比强烈的情感精华，由它发散出来的，是梦想的实现，伴随而来的是我们的蜕变。
总有一种期待，属于你我。它是派头，是动力，是一座山顶，站在上面，我们的未来一览无余，把它踩在脚下，有如此厚重，踏实的安全感。
总有一种期待，使我们拥有了它，就仿佛拥有了全世界。
范文三：
总有一种期待
只要春天还在
我就不会悲哀
纵使黑夜吞噬了一切 太阳还可以重新回来
一汪国真《只要明天还在》
万物期待阳光，禾苗期待雨露，我们可有属于自己的期待？
当人声喧嚣的街头，一位年迈的老人倒在马路；当一位幼小孩童在风雨中流浪，我们是否有所期待？当一双渴望的眼睛天真地面对我们，当满是憔悴的脸肃立在寒风里，我们真的是否有所期待？
是的，我们期待社会能多一点爱心，人间能多一点温暖，人与人不再互相仇视，不独让“西单女孩”，“旭日阳刚”能够活在春天里，让所有的人都能乐开怀。
是的，我们期待，警察用自己的生命换来的不再是冷漠，善良不再为法律所嘲讽，社会一片晴朗，同在„片蓝天下和谐地享受生活的甜蜜。
是的，我们期待正义能够得以伸张，高尚能够得到弘扬。不论“我爸是李刚”，还是他叔是“金国友”，只要触犯了法律，都一样能受到严惩，司法不能像娟妇一样被人随意蹂躏和糟蹋，不能沦落到任人摆布，毫无尊严的地步。“天价打捞”沦落的道德，药家鑫抛却的人性冷漠卑劣都如烟云般飘散，使邪恶难以在中华大地立足。
我们期待，楼不再歪，奶粉不再毒，血铅、毒大米、毒豆芽不再成为人们的困惑。让道德的清溪尽洗俗世的铅华，让善良触动人的泪腺。他人失意时可以轻轻拍拍他的肩膀，静静聆听满肚苦水人的倾诉，他人失误时不嘲笑自吹而是开解，他人身体欠佳或重病，送去几句点燃希望的话或一首振奋的音乐„„我们期待，人间能少一些悲哀，世界多一片阳光。
我们期待，“天价酒”、“天价烟”不再成为常项，社会能多一点和谐，人与人多一份理解。
我们期待天空能多一抹瓦蓝，大地能多一层绿意。地方发展不是一味重视经济的增长，而忘却了环境的保护。治理环境污染，不能只挂在嘴上，让大山披上绿装，让江河扬起清波。
我们期待能拥有更多的空间，更多的自由，“虎妈”不要成为时尚„„
总有那么多的期待，期待如花，让我们芬芳满怀，幸福满怀„„
总有那么多的期待，期待如霞，给我们以希望，给我们以精彩„„
期待是如此的执著，期待是这样的急切，期待让我们大步奔向未来„„
—北大资源研修学院
第三篇：【2013高考英语推荐】高考英语满分(二)
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（二）F.议论文
(1)最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。
60%的同学认为:
1.不应该收门票公园是公众休闲的地方
3.如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象
40%的同学认为: 1.应收门票，但票价不要太高
2.支付园林工人工资 3.购新花木
注意：1.信的开头已为你写好。
2.词数：100左右。3.参考词汇：门票---entrance fee
Dear editor,I‟m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people‟s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work.If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls.In the end a city will take on a bad look.40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive.The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park.Do we share the sameopinion, dear editor?
Yours truly,Li Hua
Dear editor,I‟m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public.They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure.They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be charged.The city will not look so beautiful as it should have.Forty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn‟t be out of control.Entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and trees.For myself, I‟d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks?
Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about the discussion on whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions vary from person to person on this issue.50% of the students disagree with the idea of entrance fees.In their opinion, parks are public places where all the people can have a rest and enjoy themselves.So if an entrance fee is charged, some people will surely be kept away from the park.Besides, in order to charge entrance fees, gates and walls must be built.They think that it will do harm to the appearance of a city.40% of the students agree with the idea of entrance fees, because the gardeners need to be paid and new plants and flowers need to be bought.But fees should be charged reasonably.Yours truly,XXX
Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about the discussion on whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions vary from person to person on this issue.60% of the students oppose the idea of entrance fees.They believe
everyone can go to parks for rest and fun because parks are public places.But an entrance fee may keep some people away from the park.Besides, in order to charge entrance fees, it is necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.40% of the students approve of the idea of entrance fees, because money is needed to pay the gardeners and to buy new plants and flowers.But fees should be charged reasonably.Yours truly,(2)
Dear Headmaster,As the minister of students' life in the Student Union, I am writing to you to reflect something about our canteen.To our satisfaction, the canteen supplies us with various kinds of food.This gives us many choices.At the same time the price for the food is low and the food is tasty.And the surroundings for having a meal have been improved.The canteen has become clean.And when we are eating, we can watch TV.But something unsatisfactory exists, too.For example, the quantity of a helping is less than it should be.This is unfair.And in the canteen, the seats are not enough.Some students have to stand while eating.We hope that the school will consider adding more seats for us.Finally we hope that they can improve the quality of the food and their service.We will be very happy if our advice is taken.Yours respectfully,(3)On Money
Money is indeed important, but money cannot buy everything.A miser may think that “money talks,” but if you only give your attention to making money, you may lose many things, such as health, friendship and love.I don't think we should regard money as everything.Money is just a tool that can help us solve problems or enable us to live a comfortable life.What we should do is to use it appropriately and not become misers.This way, all of us can lead a happier lives.(4)假设今天你上网,点击进入“今日话题”网站.看到一则有关禁止学生在校园内使用手机的报道.网友们对此各抒己见.作为一名高中生,你对此颇感兴趣,就在该栏目下发帖,客观反映周围同学们对此的不同看法.并简单谈谈你的看法.(100字左右)
以下为同学们的看法:
赞同: 便于联系, 有安全感, 功能(function)多样
不赞同: 便于联系非必需，因有IC卡电话, 玩游戏，发短信(e--massage), 耗时费钱
你的观点
Just now, I entered the website—“Topic for Today”.I feel interested in the report on banning the use of the cell-phone on campus in middle schools.One possible version:
Just now, I entered the website--“Topic for Today”.I feel interested in the report on banning the use of cell-phones on campus in middle schools.In fact, more students now come to school with cell-phones.My schoolmates have different opinions.Some think it is convenient to get in touch with others with the cell-phone, which also makes you feel safe especially in time of trouble.Besides, it is nice to enjoy various functions of different cell-phones.Others think differently.First, the cellphone in not a must in school, as there are some IC phones there, making it easy to call others.Second, many often play e-games and send e-massages with their cell-phones, even in class, which will surely have bad effects on their study.Worse is to come, it will result in a great waste of time and money.In my opinion, the cell-phone is a useful tool in our daily life.But it doesn't mean we can use freely in school.(5)三班的学生进行了一场有关大学生是否应该打工的讨论。请你根据下面表中的提示
写一篇英语短文，介绍讨论的情况。
一些同学认为
另一些同学认为
打工会影响大学生的学习;改变正确的人生观;甚至会使他们崇拜金钱
打工可以减轻父母的负担;同时使大学生获得社会经验;发展个人能力;丰富学习生活
注意：1.字数：100左右;2.不必逐条翻译，可进行合理发挥。
3.参考词汇：打工lake a part-time job 人生观life view 负担load
The students of Class 3 had a discussion about whether college students should take part-time jobs.Some students think it is advantage for college students to take part-time jobs.Because, by doing part-time jobs, they can earn money on their own so that they don‟t need to ask their parents for money, and in this way, they reduce their parents‟ load.Besides, taking part-time jobs can help them gain social experience, develop personal abilities and make their life enjoyable.One the other hand, some students have a disagreement.In their opinion, the students‟ main task is to study, while taking part-time jobs has a bad effect on their study.And also, it may make college students change their life views and they may think too much of money.(6)面对中学生“出国热”，社会对此有不同的看法。请你以Studying Abroad为题，根据以下提供的信息，谈谈自己的看法。
Advantages:
1.良好的语言环境，更利于语言学习。
2.拓宽视野，学习国外先进的科学技术。
3.传播各民族间的不同文化。
Disadvantages: 1.年纪小，缺乏生活经验，自理能力差。
2.情感孤独，思乡。3.生活学习费用高。
注意：1)第一句已为你写好，不计入总词数。2)词数100 左右。
3)参考词汇：媒介，中间人 mediator
Studying Abroad
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.Tens of thousands of Chinese students have gone to foreign
countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.There are many advantages in attending schools abroad.First, students who have studied abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures.Second, we can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries.Third, we can learn foreign languages more quickly.However, there are some disadvantages.Most of the students are too young to live by themselves without any living
experience.Besides, being far away from their home country, they may feel lonely and homesick.Of course the costs are much.(7)On net bars
With the development of the Internet, the net bar plays an important role in people's life.More and more people, especially students, like to go to net bars.They are absorbed in playing video games, making bad friends and having a chat with “Meimei” on the net in the bar.Some students often go on playing late into the night in the net bar.As a result, not only does it do harm to their health but also produces a bad effect on their studies.Now a lot of net bars have been shut down in Beijing.But some students go by bus to the net bars at suburbs to play.Fortunately, more and more parents and schools have realized it.Recently, more than six thousand students ensured that they would be far away from net bars in Jinzhou city, Liaoning Province.It is quite necessary for the students to get rid of the bad habit.Recently, more and more students would like to go to net bars, especially students.It has become quite common to go there.They waste too much precious time on playing video games in the net bar.As a result, not only does it do harm to their health but also produces a bad effect on their studies.Their health becomes worse and worse and their studies are neglected.Now a lot of net bars have been shut down in Beijing.But some students go to the net bars at suburbs to play.Fortunately, more and more parents and schools have realized it.Recently, more than six thousand students ensured that they would be far away from net bars in Jinzhou city, Liaoning Province.Most students are making full use of their time and devoting themselves to their studies.It is a good thing.F.看图作文：
(1)假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。
请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：1.词数：100左右：
2.参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).I‟m very happy to receive your letter, and I‟m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here.I have already found a fiat for you.It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School.The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen.There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small flat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I‟ll try my best to meet your needs.If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以„which，‟引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。
Dear Bob,Welcome to China!You wrote to me to find a place for you.I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School.It is on the third floor and there‟re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom.There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom.The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Also from this house you can get to your school easily.Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building.It is only one stop.At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I‟U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.Best wishes!
Yours,Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。
Dear Bob,How are you these days?
I‟m so glad to know that you‟ll come to our city to learn Chinese.You asked me to find a place for you.Now I‟ve found one which I think is pretty good.The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop.It‟s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom.Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable.By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month.I hope you‟ll like it.If not, I‟ll try to find another place for you.Yours,Li Hua
满分理由
本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。
(2)请看下面的这幅漫画，再联想实际生活，写一篇短文，词数120左右。题目：Don‟t Waste Water
Don't Waste Water
A man is washing his clothes ,regardless of the notice above “Save the Water Please.”
As we see ,water is the source of life.But there is very limited available water resources in our world.So we shouldn't waste it.Of course, we have to use it to drink, cook, wash, clean and etc.But we must remember not to use it extravagantly.If we didn't stop such
wasteful habits, we would cut off the development of the world and the human life.G:其他：
(1)Companionship of Books
A man may usually be known by the books he reads as well as by the company he keeps: for there is a companionship of books as well as of men;and one should always live in the best company, whether it be of books or of men.A good book may be among the best of friends.It is the same today that it always was, and it will never change.It is the most patient and cheerful of companions.It does not turn its back upon us in times of trouble or distress.It always receives us with the same kindness, amusing and instructing us in youth, and comforting us in age.Books possess an extract having the fundamental properties of immortality.They are by far the most lasting products of human effort.Temples and statues decay, but books survive.Time is of no account with great thoughts, which are as fresh today as when they first passed through their author's minds ages ago.The only effect of time has been to sift out the bad products, for nothing in literature can long survive but what is really good.Books introduce us into the best society: they bring us into the presence of the greatest minds that have ever lived.We hear what they said and did.we see them as if they were really alive;we sympathize with them, enjoy with them, hurt with them;their experience becomes ours, and we feel as if we were, in a measure, actors with them in the scenes which they describe.The great and good do not die even in this world.Embalmed in books, their spirits walk abroad.The book is a living voice.It is an intellect to which one still listens.Hence we ever remain under the influence of the great men of old.The great intellects of the world are as much alive now as they were ages ago.(2)How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays more and more people are concerned about their health.But how to keep healthy? Different people may give different answers to this question.In my opinion, it is essential to do the following.First, it is absolutely necessary to take some exercise every day.Research shows that getting plenty of exercise make the heart beat faster and the lungs work harder.This strengthens the heart, reduces the chance of heart attack, and helps lower blood pressure.That's why more and more people are becoming active in various kinds of sports and exercises.Every morning many people get up early and take much exercise.Some practice shadowboxing and swordplay while others run, jog, walk or dance to music.In the afternoon, there are also many people keen on sports.Some play basketball or volleyball or table tennis, others go in for gymnastics or track events.Through sports and exercise, people become healthier and stronger.Medical researchers have proved that what people eat affects their health.They advise people to eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat such as beef and pork because meat contains more fat than poultry and fish.Fat can build up in the arteries, block the flow of blood, and cause a heart attack or stroke.Getting rid of bad habits like smoking and drinking alcohol is also an important way to keep healthy.Smoking and drinking alcohol injure one's health a great deal, and therefore should be given up.Unfortunately few people follow this advice.If people follow these three ways of keeping fit, they greatly improve their health.(3)Children and Television
Television has been changing the way people live for thirty years.It influences nearly every aspect of modern life.how people use leisure time, how news is reported, how information is learned, and how people think and feel.Children are particularly susceptible to the effects of television because their minds are growing, developing, and learning much faster than those of adults.Whereas television could be used as an educational tool for children, more often simple entertaining cartoons with little or no educational value are shown.Social scientists, teachers, and parents are troubled by the kinds of television programs children choose to watch.These groups of people are concerned about the media's impact on young.children.They are worried about the effects of televised violence on society as well as commercials for sugarcoated food.Most importantly, however, they feel television is one factor that causes declining math and reading scores among schoolchildren.Because of the excessive time spent in watching TV, children are spending less time readingand thinking independently.Experts are concerned about the view of the world that youngsters are learning from television.Parents, schools, and churches have traditionally been the social models and teachers for children.However, because television influences children's attitudes and
behavior, its role in society is becoming increasingly more powerful--it is much more than a simple recreational activity.Exposure to excessive violence is another influence of television.According to several studies, televised violence may cause children to become more aggressive.Also, because so much violence is seen by children on television, they become more used to it as the only solution to difficult situations.Children who watch a great deal of violence on television may become apathetic toward actual aggression.One study has shown that, compared to a control group, fifth-graders who watched an aggressive television broadcast were slower to ask for adult help when a fight broke out among younger children.
第四篇：湖北省高考满分作文(二)
湖北省高考满分作文大全(二)
湖北高考满分作文：隔着代沟我望见了您
已经不记得上一次好好地看您是什么时候了，父亲。
我只记得那时的您，头发乌黑，皮肤泛着古铜的光。青年时期的下乡生活，让您有了健康的体魄，也让您在这纷繁的社会中变得寡言少语。
自我上高中以来，您就很少管过我。有人说′儿随母，女随父′。在我的生活中，更多的是妈妈的教育和关怀。我几乎每天都要和她谈笑，却很少能跟您讲上一句话。妈妈总是关心我这，关心我那，而在我眼中，您总是坐在您自己的角落里，研究着您自己的股票。我总觉得您根本不关心我，我总觉得您是家中的一个外人。
随着感情的疏远，我发现我渐渐地不认得您了。代沟，这可真是个神奇的东西。
高考离我越来越近，可您却离我越来越远。虽然您也开始时不时地说些什么，您也开始每天按时往我嘴里塞各种各样的补品。可对我来讲，那些话远不如妈妈讲得动听。而塞药时我甚至感觉，您是一个′医生′，而不是一个父亲。感情的疏远，似乎真的隔断了认知。
考前的那几天学校放假，您让我到您的学校复习。您带着我去了您的学校，让我在办公室等着，自己去清一间教室出来。我一人待在办公室里无聊，就走下楼去，走到那间教室门口。教室里您忙碌的身影晃动着。我突然意识到我很久没有好好看看您了。
我不声不响地走进去。您还在忙着。光线并不明亮，我却看到了您头上几点晃眼的光。我头一次注意到您有白头发了。您费力地搬着桌子，额头上已经闪着莹莹的光。这就是我的父亲啊，曾几何时家里重活一人包的父亲，竟也变得这样虚弱！您还是老了啊！
那一刻，我突然感觉一股冲击从心底喷薄而出，震动着我的全身。我觉得那是源自割不断的亲情，那是心底的回音。突然找回了被父爱包围的感觉，这父爱不像从前那样广博而无微不至，但它却更深沉，更能激起我内心的共鸣。我觉得我重新认识了您。
也许您还没有感觉到我的觉醒，也许在您眼中我还是那个对您冷若冰霜不屑一顾的小男孩。可您一定知道，只要亲情不断，血脉相连，我一定会认识到父爱的伟大。感情也许会疏远，可无论这代沟有多宽，我终究会望见您的！
【满分作文点评】这篇文章最大的特点是紧扣了我，用叙事方式写了我和父亲之间的交流，而非很多考生写的议论文。这种交流主要是心理交流，显得亲切自然，并且这种情感也易被阅卷老师接受。
文章扣题准确，它抓住了当代学生和家长之间存在代沟这一现象。代沟是种情感因素，感情的亲疏，也就是代沟的深浅，它成为我认识父亲的障碍。行文最后，通过父亲帮我清理教室，拉近了作者和父亲之间的距离，让人看后感动。
此外，这篇文章的题目写得不错，隔着代沟表示的是情感；我望见了您代表的是认知。不过，它虽是模仿朱自清的《背影》，但是写得较浅，无深层次的思考。
湖北高考满分作文：莫把情云遮慧眼
人生活在世上，是在无数的感情里度过。有人说一个人的生命是从笑声中开始又在哭声中结束，这一笑一哭，莫不饱含着浓浓的人情，浸透了感情的一生，使生命有了支柱、目标、希望，使生命真正饱满、充实，使人性有了耀眼的光华。
人们重感情，人类也许永远也无法理解在一头饥饿的雄狮面前，它的孩子与猎物没有区别的那种无情兽性。然而深深浅浅的感情织成的云却又常常成为一种遮蔽，让人们原本智慧的眼眸无法看到青天。
司马迁说，人情莫不念父母、顾妻子，人在很多时候都会自然而然地因情感的砝码将公正的天平偏向自己更在意更关心的人，就像俗话所说的胳膊肘哪能朝外拐。于是古代有了智子疑邻的寓言而今人也仍旧在走着这条老路，甚至走得很偏很远。一个年轻的女职员在她本该拥有幸福家庭，拥有灿烂前途之时却贪污公款，被投入监狱，当人们问她为什么要做这种傻事时，她的回答只有三个字：为了爱。一位母亲，因年幼的儿子身患绝症无药可治，竟抱着儿子踏上了黄泉路。一个老实的农民，却也知道讲哥们儿义气，将小时候同学偷盗来的赃款藏在了自己的被褥下稀里胡涂地便成了窝藏犯&&人们所犯的错误小到考试时帮助作弊，大到杀人放火，有的只是一时的情不自禁，美好的情感却真成了道家所说的情劫。
人们中也有很多人认识到这一点，于是情似乎又变得可恶了。杀熟在很多不同的地方，不同的领域冒出头来。一样的顾客，陌生人就可以得到全面周到的服务，而熟人却被晾到了一边儿；有次品卖不出去，就联系一个熟单位做职工福利。反正是亲不见怪，抑或是熟人自然能够体谅，熟悉的人碍着面子不好说，只管让他们自咽苦水。感情又一次左右了人的态度甚至还成为了一种利用的工具。
我们景仰包公，不只是因为他不畏强权，更因为他大义灭亲，铡了自己的亲侄儿。
而事实上，每个人在感情占了上风的时候只要能再有一刻的冷静，就能摆脱情感的纠葛，不论是偏向亲近的人还是故意杀熟，都不再会成为人心中对错的评判。
人是有感情的，但更是有理智的。当我们注视感情时也切记：莫把情云遮慧眼。
【满分作文点评】这篇文章最大的特点是例子运用得匠心独特，紧扣了题目：莫把情云遮慧眼。开头形式较好，从感情入手，说明感情在人的一生中非常重要。
第三自然段所举事例和作文所给的《智子疑邻》材料主旨一致：感情的亲疏影响了对事物的正确认识。随后，作者深层次地谈起现代社会的一个怪现象：杀熟，也就是人的感情被利益所驱使，成为一种被利用的工具。这个例子跳出了常规，成为整篇文章的亮点。
第五篇：2011年北京高考满分作文(二)
2011年北京高考满分作文大全(二)
高考满分作文：制约与发展
一道黑色的铁幕在柏林缓缓落下，世界将面临新的瓜分，但我预言，二十年内世界将保持和平丘吉尔
众所周知，这是丘吉尔著名的铁幕演说，从那时起，美国和苏联对立长达四十余年，两个超级大国互不相让,争霸全球.但与此同时,我们的地球已远离大面积的战乱六十多年了，丘吉尔的预言现在看来太过保守了。两强近半个世纪的冷战换来了世界的相对和平与飞速发展，不得不说，是两强的相互制约，为世界的长期发展提供了条件。
不过看来，若是一家独大又会怎么样呢?九十年代的美国给了我们答案。当时苏联解体，两强格局不复存在，美国为自身利益在全球不断挑起事端。海湾战争，出兵南联盟，东南亚驻军&&世界在不停的流血，因为一只孤独求败的霸王龙无人可挡，甚至无人敢制约其锋芒。科威特人谈美色变，经济被摧残的窘境危害至今，他们的鲜血让我们发现这个世界多么需要制约与平衡。
当历史的脚步迈入二十一世纪，欧盟，中国等地区迅猛发展，世界多极化格局日益增强，我们又一次享受到了全球的稳定与和平，各地区的交流与发展也重获生机。不得不说，这是各强国间的互相制约带来的发展机遇。
可见，任何事物中某一个体过于强大时，事物的发展必然减慢。而当事物中几个个体相互制约时，他们将尽力竞争，同时也有合作，进而促进事物整体的发展。
在各个领域中，每个个体都谋求孤独求败的至尊地位，殊不知这样的格局并不利于整个领域的发展。
当拿波伦与反法同盟互相厮杀时，难奈对手时，欧洲民族国家正飞速形成，欧洲正向着近代文明飞奔，然而当他横扫欧洲时，欧洲大陆却尽是鲜血与啼哭;当成吉思汗与南宋相对时，两方安抚百姓，招揽民心，中华大地欣欣向荣，然而当忽必烈带着铁蹄统一中国时，却只剩人分四等的荒谬与汉人无以为家的凄凉;李自成起兵西北时万民欢腾，夹道欢迎，待到杀入北京功成名就时却得八十天梦辞京城的结局，众人皆说起残暴，却忘记了明朝廷与其相互制约的作用。
相互制约时，各图其利，一心向上，个体的发展共同促进整体发展。一旦大包大揽，必将贻害整体，停滞不前。
中国队再一次折冠而归，我却难言高兴。备受国人喜爱的乒乓球运动，正向着一家独大，技术退步的深渊滑落&&
我的生命不会太长了，我是多么怀念我的对手，怀念那个属于我们的欧洲。拿破仑
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北京高考满分作文：让或不让
当孔融让梨的故事早已成为千古美谈，当六尺微巷已为众人所称颂。赞扬，面对那一枚枚闪烁着金光的世乒赛金牌，我不禁问道，我们是否应该让出他们，我们到底该让出什么?
诚然，当乒赛的现场奏响一次次国歌，国人是那么自豪，骄傲，然而面对所谓垄断的质疑层出不穷，我们也会焦虑，反思，那么，我们又是否该让?
在我看来，我们可以让出技术，而不是让出奖牌，我们可以让出科学的训练方法，却绝不可以故意削弱自己的实力，以求他国获得金牌，粉饰出世界经济水平的一片繁荣多元的假象。
时光匆匆而逝，一百年前的中国刚刚放生了剧变，一次惊天的变革刚刚开始。一百年来，我们感受到了中国生机勃勃的改变，我们要自豪的说，这些改变是靠中国人的手创造出来的，我们何时要求过英美国家让出一片天地呢?
授人之鱼，不如授人之渔。当我们先进的乒乓球训练方法达到世界领先水平时，我们有理由与他国做技术交流，让出技术。而当我们的水稻种植技术，因袁隆平的成果而提高时，我们也主动提出让他为世界水稻种植培养人才。只有这样，才能解决粮食问题，而不只是一味的让出粮食，救济饥饿人口。
孔融让梨，六尺微巷，让出的是一种传统美德，让出的，是一种人性的美好。而让奖牌却非如此，让粮食让钱，让一切一切的物质，仅仅只能救一时之需，甚至有时违背了基本的道德准则。只有当先进的技术为世人所共享时。我们才真的可以看到高水平的比赛，我们才真的可以看到这世上再无饥饿啼哭的孩子，我们才真的可以看到那人们的笑脸绽放在世界的每一个角落。
你让或不让世界都会因此而改变;你让或不让，没有人会强迫。
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