大同托福英语辅导班：如何写一篇高分托福作文

第一篇：大同托福英语辅导班：如何写一篇高分托福作文

大同托福英语辅导班：如何写一篇高分托福作文

托福写作考试是对大家英语综合运用能力的考察，想要写一篇让考官眼前一亮的文章需要同学们在平时做大量的准备工作。很多参加过托福考试的同学都抱怨说，明明自己感觉文章写得非常不错，但是最终的分数却很低，这是为什么呢?如何写一篇高分托福作文呢？下面就由译林培森大同托福英语辅导班为大家支几招吧。

第一，用词一定要多样化。

通过对历年考生托福作文的分析总结，我们发现低分作文都有同样一个问题，那就是用词单一，一篇文章当中反复出现同样的词汇，这会给阅卷老师留下很糟糕的印象。大同托福英语辅导班的老师建议同学们，平时一定要多积累，多总结，丰富扩大自己的词汇量，要学会用不同的词语来表达同一个意思，这样会让阅卷老师觉得你英语基础很扎实，词汇掌握量很丰富，作文也就容易得高分。

第二，文章主题要明确，要有充分的材料来支持自己的观点。

很多同学在拿到文章题目的时候，做了简单思考之后就立即动笔，结果是想起一句写一句，使整篇文章显得东拼西凑、毫无条理。大同托福英语辅导班提醒同学们，在正式动笔之前一定要列好提纲，确定文章主题，然后在写的时候将主题突出。然后还要有充足的资料来论证文章主题，不然会让整篇文章显得很空洞，文章主题也会站不住脚。

第三，要注意细节问题，不要在细微地方失分。

在文章完成之后，大家还要注重细节问题，比如词汇拼写是否正确，人称是否符合文章，时态是否正确等。有些同学为了让自己的文章出彩，会使用一些较为复杂的句子，这样的句子由于结构复杂所以容易出错，大家一定要注意。除此之外，大同托福英语辅导班提醒同学们，在写完文章之后一定要看一下字数是否符合题目要求，千万不要因为这些细微的问题被扣分，那可就太可惜了。

在托福考试当中，写作其实是很容易拿分的部分，大同托福英语辅导班的老师希望同学们在平时的复习过程中多练习，多自己动手写，多总结，为自己制定严格的复习计划。我们从不打无准备之仗，只要准备工作做到位了，大家就一定可以写出一篇高分英语作文。

第二篇：托福高分感言

TOEFL二战感想

自我介绍：

我叫，在2015年7月6日至7月12日期间，参加了杭州新航道学校的托福写作口语强化班，学习期间，很感谢杭州新航道学校老师给我提供了许多学习上的技巧和如何学习英语的能力，经过6天的在校学习，我于7月16日参加了托福考试，取得了TOEFL IBT总分105、阅读30，听力27，口语20，写作28的好成绩，其中口语提高两分，写作提高一分。下面，我来和大家分享一下我在托福中取得高分的心得体会。

一、上课感受

我曾于去年三月份参加过托福考试，但是时隔一年有余，对考试感觉十分生疏。而且在那次考试中，我的口语仅仅只有18分，成为了拉分的大项，况且许多学校有小分的要求，我自己感觉不是很满意，于是决定在考试前参加新航道的集中培训。在培训中，写作老师循循善诱，帮助我迅速回忆起写作的套路。写作老师有一套行之有效的方法，从题型入手，让我们逐步了解托福写作并不是那么难，极大地增强了我的信心，而且之前我一直在语言运用上面感觉有瓶颈，提升不上去，通过学习老师所写的例文，也掌握了许多地道的固定搭配，使我获益匪浅。并且之前我的综合写作并不是很好，总是感觉听到了一大堆东西却抓不住重点，写作老师帮我们理清了听力材料的思路，并着重强调得分点，使我在考试中迅速在十分钟之内就完成了综合写作，并赢得了宝贵的检查时间。

口语模块向来是我的短板，大三上半学期我曾经在德国交流过半年，所以我与人沟通的能力是具备的，但缺乏在极短的时间内迅速总结分析自己想法并用正确语句表达出来的能力。口语老师鼓励我们多多表达，并跳出模板的局限，将有限的时间全部用来表述内容极大的激发了我，虽然最后只提高了两分，但我仍感到获益匪浅。

另外，我感到托福的出题越来越灵活，特别是一二题，如这次考试我就遇到了对整形手术有什么看法的题，所以在平常生活中多锻炼自己在短时间内思考不同问题的能力十分重要，可以多与同学，家长交流。学校的英语角也是一个锻炼口语的好去处，并且要随时注意总结发现别人有没有用什么好词好句等好的表达方式。

阅读和听力是我的强项，本次阅读也比较简单。但是听力出现了一些新的问题，主要是题目与问题的同义替换较多，可能要注意一下。

二、寄语

希望大家勇于挑战自己，特别是敢说敢于表达是最关键的，记住，以后的竞争者会来自全球，不表达别人永远不会知道我们的优秀。珍惜每一次小的进步，因为那都是来之不易的。祝杭州新航道学校越办越好！就是不要再排连着五小时的课了。

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第三篇：最新托福英语作文

最新托福英语作文模板

TOEFL班的托福作文模板，100句常用句型按照托福作文结构组合而成。

作文文套一A or B

Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________.就理由进行解释_____________________.For instance,____________________

Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________.就理由进行解释___________________For example,____________________

The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because_____________________________

Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the

disadvantages are more obvious.Such as________________.In a word, ________________________________________________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.作文文套二A or B

将原题复述 ___________________________________________When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point.Among countless factors which influence-A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity fo _________is that___________________ The second reason can be seen by every person that________.In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that_________.There are some disadvantages in____________________另一种观点的缺点

__________.In a word, _____________重复观点句并缩写理由__________________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that___________.作文文套三单一命题式

The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style.In my point view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books.So it is sagacious to ____________.Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity for__________is that____________.Another reason can be seen by every person is that________________.Futhermore,______________.In short,_________________复述前文中的理由______________.作文文套四agree or disagree

Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a

_____________________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them.There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact

that______________解释本段中心___________.Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe

that______________.What is more, some students are interested in____________.In a word, ________________.作文文套五A or B

Some people prefer to A.others believe B.When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that______________, but others, in contrast , deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point.There are numerous reasons why___________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, is

that_____________________.Take___________as example, ______________.There is another factor that deserves some words here.Such as

________________________.Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider

that______________.(exmaples:___________).From the above you might got idea that I agree______________.(repeat the above three reason____________).So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to _______________.作文文套六Agree or disagree

Some people prefer to A, others believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that ________________, but others have a negative attitude.As far as I am concerned, I agree/disagree that_______________.MY arguments for this point are listed as follows.One of the primary causes is that_______________________.Examples_______________.But there is a fruther more subtle point we must consider.Examples.What is more_______________.Examples___________

General speaking, __________.Recongizing the fact that _______________should drive us to conclude that______________.作文文套七A or B

In my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than B.So it is sagacious to choose A.Among count less factors which influence A.there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The above point is certainly true if A is considered.For exmaple,___________________ Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than

B.For instance,_______________

It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important.B________也好_________.In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they

sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect hte genuinely good aspects of A.For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B.作文文套八A or B

When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that A, but others, in

contrast, deem B as the premier choice and that is also my point.This quite different view

is based on the propensity of following points.We may look into every possible reason, however, fore most reason for B is

____________________.For example, ______________.Also, ________________________.This is arbitray to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph.Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that________________.Admittedly, __________________A也有好的地方______________.By he same token, however, ______________B更好____________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that_____________.作文文套九A or B

When it comes to______________, Nevertheless, in my part, I prefer A rather than B as my inclination.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.I agree with the statement that _________without reservation since___________.Naturally___________.It can be given a concrete example__________.A more essential factor why I advocate the argument of __________is that.Obviously ________________.Take the case of a thing that____________.Futhermore, what is worth noticing fact is that ________________.This demonstrates the undeniable fact that__________________.Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent,_______________此处论述B的1-2优点___________.But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B.From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that_____________.作文文套十

____________改写并复述题目____________.There may be by one or two

disadvantages to ___________________;however, I believe that there are far more advantages.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.First of all, perhaps one disadvantages to____________is that______________.For instance, __________________.Another drawback to _____________involves the possibility that____________.For example, ____________.Even though there may be one or two disadvantages to____________, the advantages far outweigh them.The main reason for my propensity for __________is that _________.For exmaple_____________.Another reason for my inclination for _____________ is that _________________.For example, _________________.In a word, in spite of the fact that there may be a couple of disadvantages to

_____________, I feel that the advantages are more obvious___________.重复优点__________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _____________.作文文套十二A or B

____________改写并复述题目____________.The advantages of B carry more weight than those of A.There are numerous reasons why __________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.One of the primary cause is that_______________________.What is also worth noticing fact is that_____________________.Futhermore, ________________________.Although I agree that there may be couple of disadvantages to_________________.I fell that the advantages are more obvious_____________._______________, Given the factors I have just outlined, I can only say

that___________________.作文文套十三A or B

____________改写并复述题目____________.When faced withe decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that ___________, but others, in contrast, deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point.Among countless factors which influence _________, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity for ________________ is that _____________.Another reason can be seen by every person is that___________________.The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because ________________________.In a word, ___________________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ____________________.作文文套十四A or B

From my point of view, it is advisable to choose A rather than B.My arguments for this

point are listed as follows.The main reason for my propensity for ____________________ is that______________.There is another factor that deserves some words here.In a word, ________________________.While it is true that the argument, I disagree hold a little bit of water, I think_______________.作文文套十五agree or disagree

Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that ____________________.But others have a negative attitude.As far as I am concerned, I agree that ____________.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.I agree with the statement that ______________________without reservation since ________________.Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe

that________________.In a word, _________________________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that__________.

第四篇：托福作文,英语作文

On Throw-away Society

Currently, our life is infiltrated with various disposable goods, among which throwaway tableware is the most commonly seen.Until now, even disposable cameras, disposable shavers, and disposable lighters have come into existence.These throwaway goods benefit us enormously, bringing convenience to our life.Notwithstanding, they give rise to a series of environmental and social problems.Convenience and sanitation are two most notable features of throwaway goods in our society.These ephemeral goods are widely used in certain places like hospitals, airplanes and fast food industry.Throwaway pinheads and tongue depressors, to some degree, prevent communicable diseases from spreading.Disposable chopsticks and bowls guarantee the efficiency for fast food providers, saving their time of washing.Besides, disposable toilet seat pads are coming into sight, contributing to the public sanitation.From these perspectives, throwaway products seem to be indispensable in our society.Simultaneously, the influx of disposable goods is turning our society into a throw-away society, which brings about severe environmental problems.The production of throwaway commodities consumes large quantities of natural resources, intensifying the diminution of resources.According to a research, China consumes about 45 billion pairs of disposable chopsticks annually, leading to the reduction of forest coverage by over two million square meters every year.Such a waste of resources is huge and only makes up a small section of the total resource-wasting.Our society cannot afford long-term mass consumption of disposable products.Apart from environmental degradation, the fact that we are rumbling into a throw-away society provokes social problems.In respect of producers, “planned obsolescence” was devised, with the goal of making products break down in a relatively short time and urging customers to replace them.If an electric appliance stops working, people are disposed to buy a new one, owning to the expensive repairing expenses and the impatience to waiting for it to be examined and fixed.In addition, technique advances reduce the cost and price of electric items.This trend not only causes more resource-wasting, but stirs up the climate of squandering and fickleness as well.Regarding consumers, people used to have a sentimental attachment to their possessions, but the fast-changing society ruthlessly breaks these bonds.In the past, a television could accompany us for more than twenty years,while nowadays we will renew it in a couple of years.By and large, throw-away society has dim prospects.On the whole, though we have to admit that disposable goods have their advantages, we should put the brakes on the trend of turning into a throw-away society.The usage of throwaway products should be limited in a proper amount to eliminate the problems appearing along with it.

第五篇：高分必备 托福口语句子分享

高分必备 托福口语模板句子分享

掌握一些托福口语句型，尤其是一些典型的高分新托福口语模板句子，对于大家备考托福口语非常有帮助。将这些句子背下来，并练习熟悉了，则可将最地道的句子脱口而出。

1.It takes me three clear / cleanly days.它花了我整整三天时间。

2.There are fifty and odd(or and more)students in our class.我们班有五十余人。

3.The total expense amount to a hundred dollars.全部费用合计100 美元。

4.We were fifteen, all told.我们一共十五人。

5.The delegation consisted of 15, inclusive of(including)two interpreters.代表团共十五人，包括两名翻译在内。

6.There were fifty people present, not counting(excluding)the children.出席者达五十人，儿童未计算在内。

7.We take a rest at intervals of two hours.我们每隔两小时休息一次。

8.I ask you to teach me every other day.我请你每隔一天来教我。

9.Beijing is ten times as big as my home town.北京有我的家乡十个那么大。

10.The sun is a huge blazing ball, a million times larger than the earth.太阳是个庞大的炽燃火球，比地球大一百多万倍。

11.By comparison with 1992, the foreign trade turnover of that country in 2003 increased(to)3.5 times.与1992年相比，这个国家2003年对外贸易总额增加了2.5 倍(增加到3.5 倍)。

12.That table measures three feet by three.那张桌子三英尺长，三英尺宽。

13.He valued the house for me at ?,500.这房子他替我作价为三千五百镑。

14.His coat is rated at 20 yuan.他的大衣值价二十元。

15.The job was finished at a sitting(a stretch).这工作一下子(一口气)就做完了。

以上就是托福口语句型的介绍，一些非常使用的新托福口语模板句子，将这些句子基本的句型掌握，代换成自己的情况，运用在考试中一定可以取得理想的成绩。