第一篇：旅行Travel 类书面表达写作指导
旅行（Travel）类书面表达写作指导
山东省平邑县第一中学 崔运昌
E-mail: cuiyunchang@yahoo.com.cn
（该文已在《新高考》杂志上发表）
I.命题特点
以旅行、旅游类为题材的高考书面表达是比较常见的一类。近年来高考试题中屡有涉及，如2008年上海春季高考题，2005年高考全国卷I等都是含有旅游、旅行为内容的书面表达。该类题材的书面表达内容丰富，体裁多样，有的属于记叙文，有的属于应用文，还有的属于说明文。
写作指导
1.游记类的写作属于记叙文。游记就是将自己在游览过程中的所见、所闻和所想记录下来。游记类文章主要是向人们介绍风光景点、名胜古迹、风土人情等,抒发自己参观游览的体验感受。游记类写作也要参照一定的写作顺序,可以按照旅游日程的时间顺序来写,也可以按照旅游景点的更换来推进文章的进展,这样才能使文章条理清晰、层次清楚。在记叙的过程中应该多注意对景点本身的描述,如其历史、地理位置、景色等,这样能够使文章的内容充实饱满。
2.推荐类和介绍类的写作属于说明文。内容方面主要是推荐旅游计划、介绍景点等。在写推荐类的文章时,作者要注意所推荐事物大多是读者所不熟悉的，因此要就其大致情况进行说明介绍。接着要具体阐明推荐的原因。最后可以和读者交流感受、经验等。介绍类文章的主要时态为一般现在时。
3.建议类和询问、请求类的属于应用文。该类的作文内容方面主要是给出一些旅游建议。大多是以建议信的方式。建议信是对收信人就某一问题提出看法、建议或忠告的信函。写建议信首先要说明写信的目的；其次,要就某一问题提出自己的建议或看法,最后表达希望采纳建议或者以期盼收到回信来结尾。
II.真题解析
（2008年上海春季高考题）
你班打算组织一次为期两天的旅游。给旅行社写封信，按照你们的预算，提出食、住、行、游等方面的具体要求，请旅行社予以安排。（信的开头和结尾已给出）
Dear Sir/Madam,Dec 15th, 2007
We are students of East Senior High School……
Yours sincerely,Yao Hua
解题思路
本命题很明显属于应用文，形式是书信，内容是表达旅游者的意愿和想法，请旅行社对于衣食住行的要求予以安排。
时态应用一般现在时态为主，设计打算方面的内容用一般将来时，陈述以第一人称为主。文章结构可按要点划分，分为三段：
1.说出目的。
2.对于旅行社衣食住行安排的具体要求。
3.最后一段总结。
优秀范文
Dear Sir/Madam
We are students of East Senior High School.We’d like to ask your travel agency to arrangefor us to take a two days’ trip.According to our budget, I will give you some requirements which you can take into consideration.In the first place, my classmates are determined to go to Hangzhou.Therefore, please make arrangements for us to visit the West Lake and other famous historic and cultural sites.In addition, it is because some of our members enjoy eating delicious food that we would like to have meals in restaurants which have achieved instant fame.As for the hotel, we don’t have any other special requisition except that the hotel must be clean and tidy.Finally, I want to remind you that because our time is limited, you can arrange for us to go to Hangzhou by advanced passenger train or by airplane.As has been mentioned above, I hope that you can satisfy our demands as much as possible.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Yao Hua
教师点评
本篇作文表达要点齐全，分段合理，主题突出。文章的内容比较充实，能够符合题目的要求写了作为旅游者的意愿和想法。文章的组织结构不错，结构清晰，层次性强，文章的开头能够开门见山地说出目的。接下来的段落谈了对于旅行社衣食住行安排的要求，其中用了一些关联词过渡句如In the first place，In addition, Finally等，使文章的层次感清晰，条理性强。最后一段总结，言简意赅。同时使用了一些较为复杂的句式，如it is because some of our members enjoy eating delicious food that we would like to have meals in restaurants which have achieved instant fame.等。
但是文章中还有需要改进的地方：，比如在In the first place，In addition Finally这些关联词之后各加一句总起句，让对方可以一目了然地知道你将提出的要求。例如In the first place之后写了出行的内容，那么可以加一句：As far as the trip is concerned，在In addition之后，写了饮食，那么也可以加一句总起句：Talking of the restaurant,…这样的话就使文章的内容更一目了然了。
III.模拟训练
1.假如你是张华,你的美国朋友Harley说他将在六月初来中国。请你根据下表提供的信息为他推荐以下两个旅游点。(词数:120-150)
地点：山东青岛，四川岷山
特色：避暑胜地，以蓝色的大海、美丽的海滨闻名，环境幽雅，风景秀丽，山上名寺甚多，历史悠久
价格：1000元--500元
时间：5天--4 天
2.假设你叫赵坚,你的美国朋友Kacy打算今年暑假来中国西藏旅游,请你根据以下提示给他提出一些旅游建议。
1).高原地区缺氧,游客必须身体健康；
2).昼夜温差大,需带备用衣物；
3).阳光强烈,需带防晒霜、太阳帽、太阳镜等防晒物品；
4).入藏第一天多休息少运动。
注意：不要逐条翻译,过渡自然,行文流畅；120词左右。
参考词汇:防晒霜suntan cream
3.假如你是王强，你将自己署假期间登长城的照片贴在了自己的博客里，你的英国网友Mary对此非常感兴趣。请你写一封信向她简单叙述此次旅行的所见所闻。开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
写作要点：
1）介绍旅游景点；
2）记叙旅游经历；
3）谈谈你的感受。
写作要求：
1）条理清晰、详略得当；
2）连贯通顺、无语法错误；
3）词数120左右。
Dear Mary,I went climbing the Great Wall with my parents during summer vacation.I’m so glad to hear that you are interested in this trip.I’ll tell you as much about it as I can.___________________________________________________________________________
Yours,wangqiang
参考范文
1.Dear Harley,I’m so glad to hear that you are coming to China at the beginning of June.I’d like to recommend Qingdao and Minshan Mountain as sights to see while you are here.Qingdao is one of the most beautiful coastal cities in China and a wonderful place to spend summer.The climate there is very mild and can make you feel very relaxed and comfortable.Tens of thousands of people from all around the world visit this city every summer.The other is Minshan Mountain.It is famous for its beautiful scenery and long history.There are many old famous temples there.If you are interested in climbing mountains and temples, it is definitely worth seeing.As for the cost, a five-day tour around Qingdao may cost you 1000 yuan, while a four-day tour of Minshan Mountain could cost around 500 yuan.Both of these places are well worth visiting and I highly recommend them.I hope you have a good trip!
Yours sincerely,Zhanghua
2.Dear Kacy,I am glad to hear that you will come to visit Tibet.You know, Tibet is 4,000 metres above sea level, so there are many things you should be aware of.Firstly, tourists to Tibet must be healthy because this area has less oxygen.Secondly, there is a significant difference in temperatures
between days and nights, so you should take enough clothes to keep yourself from catching a cold.Finally, the sunshine in Tibet is strong and can easily hurt your skin and eyes, so you’d better bring suntan cream, a pair of sunglasses and a hat.Of course, you should make sure you get enough rest when you first arrive in Tibet.I hope you have a wonderful holiday in Tibet.Yours,Zhaojian
3.Dear Mary,I went climbing the Great Wall with my parents during summer vacation.I’m so glad to hear that you are interested in this trip.I’ll tell you as much about it as I can.The Great Wall is one of the greatest wonders of the world which attracts thousands of
tourists every day.It is running across the mountains like a dragon.When we arrived there, we were so excited that we started climbing immediately.The steps sometimes were flat, but sometimes steep.After two hours of climbing, we finally got to the top.I enjoyed the beauty of the mountains and took a lot of photos.I felt really proud and thought of the famous saying: “A man who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.”If you come to China, I’ll be glad to take you to the Great Wall so that you can appreciate the beauty of the Great Wall.Yours,wangqiang
通讯地址：山东省平邑县第一中学教学科研室崔运昌
邮编：273300
第二篇：图表式书面表达写作指导
图表式书面表达写作指导
摘 要：本文主要是采用图表式的方法指导小学生进行写作。其方法主要是理解作文要求和内容，通过图形或者是表格的方式将作文内容表达出来，帮助小学生梳理写作思路，通过图表形式的展示，调动和培养小学生的写作思维，培养小学生的写作兴趣，为其他教师指导学生进行写作提供一些参考意见。
关键词：图表式；小学生；写作指导
在小学语文教材中每个单元都会有习作的要求，大部分属于描述类型的作文。不管是什么样的写作内容，对于小学生来说都比较困难。语文教师在课堂上指导学生练习写作的时候也会提供一些写作方法。本文主要从图表式书面表达提供一些写作指导。
一、表格式罗列指导方法
在描述性的习作中，有很多作文要求是以文字的形式表现出来。例如小学四年级上册中的一篇习作，要求小学生写一篇自然景观或者是身边的景物，只要是学生见过的景物都可以写。那么教师在帮助学生进行??作的时候可以采用表格式罗列指导方法，因为在本篇习作的前面是口语交际，小学生在口语交际阶段已经通过口述的方式讲述了自己见过的各种自然景观，教师可以选择一名学生讲述的内容以表格的形式书写在黑板上。例如一名学生讲述的是去动物园看动物的事情，学生可能就是几句简短的描述就结束了，但是教师可以在黑板上画出一个表格（如表1），以时间、地点、干什么为表格填写要求，通过学生的讲述教师将内容填入表格中。教师作为引导者对于动物园的活动引导学生说出自己最喜欢的动物，然后告诉同学们看见了几只动物，这些可爱的动物在做什么，最喜欢吃的是什么等等。这类表格式的引导是采取时间顺序的回忆进行罗列，也可以采用逻辑思维顺序进行罗列。例如观察日记的习作中，同样采用引导式提问和表格式罗列方式帮助小学生进行写作。首先让小学生选择观察的对象，可以是动物也可以是植物，例如家里种植的花朵，教师采用引导的方式让学生说出花朵是由种子经过培育长出美丽的花朵。然后让学生描述种子的形状，黑色，圆形颗粒，米粒般大小，当种子种在花盆中后，需要每天早晚浇水，然后种子从种2下到发芽到开花的时间都可以让学生记录下来，还可以让学生记录是否有除虫或者是施肥的过程。学生通过表格的提示可以详细的观察到植物的生长过程（如表2）。对于不同的观察对象可以设定不同的表格内容，小学生在观察事物的时候通常会比较粗心，只会观察到比较少的部分，通过表格的罗列可以提醒小学生有什么遗漏没有记录的地方，通过这种方式可以很好地培养小学生的逻辑思维能力，让小学生的思维能力得到锻炼。并且小学生可以自行设计表格，通过填写内容等方式加深学生印象，促进学生从多个不同角度进行思考和观察，通过这种方式的训练，学生写作水平自然也就会得到提升。
二、图形式指导方法
小学生在进行写作的时候，由于小学生的生活环境比较单纯，很多事物可能没有见过或者是情感的体会不够深刻，因此在对一些科幻类或者是故事类的作文时，教师可以采用图形式的指导方法，帮助小学生进行写作。图形式指导方法的重点在于引导，例如在小学习作中有关于科幻故事类的写作要求，这篇习作需要充分发挥小学生的想象能力，教师作为引导者，可以通过展示各种科幻小说中的事物，如未来的衣服、食物、交通工具、住宅小区等会有什么样的变化。利用新媒体技术或者是PPT的形式展示各种科幻图片，如会随着温度改变颜色的衣服，做成胶囊状的事物、太空舱一样的交通工具、智能化的住宅小区，教师在展示各种科幻图片的时候，小学生可以展开自己的想象力，告诉教师自己希望的未来是怎样的，会有什么样的科幻产品出现。甚至可以利用科幻动画片中的部分小片段让小学生描述故事情节，教师可以询问学生这些未来的产品都有什么作用，或者是希望增添哪些功能。小学生的优势在于思维发散能力特别强，很可能是添加各种天马行空的想象，可以利用小学生的特点，教师从旁加以引导让小学生不至于偏离主题，这样就可以帮助小学生完成作文。同时这种方式可以用于其他故事性的写作，教师在前期收集各种童话图片组合在一起，让小学生通过图片中的内容猜测各种可能发生的故事情节或者是场景，从而激发小学生的创作能力和兴趣，让小学生掌握故事性作文写作技巧。
三、图表结合指导方法
小学生作文随着年纪的增长要求也会越来越高，从简单的事物描述到复杂的情节描写，包括人物心理活动等等。例如小学语文六年级教材中一篇习作要求是描写暑期生活，可以是外出旅游、参观博物馆、学习游泳或者是其他活动。教师可以通过动画片或者是儿童电影中的暑期活动场景展示给小学生，引起小学生的回忆，让小学生自由选择印象最深刻的暑期活动。教师可以以自己的暑期生活为例，以表格的方式展示自己的暑期生活。例如旅行时间多长，天气、风景如何，有没有碰见有趣的人或者事情，包括自己的内心想法都可以通过表格的形式简单的展示出来。学生可以模仿老师的表格填写内容，构建自己的作文框架结构，然后是进行写作的过程中填入更丰富的内容。学生也可以在表格中画上几笔简笔画代表某一事物，这样更增添了写作的趣味性，让学生通过这种图表结合的方式感觉写作没有太大的困难。
四、结论
通过上述对小学生图表式书面表达的写作指导分析，发现图表式写作指导方法可以很好地帮助小学生理解作文要求，梳理写作思路，激发学生发散思维能力和兴趣，提高小学生写作效率和水平，减少小学生写作的畏难心理。
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第三篇：如何写好发言稿类书面表达
【写作范例】
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛，本的主题为“The English Novel I Like Best”。作为组织者，你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言，请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇120—150词左右的发言稿。1.说明比赛的意义，如提高英语听说能力、养成读书的习惯等；
2.说明比赛的注意事项，如每人演讲不超过5分钟、语言流利、发音准确等； 3.预祝比赛圆满成功。【写作指导】 这是一篇发言稿，在结构上应包括三个部分：开头、正文及结束语。写作时关键是组织好正文内容。正文部分所应涉及的内容在题干中给了明确的说明。
在表达上要注意语言精炼，表达流畅，篇幅不宜过长，在使用较为简单的句子的同时，适当地使用复杂句型，但需避免出现句式或语法错误。
本文写作中的信息要点是： ① 开篇问候及对听众表示欢迎；
② 发言的目的：将举行英语演讲比赛；
③ 演讲的目的、意义； ④ 表达美好祝愿；
⑤ 结束语：对听众表示感谢。
写作时要注意的内容是： ① 罗列好写作要点，不仅包括所给的三条，还应包括上面叙述文字中的要点内容；
② 安排好写作顺序，避免无序罗列，从而导致文章杂乱无章；
③ 注意语言的口语化，但也应尽可能使用一些高级表达方式，以提升文章档次。
【范文1】
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen!Welcome to this year’s English speech competition.The purpose for holding this activity is to improve our speaking and listening ability, and on top of that, to help us form the good habit of reading.I hope that our English will get better through this competition.OK, here I must emphasize some things you must pay attention to.First, you must limit your speech to five minutes.Second, you are required to use fluent English and pronounce every word correctly.Third you’d better express yourself naturally.At last, I hope, with your hard work and enthusiasm, this competition will be a great success.Thank you!【范文2】
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen!Welcome to this year’s English speech competition.Holding this activity has become a tradition, through which we can improve our abilities both in speaking and listening.Also, helping us form the good habit of reading is also our purpose, finally aiming to improve our integration capability.OK, here are some things you must pay attention to.What’s the most important is that you must use fluent English and pronounce every word correctly.Remember to limit your speech into five minutes.Of course giving your speech in a natural way may be helpful.Try your best, and I’m looking forward to your outstanding performance.I hope this competition is a success.Thank you!【Useful Expressions】 The purpose for holding this activity is to improve our speaking and listening ability...I hope that our English will get better through this competition....you are required to use fluent English and pronounce every word correctly.I’m looking forward to your outstanding performance.【写作训练】
假设有一批英国中学生将来你校就读，校方要求你在开学典礼上介绍一下学校的有关要求。请按以下要点写一篇120—150词左右的发言稿。
◎上学要穿戴整洁； ◎上课不迟到、早退； ◎保持校园清洁； ◎走路靠右行；若要骑车上学，请办自行车许可证。
如何写好发言稿类书面表达：
One possible version: Good morning, dear friends.Welcome to our school.Now please allow me to introduce you some of our school rules here.As high school students, firstly, we are expected to be neatly dressed when at school.Secondly, it must be made clear that we should never be late for class or leave school before it is over.The school is a place for us to live and study in, so we must keep it clean.Lastly, when you are walking on the road, please remember to keep to the right, and, if you want to go to school by bike, you must have a bicycle-permit.Thanks.
第四篇：书面表达
中考英语书面表达的考点集汇、讲解和训练
【考点扫描】
书面表达是每年中考必考题型，是考查学生交际能力的一个重要组成部分。书面表达通常有三种形式：
1、书信、日记、通知、留言、假条；
2、看图作文；
3、根据汉语提示作文。
无论是那一种书面表达形式，考生所写的短文都要紧扣主题、文理通顺，要素完整，语言准确、得当、格式正确、无大、小写和拼写错误，标点符号正确，能达到交际目的。【名师解难】 一.训练方法
1.记。认真系统复习和背诵基础知识和优美的句子、句型。中国有句古话，叫“熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会作”。同样，要使自己具有较强的写作能力，首先应该熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法，同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起文段来，就可以做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。
2.练。每练一篇书面表达题，都要真正学到一点东西，不可贪多而边学边忘。平时可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始，到写单句，然后到写几句话，最后到写流利的文段。尽量尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。
3.写。要进行实战写作。要求自己在20分钟内写出100个词的短文，并且质量高、1 内容全、形式正确。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。二.应试策略
1.审题目：要切中题意。《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
2.圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。
3.列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。
4.定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。5.写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面：
(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。
(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。1）语态、时态要准确无误。
2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。
4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。
5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：
1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法： 1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列举的：for example , such as… 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…
(6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。(6)改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下 3 文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： 1）格式是否有错。2）拼写有无错误。3）语言是否用错。4）时态、语态错误。5）标点错误。6）人称是否用错。三.注意事项
书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。每年阅卷老师在十来天的时间里要看十几万考生的作文，工作量之大，时间之紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。【中考范例】
VII.书面表达（共1题，计10分）
假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。
要求：1.认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。2.词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。
Hello！I’m your new friend.My name is Bob.I’m fifteen.I’m American.I live in New York.4 I am a middle school student.I’m good at maths.It is very interesting.My favourite sport is basketball.And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player.I like pop music.My friends and I often sing pop songs
After school, I am interested in getting on-line.I have known a lot about China from the Internet.Now I’m learning Chinese.I hope I will visit your country one day.Please write to me and tell me something about your life.I’m looking forward to hearing from you.Bob Dear Bob, _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Yours，Zhang Qiang 【解析】根据前面提到第六个步骤，我们来写一下这篇书面表达。
1.审题目：通过审题目我们可以知道：本篇书面表达应是写一封回信，写信人是张强，收信人是Bob，信的内容应是介绍张强自己的情况。
2.圈要点：根据来信判断，写回信必须包括以下要点：
1、收到对方的来信；
2、愿意和对方交朋友；
3、自己的姓名、年龄和住址；
4、自己的身份、特长和爱好；
5、自己的希望。
3、列提纲：1.got your letter 2.glad to be your friend 3.name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shanxi 4.a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5.hope we’ll meet in China
4、定基调：1.时态：收到来信用一般过去时，介绍情况用一般现在时，希望用一般将来时。2.人称用第一人称。3.可按提纲的顺序来写。4.开头和结尾题目已经给出。
5、写全文： Dear Bob, I got your letter yesterday.I’m very glad to be your pen friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I’m fifteen years old, too.I live in Shaanxi.I’m a middle school student, too.I like English and physics very much.I also like sports, but I’m good at drawing.I know a little about America.Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? I hope we’ll meet in China some day.I’m sure we’ll have a good time together.Please write(to)me soon.Yours, Zhang Qiang 6
6、改病句：认真复查一边，如有错误，加以改正。【满分演练】
（1）
华山是中国名山之一。假设外国友人到你校参观后，准备去旅游。请根据以下要点向外国友人简单介绍华山（the Hua Mountain）
1．位于陕西东部，是中国著名的旅游胜地，每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。2．乘汽车去大约要花1个小时；也可以乘火车去。
3．登山便可领略其云海（the sea of clouds）、奇松（wondrous pines）、怪石（unique rocks）等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。注意：
1．字数：80词左右。2．请不要逐字翻译。（2）根据提示和要求完成下面短文
假如你（Li Lei）在去年夏令营认识的一个朋友Jim从英国给你寄来一件礼物—— 一件红色的衬衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你问好，他想知道你近来在忙些什么。请你给他写一封回信（100个词左右）表示感谢。回信要包括以下内容： 1.向Jim问好并对他表示感谢。
2.礼物是你最喜欢的颜色，尺寸很合适，你非常喜欢。
3.告诉Jim你近来很好，上周刚过完生日，生日聚会很热闹。询问Jim的近况，并表示希望他能来中国。
注意1.信的格式已经给出。
2.信中不得使用真实的人名、地名。（3）
根据中文意思和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。所给英文提示词语必须都用上，中文提示内容不必逐句翻译，每组英文提示所写出的句数不限。
今天是6月23日星期日，天气晴朗。你和你的同学张宏参观了西安市动物园。那里的动物十分有趣，人见人爱。当你看到有位游客在向猴子投喂食物时，就上前阻止并说……
请你用英文写一篇日记，记述今天的经历。（请注意日记格式）1．fine day, sun, bright 2．visit, Beijing Zoo 3．animal, so interesting, people, love 4．see, visitor, throw…to, stop, say（4）
根据中文设置的情景、英文提示词语以及表格所提供的信息，写出语法正确、意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。注意1.字数60~80。
2.所给的英文提示词语及表格所提供的信息必须都用上。（可适当发挥）3.发言稿的开头和结尾已给出。
假设你是张斌，今年暑假你将参加学校组织的赴加拿大“绿色之旅”夏令营活动。请你准备一篇在开营式上的自我介绍发言稿。
name, Zhang Bin, fifteen years old, live in Xi’an, favorite subject, biology…
Dear friends
I’m very glad to introduce myself to you._______________________ _________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all.Thank you for listening.（5）
根据中文提示和英文提示词语写一篇短文。
今年暑假，有一批美国中学生要来你们学校访问。请你写一篇有关西安的简介，以便和他们交流。
注意：1.字数100左右；
2.必须使用所给英文提示。Capital of Shaanxi, Lie in the Northwest, many places of interest, autumn, best season 9（6）看图写话。
根据以上四幅图和提示词语，写出一篇语法正确、意思连贯、语句通顺、符合逻辑的短文，开头已给出。要求：1.叙述要用第三人称。2.词数60~80个左右。3.要表达自己的看法或想法。
4.选用下列词语：rush hour, cross, make sure, come over, traffic rules Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________（7）
请你参考图文提示，写一篇60~80词的短文。注意：1.语言规范，语意完整，内容丰富。2.表达符合图意，书写规范。3.给出自己的观点。4.文章的开头已给出。
参考词：pollute, turn off the tap(水龙头)，dry, save(节约 vt.), water resources(水资源)From the pictures we know that ______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________（8）
请根据下面四幅图，写一篇70个单词左右的短文。文章开头已经给出，不算入总词汇数内。
参考词汇： on fire 着火firefighter n.消防员put out 灭火
Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire!Help!Fire!Help!...”
__________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________（9）看图写话。
要求：1.根据图画所提供的语境，写出意思连贯、语言流畅、语法准确、符合逻辑的短文。2.至少使用两种时态，70词以上。不得使用真实姓名、地名、学校名。
3.标题和第一句已给出，但不计入70词之内。
One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________（10）
根据所给图画用英语写一篇约80词的短文。
(11)
假如你所在的学校要出一期英语壁报。你准备就自己经历的一件事写一篇英语短文向壁报投稿。下面五幅图记录了你上个星期六与老师和同学到南河边参加植树活动的全过程。请你就以下五幅图写一篇英文短文。
注意：1.短文内容要包括所有图画中的主要内容 2.词数：70～90
3.生词提示： 桶bucket锄头hoe
________________________________________________________________ 13 ____________________________________________________________________（12）
请按照下面6幅图和表格的提示，写一篇题为“Changes in Our Hometown”的英语短文。（词数：50~80，不包括已经给出的单词）
内容要点：
过去 现在 旧房 高楼 河水污浊 河水清澈 步行、骑自行车 乘公交车、小汽车 Changes in Our Hometown
Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past 14 ________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 【练习答案】
(1)参考答案：
The Hua Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China.It lies in the east of Shaanxi.Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there.It’s not far from here.It takes you about one hour to get there by bus.You can also go there by train.When you are at the top of the mountain, you’ll find clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you.In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful.It’s really a nice place to visit.(2)参考答案：
Zhonghua street Xi;an, China June21st, 2004 Dear Jim：
How are you? Many thanks for the shirt!I’m very happy to hear from you again.I love the shirt very much, Jim, and red is my favourite colour!You remembered!It’s just my size.Every time I wear it, I will think of you.I’m fine here in China.Last week I had a birthday party.Many of my classmates came and my mother made us a lot of good food.We really had a wonderful time together.How are you doing in England, Jim? I miss you very much.I always miss the days we were together last summer.I hope you can come to China someday.Please write back soon.Your friend, Li Lei
(3)参考答案：
Sunday June 23rd
It was a fine day today and the sun was bright.I visited Xi’an Zoo with my classmate, Zhang Hong.The animals there were so interesting that all the people loved them.When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys, I went/ran to stop him/her and said, “Animals are our friends and we must take good care of them.”
(4)参考答案： Dear friends，I’m very glad to introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Bin.I’m fifteen years old.I live in Beijing.One of my favorite subjects is biology.I’m interested in drawing.In my free time, I often go camping, draw some pictures of plants, and enjoy the singing of birds in nature.I want to be a biologist when I grow up.I feel lucky to join you.I hope we can be good friends and do our best to make That’s all.Thank you for listening.(5)参考答案：
Xi’an is the capital of Shaanxi with a long history.There are many places of interest, such as the Dayan Pagoda, the Xiaoyan Pagoda, the Bell Tower and the Terra Cotta Warriors.Since it lies in the Northwest of China, the winter here is long and it sometimes snows.Autumn is the best season in Xi’an, for it’s neither too cold nor too hot.One of the most famous traditional foods is “Yangroupao”.(6)参考答案：
Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.It was the rush hour.He rode his bike to school very fast.He was crossing the street when a car came at that moment.Tim’s bike hit the car and he fell to the ground heavily.The driver was very kind and stopped to make sure that Tim was all right.Then a policeman came over.He told Tim to ride more slowly next time and it was dangerous.Tim thanked him and went to school.All of the young men should obey the traffic rules.17(7)参考答案：
From the pictures we know that much water has been polluted.Some factories are pouring waste water into rivers and lakes.The water becomes dirty and lots of fish have died.Many people often waste water.For example, they often forget to turn off the taps.If we don’t have enough water, land will be dry and crops will die.We can’t live without water.So we should try our best and encourage everyone to protect water resources.We must save water and stop polluting it.If we do that, Things will be much better.(8)参考答案：
Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire!Help!Fire!Help!...” What had happened? He looked out of the window.Wow!He found that his neighbour’s house was on fire.Jack jumped off the bed and rushed to the telephone.He made a call to the police.Then, he ran out and helped his neighbour(to)fight against the fire.Soon the fire fighters came and in a short time the fire was put out.And the house owner and fire fighters thanked Jack and his neighbours a lot.(9)参考答案：
TAKING CARE OF TREES
One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.They found
that a young tree there was dying.They thought they must save the young tree.Then they put a rope around the tree and watered it.Some days later the tree came back to life again.Their mother saw this and praised them, “You are good children!”
(10)参考答案：
Yesterday afternoon Li Ping and I were going to school.On the way we saw an old woman crossing the street.Suddenly a car passed by very fast.The old woman was frightened and fell down to the ground.The apples in her basket were all out on the street.Immediately, we ran to the old woman, helped her get up and picked up all the apples.Li Ping helped her carry the basket and I helped her cross the street.The old woman thanked us very much.（11）参考答案： 内容要点：
（1）上星期五老师告诉我们“明天去南河边植树”。（2）上星期六（第二天）早上六点半我就起床了。（3）我带着桶去学校，同学们带着桶、锄头在校门口等待。（4）到南河边，我们开始植树。（也可描写动场面。）（5）看着新种下的树，我们都很高兴。
Last Friday, our teacher told us that we would go to plant trees by the 19 South River the next day.On Saturday morning I got up at six thirty and went to school with a bucket.My classmates were waiting at the school gate with buckets and hoes.When we got to the South River, we began to plant trees on the river bank.(On the river bank, some students were digging holes, the others were planting or watering the young trees.)
After we finished our work, we were happy to see the young trees we planted on the river bank.（12）参考答案：
Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past, the houses in our hometown were very poor, but now many people have moved into tall buildings(there are many tall buildings here and there).The water in the rivers was very dirty, but now the rivers are clean and people can swim in them.People used to walk or ride bikes, but now they can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.走到茶几边，我认出了外婆的杯子，但是哪一个才是妈妈的杯子呢？突然之间，我觉得，自己真得太不了解父母了。当妈妈为我倒水时，我却不知她的杯子是什么样的；当妈妈为我夹我喜欢吃的菜时，我却没想过他们是爱吃淡一点，还是浓一点。。。2009年到了，意味着过去一年的逝去和新的一年的到来。妈妈为我操劳了一整年，仔细想想，现在的我也应该为她做一点点事了。
于是，我决定先将茶沏好再找杯子。学着爸爸平时沏茶的顺序，我先从茶柜 里找出了一罐普洱茶，再往烧水的壶里加入水放在电茶炉上烧，接着，我将爸爸已经掰好的普洱茶片拿了两片放在盖碗里，等了一会，水开了，我小心地将水注入盖碗，将盖盖上，把盖碗里第一遍的茶水滤掉，然后再次注水，盖上盖，焖一会才两手并用地将茶水倒入茶海里，因为第一次自己动手，盖碗的烫手是我所没想到的，手忙脚乱的我弄得茶几上一片片的水渍。重复几次这样的程序后，我先帮外婆倒了一杯茶，因为外婆特别喜欢喝茶。当外婆从厨房走出来的时候我已经把茶都给倒好了，这时，外婆才告诉我哪一个是妈妈的杯子。
妈妈起床了，我双手捧着水杯送到她的面前，就像捧着一颗温热的心。妈妈一愣，随即脸上露出了微笑，她一手接过水杯，伸出另一只手将我拉进了她的怀里，那手轻轻柔柔地在我的头上抚摸着，接着妈妈在我的脸上深深地亲了一口。虽然妈妈经常亲我，但这一刻的亲吻却最让我感到幸福。我抬起头对妈妈说：“妈妈快喝吧，要不茶要凉了。”妈妈仰起了脖子，张着嘴巴，“咕咚，咕咚”地喝了几大口。看她那甜蜜蜜的样子，仿佛微苦的普洱茶也是蜜一般甜。
我记得在我小学的时侯，就读过一首曹值的七步诗：“煮豆持作梗，辘毂以为汁；秸在釜下燃，豆在釜中泣；本是同根生，相煎何太急”。那时只知其大意，只知道曹操的长子曹丕继位，他在一些奸臣的影响下，担心他的同胞弟弟曹值篡位，便逼迫曹值在七步之内作出一首诗来，否则处死；结果他的弟弟就在七步之内写出了流传至今的“七步诗”。当时这首诗对曹丕也是一种极大的潮讽。
几个世纪过去了，社会和生活都发生了极大的变化；应该说人的素质也应有所提高；一个人生活在世上，是离不开亲情、友情和爱情的；有人说：打架亲兄弟，上阵父子兵，但是，兄弟姐妹的团结并不是真对与他人打架斗殴，在生活上，21 事业上应是不可或缺的照应；俗话说“一根筷子容易断，十双筷子断就难”；可见，团结是一种力量，只有团结才有攻不破的堡垒。
然而，就在生活优越的今天，兄弟姐妹往往因为一点小事，一点利益而你争我斗，反目成仇，甚而相残；我和我的朋友在聊天时有时聊及这个问题，有人这样评论：一个人生活在世上，如果不顾亲情，对兄弟姐妹甚至父母于不顾，那他在这个社会上和任何人都不要谈“情”字，特别是友情。
树大分枝，各自成立家庭后，在生活中一些小事是难免发生的，但要看你怎样去对待，把金钱和利益看的太重，那麽，你就会值亲情于不顾；看淡名利，注重亲情才是做人的底线；争则不足，让则有余，在利益和金钱面前，我们何不礼让一点，做一个有道德、有素质、有亲情的人呢？
家和万事兴，团结是一种力量，让我们团结友爱，和睦共处，为个人的事业、为家庭的生活、为国家的兴盛而看重亲情、友情、爱情；把金钱和利益看淡一些吧！人过留名，雁去留声，希望在几十年之后，当你离开这个世界的时侯，留给后人的不是唾泣，而是美愉。
今天是她父亲的生日,她要回家和父亲一起过生日.我很理解她的想法,更理解她的思念之情.是的,她父亲已经六十多岁了,为了子女的成长与幸福,含辛茹苦,真的的不容易.话说过来,人一辈子真的很不容易.人年老时非常希望能够和子女在一起,即使不能在一起,哪怕一个电话甚至一个短信,父母也已经很知足了.我由于长期在外,很想念爸爸妈妈.想起过去,心里真的很辛酸,父母亲为了我们的成长真的付出了很多,然而他们现在又生活得怎么样呢?想起过去的一幕一幕,我心里很难受!我很希望做做子女的我们,踏踏实实地做好每一件事情,不让父母担忧,这是最基本的我们应当做的事情.22 谈到这里我不由自主地想起一部电影《我的兄弟姐妹》,这是一部关于亲情的影片,暂且不管故事的真实性,主要考究它的内涵.主人公齐思甜和哥哥齐忆苦、妹妹奇妙、弟弟齐天生活在一个不富裕却充满温馨和爱的家。然而在一个暴风雪的夜晚，他们的母亲旧病复发，咳得吐血了。父亲背她去医院，却出了意外，他们俩都亡故了。次日，另一家人搬进了四个孩子的家。性格刚强的哥哥无法忍受这个新家庭的种种，无奈地带着弟弟妹妹离开了家。他们开始四处奔波，寻找落脚之处。当实在没有能力照顾弟弟妹妹的时候，他把妹妹齐思甜送给一对正要出国的夫妇；把弟弟送给他的舅妈一家；又把小妹妹带到一对老人家中请他们收养。他自己和弟弟妹妹们便各奔东西……20年后，齐忆苦在北京当上了出租车司机；齐思甜出国受到良好的教育，成了音乐家；齐天成为东北大学学生；齐妙却当上了舞厅小姐。在北京的音乐会上，思甜蓦然回首的瞬间，音乐霎时凝固了。他们四人拥抱在一起，泪水顺着另一支悠扬的乐曲落下，听众的掌声久久不息……终于，他们有了一次永久的重逢。
齐思甜的父亲是一个音乐教师，他们一家人都生活在音乐的天堂里，这也为后来思甜成为音乐家打好了基础。父亲说：“人生路上有许多困难的事情，只要有音乐在，你的灵魂便不再寂寞。”这位父亲是伟大的，他乐观开朗，以身作则。尽管他和蔼可亲，但同时又是一个严厉的父亲。有一回，齐忆苦偷邻居家的鸡蛋，是为了满足妹妹小小的心愿。而他却因此挨了父亲的鞭子，还罚他站在雪地里很久。在父亲被分配到别的地方边劳动边教音乐时，他对这“莫须有的罪名”并没有悲愤倒下，而是瞒着家人当搬运工挨家挨户送木材，还干各种各样的粗活。他也没有一丝怨言，还对孩子说：“我没事。”懂事的孩子们也拿起了工具，帮父亲干活。他哼着小调，阳光幸福地洒在他们脸上。
可见,这位父亲是多么伟大，他以他的行动告诉了孩子们音乐的重要性及如何面对生活的苦难。
那么，又是一种什么样的力量，使后来的四个孩子重逢，使他们欢聚，使他们接受心灵的洗礼？
毋庸置疑，是亲情。
寒冷的冬天，四个孩子依偎在车站。他们在为下一餐饭而担心着。“哥，我饿。”、“哥，我冷。”、“哥，我想回家……”弟妹们的话刺痛了哥哥。他说：“只要我还有一口气，就不让你们受委屈。”事实上他也这么做了。如果不是亲情，他又何必活得如此累呢？他又怎能忘记，那一晚，父母临走时对他的嘱咐：“你是哥哥，要照顾好弟弟妹妹。”
生活改变了许多人和事，也改变了他们。但是，亲情是始终不渝的。最小的妹妹齐妙长大后竟成了舞厅小姐！她离开原来的家后，养父母去世得早，加上无人看管，就开始堕落下去了。她在20年后与齐思甜相遇时，大言不惭地对她说她满足于当前腐朽昏暗的生活方式。但是自那以后，她回忆起以前的一点一滴，又不免伤感和懊悔。她发现自己对不起所有爱她的人，她的良心受到了谴责。于是，亲情的归来使她的精神方面的巨人复活了！她的灵魂才得以解放。
亲情给人以新生，亲情又犹如一支镇心剂。
亲情是心中的太阳，照耀着我们；亲情是温柔的春风，抚摸着我们；亲情如绵绵的春雨，滋润着我们。
亲情是雪，晶莹剔透；亲情也可以是雷，惊天撼地。
亲情可以是灯，温暖柔和；亲情也可以是微弱的烛光，不亮却很辉煌。不管怎么说，亲情一定是无价的宝藏。
没有了亲情，世界变得荒芜、凄凉；没有了亲情，生命则无法繁衍后代；没有了亲情，生活就单调枯燥；没有了亲情，人间也成了地狱。
亲情是沟通两代之间思想交流的桥梁，是一条连结两颗心的纽带。“兄弟姐妹原是天上掉下的水花，谁也不认得谁。但落在地下后，结成一体，结成冰，化成水，就永远也分不开了。”
“临行密密封，意恐迟迟归”，是亲情。“我在这头，母亲在那头”，也是亲情。
无价的亲情呵，愿我们在你的鼓舞下，驶向美好灿烂的明天。关于亲情的影片..我看这部影片时,心情很沉重,流泪了.我想,不论一个人的出身是多么卑微,只要我们能够记住亲情的鼓舞与期待,只要我们我们去刻苦努力,只要我们在心理上能够战胜自己,那么我们就是生活的强者!
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There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason that②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由
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In recent days, we have to face the problem-----A.The problem is becoming more and more serious./ The present situation is worrying.First,------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second,---------------(举例进一步说明现状)
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation./ To our great joy, many measures have been taken to solve the problems.For one thing,---------------(解决方法一).For another-------------(解决方法二).Finally,--------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that------(我的解决方法/ 看法)./ Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because-----(带来的好处)/ if--------------.说明利弊题型
nowadays many middle schools prefer to---------.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First,----------.Besides / What’s more,-------.Meanwhile,-----.On the other hand,/ However,-----------------------.The most important thing is that------------.As a result,-----------------------
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⑴It so happened that_______________⑵Just at the moment,___________.⑶It impressed me most because_______⑷What happened next was _________________.⑸At first,____________.⑹Almost at the same time, ___________.⑺What”s more, ____________⑻As a result,____________⑼As I understand,___________Onone hand,____________⑾On the other hand___________⑿Therefore,（二）
I⑴As is known to all____________⑵___ seem to get accustomed to_____⑶In fact_____,..⑷The reasons of _____lie in several aspects.⑸Firstly___, ⑹
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hand, _____ is due to the fact that ______.In addition, ______ is responsible for _____.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But itis generally believed that the
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because.⑼Thererfore, it,s not in my power to.⑽Naturally, I want to suggest.⑾I shall be obliged if you will kindly write and tellme
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高考英语满分作文范文:A Letter of Thanks(一封感谢信)
时间： 2008-04-08 17:11:41作者：来源：
Dear Mr.John,How are things going with you in Beijing?
I am writing to show my thanks to you.You tutored me in my spoken English
before you went to Beijing.With your help I made such rapid progress that I won
the first place in the Spoken English Competition of the city.My achievement is owed to your help.Thank you very much.I have heard that you and your wife will pay a visit to my school.I am very glad at the news.In that case we can see each other again.I am looking forward to your coming.I am sending you a telescope as a small gift.I hope you will like it.All the best.Yours,Liu Jie
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