英语作文网络交流

第一篇：英语作文网络交流

Nowadays, Internet technology has more and more developed.It made our communicationmore and more convenience.young people incline tocommunicate with others on internet , and lack communication with people around them.First of all, I want to talk about it's benefits.There has a example, a Chinese girl talkedwith her father on internet at four clock p.m , and her father is in the America at ten clock p.m.If there has no internet,they would have a very long time for wait a letter, but the internet can make you have a communication at anytime and anywhere.It eliminates the barrier of distance,and very convenient for us.The second, It also have some bad influence.young people may spend hours chatting with friends through QQ or MSN, but rarely do they talk with other face to face.Some people say,they become more and more indifferent to each other in real life.Some netizens who are immersed in virtual world even have difficulty in making friends in reality.So,e-communication is a double-edged sword , We should strike a balance between them and make the best of the internet.1.1

Nowadays, Internet technology has more and more developed. [教师点评][学习提示] 易混词汇: technique, technology 均有“技术”之意。

: 多指具体的某种技术和技巧。

: 含义比technique广泛，泛指生产工艺、科学技术。

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It made our communication more and more convenience. [教师点评][学习提示] 易混词汇: communication, traffic, transportation 均有“交通”之意。

: 指邮电、无线电、铁路、公路等各种交通方式或媒介。

: 指来往的东西的情况，表示一种抽象概念的交通流动量。

: 指将乘客或货物从一处运到另一处，也可指交通运输工具。

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young people incline to communicate with others on internet , and lack communication with people around them.

 [教师点评][名词错误] on internet 冠词缺失[句子错误] 句首单词请注意大写好评报错 [批改提示] develop近义表达有advance/ progress/ evolve/ thrive/ flourish[批改提示] technology表示“工艺，技术”。注意与technique的区别。详情点击好评报错 好评报错

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 [标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间不应该有空格，请检查[搭配统计] 动名搭配 lack...communication 在教材中出现过次好评报错

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 [学习提示] 易混词汇: lack, need, want, require 均有“缺少，短少”之意。

: 指完全短缺或数量不足。

: 语气较重，指需要必不可少的东西，强调急需。

: 侧重缺少某种必需之物，或个人渴望得到的东西。

: 使用广泛，语气较轻。强调急需时可与need换用，但有时暗示所需的人或物是完成某一任务必不可少的。

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First of all, I want to talk about it's benefits.

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 [教师点评][句子错误] 本句语法，请检查！[语法检查] 建议把 about it's benefits 改成 about its benefits(Did you mean...)[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间不应该有空格，请检查好评报错 好评报错

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 [学习提示] 易混词汇: advantage, benefit, interest, favour, profit, gain 均有“利益，好处”之意。

: 指因某方面占优势或利用某机会以及对方弱点而获得利益与好处。

: 普通用词，指通过正当手段从物质或精神方面得到的任何好处或利益。

: 作“利益”解时，多用复数形式，既可指集团、群体的利益，又可指个人的利益。

: 指在竞争中获得的advantage,也可指在狭隘的个人利益。

: 着重收益，尤指从物质、钱财等方面获得的利益。

: 指获得的物质利益，也暗示不损坏他人利益而得的无形好处。

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There has a example, a Chinese girl talked with her father on internet at four clock p.m , and her father is in the America at ten clock p.m.

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 [教师点评][句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！[语法检查] 建议把 There has a 改成 There is a(Revise...)[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间不应该有空格，请检查好评报错 好评报错 [批改提示] want的近义表达有intend或tend。好评报错

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 [学习提示] 易混词汇: example, instance, case, sample, illustration, specimen 均有“例子，事例”之意。

: 普通用词，指能代表同类事物性质或一般规律的典型例子。

: 多指用于说明、支持或反证一般事实或理论的事例。

: 多指需要加以认真研究的实例，如病例，案例等。

: 通常指样品。

: 指用来说明、解释某种理论或看法而引用的例证。

: 可与sample换用，但常指人或物中选出的有代表性部分，或指供科研、化验或检验用的标本。

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 [批改提示] 注意区别。

Chinese用作名词，表示“中国人”[a person born or living in China, a person of Chinese descent]时，是可数名词，单复数同形；指中国人民或特指—个或数个中国人时，均加冠词，泛指时不能加。好评报错

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If there has no internet, they would have a very long time for wait a letter, but the internet can make you have a communication at anytime and anywhere.

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 [教师点评][句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间不应该有空格，请检查[批改提示] very的近义表达有extremely, exceedingly, remarkably, intensely。好评报错 好评报错 Improperly implemented, dials can be extremely difficult to manipulate.如果设计不当，刻度盘将会非常难于操作。

Between 1890 and 1930 the woman suffrage movement became exceedingly militant.一八九○年到一九三○年间妇女争取选举权运动变得非常激烈。

The surface of Mars is remarkablydiverse.火星的表面参差不齐。

He was so informed and intensely forceful.他是那么见多识广，极了不起。

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It eliminates the barrier of distance, and very convenient for us.

 [教师点评][句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！[搭配统计] 动名搭配 eliminate...barrier 在教材中出现过次好评报错

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 [学习提示] 易混词汇: obstacle, barrier, obstruction, bar, hindrance 均含“障碍，障碍物”之意。

: 指在达到目的或前进的过程中必须消除或绕过的障碍物，也指起阻碍作用等情况。

: 常指临时的或者可能跨越的障碍。

: 常既指具体的障碍又可指抽象或喻意上的阻碍。

: 既可指阻止进出或通过的栅栏一类的障碍物，也可用于抽象意义障碍。

: 指妨碍他人进步或做事的人或物。

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 [批改提示] eliminate近义表达有do away with/ get rid of/ extinguish/

obliterate/ exterminate

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The second, It also have some bad influence.

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 [教师点评][动词错误] 主谓不一致，建议将it后的谓语动词改为第三人称单数形式。[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间不应该有空格，请检查[推荐词汇] bad在写作中使用的太泛，在某些语境下可考虑换为unfavorable/dreadful或好评报错 好评报错 be less impressive等。

He had formed an unfavorable opinion of my work.他对我的工作已有了成见。

I' ve had a dreadful day everything seems to have gone wrong.我度过了很糟糕的一天，每件事好像都出了差错。

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young people may spend hours chatting with friends through QQ or MSN, but rarely do they talk with other face to face.

 [教师点评][句子错误] 句首单词请注意大写[低频警示] hours chatting with friends through 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语好评报错 [高分表达] 建议将bad改为negative/unfavorable更好一些。[批改提示] influence近义表达有act upon/ affect/ bear upon好评报错 好评报错 好评报错

 [学习提示] 易混词汇: friend, mate, acquaintance, pal 都有“朋友”之意。

: 一般用词，指某人喜爱并乐意与之相交往的人。

: 最普通用词，既可指好友、同事，又可指合伙人，还可指配偶的一方。

: 指彼此相识，但交往不甚密切，相互间没有深厚情感的人。

: 口语用词，指十分要好的朋友。

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Some people say, they become more and more indifferent to each other in real life. [教师点评][学习提示] 易混词汇: genuine, authentic, actual, real, true, factual 均有“真的，真实的，实在的”之意。

: 普通常用词，指真正的，货真价实的，强调非人为或非虚假的。

: 常可与genuine换用，指与事实完全相符，强调准确可靠。

: 指事物的实际存在，并非出自主观臆造。

: 普通用词，含义较广，有时可与actual和genuine换用。指一切真实的或 表面看不出虚假的事物。: 指同实际情况或标准完全一致。口语中多用。

: 与actual同义，但更测重根据事实，不扩大或缩小，不渲染。[批改提示] through的近义表达有in term of或via。好评报错

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Some netizens who are immersed in virtual world even have difficulty in making friends in reality.

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 [教师点评][句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！[名词错误] virtual world 前面冠词缺失[名词错误] in virtual world 冠词缺失[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...friend 在教材中出现过次好评报错 好评报错 好评报错

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 [搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...difficulty 在教材中出现过次

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So, e-communication is a double-edged sword , We should strike a balance between them and make the best of the internet.

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 [教师点评][句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间不应该有空格，请检查[搭配统计] 动名搭配 strike...balance 在教材中出现过次好评报错 好评报错

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 [搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...best 在教材中出现过次

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 [学习提示] 易混词汇: remainder, surplus, rest, remains, balance 均含“剩余部分”之意。: 含义较广，可指数学运算中的余数，也指从整体取走或用掉部分后的所余部分，或一群人走掉一部分剩下的人。

: 指超过需要数量之外的剩余。

: 最普通用词与定冠词连用，指任何指定数量的人或物等。

: 常指人或动物死后的遗体或遗骨，也指古代文明的遗迹或去世作家尚未发表的遗稿。: 指支取存款的余额或减去各种开支后的尾数。

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第二篇：英语网络作文

Will Computers Replace Us?

Nowadays the development of computer technology is beyond our imagination.Not only it is applied to production and economy but also it brings great convenience to our life.However it is so omnipotent that some people believe that it is just time problem for us to be replaced by computer.As for me, I firmly believe that there is no possibility that computers can replace human one day.Because computers are made by human and they have no choice but to carry out their instructions to the human.They can’t stand on their own because they are just machines which are made to help people solve complicate problems.All in all, computers are nothing but an extension of human brains.They can bring us a bright future but will never replace us.

第三篇：关于网络对人们日常交流影响的英语作文

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below.You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.“Dear Andy-How are you? Your mother and I are fine.We both miss you and hope you are doing well.We look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you come downstairs for something to eat, Love, Mom and Dad.”

范文: The modern technology has greatly altered the mode of communication among people.With the help of the Internet, people can easily contact each other anytime anywhere.However, the side effect is that many people have become over-dependent on the Internet and neglected face-to-face communication.As far as I'm concerned, electronic communication cannot fully replace the direct contact among people.Although it seems to bring everyone together, it actually estranges people and decreases the effectiveness of communication.A typical example is that, traditionally, people working in the same office simply walk to others and talk.Today, however, co-workers tend to send e-mails or instant messages through the Internet even when they are sitting next to each other.As words can never convey the full message, it usually takes much more time and rounds of conversation than face-to-face communication, in which people can discuss more directly with less loss of information.To conclude, the Internet enables more effective communication in some situations, but over-dependence on it actually pulls people apart.

第四篇：英语交流材料

逸夫小学英语教学的校本研修之路

为了全面提升教师的素养，促进教育教学质量的提高，我们逸夫小学以学校为主阵地，以学校教师为主体，以解决教育教学中的问题为主要目的在校内开展了一系列的要本研修活动。

我们根据英语教学的现状，总结出英语教学存在的两大问题：一是教师教学观念落后，教学方法陈旧；二是课堂教学效率低下，靠大量占用课余时间完成教学任务。其结果是教师教得累，学生学得苦，学生学习的兴趣逐渐消失，最后得到事倍功半的不良结果。针对以上现象，我校通过加强校本教研活动，提升教师的教学技能，提高课堂教学效率，从而促进教学质量的提高，有了了一定的收获。具体做法如下：

一、团队研讨

合作团队是教师成长的摇篮，团队研讨活动的质量和整个学科教学的质量是密切相关的。因此，我校把英语教师组织起来，成立了由我为组长的英语校本研修团队。我们安排每月一次的英语校本研修团队研修活动，主要进行理论学习和课堂研讨。

1、积极开展理论学习

每学期开学之前，我都会组织教师学习《中小学英语课程标准》和英语教学的相关理论，使每位教师明确课改在英语教学中的要求。在集体学习的基础上，再人手一份材料进行仔细学习和研究，深入领会主要精神，确保每位教师拥有正确的教学观念，明确教学常规。

2、资源共享

资源共享是我们团队研讨活动的又一重要内容。团队规定，凡外出听课或学习的教师必须在团队研讨活动时把所获得的先进经验向组内老师传达，具体包括介绍先进的教育教学经验和方法及专家所作讲座的主要内容等。

比如，上学期姜威娜老师到哈尔滨去听课学习，回来说收获甚大。于是，在回来后的研讨会上，姜老师就把她学到的核心内容向大家作了详细的汇报，并结合教学实际进行分析，使团队的其他老师充分理解和吸收新课程下的新的教育教学理念。

3、课堂研讨

本学期，我们提出了“抓常贵，重实效”的口号，号召全体老师在常规教学中改进教学设计和方法，引导教师有效教学，从而提高课堂教学效率，最大限度地培养学生听、说、读、写等多方面能力，促进教学质量的提高。为此，我们每个年级组都安排了“一边实践，一边反思”的常规课。其操作流程为：（1）设计教学预案；（2）一教师上课，团队其他老师及相关老师听课并作好课堂记录和分析，反馈意见；（3）团队全员参与修改教学预案；（4）教师二度上课，团队其他老师及相关老师再次听课并作好课堂记录和分析，反馈意见；（5）团队再次全员参与修改教学预案；（6）教师三度上课，整个团队其余所有老师进行听课并作好记录和分析；（7）所执教的三位教师进行说课及教后反思，全体老师评课。

通过这种接力实践，连环跟进的手段，最终使每位教师的教学能

力和业务水平都能在不同程度上有所提高。

二、课前有效备课

集体的力量大，团队成员在一起备课，更容易发挥群体优势，切实有效的课前有效备课活动对提高学科质量起着直接的推动作用。为此，我校英语教学团队安排了两周一次的课前有效备课活动，主要完成以下几件工作：

1、分析和研究《英语课程标准》及教材。

学期初，我都召集队员仔细深入研究和分析《英语课程标准》及教材，明确本学段的要求，理清本册教材的重点和难点，安排好教学进度，并制定出教学计划。平时两周一次的团队活动时，再对近两周要教的内容作详尽的分析。明确教学目标，把握重点和难点。

2、共同商讨教学方法，进行集体研修。

课前有效备课是提高备课质量的重要途径，也是落实教学常规、提高课堂教学效率的必要措施。我校英语教学团队结合学生的年龄特点，贯彻“实效为主、激趣为辅”教学活动原则，团队成员群策群力，运用有效的教学方法、设计生动的教学活动，提高了课堂教学效率。

3、更新教学方法。随着课改的不断深入，课堂结构和教学方法也随着在不断更新，这就需要教师进行不短的学习。然而由于多种原因，教师不可能有很多机会外出听课学习，那么采用观看课堂录像进行学习和研究也不乏是一种切实可行的好方法。我们挑选一些示范课进行观看。观看时要求教师作好笔记，记录新颖有效的方法活动，并写出自己的感悟等，以便更新、充实日常教学。

三、团队成员间的互助

这是一种由教师自主进行的活动，因此教师间必须有一种团结协作的良好氛围。为此，我经常倡导大家发扬团结友爱、互帮互助的团队精神，以他人之长补己之短，使整个队伍均衡发展。

为了保证活动的时间，我把英语教学团队老师基本安排同一时间段上课。其活动内容主要有以下几方面：

1、对教育教学中产生的问题及时进行商讨，最后达成共识，寻求最佳答案。

2、教师间传递教育教学信息，交流介绍好的教学方法和经验。

3、发扬团结、协作的精神，共同承担上级安排的任务。这种同伴互助式活动因不受时空影响，特别容易操作，是一种最直接、最见成效的活动。

以上便是我校英语教学团队校本研修的几点做法。通过一段时间的实践和探索，已初见成效，无论是教师的业务能力，还是学生的知识水平都有较明显的提高。近两年来，我校多名英语教师承担县、镇级以上的公开课，姜威娜老师多次承担县级公开课。另有多名学生获县级以上学科竞赛奖，如顾思琪获小学生英语奥利匹克国家级三等奖，刘佳慧获省级一等奖。还有多名老师所写论文在省市级刊物上发表。多名教师的多篇论文获国家、省市级奖励。

可见，行之有效的校本研修对提升教师教育教学能力有极大的好处，也是学校可持续发展的重要保证。虽然我校英语学科的校本研修还不十分成熟，但我深信，只要我们齐心协力，我们的未来会越来越

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第五篇：英语作文话题：有关网络

高考英语作文话题：有关“网络”

高考英语话题作文：有关“网络”

例1：报纸和网站是当今两大主要媒体。请根据下表内容，以 “Newspapers and Websites” 为题，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍这两种媒体的优缺点。

报 纸1.传统媒体，天天更新，信息可靠 2.携带方便，随时随地可以阅读 3.仅有文字和图片

网 站1.新兴媒体，信息更新速度快 2.依赖于电脑及互联网 3.包含文字、图片、音频和视频

注意：1.短文必须包括表中所有内容，可以适当发挥;2.词数：100-120 3.参考词汇：更新update;音频audio;视频video

Newspapers and Websites

Newspapers and websites are two major new media in the world today, both of which can provide us with lots of news and information.But they’re different in some ways.Newspapers enjoy a longer history and often come out daily with more reliable news and information.They can be carried and read almost anywhere you like.So many people like reading them.But they can only contain texts and photos.On the other hand, websites are quite new and popular, especially among young people.Websites have not only texts with pictures but also audios and videos, which makes stories more interesting.What’s more, they are updated from time to time.So the latest news is always seen on websites instead of in newspapers.But it is not quite convenient for people without a computer connected with the Internet to get information from websites.例2：目前，一些诸如GG, MM, Xia Mi 等网络语言在青少年中极为盛行，并且出现在家庭作业报告，甚至全国入学考试的作文中。请你以 “Should Internet Slang Be Prohibited(禁止)?”为题，根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文，并谈谈你自己的看法。

一些同学认为 网络语言生动、时尚 网络语言充满幽默与智慧 使网上聊天更快捷；另一些同学认为 网络语言缺乏思想性没有被大部分人理解、接受过多使用使人不解，甚至误解?；你的看法

注意：1.短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数;2.词数：100左右 3.参考词汇：生动的vivid;智慧intelligence

Should Internet Slang Be Prohibited?

At present, Internet Slang, such as “GG, MM, Xia Mi”，has become popular among the teenagers.There are different opinions on Internet Slang.Some students think Internet Slang is vivid, fashionable and full of humor and intelligence.Besides, it makes chatting on the Internet quicker.However, some other students think Internet Slang lacks depth of thought and is too simple.Also, it is hard to understand and not accepted by most people.The words sometimes might make people confused, even resulting in misunderstanding.Every coin has two sides.In my opinion, living in the Information Age, if we don’t know the Internet Slang, we seem to fall behind the times.It will be OK as long as these terms are used correctly in proper situations.例3：假如你是李华，最近你对本班的60名同学(男女各半)进行了上网目的的调查，结果见下表。请你用英语给某报社写一篇报道，反映你调查的内容，以引起公众的关注。

注意：1.报道应包括图表中的所有内容;2.叙述中要适当增加个人观点，对学生上网情况进行评论，并提出建议;3.词数：100左右;4.参考词汇：做调查make a survey

Dear editor，I have recently made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls in our class about their purpose(s)of getting on the Internet.The girls’ favorite is chatting, but few boys like it.What boys like to do most is playing games and the girls also like them.Both boys and girls like to read news or send e-mails on the Internet.Maybe they think it’s the most convenient way to get information or keep in touch with friends.As for studying, the numbers of boys and girls are equal, but altogether only several of them will use the Internet as a tool to study.