大学生英语竞赛写作辅导

第一篇：大学生英语竞赛写作辅导

B类

2010 初赛

a letter to a friend introducing the school sports center;comments on one of Bertrand Russell’s statements

2009 决赛

2009初赛

a letter to a company declining a job offer;comments on a poem

2008决赛

a letter from the dean of the English Department in your University to a prestigious scholar of British Literature to come to be a judge of the English speech contest;comments on a poem

2008初赛

an email of apology for missing an email appointment with your foreign language;comments on a poem

2007决赛

a letter to a friend sharing your work experience in a youth camp and giving advice for the job application;comments on a poem

2007初赛

a letter to a language school asking for information about a summer language course;comments on a poem

Formal Features

1.letter

Dear ***,。。。。。。。。。。。。。。

。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。

Yours sincerely, / Sincerely,***

(Dean of the English Department)

2.email

From: ***

To: ***

Date: 19 April, 2009

Subject: ……

Dear ***,。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。

。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。

。。。。。。。Thank you.Best wishes.3.信件应根据内容和身份、对象的区别而注意措辞。

4.文学评论基本都包括两方面：discuss the moral of the poem / passage;express your personal views on the subject

C类

2010 初赛

write a notice;Key Considerations for the School Leaver(career planning)

2009 决赛

a memo（格式同上面email, 除To/From顺序反）;Take My Advice on How to Control Stress 2009初赛

an email;report on fashion industries

2008决赛

analysis of a chart;Books—An Endangered Species?

2008初赛

a letter;computer dependency

2007决赛

an advertisement;comments on a newspaper article on the loss of national and cultural identity 2007初赛

a letter;comments on a newspaper article on personal freedom

2005-2006

1.写信要注意署名的要求，一般会明确要求用某指定化名

2.看图写话，一般包括两个要求: interpret the message conveyed by the picture;make your comments on what is represented

3.要求写个speech的话只要起个鼓动性的title写篇议论文就行

附: notice只要以本单词大写作标题就行；advertisement 只要以相关主题作标题就行，如English Club

[精华]写作绝招

开头万能公式

1． 开头万能公式一：名人名言

有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？”，很好办：编！

原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？

经典句型：

A proberb says, “ You are only young once.”（适用于已记住的名言）

It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（适用于自编名言）

更多经典句型：

As everyone knows, No one can deny that„

2． 开头万能公式二：数字统计

原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。

原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：

According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造：Honesty：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。Travel by Bike：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工

具是自行车。

Youth：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。

Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。

更多句型：

A recent statistics shows that „

结尾万能公式

1． 结尾万能公式一：如此结论

说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：

Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！

更多过渡短语：

to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus

更多句型：

Thus, it can be concluded that„, Therefore, we can find that„

2． 结尾万能公式二：如此建议

如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？

更多句型：

Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.写作的“七项基本原则”

一、长短句原则

工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：

As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！

强烈建议：在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。

二、主题句原则

国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感！相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的！

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）.Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一二三原则

领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点„ 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。

1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗）

2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因：俗）

3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗）

4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）

5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐）

6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐）

7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐）

8）most important of all, moreover, finally

9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）

10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）

建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！

四、短语优先原则

写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其

一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点—精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其

二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办？用短语是一个办法！比如：

I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。

五、多实少虚原则

原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospitable 之类的形象词。再比如：

走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room

但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room

小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room

小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room

老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room

所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！

六、多变句式原则

1）加法（串联）

都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：I enjoy music, and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：

Not only is the fur coat soft, but it is also warm.其它的短语可以用：

Besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover

2）转折（拐弯抹角）

批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。

The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短语：

despite that, still, however, nevertheless然而, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding虽然，尽管

3）因果（so, so, so）

昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友„可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！

The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短语：

then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

4）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重）

有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。

举例：This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分：

When to go, Why he goes away„

5）附加（多此一举）

如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他；或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。

The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr.Liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成；定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。

6）排比（排山倒海句）

文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势！

Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.（气势恢宏）

要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可！

七、挑战极限原则

既然是挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀！

原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如：

The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可一些出这样的句子，不得高分才怪！

文章主体段落三大杀手锏

一、举实例

思维短路，举实例！提出一个观点，举实例！提出一个方案，举实例！而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子！In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fume熏him or her.更多句型：

To take „ as an example, One example is„, Another example is„, for example

二、做比较

方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的；

世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点（through comparison）和不同点（through contrast）。下面是一些短语：

相似的比较：

in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner

相反的比较：

on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with „, „

三、换言之

没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。

实际就是重复重复再重复！下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!

I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我们举过的例子：

I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.因此可以这样说：I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短语：

in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply

第二篇：英语写作辅导

英语写作辅导

英语短文的结构及段落的组织

一、短文的结构

文章、段落、句子、词组、单词

从文到段，从段到句，是篇章结构的主要内容。

了解篇章结构，是进行写作的必备常识。

一篇文章通常可分为以下三种段落：

(一)引言段(Introductory Paragraph)：向读者介绍此片文章的主题及背景材料。在文中起到开宗明义，即“启”的作用，是全文的主题所在。

(二)主题段(Body Paragraph(s))：也叫正文，是文章的主体部分，也是情节发展、事实说明或者层层递进的部分，把要论述的，具体而明晰。文章内容要具有 一致性、连贯性，在文章中起到“承”和“转”的作用。

(三)结尾段(Conclusion Paragraph)：也叫结束语，是由通篇文章所得出的简短结论，或者事情发展到了最后一个情节，即故事的结束、结局、其作用是概括全文内容，进一步强调或者肯定文章的中心思想，用以加深印象，在文章中起到“合”的作用。

二、文章的段落

段落是英语作文的基本结构单位，是文章中相对独立的一个部分。

段落与文章的三个组成部分相对应，通常由三个部分组成：主题句、发展句和结尾句。短文写作的技巧与套路

一、写作步骤

1.多读多练 充分准备 2.细读指令 认真审题 3.理清思路 构思布局 4.精选素材 列出提纲 5.动笔写作 组织成文 6.用词简洁 篇幅适中 7.认真检查 仔细修改

二、写作套路 1.写作类型 1)现象阐释型

通常要求考生对某一现象进行解释说明，分析其原因并加以评论。其基本结构是：首先描述现象并说明其现状；然后分析这种现象的原因或相关因素；最后提出建议或总结观点。典型题目如：

Why College Students Have Difficulty Finding Jobs?

Why College Students Take a Part-time Job?

Chatting on Line

2)问题解决型

通常要求考生从试题的提示行文字入手，描述其反映出的问题，提出解决方案或应对措施。其基本结构是：首先引出要解决的问题及其严重性或必要性，并简要分析其产生的原因或带来的危害和影响；然后提出解决问题的办法或措施；最后表明自己的态度，提出建议并展望前景。典型题目如下： How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic How to Succeed in a Job Interview How I Finance My College Life Staying Healthy hatting on Line 3）对比选择型

这类作文的标志十分明显，其要求比较明确，即直接要求考生比较两种观点或两种做法，进而表明自己对问题或事物的态度或观点，也就是做出选择。其基本结构：首先对要评论的事物或现象进行整体介绍；然后陈述两种不同的观点或做法及其理由;之后表明自己的观点或态度。典型题目如： It Pays to Be Honest Should Education Be Commercialized? Choose a Famous University or a Favorite Major? Reading Selective or Extensively? 4）利弊评述型

此类作文要求考生客观地分析和评论某一事物的正反两方面，或在某一问题上反映出的两种不同看法，并不需要明确表明态度，说明事物的对与错，尤其是会有较大争议的问题，可采用平衡利弊的态度，提出某种希望和设想。典型题目如： The Positive and Negative Aspects of Skyscrapers The Development of a Private Car Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good LUCK? College Life in Internet Era My View on Examination 5)观点论证型

此类作文一般要求考生根据题目所给的论点，按照题目要求通过摆事实、讲道理的方式对该论点进行论证或反驳。其基本结构是：首先提出要论证或反驳的论点；然后提出论据对其进行论证或反驳；最后表明自己的立场和看法。典型题目如：

Harmful of Fake Commodities Why I Attended College The Job I Like Best The Benefits of Making Friends of Different Kinds 2.段落类型

（1）描述段：一般首先对命题中提供的信息（如某现象、问题、背景或事件）进行提炼和概括，然后进行扩展描述。

（2）说明段：主要对原因、危害、影响、作用、方法、过程等进行分析说明，段落的组织必须要注意以下两点：一是要条理清楚，尽量使用一些比较清晰的表达方式。如说明原因时，可以使用the main reason, what is more, as a result等短语，以突出文章的条理性；二是要根据标题和提纲内容确定合适的说明角度和说明方法，如说明原因或举例说明等。（3）议论段：通常是考生根据文章的主题提出、论证或总结某项观点。写议论段时应做到观点明确、论证充分，并有令人信服的数据和例子来支持论点，使文章具有说服力。议论段主要有四种：提出观点段（有时是提出一种观点，有时是提出两种对立观点）、论证观点段、对比论证段（对两种观点进行对比论证，有时可分成两段来分述两种观点）和总结观点段。3.写作模板 1）现象阐释型

①Nowadays, there exists a social/economic/environmental phenomenon, which has aroused great concern among people around us./ 总体现象has increasingly become a common concern of the public./ 总体现象is commonly accepted by the people from all walks of life.②According to a survey, …。

③There are a couple of reasons booming this phenomenon./This problem/phenomenon has a great effect on … ④Firstly,/above all/First of all/原因一/影响一⑤Secondly/what’s more/ furthermore（原因二/影响二）⑥Besides/Finally（原因三/影响三）

⑦As a result/ Therefore/ consequently,（结果）⑧As far as I am concerned/ As to me /In my opinion, “我”的观点/态度/做法⑨furthermore,进一步说明 ⑩Therefore/ based on the above discussions, I can conclude/ it can be concluded that…(总结全文)(1)描述段：描述现象 ①开门见山，总述现象

②阐释现象的具体表现或变化(2)说明段：阐述原因

③承上启下，引出原因/因素/影响 ④具体阐述原因一/因素一/影响一

⑤列举原因二/因素二/影响二（可以用例证支持）⑥列举原因三/因素三/影响三（可以用例证支持）⑦总结以上原因或因素导致的结果/该现象的最终影响(3)议论段：表明观点

⑧我对此现象的思考或看法（可能是个人选择或者是对现象、趋势或影响的评述）⑨进一步说明自己的看法或陈述理由 ⑩总结全文

例：

Cards 1.现代城市中持卡的人越来越多； 2.原因在于。。； 3.“我”的看法。

①Nowadays, holding cards has become a common phenomenon.②According to a survey, over 80%of people in big cities hold various kinds of cards issued by banks, restaurants, supermarkets ,etc.（描述段）③There are a number of reasons for it.④ First of all, it is convenient to consume by cards.⑤What’s more, it is safer to carry cards than cash.For example, if one’s cards are lost, the owner needn’t worry too much because no one else can get the money out without the password.⑥In addition, cards can give card holders certain privilege or discount in service.⑦Therefore, holding cards, especially among the youth, becomes fashionable recently.（说明段）⑧ As for me, cards have a bright future.⑨With the development of science and technology, cards will become much safer and easier to use.⑩Therefore, it can be concluded that more people will use cards.(议论段，表明观点)

模仿练习1 • Limiting The Use of Disposable Plastic Bags outline:

1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用 2.造成的问题

3.限制使用的意义 模仿练习2 • On Power Failure •

1．很多城市缺电现象严重 •

2．分析原因 •

3．提出建议 模仿练习3 • Online Education • Outline:

1.目前网络教育形成热潮

2.我认为这股热潮的的原因是……

3.我对网络教育的评价 模仿练习4 Skipping Classes on College Campus Outline：

1.大学里逃课现象时有发生； 2.分析学生逃课的原因； 3.如何减少逃课现象 2）问题解决型

①In recent years, increasing numbers of people关注/牵涉/参与不良现象或某一问题 ②It is obvious that 危害一/作用一 ③Additionally, 危害二/作用二④therefore, special/considerable attention should be paid to 该问题

⑤on the one hand/ firstly, 方法一 ⑥On the other hand/ secondly, 方法二⑦ In addition/ thirdly, 方法三

⑧Of course, following these suggestions/methods may not surely solve the problem, but it is worth of trying ⑨As for me/ in my opinion, “我”的思考或看法 ⑩Only in this way… 倒装句总结全文/undoubtedly, it is necessary/ essential… 根本途径(1)描述段：描述问题

①开门见山，综述不良现象或某一问题 ②问题的危害一/解决问题的作用一 ③问题的危害二/解决问题的作用二

④承上启下，表达解决问题的必要性和紧迫性，引出解决问题的方法或相关因素(2)说明段：说明方法因素 ⑤解决方法一/决定因素一 ⑥解决方法二/决定因素二 ⑦解决方法三/决定因素三(3)议论段：

⑧指出这些方法不一定能成功解决问题，但付出总是值得的 ⑨“我”倾向的方法和途径

⑩提出根本途径或建议，应该采取的态度，总结全文 例： How to Treat the Parent-Child Relationship 1.父母与孩子之间的代沟越来越大； 2.代沟带来那些影响；

3.如何消除代沟，并改善父母与孩子之间的关系。

①More and more people are paying attention to the generation gap between parents and their children.②Obviously, the generation gap is a source of family disharmony.③Additionally, it may lead to a number of social problem.④Therefore, measures should be taken to deal with the issue.⑤On the one hand, parents should be more tolerant to their children , remembering that a child is a child and there is always such a stage in one’s growth.⑥On the other hand, children should also understand that without parents’ guidance, they won’t be able to grow up healthily.⑦ Finally, parents should spent more time with their children.⑧Of course , following these suggestions may not surely solve the problem, but it is worth the effort.⑨As for me, mutual understanding is the key solution.⑩Undoubtedly, it is essential for both parents and children to understand each other for a good parent—child relationship.模仿练习1 • How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic

• 1.Importance of solving the problem of

heavy traffic • 2.Ways to solve the problem of heavy traffic • 3.My suggestion 模仿练习2 • How to Solve the Housing Problem in Big Cities.• 1.解决住房问题的重要性

• 2.三种可能解决住房问题的方案：

1)多造高层建筑；

2)向地下发展；

3)疏散城市人口。• 3)对比选择型 • 3.我的建议

①When asked about/ when it comes to事物/问题 , different people will offer different opinions.②Some people take it for granted that观点一③ in their opinion, 选择观点一的理由一④Besides,选择观点一的理由二

⑤ however, others hold that观点二⑥ They maintain that观点二/选择观点二的理由一⑦And观点二/选择观点二的理由二

⑧Weighing up these two arguments, I am for the former/ later viewpoint/ choice.⑨”我”的理由⑩Therefore , as stated above, 重申观点/选择(1)议论段：提出观点

①开门见山，指出人们对某事物/问题存在不同的观点/选择 ②提出观点一/选择一

③提出观点一/选择一的理由一 ④提出观点一/选择一的理由二(2)议论段：对比论证 ⑤提出观点二/选择二 ⑥提出观点二/选择二的理由一 ⑦提出观点二/选择二的理由二(3)议论段：总结观点 ⑧标明“我”的倾向 ⑨阐述“我”的理由

⑩总结全文，重申“我”的观点/选择

例：To Be a Small Fish in a Big Pond or a Big Fish in a Small Pond 1.在大企业工作的特点； 2.在小企业工作的特点； 3.我的选择。

①To the question whether to work in a large enterprise or in a small firm, different people may have different answers.②Some may choose to be a small fish in a big pond.③They hold that they can derive a sense of pride from being a member of a famous organization such as General Motors.④Besides, they can work with people from different parts of the world.⑤Still others may prefer to be a big fish in a small pond.⑥According to them, in a small company, they may be given greater responsibilities without much restriction.⑦Consequently, they can show their talents fully and freely.⑧Weighing up these two choices, I am for the latter.⑨I prefer to work in a small enterprise, where I can get more chances of promotion.⑩I’d rather become an important figure within my own small pond.练习1 Money Outline: 1.有人认为金钱是万能的。

2.有人说金钱是万恶之源（the source of all crimes）3.我对金钱的看法。模仿练习2 Choose a Famous University or a Favorite Major Outline: 1.有人认为应该选择重点大学； 2.有人认为应该选择重点专业； 3.我的观点。模仿练习3 Reading Selectively or Extensively? 针对阅读，人们有不同的看法： 1.有人认为应该精读； 2.有人认为应该泛读； 3.“我”的看法 模仿练习4 The Best Means of Transportation Outline：

1.私家车越来越多，污染问题、交通问题随之产生； 2.人们出行时其实有多中交通方式可以选择； 3.从健康和环保节能出发，我认为最好的交通方式是 4)模板一（驳论）

①Up to now, many people hold it true that某观点 ②They believe进一步说明此观点③However, recent survey/ research shows that 与上述观点相反的论点 ④The arguments for this point of view can be listed as follows.⑤Above all, 论据一⑥For example,（支持论据一的事例）⑦Furthermore,论据二及支持论据二的事例 ⑧Most importantly, 论据三

⑨All that has been discussed above points to the fact that重申本文论点 ⑩Therefore,与该观点相符合的做法和态度

(1)议论段：提出观点

①指出普遍存在的某种观点活态度或做法 ②进一步说明此观点

③转折提出与之相反的本论文观点 ④承上启下，引出对观点的论证(2)议论段：论证观点 ⑤列举论据一

⑥举例说明论据一

⑦列举论据二并加以说明 ⑧列举论据三

(3)总结段：总结观点 ⑨承接上文，重申观点

⑩总结全文，可表达我们应该坚持该观点或采取该观点相符合的做法 模板二（立论）

①People are familiar with/it is widely accepted that某观点②As we know,观点正确性的表现③Therefore,小结观点④There are numerous examples supporting this argument.⑤ A case in point is 例一 ⑥For another example, 引出说明例二⑦Moreover, 阐述第三个例子

⑧From what has been discussed above, we should understand that重申观点 ⑨But(one thing we have to notice is that)提出个人建议 ⑩Therefore,总结全文(1)议论段：提出观点

①开门见山，直接提出观点 ②阐述观点正确性的表现 ③小结观点

④承上启下，引出对观点的论证(2)议论段：论证观点

⑤列举支持论点的具体事例一 ⑥列举支持论点的具体事例二 ⑦列举支持论点的具体事例三(3)总结段：总结观点

⑧承接上文，重申观点 ⑨指出坚持该论点应该注意什么 ⑩总结全文，指出正确的态度或做法 例1

Wealth and Happiness 1.每个人都想获得财富，财富似乎就是幸福，其实不然； 2.世界上有许多东西是财富换不来的。

①Up to now, many people still hold that wealth can bring happiness.②They believe that with a great amount of money, they must live a happier life.③However, recent survey shows that wealth is not necessarily associated with happiness.④The arguments for this point of view can be listed as follows.⑤Above all ,good health plays an important role above wealth in a happy life.⑥For example, people can buy medicine with money, but cannot buy health.⑦Furthermore, wealth may encourage those harmful habits which may ruin the wealth owner, such as addition to drugs and gambling.⑧Most importantly, there is one thing essential to happiness which cannot be bought with wealth---love.⑨All that has been discussed above shows that wealth is not equal to happiness.⑩Therefore, we should not be crazy about money and earn it with honest work.例2

Blood Donation ①In modern society, it is widely accepted that blood donation is good for health.②As we know, donating blood benefit both society and people.③Therefore, people should be encouraged to donate blood regularly.④Many remarkable facts can support this argument.⑤First of all, according to medical research findings, donating blood can effectively reduce the happening of certain disease.⑥What’s more, donating blood regularly could reduce the pace of aging.⑦Besides, donating blood regularly could help people keep good mood.⑧All mentioned above tell us that blood donation does more than harm to health.⑨We should hold a positive attitude towards it.⑩Therefore, it can be concluded that bllod donation should be encouraged under the scientific instruction.5)利①For the past years,某事物has been widely accepted by people/has come into people’s daily life.②No one can deny that 某事物的好处.③For one thing, 好处一④For another, 好处二

⑤However, just as all coins have two sides, there are also disadvantages about某事物的弊端.⑥For example 弊端一⑦Moreover, 弊端二.⑧Finally,弊端三

⑨In my opinion, “我”的建议⑩only in this way, can we 总结全文.弊评述型(1)议论段：

①开门见山，总述现象 ②分析某事物的有利面 ③举例说明好处一 ④举例说明好处二 ⑤举例说明好处三

(2)说明段：

⑥承上启下，引出对弊端的讨论 ⑦举例说明弊端一 ⑧举例说明弊端二

(3)总结段：

⑨“我”的建议（如何趋利避害）⑩总结全文 例

The Positive and Negative Aspects of Home Computers 1.家用电脑的普及； 2.家用电脑的好处；

3.家用电脑带来的问题。

①Nowadays, computers have come into people’s home as one of common household appliances.②There is no doubt that like TV, home computers benefit people greatly.③With the computer, the home becomes a library, a school, an office and an entertainment center.④All kinds of information can be close at one’s finger tips.⑤In addition, home computers bring people far away closer to us.⑥Despite the convenience that home computers bring about, they have disadvantages.⑦For example, people, especially the youth, may easily get addicted to computer games.⑧Besides, since nearly everything can be done in front of the computer, we may become more isolated from people around us.⑨In my opinion, we all should consider how to control home computers, so that they won’t control us.⑩Only in this way, can we make full use of them, while avoiding of the side effects.模仿练习1 The Development of Private Cars Outline：

1.私家车普及的好处； 2.私家车带来的问题； 3.“我”的看法 模仿练习3 Reading Selectively or Extensively? 针对阅读，人们有不同的看法： 1.有人认为应该精读； 2.有人认为应该泛读； 3.“我”的看法

第三篇：全国大学生英语竞赛C类写作

2008年初赛：

Task I(10 marks)

Directions: You are required to write a Notice in about 100 words to inform the students and English teachers of a lecture on American Liberal Education by Prof.Gilbert in the English Department Hall.Please wri on the Answer Sheet.Task II(20 marks)

Directions: For this part, you are required to write a composition on The Anti-Addiction System.You should write at least 120 words and please write it on the Answer Sheet.Now in China the anti-addiction system and a “real name checking” system have been adopted in Cyber cafes to prevent players under 18 from becoming addicted to online games.What do students think about this system? What is your opinion about this?

Part VII Writing

Task I

NOTICE

We are very honored to have Prof.Richard Gilbert from Harvard University to give us a lecture on American Liberal Education.Prof.Gilbert, who graduated from Standford in 1979 and received his Ph.D.in Education from Harvard in 1984, has been conducting research and teaching international students in Harvard for more than 20 years.He has become a leading expert in this field and has published several books and numerous papers on liberal education and education policy.His humorous and thought provoking speech will surely benefit all the audience.The lecture will be given in the English Department Conference Hall from 2:30 to 4:30.p.m., Friday afternoon, November 16, 2007.All the teachers and students are welcome.English Department

Task II

The Anti-Addiction System

Now in China, the adoption of the anti-addiction system and a “real name checking” system in netbars has led to a heated debate among students.Some say that students' self-discipline is very limited and now at least 14 percent of the urban teenage players are addicted to the Internet and some children even repeatedly disappear from home to spend their nights at local Internet cafes, and play truant from school also.Therefore, they have failed quite a few school exams.In this sense, the new policy can prevent minors developing online addiction.Others claim that the anti-addiction system is only a means to an end and cannot remove the root of the online addiction completely and they believe the

key is to guide the minors to improve their self-control and balance their work and play.In my opinion, the latter point hits home for me because it cuts to the chase.However, education is a long process and takes time, which means before education produces effects on children, some supplementary measures should also be taken to speed up the process and the anti-addiction system is one of them.参考资料：08C类

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2009年初赛

Task I

Dear Tom,As youknow ,I’m organizing a two—day debating contest which is to be held on May 1-2, I am working on a schedule for it now and I will have to send it by E-mail tomorrow.I need some new ideas urgently.Please help me out and give me some fresh ideas by tomorrow morning.Meanwhile, would you please contact some of our teachers and invite them to be judge? Let me know their names by Friday.Thank you.Task II

Report on the Changes of Fashion for Young People in Recent Years in China Introduction

This report sets out to present how fashions for young people have changed in recent years in China.Findings

According to my survey, I have found the following three points:

1、Nowadays, the young are seeking for individuality instead of uniformity in the old days and they want the clothes to be unique.2、Thanks to the mass data, the young people are deeply influenced by the fashion trend throughout the word.The North Korean style in hugely popular among them in recent five or six years.3、The general trend is to be casual and simple.Conclusion

Therefore, it can be concluded that the young people in China now are looking for individuality, casualness and they would like to follow the fashion abroad.2009年决赛

Task I

To: the Personnel Director and the Training Manager

From: assistant to the Customer Service Director

Date: 23 June 2009

Subject: decreasing sales

As requested by the Customers Service Director , I have done a survey concerning our decreasing sales.This survey shows that our staff are not interested in helping customers and they are unhappy in their jobs.Therefore, our sales have been decreasing for several months.I think we should give bonuses to the best seller every month to improve our staff’s enthusiasm.What’s more, we should have some special offer every day to attract more customers.Task II

Take My Advice on How to Control Stress

As the competition between students increases, more and more students feel stressful about their course.As far as I’m concerned , we can take the initiative to reduce the stress.Firstly, make a plan for everyday study.For instance, you keep learning English for two hours every day, and within the two hours, you will learn 10 new words and read 2 articles.This way you can learn more than 1000 words three month later and your reading ability will improve as well.Therefore, you don’t have to stay up late before the English examination.As long as you keep learning every day, you will find you are well prepared for the exams already.Secondly, do something else to divert your mind before exams.For example, if you can play piano, play your favorite songs for one or two hours and you will feel relaxed.To conclude, keep learning regularly and cultivate a hobby and you will find yourself relaxed about your course.参考：?fr=qrl&cid=951&index=2&fr2=query

大学生英语竞赛D类资料

全国大学生英语竞赛B类(英语专业）资料

英语全国竞赛c类试题的答案

第四篇：小学英语竞赛辅导计划

小学英语竞赛辅导计划

姜山中心小学 左秀梅 小学英语教学的活动立足于现实，着眼于学生的未来的学习和发展，仅靠课堂内教学远不能满足学生学习英语的需要，所以应重视课外活动。课外活动是课堂教学的辅助形式，是课堂教学的补充和延伸，为培养学生学习英语的兴趣,激发他们学习积极性，为了丰富小学生的课余生活，也为了本校学生在市教研室组织的小学英语竞赛中获得好成绩，特制订竞赛辅导计划如下：

一．辅导目的1．通过有效的课外辅导，培养学生对英语及英语学习的兴趣。

2．授人以渔，培养学生英语学习能力。

3．培养学生良好的行为习惯，形成健康的个性心理。

4．提高学生的整体素质，为竞赛做好全面的准备。

二．辅导对象

本校小学部五年级学生，原则上学生总数不超过20人。

三．辅导内容

1．把小学英语课本一到五册出现的四会单词领着学生复习一遍。

2．为学生提供一些选择题，特别是情景会话。

3．加强对学生阅读理解的辅导。特别是教给学生如何着手考虑文章中出现的问题。

4．锻炼学生的写作能力。为他们提供不同内容及画面，让学生根据所给内容提示等能够写出没有语法错误，以及语句通顺的文章。

5．辅导课外书中的出现一些常见题型。如：智力测试、名词单复数的用法。交际用语等。

第五篇：2012英语四级写作辅导

记叙文的思路与练习

记叙文是以叙述人物的经历和事物的发展变化过程为主要表现形式的一种文体。记叙文既可以以写人为主，又可以以写事为主。写记叙文要注意记叙文的“六大要素”即：

时间(When)—— 何时发生，有没有具体时间?

地点(Where)—— 何地发生，有没有地点变化?

人物(Who)—— 何人参与，谁是主角?

事件(What)—— 发生了什么，有何特点?

原因(Why)—— 事件的起因?

结果(How)—— 事件的经过及结局?

一般说来，在一篇记叙文中这六大要素是缺一不可的。

记叙文的思路就围绕这六大要素充分展开。

【例】四级考试中，只出现过一次专门的记叙文体裁的写作，即“An Early Morning Walk”(1988.6.)，2003年6月出现过包含记叙文的作文，即“An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident”。

对于“An Early Morning Walk”，知道命题要求后，我们就要开始构思了。

When：题目已规定了是“清晨”，在这个时候，“我”去散步。

Where：到哪儿散步?去公园?在校园里?在街上(街上空气不好，还是不去!)。

Who：在公园里看到晨练的人：中老年人、年轻人、小孩子;在校园里看到读书背单词的学生。

What：人们热火朝天地做操，随音乐跳舞，打球，等等。

Why：清晨空气清新，适合锻炼;一日之际在于晨，背背书，读读单词。

当然，由这个题目可以令人想到很多东西，因篇幅所限，我们做了删减。

参考范文

An Early Morning Walk

One morning I got up very early，and everything around was very quiet.The sun had just risen，shining brilliantly and everything seemed to be covered with a layer of golden silk.There were only some birds singing occasionally in the tall trees.I strolled along the street toward the park，breathing the fresh air and feeling extremely happy.When I arrived at the park，I found，to my surprise，that there were so many people there.Men and women，boys and girls，all were enjoying themselves in their various activities.Some were doing morning exercises，some were playing badminton and some old people were having their tea while talking to each other cheerfully.I wandered around the park.To my delight，I found a few middle-school students talking to each other in English in one corner of the park.I went up and spoke to them in English.We soon became friends.I was very glad to find another opportunity to practice my spoken English.On the way home，I realized that an early morning walk really was good and healthful.Taking early morning walks makes one healthy and wise.【点评】文章按照时间顺序(in chronological order)，第一句话点明时间(One morning)、人物(第一人称“I”)，并简要描述了早晨的特点(What was the setting)，接着第二段第一句话交代地点(in the park)，然后介绍公园里人们及作者的活动(What was happening)，最后在文章结尾点题，即，归纳中心思想——Taking early morning walks makes one healthy and wise.仅仅189个单词既满足了记叙文的“六大要素”，又有明确的中心思想和生动的细节，行文方式符合要求。

1.以“A Most Unlucky Day”为题，想想该怎么写。注意：题目的中心词是“unlucky”。

When：

Where：

Who：

What：

Why：

How：

参考思路

When：哪一天是最倒霉的日子?考前的晚上?公布成绩的日子?周末?

Where：在大街上违章停车?在学校?在商场?在经常光顾的地方——食堂、餐厅、麦当劳、图书馆、溜冰场、投影厅?

Who：是我倒霉?是好友?你?那个蛋白质室友?

What：拿到罚单?上课上班迟到?失恋?被窃?四级没过?

Why：倒霉嘛，无非是运气不好，睡过头了、态度恶劣、偷懒、不刻苦„

How：一团糟，挨批，心情极度沮丧，不过也无所谓嘛„

想完之后，我们再花点儿功夫将关联的东东挑出来，别忘了本文的中心是“unlucky”。根据自己的思路，写一篇文章：

参考范文

A Most Unlucky Day

I had a streak of tough luck yesterday.Everything，it seemed to me，went wrong.And I simply couldn’t understand why all the bad things happened to me in one single day.In the morning，as luck would have it，my alarm clock didn’t ring，and with an aching head I woke up half an hour later than usual.I was in such a hurry that，when making an omelet，I got my fingers burnt and splashed the omelet all over the floor of the kitchen.Having no time for my breakfast at that point，I rushed out of my house with an empty stomach and hurting fingers.I had intended to catch the 7:30 subway，but somehow I couldn’t make it.I became very nervous at the mere thought of being late for my English class，because my English teacher is very strict and demanding，and he gets angry whenever any student is late for his class.After getting off the 7:40 subway，I raced all the way from the station to my school，thinking it would be impossible for me to flag a taxi at this hour of the day.At the corner of the street near my school，I abruptly bumped into a man and，worse luck，broke the glasses I had bought for 500 yuan just last week.With scarcely any time to receive or offer an apology，I just kept on running and running.At long last，I arrived at the school only to find，with great sadness mixed with some relief，that the school was empty and the classrooms were all locked.It was Saturday.My ill luck showed no sign of coming to an end.When I returned home greatly frustrated，I found myself locked out.In my hurry I had forgotten to bring the key with me.Just my luck!【点评】这篇文章按照时间顺序一气呵成。文章的标题、第一句和最后一句都点出了中心思想：“I had a most unlucky day”。故事从作者醒来开始，在慌慌张张中煎蛋卷、赶地铁、急奔学校、撞破眼镜、发现白忙乎了一场，最后猛然清醒——匆忙之中忘了钥匙!整个故事描述得精彩生动，既有动作的细节又有作者内心的感受，让读者也身临其境地体会了倒霉的一天。

根据以下提示叙述一场交通事故：1)用第一人称;2)短语提示：drive home at about 30 kilometers an hour;it was dark;a small girl chased a dog;not hit her but hit a car in the other direction3)写出作者对此交通意外的感想。

参考范文

Last night I was driving home from work.I had an accident.I was following behind a truck，driving at about 30 kilometers an hour.I was watching the traffic carefully because it was getting dark.Suddenly a small girl ran onto the road from the left.She was chasing a dog and she wasn’t paying any attention to the traffic.I immediately applied the brakes and turned the steering wheel quickly to the right.The girl jumped towards the side of the road as soon as she saw my car.Fortunately I did not hit her，but I hit a car coming in the other direction.Luckily I was not driving very fast so the damage was not serious.It is better to damage a car than to injure a young child，I thought to myself.B： 以第一人称写一篇记叙文，讲述在旅行中经历的一件小事。

参考范文

Go on a Mediterranean Journey

My wife and I have always enjoyed traveling by sea，and last year we decided to go on a Mediterranean journey.Although our holiday was rather expensive we thought that the high standard of accommodation，the first-class food and the many interesting places we saw were well worth the price we paid.We found that most of the other passengers were friendly and interesting，but there was one man，a Mr.James，who irritated and annoyed us.Whatever subject we talked about，it seemed that he was an expert at it.He had，apparently，read more books，visited more countries and studied more languages，than anyone else had.After a few days，we ate our meals in silence，because nobody wanted to begin a conversation that would soon be taken over by this man.Then my wife had an idea.She suggested that we might think of an unusual subject，look it up in an encyclopedia and then talk about it at dinner.If it were an unusual subject，Mr.James could not possibly know anything about it.The subject we chose was “English Agriculture in the Eleventh Century.” At dinner that night we discussed this subject with great enthusiasm.Mr.历年四级考试中的“How I Overcome Difficulties in Learning English”、“My Ideal Job”以及图表作文的第一段都属于说明文的范畴，如，2002年6月的根据坐标图写题为“Students Use of Computers”的作文。

说明文必须按一定的顺序进行说明：时间顺序、空间顺序、逻辑顺序或认识顺序，选择具体的特点和细节来说明。

所以，说明文的思路要围绕说明顺序、事物的特点和细节展开。例如：

范文点评

A Famous Clock

When you visit London，one of the first things you will see is Big Ben，the famous clock which can be heard all over the world on the B.B.C.If the Houses of Parliament had not been burned down in 1834，the great clock would never have been erected.Big Ben takes its name from Sir Benjamin Hall who was responsible for the making of the clock when the new Houses of Parliament were being built.It is not only of immense size，but is extremely accurate as well.Officials from Greenwich Observatory have the clock checked twice a day.On the B.B.C.you can hear the clock when it is actually striking because microphones are connected to the clock tower.Big Ben has rarely gone wrong.Once，however，it failed to give the correct time.A painter who had been working on the tower hung a pot of paint on one of the hands and slowed it down!

【点评】这是《新概念英语》中的一篇经典说明文，介绍了世界著名的“大本钟”。文章开篇指明该钟位于英国伦敦，且全世界的人们通过BBC就能够听到钟声。接下来讲述了“大本钟”的由来，特点——不仅外型巨大，而且走时准确，在结尾处讲了“大本钟”的一个幽默的小插曲——油漆工把油漆桶挂在指针上，把钟弄慢了。细读这篇文章，我们不难发现，区区159个单词就把“大本钟”的光辉形象牢牢地刻在读者的脑海里，为什么?本文基于事实，分析了主题的来龙去脉，语言简洁又不失生动贴切，作者态度客观又充满幽默，使读者既“明白了事理”，又对事物有较完整明晰的了解认识，此乃说明文之真谛也。以“Goals”为题打开一篇说明文的思路。

参考思路

1)目标的分类：(可根据时间顺序，空间顺序、逻辑顺序或认识顺序，任选一个进行分类和排列)

2)各个类别的特点和细节：

3)组织成文：

范文点评

Goals

Everyone has goals.Many people do not reach their goals for lack of planning.These three sets of goals should be developed： lifetime，intermediate and short term.Lifetime goals should be written out.These goals should be clear and reasonable.For instance，the goal to win a research prize is clear and measurable.Other lifetime goals might include publishing a certain number of influential books or articles，earning a departmental chairmanship at a major university，successfully competing for a grant from the National Science Foundation or securing a consultantship with a big corporation.Intermediate goals relate to outcomes during the next few years.For the beginning doctoral student，intermediate goals may include completion of course work and preparation of a doctoral research proposal.Like lifetime goals，these are measurable and clearly stated.Short-term goals involve outcomes expected during the next 12 months.These goals are more performance oriented，and they help with achievement of intermediate goals.Examples of short-term goals are earning an A in a course，learning how to program a computer or performing an experiment.【点评】本文介绍了人生的三种目标：终生的、长期的和短期的目标。在文中采用了说明文常用的方法：定义、举例、分类和比较等。我们要了解并且要掌握的方法：

1.定义法(definition)

定义法是用下定义的方式去揭示事物本质特征或概念内涵。它能使读者迅速抓住本质属性和基本特点。此法的句型：

① „ is a/the „ of „ which/that „② „ relate to/involve/refer to „

【例】

(1)Language is a system of arbitrary vocal symbols which is used for human communication.语言是人类用来交际的任意性的语音符号体系。

(2)Intermediate goals relate to outcomes during the next few years.(3)Short-term goals involve outcomes expected during the next 12 months.2.举例法(illustration)

举例法就是举出实际事例来说明事物的方法，是最常见，往往也是最有效的阐释模式。

专家提醒

举例时应挑选具体、典型且有能力表达清楚的例子，并注意按照一定的顺序编排。

请看上述范文第二段：“For instance”引出“lifetime goals”的实例，如，赢得研究奖金、出版有影响书或文章、获得大学的系主任职位、获得国家自然科学基金及大公司稳定的顾问职位。

3.分类法(classification)

分类法就是把说明的对象，按一定的标准划分成不同类别分别加以说明的方法。如：上述范文介绍人生的三种目标，并按照时间的长短对终生目标、长期目标和短期目标做了分类说明。

4.比较法(comparison)

比较法是用一个事物和与其有联系的其他事物加以对比的说明方法。目的是为了帮助读者准确地区分事物，通过对比达到对该事物的深刻认识。

如：上述范文对三种人生目标在时间上和实际操作上进行了比较，并阐明了彼此的联系。

(1)Lifetime goals should be written out.(2)Like lifetime goals，these are measurable and clearly stated.(3)These goals are more performance oriented，and they help with achievement of intermediate goals.5.数字法(statistics)

数字法是运用数据来表明事物的本质和特点，准确合理的数据使文章精确可信。

【例】

(1)Nearly half of all Americans over age 20 wear a bridge or denture，and more than 20 percent have complete upper and lower denture.By age 50，one out of every two persons has gum disease.(2)And it seems sensible to wait.One quarter of all marriages between people under twenty-one end in divorce.In Britain in 1972，there were 124，248 divorces.说明文的说明方法除上面介绍的常见的几种以外，还有诸如分项法、列举法、比喻法及引用法等，只有综合运用多种说明方法，才能多角度、多层次地全面、清晰、准确地展示客观事物的本来面貌。

1.用定义法解释：

CET-4：

the Olympic Games：

a skeleton in the cupboard：

Hope Project：

qualifications：

2.用举例法说明：

教育的重要性：

当前网络游戏的危害：

成功的方法：

健身的种种看法：

大学生学好英语的方法：

3.用分类法说明：

社会实践的方面：

课外活动：

大学生谈恋爱的原因：

大学毕业生的分配情况：

食堂的伙食：

4.用比较法说明：

留学的利弊：

兼职的好坏：

不同的减肥方法：

题海战术与素质教育：

5.用数字法说明：

大学生的身体状况：

大学生的就业现状：

汽油价格上涨带来的影响：

手机的使用情况：

中国人住房状况：

借助说明文的构思方法，看看下列题目该如何写：

(1)The Layout of a Hospital

Direction： You are asked to write a composition about “The Layout Of a Hospital”。Locate some important departments in the hospital based on the picture and information given below.Your compositions should be no less than 100 words.1)the Emergency Department

2)the Out-patient Department

3)the Surgery Department

4)Dispensary/Pharmacy

5)Physician Department

6)the Eye，Ear，and Throat Department

7)the Dental Department

8)the Laboratory

9)the X-ray Department

10)the Administrative Building

11)the Ward

参考范文

Near the gate，on the west side of the road is the Emergency Department.Opposite the Emergency Department across the Main Road is the Out-patient Department.The building to the southwest of the lake is the Dispensary，which faces the Surgery Department lying on the other side of the road.Along the west wall，from south to north，stand three buildings： the Physician Department，the Eye，Ear，and Throat Department，and the Dental Department.The Laboratory is to the northwest of the round about，and beside the Laboratory，the X-ray Department is located on the same side of the road.A winding road by the lake leads to the Ward.Near the end of the main road，the Administrative Building is situated on the east side.The hospital is nicely and conveniently laid out.