英语写作练习：Chinas Wealth Drain(同等学力申硕英语写作练习及答案)

第一篇：英语写作练习：Chinas Wealth Drain(同等学力申硕英语写作练习及答案)

根据以下材料，自拟题目，写一篇不少于150个单词的短文，时间为30分钟。

材料一：

中国银行旗下的私人银行和胡润研究院联合发布《2011年中国私人财富管理白皮书》，揭示目前中国拥有千万元以上可投资资产的富人中，已经移民或准备移民的占60%，在拥有亿元以上富人中，这个比例高达74%。此“白皮书”报告一发表，一石激起千层浪，在中外媒体和网上引发了强烈的反响。富人移民潮，对中国而言，是忧是喜，是福是祸，议论纷纷，莫衷一是，尤其两种极端观点，更是尖锐对立。

材料二：

据经济之声《央广财经评论》报道，作为世界上最发达的国家之一，美国是全球很多富豪申请投资移民的目的地。美国移民服务局日前发布最新数据显示，在富豪移民中，中国人成了最大的申请受惠人群。今年投资移民美国的移民中，中国人占了3/4。

材料三：

从上世纪90年代初开始，为了应对加拿大、澳大利亚等国在移民领域的竞争，美国制定了较具弹性的投资移民政策。

1990年，美国国会立法通过了“投资移民项目法案”，规定外国人在美国投资有权取得永久居留权。根据此方案，外国移民申请人在美投资100万美元创设有利于美国经济的商业性企业;或在特定区域内的移民投资额为50万美元，并创造10个全职的美国工人就业机会的话，即可获发两年期的“有条件”的移民签证。两年届满前90天，便可申请成为永久居民。

为了吸引投资移民，从1996年开始，美国移民局放宽了不少条件，比如投资的方式和聘用工人的计算方式等。投资人无需本人来操作企业，美国有“投资地区中心”可进行统一投资。

据中国之声《全球华语广播网》报道，美国国会众议院司法委员会当地时间2011年10月27日通过口头表决，批准将取消高技能人才职业移民国别限制的议案交由众议院全体讨论。

China's Wealth Drain

From the information above, we may clearly feel that more and more rich Chinese love to go abroad by so-called “investment emigration”.The phenomenon reminds people of “brain drain” in the past 30 years of China, so we may call it “wealth drain”.As far as I’m concerned, “wealth drain” does more harm to our country even than “brain drain”.Firstly, most of the rich people who want to emigrate are talented and industrious.Their going abroad is a kind of “brain drain” as well as a great loss for China.Secondly, according to the report, about 60% of people who either consider emigration through investment overseas or have already completed the process are real rich persons possessing more than 10 million Yuan worth of individual assets.It is sure for them to bring most of the assets to abroad, which will otherwise be of great significance to the economic construction of China.Thirdly, with the money and talents from China, our international competitors will be more powerful and competitive.Fourthly, some corrupted official may make use of the policy to avoid domestic punishment.So why are wealthy Chinese so eager to leave their country? The simplest answer is that there are a lot of things in China that even the richest cannot buy, such as laws and regulations, the

education system, social welfare, inheritance tax, quality of air, investing atmosphere, food safety, and so on.Besides the material reasons, there are emotional ones.Emotional reasons behind rich people's emigration are generally linked to the lack of a sense of personal safety, including safety of personal wealth, as well as fear about an uncertain future.Therefore, in order to curb the trend, we should make more efforts to improve the comprehensive situation in China.In addition, the government should lay some regulations to control rich people’s investment emigration.

第二篇：2013同等学力申硕英语写作评分细则

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同等学力申硕英语考试已经结束了，很多考生积极的在网上找答案，估成绩，客观题倒是很好把握，只需与参考答案一对照，即可知道自己的答题状况，能够有效估分。但是最让考生头疼的就是作文的估分，几乎是伤透了脑筋。下面中国在职研究生招生信息网的老师给考生提供以下几条将建议，希望可以帮到大家。写作评分标准主要围绕这四个方面评判的：

1、内容要切题

在目前常见的作文题目中，内容切题一般包括两个方面。一是写作内容要围绕题目规定的话题展开。二是根据题目所给提纲书写文章内容。2013年同等学力申硕考试的作文题目是The possibility of using mobile phone to study English(or any other subject)给定了写作提纲，1 我认为手机(不)可以用来学习英语或其他知识。2 理由是…… 3 结论。这就是这篇短文所给提纲，考生要从出题人给定的提纲出发，从三方面来写自己的作文，不能偏离轨道。

2、能正确表达思想

一篇好短文能使读者一目了然。文章的思路应清楚，逻辑性强，能准确表达作者的思想。针对这篇文题，首先要阐述自己的观点，到底手机可不可以用来学习英语?结构要合理布局，经典的三段论会为你赢得好印象。其次写自己的理由，到底从哪些方面是有助于学习的或者是无利于学习的。最后写结论，对全篇文章进行总结，上升一个高度，从而完成整篇文章的书写。

3、意义连贯

文章的层次要分明，条理要清楚，上下文之间、词与词、句与句之间要上下连贯，前后 呼应，才能使文章结构严谨，思路清晰、有条理。

4、无重大语法错误。

一般现在、一般过去、一般将来、现在进 行、过去进行、现在完成、过去完成、现在完成进行、过去将来时，主要就是别出现时态语态和常用搭配上的错误。

中央财经在职研究生的老师们说：批改作文时，老师主要从内容和语言两个方面进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，和语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍有密切的关系。上面就评分细则的四个方面进行了详细的说明。

第三篇：英语写作练习11

That’s in the office building.At 10:35, a man finishes his job, and comes into his wife’s office.He wants to make a date with his wife to eat lunch together soon.And his wife also finishes her job, she is very glad to keep an appointment.That’s in the career center.Some persons are looking for a good job from computer, and a man want to find a good job from the service of center.A attendant is introducing a good job to the man.The woman is the three children’s mother;she is supervising and urging the boy who is squatting on the chair to do the homework.

第四篇：英语写作练习6

The girl who is sitting on the chair is talking to the boy, and the dog behind the girl is looking at the boy.Hodgson further interest for a capital that rent, not only use it together with rent for the original form of surplus value, and make it and rent.Marcie declared interest is only part of the profit margins are determined to occupy surplus labor is provided.Smith's contribution in his first affirmation is a basic social capitalist class, profit for society of a basic income, which can begin to see as a capital occupies industrial profit of the earliest form of surplus value, and for the general form of the surplus value, and the rent and interest on assigned to explain the capitalist industry jointly possessed surplus value of each class of branching.

第五篇：英语写作练习1

Picture 1:

The weather is very hot.In this house, the air

conditioning is not working, so the man can only use ice to lower the temperature, and his husband can only run the fan to lower the temperature.The dog is relaxing in cool place.Picture 2:

After work, the man and his wife who live in apartment 8G come home very late.So they are very tired, and they want to sleep right now.Picture 3:

That’s a dinner with candle light, looks like very romantic.Dan and his wife are eating beefsteak very happily, and there are many clothes around them.