高考英语作文写作基础—话题写作练习

第一篇：高考英语作文写作基础—话题写作练习

高考英语写作……话题写作练习

一.教学内容：

话题写作练习

A 人物介绍

参考篇目：Unit 1.Hawking.Einstein

注意：1.表格变为段落

2．按时间顺序

3．根据逻辑关系加上连接词

常用短语和词汇：

be bornwhen he/she was ……years old /at the age of

laterbegin tograduate from

spend time doingdiscover

评价：be considered to be / be regarded as

be rewarded……contribute

devoted oneself to sth.根据以下素材写一篇介绍爱因斯坦的短文

Date of birth: March 14th, 1879Place of birth: Germany

Childhood: curious, slowing in learning

Education background:

1886 : study in Munich, mathematics, religion

1896 : graduated from high school

1900 : become a maths teacher

1905 : receive a doctor’s degree

Achievement:develop the Theory of Relativity by 1915

prove light is bent when passing the sun

won the Nobel Prize for Physics in 1922

Evaluation: one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century

Albert Einstein

Albert Einstein was born on March 14th,1879 in Germany.When he was a child,he was curious about everything, but he was considered to be slow at learning.In 1886, he began to study in Munich.He studied mathematics as well as religion.In 1896,Einstein graduated from high school at the age of 17.Four years later, Einstein became a maths teacher.In 1905, he received a doctor’s degree.By the year 1915, he had developed the famous Theory of Relativity and became famous in the world.He proved that light is bent as it passes the sun.Because of his great achievement, he won the Nobel Prize for Physics in 1922.Einstein was one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century.Some people say that he was a genius.But I think the main reason why he was so successful was his hard work.B.说明文

参考篇目：Unit2.News Media 不同观点对比。阐述自己观点。

常用短语和词汇：

对比：while, but, however, on the contrary, on the other hand,类比：as well, besides, also, too,表达观点：I think, in my opinion, it seems to me……

1.适当增加与要点有关的语句加以说明；

2.主要陈述自己观点，对对方观点要提及并加以驳斥；

3.在结尾处重申自己的观点

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你们班上在讨论城市里博物馆的作用。根据以下内容，写一篇120字左右的短文，陈述你自己的观点。开头已给出。

Side A

1.Museums can help understand what happened in the past

2.Museums can educate people

3.Museums are centers for research.4.Museums can attract tourists to the city

Side B

1.Museums use up a great sum of money

2.Museums are usually in old buildings, so they need protection

Most cities have at least one museum, but how important are museums to people living in the 21st century?

Some people think that museums use up the money which could be spent on other things.Besides, museums are usually in old buildings, so they often need protection.In my opinion, museums can help people understand what happened in the past.If we have a better understanding of the past, we may improve our life in the future.Museums play an important role in educating people and they are centers for research.Also, museums are very important for tourism.They attract a lot of tourists to the city each year.To sum up, it seems to me that museums are an important part of our life.They are worth visiting and protecting.C.Safety Rules

参考篇目：Unit8 First Aid

Useful expressions:

You should always…Please don’t ….You ought to …

You should not….You must….Never…..Make sure that ….You must never….Always remember to ….*********

Use the lists of dos and don’ts below to write a passage about safety rules in the chemistry lab.Dos

•wash your hands before & after the experiment

•keep the air fresh

•put on gloves when doing experiments

•be careful with fire and dangerous chemicals

Don’ts

•taste chemicals

•eat anything

•touch anything without teacher’s permission

•run about in the lab

An emergency may happen every day.But if we are careful and follow some safety rules, some can be avoided.Let’s take chemistry lab as an example.First of all, you should wash your hands before and after the experiment.And you should keep the air in the lab fresh.You’d better put on the gloves when doing the experiment.Be careful with fire and dangerous medicine.Never taste chemicals or eat anything in the lab.Always remember not to touch anything without teacher’s permission.You shouldn’t run about in the lab.Only in this way can you keep yourself safe in the lab.D.记叙文

参考篇目：Unit 7 Living with disease / Diagnosed with Cancer

时间、地点、人物、事件、因果关系交待清。

时态：过去时

表示时间的短语：one day, while, when, then, a moment later, as soon as…

因果关系：so, as, as a result……

图示提示要先审图，记要点，列出所需词汇和短语。

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根据以下图示（图略），以Naughty Tommy为题，写一篇短文，描述在公园里所发生的事。

Tommy was a naughty boy.One day he saw a girl playing happily under a tree.He decided to play a trick on her.So he picked up a stone and hid himself behind the tree.Then he threw the stone at the girl.Hit on the back, the girl began to cry.Tommy was very happy and went away with a smile.A moment later, he saw a dog sleeping on a bench.He picked up a stone again

and hit the dog.The dog woke up and jumped at him.Tommy was so frightened that

he ran away as fast as he could.E.过程描写

Useful expressions:

 

 

 

 While…..as soon as be about to do….when….just as…. suddenly / all of a suddenly

 happen to do…/ It happened that…

Tips:

How to write a process paragraph?

1.审题: 文字，图表

2.文体

3.人称

4.时态

5.内容要点

a)时间

b)地点

c)人物

d)事件经过

6.所需词汇及句型：

Practical writing:

NMET 2000

假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。请根据下列图画写出报告。

注意：1 目击者应该准确报告事实；词数100左右；结尾已为你写好。

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_____________________________________________________________________After two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.Possible version:

It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000.I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road.Suddenly the car hit the man while he was crossing the road.He fell with a cry.The car didn’t stop but drove off at great speed heading west.I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864.About two

minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.学生习作

（A）

At 7:15 on the morning of Feb,8th ,2000, I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual.I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park.He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing.The car was so fast that the old man even didn’t have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.I thought the driver would stop to help but she didn’t.Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain.Fortunately, I noted down the details: it was a yellow car, the plate number of which was AC864, and the driver was a young lady.After that I went over to check out the old man.（B）

It was 7:15 on the morning of Feb,8,2000.I was walking along the southern side of Park Road.I noticed that an old man coming out of City Park was going to cross the road.There was no car at the moment, so the old man started to cross the road.What happened next really surprised me.A yellow car roared down the 3rd Street, made a right turn and knocked the old man down.It happened in such a short time that the old man had no time to react.Seeing this, I rushed to the place where the old man was hit just in time to see the plate number of the yellow car.It was AC864.F.地点描写

参考篇目：Unit 5 The British Isles

Useful expressions:

be located in / lie in / be situated in

in the west of, to the west of

off the east coast of

cover an area of …… square kilometers

be made up of / consist of

be separated from

be surrounded by

has a population of

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Location: north-west of Beijing Area: 3.5 square kilometers

History: built in Qing Dynasty, 150 years of construction

in 1860, Anglo-French Forces invaded Beijing, set fire,took away treasures, ruins,new China, protected, part of it, rebuilt in 1980’s,Yuanmingyuan Park

Yuanmingyuan , which is a ruined park, is located in the north-west of Beijing.It covers an area of

3.5 square kilometers.It was built during the Qing Dynasty.After 150 years of construction, it

became one of the most famous palaces in China as well as in the world.However, when Anglo-French forces invaded Beijing in 1860, the whole palace was set on fire.Treasures were taken away and stones lay in ruins.It was not until the founding of New China that it began to be protected.Part of it was rebuilt in 1980’s.The stones take on a golden color at the sunset, as if they were telling the story of yesterday.文章的检查

时态，词形，人称，数，逻辑关系

It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8,2000.1._________

I was walking along Park Road towards to the east2.________

when a old man came out of the park on the other3.________

side of the street.Then I saw a yellow car drive up 4.________

Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road.5.________

The next moment the car hit a man while he6.________

was acrossing the road.He fell with a cry.The7.________

car not stop but drove off at great speed heading8.________

west.I notice the driver was a young woman,9.________

the plate number was AC 864.About two minutes10._______

later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to

the nearest hospital.1.in→on2.to去掉3.a 改为an4.正确5.made改为make6.a 改为an7.acrossing应为crossing8.not前加did9.notice→noticed10.the plate number前加and

第二篇：高考英语基础写作网络时代话题作文

网络时代话题作文

第一项 话题预测

网络话题贯穿于整个高考试题当中，不论是语言知识及应用、阅读，还是写作，网络考题常常尽显其中。写作命题通常围绕网上购物、网上交友、网络游戏、网络学习、电子贺卡、网络与纸质媒体等话题设题。因此，写作命题材料紧扣时代发展变化的步伐，从报刊或网络上提取与中学生息息相关的学习和生活方面的网络原材料，按照高考试题的命题原则筛选、重组、编辑，以此来命制写作试题。

话题预测：电子贺卡的优越性、因特网的主要用途、建网络学校、网上购书、报纸与网络的优缺点、网络游戏的危害性、迷恋电脑游戏的成因、中学生上网讨论、高三学生能不能上网、中学生上网的目的、学生上网交友等。

第二项 写作语汇

一、常用单词

1.网络术语

World Wide Web / www.xiexiebang.commerce 电子商务e-book 电子图书cyber language 网络语言cybersurf 网络漫游cyberculture 电脑化文明 cyberworld 网络世界cybernaut 网友communication 通讯in-box 收件箱Shareware 共享软件telecom 电信homepage 主页smart school 智能学校E-banking 电子银行freeware 免费软件Internet bar 网吧Internet customer 网上客户 cyber citizen 网民Internet search servive 互联网查询服务

2.上网名称

usename 用户名ID 用户名account 账户

address 地址phone number 电话号码click 点击

register 注册password 密码resend 重发（密码）lost password 遗失密码 payment 付款cancel 取消

login 登陆purchase 购买update 更新

online 在线

3.网上活动

medicine on the Internet 网上医疗Internet Radio 网络广播

reservation on the Internet 网上预订employment market on the Internet网上人才市场information feedback 信息反馈onlinegame 网络游戏

software development 软件开发cyber city 虚拟城市

cyber crime 网络犯罪cyber economy网络经济

virtual space 虚拟空间virtual reality虚拟现实

informationalize信息化literature on the Internet网络文学

二、参考短语

1.go online = surf the Internet, surf the Net 浏览因特网，上网

2.on the Internet 在网上

3.kill time in a bar 泡吧

4.communicate with sb.与…交际

5.chat on the Internet 网上聊天

6.play a computer game 玩电脑游戏

7.use a computer 使用电脑

8.shop online 网上购物

三、参考语句

1.Search engines have become one of the most important tools for www.xiexiebang.computer and other machines have become an indispensable

part of our society, which make our life and work more comfortable and less laborious.人们普遍认为计算机和其他机器已经成为我们社会必不可少的一部分。它们使我们的生活更舒适，减少了大量劳动。

3.People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion

opportunities.人们相信拥有计算机技术可以获得更多工作或提升的机会。

4.It is commonly thought that our society has dramatically changed by modern science and technology, and human has made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.人们普遍认为我们的现代化科技使我们的社会发生了巨大的变化，近几十年人类在科技方面取得了惊人进步。

5.“E-mail,” “surfing”, “www.xiexiebang.come the hoursehold words through the world.“电子邮件”、“冲浪”、“万维网”已成为家喻户晓的词汇。

第三项 写作实践演练

第1 篇

下周有外宾来访你校，请根据如下提纲所示，用英语向外宾介绍你校新建网络学校（net-school）的应用情况。

【写作内容】

1.使教与学更方便，更有趣，能在课堂上获取更多信息，学到更多知识。

2.向师生开放，可向世界各地发送电子邮件。

3.只要家中有电脑，任何人都可以学习本校课程。

4.有助于改善学校管理，满足现代化学校的需要。

【写作要求】

1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；

2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总句数。

Ladies and Gentlemen,Very nice to see you here in our school.Now I’d like to tell you something about the net-school we have set up.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all.Thank you

范文

Ladies and Gentlemen,Very nice to see you here in our school.Now I’d like to tell you something about the net-school we have set up.Our net-school is very helpful in many ways.First of all, it can make teaching and learning easier with great interest and so we students can get more information and knowledge in class.We can send e-mails to other parts of the world at any time and get the latest information through the Internet, which is open to both teachers and students.So long as the student has a computer , he can study at home.The net also helps to improve our school management and meets the needs of building up our school into a modern one.That’s all.Thank you

第 2 篇

假如你是校报负责人，需要在校内急聘一位同学任英文版的编辑。请你以 “An English Editor Wanted” 为题目，根据如下提纲所示写一则英文招聘启事。

【写作内容】

1.编辑的主要工作包括：

（1）从英文报刊杂志及互联网上选择适合学生阅读的文章；

（2）筛选和编辑同学的来稿。

2.招聘所需要满足的要求：

（1）乐意奉献出一些业余时间为同学们服务；

（2）英文与美术皆好，能熟练使用电脑；

（3）感兴趣的同学请在本周内与学生会联系。

【写作要求】

只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。

An English Editor Wanted

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范文

An English Editor Wanted

Our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition.The job mainly includes two parts: one is to choose proper English articles from other newspapers, magaziens or the Internet for us students, and the other is to pick out articles from students in our school and edit them for use.We hope that an English editor wanted could meet the following requirements: first, he or she is willing to devote some of the spare time to serving the others;second, it’s necessary for him or her to be good at both English and fine art.Needless to say, the ability to use the computer is important as well.Those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with the Students’ Union this week.Students’ Union

第三篇：话题作文写作练习

高二作文话题作文写作练习

（一）新人教版

【本讲教育信息】

一.教学内容：

话题作文写作训练

（一）【题目设计】

在我们生活中，令我们感动的事例很多很多。有时是一种声音，有时是一种色彩，有时是一种状态，有时是一种场景„„

生活中你一定经历、体验过许多令你感动的事情。请以“感动”为话题写一篇作文。可以叙述经历，抒发感受；可以发表议论，评述世态，等等。

注意：

1.立意自定。2.文体自选。3.题目自拟。4.不少于800字。

【写作指导】

人的情感、情绪总要受到客观环境的影响，并受到偶发事件的牵动和制约。感动之于人即是如此。明白这一点，我们以“感动”为话题写作文，就要首先调动生活积累，回忆起曾经让我们感动的人或事，情或景，并选取其中内蕴丰富，值得反复咀嚼、玩味的材料组织到文章里来。写这样的话题作文，当然可以抒情，可以议论，但是组织上述材料作为文章的主体框架却是抒情、议论的基础。否则，所抒之情，所议之论就成了无源之水，无本之木，不但不能起到感染读者的作用，还会使读者望而生厌、敬而远之。这是写这类话题作文务必引起注意的地方。

从内容上说，既可写伟人壮举，也可写凡人小事，也可写造化奇观，鬼斧神工。但有一点，即所写绝对是令你感动，也能令读者感动的事情。

说到让人感动的事，决不是让你去瞎虚构，胡编乱造。想起1999年高考题“坚韧——我所追求的品格/战胜脆弱”，有很多考生写自己的父母死去，写自己遭到车祸等等。以此来说明自己是如何如何的坚韧、坚强。所写事情令人感动吗？能够赚得阅卷老师的一把同情泪水吗？答案是不言而喻的。所以，写这类文章，一定要采撷生活中足以令人感动的事，用朴实率真的文字加以表现即可。

自然，上述材料在一篇文章里如何安排、如何使用，完全可以因文而异。以记叙为主，将上述材料写成文章的主体部分，然后引发必要的抒情或议论，是一种写法；依据行文需要，将上述材料加以梳理，穿插在文章的各个部分，写成“形散神凝”的散文，也是一种写法；甚至只有叙事，没有抒情或议论，将感情融入叙事当中，含蓄地表达自己的情感，让读者自己去揣摩，去把玩，也未尝不可。文无定法，只要文章内容能够围绕话题，阐发“感动”的深厚内涵，表现积极的价值取向，应该说，就都合乎题意要求。

【范文分析】

感动

翻书的时候，一片银杏叶悄然滑落。

我弯腰，拾起，惊觉这是初中毕业时同桌送给我的，背面上写着“珍重，朋友！”不记得当时是否有种想哭的冲动，只是现在，枯黄的叶片上早已是滴滴泪痕。想起，这世上还有一种心情叫感动。

很长一段时间，我似乎已经忘了感动的滋味，是我的心已冷漠，还是我的心被一些无关紧要的东西充斥得没有了空间？

曾有朋友写给我这样一句话：“我们之所以会擦肩而过，不是因为无缘，而是我们的生活中少了两个字——感动。”的确，我们的心因此不再敏感，我们不再用心收藏起身边的一丝一毫感动，当我们错过它，只有再回首时，才发现原来我们真的失去了很多。

总有人抱怨这世上可感动的事情越来越少。可是，只要我们静下心来想一想，你就会发现，其实感动无时不在，无处不在。

读书累了，父母为我们削个苹果，是感动；口渴了，朋友帮你打回一杯水，是感动；沮丧时，得到一句宽慰的话，是感动；高兴时，有朋友与你一起分享快乐，是感动；平凡的日子，收到一份小小的祝福，哪怕只是一片花瓣，一片树叶，也是感动„„

人啊，每天被多少平凡的事情感动着！或许，有时正是由于它们的平凡才让我们视而不见。有这样一句话：“人之所以会感动，是因为他生活在爱之中。”红尘有爱，人间有情，我们又有什么理由要让庸碌蒙住我们的眼睛而无法感受感动的滋味呢？

感动是什么？一千个人有一千种答案。但，无论是谁，都无法对一个毫无感情的人说出感动究竟是什么。因为感动不是用嘴说出来的，而是用心品出来的。

感动，如沁人心脾的甘泉。畅饮甘泉，我们的内心变得澄澈而又明亮。

感动，如熏人欲醉的海风。感受海风，我们的内心变得纯净而又宽敞。

感动，如令人心折的白雪。领略白雪，我们的内心变得安静而又平和。

当这个世上已无感动的足迹的时候，那它也就随之成了一个冰封的天地。冷酷，亦无情。

朋友，请把心从泥沼中拔出来吧！请腾出一点小小的空间来承载这足以让我们回味一生的感动吧！【评语】

这是一篇人生感悟之文。文章从细腻处落笔：毕业时同桌送“我”的一片银杏叶书签而今已经变得枯黄，拾起它，让“我”感动。于是，作者由此引发出一通感慨：我们常常被一些无关紧要的东西所纠缠，却似乎已经冷落了感动，变得冷漠、麻木起来。其实，“感动无时不在，无处不在”。文章列举令我们感动的诸多事例之后，笔锋一转，提出“感动是什么”的设问，并在文章结尾处用一组排比句从正面做了回答。统观全文，脉络清晰，衔接紧凑，语言畅达，内蕴深厚。

【题目设计】

面对纷繁的生活，我们常常有许多感悟：当我们看见一轮红日冉冉升起时，我们也许会感悟到青年人的朝气蓬勃与旺盛的生命力，当我们看见叶子从树上落下时，我们也许会感悟到生命的短暂，而应该珍惜时光发奋进取„„

朋友，你对生活有什么感悟呢？请以“感悟__________”为题写一篇文章。要求：

1、在“感悟__________”后面的空白处填一个词或短语。

2、除诗歌外文体不限。

3、书写清楚，800字左右。

【写作指导】

“感悟__________”后面所填词语可以是动词（动词短语），写对某一种活动的感悟，如“感悟踢球”；也可以是名词（名词短语），写对某一种事物的感悟，如“感悟飞瀑”，或对某一段时光的感悟，如“感悟高三”；甚至于可以是形容词，写对事物属性的感悟，如“感悟美丽”，叙写自己对美丽的感觉、感受与领悟，阐明什么是真正的美丽。可见这道题的写作视角是相当宽泛的，只要你能从心灵深处提取动人的“生活切片”，对题材进行深刻挖掘，就能写好这篇作文。

题目要求“除诗歌外不限文体”，但从“感悟”一词来看，显然不适合写说明文，而议论文、抒情散文，记叙散文、小小说都是可以写的。下面几种构思及点拨可作参考：

一、写议论文必须以具体形象为出发点，以对某一形象的感悟、阐发为主要内容。比如《感悟花芽》，可以写自己面对花芽时产生的联想，表达自己“愿做小小的花芽，让风雨的洗礼催开成功的花朵”的观点，然后以别人看来“花芽太小，”、“花芽太嫩”、“花芽太弱”三句话，分别引出若干事例——有志不在年高的事例、少年身残志坚的事例、年少位卑也敢为国争光的事例，论证“花芽”虽小、嫩、弱，但历经奋斗磨炼，定能催开成功的花朵的道理。

二、写抒情散文必须让自己的情感与具体形象（细节）水乳交融。比如写《感悟高三》，构思时高三学习生活中的一幕幕情景会纷至沓来，浮现在眼前。写什么？高三生活最大的特点是什么？然后根据高三生活的一些特点，选取典型细节，在夹叙夹议中抒发感情。值得注意的是，抒情散文写作前酝酿感情极为重要。感情充沛，才能思如泉涌。

三、写记叙散文或小小说必须设置情节，安排人物。人物可以是“我”，也可以是“他（她）”，情节（或者说人物的命运）是文章的“感点”，人物的“感悟”一般在结尾“画龙点睛”，但高明的写法可以让人物的“感悟”贯串整个情节，在激烈的矛盾冲突中展现人物的性格特点。

【范文分析】

感悟生命

灰蒙蒙的天不知为何在偷偷地阴笑着，我一屁股跌坐在洒满阳光的嫩绿的草坪上，手里摆弄着一棵刚刚扯下还没来得及枯死的太阳草，还是那个熟悉的四边形，我知道明天又是个好天。

有光的地方就有影，我坐在一棵枝繁叶茂的树下，身上满是从树叶的空隙间漏下来的一点一点斑驳的黑影，把我映得活像只金钱豹，我倒觉得当只豹子也不错，每日为了生存奔波，不必去想那许许多多的人情冷暖，世态炎凉。什么成功与失败，活下来就是成功，饿死了就得认命。

我面前是一条日夜奔流的大河，足以让孔子再感叹一次“逝者如斯夫”。但就是这样的大河也摆脱不了冬日里断流的悲惨命运。我其实不想选择这条河，因为冬日里会让尸骨重见天日，我想选一条不会断流的河去作我一生中最壮观的一次实验，但没办法，在我的城市里它是唯一的。谁叫物以稀为贵呢？

现在不过早晨八九点钟，我还想再坐会儿，没有人的地方总是显得好美。

在我的周围有好多蒲公英呢，它们绕着我飞舞，仿佛我是这个世界的花的头儿。可以享受这个有风的早晨而不必有一丁点儿的付出。

蒲公英！我突然想起妈妈曾经说过的话，每个蒲公英都带着一个小小的种子，到了合适的地方就会生根，但如果环境不合适，如果过干或者过湿，如果过热或者过冷，它都不会长大。天！那么多如果，蒲公英还没绝种么？

我环顾四周，发现目所能及的地方都能看见它们，在微风中轻摆，像母亲送着自己的孩子去远征。那么纤细，那么坚强。

原来，生命并不是脆弱的。原来，生命可以直面挫折。„„

现在十点，我想我该回家了。【评语】

这篇小小说语言含蓄，笔法较老练。文章写“我”遇到生活中的挫折后，来到河边想作

“一生中最壮观的一次实验”。到底是什么使之轻生呢？作者没有点明，只在当身上满是树叶的斑驳黑影，把我映得活像只金钱豹时说过，“我倒觉得当只豹子也不错”，“不必去想那许许多多的人情冷暖，世态炎凉。什么成功与失败”。这种现象是具有生活的真实性的，可以让人去想象。“我”的思想发生转折的契机，是面对蒲公英时的一番遐想，先由感觉产生感受，进而融入感情，直至升华为感悟：“生命并不是脆弱的”，“生命可以直面挫折”。全文情节以“我”对生命遇到挫折时的激烈心理冲突而展开，以“我”对生命的正确感悟而收束，准确地体现了题意。

【题目设计】

阅读下面一则寓言，根据要求作文。

太阳和风在争论谁更有威力，风说：“我来证明我比你行。你看到那个穿大衣的老头了吗？我打赌我能比你更快地使他脱掉大衣。”

于是太阳躲到云后，风就开始吹起来，愈吹愈大，大到成了一场飓风，但是风吹得愈急，老人把大衣裹得愈紧。

终于，风放弃了。然后太阳从云后走出来，对老人露出了灿烂的微笑。不久，老人开始擦汗，然后脱掉大衣。太阳对风说：“你看，还是温和与友善比愤怒和暴力有威力。”

阅读材料后，请以“友善”为话题写一篇文章，可以写你的经历、体验、感受和看法，也可以编写故事。注意：

1、立意自定。

2、文体自选。

3、不少于800字。

【写作指导】

本题应注意以下几点：

1、准确领会话题的精神。话题材料以寓言的形式，通过风与太阳的对比，揭示了“温和与友善比愤怒和暴力有威力”的道理，写作中最好也能体现出这样一组对比，即不仅要诠释“友善”待人的重要性，还要拿它与“愤怒、暴力”等作比较。

2、既可以从大处着眼，谈国与国之间、民族与民族之间需友善相待；也可以从小处落笔，谈善待身边的人，促进人际关系的和谐、融洽；还可以换个切入点，写人类应善待自然、保护环境。

3、话题作文文体不限，除了写成一般的记叙文、议论文外，还可以采用书信、日记、演讲稿等应用文体，或发挥想象，编写童话、寓言、小剧本等。

【范文分析】

友善待人

记得几年前，语文老师给我们读过一篇题为《好言一句三冬暖》的文章，其中有一个片段，至今记忆犹新。

美国著名的试飞驾驶员胡佛，有一次飞回洛杉矶，在距地面九十多米高的空中，刚好有两个引擎同时失灵，幸亏他技术高超，飞机才奇迹般地着陆。胡佛立即检查飞机用油，正如他所预料的，他驾驶的那架螺旋桨飞机，装的却是喷气机用油。当他召见那个负责保养的机械工时，对方已吓得直哭。这时，胡佛并没有像大家预想的那样大发雷霆，而是伸出手臂，抱住维修工的肩膀，信心十足地说：“为了证明你能干得好，我想请你明天帮我的飞机做维修工作。”从此，胡佛的飞机再也没有出过差错，那位马马虎虎的维修工也变得兢兢业业，一丝不苟了。

这个故事令人感动。虽然维修工的过失险些使自己丧命，但心地善良的胡佛深深懂得有过失者的心理。当对方因出了严重差错而痛苦不堪时，善解人意，自我克制，出人意料地给予宽慰，使其恢复自信和自尊。这，就是友善的巨大力量。试想，如果胡佛愤怒斥责这位维修工，甚至不依不饶地追究他的责任，那么很可能会彻底地毁了他。可见，面对同一件事，以两种不同的态度来对待，就会有迥异的结局。友善，可以使大事化小，小事化了，不仅善

待了他人，也能使自己得益——胡佛的飞机不是从此就没出过任何差错吗？而以愤怒乃至暴力来应对，结果往往是有百害而无一利。

能否以友善的态度为人处世，不但体现着一个人的道德水平，有时甚至是一个民族素质高低的反映。有一则报道说：同样一起交通事故，在加拿大，可以不到2分钟就顺利解决，司机会很快下车，视事故的实际情况，以一种友善的态度来协商解决，双方都会向对方认错、道歉，于是不到2分钟，便各自开着车离开了。而在中国，不花上一个小时是很难解决争端的。原因很简单，一旦撞车，司机就放下车窗，不管自己是否有错，便破口大骂，在车内骂得不爽，又走下车互相指责。于是后面的车辆不能前行，司机们一个个在车内使劲地按喇叭。直至交警出面，分析事故双方的责任，一场**才会作罢，但当事人常常还要互骂上几句，以泄心头之恨。如此一来，不耗费一两个钟点才怪呢。有位资深研究人士曾撰文指出：“在21世纪的竞争中，我们在生产、经济方面碰到的困难还是能克服的，也是可以赶上去的，„„但国民素质不用说与发达国家比，就是与一些发展中国家相比也是不容乐观的。”我觉得，不能温和待人、自我省察和友善相处，正是我们国民素质不高的一个具体方面。

生活是一面镜子。当你面带友善走向镜子时，你会发现，镜中的那个人也正满怀善意地向你微笑；当你以粗暴的态度面对它时，你会发现，镜中的那人也正向你挥舞拳头。人生在世，请拥有一颗友爱之心，保留一份友善之情吧！【评语】

这篇文章吃透了话题材料的内涵，立意上有一定的深度，而且用例典型，对比鲜明，剖析得当，读来令人信服。

第四篇：高考英语作文(话题写作)

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(一)有关“信心与希望”话题

例：

1、生活中困难不可避免，面对困难需要信心…

2、试举一例说明信心在学习(考试、生活等)方面的作用…

3、你对困难的态度…

It is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties.When we are faced with them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence.With confidence, we can find sometimes the question is not as “huge”as we imagine.Take most of us for example, the entrance exam to college seems to be a horrible monster.Accordingly, some people give up, some persist.In my eyes, with confidence, right assessment of the difficulties, as well as full preparation, try and exert your strength, and then we will overcome all problems and challenges.On the whole, I believe we youngsters should face the difficulties in right manner.And nothing is impossible, brave it out and just do it!

(二)有关“诚实、诚信”话题

例：

1、生活中确实存在不讲诚信的现象…

2、举一例说明(如，有毒奶粉、冒名顶替上大学、考试作弊等)…

3、讲求诚信的意义…

Almost all of us heard the story “Here Comes the Wolf” when we were little kids.What we can learn from the story is that we must be honest.However, there’re lots of phenomena of dishonesty nowadays.Being dishonest does great harm not only to other people but also to yourself.Take the case of fake milk powder for example.After drinking this kind of milk, the babies had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, which badly affected their health.To our great relief, the producers got accused and punished for all the serious consequences in the end.Having the reputation of being honest and reliable will make other people trust you, which will provide you many benefits and give you opportunities that others may not get.Being honest, you will find it easier to cooperate with others and people will be friendly to you and support you.In a sense, if life is a longjourney, honesty will be the backpack that should be taken along all the way.Let’s pick up our “backpack”—honesty, and start the wonderful journey!高考直通车网站：http://www.xiexiebang.com/ 欢迎关注@高考直通车 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040

(三)有关“志愿者”话题

例1：假设你是健康俱乐部的一位志愿者，根据以下要点，写一篇短文，帮助广大市民更好地了解和预防H1N1流感：(1)该流感已在许多国家爆发，病例每天持续增多;

(2)该流感与其他季节性流感传播方式一样，通过咳嗽、喷嚏等在人群中传播;

(3)建议：不随便当众咳嗽、打喷嚏，经常洗手，生病时在家休息……

As we know, a growing outbreak of H1N1 flu has been sparked in many countries.An increasing number of cases are being reported every day。

It’s thought that H1N1 flu spreads in the same way that regular seasonal influenza viruses do, that is, spreading from person-to-person, mainly through the coughs and sneezes of people who are sick with the virus。

Faced with this severe disease, here are some everyday measures we should take to stay healthy.First, cover your nose and mouth with a tissue when you cough or sneeze.Wash your hands often with soap and water, especially after you cough or sneeze.Avoid touching your eyes, nose or mouth.Germs spread that way.If you get sick, stay home from work or school and limit contact with others to keep from infecting them。

Finally, H1N1 flu is not a terribly deadly disease, which is curable.So, don’t be nervous and just keep calm as usual。

例2：

你所在的城市即将举办国际贸易博览会。有关部门现向全社会招聘志愿者。要求：

(1)具有为国际友人服务的热情;

(2)掌握丰富的文化知识，既是服务人员，也是文化的使者;

(3)具有流利的英语表达能力，能做好沟通工作。

假如你叫李华，请根据以上要求，写一封想作博览会志愿者的申请信。

要求：字迹工整，100词左右。开头已写好，不计入总词数。

生词：国际贸易博览会 the International Trade Exposition

Dear Sir or Madam：

Thank you for taking your time to read my letter.As the coming of the International Trade Exposition, I’d like very much to be a volunteer。

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All our citizens are hosts for this special event.Above all, I promise I should endeavor to serve with enthusiasm our distinguished guests from all over the world.Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history, so I will be not only a servant but also a carrier for our splendid culture.What’s more, as we all know, English as an international language, will play an important role in communication during the Exposition, and I am good at it.I can express myself fluently and clearly in English。

To sum up, I believe I can be a qualified volunteer.I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one。

Yours，Li Hua(四)有关“跨文化”话题

例：假设你叫李华，你的外国朋友John想了解中国的春节，请根据以下提纲，给他写一封短信：

1、春节在中国人中的地位

2、春节前，人们……

3、春节期间，人们……

参考词汇：对联couplet 爆竹firecracker

Dear John，How time flies!Four moths have passed since we saw each other last time.I cannot helpbut miss you.You asked me about Chinese Spring Festival.Now I would like to tell yousomething about it.The Spring Festival is a Chinese traditional festival.It is the most important and enjoyable one.A few days before the festival, houses are cleaned and red couplets are put up on the doors of every household.They are said to frighten away the ghosts.On that day, people are dressed up.Firecrackers ring out in the air, which adds to the atmosphere of the festival.People after a year’s hard work begin to relax and visit one another.Presents and dinners are given to celebrate the happy reunion of friends and relatives.Families get together.They have jiaozi and enjoy the New Year TV show.Customs may vary from place to place, but the same happy atmosphere is to be found everywhere in the country.Now, I hope you have some idea of Chinese Spring Festival.Best wishes，Yours, 高考直通车网站：http://www.xiexiebang.com/ 欢迎关注@高考直通车 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040

Li Hua(五)有关“财富、健康、幸福”话题

例1： 根据下面提示，写一篇《财富与快乐》的短文。

(1)一些人认为财富能带来快乐。

(2)另一些人认为钱多了不是一件好事。

(3)提出自己的看法。

注意：单词数120个左右。

Wealth and Happiness

Some people think wealth can bring happiness to them.It is true that most of them try to acquire wealth by means of honest labor.They work hard and overcome many difficulties.After doing this, they feel very happy and pleased.Even their spending money is a kind of happiness。

But some people believe wealth can’t bring them happiness.For example, when one gets a fortune, the family members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth with him.And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more.And sometimes even appear bloody fight and killing.What a terrible result!

In my opinion, I think there is no doubt that wealth brings happiness, especially in the modern society.If you have money you can lead a comfortable and colorful life.But we should take a proper attitude towards wealth.Remember： money is not everything。

例2：

最近，你班同学展开了一场讨论，主题是：Wealth & Health。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇100词左右的文章，介绍一下你们讨论的情况。

一些人认为财富更重要

一些人认为健康更重要

1.没有钱万万不行

2.想办法多挣钱

1.健康是本钱

2.要爱惜身体

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个人看法：更看重健康。身体不好，钱再多也无济于事。

Wealth & Health

Which is more important, wealth or health? Different people have different opinions.Some people prefer wealth, holding that money can not bring everything, but without it, one can do nothing.In order to accumulate more money they can do anything.However, other people regard health as more important.Once health is lost, it is no use having a lot of money.As far as I am concerned, I love wealth, but I value health more.Everybody wants to live a happy life.So they try their best to earn money which can ensure they lead a comfortable life, but if happiness and comfort are achieved at the cost of their health, how can they be happy? Without health money becomes meaningless.In my opinion, no one agrees that a wealthy person without good health can be happy.So, just do our best to keep healthy.(六)有关“教育、校园类”话题

例1：你班李明和王英同学在高三阶段有不同的学习方法。请描述下列各图，适当增加细节使文章连贯，并谈谈你的看法。

Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three.They both work hard and but they have different learning methods.Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listening to the teacher.As a result, he misses lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework.So he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep.However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning.She listens attentively and tries to catch everything that the teacher says in class.Because of this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her to go to bed early.In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer her learning method.例2：假设你叫李华，你将作为高三毕业生代表，根据以下要点在毕业晚会上用

英文作一简短的告别演讲：

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2、对老师的感谢;

3、对母校的祝福。

My teachers and fellow students，In a couple of weeks, we’ll say goodbye to our mother school.How time flies!Now It’s really hard for me to put my feelings into words.The past three years has been really a wonderful journey with you guys, full of laughter and tears.To make the journey safe and fruitful, our great teachers contributed their time, energy, love and the whole heart.Here, we are extremely grateful for all that you, dear teachers, have done for us.It’ll soon be the time for us to depart, though unwillingly.But it is not the end.It just means that we’re going to begin a new journey.Finally, on behalf of all the graduates present here, let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers.Thank you!

例3：假如你是李华，是华文中学的学生会主席，为了丰富同学们的业余生活，提高同学们的英语水平，学生会组织了一个English club，请你写封邀请信，邀请同学们参加，内容应包括：

1.English club设立的目的 2.English club 要开展的活动

3.邀请大家参加 English club

注意：开头、结尾已给出;

字数80-120;auditorium 礼堂

Boys and girls，I’m the chairman of Student Union, Li Hua, and I have big news for you.To enrich our life on campus and improve our English, we, Student Union, set up an English club.Obviously, besides study, there are also other things beneficial to us.It is believed that the club can make our campus life colorful and rewarding.There goes the plan.It is arranged that we will see English films in the auditorium on Tuesday evening.Apart from that, there is going to be an English debate or discussion on Saturday evening;yet, the specific topics haven’t been settled.If you have wonderful ideas and suggestions, please let us know.高考直通车网站：http://www.xiexiebang.com/ 欢迎关注@高考直通车 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040

I’ll highly appreciate it if you are actively involved in the club.You will never regret joining us.So, just do it.Student Union

例4：目前，有不少中学生不做家务，一些父母认为：中学生学习负担重，首要任务是学习。再者，中学生也不知道怎样做家务。请你就此用英文给一家报社写一篇短文，阐述你的观点和看法。

注意：

1.词数：100左右;

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Nowadays, some students don’t help their parents do housework at home.Some parents love their children too much and don’t let them work at home.On one hand, they think that their children are too busy with their studies and expect them to do well in their lessons only.On the other hand, they think their children don’t know how to do the housework.However, I think students should help their parents do housework at home.First, that can develop their love for work.Next, that can help them understand their parents better.Last and the most important, that can help them cultivate their ability to live.(七)有关“环境友好型、资源节约型社会”话题

例1：近日你所在的学校开展了“为建设节约型社会献一计”主题活动，同学们提出了许多建议。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文向English Horizons杂志编辑部投稿：

有人建议

你的建议

1、不浪费粮食和纸张

2、尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋

3、毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用?

注意：

1、不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节;高考直通车网站：http://www.xiexiebang.com/ 欢迎关注@高考直通车 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040

2、词数：120字左右，开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数;

3、参考词汇：方便筷disposable chopsticks

Recently，there has been an activity of “doing your bit for an energy-saving society” in our school.Our schoolmates are highly concerned about the increasing lack of energy and provide their own suggestions.Some students suggest that we shouldn’t waste any food or paper, though they appear very easy to get.Meanwhile, some other students think it advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags.Besides, it is also strongly recommended that those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates, which are still in good condition, not be thrown but recycled.Actually, there are still quite a lot that we can easily do: say, try to take buses or ride bicycles instead of driving cars, etc.All of these will definitely help to build an energy-saving society.例2：假如你上周末参加了某旅行社组织的所谓生态游，你觉得名不副实。请你根据下表内容把自己经历的这次生态游和对真正生态游的看法写出来。

所谓的生态游

欣赏风景，享受新鲜空气

有人摘花、捉鸟、乱扔垃圾

真正的生态游

享受自然，同时也是一种责任

要保护自然，保护野生动物

带走美好回忆，留下青山绿水

Last weekend I went on an eco-travel with a travel agency.All the way we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and fresh air.But a few of us picked flowers as while going sightseeing..Some even tried to catch the birds they saw.What was worse, many tourists threw rubbish here and there.The rubbish may do harm to wildlife there.I don’t think this is a true eco-travel.A true eco-travel is a tour that not only allows us to express our love for nature, but needs our responsibility as well.As we enjoy the beauty of nature, we should try our best to protect it.And we should also try to protect wildlife.A true eco-travel should be like this: take nothing away but your good memory;leave nothing behind but all the green trees and the clean water

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第五篇：2017高考英语作文写作基础—描述性写作.doc

高考英语写作……描述性写作

一.教学内容：

描述性写作

二.重点、难点： I.特点及常用结构

1.描述性文章是把人物、事件、景观、地点、环境等用生动的语言，形象地描绘出来。

2.描述性文章的结构

（1）人物：

开头应有简明的介绍

文章的主体部分可按时间或事件的主次进行描述

结尾进行评论或谈感受

（2）地点：

要学会准确地表示方位的词或短语

描述地点的位置通常由上至下，从里到外，从左至右，从远到近。

总之，无论是描述人物，还是地点、环境，都要详略得当，重点突出。

3.学习并牢记下面的短语和句型

表空间顺序

in front of, in the front of, at the back of，on the right（left）side

close to , next to, opposite, across，inside, outside

in（to）the south / east / west / north

on one side …, on the other side（of）

常用短语和句型：

方位

1.There is a tall shelf on the left of my room.（on the right of, in the front of, near the window,）

2.Above the bed, there is a large painting of the blue sea.（On the right of the room,）

3.Next to it is a bed.（In front of it, At the back of, In the middle of, To the right of）

4.They are opposite the door.（on the left / right of the room.）

5.The office building is in the east of the campus.（in the south of, to the west of, in front of, behind, at the back of,）

6.The monument, which was built in 1894, stands in the center of the square.描述国家，城市等

7.China is located in Asia.（be situated…be surrounded by, lie to the east of）

8.It covers a huge area of 9,600 000 square kilometers.9.The population of this city is 100,000.路线

10.When you come out of …（get to …reach…）

11.Cross the street（river）（keep walking along… walk down…）

12.Turn right at the end of Bridge Street into Riverside Road.（the second traffic lights, the first crossing,）

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13.Take the first turning on your left.（take the path which crosses the river.））

14.Go straight on to the traffic light and then turn right.15.You’ll see（find）it

人物

16.My grandpa, kind and patient, enjoys talking with kids.17.He is about 5 feet and 7inches tall.18.She has a round face with two big eyes.描述物品

19.This rope is 100 meters long.= The length of this rope is 100 meters.= This rope is 100 meters in length.（in weight, in width, in height, in size, in color, in shape）

20.It is a round yellow hat with pink flowers on it.It’s made of straw.21.There are three books in the her drawer.II.范文讲解

1.1999年NMET书面表达

假设你是李华，在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信。他三年前参观过你校，听说现在变化很大，希望了解有关情况。参照下图，给他写一封回信，介绍你校的变化。

注意：

（1）回信须包括图画的主要内容，可适当增减细节，使内容连贯。

（2）词数100字左右。

A.审题：

（1）一封信（体裁）

（2）谈学校的变化（三年前图1，三年后图2）

（3）重点在三年后的描述

B.题纲及常用结构

（1）开头语：收到来信hear from sb./ get（receive）your letter …

（2）学校的变化：

新教学楼：a new school building

图书馆：our new library

新操场：the new playground

树木环绕：lots of trees

（3）表述方位的词：

on one side（on the other side）

on the right（left）

There be …，in front of, in and around

C.将以上要点扩展成句并连文，注意句与句之间的过渡。Dear Mr.Smith，I was so pleased to hear from you and I am writing to tell you something about my school.You are right, Quite a few changes have taken place.On one side of the road there is a new classroom building.On the other side, where the playground used to be now stands another new building our library.In it there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines.The playground

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专心 is now in front of the school.We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school.I hope you come and see for yourself some day.Best wishes.Yours, Li Hua

2.假如你叫Alice，你本应去机场接Danial，但你不得不去医院接你的母亲回家，你的朋友Mary主动提出替你去机场接Danial，你给Danial写信说明上述情况，并描述Mary的外表。

Something About Miss Mary Age

in her twenties Looks

slim, of medium height, wavy hair, with glasses Clothes a T-shirt Shoes

high-heeled shoes Personality kind and cheerful

A.审题：

（1）描述性文字的信。

（2）重点描述人物的特点和外貌

B.题纲：

（1）开头：表明不能去的原因及解决办法。

（2）中间：描述Mary的外貌及特点。

利用表中的key-word

（3）信的结尾：I’m looking forward to seeing you.1.Dear Danial，I’m very sorry I can’t come to meet you at the airport since I have to take my mother home from hospital.My friend Mary has kindly offered to meet you and bring you home.As you have never met her before.I’ll describe her to you.Miss Mary is a young lady in her twenties with glasses.She is of medium height.She has a round face with wavy hair.She likes wearing high－heeled shoes.It is easy to recognize her because she is usually dressed in T－shirt and a skirt.She is always cheerful.I do hope you manage to recognize my friend Mary without any difficulty.I’m looking forward to seeing you.Your sincerely, Alice 【模拟试题】

1.假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike将于6月底到北京作短暂停留，请你帮他安排一天的活动。要求用所给的示意图写一封信向他提出建议并对各地点加以简单的介绍。

2.假如你昨天参观了一所高中示范校。请按照图中规定的顺序（从主楼出发），根据以下图表和中文提示，向你班里的其他同学用英文讲述你参观该校时的所见所闻。

注意：

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专心

（1）词数100左右；

（2）开头与结尾已为你写好。

生词：喷泉fountain

参观地点 学生活动 实验楼

做实验 艺术中心 练乐器 报告厅

听报告 操场

足球赛

【试题答案】

1.Dear Mike，I’m glad to hear you are coming soon.I’ve planned a one-day trip for you in Beijing.In the morning you can first go to the Summer Palace, which is one of the most beautiful parks in Beijing.There you can go boating and climbing.It’s also a nice place for taking pictures.Then in the middle of the day you can enjoy a Chinese lunch in a restaurant.In the afternoon, I suggest you visit Beijing University.As you know, it is famous both in China and in the world.Before you go back to your hotel, you can drop in the Book Town.There are not only different kinds books but also many Chinese paintings.I hope you’ll have a good time.Best wishes, Yours，Li Hua

2.Yesterday I paid a visit to a model high school, together with my friend.It’s very big with a beautiful fountain in the center of the schoolyard.We started our visit from the main building.First we went to the lab building where some students were doing experiments.Then we entered the lecture hall behind the lab building and saw many students listening to a lecture given by a professor.Opposite to the lecture hall was the art center.There we watched groups of students playing musical instruments.Finally we arrived at the playground at the far back of the school.Some boys were having a football game, which was so exciting that we couldn’t help cheering for them.It was really an impressive visit.用心

爱心

专心