第一篇：高考英语基础写作人物人品
第一个写作话题：人物人品
课标解读：指本人、家人、邻居、同学、老师、朋友和其他人的情况介绍。包括姓名、年龄、生日、出生地、地址、电话号码、QQ号、电子邮箱、职业、品格、性格、习惯、毅力、责任、个性心理、意志品质、业绩或成就；所在学校、年级、班级，等等。球星影星、同时代的出现在各领域的名人(contemporary famous people)、科学家、领袖人物、历史人物(historical persons)及其趣闻轶事。命题预测：基础写作: 自我介绍；名人简历；名人轶事；写竞选演讲稿；写求职书或应聘信；推荐信等。
读写任务：请就性格、习惯、毅力、责任、态度等发表看法； 你认为什么品质或态度等能带来成功及其理由；你认为怎样才能受人欢迎? 从某人的失败或成功中，你学到了什么?
一、常用单词
1.职业用语
job / occupation/profession 职业teaching staff 教育工作者lecturer大学老师assistant 助教scholar 学者linguist 语言学家mathematician 数学家 scientist 科学家 physicist 物理学家chemist 化学家 artist艺术家biologist生物学家botanist植物学家economist经
济学家editor编辑reporter记者journalist记者architect建筑师leader领导guide导游 model模特musician音乐家soccer star球星actress女演员actor男演员pianist钢琴家 painter画家director导演worker工人 farmer农民 engineer 工程师singer歌唱家 dancer舞蹈家movie star影星 2.个性品质
genius 天才 inspiration 灵感 character 品格personality 个性character 个性psychology心理mentality心态will / determination意志quality品质perspiration汗水achievement业绩accomplishment成就success成功effort努力passion激情honest诚实的friendly友善的cheerful兴高采烈的cherish珍惜creative创造性的easygoing容易相处的independent独立的modest谦虚的warm热情的good-humored心情愉快的kind仁慈的shy羞怯的responsible负责的crazy疯狂的ambitious有雄心的active积极的passive消极的patient有耐心的gentle温和的sensitive敏感的cruel残暴的deceitful骗人的cold不友好的 cool冷静的precious珍贵的worthy有价值的understandable通情达理的virtuous有道德的energetic精力充沛的innocent天真无邪的spiritual精神上的,心灵的3.通讯名称 postal code邮政编码name/surname/full name姓名pen name笔名age年龄birthday生日birthplace出生地address地址native place籍贯nationality国籍 house number门牌lane巷street街road路district区county县province省
home phone住宅电话office phone办公电话e-mail address, mail box 电子邮箱 必备词句：年龄
(1)a five-year-old boy一个五岁的男孩(2)a boy aged five 一个五岁的男孩
(3)in my teens /twenties在我十/二十多岁时(4)at the age of five在五岁时
(5)As a child, I liked to...我小时候喜欢„„ 出生
(1)was born in...出生在„„
(2)be/come from a wealthy family出生于富裕人家(3)was born into a peasant family出生于一个农民家庭 外表
(1)a 1.80-meter-tall boy 一个高1.8米的男孩
(2)overweight胖的;thin瘦的;slim苗条的;strong强壮的(3)look young for one’s age 显得比实际年龄年轻(4)good-looking 长得好看；plain-looking 长得一般(5)well dressed 穿得漂亮；neatly dressed 衣着干净整洁 能力
(1)efficient办事高效率的(2)intelligent有智力的；creative 富创造力的(3)a boy with great ability 能干的男孩(4)a qualified teacher 一名合格的教师(5)speak fluent English 讲流利的英语(6)have a gift for 有„„的天赋(7)be skilled in 在„„方面熟练(8)be experienced in 在„„方面有经验 健康
(1)be in good health/shape/condition 身体健康(2)energetic精力充沛的；well-built身材健美的(3)suffer from...患上„„ 经历(1)graduate from...从„„毕业(2)major in 以„„为专业
(3)gain scholarship 获得奖学金(4)get good grades获得好成绩
(5)get a master’s degree 获得硕士学位(6)be given the title of...获得„„称号
(7)win a gold/silver/copper medal 获得金/银/铜牌(8)gain/win the first prize/place 获得一等奖/第一名
第一个话题：人物人品。基础写作：写竞选学生会部长演说辞来自学校学生会板报上的消息，学生会干部(包括学生会主席、文娱部长、体育部长、学习部长、生活部长、纪律部长等)即将改选。假设你叫李明，有兴趣去竞选某一部长，请用英语写一份演讲稿。［写作内容］
1.曾任班长二年；2.选择竞选某一职位，并说明理由； 3.如果当选，你将为本校同学做些什么。Ladies and gentlemen，Good afternoon.Thank you for coming to this election campaign today.I am Li Ming，from Class 3，Grade 2.With the trust and complete support of my class，I am delighted to announce that I am running for the Entertainment Secretary of the Student Union.As a diligent boy with great organizing ability，I have always been considered to be a good team member and have served as monitor for 2 years.I not only perform well but also do well in singing and dancing.I once won the first place in Guangzhou Singing and Dancing Contest and was given the title of Excellent Student Leader in Guangdong.If I am elected，I believe I will cooperate well with my fellow members of the Union and organize colourful activities to enrich our school life.Thank you very much!
练笔：最近，英语老师要你用英语介绍一位好朋友。请你根据如下的提纲所示，写一篇人物介绍，介绍朋友李华。【写作内容】外表：身材高，16岁，衣着朴实； 学习：学习很用功，独立完成作业，各科成绩优良； 品质：待人和蔼，乐于助人，耐心帮助同学学习英语。爱好：喜欢音乐，爱好体育。
My best friend Li Hua is a 16-year-old tall boy, simply dressed.He works very hard at all his lessons and can finish his homework all by himself,and so he always has an excellent mark in all his subjects.What’s more, he is so kind and friendly to anyone in our class that he is always ready to help others.He is good at English and always helps his classmates with their English language.Above all, he has many hobbies,such as music and sports.任务写作：虚心使人进步，骄傲使人落后
以约120个词就“虚心使人进步，骄傲使人落后(Modesty helps one go forward, whereas conceit makes one fall behind)”进行议论，内容包括：(1)你是否赞同上述观点, 为什么?(2)你今后应当如何做。As is known，modesty is one of Chinese traditional virtues.We were taught early in our lives that modesty helps one go forward whereas conceit makes one fall behind.This advice is of great value and I can’t agree more with the saying.Being modest, one tends to be aware of his shortcomings and would like to learn more so as to become more capable and competent.And a modest man gets along well with others while others would respect him and help him when he
meets difficulties.In contrast, a conceited person tends to be filled with pride and over-estimate himself.Consequently, he would stop where he is，making no more progress.Meanwhile, people may dislike him and he may feel lonely.Personally，I’ll stay modest even though I may have achieved something in life.(135 words)练笔：以120个词就文明礼貌在人们生活中的重要性进行议论，内容包括：（1）你对礼貌重要性的认识；（2）校园内礼貌的现状分析；（3）你觉得人们之间应该如何以礼相待。People who have good manners get suppots, are liked and welcomed everywhere while those who have bad manners suffer a lot, are refused and disliked.So we should respect others and gain respects from others.Manners are important to set up a good relationship among people.In school, most of us students have good manners, and behave well.We always attend classes in time, finish exercises punctually, and respect our teachers and classmates.However, some students ignore a reasonable request andtake someone else’s property withoutpermission.Others backbite, fall asleep in class, make hurtful comments about another person’s looks, abilities, background, family and make annoying noises.I think good manners are a basis of polite society.Our manners, however we present ourselves and behave in our life, should make each other comfortable, confident and capable in the home, the school, the community and the workplace.So we say“Please, Thank you, Excuse me, and I’m sorry according to different situation.练笔：以120个词就“诚实”的主题进行议论，内容包括：（1）你对不诚实现象的看法；（2）诚实的重要性是什么；（3）作为中学生，该如何做一个诚实的人。
The passage mainly tells us that nowadays some people are dishonest for their own benefit, because not only they neglect our traditional values, but also they want to escape being punished.Dishoesty does great harm to our society.It can destroy our good relationship with others, bringing lots of unstable factors to the society.Sometimes, it may even affect people’s health.Why should we be honest? Firstly, being honest is one of Chinese traditional virtues which we should carry forward.Secondly, friendship is based on honesty.Seeing that the honest person is reliable, most of people are willing to make friends with them.Thirdly, honesty is very important for us to build a harmonious society andrealize our spiritual civilization.As students, we should act honestly every day and never cheat others, including cheat in exams.Besides,we should help those who are dishonest correct their mistakes.Only in this way can we win respect from others.写作内容：
1.基础写作：写竞选学生会部长演说辞
来自学校学生会板报上的消息，学生会干部(包括学生会主席、文娱部长、体育部长、学习部长、生活部长、纪律部长等)即将改选。假设你叫李明，有兴趣去竞选某一部长，请用英语写一份演讲稿。
［写作内容］ 1.曾任班长二年；
2.选择竞选某一职位，并说明理由； 3.如果当选，你将为本校同学做些什么。
election campaign today.I am Li Ming，from Class 3，_________________________________________________
2.最近，英语老师要你用英语介绍一位好朋友。请你根据如下的提纲所示，写一篇人物介绍，介绍朋友李华。【写作内容】外表：身材高，16岁，衣着朴实；
学习：学习很用功，独立完成作业，各科成绩优良； 品质：待人和蔼，乐于助人，耐心帮助同学学习英语。爱好：喜欢音乐，爱好体育。
3.任务写作：虚心使人进步，骄傲使人落后
以约120个词就“虚心使人进步，骄傲使人落后(Modesty helps one go forward, whereas conceit makes one fall behind)”进行议论，内容包括：
(1)你是否赞同上述观点, 为什么?(2)你今后应当如何做。
4.以120个词就文明礼貌在人们生活中的重要性进行议论，内容包括：
（1）你对礼貌重要性的认识；
（2）校园内礼貌的现状分析；
（3）你觉得人们之间应该如何以礼相待。
5.以120个词就“诚实”的主题进行议论，内容包括：
（1）你对不诚实现象的看法；
（2）诚实的重要性是什么；
（3）作为中学生，该如何做一个诚实的人。
第二篇：写作话题1人物人品
写作话题（1）人物人品
基础写作: 自我介绍；名人简历；名人轶事；写竞选演讲稿；写求职书或应聘信；推荐信等。读写任务：请就性格、习惯、毅力、责任、态度等发表看法； 你认为什么品质或态度等能带来成功及其理由；你认为怎样才能受人欢迎? 从某人的失败或成功中，你学到了什么? 年龄
(1)a five-year-old boy一个五岁的男孩(2)a boy aged five 一个五岁的男孩(3)in my teens /twenties在我十/二十多岁时(4)at the age of five在五岁时
(5)As a child, I liked to...我小时候喜欢…… 出生
(1)was born in...出生在……
(2)be/come from a wealthy family出生于富裕人家
(3)was born into a peasant family出生于一个农民家庭 外表
(1)a 1.80-meter-tall boy 一个高1.8米的男孩
(2)overweight胖的；thin瘦的；slim苗条的；strong强壮的(3)look young for one’s age 显得比实际年龄年轻(4)good-looking 长得好看； plain-looking 长得一般(5)well dressed 穿得漂亮； neatly dressed 衣着干净整洁 能力
(1)efficient办事高效率的
(2)intelligent有智力的；creative 富创造力的(3)a boy with great ability 能干的男孩(4)a qualified teacher 一名合格的教师(5)speak fluent English 讲流利的英语(6)have a gift for 有……的天赋(7)be skilled in 在……方面熟练(8)be experienced in 在……方面有经验 健康
(1)be in good health/shape/condition 身体健康(2)energetic精力充沛的；well-built身材健美的(3)suffer from...患上…… 经历
(1)graduate from...从……毕业(2)major in 以……为专业
(3)gain scholarship 获得奖学金(4)get good grades获得好成绩(5)get a master’s degree 获得硕士学位
(6)be given the title of...获得……称号
(7)win a gold/silver/copper medal 获得金/银/铜牌(8)gain/win the first prize/place 获得一等奖/第一名 任务写作：虚心使人进步，骄傲使人落后
以约120个词就“虚心使人进步，骄傲使人落后(Modesty helps one go forward, whereas conceit makes one fall behind)”进行议论，内容包括：(1)你是否赞同上述观点, 为什么?(2)你今后应当如何做。
任务写作：虚心使人进步，骄傲使人落后
As is known，modesty is one of Chinese traditional virtues.We were taught early in our lives that modesty helps one go forward whereas conceit makes one fall behind.This advice is of great value and I can’t agree more with the saying.Being modest, one tends to be aware of his shortcomings and would like to learn more so as to become more capable and competent.And a modest man gets along well with others while others would respect him and help him when he meets difficulties.In contrast, a conceited person tends to swell with pride and over-estimate himself.Consequently, he would stop where he is，making no more progress.Meanwhile, people may dislike him and he may feel lonely.Personally，I’ll stay modest even though I may have achieved something in life.(135 words)
第三篇：2017高考英语作文写作基础—怎样写人物简介.doc
高考英语写作……怎样写人物简介
一.教学内容：
英语写作……怎样写人物简介
二.重点、难点：
（一）人物简介的写作步骤
1.Birthday and birth place
2.Family background
3.Education
4.Big events in his or her life(in order of time)
5.Evaluation
（二）人物简介写作中常用的词组及句子
1.Birthday and birth place ——was / were born on…in… , 2.Family background ——
1)a poor / rich family 2)his(her)family was so poor that……，3)with the help of his parents ，4)his father was very strict with him……,5)the son of a poor family , 6)when he was a small boy ，7)as a child ，8)during his(her)childhood ，9)spend his childhood in……,10)live a happy(hard)life , 11)a boy of 15
3.Education——
1)graduate from……department of ……university ,2)When at college , he majored in……,3)receive a doctor’s degree.4)get higher education 5)go abroad for further studies
4.Big events in his life——
1)be interested in … , 2)work hard at … , 3)devote his lifetime to … , 4)do research about / into … 5)make a big decision.make up one’s mind to do sth.6)do sth with great determination and perseverance.7)be fond of… , 8)be strict in sth.9)have a … way of doing sth.10)try one’s best to do sth.11)encourage sb to do sth.12)fight for , give up one’s life for sb / sth.13)win a prize in … competition.14)be good at.15)make rapid progress in … , 16)set a new world record of … 17)become a member of … 18)study hard.train hard.19)win a gold medal.20)work so hard as to improve… 21)have a gift for…
5.Evaluation——
1)one of the best(most important)… 2)set sb a good example.3)a model teacher.4)be respected by everyone.5)sing high praise for… speak(think)highly of… 6)his hard work
用心
爱心
专心 brought him great success.7)his heroic story spread all over the city.8)remember sb forever.9)be honored as … 10)be famous as … , 11)be regarded as … , 12)become a world champion at … Championships.13)He became famous for his new theory.14)The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader.15)Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.16)People spoke highly of him and all respected him.6.高考中描写人常用表达方式
（1）介词人物的姓名、出身
She was born in Poland on Nov.7 , 1867.（她于1867年11月7日出生于波兰。）
a great scientist with the name Einstein（一个叫爱因斯坦的伟大科学家）
Abraham Lincoln , the son of a poor family , was born in Kentucky on February 12 , 1809.（亚伯拉汗•林肯，一个贫苦家庭的儿子，于1809年2月12日出生于肯他基州。）
Born of a poor clerk’s family.Charles Dickens had little schooling.（出生在一个贫困的小职员家庭中，查儿斯•狄更生接受了很少学校教育）
（2）描述人物外貌和性格特征的常用词语
goodlooking（长相滑稽的）
uglyhaired（白头发的）
warmhearted（好心的）
absenttempered（脾气不好的）
nearsighted（远视的）
tall（个高的）
short（个矮的）
pretty（漂亮的）
naughty（淘气的）
lovely（可爱的）
easyA World Champion in Diving.其次应介绍人物的姓名、性别、年龄、籍贯，随后介绍他的成长过程，最后介绍他取得的成就。
3.91高考书面表达范文：
Sun ShuweiBruce Bruce , our English teacher , is from England and is about 40 years old.He is tall and thin with a pair of glasses on his nose.He is strict with us in our study.He prepares his lessons well and corrects our homework carefully.His teaching style is quite different from that of the others.In class he always encourages us to think hard and develop our ability to study on our own.He often helps and cares for us.He is very kind to us.In his spare time he plays basketball and football with us.We all love and respect him.3.介绍Anderson Anderson was born in 1805.His father died when he was only eleven.Being poor , the family couldn’t send him to school.He had to go and learn sewing to make a living.At the age of fourteen , he went to work at a theatre.Later , with the help of some kind people , Anderson had the chance to go to school.In 1828 , he began his college life.After graduation he began to work on literature.He kept on writing stories and poems.His hard work brought him great success.He died in 1875 , leaving the world more than 160 stories.用心
爱心
专心
第四篇：2017高考英语作文写作基础—描述性写作.doc
高考英语写作……描述性写作
一.教学内容：
描述性写作
二.重点、难点： I.特点及常用结构
1.描述性文章是把人物、事件、景观、地点、环境等用生动的语言，形象地描绘出来。
2.描述性文章的结构
（1）人物：
开头应有简明的介绍
文章的主体部分可按时间或事件的主次进行描述
结尾进行评论或谈感受
（2）地点：
要学会准确地表示方位的词或短语
描述地点的位置通常由上至下，从里到外，从左至右，从远到近。
总之，无论是描述人物，还是地点、环境，都要详略得当，重点突出。
3.学习并牢记下面的短语和句型
表空间顺序
in front of, in the front of, at the back of，on the right（left）side
close to , next to, opposite, across，inside, outside
in（to）the south / east / west / north
on one side …, on the other side（of）
常用短语和句型：
方位
1.There is a tall shelf on the left of my room.（on the right of, in the front of, near the window,）
2.Above the bed, there is a large painting of the blue sea.（On the right of the room,）
3.Next to it is a bed.（In front of it, At the back of, In the middle of, To the right of）
4.They are opposite the door.（on the left / right of the room.）
5.The office building is in the east of the campus.（in the south of, to the west of, in front of, behind, at the back of,）
6.The monument, which was built in 1894, stands in the center of the square.描述国家，城市等
7.China is located in Asia.（be situated…be surrounded by, lie to the east of）
8.It covers a huge area of 9,600 000 square kilometers.9.The population of this city is 100,000.路线
10.When you come out of …（get to …reach…）
11.Cross the street（river）（keep walking along… walk down…）
12.Turn right at the end of Bridge Street into Riverside Road.（the second traffic lights, the first crossing,）
用心
爱心
专心
13.Take the first turning on your left.（take the path which crosses the river.））
14.Go straight on to the traffic light and then turn right.15.You’ll see（find）it
人物
16.My grandpa, kind and patient, enjoys talking with kids.17.He is about 5 feet and 7inches tall.18.She has a round face with two big eyes.描述物品
19.This rope is 100 meters long.= The length of this rope is 100 meters.= This rope is 100 meters in length.（in weight, in width, in height, in size, in color, in shape）
20.It is a round yellow hat with pink flowers on it.It’s made of straw.21.There are three books in the her drawer.II.范文讲解
1.1999年NMET书面表达
假设你是李华，在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信。他三年前参观过你校，听说现在变化很大，希望了解有关情况。参照下图，给他写一封回信，介绍你校的变化。
注意：
（1）回信须包括图画的主要内容，可适当增减细节，使内容连贯。
（2）词数100字左右。
A.审题：
（1）一封信（体裁）
（2）谈学校的变化（三年前图1，三年后图2）
（3）重点在三年后的描述
B.题纲及常用结构
（1）开头语：收到来信hear from sb./ get（receive）your letter …
（2）学校的变化：
新教学楼：a new school building
图书馆：our new library
新操场：the new playground
树木环绕：lots of trees
（3）表述方位的词：
on one side（on the other side）
on the right（left）
There be …，in front of, in and around
C.将以上要点扩展成句并连文，注意句与句之间的过渡。Dear Mr.Smith，I was so pleased to hear from you and I am writing to tell you something about my school.You are right, Quite a few changes have taken place.On one side of the road there is a new classroom building.On the other side, where the playground used to be now stands another new building our library.In it there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines.The playground
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爱心
专心 is now in front of the school.We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school.I hope you come and see for yourself some day.Best wishes.Yours, Li Hua
2.假如你叫Alice，你本应去机场接Danial，但你不得不去医院接你的母亲回家，你的朋友Mary主动提出替你去机场接Danial，你给Danial写信说明上述情况，并描述Mary的外表。
Something About Miss Mary Age
in her twenties Looks
slim, of medium height, wavy hair, with glasses Clothes a T-shirt Shoes
high-heeled shoes Personality kind and cheerful
A.审题：
（1）描述性文字的信。
（2）重点描述人物的特点和外貌
B.题纲：
（1）开头：表明不能去的原因及解决办法。
（2）中间：描述Mary的外貌及特点。
利用表中的key-word
（3）信的结尾：I’m looking forward to seeing you.1.Dear Danial，I’m very sorry I can’t come to meet you at the airport since I have to take my mother home from hospital.My friend Mary has kindly offered to meet you and bring you home.As you have never met her before.I’ll describe her to you.Miss Mary is a young lady in her twenties with glasses.She is of medium height.She has a round face with wavy hair.She likes wearing high－heeled shoes.It is easy to recognize her because she is usually dressed in T－shirt and a skirt.She is always cheerful.I do hope you manage to recognize my friend Mary without any difficulty.I’m looking forward to seeing you.Your sincerely, Alice 【模拟试题】
1.假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike将于6月底到北京作短暂停留，请你帮他安排一天的活动。要求用所给的示意图写一封信向他提出建议并对各地点加以简单的介绍。
2.假如你昨天参观了一所高中示范校。请按照图中规定的顺序（从主楼出发），根据以下图表和中文提示，向你班里的其他同学用英文讲述你参观该校时的所见所闻。
注意：
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爱心
专心
（1）词数100左右；
（2）开头与结尾已为你写好。
生词：喷泉fountain
参观地点 学生活动 实验楼
做实验 艺术中心 练乐器 报告厅
听报告 操场
足球赛
【试题答案】
1.Dear Mike，I’m glad to hear you are coming soon.I’ve planned a one-day trip for you in Beijing.In the morning you can first go to the Summer Palace, which is one of the most beautiful parks in Beijing.There you can go boating and climbing.It’s also a nice place for taking pictures.Then in the middle of the day you can enjoy a Chinese lunch in a restaurant.In the afternoon, I suggest you visit Beijing University.As you know, it is famous both in China and in the world.Before you go back to your hotel, you can drop in the Book Town.There are not only different kinds books but also many Chinese paintings.I hope you’ll have a good time.Best wishes, Yours，Li Hua
2.Yesterday I paid a visit to a model high school, together with my friend.It’s very big with a beautiful fountain in the center of the schoolyard.We started our visit from the main building.First we went to the lab building where some students were doing experiments.Then we entered the lecture hall behind the lab building and saw many students listening to a lecture given by a professor.Opposite to the lecture hall was the art center.There we watched groups of students playing musical instruments.Finally we arrived at the playground at the far back of the school.Some boys were having a football game, which was so exciting that we couldn’t help cheering for them.It was really an impressive visit.用心
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第五篇：英语写作基础（本站推荐）
浅析大学生英语四级写作水平现状及写作策略
【摘要】本文对大学生英语四级写作中出现的问题进行陈述和分析。并遂一提出解决
方法。最后，系统地对提高英语四级写作水平的策略从整体上进行论述。
【关键词】大学英语四级 写作问题 方法
大学英语作文是考查学生英语综合水平和应用能力的一个重要指标，也是大学四级考试中的重要组成部分。英语写作是一项层次较高，难度较大。涉及面较广的综合性语言技能。写作水平如何最能反映出学生的实际英语水平。2007年1月，采用新题型的大学生英语四级(CET_4)考试在全国范围内全面实施。写作(Writing)是新四级题中与完形填空(Cloze)一样均没有变化的一个部分。可见新四级考试依然十分重视学生英语写作能力的考核。以较高的分数通过英语四级考试是每个考生梦寐以求的事，然而如何提高四级作文水平却是广大考生头疼的问题。
一、大学生英语四级写作水平现状
（一）词汇量小
作文是由句子构成的，而句子则是由单词组成的。如果把一篇作文比作高楼，单词则是组成高楼的一块块砖石。砖石的好坏，必然决定了高楼的质量。由于词汇量小，而为了在考试规定的30分钟内完成一篇作文。有些学生不得不“生拼硬凑”。因此造成了用词不当，拼写错误等现象。例如：“婚姻”这个词，有的学生只知道“marry(v.)”,而不知道“married(adj.)”，“marriage(n.)”。这样不分词性地乱用“marry(v.)”必然会出现错误。
要解决学生词汇量小的状况，不是一朝一夕的事情，不能在短时间内改变。学生应该循序渐进，逐步积累。具体来说，学生应该在平时的英语学习过程中增大阅读量。在阅读过程中发现新词汇，积累新词汇。[1]对于新学习的词汇，应当多造句。通过造句，学生能够加深对所学词汇的印象，从而真正理解和掌握词汇。对于已经掌握的单诃，也应该经常复习，防止遗忘。
（二）病句现象严重
在四级阅卷过程中，阅卷老师经常会读到一些令人啼笑皆非的句子。病句的出现自然会影响到作文的分数。导致出现病句的原因是多种多样的：有些学生虽然学习了多年的英语，却依然固守着使用汉语来思考问题的习惯。体现在英语写作中，往往是句子语序颠倒．短语搭配不当等问题。还有些学生由于英语语法知识掌握不牢固。另外有些学 1
生是由于粗心大意，考试中贪图速度而忽略了作文质量等原因。
改掉作文中的病句现象，需要学生和教师的共同努力。学生应该在平时尽可能地多进行作文练习。写周记、日记都是很好的方法。在进行作文练习之后．如果有范文的话，学生可以通过把自己的作文与范文相比较，发现不足，改进缺点；如果没有相对应的范文的话,同学之间也可以采取互相批改，共同探讨的方式来取长补短。同时，教师在教学过程中对一些常用的语法现象应予以仔细深入地讲解，确保学生理解吸收。[2]在作文批改中，教师应对典型病句在课堂上讲解．使其他学生引以为戒。避免犯同样的错误。
（三）对作文题型分析不够透彻
四级作文可分为现象解释型，对比选择型，问题解决型，观点论证型和应用文五种题型。这五类作文题型既是对四级作文的科学分类，又是对四级作文考点的高度概括和总结。有些学生在写作文之前没有对所写作文的类型进行认真地分析，因此没能“对症下药”，导致文不对题，或者有的学生作文内容基本符合题目要求，但是不够精彩，也很难得到高分。四级作文的不同类型要求学生使用不同的写作手法，写作的具体内容也应该有所不同。学生应该具体情况具体分析。了解不同考试作文的具体要求，按照要求进行写作．学生才能写出质量较高的作文。例如：在四级作文中．现象解释型的考试作文要求考生对某一社会现象进行解释，并加以评论。其基本结构是：说明现状；阐述这种现状产生或存在的原因；做出分析，提出建议或总结观点。对比选择型是四级考试写作中常见的题型。[3]要求考生比较两种观点或做法，进而表明自己对问题或事物的态度或观点。问题解决型要求学生从试题的提示性文字或图表人手，解释提示性文字或图表，图画反映的问题，指出问题的危害性或解决这一问题的紧迫性；然后对问题展开分析，提出解决问题的方案或应对措施；最后一段要求考生表明自己对待这一问题的态度、做法等。观点论证型要求考生根据题目给出论点，按照提纲的结构要求对其进行论证，然后表明自己的立场和看法。通过摆事实，讲道理的方式剖析事物，论述事物，发表意见，确立或否定某一主张。应用文，尤其是信函，也是四级作文涉及的题型之一。在这类题型中，考生会读到一个特定的场景。试题要求考生按照这个特定的场景给相关人士写一封短信，并在信中明确表达自己写信的原因和目的等。只要掌握了英语书信的基本格式。并运用恰当的句式和语句。就一定能写出一篇好的书信。
如果在四级考试中注意改进了以上三点不足的话，学生的作文水平会有很大的提高。如何在四级考试中使作文拿到高分呢?在具体的写作过程中，每个环节都是非常重要的。
二、提高大学生英语四级写作水平的策略
(一)平时训练与积累
1．加强听力训练。通过听的渠道获得语言信息及语言感受，在外语学习中是基础的基础。为提高学生听力，使其获取更多的信息，应加强听力训练，从而为表达打下基础。
2．积累词汇。犹如土木砖石是建筑的材料一样，词汇是说话写作的必需材料。如果一篇英语文章，有80％的词不认识，怎能理解文章所表达的信息呢?如果要写一个句子，10个词有8个词拼写不出或拼写错误，又怎么能表达自己的思想呢?可见，衡量一个学生英语水平及交际能力的高低，关键看他掌握词汇量的多少。[4]教学大纲规定的词汇是经过科学筛选的，是学生学好英语所需的最基本的词汇。大纲要求学生能就一定的话题或提纲在半小时内写出120～150个词的短文，能写短信和便条，达意思清楚、无重大语言错误。为达到大纲要求，提高学生写的能力，要求学生背诵大纲的词汇，从而学生在书面表达中，避免因单词拼写错误而丢分。
(二)解题时注意事项
1．仔细审题，吃透要求。
在作文考试中，审题是至关重要的一步。只有审题正确，才知道能保证作文不偏题，不离题，这是保证作文得高分的前提条件。在审题过程中，对题目所提供的信息一定要认真分析，弄清楚该题目究竟要表达什么，把提供的汉语提示多读几遍，理解透它的要求，并将所规定的内容及要求重新进行整理组织，使其条理化，再以合适的口气、身份从适当的角度进行表达。
2．确定写作方法。
审题正确之后。下一步就是确定写作方法。写作方法是指全文或其中的每一个段落所应采取的表现手法，即议论、说明、叙事。确定正确的写作方法。[5]主要是要正确地判断出作文考试题的类型。
3．合理地进行结构安排。
合理的结构安排，是成功地写出一篇好文章的基础。作文的结构安排主要是段落安排以及主题句、扩展句与结尾句的安排。也就是说要注意句子之间以及段落之间的过渡和衔接。考生在结构安排上应注意段落的完整性、统一性和连贯性。
4．确定主题句。主题句的好坏，直接关系到段落划分是否成功、准确，因此写好主题句非常重要。
5．材料的选择与组织。选择适当的材料可以准确、有力地表述文章中心思想。考生在选择材料时，应尽量选择具有针对性、普遍性、新颖胜、鲜明时代特色的材料。材料的组织也必须结合试题要求，按一定的逻辑顺序组织在一起。[6]组织材料的关键在于找出贯穿文章内容的一条主线。
6．注意书写。考生在注意到作文的各个细节的同时，应该注意自己的书写。字迹潦草、卷面涂改现象过多，都会影响阅卷人对文章的印象。这样的考生即使写作水平再高，也难得高分。
后记
要想在四级考试中作文取得高分，学生平生应该多下功夫，打好基础。写好
一篇作文不仅要有充实的内容．还要有扎实的语言基本功。这就要求学生在日常的学习中努力积累知识．多学多练。同时，教师也要及时地给予指导和
帮助。只有这样，学生的四级作文水平才能真正地有所提高。
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Analysis of college students English level Four writing status
and writing strategies
Abstract: This paper analyzes college students' English level Four writing appearing in the problem statement and analysis.And then propose solutions.Finally, the system to improve the English level Four writing strategies from the whole paper.Key words:university English level Four, Problems in writing，writing method
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