雅思作文高分实用

第一篇：雅思作文高分实用

雅思小作文高分模版

小作文结构

开头段1-2句 转述原题

主体段11+X句 每个主体段第一句话概括本段，X句介绍数字

…

主体段N

结尾段1-2句 第一句介绍总数total（如果没有就不写），第二句作结论

开头段

时态：一般现在时

替换词

proportion/ percentageinformation/ datanumber/ figures

family/ householdmales/ menfemales/ women

influence/ affect(v.)effect(n.)categories/ kinds/ typesdemand/ need

subway/ underground railwaystore/ shopuniversity/ college show/ describe/ illustrate/ demonstrate/ summarize/ indicate

国家的替换（如美国，英国等）

主体段

时态：由题目的时间决定

1.数据按顺序介绍，不要跳跃

2.4类关键数据：maximum最大值，minimum最小值，trend变化趋势，intersection交叉点（线图）

第一句，由图可见：

As can be seen from the table that…

It can be seen from the table that…

We can see from the table that…

According to the xx chart, …

It is interesting to note that…

Noticeably,(Interestingly)

第二句，具体来说：

To be more specific, … = more specifically

To be more exact,… = more exactly

替换词

上升

increased/ an increaserose/ a rise

急剧上升

rocketed(boomed)a rocket(a boom)

下降

dropped/ a dropdecreased/ a decreasereduced / a reduction

急剧下降

slumpeda slump

持平

stabilizedremained / maintained / stayedstable / constant / steady

波动

fluctuateda fluctuation

最高点

peaked atreached the highest point at(as high as)

最低点

reached the bottom at

速度快/慢

rapid rapidly/ slow slowly

幅度大/小

significant significantly/ gradual gradually/ steady steadily/ slight slightly

大约：about/ around/approximately / just over/ just under

到达某个数量

reached/ stood at / arrived at

预期值（将来时间必须用这个写）

A is expected/ predicted / estimated / projected to reach …

分别

respectively

占比

accounted for/ made up/ represented the percentage of / was responsible for / provided

一些例句：

As can be seen from the graph, the number of … fluctuated during the period of ….As can be seen from the graph, there was a slight rise in the number of *** from *** to ***

The period between *** and *** experienced a slight rise of …, with the number reaching ***.It can be seen from the chart that *** accounted for the greatest proportion of ***

As for other categories, …

After that, an opposite trend occurred.The highest … was A, followed by…

结尾段

Therefore, it can be clearly seen from the table that …

流程图

The process diagram illustrates in *** stages how …

由图可见

In the first stage(picture, period), … / Initially,In the next step, …

After that(Next/ Then), …

Finally, …(the whole cycle starts over again.)

追加描述

at this stage/ at this point/ as the diagram shows

Therefore, the process diagram clearly shows that …

雅思大作文高分模版 –(1)

立场类文章

开头段

1.As the world continues to increase in complexity, **(点题目的范围，比如education, crime, environmentalpreservation等)has triggered a wide public concern and discussion.2.When it comes to whether …(这句从句一定要写对，就是点题), people hold conflicting opinions.3.Personally, I strongly think that …

第二段(你反对的那一方的有道理的部分。一般1-2个观点)

双边结合：On the one hand, there is no doubt that sth.has certain advantages(disadvantages).只选择一边立场：One’s first inclination might be to argue that sth.has certain advantages(disadvantages).第一个观点To begin with, ….第二个观点Moreover, ….论据部分可能的连接词：

as a result/ to be more specific/ in other words/ for instance

第三段(你支持的那一方的观点，一般2-3个观点)

双边结合：On the other hand, we should not ignore the disadvantages it may bring along.只选择一边立场：A quick look at the following facts, however, may show us a different picture.连接词注意不要重复即可，如on top of that / besides / apart from

结尾段（此类文章结尾必须要写）(仅以抽烟好不好为例)

只选择一边立场：Overall, despite the advantages smoking may bring, I think it has more disadvantages in terms of individual health and other aspects.Therefore, people should not be encouraged to take up smoking.如果为双边结合的，结尾可用not only, but also 连接

如果支持那方有新观点，也可以放在结尾段。

雅思大作文高分模版 –(2)

解决问题类文章

开头段

As the world continues to increase in complexity, **（点题）has triggered a wide public concern and discussion.New solutions to this problem are being proposed, trialed and implemented with ever increasing speed.This essay aims to analyze the reasons for and potential influences(effects)brought by this problem and tries to give some possible solutions.一定要看清楚题目问了哪几个问题，cause, effect, solution不一定都问的。

第二段

The causes of the problem facing the world are diverse.第三段

Obviously, the situation has had various influences(consequences)on our society,(both positive and negative ones).如果没有好的影响，逗号后面就写mostly negative ones.第四段

Considering these causes, actions should be taken in several fields.(The role of governments in environmental management is difficult but inescapable.)这句话很好，但不适用所有的题目。

结尾段(可以不写)以下两种写法根据题目任选一种

1.In conclusion, I think there are many reasons why …, and corresponding measures should be taken.Only by

concerted efforts of governments and individuals, can this demanding challenge be addressed.2.Progress is being made.The problem, though, remains the same.Will the change come quickly enough?

第二篇：雅思高分作文

The increase of food production owns much to fertilizers and better machinery, but some people say it has a negative impact on human health and community.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Write at least 250 words.It it evidentially true that advanced machinery and fertilizers, to a large degree, optimize food production.However, by giving it all negative comments, I believe it unreasonable and irrational since it merely represents only one single step rather than the entire processing procedure.It cannot be repudiated that side-effects fertilizers and machinerybring about are somehow obvious.For instance, the chemical substances detrimental to health seep into crops and vegetables along withfertilizers.Sometimes, overdose of any chemical may directly result in certain degrading of body organs.More seriously, the universal application of machinery may replace human labor force as a more efficient substitute, which may lead to the rise of unemployment.Besides, the waste gas generated by all those units will definitely contribute to local air quality or perhaps global warming.Nevertheless, is it true that we, as human beings, should leave all these inventions behind and pretend they have never made a great difference?

On the other side, it is a logical error to take one certain step as the whole process.Currently, along with scientific advancement, people rarely take raw food as in the past.Thanks to the perfection of food processing industry, there are more procedures, such as filtering, degerming, or low-temperature evaporating, to guarantee food quality harmless to human bodies.In addition, many trace elements and other nutrient vitamins are, through advanced operation, compoundedin the food in order to improve the nutrient composition of the food itself.Therefore, it is fairly assertive and parochial to claim fertilizers and machinery have a negative impact.And more ironically, if human beings did not apply them in food production today,there would be no way to feed growing world population.As was previously stated and well discussed, the role and function of fertilizers and machinery in food production is overgeneralized and misinterpreted.Personally, they both serve well in food production, and their flaws are avoidable most of time.

第三篇：雅思大作文高分技巧

雅思大作文高分技巧：对比

为大家整理了雅思大作文高分技巧：——对比，对比是雅思大作文写作中的高分方法，因为使用对比可以突出主题，也可以是文章更为吸引人。对比方法在雅思大作文写作这种的应用很多，可以把对比应用在事例中，也可以应用在顺序中。华一留学的小编为大家转载这篇文章。

1、通过比较和对比方式来论证，这样两个事物、行为或者观点的利弊就非常明显。

Those who believe in the measure say that students benefit a lot from traveling or working for a year before their formal university education.First, they can more broadly acquainted themselves with the society, deepen their understanding of the outside world, and thus better coordinate their objectives of learning with the needs of the society.In contrast, by immediate entrance to university they can not steer the direction of their study well and may display a poor combination of the theory with practice.Second, study at high school is really exhausting, especially when to win college

admission.So it is necessary to grant these children a relatively long period of relaxation or buffer, say, traveling or working for a year, to loosen the chords of their brain, so that when they go back to school later again, they can become completely refreshed and rejuvenated.这篇雅思大作文写作的内容是关于上大学前是否应该用一年的时间来旅游或者工作进行论证。此段的主题是学生在进入大学学习之前花一年时间进行旅游或工作的话，会让他们受益匪浅。对比点是：进入大学之前一年进行旅游或工作有利于让学生广泛了解社会，加深他们对外界的理解，因此能让他们更好地协调好学习目标和社会的需要。应用这样的雅思大作文写作方法，相对比之下，直接进入大学学习的话，他们不能够把握学习的方向，而且有可能会产生理论和实践相脱节。通过此番对比，旅游或工作一年对于即将步入大学的学生们的好处是显而易见，段落的主题句得到有力的论证。

2、通过假设进行正反论述。

Then, since the transportation system is the lifeline of a country’s economic activities, its paralysis would lead to the disintegration of the economy, either industry of farming or daylife.Suppose all the means of transportation were halted for lack of oil, factories with insufficient raw materials would have to close, workers would be out of work, and ripe farm crops would have to stay in the fields at the mercy of rain and storms.People would try to store food and the price of all commodities would go up.If we take those power stations run by oil into account, situations would become even worse.In this sense, oil decides the fate of the whole economy and that of the government.通过假设得出了一系列的可怕的后果，最后再得出结论，这样的结论是发人深省，当然也是最能引起人们广泛重视的，这样的雅思大作文写作方法是最容易给人留下深刻印象的。

以上就是关于对比这种雅思大作文写作方法的介绍，大家可以通过上面的两个例子看到，这两个作用都是在雅思大作文写作中非常有用的，都能起到非常关键的点题作用。所以大家在自己的雅思大作文写作的备考中可以进行适当的应用。

第四篇：雅思高分作文- 教育类

1.It is generally believed that education is of vital importance in individuals’ development and well-being of societies.What should education consist of to fulfill both these functions?

With the rapid development of modern society, education is becoming more and more crucial to both individuals and societies.The issue over what education should consist of has considerably aroused people’s wide concern.In this essay, I seek to explore this complicated topic from diverse perspectives and what influence could be brought.Among the most important aspects education should consist of, one should be stressed is professional knowledge education.On one hand, under the fierce competitive circumstance, people who have professional skills and experience attract many big companies.Therefore, study about one special area gives people more opportunities to hurt an ideal job.On the other hand, this education is also significant to develop societies in a long run.At the second place, what is also worth noticing is that physical education is necessary for students, especially for teenagers.If you want to achieve successfully in the modern societies, strong body is the first premise, which makes you always in sharp.So education should push people to take care themselves and this could bring great benefits to the healthy society.Last but not least, we should not lose sight of psychological education.Psychological problems are serious nowadays and a sizable percentage of people suffer from them.A survey conducted by a famous research organization indicates that over 40 percent of students have various psychological problems, who really need help from school and society.Even worse, if such problems cannot be solved, they could hamper the progress of well-being society.Judging from what I have been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that three aspects cannot be separated in education, which play vital important roles in the growth of individuals and societies.The fulfillment of both people and societies can be done as long as we lay emphasis on three aspects mentioned above.2.Human Society is a long period of building and developing.From

the time man lived in dank caves to nowadays when he lives in such a

modern life with a lot of excellent facilities.The modern life, the

excellent facilities was not a present from god.It was made by people of

all generations who always learned from the past and developed

everything they had learned from it.Thus, I totally disagree with the

statement above that learning about the past has no value.The first reason for this is that learning about the past brings us all the

knowledge and information in the past.Without yesterday, there is no

today.A society can develop only when its people inherit and

understand the achievements of the precursors because the precursors'

achievements were the foundation for everything to develop..For

example, before 1964 there was only black-and-white television but

until now there are kinds of colour televisions that are slim and

innovative such as LCD TV...The black-and-white television made the

basis and gave inventors idea to develop the modern TV nowadays.Consequently our knowledge, success today is the result of constant

work of our ancestors before.Secondly, learning about the past is very essential because it makes us

doubt and take consideration into earlier assumptions.For that reason,people will find out mistakes that were made in the past.This will show

us which roads not to ever go down again and put human in a right way

to develop.Learning about the past is not only learning about the

history but also is learning from our and the others' mistakes.By this

way of learning, people will become more and more experienced and

never make the same mistakes again.Additionally, if learning about the past has no value, people in the world

could speak, could write by themselves without learning from anyone.This is impossible so the value of the past, in this case are the parents,are undeniable.In a nutshell, the past is always a good teacher and we are still bad

students who crave for knowledge.Denying the past also means that we

are destroying the present and our future because no one can jump

without ground to stand on.3.When it comes to the value of history, the discussion of this issue

among individuals and in society as a whole has come into vogue during

the last decade.The statement declares that “learning about the past

has no value for those of us living in the present.” I disagree with

the...there is a thing you have to know.The main reason for my propensity to the importance of history is

that in the business world, there is a saying that you have to know

where you have been and where you are in order to know where you are

going...Furthermore, I agree that business corporations find it critical to

have regular views of the past business performance without

reservations since each corporation has to see what mistakes were

made in order to avoid repeating them.Naturally, they learn from the

past mistakes which prepare them for the future.Let’s bring our discussion to a more present and practical context.It can be given an example that Microsoft usually has regular views of

its past performance, usually in the form of quarterly or annual review.Another equally essential aspect accounting for why I advocate the

value of learning about the past involves the realm of politics and

society.No one can deny that in the international arena, one must

possess a thorough knowledge of history in order to understand the

current dynamics and complex relationships among countries.Obviously, it is imperative that the politicians should learn from the

past political mistakes.History is replete with evidence to demonstrate

this point that the world community learned the great lesson from WWII

that there must not be another world war thus we entered into 40 plus

years of the cold war.However, we should concede that despite the merits of learning

about the past, over extended referring to the past will be indeed

counterproductive, even harmful.The harm it produces is, in my view,both palpable and profound.For the individual, it has a debasing

impact on people’s originality;for the society, it may promote a

tendency toward mechanism ossification.In sum, the advantages of referring to the past outweigh the

disadvantages, but it is imperative to point out that whether historical

information can actively affect our present life depends on whether we

could take rational cognizance of the past and whether we could try to

make breakthrough and whether we could learn from the past failures

and success, especially from the failures.

第五篇：雅思写作高分

雅思写作大作文必看高分范文

TASK 2: 高分范文一

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment;only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what

do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about environmental protection and regard it as one of the most important challenges.However, whether only governments and big firms have resources and powers to preserve our environment is a controversial issue.My view is that every single citizen could also make a huge difference.In the first place, it is clear that it is human activities that have the greatest impact throughout the history.Both environment contamination and conservation are the long-term process, and no single government or big company can meet this challenge alone.So whoever created the problem should be responsible for solving it;environment protection needs every one of us to continuously participate in.Moreover, the public’s wills and behaviors have critical influence on government’s policies and companies’ strategies.For example, if everyone says “no” to plastic shopping bags and paper cups, the companies that manufacture such products will switch to environmental-friendly substitutes in order to survive in the market.However, that is not to say that governments and large companies cannot positively contribute.Indeed, governments can enact laws and introduce programs to raise the public’s low-carbon awareness;companies can promote green products to change the public’s consuming habits.But they also need every citizen’s appreciation and support to bring good results.In sum, no effort is too small when we are protecting the environment.Meanwhile, local authorities and organizations must shoulder their responsibility to develop low-carbon economy at the macro level.Only by doing so can we assure that we could hand this beautiful planet to our next generation and the next generation after.TASK 2: 高分范文二-----Argumentation

The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades.Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive.What are your opinions on this?

The Internet has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years.However, there remains some disagreement as to whether the overall effect of this technology has been positive or negative.While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that the benefits of the Internet far outweigh its drawbacks and these benefits are twofold.First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the Internet has revolutionized the way we communicate.Despite the risk of social isolation-a problem occasionally seen in people who spend too much time at their computer terminal rather than relating to people in the real world-most of us have benefited greatly from e-mails and Internet chat programs like MSN Messenger.These incredibly useful and powerful tools of communication facilitate both contact with loved ones in faraway places and global trade.Moreover, the Internet has placed the entire world(and all of the information in it)at our fingertips.In earlier times, conducting research entailed long hours searching library shelves.Now, however, the same information can be accessed at the click of a button.Admittedly, not all of the information available on the Internet is reliable or helpful-there is a vast amount of material online that some would consider offensive or dangerous, ranging from pornography to instructions on how to make bombs.Nonetheless, I would contend that this free flow of information has generally been a very positive development.By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the Internet has had a positive impact on modern life because of its influences on communication and the flow of information.TASK 2: 高分范文三-----Report

With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not close as they used to be.Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.Divorce and family breakdown were virtually unheard of just 100 years ago.Now, however, almost half of all marriages fail.This phenomenon is symptomatic of the growing distance between family members in modern society.In this essay, I intend to explore the sources of this problem along with some possible solutions to it.Chief among the causes of this problem is the modern lifestyle.Today’s parents have to work harder than those of previous generations to support their families.Traditionally, one parent assumed the role of breadwinner, while the other-typically the mother-acted as the homemaker.Recently, though, double income families have become the norm.Consequently, an increasing number of children now grow up in a parentless environment.Little wonder, then, that they feel alienated.Another contributing factor is the passive and solitary nature of many modern forms of entertainment.In order to solve this sense of alienation within families, I believe we must first address its root causes.Perhaps the most effective method of doing this would be for governments to offer financial incentives to parents who choose to remain at home and take care of their families.Admittedly, such incentives would probably not fully compensate couples for lost income;however, they would at least soften the hardship of living on a single income and provide an alternative for parents who would rather remain at home but are unable to do so because of financial constraints.One further measure would be to promote more interactive leisure activities in the community through public education campaigns.In conclusion, I believe that this is clearly a problem of such complexity that no solution is likely in the short term.However, I believe that the measures outlined above would constitute a good first step.Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions.Some people think this is fully justified while other think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your opinion.As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries.Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country.However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds.Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate.So the notion of “fairness” is not the issue.While those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful.Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career.The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight.So all of these factors may justify the huge earnings.Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professionals and achievements.In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing.Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on society?

In more and more developed countries we see the following trends: incomes rise, people get married later and have fewer kids.The result is the demographics change and the population ages.While having more old people sounds like a good thing(as they tend to be kind and warm-hearted), it can have a serious impact on economies and societies.Consider, for example, that in order for a country’s GDP to grow it needs to produce more goods and services each year.With an aging population and more people retiring, fewer are left to work, creating an economic hole.The result is that such countries have to rely on immigration to fill the gap and this is a less-than-desirable solution.Consider also, that as more people reach their twilight years they will face increasing health problems and this puts huge pressure on health care and other social programs.In most countries the government pays for at least some of the costs of health care, not to mention things like pensions, all of which means a big bill someone has to pay for.To be fair, however, we should be careful not to direct our anger towards old people themselves.Old people can still make contributions to society, whether it means helping look after grandchildren, working part time or even doing voluntary work.On an individual level, old people can be a real treasure.To sum up, governments should recognize the challenges of an aging society and take the appropriate action.But in addition to fixing the short-term impact of an older society, they should also look at the bigger picture and do their best so that in the future we have a better age balance.