第一篇:英语写作公式之感谢信+道歉信
感谢信+道歉信
Dear ______,第一段:
感谢:I am ___.I am writing this letter for the purpose of expressing my sincere gratitude to you for your kindness./ kind help during my stay in___.道歉:I am ____ and I am writing this letter for the purpose of expressing my sincere apology to for____.第二段
句1
感谢:(1)When I was being interviewed yesterday, I felt so nervous as to be at a loss for words,(2)The gift is exactly what I want that you presented to me as the New Year gift.(3)When I went to__for a tour, I found that the environment was so different from my hometown that I felt nervous, lonely and did not know what to do next.道歉: 写缘由
句2
感谢:(1)Your timely ___and filled me enough confidence.(2)The gift is exactly what I want that you presented to me as the New Year gift.(3)fortunately, I met you in due course.道歉:表道歉I am feeling awfully sorry for it.句3
感谢:(1)Then I was ___and things ended up smoothly.(2)But I had hunted for it for several days in the supermarkets and did not obtain the ideal one.They were either too expensive or the style was not the right one I prefer.(3)it was your generous help that pulled me out from the shade and gave me a precious chance to know___ culture.道歉:竭力解决
句4
感谢:(1)But for your help, however, I might have been___.(2)It is so kind of you to give me the favorite gift and my life will be colored by your concern.(3)finally, I spent a joyful vacation smoothly.道歉:方案实施
第三段
建议:
感谢:Again please accept my heartfelt appreciation.I am eagerly expecting our next meeting.I am so proud of having such a generous friend as you.道歉:Please accept my heartfelt apology.I genuinely hope that you would forgive me for my carelessness.Yours sincerely,Zhang Wei
第二篇:英语写作公式之求职信+辞职信
求职信+辞职信
Dear ______,第一段:
句1:
I am ____________________________.句2:
求职:I am writing this letter for the purpose of applying for a position of _____________.辞职:I am writing this letter for the purpose of telling you my decision to resign from my current position.第二段
句1
求职:My qualifications are as follow.辞职:After several years of work here, I find it inappropriate for me to stick to my position any longer.句2
求职:Firstly, in the past 4 academic years, I have proved myself to be a strraight-A student, awarded a series of scholarships.辞职:First of all, I intend to move to my hometown to live permanently with my family so that I can take good care of them.句3
求职:Besides, my English is particularly excellent, which will reach the requirements set by a foreign company like yours.辞职:In addition, I want to creat my own business, which is my long-cherished wish.句4
求职:Finally, I am a good team player, self-motivated and eager to learn.In short, I believe I deserve your consideration.辞职:In a word, I have made up my mind to resign from the job after much deliberation.第三段
建议:
求职:Thanks a lot for your due attention to this letter.I genuinely hope that you could schedule an interview with me at your earliest convenience.I am looking forward to your prompt reply.辞职:Thanks for having offered me the splendid opportunity to work with outstanding staff here.Please accept my heartfelt gratitude, as well as my regret for any inconvenience caused.Yours sincerely,Zhang Wei
第三篇:高三英语应用文写作之道歉信
道歉信
道歉信是因为自己的过失或疏忽,给别人带来了麻烦或损失,发觉后为了给对方赔礼道歉而写的信件。
道歉信应该反映出自己具体的过失或疏忽,语言应该简练诚恳,并且希望收信人能够原谅自己的过失或疏忽。
道歉信通常在主段首句立即表示歉意,并解释原因。在信结束前,可根据情况再次表达歉意。写作模板 Dear ____, I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to ____.The reason is that ____.I am sorry that I cannot finish ____ in time, but is it possible that I make up the loss by ____? If so, I will put everything else aside to ____.I do hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apology.Yours, Lihua
Dear ____, Much to my regret / I am terribly sorry that I am unable to ____.It is mainly because at that time I will be full occupied by ____ which is quite out of my expectation, and that conflicts with your ____.Therefore I am forced to adjust my schedule and cannot make my presence on your ____.I sincerely hope that you will enjoy a good time.By the way, can we have dinner together some time next week? I hope to see you soon.I am really sorry again and I trust that you will understand.Yours, Lihua
必备词语
短语;
apologize v.道歉
forgive v.原谅
inconvenience n.不便
appointment n.约定
much to one’s regret 非常遗憾
apologize to sb.for sth./ make an apology to sb.for sth.因某事向某人道歉 say sorry to 向……说对不起
accept my apology 接受我的道歉 forgive sb.for sth.为某事原谅某人
make up for 弥补;赔偿 have no intention to do sth.并非故意做某事 cause you much trouble 给你带来许多麻烦 accept sb.’s sincere apology 接受某人真诚的道歉 miss the opportunity 错过机会 fix another time for 安排另外一个时间 consider my situation 考虑我的情况
必备句型 【闪亮篇首句】
1.I am writing to apologize for … / I am writing to say sorry for … 我写这封信是因为……向你道歉。2.I would like to give you my apology for … 对于……我向你道歉。
3.I express my regret at being unable to do … 对于未能做……,我表示遗憾。4.Much to my regret that I am unable to … 让我感到极为遗憾的是自己不能……
5.I owe you an apology for the damage I have done to the flat.我为损坏房子这件事而向您道歉。
6.I am indeed very sorry for what I said / did, but believe I had no intention to … 对于我说的/做的事,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信,我并非故意要…… 7.I’m terribly sorry I couldn’t reply to your email in time.十分抱歉我不能及时回复您的邮件。
8.I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time.我十分抱歉没有及时回信。
9.It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together.错过了在一起的机会,我感到很遗憾。【出彩中篇句】
1.Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.请原谅我说话欠妥。
2.Please accept my apologies for my oversight.请原谅我的疏忽。
3.I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.为此我感到非常内疚,所以想告诉你实情。
4.I sincerely hope you can understand that I offended you unintentionally.我真心希望你能理解,我并非有意冒犯。5.And so I missed the appointed time.因此我错过了约定的时间。
6.I’m awfully sorry for the sudden change of plan and feel it a great pity to miss the opportunity.对突然的改变我感到十分抱歉,对错过这个机会感到很可惜。7.Anyhow, I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for...无论如何,我真心希望我们可以再找一个时间…… 【精彩篇尾句】
1.I will try my best to avoid the same accident happening again in the future.我将接近全力避免将来再发生同样的事故。2.I will try to make up for my fault.我将尽力弥补我的过错。
3.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.真诚希望你能理解我的处境,并接受我的道歉。4.I hope that you will understand and forgive me.我希望您可以理解并原谅我。5.I shall be obliged if you … 如果您能……,我将非常感激。
6.I hope that the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes.我希望对此事的处理能满足您的愿望。7.Please allow me to say sorry again.请允许我再次表示歉意。
8.I sincerely apologize again for my mistake.我再次为我的错误真诚地道歉。
9.Once again, please accept my sincere apology.请再次接受我真诚的道歉。
高考真题 2016年全国Ⅲ卷
【真题再现】
假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.另约时间。【试题分析】
题目要求写一封道歉信,因不能如约一起去书向Bob道歉,使用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作。【得分要点】
题目是常规的书信作文,要求写一封道歉信,是应用文的一种。写作的内容已经给出,表达歉意的同时,还要与对方另约时间。因此,不仅仅是一封道歉信。写作时注意涵盖所有要点,还要兼顾上下文的连贯性。【参考范文】 Dear Bob, I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon.I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books.If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate.If not, let me know what time suits you best.I should be available any time after school next week.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua
Dear Bob, How are you doing? We planned to go to the bookstore this Saturday.Unfortunately, I can’t make it.So, I am writing to express my heartfelt apology to you.How I wish I could go with you!However, I am chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition with an America high school, which, you know, is of great importance to me, for I have always been dreaming to have a chance like this to improve my spoken English.As a result, I have no choice but to say sorry to you.How about going to the bookshop this Sunday? Then both of us will be available and I can share my experience of the competition with you.Please.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours, Li Hua 2013山东卷 【真题再现】
假如你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件:
1.未及时回信的原因;
2.你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。【经典套路】
第一段:问候+写信背景+写信目的 第二段:“道歉”部分(相当于“写信背景”)第三段:“假期安排”部分 第四段:补充说明+客套话 【高分范文】 Dear Tom, How are you doing?(问候)You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation.(写信背景)I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.(写信目的)How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it.However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me.As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study.I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.(第二段为道歉信常见套路)By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.(主题句)First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.(拓展句1)Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.(拓展句2)Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.(拓展句3)These are my plan for the summer vacation.What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.(以合理的客套话结尾)Best wishes!Yours, Li Hua
【满分佳作】 Dear Tom, ①I’m terribly sorry I couldn’t reply to your email which you sent me a week ago immediately.②I was so occupied with the final exams.As for the coming summer holiday, I will first do a part time job in a fast-food restaurant.③Not only will I earn some money but I will also gain some social experience through it.④And then I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of interest.Finally, I’ll go to Ya’an to work as a volunteer.⑤There is no doubt that children there are badly in need of help.⑥I hope what I will do will make a great difference to them.Do you have anything for the summer? Please write to me and let me know.Best wishes.Yours sincerely, Li Hua
【满分赏析】
①先用I’m terribly sorry…对未能及时回信道歉,terribly加强了道歉的语气。②接着简单讲明原因;be occupied with sth./doing sth.(忙于某事/做某事)的运用体现了作者的语言功底,不是用简单的词汇busy,可给评卷老师留下好印象。
③Not only…but also… 连接并列句,属于本书在“写作基础”部分训练的句型。注意:not only在句首,谓语动词要用倒装形式;gain some social experience的运用也体现了作者平时注意积累语言素材。
④运用了where引导的定语从句修饰地点,使句式避免简单化;places of interest(名胜古迹)也运用得当。考生需注意积累,否则只能生造出中式英语。
⑤运用了There is no doubt that…(……毫无疑问)这样的万能句型;be badly in need of help(急需帮助)这一短语也使评卷老师眼前一亮。
⑥make a difference(起作用、产生不同)这一短语也是增分点。本篇句句高级、词词地道,怎能不拿满分? 【模拟题1】
假设你是李华,前天是你的外国朋友Anne的生日。你本答应要参加她的生日聚会,但你当时正忙着准备期末考试,忘了赴约。请写封信向Anne表达你的歉意,说明原因,并提出补救的方法。【参考范文】 Dear Anne,I am indeed very sorry that I didn't attend your birthday party the day before yesterday.It was nice of you to invite me to your birthday party.I should have come and celebrate the precious moment with you.But the final examinations are around the corner, so I was so busy preparing for the exams that I forgot the appointment.I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me.Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the examinations? It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together.Once again, please accept my sincere apology.Yours truly, Li Hua 【模拟题2】
假如你是李华,好朋友Sarah邀请你去参加他的生日聚会,但由于弟弟突然生病,医生说需要住院5天左右,请写信给Sarah表达未能和老朋友一起给他庆祝生日的歉意,并请Sarah帮忙转达对朋友们的问候。【优秀满分范文】 Dear Sarah, I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to attend your birthday party next Thursday evening.That is owing to(因为)the fact that(同位语从句)my younger brother suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital this morning.I have to go there immediately and take care of him.As told by the doctor in charge, it will take around five days for him to recover and I have asked my boss for a leave.I really regret that I cannot go to celebrate your birthday personally and would miss the perfect chance of enjoying myself with all our old friends.I have chosen a small gift for you and will send it to you tomorrow to show my best wishes.Besides, please give my regards to our friends when you meet them at the party.Cordially,(sincerely)Li Hua 【模拟题3】
假如你是新华中学的学生李华,上周在外教Mr.Jackson的口语课上使用手机被老师发现,手机被收走。请用英语给外教写一封道歉信,内容应包括以下要点:
1.表示歉意;2.解释上课使用手机的原因;3.提出自己的请求并适当表态。【参考范文】 Dear Mr.Jackson, I’m really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your lecture last week.Please accept my heart-felt apology for being so rude a student.I know any word might sound a made-up excuse.But I did not use the mobile phone for no reason.I was trying to find a part-time job last weekend that day, I got a job offer and they needed my further information immediately.Therefore, I had no other choice but to try sending them a text message in class and that was exactly what I was doing when you discovered.Anyway, using a mobile phone in the classroom is not acceptable to any teacher.I swear it will not happen again.But I do need my phone back to keep in touch with others.Will you be so kind to give it back to me? Thanks a million!Best wishes!Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【模拟题3】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请给你的美国同学Jim 写一封电子邮件,告知周末你不能参加他的生日聚会,希望他谅解。邮件的内容包括:
1.表达歉意;
2.说明理由; 3.告知已准备了生日礼物。【参考范文】 Dear Jim, I’m terribly sorry that I can’t go to your birthday party this Saturday.My uncle will come to Beijing from America on Saturday afternoon.My parents want me to go to the airport with them to pick him up.So it’s a pity that I can’t have fun with you then.I wish you a happy birthday and hope everything will go well.By the way, I have bought the latest CD of Jay Chou for you as a birthday present and I will give it to you on Monday.Best wishes, Li Hua
第四篇:2014考研英语:应用文写作之道歉信
2014考研英语写作:应用文写作之道歉信
应用文写作不需要华丽的辞藻和多变的句式,只需要能够用简洁概括的语言将事情叙述清楚就能够取得不错的成绩。应用文写作作为考研英语中性价比比较高的题目,考生必须重视对其复习。应用文写作可以充分借鉴模板,以达到更好的复习效果。下面,就为考生介绍一下道歉信的基本写作方法。
道歉信是写信人对未尽之事向收信人表示歉意,写作的基本要求是:解释的理由要真实而详细,态度要诚恳、语言要诚挚,从而使收信人理解,并达到最终谅解。(详细见写作160篇137页)
道歉信一般写作步骤如下: 1)表达歉意的事由;2)解释原因,并提出可行的补救措施;3)再次致歉,企求对方的谅解。道歉信的写作要理由充分,态度诚恳,感情真挚,言语谦逊。道歉信常用套语有:
1表达歉意:There's no excuse for … I forgot to ….I am indeed very sorry for …, but believe I had no intention to…
Here is my deepest apology for...Please forgive me for …
2解释苦衷:The fact is that I had …/ Unfortunately I … / I had a small accident …/ I have some urgent business to deal with My behavior yesterday was inexcusable, and I must tell you how …
3请求原谅提出补救方法:I want you to know how badly feel about… and to assure you that it will not happen again.I realize that particular… is irreplaceable, but I hope you will use the enclosed check to purchase a similar one.I hope this situation can be mended to everyone's satisfaction.I can only hope you will forgive … on my part.范例
Directions:
You have received a complaint letter from your customer for the mix-up of order #: 26429782.Write a letter to him to 1)express your apology 2)explain the reason 3)provide the solution and offer the compensation.Dear Mr.Bicman:
I apologize for the mix-up of order #: 26429782.We have just implemented a new packaging system that still has a few bugs to be worked out, but we did fix your order and sent it out this morning.For your trouble, we have enclosed a $25 gift certificate which can be used at any of our stores.Once again I would like to apologize for the mix-up in your order and any inconveniences this may have caused you.最后,希望考生都能够掌握道歉信的写作方法,进入理想的学府。祝大家考研成功!
第五篇:四六级英语写作万能公式
四六级英语写作万能公式
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这不是原创,但是针对我们八股文式的各种基础级别考试,目前够用了,希望对大家有帮助。
开头万能公式:
1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧? 经典句型:
A proverb says, “ You are only young once.”(适用于已记住的名言)It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.(适用于自编名言)更多经典句型:As everyone knows, No one can deny that„ 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:Honesty 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。Travel by Bike
结尾万能公式:
1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
更多过渡短语: to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
写作的“六项基本原则”:
一、长短句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题: As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、主题句原则
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句).Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一 二 三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点„ 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)8)most important of all, moreover, finally 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
四、短语优先原则
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其
一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其
二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。
五、多变句式原则
1)加法(串联)
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子有先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式: Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短语可以用: besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover 2)转折(拐弯抹角)
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短语: despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding 3)因果(so, so, so)
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友„可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短语: hen, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)Eden 认为“头轻脚重”更符合英语表达习惯 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。举例:This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分: When to go, Why he goes away„ 5)附加(多此一举)
如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr.Liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.(气势恢宏)要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
六、挑战极限原则
既然是挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可以写出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!
文章主体段落三大杀手锏:
一、举实例
思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulated factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colors, cartoon films and human performance.For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fimehim or her.rast ? 更多句型:
To take „ as an example, One example is„, Another example is„, for example
二、做比较
方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的; 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语: 相似的比较:
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较:
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with „, „ 这个对 compare and contrast 题型很有用
三、换言之
没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我们举过的例子: I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短语:
namely, in simpler terms„
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