英语写作之人际关系

第一篇：英语写作之人际关系

人际关系(读写任务)

人际关系指人与人之间的交往与友谊，与家人、朋友、邻居、亲戚或他人之间的情感交流或沟通；对他人的感谢、感恩、宽容、道歉、赞扬、微笑等，请求他人同意和帮助、解决问题、处理矛盾冲突、和解等等。

人际关系方面，高考命题人可能会选择如宽容、赞扬等某一个话题，要求考生通过自己或他人的一次经历来发表看法。以下几个具体话题值得关注：(1)有的同学抱怨父母的期望高、作业多、压力太大，或对生活中的其他方面感到不满，请写一篇短文，准备在“我们应该抱怨生活吗”的主题班会上发表你的看法。(2)写一篇短文，参加“增进父母与孩子之间的理解，构建和谐家庭”的演讲比赛。(3)就“如何构建和谐班集体”谈谈你的看法。(4)描写你和你的同学是怎样建立起友好关系的。

实用表达：

learn from each other 互相学习promote the friendship 增进友谊

improve the relationship 改善关系show love and concern for sb.爱护和关心某人 Good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.善于倾听使我们彼此走得更近。

A good relationship between teachers and students is of great importance for our studies.良好的师生关系对我们的学习很重要。

To build a good relationship，we should trust each other.要建立良好的关系，我们应该彼此信任。

Only in this way can we enjoy an equal relationship.只有这样我们才能享有平等的关系。They find it easy to communicate with their teachers.他们发觉很容易和老师沟通。

We should value this harmonious relationship between teachers and students.我们应该珍惜师生之间这种和谐的关系。

With the encouragement and support of my father，I have overcome many difficulties in my life.在父亲的鼓励和支持下，我克服了生活中的许多苦难。

A good relationship will make learning and teaching enjoyable while a bad one can make them unpleasant.良好的关系可以使教与学变得愉快，不好的关系令人不高兴。

阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

“Can I see my baby？” asked the happy new mother.The bundle(婴儿包)was placed in her arms and when she moved the fold of cloth to look upon his tiny face, she gasped.The doctor turned quickly and looked out the hospital window.The baby has been born without ears.Time, however, proved that the baby's hearing was perfect except his appearance.One day when he rushed home from school and threw himself into his mother's arms, he cried out bitterly, “A boy, a big boy… called me a f…freak.” She sighed, knowing that his life was to be endless of heartbreaks.He grew up, handsome for his misfortune.A favorite with his fellow students, he might have been class president, but for that.He developed a gift for literature and music.The boy's father had a talk with the family doctor.Could nothing be done? “I believe we could graft(移植)on a pair of outer ears, if they could be donated(捐献)，”the doctor decided.So the search began for a person who would make such a sacrifice.Two years went by.Then, “You're going to the hospital, son.Mother and I have someone who will donate the ears you need.But it's a secret，” said the father.The operation was a brilliant success.His talents blossomed(开花)into genius.School and college became a series of successes.Later he married and entered the diplomatic(外交)service.“But I must know！” he urged his father.“Who gave so much for me? I could never do enough for him.”

“I do not believe you could，” said the father, “but the agreement was that you are not to know…not yet.”

The years kept the secret, but the day did come…one of the darkest days that ever passed through a son.He stood with his father over his mother's casket(棺材).Slowly and tenderly, the father stretched forth a hand and raised the thick, reddish-brown hair to let out the secret.【写作内容】

1.以约30个词概括这个感人的故事；

2.以约120个词，请就“在受别人的帮助中，学会了帮助别人”的话题写一篇英语短文，表达你内心的感受，并包括如下要点：

(1)你看完这个故事后，你如何评价这位母亲的无私行为；

(2)请以你的日常生活经历的事情为例，说明别人的善良行为对你的影响；

(3)你的感想。

【写作要求】

1.作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2.标题自定。

所给文章属于记叙文文体，第一段在概括时，要抓住记叙文的“六要素”，即who/ when/ where/ 括部分可以加上事件带给我们的启发，注意，“启发”句要用一般现在时表达。本文的概要必须包含以下要点：A baby was born without ears.Someone donated the ears the boy need.The 第一个写作要点“你看完这个故事后，你如何评价这位母亲的无私行为”，是要对故事中母亲的行为发表你的看法，所以在概括部分和此要点之间可以使用After reading the story, I am deeply moved and realize that…进行过渡，而且为了与下一个要点衔接，该部分的感想最好涉及“善良行为”，为下文做铺垫。第二个要点“请以你的日常生活经历的事情为例，说明别人的善良行为对你的影响”，此部分的例

子要精练，因为本文毕竟不是记叙文，之后要结合所举事例来谈对自己的影响，切忌事例与感想脱节。第三个要点还要谈“你的感想”，在结构和内容上是对前面内容的总结和升华。是摘要部分，写作内容部分的三个要点分别为二、三、四段。

通常来讲，读写任务部分所写短文的段落数可以根据写作要求的要点数来确定：总段数＝1＋要点数。其中，摘要为第一段，其他各段内容依要点顺序安排即可。

Help is Always Unselfish

A unselfish mother donated her ears to her imperfect son without telling him about it.At last, the son got the secret from his father after his mother died.Help is always unselfish.The mother donated her ears to her son, showing her greatest love to her child.From these, we can know how difficult it is for parents to raise their children.In the daily life, we always get kind help from our teachers, classmates and friends.And their kind help is always unselfish.When I was in Senior Middle School, I lived in the school.Every time I was ill, my teachers and classmates gave me kind help, taking good care of me all the time.In today's society, I was affected by some bad things, which made me think that there was no kindness in the world.It was my friends who did everything to help me out.From these experiences, I have realized that helping others is necessary, and true love does exist in our daily life.Since then, I have changed myself a lot, and I also give hands to others when they are in need of help.阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

I received a call from the nursing home.Grandpa was failing rapidly.There was nothing to do but hold his hand.“I love you, Grandpa.Thank you for always being there for me.”

Memories… memories… six days a week, Grandpa in that old blue shirt caring for those cattle… on hot

summer days plowing the soil, planting the corn and beans and harvesting them in the fall…always working from dawn to dusk.But on Sundays he put on his gray suit and hat.Grandma wore her wine-colored dress and ivory beads, and they went to church.I removed Grandpa's things from the room and found a very old handmade valentine in the top drawer

of his nightstand.A piece of white paper had been glued to the center of the heart.On it, penned in Grandma's handwriting, were these words：

TO LEE FROM HARRIET with All My Love, February 14, 1895

Are you alive? Real? Or are you the most beautiful dream that I have had in years? Are you an angel — or a figment of my imagination?

You made me laugh when my heart was crying.You helped me set new goals when I was dying.You showed me dew drops and I had diamonds.You sang to me and angelic choirs burst forth in song.You held my hand and my whole being loved you.You gave me a ring and I belonged to you.I belonged to you and I have experienced all.Tears streamed down my cheeks as I read the words.Now it is framed on my dresser, a treasured part of family history.【写作内容】

1．以约30个词概括短文的要点；

2．然后以约120个词就“真爱”的主题发表看法，并包括如下要点：

(1)真爱的重要性；

(2)你对真爱的看法及理由。

【写作要求】

可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ One possible version：

After his grandpa passed away, the author found the grandpa's valentine which is a fitting testament to the true and holy love story about his grandpa and grandma.It is essential for everyone to get true love in his lifetime.On the one hand, it can bring in full confidence, but on the other hand it can contribute to many success.Without true love, however, you are not courageous to

meet challenges.What's more, you will fail in your study.From my personal point of view, we, out of true love, are considerate of each other's feelings and courteous in our actions toward one another;but we do not insist that our own way is

best and demand that our mates give in to us.Besides, we are concerned not only about our own individual interests, but about the interests of the other as well, because we look forward to our relationshipgrowing more meaningful and precious.Last but not least, we should treat our mates with absolute trust.As soon as we gain true love each other, we'll be enabled to fight and overcome any difficulty;at the same time, we'll find our life full of color and flavor.

第二篇：高三英语写作专题(人际关系)--写作答案

高三英语写作专练 —— 人际关系（答案）

1.Congratulations on your passing all the exams, I am delighted you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China.All you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China.All you have gained is the result of your hard work.We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English.We’ll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.It’s a pity that you have t go back soon!So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening.Could you come by 6:00 p.m.? We’ll have dinner together.By the way, you may take Bus.332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!

Yours faithfully,Li Hua

2.Dear Mary,I’ve learned from the Internet that you want to have a Chinese Senior High student teach you some Chinese as well as Learning about Chinese culture so as to make yourself easier to adapt to the new environment in China before you begin to study in the Ocean University of China in Qingdao.I’d like to be one to help you.Now

let me introduce myself and my plan to help you.I’ m Li Hua, a Senior 3 Student of a Qingdao middle school.I’m good at Chinese and English, so I think we won’t have much difficulty in commmunicating with each other in English.Most suitably, when you come to China, I will just have had my college entrance exam, which will give me plenty of time to teach you Chinese and let you learn Chinese culture by showing you around my hometown and making friends with my classmates.Looking forward to your reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua

3.Dear Tom,From your letter I know it’s the first time for you to be in my country and you are eager to know what China is really like.I’m glad to tell you that an exploring trip titled “Discovering China” is to be organized in the summer vacation.I think it’s a good chance for you to learn more about China.I hope you can experience Chinese culture in every aspect.First, we’ll fly to Kunming, a popular tourist destination for its beauty and mild temperature.Then we’ll head for Jinggangshan, which is a former revolutionary base as well as a natural beauty spot.After a one-day visit there, we’ll board a doenstream ship on the Yangze River to Shanghai, and meanwhile we can enjoy the great

scenery alongside.A famous saying goes, “Just as there is paradise in heaven, there are Suzhou and Hangzhou on earth”, so a two-day visit to these two cities is a must.The whole trip will last a week.I earnestly invite you to join us.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua

4.Dear David,I’ve learned it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and culture.I’m glad that yu show such great interest in China and I would like to be your friend.I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest.Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can.How do you think?

I’m looking forward to your reply.5.Dear Peter,I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.I want to have a penfriend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to mine.In my mind, she is some one who is

keen in travelling, swimming, and playing table tennis.Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time.With such a penfriend, I hope I can share our experiences with her in travelling, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in common.And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country.I look forward to hearing from you soon.Best regards,Li Hua

第三篇：高考英语基础写作个人情感与人际关系

第五个话题： 个人情感与人际关系

第一项 话题预测

1.父母与孩子之间：敬重父母、尊重孩子的选择、困扰

父母与孩子的问题、中学生做家务、孩子的秘密是否与父母分享等。

2.师生之间：师生关系在日常教学中的作用等。3.同学之间：同学交友、成长中的快乐和烦恼、性格因

素与同学关系、学习动机的激发与培养、宿舍文化建

设、营造班级和谐人际氛围、“教师节”学生真诚道谢、对老师的敬意和感恩等。第二项 写作语汇

一、常用单词

hope 希望wish 渴望 expect 盼望 passion 激情 forgive 宽恕 excuse 原谅 envy 忌妒，羡慕 annoy 使烦恼 thank感谢thankful感激的gratitude感激grateful 感激的satisfied满意的enthusiastic热心的 affectionate挚爱的admirable 令人羡慕的 conscious意识到的anxious / anxiously 焦急的/渴望的 eager / eagerly 热切的/渴望地 optimistic 乐观的 unbelievable 难以置信的gloomy 令人沮丧的jealous忌妒的 sympathetic 同情的 suspicious 有疑心的 indifferent 漠不关心的 annoying令人恼人的annoyed烦恼的 frustrating令人沮丧的embarrassed 感到尴尬的 embarrassing 令人尴尬的 oppressed 压抑的 positive 积极的 negative 负面的 stressful 紧张的 happy 喜angry 怒 upset, sad 哀pleased 乐proud骄傲lonely 孤独的 worried 担忧的 nervous 紧张的 afraid 害怕

二、参考短语

1.be satisfied with / be pleased with 对…感到满意 2.be consious of 意识到

3.be optimistic about 对… 乐观

4.be grateful to 对某人表示感激

5.express one’s gratitude to 表达感谢之情 6.be concerned about / with对…很关心 7.have a light heart 心情舒畅

8.be in good / bad temper 心情好/不好 9.be in high / low spirits 情绪高涨/ 低落 10.be in despair 某人处于绝望中 11.complain about(of)sb./ sth 抱怨 12.be objective about 对… 客观/ 公正 13.be jealous of sth.对…嫉妒

14.be upset about sth.某人对某事苦恼 15.be sensitive to…对…敏感的16.be proud of / take pride in 以…自豪 必备表达： 个人情感

(1)be happy / sad / upset / nervous / lonely高兴/难过/不安/紧张/孤独

(2)be pleased with对„„感到高兴

(3)be worried about / worry about 担心，担忧

(4)be / get angry with sb.about sth.因某事生某人的气(5)be disappointed at sb.对某人感到失望

(6)be confident of sth./ in sb.对某事/某人有信心(7)We are deeply grateful to you for your support.我们深深感谢你的支持。

(8)It is a pity that we shall have to leave tomorrow.我们明天必须离开，真是遗憾。人际关系

(1)learn from each other 互相学习(2)promote the friendship 增进友谊(3)improve the relationship改善关系

(4)show love and concern for sb.爱护和关心某人(5)Good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.善于倾听使我们彼此走得更近。

(6)A good relationship between teachers and students is of great importance for our studies.良好的师生关系对我们的学习很重要。

(7)To build a good relationship, we should trust in each other.要建立良好的关系，我们应该彼此信任。

8)Only in this way can we enjoy an equal relationship.只有这样我们才能享有平等的关系。

(9)They find it easy to communicate with their teachers.他们发觉很容易和老师沟通。

(10)With their help, I tried my best to study hard and succeeded in entering a key university.在他们的帮助下，我努力学习，成功地被一所重点大学录取。

(11)We should value this harmonious relationship between teachers and students.我们应该珍惜师生之间这种和谐的关系。

(12)With the encouragement and support of my father, I have overcome many difficulties in our life.在父亲的鼓励和支持下，我克服了生活中的许多困难。

第五个话题：个人情感与人际关系

一、基础写作

1.基础写作1：给刚从外地转来的新同学的一封信

假设你是新华中学的学生李华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。［写作内容］请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信：（1）帮他分析原因：害羞，怕同学取笑。

（2）给他提出建议：学习普通话，跟同学交流意见。（3）陈述你帮助他的具体打算。

Dear Li Ming，I’m sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class.One of the reasons, I believe, is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates and maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent.I am sure, with your effort, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.In my opinion，learning to speak Putonghua and comparing notes with your classmates frequently are good ways for you to make new friends.In our spare time，I’ll invite you to play basketball or go to some parties.Also，I’d like to introduce my good friends to you.I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible.Best regards，Li Hua

基础写作2：给送生日礼物的朋友写封感谢信

假设你是李华，昨天你出乎意料地收到你的好朋友Jack寄给你的生日礼物——一本电子词典。请根据以下要点，写一封感谢信。［写作内容］

（1）收到他的礼物，你感到十分高兴，因为你正急需一本这样的电子词典，而且你几乎找遍了全市的商店都买不到；

（2）这本电子词典对你的英语学习很有帮助；

（3）感谢他送给你的礼物，并表示会努力学好英语作为回报；

（4）希望他暑假有空来你家一起学习英语。

Dear Jack，Yesterday, I received your present, a useful electronic dictionary, very unexpectedly and excitedly.Believe it or not, what you sent me is the very electronic dictionary I am anxious for.I have been looking for it in almost every store in my city.I’m sure this electronic dictionary must be of great help to my English learning.Thank you for your timely help and fine present，and I will work harder at English in return.If you have time this summer holiday，I’d like you to come to my home and let’s study English together.Best wishes to your parents.Yours，Li Hua

3.假设你是李华，现在正在高考考场上，场下当英语老师的父母正殷切期待着你。请你按如下提纲提示，给父母写一封感谢信。【写作内容】

1.感谢父母多年来，特别是高三这一年来无微不至的关怀；

2.自己学习刻苦，进步不小。感觉高考考试顺利，发挥出了真水平，请父母放心；

3.高考后想多帮父母做家务，尤其做菜，让父母品尝。

Dear parents,Now I wonder how anxiously both of you are expecting me to complete my college entrance exams smoothly.I can say nothing but thanks to you both on this special occasion, because words have failed me when I want to express my gratitude to you both for the loving care you have shown for me, expecially since I went to Senior Three.These days I have been studying hard and have made much progress and so I believe that everything will have got along well with my examination because I have performed my ability in this exam.After this exam, I intend to help you do much more housework which I have seldom done before, and cook in preparation for a delicious dinner for you both in person.My dear parents, everything is going on well with me and I hope you both can set your mind at rest!

Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua

Best wishes,任务写作1：父母与子女之间如何建立良好关系

以约120个词就“父母与子女的良好关系”发表你的看法，包括如下要点：

(1)父母与子女关系良好的重要性；

(2)你希望与你的父母之间的关系是怎样的；

(3)如何才能建立这种关系？

An ideal relationship between parents and children is very important for our growth.Parents always show love and concern for us.They are our good listeners，advisers and supporters.With their help，we can overcome many difficulties in our life.In my opinion，the relationship between parents and children should be one filled with love，care and understanding，in which parents and children show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely.To build a relationship of this kind，parents should become friends of their children while children ought to place more trust in their parents and give voice to their feelings frankly.Only in this way can we enjoy a harmonious relationship between parents and children.(117 words)

任务写作2：描写老师或朋友帮你克服困难的一次经历

以约120词写一篇记叙文，回忆老师或朋友在你困难时候帮助你的一次经历，并包括如下要点：

(1)叙述你遇到困难的一次真实或虚构的经历；

(2)你的老师或朋友如何帮助你解决困难的？

(3)你的老师或朋友对你产生了什么影响？你对老师或朋友的态度是什么？

I had such an experience when I was in junior school.I was doing badly in maths at that time.However hard I tried，I just couldn’t catch up with others.I almost lost heart when we had a new maths teacher，Mr Hu.Now and then he talked with me，telling me the ways to learn maths and encouraging me to keep on trying.Only then did I realize that I was not studying maths in a scientific way.With his help，I was doing a little better gradually.One year later，I made amazing progress.Now I am in a key senior high school and always one of the top students in my class.I am always grateful to Mr Hu.(123 words)

第四篇：英语应用文写作之邀请信

英语应用文写作之邀请信

（一）一、邀请信及复信

邀请信包括宴会邀请、午餐和晚餐邀请、聚会邀请、舞会邀请、婚礼邀请等。

邀请信虽然看起来不象请柬那样正规、庄重，但是，也是很讲就的。写好邀请信，需注意以下几个问题：

1.邀请信一定要写得明确、完整，不可给收信人留下任何疑问。如: “ I’d like you and Tom to come to dinner next Wednesday.” 这样的写法就不够明确，需要加上具体的日期和时间。该句应写成: “I’d like you and Tom to come to dinner on Wednesday, June 14, at seven o’clock.”

2.在欧美国家，夜晚的邀请，除了那些只允许男人参加的社交活动之外，不论是正式的，还是非正式的，都应该邀请夫妻双方参加。

3.别人对你的邀请是对你的尊重，因此，无论能否赴约，都应该给与及时的、有礼貌的答复。

4.对于邀请信，在复信时应该明确地说明是接受邀请, 还是不能接受邀请。不能使用模棱两可的话。如: “ I’ll try my best to come.” “ I’ll come if I’m in town.” 等等，那样会使邀请人感到十分不安，应该明确说明去还是不去，以便让邀请人早做安排。

5.接受邀请时，在回信时要重复写上邀请信中的某些内容，如:

几月几日、星期几、几点钟等等。不应该这样写：“ I’ll be delighted to attend your luncheon…”，而应该写成： “ I’ll be delighted to attend your luncheon on Thursday, May tenth, at one o’clock.” 这样写，可以纠正你或邀请人可能弄错了的日期和时间。

（一）宴会邀请信及复信

邀请朋友赴宴（Inviting a Friend to Dinner）

Dear Zhang Ning,Will you and Mr.Wang Yi have dinner with us on Tuesday, the fifth of May, at seven o’clock?

It’s a long time since we have had the pleasure of seeing you and we do hope you can come.Sincerely yours,Elizabeth K.Benton ·接受邀请（Acceptance）

Dear Mrs.Benton,Wang Yi and I will be delighted to dine with you on Tuesday, the fifth of May, at seven o’clock.How nice of you to ask us!We are both looking forward with great pleasure to seeing you and Dr.Benton again.Very sincerely yours,Zhang Ning

不能赴约（Regret）

Dear Mrs.Benton,I’ve been putting off this note until the last possible moment, hoping and hoping Wang Yi would get back from Shanghai in time for your dinner party.But now I must regretfully write that he’ll still be out of town on Tuesday, the fifth;and we therefore cannot accept your kind invitation for dinner on that day.It was sweet of you to ask us;and I know Wang Yi will be as sorry as I am to miss an evening with you and Dr.Benton.We know how delightful such evenings at your house usually are!Sincerely yours,Zhang Ning

2.邀请朋友赴宴和看电影

现代人由于忙忙碌碌，邀请信总是写得很简短，邀请朋友赴宴和看电影，通常只写上几行字，但是，他们认为这并不是草率和不恭敬的表现，只是为了速度快些罢了。例如：

Dear Li Ming,We have four tickets for a new movie Brokeback Mountain this Friday, the tenth.Will you and He Yi join us here for dinner at six sharp;and then go on with us later to the movie? We’ll be

looking for you Friday night, so don’t disappoint us!

Affectionately yours,Doris

·接受邀请(Acceptance)

Dear Doris,Delighted!We’ll be there Friday at six, and go with you

afterward to the cinema.How wonderful of you and Frank to ask us!….Affectionately yours,Li Ming·不能赴约（Regret）

Dear Doris,I think you’d better ask some other couple for Friday.He Yi is in Shanghai and won’t be back for another week.Wait till he hears what a wonderful evening he missed with you and Frank!Thanks for asking us, Doris.I’m certainly sorry we can’t say “yes”!

Affectionately yours,Li Ming

3.取消非正式宴会的短笺

有时候，由于生病或其他原因，需取消原定的宴请，如果时间紧，可以用电话通知已邀请的客人，如果有时间，应该写一封短信表示歉意。

Dear Mrs.Jennings,I have just learned that my son, who is at school in Shanghai, was injured in a basketball game.Although the injury is not very serious, Lin Kai and I feel we must go to him at once;and we are leaving tomorrow morning.Under the circumstances, we must recall our dinner

invitations for Tuesday, the fifth of May… and plan on a later date for our party.I’m sure that you and Mr.Jennings will understand our anxiety, and will forgive this last-minute change in plans.Sincerely yours,Li Li

4.对于非正宴请的不能如期赴约的短笺

按照英美人的习惯，应邀者因为生病或其他原因而不能如期赴约时，应该打个电话或写一封短信告诉邀请人。当然，只有在万不得已时才能做出这样的改变。

Dear Mrs.Benton,I’m very sorry to have to write you this letter!After accepting your kind invitation for dinner on Tuesday, May the fifth, I now

find that we cannot be there after all.Li Yong has just been called to Shanghai on business;and although he tried very hard to postpone the trip until after the fifth, he was unable to do so.We had been looking forward with great pleasure to seeing you and Dr.Benton;and we both feel very badly about this unexpected development.We hope you understand, and that you will not be inconvenienced.Sincerely yours,Wang ShanshanWriting Assignment 1：写一封邀请信，要请你的好朋友Elizabeth K.Benton 本周六晚7点到你家赴宴, 然后一起去电影院看新电影《金刚》（KING KONG）(The Eighth Wonder of the World.)。以Elizabeth K.Benton的身份给你写一封表示接受邀请的回信。

.以Elizabeth K.Benton的身份给你写一封表示不能接受邀请的回信。

第五篇：英语达人之写作篇

英语达人学习英语之写作篇

来源：sinablog日期：2010-01-08阅读 2892 次作者:考拉小巫评论0条划词进入论坛1.考拉练习写作的经历

大学的时候很少很少练写作，因为我比较懒，不爱用手写东西，那时候没有笔记本，所以只是在每周上写作课的时候会写文章，或者如果其他课会留论文的话，才会去动手写。但尽管这样，像昨天阅读篇里写到的，大学的时候一直有保持读native speaker的文章的习惯，有的时候这种习惯造成的影响是潜移默化的。你读的东西很多，自然脑子里就有很多东西，等下笔写作的时候自然会有话可说，有物可谈。正所谓高收入才能高产出。尤其要提到的一点是，大三的时候第一次考GRE，因为很畏惧GRE阅读，那个时候基本就把阅读放弃了，因为GRE的文章读的很少，那么写出来像GRE风格的文章的能力也就很差，导致第一次考G时作文才得了4.5.现在回忆起来，貌似第一次考G时，argument和issue加起来总共才写了4篇。汗自己。这说明啥？！不管以前的基础打的如何扎实，如果不继续勤加练习，想凭以前的水平吃老本，到最后吃亏的还是自己。。所以，练习和积累永远都是王道，永远都别想着钻空子，因为根本就没空子可钻。就好比永远都别想着走捷径，因为根本没捷径。研究生的时候，有了笔记本，自己不敢再找任何借口，加之第一次GRE考的惨到极点，自然不敢再松懈自己。于是才开始了系统练习写作的过程。一开始练习的是托福写作。把托福所有所有题库都找出来（貌似托福自己没有题库，我用的是李笑来的分类题库），先是把所有的题都读了一遍，在李笑来对题库划分的基础上，自己又进行了重新的划分，这种划分主要是便于我自己理解和记忆。然后列计划，每天写多少多少篇，有些题目彼此很相像，所以写一篇就行了。计划列好以后，坚持每天写两篇文章，都要掐时间。有的时候如果状态很好，会写三篇。这貌似是贯穿于整个复习iBT的过程中的，每天都会写至少两篇，一天都没有断过。后来考试的时候，遇到的题目貌似还是很熟悉的，因为本来就写了很多很多文章，貌似在短时间内狂飙了六七百字，后来托福iBT作文还考了30分满分，所以长时间的练习总算是没有白费。

考完了IBT，就开始复习GRE写作。现在还可以翻来当时复习GRE机考时写的博文来看，那个时候的态度绝对是破釜沉舟式的。方法基本和复习托福作文一样，先是读一休和阿狗的所有题目。阿狗没什么可说的，基本从高频到低频一直写下去。一休是先对其进行分类，然后在各类型中再根据高低频排列，每类都挑高频先写，然后从高频到低频每天都写一篇。然后一个多月的时间，每天坚持掐时间写一篇一休，一篇阿狗，从未间断过。复习来复习去，最后总共写了大概四五十篇文章。最后考试的时候，自己比较幸运，阿狗和一休都抽到了高频题，一休更是历史最高频一休51题（竟然现在还记着题号。太激动了。），后来立即发了“我被高频撞了一下腰”的文章，啊哈哈哈哈，想起来就好玩～所以研究生的时候对写作的练习真的是下了很大的辛苦。哦对了，后来GRE机考考了5.5，本来目标是满分的，不过我知道阿狗的一个点批的逻辑不够严谨，算了吧。

过去的这一年在美国，那称不上是对写作的“练习”，那绝对称得上是摧残。自从来了美国以后，就开始计算自己到底写了多少东西。美国的学习制度一般是这种的，他们不可能让你快活一个学期，然后最后来一个期末就完事了。像中国大学和研究生这种学习，基本大家期末的时候稍微抱一下佛的脚丫子，都考第一了。这种对学习的系统消化不太有好处。但是在美国，他们基本是这样的，刚开学吧，老师说，好，同学们，我们来个热身吧，大家写一个5页的小论文好不好啊。5页出去了。过了十几天，老师说，好吧，同学们，为了让大家彼此之间熟悉，我们来写一个25页的小组论文吧，这一个人又得写个8页左右。到了期中了，老师说，同学们啊，看时间过得多快，来个期中个人的大论文吧，15页。期中完了，再来一个小调研式的论文吧，10页。后来为了让同学们对期末有所准备，再写一个小的8页论文。期末了吧，再来一个15页的。我们这个专业，基本每门课都是这样的，每个学期四门

课下来，老师会足足让你写不下五万词的论文。我们都很崩溃。所以，现在也不用自己练习了，光被这些老师们，就已经逼成写作机器了。不过这样有一个好处，就是不管你什么时候学了什么内容，总会在之后的论文写作中将知识用于实际的案例中。哦，貌似还没有加上在实习机构为其写的各种case note, 和每周的工作记录。现在被逼出来的后果是，一个全新的题目，如果是10页的话，第二天早晨9点交，我们都会在前一天晚上七点才开始写，一般十二点睡觉的时候就写好了，还能保证是A。。这说明啥。人的潜力是无穷的。我们这帮人都已经逼成写作机器了。。Orz....所以，你只要多写，狂写，你也能写得很快很好的！真的都是硬练出来的！！

2.写文章的基本步骤

第一步，读题，分析题目。一个论点，正反论证永远都是最有力的。（下面详细说）

第二步，列大纲，就那种简单的大纲就行。列一个大纲最多就四五分钟，除非遇到很变态的题目要想很久。

第三步，写！写论文的时候，我不知道大家的脑子里一般都想什么，但我一般就是写这一段主旨句的时候，脑子里就赶快想例子。写例子的时候，脑子里就赶快想这一段的结尾句怎么措辞。写结尾句的时候，就想下一段的主旨句怎么写。这样比较快！

第四步，检查。有人有检查的习惯，我没有这个习惯，但是如果有时间的话，检查一下语法啦拼写啦之类会有好处。

3.关于一篇文章的写作架构

说中国文章是八股文，但其实英文文章才是最八股的八股文。这一点经过过去一年狂读老外的论文得到了证实。为啥现在读国外的东西越来越快呢？主要是因为他们的文章写的太清晰易懂了，每段话的第一句就是这段的主旨句，然后一个例子，然后一个结尾句，论点、论据、论证三部分特别容易找到，所以一篇很长的文章很快就可以读完。所以我说，咱们写文章也要这样，他们老外觉得这是好文章，你考托福雅思GRE，为了得高分，也得写成他们喜欢的这种样子。所以，要严格记住，一个文章的架构，要这样：

第一段：开头段：明确点名中心，必须必须必须必须必须有中心句！

第二段：论证一段（正面论证）

1.某东西重要，为啥重要，提出第一个理由，必须要有本段的主旨句！

2.论据：就是举例子，用实际的例子来证明为啥要有这个理由。

3.结尾句：其实结尾句就是本段主旨句的paraphrase，用另外一种说法说一遍就行！

第三段：论证二段（正面论证）

1.某东西重要，为啥重要，提出第二个理由，必须要有本段的主旨句！

2.论据：就是举例子，用实际的例子来证明为啥要有这个理由。

3.结尾句：其实结尾句就是本段主旨句的paraphrase，用另外一种说法说一遍就行！

第四段：论证三段（反面论证）

1.某东西重要，没有了某东西就会有怎样不好的后果，提出一个坏的后果，必须要有本段的主旨句！

2.论据：就是举例子，举一个没有了这个东西以后的坏结果的实例。

3.结尾句：其实结尾句就是本段主旨句的paraphrase，用另外一种说法说一遍就行！

第五段：结尾段：明确重申中心，必须必须必须必须必须有结尾句！结尾句就是本篇文章中心句paraphrase！

这里说一下，这种结构里，第一段必须有，任何情况下都必须有！第二段到第四段，你想说几个理由就说几个理由，一般至少要两个理由，这两个理由可以是一正一反，也可以是两正，我鼓励大家写一个反的理由，主要是1.为字数考虑；2.为论证逻辑的严密性考虑。最后一段结尾段，一般国外大学写论文时，可以没有结尾段，但是如果考托福雅思GRE，那么时

间允许的情况下，尽量要写出结尾段，这样可以让文章更完整。

4.关于凑不够字数的情况

字数其实是很好凑的，一可以用例子来凑字，二可以用正反论证来凑字。比如，如果你写了两个理由以后，发现两个自然段加起来字数还是不够，那么就可以写一个反的段落，两段变成三段，论证的是一个论点，字数也上去了。

5.关于对文章的修改以及互改小组

对文章进行修改是一定能进步的，可以自己修改，可以找别人修改。我一般是自己修改，后来写得多了以后，写来写去也没啥可改的。如果希望对文章进行修改的话，最好再一开始练习写作的时候，就和水平较好的筒子组成写作小组，大家要写一起写，写一样的题目，一起掐时间，每次练习都当成模考一样练，然后彼此给对方互相改，这样比较有效。如果大家写的题目不一样，人家一是不太有心情看你的文章，二是对你这个题目不熟悉，就不容易改出好建议来。关于互改小组，现在太傻寄托之类的都会有这种小组，这种小组我以前参加过一天，也学着别人发一个帖子，诸如“某某题处女作，欢迎批砖”一类的，发现要么是没人给改，要么就是别人敷衍式地给你改改、主要是希望你帮他改。对于这样的互改小组，如果能参加到一个非常好、互动很强的、组长很有组织性和主动性的小组，那么进步会很大的。所以要参加，就找个好的，要么就干脆别参加。

6.关于例子

现在网上有很多那种作文论据例子集合啊、大全啊之类的，这种东西下载两三个，稍微背背就行了，永远要记住，例子不是关键，关键是你的论点和你论证的方式，例子只是让你的论点论证过程更充实更饱满，例子不等于全部。如果花了五个小时在背例子上，却花了30分钟写文章，那就不对了。背一堆例子发现不会用，也是白搭。所以，不要总花很多时间逛论坛、并无耻地以收集例子为借口，其实你就是无耻地不想写不想下笔练习嘛。你还是得应该逼自己动笔才行。一般例子的来源有两大种，一是平时博览群书的长时间的积累；二是为了应付考试临时从网上下载例子来背。两种方法都可以，哪个对你更有效就用哪个。

7.关于写出来的东西过于简单

四六级的东西不要怕简单，句子简单不代表一定很幼稚。外国作家有的人的东西很简单，从来不用复杂句，但人家写出来的东西不得不让人佩服。所以不要妄想通过复杂句来让自己的文章变得有思想，要知道，思想是思想，句子形式只是表象而已。如果你有了思想，但句子简单，可以尝试将意思相关的短句糅合成复杂句。糅合的方法具体见语法书，关于语法书我也不知道该推荐什么，随便拿一本看看吧。

非常重要的一个事情是，有的人为了写复杂句而写复杂句，把不相关的短句故意杂糅在一起，让人读起来一头雾水。如果想写出变换多样的文章，改怎么办呢？我还是推荐一个字，读！别人的文章读多了，你自然就知道如何去运用于自己的写作过程中了。这还是一个一样漫长的积累过程。英语学习急不得，像写作这样进步并不是很明显的能力就更加急不得了

8.关于如何将背会的词语用于写作里

背了的词语就要运用到自己的文章里，这可以既提高对单词的记忆程度、又增加自己文章的色彩。我觉得一个好的办法，还是前篇文章里提到的，我的好朋友将同义词、反义词进行成组的总结，然后进行背诵。这样的话，说到一个词，你对那一组的词的记忆力就能被激活，然后就可以不断转换不同的词来运用，而不是只停留于happy, important之类的基础词了。如果时间有限，不用自己归类，可以直接买人家已经归类好的同义词、反义词的单词书来背，也是有用的。貌似新东方有一本这样的书，书名不记得了。好像就是同义词、反义词一类的。

9.关于为考试而进行写作练习时的两个小建议

A。严格用计时器掐时间。用计时器掐时间主要是为了提高自己的写作速度，因为考场上风

云变幻莫测，万一出现什么事故，导致自己写作速度下降，后果不堪设想。所以从最一开始练习的时候，如果人家规定45分钟写完，那么我一般给自己掐的时间是30分钟；如果要求30分钟写完，那么我一般给自己掐的时间是18分钟，以此类推。更多信息请访问：http:///

B。做抗干扰练习。抗干扰练习尤其在托福和GRE考试中非常有用。因为大家都在不同的时间开始写，你写的时候，很有可能旁边有人在向老师要铅笔，问时间，进进出出之类的，对你造成很大影响。考试的时候人的精神本来就很敏感，加上他们的折腾，免不了自己本来要写的东西被忘掉。所以一定要进行抗干扰练习。之前你每天写的时候，就要开始干扰自己，比如边写作，边带着耳机听音乐，或者边写作，边放着一段英文新闻，或者边写作，边听音乐，边放新闻，边放电影。后来有一次很搞笑，在考GRE前几天，打算写最后一篇文章来练习，打开了各种抗干扰的东西，音乐，新闻，和电影，正写得激动的时候，电影里传来男女主角造人的声音，但当时也可以泰然自若地敲字而丝毫不受影响了。:)