english writing 英语写作

第一篇：english writing 英语写作

如何避免由于汉语思维导致的英语写作错误

对英语作文的典型错误进行分析既是检验汉译英水平的最佳方法，也是提高英语作文水平的最有效途径。在此我们充分展示一下错误分析的方法和作用。下面 列举的学生译文收入了学生们在练习和考试中普遍出现的、具有代表性的英语错误。我们要仔细对照原文，努力挑出其中的错误，并且学会改正它们。在这个过程 中，我们可以做一件非常有用的事，就是把找出的错误分门别类，然后根据自己容易犯的错误类型，有针对性地进行深入的英语学习和写作训练。

翻译错误 的出现不仅是因为水平有限，而且往往出于思维的惰性。把汉语原文的词语都变成英文词语，按一定顺序串成句子，确实已经让初学者费了不少脑筋。这时尤其要认 识到，写作过程远远没有结束。你还需要自问:词语是否译得恰当?要避免虚假对应;词语间搭配是否合适?要避免照搬汉语搭配;句子结构是否自然?要避免中式 英文和翻译腔。

需要说明的是，有一类常见错误这里没有列举，那就是英语单词的拼写问题。因为它属于英语学习的基础内容，与汉译英本身没有直接关系。但大家还是要充分意识到正确拼写的重要，勤查词典，避免此类错误的发生。

原作文

Chinese have the custom that they eat sweet dumplings made of glutinousrice flour and appreciate festive lanterns at the night of January 15.错误分析

(1)少用冠词:“中国人”应该译为the Chinese(people)。再比较:“美国人”可译为Americans，而“日本人”必须加冠词，译为the Japanese.(2)搭配不当:the custom that they eat…不通，应改为the custom of eating...。

(3)动词使用不当:appreciate为“赞赏”(to value or regard highly)之意，而原文中的“赏”意思应该是“观赏”(watch).(4)介词使用错误:原文指具体某一天的晚上，译文介词应由at改为 on(on the evening of)。

(5)不忠实于原文:January 15是公历一月十五日，而原文“正月十五”指阴历(lunar calendar)的一月十五日。

英语作文正确句子

The Chinese have the custom of eating yuanxiao(sweet dumplings made of glutinous rice flour)and watching festive lanterns on the fifteenth evening of the first lunar month.单句写作是英语写作的基本功。在一个句子中，每个词语都和其它词语发生关系，互为语境，而句子本身则处于孤立状态。所以当我们翻译各个词语时，要做到相 互协调，前后一致，逻辑严谨;而当我们对句子做整体处理时，就享有一定灵活性，也许能够给出多种恰当的译法，而这些译法分别适用于不同的段落或篇章语境。无论在词语的选择还是句子结构的处理上，我们对其适用范围都要作到心中有数.

第二篇：英语、写作

Letters of Complaint)【例一】

Florence Trunkemeyer

College of Business

Ball State University

Muncie, IN 47300

November 15, 1998

General Computer Corporation

Engineering Department

P.O.Box 73219

Fort Worth, TX 76108

Dear Sir:

With reference to our order No.W 98, the 120 computer sets supplies to the above order were delivered the day before yesterday, but we regret that 20 sets were badly damaged.The packages containing the computer sets appeared to be in good condition and we accepted and signed for them without question.We unpacked the computer sets with care and can only assume that damage must be due to careless handling at some stage prior to packing.We shall be glad if you will replace all 20 sets as soon as possible.Meanwhile, we have put the damaged computer sets aside in case you need them to su（转载自本网http://www.xiexiebang.com，请保留此标记。）pport a claim on your suppliers for compensation.Yours sincerely，(Signature)

【例二】

Sunny Company

Zhongcheng Road Jinlian Building

Shanghai

September 12, 2001

Sales manager

Elegance Clothing Company

West Street, Nanjing

Jiangsu Province

Dear Mr.Chang:

On September 10, our order for 280 womens cotton sweaters was duly received, but we regret to say that 40 cotton sweaters in white color were seriously soiled.We had the case investigated immediately, and the result shows the damage was due to improper packing, for which the suppliers are definitely responsible.Needless to say, we have suffered a great loss from this, as we cannot sell the sweaters in this condition to our customers.We ask you to conduct investigation at your end and reply to us.Sincerely yours，Sunny Lee

Manager

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1、投诉信

Directions: You live in a room in college which you share with another student.You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting and has parties in the room.Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term.You would prefer a single room.Explain your reasons.Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express/air dissatisfaction/disappointment/concern regarding accommodation.I would prefer to move into a single room next semester, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior.For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him;for another, he regularly holds noisy parties.To solve this problem/surmount this difficulty/improve this situation/crack this hard nut, I hope to draw the attention of the authorities concerned.I am sure you will agree that the only solution for me is to move into a room of my own.Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.Yours sincerely, Li Ming

2、推荐信

Directions: One of your friends wants to apply for a job working with foreign teenagers.Write a letter to recommend him/her, describe his/her past experience, and explain the reasons.Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to recommend one of my best friends, Zhou Botong, for this post.With his outstanding leadership and cheerful personality, he was elected chairperson of the Student Union of Tsinghua University several times.Busy as he was, he completed his major, teenage psychology, with an outstanding school record.Upon graduation he was assigned to be a teacher in Tsinghua Middle School.What is more, he loves his job and enjoys working with children.This won him great popularity among his students.Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend him as an ideal candidate for the post you advertised.I am sure you will make a wise decision in hiring him.Yours sincerely, Li Ming

3、感谢信

Directions: After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by Mr.Shakespeare.Write a special letter to express your thanks.Dear Mr.Shakespeare, I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude.I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi.If it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid, I fear that the consequences might have been much serious.Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.Although nowadays people in mounting numbers talk about the need to be unselfish, we see very few people practice what they preach.If there were more people like you, this world would be a much nicer place.Yours sincerely, Li Ming

4、邀请信

Directions: You want to invite some friends to a party.Write an invitation letter to them individually, elaborating on the reason why such a party should be held, and what activities will be arranged for them.Dear Wangcai, I will hold a dinner party at my house on April 1, 2008 to celebrate Mr.Guo Jing’s marriage with Ms.Fujiwora.As you are a close friend of us, we would very much like you to participate in the celebration and share our joy.The occasion will start at seven o’clock in the evening, with the showing of their wedding ceremony.This will be followed by a dinner party.At around ten, we will hold a small musical soiree, at which a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss.If you do not have any prior appointment on April 1, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.Yours sincerely, Li Ming

5、告示

Directions: The Students’ Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest.Write an announcement which covers the following information: 1)the purpose of the contest, 2)time and place of the contest, 3)what is required of the candidates, 4)details of the judges and awards.You should write about 100 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement.Chinese-Speaking Contest January 19, 2008 To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese-speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week(26 January)at the Students’ Auditorium.Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week.Five professors will be invited to be judges.The first six winners will be given awards.Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.The Students’ Union Department of Chinese Language and Literature

6、交通问题

Directions: Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should 1)describe the pictures briefly;2)interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and 3)give your point of view.The pictures vividly reveal that heavy traffic is becoming increasingly serious all over the world.In the first photo, there is traffic congestion on the road with numerous cars, trucks and buses.In the second picture, hundreds of people are waiting for a train.We can deduce from the pictures that the photographer is trying to attract our attention to the issue of heavy traffic.First of all, every year men and women crowd into cities in search of employment, a decent living, and the excitement and stimulation of urban life.As people in mounting numbers flood into cities, city services and facilities have been strained to a breaking point.In addition, since in a city with booming industry, land is precious and cannot be extravagantly used by traffic, traffic flows constantly rise to fill whatever scale of roads and highways are provided for them.It is imperative for us to improve this situation.For one thing, the number of private cars should be limited while more bus routes should be opened up because buses can accommodate more passengers.For another, more streets and roads should be constructed.Since neither of the suggestions can effectively solve the problem, there is an increased awareness that the two solutions may be combined with other possible solutions to produce the best effect.7、网络问题

Directions: Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should 1)describe the picture briefly;2)interpret the social phenomenon reflected by it, and 3)give your point of view.In recent years, people are developing an inseparable relationship with Internet.As is vividly depicted in the picture, it is convenient for us to click the mouse when surfing on line, either to entertain ourselves or to meet the work’s needs.Actually on-line visiting has become a routine activity in our everyday life.However, it seems rather ironic to use a chain instead of normal wire to connect with the mouse in this picture.The exaggerative and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and Internet.Discussion on the duality has become very popular in newspapers or in people’s chats.On the one hand, no one denies that Internet is currently one of the most useful media in our daily life.People from all walks of life are benefiting considerably from its powerful function of information communication.But on the other hand, a great many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain a regular and wholesome lifestyle.Cyber-living resembles the experience of looking constantly into a kaleidoscope which displays both colored patterns and illusions.Such a waste of time inevitably leads to their failure in their life and work.Accordingly, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence.For one thing, college students in expanding numbers get on line every day to learn the news, to study English by registering for web courses, to exchange information through e-mails with their net friends and to download their favorite music, flash, film and pictures.Being veteran on-line shoppers, they frequently purchase books, CDs at much lower prices.For another, once indulged in the fictitious world, people can barely concentrate on real life.Consequently, many students just chat on line or play computer games immoderately everyday, skipping many essential classes.After all, Internet is invented to enrich our life, to connect you and me, and to improve the efficiency of our work rather than shackle us with a chain.8、环境问题

Directions: Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should 1)describe the pictures briefly;2)interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and 3)give your point of view.The pictures symbolically illustrate pollution is becoming increasingly serious around the globe.In the first cartoon, a man is scorching the earth on a chimney.In the second one, a famous ancient Chinese poet, Wang Bo is astonished by the heavy smoke poured by chimneys into the air and dirty river polluted by a factory.We are informed that “the autumn river is the same color with the sky”.The drawer is sending a message about the significance of the need for everyone to fight against the danger of environmental pollution.There is no denying that the industry is indications of civilization, progress and development.Unfortunately, as industry develops, so will the number of factories, and the amount of industry pollutants.We are so development-oriented that we almost can sacrifice our blue sky and pure water in order to obtain a little material gain.As a consequence, it is imperative for us to take drastic actions.On the one hand, the factories should be equipped with devices which can dispose of waste gas and water so as to prevent them from polluting our planet.On the other hand, there should be an increasingly loud voice from the public for firm actions against poisonous gas sent off and unhealthy water polluted by factories.9、职业道德

Directions: Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should 1)describe the pictures briefly;2)interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and 3)give your point of view.The cartoons vividly depict people in expanding numbers are engaged in open and rampant cheating in business.In the first drawing, a boy has no courage to have dinner in front of delicious foods in that there may exist pesticide pollution or poisonous elements in the foods.In the second picture, the administrative office, salesmen, breeding families and forage shops are laughing at the hanging of a poisonous duck.Professional dishonesty has a very damaging effect.In the first place, since cheating in business reveals the moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness of those businessmen who engage in it, the dishonest practice will ultimately exerts a perverse influence on the whole society.In the second place, it not only puts honest businessmen at a competitive disadvantage, encouraging those who did not cheat to adopt similar practices later, but undermines the very foundation of professional ethics in business.It is often painful to impose sanctions in a specific case.But it is worthwhile.For one thing, to eliminate professional dishonesty thoroughly, serious forms of punishment for a willful offense—a suspension of the offender from business—should be applied.For another, since the incentives to engage in cheating in business are mainly due to a lack of adequate precautions, drastic actions should be taken to prevent one form of cheating or another

10、青少年问题

Directions: Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in which you should 1)describe the cartoon briefly;2)interpret the social phenomenon reflected by it, and 3)give your point of view.The cartoon vividly illustrates a gang of youngsters, holding axes in their hands, are rushing to fight with others.The caption reads, “Juvenile delinquency is increasingly lower than normal age.”

Careful deliberation of this problem has given me several ideas as to why this should be so.To begin with, with the rising divorce rate, some children are not properly taken care of, and are easily led astray by evildoers.What is more, devoid of the nourishment of education and a school environment, the teenagers failing in various entrance examinations become full of resentment at a society which they feel has rejected them.Last but not least, inexperienced and gullible young people plunge into the illusory world of electric games, on-line chat or even pornography.Such alienation from proper social values is the slippery slope to crime.It is my view that, first of all, the whole of society should attach great importance to the sound growth of youngsters.Furthermore, proper guidance and protection of adults and schools are vital to teenagers.To sum up, if we exert every effort, the juvenile crime rate will undoubtedly be brought down and effectively controlled in a short while.

第三篇：英语写作

Part V Writing(10%)

Direction: Write a Notice according to the information you have been provided.(10 points)

根据所给提示,用英语写一个通知。

学生会要组织一次英语讲座。假如你是学生会干部,请你用英语写一则通知,通知时间为2012年6月12日，内容如下:

1.2.3.4.5.讲座题目:学习英语的重要性 演讲者:北京大学怀特教授(ProfessorWhite)讲座时间:6月15日, 星期五下午2:30-4:30 地点:学校体育馆 注意事项:散会后回教室就报告内容开展讨论,并制定出各自的英语学习计划。

Words for Reference: 体育馆 stadium学生会 students’ union

Part V Writing(10%)

Direction: Write a Notice according to the information you have been provided.(10 points)

假如你校学生会要举办一次英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇书面通知，以便张贴到布告栏上。通知时间为2012年6月12日，通知须包括以下内容：

1.比赛目的：提高学生的英语口语水平

2.比赛时间：2012年6月15日下午4点

3.比赛地点：四楼阶梯教室

4.评比办法：由五位老师做评委其中包括Mr.Smith

5.奖项设置：一等奖1名，二等奖3名，三等奖5名

6.报名办法：到各班班长处报名

Words for Reference:学生会 students’ union阶梯教室 auditorium

比赛contest评委：judge一等奖 first prize

Part V Writing(10%)

Direction: Write a Letter of Appreciation according to the information you have been provided.(10 points)

假设你是李华，交换生Tracy刚刚结束在你们学校的学习生活，已经返回英国。作为班长，请你根据以下内容用英语写一分感谢信，感谢她一学期以来带给大家的美好回忆，写信时间为6月12日：

1.怀念与她相处的快乐时光；

2.感谢她对大家英语学习的帮助；

3.感谢她为班级捐赠的英文书籍；

4.欢迎她有机会再来中国。

Words for Reference: 回忆 memory捐赠 donate

Part V Writing(10%)

Direction: Write a Letter of Appreciation according to the information you have been provided.(10 points)

以李明的名义给Mr.Foster写一封信。写信日期是2012年6月12日。

内容：已收到他寄来的礼物（一件精美的雕塑），非常喜欢这礼物，把它们放在书架上正合适。得知他将来上海参加你的生日，十分高兴。请他将航班告诉你。你将去机场接他。注意：必须包括对收件人的称谓、写信日期、发信人的签名等基本格式。

Words for reference: 雕塑：sculpture 航班：flight number 书架:book shelf

Part V Writing(10%)

Direction: Write a Letter of Application according to the information you have been provided.(10 points)

你校英语外籍教师Boris和Chris暑假期间准备在本地开一家西餐小店，要找若干名大学生为打工人员。下面是招聘启事：

Wantedcollege students

Do service work and act as translators

Healthy and helpful

Small wages

Contact: bjpub@bc.com

假定你叫李华，愿意应聘。请写封电子邮件，介绍自己，并说明应聘理由。

Part V Writing(10%)

Direction: Write a Letter of Application according to the information you have been provided.(10 points)

假设你是李华，得知China Daily报社招聘兼职记者，你有意应聘，请按下列要求给报社写一封申请信。

1.表明自己感兴趣。

2.说明自己的优势：知识面、英语水平、人际关系、相关经历等。

3.希望得到回复。

Words for reference: 兼职：part-time job报社：agency记者： journalist

第四篇：英语写作

1.英语文章段落结构特点

英语文章段落结构一般有三部分构成：主题句+扩展句+结尾句

(1)主题句：所谓主题句，就是英语文章段落的中心思想句。它是英语文章段落的灵魂，在英语文章段落中居于主导地位。我们都知道英语文章一般喜欢开门见山，所以主题句一般位于英语文章段落的句首。其他句子都要围绕它而展开。

(2)扩展句：所谓扩展句就是为主题句起解释说明或论证的句子。通常我们写扩展句所采用的方法是举例子(for example, for instance, such as, a case in point is that---)、列数据(according to the recent study/survey,---)等。

(3)结尾句：所谓结尾句就是总结句。英语写作也类似于汉语写作，最后再把自己本段落的写作目的陈述一下。但是在英语写作中结尾句毕竟还是少数。因此我们通常看到英语的文章段落结构 60%-70%都是由主题句+扩展句构成。

学会遣词造句

1.遣词：

(1)词汇等级

所谓词汇的等级就是，我们在写作的过程中，如果想出一个基本词汇来之后，能够在这个基本词汇的基础上把它在提升一下，也就是我们一般写作所提倡的用“难词”。比如，我们一提到“重要的”，大多数同学首先会想到“important”这个单词，那么提升一下的话就可以想到它的如下同义词：significant, vital, main, basilica, crucial, momentous etc

(2)词汇准确性

所谓词汇的准确性是指，我们在有一个词近而想到它的同义词之后，要结合语境选择恰当的用词。在这里必须指明的是，并不是词汇等级越高越好，必须还要考虑到适合于不同的语境。比如，眼睛大，这个“大的”形容词，我们首先会想到big,近而想到great, large, huge, vast, titanic, enormous etc。那么是不是用后面的词就可以了呢?或者说用上enormous等词更能博得阅卷人的好感呢?答案是否定的。在这里很明显用后面的词来修饰眼睛是不可以，只能用big，因为我们听过一首英文歌曲叫做“I am a big big girl, in a big big world.”big表示眼睛大而迷人可爱的。

造句：

(1)词组

很多考生平时写作不太擅长用词组，对于他们而言最习惯的就是想到汉语，然后对应汉语思维写出英语句子，这种写作只能是单词的罗列组合，谈不上什么技巧文采可言，因此，写出来的文章必然就是所谓平淡如流水，没有英语的味道。如果我们能够在单词的基础上，进一步想到与之同义的词组，那么文章就会显得与众不同，更具有英语的味道。比如上面所说的“重要的”这个单词，当我们想到important的时候，如果从语法角度再稍加考虑一下，我们会想到“be of importance”。因为，语法中规定：形容词等于of加这个形容词的名词形式。如果再提升一步，我们还学过一个常用的词组叫做“play an important role in---”。很多同学说自己的文章凑不够字数或是没有文采，那么采用词组进行写作是不是就可以解决以上问题了呢?

(2)句式

除了采用词组，要使文章更具英语的味道，我们还需要变换句式。没有受过

正规作文训练的考生，通常采用的句式多为主谓宾、主系表。于是我们看到大多数的文章充斥着这样的形式：I am a good boy, and I am a student.I study in Shandong University, and I have three years experience in Qilu Hotel.这样流水帐式的文章显然不能得到高分。

写作中阅卷人喜欢的句式有以下两种：一是插入语;二是倒装。

第一，插入语。

所谓插入语，英语中有两种形式。一种是有两个逗号之间引起的成分称之为插入语;第二种是有两个半破折号引起的成分称之为插入语。如下所示(黑体划线处)：

Jinan, the Spring City, is a famous tourist city.Other people may give us instrumental support—financial aid,material resources, and needed services—that reduces stress by helping us resolve and cope with our problems.插入语的作用主要有两个，一个是突出主语，比如说：He, who would like to play basketball, is a good student.第二个作用是解释说明，比如说：People, especially students, should work hard.第二，倒装

倒装是我们写作中需要用到的。虽然略显俗套，但是却是很能满足阅卷人的主观感受的。常用的倒装形式有以下几种：

Only + 时间状语

Only when all of us join in the efforts of eliminating cheating at all levels can we expect to have a cleaner society and a more beautiful future.Only + 介词词组

Only by planning his time care fully can he improve efficiency and make achievements.Only in this way can we master the writing skills step by steps.否定词位于句首(hardly when;never;not only---,but also---;seldom)在我一生当中很难遇到这样的人

Seldom in my life have I met such a kind-hearted man.地点方位名词位于句首

In no other place in the world can one find such enthusiasm for applying for hosting the 2008 Olympic Games.(3)修辞

无论是汉语写作还是英语写作，修辞其实非常的重要。它是作者写作功底具体事例地展现。所谓修辞包括比喻、拟人、排比等等。英语写作中的修辞问题我已经专门写过一篇文章(见《英语写作几种修辞手法》)。这里仅举一个比喻例子，还是拿“重要的”来举例。当你用完词组之后，如果你用上下面比如句子，则文章就会显得神采飞扬，试比较：

The bicycle is important for us.The bicycle is of importance for us.The bicycle plays an important role in our life.The bicycle, environmental friendliness vehicle, plays an important

role in our life.The bicycle is like the air, water, and sunshine and cannot be parted with a moment in our life.那么很明显，最后一个句子是我们最终拿到考场上去搏击高分的句子。第四，平时要注意积累

很多考生为了写好作文也作了好多工作，课下也付出了很多，包括背诵大量的文章等等，但是提笔写作时候，仍不见的有所改观。问题在哪里呢?高频词汇你就不需要了，其实就是四级的单词...你觉得比较记住的就用用.....加油!

第五篇：英语写作

英语作文模板

一、英语作文的框机架 对比观点题型

（1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1.有一些人认为……2．另一些人认为……3．我的看法……

Nowadays，the topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------（理由二）.Thirdly(finally),⑦----------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）.The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.（2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点

Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）.For example, they think ②-----------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them ③---------------(为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤---------(反对的理由之二)． Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥-----(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)． 解决方法题型

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径

１．问题现状

２．怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second,----------(举例进一步说明现状)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解决方法一).For another-------------(解决方法二).Finally,--------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解决方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(带来的好处).说明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）

１．说明事物现状 ２．事物本身的优缺点 ３．你对现状（或前景）的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(Ａ的优点之一).Besides-------------------（Ａ的优点之二）.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(Ａ的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(Ａ的第二个缺点)． Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法)． 议论文的框架

(1)不同观点列举型（选择型）

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that_观二_____.In their point of view, on the one hand, ___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二_.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.（2）利弊型的议论文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文题目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___优点一______.And secondly ___优点二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”,讨论议题is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with,缺 点 一.In addition, 缺 点 二.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of 讨论议题into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.经典句式

（一）．．．．has both advantages and disadvantages．……既有利又有弊。1．Obviously television has both advantages and disadvantages． 2．Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages．

3．Compared with cars，bikes have their advantages and disadvantages． 类似句式

1．Although computers bring people a lot of convenience，they have many disadvantages．

2．．．．has many advantages．For example，．．．However，just as every coin has two sides，．．．has its disadvantages ．（just as every coin has two sides也很值得背诵。）

（二）．．．．play（s）an important role ／part in．．．……在……中扮演重要角色／起重要作用。1．Computers play an important role in science and technology． 2．Computers play a more and more important role in our life．

Computers play an increasingly important role in our studies． 3．Education plays an important part in developing our mind． 类似句式

1．Advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life．

2．In the past，letters played a decisive role in long-distance communication．But now，telephone，email，fax have taken their place．

（三）I．With the development of．．．，随着……的发展，1．With the development of our economy，many Chinese families can afford a car．

2．With the development of our economy and society，pollution is more and more serious．

3．With the rapid development of science and technology，people can get a college degree by taking online-courses at home． 类似句式

1．With the rapid increase of China's population，housing problem is becoming more and more serious．

（四）It is important for

It is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world 类似句式：

It is important/（necessary, difficult, convenient, possible）for sb.to do sth

1、It is necessary to shake hands when you first meet someone

（五）The+比较级..., the+比较级...1，,The harder you work at it, the more progress you will make.类似句式

比较级+and+比较级（The world is getting smaller and smaller.）