第一篇:雅思小作文写作技巧:句式变化@皇家留学
雅思小作文写作技巧:句式变化
句型的丰富度是雅思写作技巧中非常重要的点,而高分的雅思小作文写作范文往往也是有着丰富的句型搭配和词汇运用,下面天道小编就通过实例来讲解一下如果在雅思小作文写作中运用更丰富的句型技巧。雅思小作文主体部分是对图表进行重点描述的部分,需要大家在备考的时候加以重视。下面为大家整理的是关于雅思小作文写作中不同表达方法的总结,非常详细,对比鲜明,大家一起来看看详细内容吧。一般雅思小作文题目中就有明确要求在文中对所给数据进行分析比较,因此要想将主体段完成好肯定少不了“对比,比较,连接”等连接词以及语句,如while, however, in spite of, in stark contrast等连词,也包括类似it is clear that等插入语。
当然为了拿到高分,除了一些常用的搭配与表达之外,更地道或是更高级的表示也是必须要掌握的,主体段要想写的精彩,除了各式用词之外,也绝对离不开句式的搭配运用,简单的“淡妆”相信是难不倒考生的,但也必须注意结合“浓妆”,适当加入高级的表示方法。
如:中国的出生率从1920年至1935年上升,之后下降到1940年的5%左右。运用不同级别的词汇句式即可写出如下3种表达方式:
“淡妆”级别:China’s birth rate rose from 1920 to 1935.It then decreased to 1940 at about 5%.(用词简单,直接翻译的简单句)
“浓抹”级别:China’s birth rate rose from around 10 percent in 1920 to 15 percent in 1935, and then it fell sharply to somewhere at the vicinity of 5 percent in 1940.(用词调整的并列句)
考官提供范文中也有类似表达:In spite of some fluctuations in the expected percentages, the proportion of older people will probably continue to increase in the next two decades in the three countries.(剑5 P162 Model Answer)
“烟熏妆”级别:Increasing from approximately 10 percent in 1920 to 15 percent in 1935, China’s birth rate then plunged to a low of just 5 percent in 1940.(首先导入分词伴随代替常规的China’s birth rate开头,且用词更高深);
十分建议各位考生可根据自己的语言功底适当添加此类级别的句子,以增加新鲜感和色彩,从而提高分数。
当然此类句式也能时常在考官提供的范文中找到:The first potential location is outside the town itself, and is sited just off themain road to the town of Hindon, lying 12 kms to the north-west.(剑5 P166 Model Answer)
从就可以看出来,雅思小作文主体部分的写作方法是有很多种的,但是复杂一些的写作方法总是会更容易吸引考官的眼球而且也更容易达到写作的字数要求,所以建议大家都向最后一种表达方式靠拢。总之,丰富的句型能让你的雅思小作文写作更出彩,当然也不是通篇都是相当复杂的句型和生僻词汇就是好事,这样反而让考官觉得整篇雅思小作文写作的表达不够地道,甚至太过生硬,总之要把握好雅思小作文写作中复杂句式使用的度。
第二篇:雅思小作文常用句式
Task 1 summarization
First paragraph
translate the subject.words may be used: be made up of…;be composed of… Main part
According to the graph… , more specifacally
It is manifest from the graph that… , to be more exact the greatest increase is in…rising from …to … next came sth.over the same period.word may be used:
go up/increase/grow
jump/shoot up/surge
decline/drop/fall
plunge/plummet(急剧下降)
sharply/rapidly/dramatically
slow/gentle
fluctuate
level off at/level out at
peak at/reach the highest point at
bottom at/reach the bottom at
account for/make up/occupy
about/around/nearly/approximately
respectively(eg:In the 2004 Olympics,China and Russia won x and y gold medals,respectively)
expect/predict(eg:A is expected/predicted to reach…)Last paragraph
Therefore, it can be clearly seen from the graph that…
As a matter of fact, the issue of whether/ the phenomenon that/ the issue that________________________is a complex and controversial(复杂的)one.On one hand, many people may feel that ___1____,and correspondingly(相关的)____解释1______;on the other hand, it can be noted that ____2_______and hence(因此)___2的结果_.There is no universal answer to this question;so different people can hold different opinions due to their distinct backgrounds and values.As far as I am concerned, while I agree that under some circumstances___1____, ___2___, is somehow reasonable, however my opinion is that ____________ and it can be greatly substantiated by the reasons addressed below.B:
1)the speaker asserts that____复述或解释题目观点______,Although the speaker’s position is not wholly insupportable, far more compelling arguments can be made for ________自己的观点___________
2)the issue of whether to ____复述_____ is a complex one, since it involves a conflict between our interest in ___doing___ and a legitimate need to ____do____.In my point of view, the final judgment should depend on a case-by-case analysis of two key factors.TOPIC:
1)Since I _______________, I prefer to ___________________.2)In the past, I have often been pleasantly surprised by_________;therefore, I would rather
____________________.3)While there still exist ___________________,our resources/attention should be focused here not in other place.4)If you define ____题目中你认为不对的观点_____, then I would gave to agree that today.5)______结果______is important to me, so I would prefer to _____观点______.承接性句子
1)My reasons for this view involve the notions of respect and trust.2)
二、中间段
1)first…….Second…….finally
2)firstly…..for example;another opinion…..say,…..;in addition,……
3)Although we may not have conclusive scientific evidence of a cause-effect relationship, ample anecdotal evidence establishes significant correlation.Moreover, both common sense and our experiences inform us that people tend to _________________________________.4)The virtues of ______are undeniable.三、例证
1)Moreover, this approach can be used by anyone---排比性例证
2)XXX,CEO of XXX Company, which is major manufacturer of XXX, once pointed out(and I paraphrase)that _________.This illustrates the point that _________.3)Professor XXX, highly respected and well-know professor at china academy of social science, once pointed out(and I paraphrase)that____.This illustrates the point that ____________
4)As head of XXX department at my university once said(and I paraphrase), “_________”.This illustrates the point that ___________.5)According to a recent survey conducted by the XXX department of XXX University among AAA.NNN percent of AAA CCC.The result of the survey also indicates an increase of over NNN percent within NNN years in the rates of BBB.Researchers of XXX believe that _____.In AAA where not CCC, the occurrence of such problems drops dramatically.四、结尾段
1)In my estimation the pitfalls of such a technique outweigh any of its potential advantages.2)I think anyone would be hard-pressed to find fault with this advice.3)To conclude, there is no easy solution to such a complex issue, however, taking into account all the dimensions of the issue discussed in the above analysis, might be the first step out of the dilemma.4)In sum, it is very likely that people will be able to arrive at the same conclusion on this controversial issue due to their different experiences, and conflicting values.Nevertheless, public awareness of the various dimensions of the issue discussed above argument will certainly contribute to the thorough understanding of the problem.5)In conclusion, while some people may still remain unconvinced, the reason that I have
analyzed in above argument should at least make them aware of the complexities of the issue under discussion.There is little doubt that more and more people will come to realize that _____________.五、连贯与衔接
第一,首先 first, firstly, first of all , to begin with, in the first place, to start with 一方面,另一方面for one thing…for another;on the one hand…on the other hand 一般来说 generally speaking, in general 起初 in the beginning, at first
目前,现在 at present, now, currently, by this time 最近recently, lately
第二、第三,其次 second, secondly, third, thirdly, for another
…………………………………………………………………………………………..此外,而且,并且,尤其,同样地,正如,与此同时
Additionally, again, along with, also, and then, as well as, besides, equally, even, further, furthermore, in addition, in other words, just as, likewise, moreover, not only…but also, similarly, to put it another way, to repeat, then, too, what is more
…………………………………………………………………………………………..例如,即
A case in point, after all, as a proof, as an illustration, as an example, for example, for instance, in particular, just as, namely, such, specifically, that is, to illustrate, to demonstrate …………………………………………………………………………………………..此后,后来 afterwards, after that, after a while, after a few days, from now on, later, soon, then
为此 for this purpose 换句话说 in other words
确实 as a matter of fact, certainly, indeed, in fact, , surely, truly, undoubtedly, without doubt …………………………………………………………………………………………..显然 obviously, in stark/contrast, clearly 不论怎样 anyway
最重要的是,特别是 most important, above all, in particular 经对比 by contrast, in contrast, by comparison, in comparison,相反/相对的 conversely, instead, on the contrary, otherwise, unlike, whereas, while, yet, rather than
…………………………………………………………………………………………..相同的、相同重要的 equally, equally important, in the same way, in the same manner, like, likewise, similarly, all the same 诚然,让步 admittedly, after all,尽管although, even though, in spite of,…………………………………………………………………………………………..结果 accordingly, as a result, consequently, for this reason, hence, in this way, so, therefore, thus 结论 as has been noted/mentioned/stated, at last, finally, in a word, all in all, in brief, in conclusion, in short, in sum, in summary, to conclude, to sum up, to summarize
………………………………………………………………………………………….六、同义词
Only= sole= exclusive= peerless= best Way= method= means
Make= form= shape= create
Man= human= person= individual= anyone Trustworthy= dependable
Trust= depend= entrust= believe Write up= report
Work out= solve= calculate= exercise Wind up= finish Turn up= discover Turn out= conclude Turn into= transform Stand for= represent
Spell out= state in detail Set up= arrange
Rule out= eliminate(消除)Run across= find accidentally Run into= meet by accident Put off= postpone(推迟)Pick out= select
Put up with= tolerate
Make out= understand with difficulty Make up= invent= compose Bring about= cause Look up to= respect
Look up= located information Look over= examine Keep on= continue
Keep up= remain current Carry on= transact= continue Clear up= clarify Cut down on=reduce Fall though= fail Figure out= discover Go after= follow Go before= precede Go up= increase Go over= review
第三篇:雅思写作Animal类总结@皇家留学
雅思写作Animal类总结
雅思写作动物类的题目总会......Animals
1.Animal killing
2.Animal testing
To what extent is the use of animals in scientific research acceptable?
Is animal testing necessary?
Should animals suffer for the benefits of humans?
3.Wild animals preservation/ the Conservation of Endangered Animals
4.Pet keeping
5.Zoos
Are our zoos cruel to wild animals?
Zoos are sometimes seen as necessary but not poor alternatives to a natural
environment.Discuss some of the arguments for and/or against keeping animals inzoos.
第四篇:雅思考试,雅思写作技巧
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雅思写作概述
雅思考试,雅思写作技巧
雅思写作部分在听力、阅读部分之后出现,是笔试的最后一项。雅思写作考试要求在60分钟内完成两篇作文(Task 1 and Task 2)。写作中,以移民为主的培训类(general training)和以留学为主的学术类(academic)试题类型有所不同。
Task 1要求考生在20分钟内完成一篇150字以上的文章。G类(培训类)要求考生针对题目要求写一封信来询问某方面信息或阐释某种情况。到目前为止,出现较多的书信种类有投诉信、请求信、建议信、询问信、邀请信等。而A类(学术类)则以考察图表为主。考得较多的图表有曲线图、柱状图、饼状图、表格等。也有可能考到两种不同种类的图表。另外,流程图和示意图偶尔也会考到。
Task 2要求考生在40分钟内完成一篇不少于250字的议论文。A类和G类对Task 2的要求非常相似。考生可能需要对某个观点发表支持或反驳意见,或者讨论针锋相对的一组观点,或者解释某种问题出现的原因并提出相应的解决办法。
雅思写作评分
雅思写作的评分标准不像四六级或托福考试采用整体式的评分,而是分项式评分(analytical scoring)。也就是说,考官给考生并不只打一个分数,而是根据具体的评分细则打分。
雅思评分为9分制。考官根据以下四个评分标准打分,Task Achievement(for Task
1),Task Response(for Task 2),Coherence and Cohesion,Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range and Accuracy。每个部分分数比重相同。但考生最后写作成绩并不是Task 1和Task2的简单平均,而是以Task 2为主。
一般说来,移民火毒语言学校起码要5分(Modest User)。留学需要6分(Competent User)以上。如果要读法律、传媒、管理等名校的研究生,写作最好达到7分(Good User)。雅思官方报告表明,2005年中国大陆考生雅思写作平均分为5.26分。这一成绩,与许多考生的目标成绩有较大差距。如果希望在雅思写作上有所提高的话,那么首先需要知道获得每个档次的分数需要达到的标准和要求。
5分作文标准:
在完成任务方面,文章基本符合题目要求,图表写作中机械描述细节,缺少清晰的概括,有时可能缺少数据支持。书信写作中写信目的有时不明确。议论文部分跑题,有立场,但论述不够清晰,可能缺少结论;有主要观点,但观点有限并且论证不够充分;用于论证的部分细节与文章主题不相关。
在连贯与衔接方面,内容有一定组织结构但缺少总体延续性;衔接手段不充分,不明确,乐训国际http://www.xiexiebang.com/
或过多地使用衔接手段;缺少指代和替换,显得重复过多;没有分段,或者分段不充分。
在词汇资源方面,词汇量有限,知识在最低层面上满足题目要求;拼写和构词法上可能出现明显错误,造成读者的某些阅读困难
在语法结构的范围和准确性方面,只能使用有限的句子结构;试图使用复杂句,但复杂句的使用准确性不如简单句;语法错误较多,标点有的部分误用,造成读者的某些阅读困难。
6分作文标准:
在完成任务方面,文章符合题目要求,图表作文进行了概括,信息选择合理,书信作文写信目的基本清晰,语气肯能有不一致之处。内容涵盖不够完整,但符合题目要求;立场切题,虽然结论可能不清晰或重复
在连贯与衔接方面,信息和观点组织连贯;文章有延续性,衔接手段使用有效,但是句子内部和句子之间的衔接可能有误或者过于机械;指代关系肯那个不总是清晰、合理;有手段,但不总是有逻辑性
在词汇资源方面,能够使用适当范围的词汇;试图使用较不常见的词汇,但使用有一些不准确;在拼写和构词法上有错误,但这些错误不至于影响交流
在语法结构的范围和准确性方面,能使用简单和复杂句子结构;语法和标点出现一些错误,但这些错误很少导致交流障碍
7分作文标准:
在成任务方面,内容涵盖题目要求;图表作文能够清晰概括主要趋势,差别或阶段。书信作文能够清晰地表达写作目的,语气一致、得体。议论文能够涵盖题目要求,文章立场清晰;文章能提出、引申、并支持主要观点,但可能有过度概括,分论点不够紧凑
在连贯与衔接方面,信息和观点组织有逻辑性;文章从头至尾有延续性;衔接手段使用合理,虽然可能有一些使用过少或过多;每个段落都有明确的主题
在词汇资源方面,词汇使用丰富、有一定的准确性和灵活性;能使用较不常见词汇,对语体和搭配有所了解;在词汇的选择、拼写和构词法上偶尔有错误
在语法结构的范围和准确性方面,能使用多种复杂结构;多数语句准确无误;语法和标点掌握较好。
总的来说,考生需要在几个方面加以提高:首先内容上要认真审题,以使文章符合题目要求;其次结构要清晰,上下文要连贯,使文章成为有机整体,例子和细节能够支持文章的主题;语言上要达到用词和语法使用准确,如果要争取7分以上的成绩,还需要做到用词丰富的、句子结构有一定的复杂性。
雅思写作分类:
从内容上,雅思作文大致可以分为以下几类:
教育
老师的责任是教学生知识还是如何为人处事?
学生应该走读还是在校内住宿?
大学教育的目的是什么?
学习历史没有用处还是可以帮助我们认识现在?
公共图书馆应该多花钱买书还是购买软件DVD等高科技媒介?
科技
科技的发展是否使我们的创意越来越少?
科技是否使人的健康越来越差?
宇宙探险队我们影响甚微么?
手机对我们有什么负面影响?
是否应该在实验中使用动物?
社会
青少年犯罪的原因和后果是什么?
罪犯应该入狱还是应该接受教育和培训?
老年人比例的增长给社会带来什么影响?
解决世界环境问题的最佳方案是不是提高燃油的价格?
应该直接捐赠给当事人还是通过慈善机构?
文化
文化出国旅游时应该入乡随俗么?
是否应该保护传统建筑以保持民族特性?
英语作为全球性语言的传播利大于弊么?
学习语言的同时是否也要学习文化和生活方式?
多元文化社会利大于弊么?
政府职责
医疗保健和教育方面的费用是否应该由政府支付?
政府是否应该派新毕业的教师和医生下乡以减少城乡差距?
纳税是否是公民的义务?
国家队应该由政府资助还是应该由非政府组织支持?
大城市的住房短缺问题是不是只有靠政府来解决?
从结构上,雅思写作可以分为以下三大类:
Argument
Argument题型的特点是题目中有两个针锋相对的观点,然后要求discuss both views and give your opinion。考生写作的时候要注意不能只给出自己的观点,而是要分析对立双方观点的各自理由,然后进行分析并给出自己的观点。
Point of view
Point of view题型的特点是题目中有一个或两个关联 而非冲突性观点,然后问to what extent do you agree or disagree?考生写作的时候只需要给出自己的观点并加以论证即可。当然,观点的给出有多种可能性,可以是同意,可以是不同意;可以是部分同意,也可以是持折中态度。具体论证的时候可以正面论证为主,也可以通过让步反驳法来加以论证。
Problem
Problem题型的特点是题目为事实,而非观点。大部分情况下,要求考生分析这个现象的原因,然后提出解决问题的办法。但有时候会要求考生分析这一现象可能导致的后果。
四、雅思写作准备
作文是需要长期准备和积累的。有三个月以上的时间准备比较理想。
写
要练习雅思真题的写作。可以联系练习剑桥雅思系列雅思真题的题目。只有练习了雅思真题,才能对雅思的出题思路和题目构成有清晰完整的了解。在练习的时候要注意,应该在规定的时间内完成。只有在有时间限制的压力下练习写作,考生在考试的时候才能发挥自如。在练习写作的时候,也不是一定要练习完成的文章,有时候可以进行段落论证的写作。比如专门花一些时间练习开头段和结尾段的写作。有时对文章分部分练习写作更能磨练写作技巧。有时候也可以练习某种论证手段的使用,甚至对于常用的句型可以进行造句练习。在练习频率上基本应该保持两天写一篇以上。
读
如果只是一味埋头苦练,那么只能提高写作速度,而在写作水平上不一定能有长足的进步,只有看了好的文章,考生才会知道应该在哪方面努力,以及自己的文章有什么不足之处。最重要的是,要看考官写的例文,比如剑桥大学出的Cambridge IELTS 系列。看的时候不要只看懂就行,而是要着眼于三个方面:考官范文是如何提出观点并进行论证的,运用了哪些论证手法;范文是怎样安排段落的,段落之间以及句子之间是怎样连接在一起的,运用了哪些衔接手段;范文里有什么精彩的词、词组和句型是值得我们模仿的。如果考生能够举一反三,仔细思考并适当借鉴的话,那么每一篇都会有所收获。除了考官范文以外,其他的一些优秀范文也可以参考,各种精彩段落包括雅思阅读文章里的论证方法和游泳表达也可作为学习对象。
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有时候考生越看范文越觉得沮丧甚至郁闷,因为发现自己的低水平文章和高分文章之间似乎存在不可以逾越的鸿沟。要想跨越这道鸿沟弥补其中的差距,关键在于多修改。考生应该在规定的时间内完成作文然后对照范文,看看自己作文中存在的问题:有没有审题错误?结构是否混乱?有没有表达不清的地方?然后仔细捉摸一下,范文是怎么展开论述的。看数遍范文以后可以试着根据刚才学习范文的体会和收获来修改自己写过的文章,把论证不够充分的地方重新论证一下,关联不当的地方修补一下,错误表达改正过来。当然如果能有老师的指导效果会更好。这样,练一篇,看一篇,改一篇,写一次就会有一次的收获。详情请登录:http://www.xiexiebang.com/
第五篇:雅思雅思小作文写作技巧与应注意事项
雅思小作文写作技巧与应注意事项
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雅思技巧与注意事项(写作---小作文)个人总结分析(谢谢各位51IELTS的帮助)
1。试卷发下后,请花半分钟的时间来浏览作文的题目,这里包括议论文在内。
2。此后,请看第一部分的题目,明确以下几点
1)属于什么题型的图表,是一个曲线图,一个饼图,一表格,一个流程图还是一个物体以及其他类型的图表
2)是一幅图还是两幅或者是以上的图
3)时间、字数以及其他的要求
3。用5分钟的时间分析并形成以下的内容
1)注意不同类型图表的技巧(包括时态、语态、关键描述词语与句型)
2)划出并分析题目中的关键内容,分析图表中的关键特征点(依据各种图表的特点来决定)
3)考虑结构(开头引言,描述特征,可能总结)注意以下
开头不能与文章已经给出的东西一样,用自己语言表达;
描述关键以及有代表性的点或者是趋势;
在语法与句法正确的基础上,力求用不同的句型组合(如简单句,复合句,定语/表语/宾语/非谓语从句),用近意词语;
正确表达文章所给信息;
在可能的情况下做简单的总结;
不要发表有个人或者是评论性的句子;
标点符号,单词的拼写应该正确;
4。书写的时候注意流利与工整,采用现代式的书写格式
5。留有时间检查,保持卷面的整洁
技巧性套句(仅供参考)
开头句型(用简单的句子给出尽可能多的信息WHEN,WHAT,WHERE,有特色。)一般有两种,一种是主动一种是被动。
1)The chart/graph/table/diagram/process(show,reveal,illustrate,demonstrate,depict,describe,indicate)
2)According to/As can be seen from/As shown in/It is clear/apparent from/It can be seen from
结尾句型(如果没有可以充分说的,可以不用结尾。结尾不要节外生枝。最好不要出现很明显有结尾特征的词语“in conclusion”)
中间关键句型----☆要注意认真审查题目,弄清楚要描述的数据究竟代表什么,单位是什么,用什么方式表达。
OBJECT(描述物体)
注意点:要明确以一定的顺序来写。从左到右或者是从上到下,从内到外(根据物体自己的特点)等等。把题目中给出的部件详细描述。(如202的自行车)
句型:介绍功能The illustration is of a _______ which is designed to(do something)↓
说明构成部分A ______ is made up of /consists of/comprises How many ?A number of parts/sections
↓
描述各个部件功能不要用you ,one可以用we, the operator(单数个体)First ,(the cyclist)puts his or her _____on the ____
要有一定的顺序,不要将每个部分单独写出,应该将能够合并的一起结合,注意用以下句型(被动态,定语从句,非谓语动词)
要用关联词
PIE CHART(饼图)
注意点:1)文字中要表达出总量与分量的关系,在两个以上的PIE中,要注意各个PIE间的比较
2)数据究竟代表什么应清楚
语言点:1)percentage / proportion
2)(v.)make up/ constitute / account for
3)①
the biggest difference between 2 group(A+B)is in...,where A makes up 5% while
B constitutes 67%
the highest percentage of A, which was approximately 12%
②
the percentage of A in.....is more than twice that of B,the ratio is 67% to 45%($% compared to $%)
③in...,while a greater percentage of A than B are found in.......(the former is $% and the latter is $%)
④
there are more A in......,reaching $%,compared with $% of B
⑤
A , which used to be the........,has become less important, which declined(increased)sharply from $% in 1978 to only $% in 1998.⑥
The biggest loss was to某区域.The biggest gains in A were made by某区域.FLOW CHART(曲线图)
注意点:1)抓住“变化”和“趋势”
2)有两种情况其一是在不同时间段内的数据比较,另外是单独数据的全程描述。前者适合于数据代表的物体较少且时间界限明确的情况下,后者适合于描述数据对象很多且时间划定不清晰。当然依据考试中的题目来决定。
语言点:1)变化状态幅度词(要依据描述的情况决定)
轻微-----slightly, slowly(速度), steadily(平缓)逐渐----gradually
显著-----significantly , markedly急剧-----rapidly , dramatically , abruptly ,sharply突然---suddenly趋势---trend inclination tendacy
2)变量幅度词语
★增加-----increase, jump ,go up ,rise, climb , ascend , level up ,surge,★减少----decrease, drop ,go down ,fall,----, descend, level down ,★水平----keep/stay/remain/maintain stable ,----steady ,be similar to ,there is
little/hardly any/no change
★最高-----reach a highest point/the top/the summit/the peak/the most/peak in,at★最低-----reach a lowest point/the bottom//rock/hit a trough /bottom out★交叉-----correspond with in----year;---crossing the line for-----
3)时间幅度词语
During the period 1970-1999;From 1970 to 1999;Since the early 1970s;In 1970------then in 1980-----ten years later
4)基本句型
There was变化趋势in the number of A from 1986-1990(over next.....yeas),which was followed by变化趋势and then变化趋势until 1998 when there was变化趋势for the next....years
From 1990 onwards, there was变化趋势in the number of A which then变化趋势at $% in 1994.In 1990,the number reached(was)$%,but 30 years later there was变化趋势.After变化趋势from...to...,A begin变化趋势over the next....years.The number of...increased rapidly from 1988 to 1990 during the five-year period〓
There was a rapid increase from 1988 to 1990 during the five-year period
A has almost/nearly/about/over a quarter/half/twice/one third /as many students as/as much money as /B;A has about/approximately/exactly/precisely the same number/proportion/amount of students/money as.....It has reached something of a plateau,X percent/an average of X percent in the past few years in 1998.in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998...the percentage of...is sightly larger/smaller than that of.....the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of.....decreased year by year while...increased steadily....here is an upward trend in the number of
..(year)witnessed/saw a sharp rise in.....a has something in common with b/ the difference between a and b lies in..柱状图(Bar chart)
注意点:1)柱图主要是陈列的数据比较多,不能将所有的信息写出,只能抓住重点与关键点来写(这些点可以是最大、小值;最高、低值;差距最大最小点等等)都需要结合题目来分析,对于一些点的特征具有相似性应该采用统一合并的方法,不能每有项都列出。
2)应该根据一定的顺序来写,否则会因逻辑不合理而失分
语言点:1)一般是以比较极与最高级的句子形式出现如
Low income consumed more hamburghers than other group(=more than other /group/ on hamburghers),spending more than twice/ as much as hamburghers than FC and Pizza(both about 40%)
High income favoured pizza,spenting $%,followed by FC at $%,then hamburgher at $%.High income appear to less than other /group/ on hamburghers,pizza remain their most popular fast-food, followed by FC.In 1975,among 3 of the world's largest cities, San Paulo had the highest
population(about 0.5 billion),and......is the second highest(about.....)......had the lowest population(about....).As a result in 1990,the number of....appears the largest population, closely followed by...,then.......at......The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in 3 countries between 1930-1960 in great Britain, the numbers in prison has increased from....in 1930 to....in 1940,apart from in 1950 when the numbers in prison fell by....On the other hand , New Zealand and Australia are the only two countries in which the numbers in prison remain steady from 1930-1960,although there have been slightly fluctuations in this trend.In the period 1975to 1990,all cities showed a growth, Tokyo and Newyork had by far the largest increase(about.....).san Paulo had the smallest growth(about...)There were no figures given for male part-time workers.In unemployed group, men enjoyed more leisure time---over 80%,compared with 40% for women(同一群体的比较), markedly more than women in retired group(不同群体的比较).表格/统计图(Table chart)
注意点:1)同柱状一样对数据间的变化与特殊显著数据的描写要求很高
2)选择好顺序
流程图(Flow Chart)
注意点:1)与物体、地图的描述一样,保持相同的作题原则
2)一定要按照顺序来说明
3)明确图片上要求说明的内容是什么,不要随意编造