第一篇:金融会计专业PS个人陈述
金融会计专业PS个人陈述(financial accounting)Since I was just a kid, I have shown a great admiration to those who carved out from scratch because I think that is the life I expected for with vigor and challenge.However, many of them failed at last mainly because of the financial accounting.It is very difficult for a company to change the resource into money without the professional financial management and an abundant financial professional knowledge.As the “batch product of the school”, I desire to become the “class A product” with abundant professional knowledge and good quality after two years study in the campus.Although I knew that the “investment risk” was ineluctable, I believe the future investment yield will be huge in the future.On the choice of investment project, I certainly chose my favorite accounting in he financial field and sincerely hope that the further study can presented me with a solid foundation and full preparations for the future work in the company financing.Cherishing this interest, I came into the University of International Business and Economics, where I learnt many subjects with the related English books such as “Theory and Application”(James L.Farrell, Jr.), “Investments”(ZviBodie), “Corporate Finance”(Ross)and “Options, futures, and other derivatives”(John Hull).Through years of study in college, I realized that the various economic actions of a company are just like the apparatus of a human body while the financial management works like the blood, which guarantees the normal working of the apparatus.Therefore, I became very interested in this field because of its importance in the society.【成绩好】Pocketing this hot enthusiasm and taking advantage of my insistent efforts, I got the high scores in many subjects such as the financial accounting, financial management and economics etc.which ranked me into the top line in our class.Furthermore, I enjoyed an excellent score both in mathematics and English, which provided me a solid foundation to the financial and accounting work in the future.Through my study, I realized that the finance and accounting are the comprehensive subjects, which embrace many related subjects like mathematics and English.Therefore, in order to get an embedded
understanding in this field, I must improve my comprehensive ability.【实践】Meanwhile, I knew that both the finance and accounting are the practical subjects coming from the practice instead of the textbooks.So I never stopped applying what I have learnt into practice.Thanks to my insistent efforts and clinging spirit, I was fortunate to get the opportunity to practise in the Liaoning Sub-branch Bank of Bank of China with an aim at cognizing the main work of the bank accountants and the related business flows of the bank through the practical operations.However, it was very difficult for me to complete my practical study because the Electronic Interbank System was widely adopted in the modern banks.Facing this difficulty, I looked up many books and related files such as “Accounting of Financial Corporation” and the magazine named “Study on the Liaoning Rural Finance”.In these books and magazines, I finally got the clear cognition of the difference between the bank accounting and the corporation accounting.However, they shared one essence with the same accounting factors, the basic preconditions and general principles.Therefore, I believe that the understanding of the work of the bank account is very helpful for my future work no matter what kind of accounting I get involved in because of the close associations between the corporations and bank.【称赞表扬】My sweats finally rewarded me with the high praise of my colleagues and the leaders of the bank and completed my practice perfectly and successfully.Therefore, I was known as the independent girl with strong ability, clinging spirit and creative ideas.Besides, I have participated in many academic activities like the Nobel Laureates Beijing Forum, in which I got the opportunity to contact with
many famous professors and experts in this field.【在美国学习】Meanwhile, through the study and practice these years, I realized that China is still far behind the advanced countries in the world in this field.So I decided to further my study in the United States, the leading university in this field.Through my study there, I planned to make my own achievements in this field.After a careful consideration and deep attracted by your nutritious academic atmosphere and many famous teachers and professors, I finally chose your esteemed university to achieve my dream in the future.Therefore, I would be very appreciated with your consideration of my application.
第二篇:个人陈述(PS)写作要点
英国留学申请之个人陈述写作最全教程
一、英国留学个人陈述(PS)的主旨
个人陈述PS在英国留学申请中之所以重要是因为很多英国大学无需面试申请人,所以他们唯一认识你的地方就是网上申请表格。大部分表格涵盖了你的个人信息,包括大学感兴趣的你的学术/语言成绩、推荐信以及PS(留学个人陈述)。
PS(留学个人陈述)是这些材料当中唯一一个由你来控制的,所以这个是你给大学招生办留下一个良好印象的机会,这个印象是用分数无法反映出来的。尤其是当你申请的学校竞争特别激烈,所有的申请者都有很好的成绩的时候,PS就是唯一一种能凸显你的与众不同的材料,所以同志们,一定要尽可能地把PS做到尽善尽美。
大学招生办和课程老师在看你的PS的时候,他们通常会问以下两个问题:
1、我们是否想要这个学生来学习这门课程?
2、我们是否想要这个学生来我们的学校学习?
这两个问题可以分解为以下几个小问题来解答:
1)这个学生是否适合他/她所申请的课程?
2)这个学生是否具备他/她所申请的课程需要的素质?
3)这个学生是否有足够的毅力、勤奋的品格以及不会轻易辍学?
4)这个学生是否会全力以赴地达到这门课程所要求的各项能力?
5)这个学生是否能在高压底下工作?
6)这个学生是否能很快得调整好自己融入到大学的新环境?
7)他们的交际能力如何?
8)他们是否热爱这个课程并且做了仔细的研究
9)他们对课程是否有真正的兴趣并且渴望去做更深入的学习?
这些问题就是需要你在PS当中去表述和解答,只不过你不能只是说YES和NO,你需要有足够的事实依据去证明你的说法,让你的观点言之有物。不过,招生办的老师们毕竟也是平凡人,他们有可能需要阅读成百上千的PS,所以即便你觉得已经对上述问题回答的很好了你还有可能被不幸地拒绝。
还有其他的一些技巧可以让你的PS脱颖而出给老师们留下深刻印象,但要记住老师们也都因人而异他们对于申请者的期望也都不完全相同,怎么把握当中玄机就看童鞋们自己拿捏了。
二、标注自己的亮点
现在你还不需要开始思考文章框架和行文结构,你只需要思考一些关于你的成长经历并做一些记录。但也不是泛泛地记录,最好的方式是使用一系列的标题并在该标题之下写一些与之相关的亮点,以下是可供你思考的主题:(以下关乎主体写作部分,就不做中文翻译,用英文思考有助于PS写作)
What you want to study at university and why?
Specific aspects of the courses that interest you
Examples of coursework you have completed
Practical work you have enjoyed
Things you have read related to the subject area
Work experience or voluntary work in this area
Conferences you have attended
Personal experiences which lead to the decision to take this subject
Where you hope a degree in this subject will lead
Experiences that show you are a reliable and responsible person
Part-time job
Business enterprise
Community and charity work
Sixth form committee
Helping out at school events and open days
Young Enterprise, World Challenge, Duke of Edinburgh award, Asdan Award Debating societies and what you've gained from these experiences.Your interests and skills
What you like to do in your free time
Sport and leisure activities
Subjects you study which are not examined
Musical instrument which you play
Languages which you speak
Prizes you have won or positions achieved in your interests
Gap year(这个主要针对local学生,英国当地的孩子会在大学毕业之后有个gap year,专门去环游世界体验人生)Why you're taking a Gap year(if you are)
Why you want to take a gap year
What you plan to do
How this may relate to your course
这样的记录下来,你就会有一系列的关于你自己的亮点,这些素材在你的PS写作当中都非常有价值。
上面清单提到的要点如果你都还没有素材也不要担心,只要仔细去思考你做过的哪些事情可以很好地表现你的优秀品质。最重要的是你需要有一个明确的足够有说服力的理由去申请课程,就算那些理由现在听起来有些愚蠢。
所有的招生办老师都希望招收那些对自己申请的课程有足够的热情和激情的学生,只要热火火得证明你确实是就可以!
如果你选择这门课程仅仅是因为你没有其他更好的选择了,那你就要仔细考虑换一门你更喜欢的专业。
现在咱们有一些写作的思路了,几乎可以开始考虑怎么把它们写进PS中了。
三、你和你申请的课程
你可以有很惊人的学分、有很牛的课外活动,而且有很高尚的人格,但如果招生老师认为你与该课程不相符,你同样会遭受拒绝。
还好刚刚的一些记录已经给了你很清晰的思路---关于怎么去证明你想要去学习这个课程。
如果没有第二步的准备你至少也要确定你的确想要学习这个课程,ps写作是个浩大的工程,你也不想写到最后忽然决定你想学习别的课程,所以在你更进一步写作之前一定要确定你选好了一个适合你的专业。
记住不要为了选专业而选专业,你需要对该课程所在的领域有一定的兴趣并且有一个大致的了解,知道自己为什么要选择这个课程,同时把你了解的情况表述出来去说服招生办老师们。
仔细地思考一下为什么这个课程会吸引你,并且尽可能多地记录下这些理由。当然在草稿当中你只能写出一点点也没有关系,之后正式写作你可以再调整,关键的是你需要找出自己希望学习本课程的主要理由。
四、你的个人陈述(PS)原则是什么?
这里可以给大家罗列一些要点给你指导参考:
1、一定不要表现得自命不凡
2、尽量不要以“I”开头展开句子描述
3、尽量用有趣的词组做开头和结尾
4、尽量不要引用报纸杂志书籍上的名言警句,感觉像是表示你多么地饱读经书然后故意秀出来一样。
5、一定不要撒谎,要真实诚恳。
6、不要尝试在ps里面故作滑稽开玩笑
7、不要谈与你的申请无关的兴趣爱好
8、不要用生僻词汇
9、不要重复那些在大学申请表格上就有的内容
10、不要提及任何政治立场
这些原则可以让你知道该把焦点放在哪些事情上,不至于使你在看过大量范文之后迷失了自己。当然如果你本人机智幽默,语言诙谐的话也不反对你在ps里巧妙地表现自己的这个风格。
五、PS的语言表述
在英国留学PS写作过程中,很多人都会先阅读优秀的PS范文。而在PS范文阅读过程中,你可能会找到一些你喜欢的语言表述方式。首先记住,千万不要简单地复制粘贴,复制范文就是抄袭,如果招生办老师发现了会马上当掉你!(老外对中国学生的造假行为是非常敏感的)
就算有些句子是出自于你自己的深刻领会也千万不要直接拷贝,你可以在他的句子之上适当改造,使之成为适合你的素材。
你需要去用些漂亮的表达去让你看起来对专业充满热情以及显得你是个很有趣的人。
你可以通过看ps范文以及大学相关的课程申请要求来找到适合你的表达方式。
大学的申请要求(University prospectuses)描述是非常重要的需要去关注的地方,你上学校网站找到你要申请的课程,看看它的课程描述,同时比照一下你自己是否对其所提出的要求吻合,然后列下一些单词和句子的清单,类似于这个:
to gain greater understanding of the world around you.sends a signal to prospective employers and graduate schools
students of economics become problem-solvers.the fact is economics affects our daily lives.a challenging and diverse discipline
develops analytical skills, quantative skills, research skills
It's interesting and relevant
千万不要直接复制你看到的句子,把它们改造一下用你自己的语言运用到你的ps当中去。
六、PS的结构
现在可以考试考虑PS的文章结构了。
一种办法就是将你前面做过的纪录分为几个类别然后每一个类别写作一段,比如:
第1段:专业认识,以及其中吸引你的部分,谈谈为什么。
第2段:在与这个专业相关的领域上我都做了什么。(在你的学校申请表格当中还没有提到的)
第3-4段:在校时期的工作经历。
第5段:我的业余爱好以及个人能力。
第6段:我期望上贵校的决心及全文总结。
再次声明,这个仅仅是一个参考,怎么写作还是要取决于你自己。
七、PS的正式写作
个人陈述的重要性已经人人皆知,在开始正式写作PS前,有些注意事项需要铭记于心。
记住ps的目的---你需要向招生办老师们展示为什么他们要在你申请的课程以及这个学校录取你。
除了写作内容以外,语言表达风格同样会被作为判断标准。
记住你只有非常有限的字数长度,太长了容易让人疲倦,太短了如果你觉得难以再扩展的话也不用担心,短小精悍的ps总归是要比又长又臭的ps讨喜的。
写作态度上尽量积极乐观,如果有些事情是让你都苦恼的就尽量用一种巧妙的方式去表达。
在你写作之前,还要注意去看看学校网站上是否有对ps的相关要求,这些要求都是招生办老师们写的一定可以在如何写作上给你打开思路。
现在你可以开始动笔了,每一个点的描述都说说你做了什么,解释你为什么这样做,同时从中又收获了什么,在这样的写作框架中你的ps就变得充实、有趣以及有价值!
比如像这样:I currently have a part time job and this has taught me much about teamwork, responsibility and time management in the workplace.八、写作完了之后干什么?
个人陈述的重要性已经人人皆知,在开始正式写作PS前,有些注意事项需要铭记于心。
记住ps的目的---你需要向招生办老师们展示为什么他们要在你申请的课程以及这个学校录取你。
除了写作内容以外,语言表达风格同样会被作为判断标准。
记住你只有非常有限的字数长度,太长了容易让人疲倦,太短了如果你觉得难以再扩展的话也不用担心,短小精悍的ps总归是要比又长又臭的ps讨喜的。
写作态度上尽量积极乐观,如果有些事情是让你都苦恼的就尽量用一种巧妙的方式去表达。
在你写作之前,还要注意去看看学校网站上是否有对ps的相关要求,这些要求都是招生办老师们写的一定可以在如何写作上给你打开思路。
现在你可以开始动笔了,每一个点的描述都说说你做了什么,解释你为什么这样做,同时从中又收获了什么,在这样的写作框架中你的ps就变得充实、有趣以及有价值!
比如像这样:I currently have a part time job and this has taught me much about teamwork, responsibility and time management in the workplace 写作完了之后干什么?
首先仔细阅读你的写作成品并且尝试换成别人的角度来看你的ps。看看它是否行文通畅易于阅读?所描述的内容是否完全符合真实的你?如果你觉得自己阅读的话容易沉醉其中的话最好找其他人去帮你看。
接下来,请别人帮你看,主要是你的家人、朋友、老师或者其他你觉得可以提出建设性意见的人。他们会帮你审阅里面的拼写或者语法错误,同时也会提醒你遗漏的部分。
再来,可以给你的学校领导或者职业咨询师看,这些人看过很多ps,他们知道怎么去评判。
另外就是,你可以放到网上让网友帮你参考,不过如果放在网上所有人都能看到的话,可能会让别人偷了你的idea。
在给完一圈别人审阅之后,你的原作可能会有大量的修改,在做这些修改之前,最好原作版本也保存备份。不断修改、给人评判、再修改,一般一份ps完成下来,都是要10-20次的修改,所谓磨刀不误砍柴工!
提醒一下大家,现在基本都是网上申请,最终完成的ps版本存档之后,注意到网上提交时仔细检查各个提交操作是否没有疏漏,注意不要有多余的操作不小心让你的ps提交时候清空了。
九、英国留学个人陈述(PS)常见问题解答
Q1: PS是否有字数限制?
A1:每个学校的要求可能会有不同,这个要根据学校的要求来改,通常前期写好的PS稿子都是要再做增加或删减的,至少要在里面体现为什么要申请这所学校的原因。
一般来说500到800字数的文章已经很理想了。
Q2:什么时候开始写合适?
A2:请仔细阅读本帖教程一至九。
Q3:招生办老师们都在寻找怎样的学生? A3:请仔细阅读本帖第二条,另外一定要仔细看学校网站对专业的招生要求,那里都会有非常仔细的描述。
Q4:如果我要申请双学位怎么办?
A4:你有两种选择可以让你的PS去申请双学位,一种选择是你分别针对两门课程写两封PS,一种是只写一封PS但只提尼觉得最重要的那个专业不提另外一个。
第二种方式有个优势就是你可以在说明课程共有的属性时,同时申请两个双学位。
如果你决定这么做你首先必须确保自己有足够的能力去证明你同时也适合另一个专业。
Q5:如果我要申请两个不同的专业怎么办?
A5:一封PS来申请两门不同的专业是很难的。
如果这两个专业很相似,比如数学和统计、会计和商科你就可以只写一封general一些的PS去分别申请两门专业。
如果两门专业是完全不相关的,用一封PS申请就是完全不可能的了。取而代之地,你需要选择一封PS能够让你最大程度并录取的。
比如说,如果你申请了四个不同学校的同一门课程,以及另外两个学校的另外一个课程,你可能只需要写一封你最想要申请的那门专业的PS,其他两个学校的那门课程你甚至都可以完全不要去想,或者最好申请其他那两个学校的同类型的课程。同时你还需要仔细看清楚你所申请的学校的入学成绩标准,看看自己是否符合才做决定。
如果你还想申请两个不同学校的三门完全不同的课程,那就奉劝你最好不要这么做,就算你这么做了,你最后还只是学习一门课程,因此尽量缩小你的选择范围在类似的课程上是比较明智的做法。
最后的总结
在与申请课程相关的事情上,写出最独特的自己!
仔细思考自己的特点有哪些?
最后记住这是你的个人陈述,你可以有技巧地畅所欲言。
指导只是帮助你打开思路,千万不要盲从,遵循内心的声音写出真实的自我才是PS绝佳的取胜之道!
第三篇:生物专业个人陈述PS(本站推荐)
Statement of Purpose Jing Li(My application ID: 1075276;UT EID: jl49345)For Graduate Program of Cell and Molecular Biology, the University of Texas at Austin As I sat in an image processing room of my lab, clicking away at the in situ hybridization(ISH)figures in front of me, I glanced at the mouse embryo sections one by one.They displayed the process of mice development, the expression pattern of Zfp521, Aqp1, AB063319, etc.in mouse embryos, and the chronological appearance of organs and tissues respectively.Was it possible that the formation of complex mammalian structures, thousands of years of evolution and the miraculous appearance of life had been encrypted into these seemingly simple images? I had to wonder: why does the development of embryos need to go through such a complex process,rather than discarding previous forms and directly developing mammalian characteristics?
“Biology,” I answered instinctively when asked to choose my major.I was intrigued by biological phenomena as a child, and the seemingly mystical precision of it filled me with questions.Why do pandas and rabbits, similar as juveniles, grow into two very different organisms? Why are our visual experiences distinctly different from those of other organisms? Why can people talk, while orangutans, with similar anatomical configurations, can not? Being unsatisfied with any answer my parents could offer, I constantly sought relevant information from other resources.When the time came, I chose Biotechnology as my major in college without hesitation.There is a theory that the process of mammalian development in utero replays evolutionary history: from a germ cell(like a monad), to germ layers(like coelenterate), to the appearance and disappearance of the branchial arch and tail(like in fish and amphibians), until the birth of a mammal with almost all mature organs and tissues.I wondered, why can’t mammalian traits be directly developed? Propelled by this question, I contacted one of my course instructors my freshman year, expressing the desire to enter the development lab and study this problem more actively.This instructor recommended I consult some reference books as preparation before conducting experiments independently.After more than a year of studying basic principles of experimentation in China and one year in South Korea working as an exchange student, I immediately went to the office of my current mentor, Prof.Wu.After a long talk, I successfully became one of the members of the laboratory of development at the Harbin Institute of Technology(HIT).With professional knowledge and experimental skills acquired during the previous two years, I adapted to the specific experimental rules of the laboratory quickly.My drive and commitment to excellence proved me worthy of the position.After only two weeks, I was granted permission to start my own project under the instruction of Prof.Wu: the identification of a novel imprinted gene and its expression analysis in mouse embryos.Through the collaboration between my lab and a bioinformatics program at Harbin Medical University,I found several genes that were possible to be imprinted, working towards identifying a novel imprinted gene.During the process of designing my project, I read a great deal of papers downloaded from PubMed and consulted Molecular Cloning(the third edition, J.Sambrook, D.W.Russel)and Manipulating the Mouse Embryo(the third edition, Andras Nagy, Marina Gertsenstein, Kristina Vintersten, Richard Behringer).With the above preparation and painstaking calculation of experimental period, I selected the most suitable and efficient contents as follows.The main sections of my project include 1)identification of a specific gene’s imprinting status in seven organs(brain, tongue, heart, lung, liver, kidney and placenta)by sequencing directly, 2)performance of ISH on the slides of mouse embryos and Statement of Purpose Jing Li(My application ID: 1075276;UT EID: jl49345)For Graduate Program of Cell and Molecular Biology, the University of Texas at Austin placentas at E15.5, 3)performance of quantitative real-time RT-PCR(QRT-PCR)of this gene in seven organs, and 4)analysis of possibly influential mechanisms of the imprinting such as DNA methylation or histone modification.If needed, Northern Blotting would be performed in order to confirm the number of transcripts.As of now, I have completed all my experiments and am revising my paper to explain my findings, which I plan to publish in the near future.My operative skills and satisfactory results, as well as my commitment to meticulous scientific research have earned me the recognition of my research mentor, Prof.Wu.Last semester, I got a chance to be the teaching assistant for “Identification of Imprinted Gene and Relative Function Analysis”, a class designed for all students including seniors, and was responsible for overseeing the student experiments.Being only a junior, I was honored by such recognition and opportunity to accept this task.During class, I showed the method of identifying another possibly imprinted gene using a specific restriction enzyme.It also allowed me chances to utilize my communicative abilities and social skills gained from extracurricular activities, such as hosting lectures held by my union or being a teaching assistant for Michigan State University(MSU)Chinese Summer School at HIT.Aside from my project work, my stellar academic record at HIT conveyed my ability to excel in the biological sciences, and qualified me to attend a summer school of life science in University of Science and Technology of China(USTC)on full scholarship.I experienced advanced methodology from the professors of USTC and had the opportunity to use advanced technology, such as MRI and micromanipulation.The graduate students' knowledge and skills impressed me greatly and gave me the drive to seek a Ph.D.degree.Graduate school will enable me to develop new research skills and the solid academic background that I need to become a successful researcher.A Ph.D.program in Cell and Molecular Biology will not only cultivate and refine my interest in scientific research, but also equip me to deal with the challenges of Ph.D.programs with experimental operations in genetic, biochemistry, molecular and cellular biology, etc.I believe that I have all the necessary assets needed to be a good scientist;as far as my life’s priorities are concerned, devotion to mastery of the biological sciences is second to none.As for the future, I hope to work in academia as a researcher.I believe the University of Texas at Austin is the institution best capable of helping me reach this goal because it offers a superb method of study, stressing the importance of understanding and employing different modalities of treatment.I have interest in the study of epigenetics and hope to gain a greater understanding of such topics through future doctorate studies.I plan to specialize in epigenetic regulation including DNA methylation, histone modification and their effects on gene expression.I also recognize the value of exploring a variety of other orientations in biology, such as non-coding microRNA regulation in development, environmentally-induced epigenetic change, stem cell biology, etc.As the University of Texas at Austin also allows students to complete research rotations in at least three different faculty laboratories in their first year, it offers me several opportunities from which to choose, making the University of Texas at Austin an even more ideal school for me.
第四篇:美国大学会计专业个人陈述
美国大学会计专业个人陈述范文
在选择美国大学专业的时候,很多计划去美国读研究生的人都会选择会计专业,对于准备申请会计硕士的人来说,如何进行文书写作很重要,其中如何写好个人陈述更是重中之重,下面就来看看申请美国大学会计专业研究生的个人陈述范文是如何写的。
Personal Statement
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I always believe that the opportunities only dawned on those with full preparations.On Nov.17 this year, I participated in the selective trial of the registered accountants held by China Registered Accountant Association, in which I ranked to the top in the examinations and will be sent to practise in the big international accounting company in foreign country.It is a very competitive trial with over 150 excellent students majoring in accounting as the participators, including those in xxx University and xxx University.When my friend asked me how I prepared for this contest and got such a good score, I told them that the only thing I did was to keep a smooth heart and full confidence towards the precipitate contest.Actually, for years, I have never stopped making preparations by learning carefully and diligently for the coming of the contest.Two years ago when I first entered our university, I was selected into the best class in our school for my outstanding score.This class consists of 150 excellent students out of 3000 freshmen that year with the best professors(Including the president of the school, department dean and the doyen professors on every subject)teaching us.Therefore, my view was largely broadened in the nutritious studying atmosphere, where I was deeply influenced by their researching experience and personal charms as well as learning abundant professional knowledge and cultivating my unique ideas.Besides, many of my learning habits and thinking styles came from the study there.Meanwhile however, I also shouldered heavy pressure because we must be the best in such a class under the attention of all the teachers and students in the school.Therefore, I tried to do everything perfectly without missing any small problem.At the end of last year, I happened to find the suggestion collection paper for the “Asset Decrease Accounting Standard” on the website, which was quite different from what I learnt in books.Cherishing the aroused interest, I spent over one month in learning this standard carefully by reading large amount of files and discussing with my teacher for the cognition of the developing process, problems and influence to the registered companies of the Asset Decrease Calculation.Finally, I published my article on the core magazine of “Finance and Accounting”.Besides, I am a girl who liked challenges.On completing my study in the three years, I accepted many challenges without any hesitation.I could get much pleasure when racing with time because I believe that the valuable use of every minute means the success.Therefore, I was very excited to be able to enter the graduate school one year earlier than other students in class taking advantage of my insistent efforts to learn twice as much knowledge as them.Meanwhile, I am very proud that I got the first scholarship in my sophomore year for my excellent score.In spite of the limited spare time with 5-6 hours on my daily courses, I actively found many opportunities to do the extracurricular work.For example, I asked my teacher for assisting him with his subject and helping him to summarize the files because I am always trying to form my own points by summarizing the knowledge I learnt.I think that study is an active action, which required me to find some opportunities to improve myself independently.Taking advantage of my excellent behavior, I was finally admitted by the professors and participated in the xxx Social and Scientific Layout Project: “Research on the Accounting Information Transmission Mechanism
based on the Company Management” by Professor xxx, in which I was mainly responsible for the Comparison of the Statistics Information Transmission Mechanism among the main countries in the world as the assistant of Professor xx.Through the collection and summarization of the hundreds of files, I further improved reading ability from over ten pages of the Chinese files per hour at the beginning to large amount of English files as well as picking up some useful information per hour.Therefore, my abilities in the information seeking and estimation were largely improved.My campus life is rich and colorful.As the vice president of the Students’Union, who was mainly responsible for the work of Science and Technology Association, I must organize some meaningful extracurricular activities for students with the other members of the Students’ Union like the debates and speech contests etc.In this process, my leadership, organizing and team managing abilities were largely improved.In addition, I was also involved in the work of External Relations Department, which was very difficult and complicated because this department is just similar to the Public Relation Department in the company.It was established mainly to connect with the leaders of the corporations for the fund to our campus activities.It was just the particular work in this department that presented me with a strong communicating ability.Generally, I think that my participation and organization of these extracurricular activities has improved my comprehensive ability, which is very helpful for my future study.Now, my undergraduate study is coming to the end.However, I found that I still have much knowledge to learn as well as further improving my comprehensive ability.Nowadays, the existing professional accounting knowledge system in China is still far behind that in some developed countries, so Chinese government is adopting chain of reforms on the accounting standard in order to meet the international accounting standards.Therefore, I want to further my study on the accounting theories and principles in America, the leading country in this field with a completed economic and accounting system.Additionally, your country has the most advanced educational system in the world, especially combination of the lecture case study with the project researches provided by your esteemed university as the teaching style.Furthermore, in my undergraduate study, we used many English textbooks from the United States because the economic management in your country is the example to the students all around the world.Moreover, I was deeply attracted by the most seasoned professors and many excellent students from all over the world in your esteemed university, where I can broaden my international view I believe.If I am admitted, I believe that my learning, researching, communicating abilities and creativity will be further improved.As a famous Chinese saying goes, “Life is just like climbing up a high peak, when you scale up that peak, you will be amazed to find a more beautiful landscape is appearing in front of you.” So is my study.The success and honor had become the good memories and I must continue my pursuit to the next destination.通过上面对申请美国大学会计专业研究生的个人陈述范文分享,相信对于很多计划去美国读研究生的人来说,可以参照上面的范文来进行文书写作。
第五篇:说说个人陈述(PS)那点事儿[定稿]
刚刚在校内和新浪微博发了一个状态:“每年到了留学申请的时候,总有人让我给看PS,而且总说“你就花5分钟看看给个评价就行”。殊不知,PS这种东西,是不能让一个不了解你的人看的,否则,给出任何的评价都是不负责任的。要想得到满意的评价和合理的建议,首先得让看的人了解你,这又岂是5分钟可以搞定的 呢?”没想到大家的回复超出了我的预期,最让我没有想到的是,居然有很多人给出“教授也不了解申请者,就不能做判断了么?”这样的反对意见。这让我很吃 惊,同时也更加理解了GRE作文考试中为什么大多数人的ARGUMENT分数很低。这个问题实际上很好解释,“教授”和“修改ps的人”是两个目的完全不 同的主体,教授通过PS来客观了解一个申请者,那么,教授得到的信息完全是PS中所传递出来的,教授仅仅是根据这个信息做出一个判断而已。而修改ps的 人,需要做的是给申请者提供有效的建议,让他能在ps中更好地传递出信息,从而让读者(也就是教授)能更好地了解申请者,这就要求修改ps的人必须要相当 了解申请者,才能告诉他如何写作是更加有效的。打个比方来说,帮忙修改情书的人和被追求的对象是完全不同的,看通缉犯画像的人和帮助警察修改画像的目击证 人也是完全不同的。
我今年帮两个朋友修改过PS,当然,申请结果现在还不知道,但是我大概统计了一下,平均我和每一个人面谈了3次,充分了解了他们的各种背景以后才开始看他 们的PS,结果是两个人的PS都重写了2-3次,才达到“可修改”的状态。可以说,干这活儿要是不想糊弄人的话,是极其劳神费力的,如果不是像专业文书写 作机构或者咨询公司这样为了赚钱,或者像我这样实在推脱不掉地给朋友义务帮忙的话。仔细想了想,实际上写PS也没有那么困难,我就简单地写一些我个人的感 受和建议好了。
首先,写ps一定不能上来就动手写,想到什么写什么,这样写出来的基本是浮云。每个人在写ps之前,先要搞清楚自己到底有哪些事儿可写,毕竟,大学四年所 做的事情,不是简单回忆就能出来的。我的建议是,先用列表把大学四年干过的,你能回忆起来的,牛逼或不牛逼的各种事情罗列出来,并且简单分类(学习、科 研、社会工作、实习、情感、其他)。这里的罗列可以不用特别具体,写清楚是什么时间,做了什么事儿,跟谁有关,能体现自己的什么特性就可以了。比如:
(1)2007年,模拟电路设计实验,想了一个特别的设计思路,做了一个和同学都不一样的电路板,失败了,跟张老师讨论,改进,成功了。体现了我的创新精神。
(2)2008年,在中关村卖电脑,早出晚归,赚钱,请同学喝酒,high了,领导林先生表扬我吃苦耐劳。
事情不论大小,能回忆起来的都写上,每件事情分类后再写上要表现的自己的优点,比如创新精神、团队精神、领导力、坚韧不拔等等。然后,从里面选出一些(数量根据自己的情况来定)作为候选素材。
第二步,用中文或者英文(取决于你的英文表达水平)勾勒PS的提纲,确定文章的结构。这里我建议大家不要去一味模仿网上所谓的“流行结构”,比如一开始讲 个故事,然
后开始引入内容等等,一定要根据自己的实际情况来决定如何搭建自己的ps结构。总的原则是:一定要在2页A4纸的范围内,把自己的特点突出出 来,并且,最好有一个渐进的过程,而在每一个渐进过程中,都有一些具体的故事来表达自己的某一些特征。在设计结构的时候,需要考虑到一些可能会在推荐信中 被放大的事实,这些事实最终会和推荐信相互呼应。比如,ps中写了在某次课程设计中,自己和老师之间的一些交流,自己做了什么事儿。那么,推荐信就可以找 这个老师来写,其中就可以从老师的角度来对你进行肯定。
第三步,把提纲进行反复修改,直到重点已经在结构中突出,并且自己很清楚地知道每个部分要反映自己的什么特点,以及和推荐信的呼应如何实现。这个时候,才 可以开始动手写ps。如果英文水平不够好,可以先写中文,再翻译成英文。在写作的时候需要注意的问题是:尽量减少对自己评价性的文字,比如“我觉得我在这 件事情中表现得非常勇猛”之类的,因为所有的评价都应该交给读者去做,而自己需要做的,仅仅是把故事讲清楚就行了,比如“我在某天晚上,一人徒手干掉了4 个歹徒。”读者可以通过文字直接得出“勇猛”的评价。
最后,把文章交给一个非常了解你的朋友,或者是家人来读,让他们发表自己的看法。如果他们最后的看法是:“这是你么?”那说明你吹的有点过。如果他们看完 了说:”嗯,这是你。写的挺真实的。”这说明你写的不够吸引人。如果看完了说:“靠,这是你么?嗯,还真是你。”恭喜你,你的ps可以用了。你自己看完了 觉得不是自己,别人看完了觉得是你,这是ps的最佳状态。至于英文的表达,没有必要追求“炫”,只要写清楚,让别人读起来没有障碍就好了。如果有条件,可 以在内容修改确定以后找一些英文写作水平比较好的人(无论中国人还是外国人都行)来给你做一些简单的修改。
基于以上的一些简单建议,我想给出这么几点附加的信息:
(1)不要依赖任何中介机构帮你写ps,他们真的做不到,而且做的不会好。优秀的中介或教育咨询机构应该是教会你如何写ps,然后不断地指导你把ps修改到最佳的状态。
(2)不要找一个不了解你的人给你修改ps,他们真的做不到。一个不了解你的人看过以后,给出的任何建议都可能是错的,因为他不了解你。除非,你先跟他聊上几次,把你的情况说清楚,当然,前提是他有时间。
(3)ps的内容永远比文字表达重要,不要认为native speaker就可以帮你搞定ps
(4)有一些学校的ps是有具体要求的,一定要看清楚再写。
(5)尽量少看别人写的ps,因为你不是他,不需要在内容上“求同”。
(6)ps不是万能的,但是没有ps是万万不能的。