第一篇：英语四级作文得高分技巧及分析
四级作文高分策略 一、四级作文亲密接触 1． 评分：作文部分在整个四级卷面（满分为 100 分）中占 15
分。国家教委明确规定，从 1997 年 6 月起，四级考试中，如果 学生作文得零分，那么即使前面得了满分（即 85 分），其总成 绩仍将视为不及格。作文不够 6 分则实行倒扣分。2． 文体：纵观历年来的考题，我们不难发现议论文占据着七成
以上的比例，近几年还常常是以较为实用的形式出现，如书信、演讲稿、导游解说词或图表分析的形式出现。例如，2004 年 6 月 19 日大学英语四级作文题目为 A brief introduction to a tourist attraction；2005 年 1 月的题目为竞选学生会主席演 说；2003 年 6 月 CET 作文题目为 An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident：假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就 此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点：
1、车祸发生的时间 及地点；
2、你所见到的车祸情况；
3、你对车祸原因的分析。2001 年 6 月题目为 A Letter to a Schoolmate, 提纲： 对来
1、访的同学表示欢迎；
2、提出对度假安排的建议；
3、提醒应注意 的事项； 2002 年 1 月题目要求给校长写一信，就食堂的状况写一 信。从以上今年的出题趋势可以看出，四级作文对应用文的格式 还没有更严格的要求，但对实际生活中的应用能力，已经提出了 要求。很显然，现在的四、六级考试作文有些向考研英语的作文
考查方式转化。也就是说，四、六级作文也开始注重考生观察问 题、分析问题和解决问题的能力，当然还有用英语思维的能力。值得注意的是，但是从近些年看，四级作文往往不是单一的议 论文体裁，而是几种体裁的杂合体。例如： １.做合格大学生的必要性 ２.做合格大学生的必备条件（可以从德智体方面谈）３.我计划这样做 很多人说这种类型的作文是议论文。这是片面的，因为，第一段要求写“„„必要 性”，这说明本段体裁是议论文；
第二段要求写“„„必备条件”，这说明本段要求写说明文；儿 地三段要求写“„„这样做”，这说明本段要求写描述文。所以 在大多数情形下，四级作文是三种体裁的杂合体。仅仅学会写议论文是不够的，近两年四级考试加大了应用文和记叙 文的考查力度，这就要求考生在熟悉议论文的基础之上加强应用文和 记叙文的训练。应用文主要考写信，考生必须明确写信的基本格式以 及写信的流程： 1.尊敬语气先开头； 2.开门见山说意图； 3.咨询建议一二三； 4.感谢客气不可少。
常用的客套话必须熟记： 1.It is with the greatest pleasure that I write th is letter to„ 2.We will be very glad if you can take our suggest ion into consideration.3． 命题形式：接下来谈论一下作文。过去十几年四级短文写作
也是有一定的变化的。自 1986 年实行四级英语统考以来，出现 过的作文题目主要可以分为以下几类：提纲式作文、段首名作文 和图表作文。下面对此作简要的分析。★ 提纲式作文：即给出汉语概要，并要求的据此写出不少于 12 0 词不达意的作文。这种类型的作文在 90 年代大约占 40%左右。这类作文相对而言简单一些。因为在审题材时，如果只有题目，考生受到的限制少，头绪太多，结果可能文章缺少统一性。提纲 式作文一般写成 3 段式，可分为比较类、对比类、驳论类、立论 类和解释说明类。
1、比较类：19992 年 1 月作文题目是：Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports.所给的 outline 是
1、参加体育运动有许多 好处。2.但也有副作用。3。你的体会。
2、对比类：1995 年 1 月作文题目是：Can Money Buy Happine ss? 所给的 outline 是：1 有人认为金钱是幸福之本（source o f happiness）。2 也有人认金钱是万恶之源..(root of all ev
il).3。我的看法。
3、驳论类：和对比类作文有相似之处，但着重点是对一个错误 观点的批驳。如 1998 年 6 月的作文题目：Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? 所给的 outline 是：1 有些人认为某 些数字会带来好运。2 我认为数字和运气无关。
4、立论类：1994 年 1 月作文的题目是：The World Is Gettin g Smaller and Smaller.所给的 outline 是： 现代化的交通 1。工具越来越发达。2。人与人之间的交往越来越频繁。3。结论。
5、解释说明类：1993 年 6 月作文的题目是：My Most Favorit e Program.所给的 outline 是：1 我最喜欢的电视节目是。2 这类节目的内容和特点。3 我喜欢它的原因。★ 段首句作文：给出每一段句子的第一句英文，然后根据段首 句进行扩写。1990 年 1 月试题的题目是：What Would Happen I f There were No Power.所给的段首句分别是：1.Ever since early this century, electricity has become an essential part of our modern life..2.If there were no electric power,.3.There fore,.★ 图表作文：1991 年 1 月、1994 年 1 月、2002 年 6 月都是图表 作文。
二、主题与逻辑
统一性(Unity)(Unity)原则 1.统一性(Unity)原则 首先，句子应具有统一性，也就是说，一个句子要表达一个明确 的意思。同样,段落也应有统一性。正如一个句子是由一系列的词语组成, 并表达一个完整的意思,一个段落是由系列的句子围绕一个中心 思想所组成的一个完整的统一体。段落的统一性指的是在一个段 落里只讨论一个主题。由于一个段落只围绕一个中心思想,所以 展开句中的各个事实、例子、理由等都必须与主题相关。比如你 的主题是有关出国深造的好处,那么就只谈其好处如果要谈坏处 的话就得另起一段。此外,段落的统一性还指的是:段落中的各个展开句都必须由主题 句中的主导思想展开。在写作中,学生有时容易犯离题的毛病。比 如在谈到出国深造的好处时,你也许会提到好处之一是培养独立性, 至于其原因,你也许会提到远离家人是一个因素,但假如你的笔墨 过多地停留在“远离家人”这一方面,那你就离题了,你的落就缺乏 统一性。所以要写好作文,必须遵守统一性原则。因此，在段落的写作过程中，段内各句都应紧扣段落的主题。对于 那些与主题无关的句子，无论多好，也要毫不犹豫地将其删去，否 则就会破坏段落的统一性。
文章中所有的句子都是为全文的中心服务的。就各段而言，其中 的每一句话都要紧紧围绕着该段的主题句进行，不能说与主题句 无关的东西。有人也将其称为统一性。请看一例：
The weather has been changeable.On Sunday we had a hig h wind that blew down some trees.Monday was so cold th at we had to turn on the heat and wear out winter coats.On Tuesday we formed a group to go roller skating.By Wednesday the weather cleared and the sun came out.Thu rsday was as hot and humid as an August day.Friday mor ning it began to rain, and it looks as if we’ have a ll cold, steady wind for a few days.这一段写“最近天气多变”，首句为主题句。扩展句叙述了星期日、星期
一、星期
三、星期四和星期五的天气情况，用以展开关键词 changeable。但星期二没有提天气，而是说当天的活动安排，偏 离了主题，打断了段落叙述的连贯性，破坏了段落逻辑意义的统 一性，应删去或改为与天气有关的话。
再如：
Sports benefit us in many respects.When taking part in
sports, we get the chance to train almost all parts of our body.There is no doubt that properly balanced phy sical activities keep us physically fit.Furthermore, s ports can enrich our life and maintain our psychologica l health.Through participation, everyone can learn tha t on the playing field he not only competes for himself but also for his team.Sports teach us about considera tion, cooperation and optimism, and how to cope with di fficulties.第一句是本段的主题句，接下来作者从体育运动对身体的好处说 了两句，第四句讲述体育运动对心理方面的益处，第五句从团队 的方面加以论述，最后一句既是论据，同时也是对前面三点的概 括。全段没有一句话脱离主题句。
连贯(coherence)(coherence)的原则 2.连贯(coherence)的原则 连贯就是指文章的段落之间、段落中各句子之间要有一定的衔 接。段落结构和句与句之间的衔接应遵照一定的顺序。段落之间的连 接也应符合逻辑。这样使文章连贯紧凑，自然流畅，层次分明，脉络清晰。段落只有在具有含义一致性的同时又具有表达的连贯
性才能充分有效地传达信息，真正实现写作目的。
内容的连贯性是表达连贯性的前提，一组互不相干的句子放在一 起，无法取得表达的连贯性；只有把一组意义紧密相关的句子有 机地组合起来，才能真正充分有效地阐述其主题思想。就上面 的例一来说，虽然它是以时间为线索将这几天串在一起，但仍让 人感觉太乱。每个句子都是以星期某一天的名子开头，太单调了。各个句子之间似乎没有什么关系，应该说是一篇连贯性较差的文 章。下面让我们对它稍加修改一下：
The weather has been changeable.On Sunday we had a hig h wind that blew down some trees.Monday was so cold th at we had to turn on the heat and wear out winter coats.And it remained gloomy the next day.To our pleasure, by Wednesday the weather cleared and the sun came out.But Thursday tuned out to be as hot and humid as an Aug ust day.Worse still, it began to rain this morning, an d it looks as if we’ll have a cold, steady wind for a few days.那么，如何使文章连贯呢？
就议论文而言，获取连贯主要有三种方法：一是使用代词或有意 地重复一些词，二是替代的使用，三是使用关联词语。代词和有意的重复可起到衔接的作用。例如在上面的例子中，在 提到星期二时，没有用 Tuesday，而是用了 the next day，避免 重复，并把这两天连在一起，让人感觉到了前后的承接。再如最 后一句中原文用的是 Friday morning，改为 this morning 后，意 义并没有改变，但一下子把距离拉近了，既承接起前面的五天，又能与后一分句中的将来时有效的结合。关联词和插入语的使用是四级考试作文中最明显的连接手段，如 上例中的 and，to our pleasure，but，worse still。需要注意的是，关联词的使用是与段落（文章）的展开方法密切 相关的，不要为了使用关联词而使用关联词。下面结合段落的展 开方法具体加以说明。1．举例法 列举事实或举出实例来说明中心思想, 是简单易行、具有说服力 的写作方法。
Communicating with other people by telephone is very co nvenient, especially when you have something urgent.Fo r example, if one of your family members is seriously i ll at right, and you don’t know how to deal with it an d where to find a doctor, what can you do? A telephone
is the answer.Dial 120 and you will get services from the hospital very soon.2.列举法 列举的模式通常是 主题句example 1example 2example 3 列举时常用 for e xample, for instance, such as, like, take„as an example, to ill ustrate 等词语.3.分类法 一般是在主题句之后，依次罗列段落指示词所表达的几个部分或 几个方面。然后，选用丰富的事例对所罗列的各个部分或各个方 面进行具体地说明或解释。
There are three basic kinds of materials that can“ be f ound in any good library.First, there are books on all subjects, both in English and in many other languages.These books are organized according to subject, title, and author in a central file caned the card catalog.B ooks can generally be checked out of the library and ta ken home for a period of two to four weeks.Second, the re are reference works.which include encyclopedias, di ctionaries, bibliography, atlases, etc., and which gene rally must be used in the library itself.Third, there
are periodicals-magazines, newspapers, pamphlets-which are flied alphabetically in racks, or which have been filmed to conserve space.Like reference works, periodi cals cannot usually be removed from the library.分类时常用：most of all，next，moreover，in addition，besi des，furthermore，to begin with，to start with，first of all，fir st，second，third„
4.因果关系 在段落一开头，就用主题句点明其因果关系，然后选用有关材料，客观的罗列某些原因或结果，以证阐述的中心思想。
Growing numbers of well-to-do Americans are making the deci sion to move abroad.They find it impossible in America to w alk the streets at night without fear of being raped, mugged, o r murdered, nor do they see a way to escape the poisonous ai r of the cities.They maintain that even American food has be come increasingly dangerous to eat.Last but not least, they ins ist that they are sick of the pace of American life, a pace that leaves no time for relaxation or pleasure.因果关系常用语汇: because of, so, owing to, thanks to, thus, as a result of, hence, for this reason, consequently, is caused b y, lead to, result in
5．比较法 主题句必须明确表明所要比较的对象和所要比较的范围，实际上 就是罗列两个或两个以上比较对象的相同点。
Learning English is like building a house.Laying a sol id foundation is the first and most important step.In other words, you should reads, you should read and spea k English every day.Memorizing new words and phrases i s also helpful.Like building a house, learning English takes some time.So don’t be impatient.Remember, Rom e wasn’t built in a day.常用语汇：at the same time, similar to, accordingly, bo th, show a degree of similarity, similarly, lie and so , the same as, and„ too, in the same way, in a like man ner
三、段落结构(Paragraph Structure)段落结构(Paragraph 句子是组成段落的基本要素。一个段落是由一组语义相关的句子构成 的。一般来讲,段落中的句子可分为主题句、发展句、结论句。段落 是围绕一个中心思想所展开的一系列相关的句子。它可以独立成章, 也可以是文章的一部分。英语段落的一个最基本的特征就是按照一条 直线发展,也就是说,每个句子须按照统一性和连贯性原则与前一个 句子相连接。事实上,英语段落就是以主题句、展开句和结尾句所组 成的一个统一的整体。
一、主题句(Topic Sentence)主题句是英文段落的典型特点。主题句是一个段落中最具有概括性的 句子,它表明该段落要讨论的内容,所以主题句就是一个段落的中心 思想,它不仅点明了主题(topic)而且也给该主题确立了主导思想(co ntrolling idea)。例如: It is difficult for Chinese students to write compositions in English.其中,for Chinese students to write compositions in English 是主题,而 difficult 是主导思想。根据这一主题句,作者接着便会就 ”中国学生用英语写作文“这一主题在”难“方面加以展开。同样，读者 也可以预料在段落的其余句子里,作者可能会在遣词造句或其他方面 来说明中国学生用英语写作困难这一情况的。1.主题句的位置 一般情况下,主题句出现在段落的开头,作为段落传递信息的出发点, 简明扼要地告诉读者段落的线索和范围。但是,段落主题句的位置并 不是固定不变的,它可以位于段首、段中、段尾,也可以首尾兼而有之。现就常见的三种情况分述如下: 主题句位于段首,直接点明段落的主题。这种段落结构有助于作者确 定段落的主线,使段内各句紧紧围绕段落的主题思想自然展开。例如: Hurricanes, which are also called cyclones, exert tremendou s power.These violent storms are often a hundred miles in diameter, and their winds can reach velocities of seventy-f ive miles per hour or more.Furthermore, the strong winds a nd heavy rainfall that accompany them cm completely destroy a small town in a couple of hours.The energy that is rele ased by a hurricane in one day exceeds the total energy con sumed by humankind throughout the world m one year.2.主题句的特点 主题句置于段首,开宗明义,一开始就规定和限制了段落的发展方向, 对段落的成败起着关键作用。所以,主题本身尤应把握准确。段落主 题句有以下几个特点: 1.概括性(general)主题句首先应概括,也就是说,主题句应涵盖全段所有的思想内容。2 具体性（specific）也就是必须具有一定的限定性,即有一个或一组核心词对主导思想的 范围进行限定,避免在段落展开中偏离主题方向。段落主题句所限定 的内容要有助于段落的铺开和抒发。换句话说,段落主题句限定的范 围要符合段落写作目的。一个段落的容量是有限的,限定的范围太宽, 其内容无法在一个段落中阐述清楚;限定范围太窄,则不利于段落主 题的发展。因此,写主题句既要注意其概括性,又要注意其具体性。也就是说,主 题句不能过于宽泛,否则,续写发展句时就会令人感觉如堕烟海,无从 下笔。欲使主题句具备具体性,首先要对段落的主题进行收紧。二 展开句(supporting sentences)
1.定义： 展开句就是对主题句所陈述的思想观点加以展开这类,提出 各种细节或例证以阐述或证明主题的各个方面.展开句必须切题、明 确、层次分明。写扩展句时要注意条理性，比如引出三条不同的理由 可以分别用： First of all, furthermore, the last but not the least。请阅读下文,注意展开句如何对主导思想加以展开的： How to Help a Choking Person You ought to know what to do to help a person who is chokin g.First，stand behind choking victim and put your arm aro und his or her waist.Second, you make a fist and place the thumb side against the person’s stomach just above the na vel, but below the ribs.Third, grasp your fist with your o ther hand and press into the victim’ abdomen with a quick s upward thrust.Repeat the action if necessary.三、结尾句(Concluding Sentence)在一个段落里,结尾句并不是必不可少的,但是因为结尾句具有段落 结束的标志(如 summary, in conclusion, in a word 等)以及能够 提醒读者作者的重要观点,所以结尾句对读者有益。结尾句的作用是 第一,复述主题句;第二,对整个段落加以总结;第三,对主题加以评 论。下面的例子分别说明结尾句的三个作用。
Good manners are important in all countries, but ways of ex pressing good manners are different from country to country.Americans eat with knives and forks F Japanese eat with ch opsticks.Americans say ”Hi“ when they meet Japanese bow.M any American men open doors for women Japanese men do not.On the surface, it appears that good manners in America are mot good manners in Japan, and in a way this is true.But in any country, the only manners that are important are tho se involving one person’s behavior toward another person.In all countries, it is good manners to behave consideratel y towards other and bad manners not to.It is only the way of behaving politely that differs from country to country.四、句子写作 明确段落的写作思路之后，让我们具体来看句子的写作。考试实践 表明，多数考生在写作上的主要欠缺不是系统的写作理论和方法，而 是最基本的单句写作能力。有些同学因为对自身的实力缺乏自信所以 考场上采取抄袭阅读文章里的句子这种方法来凑字数。这种做法实不 足取，因为一方面容易被改卷老师发现而认为该考生有偷懒的嫌疑，另一方面考生从阅读文章里抄来的优美句子和考生自己写的错误百 出的句子拼凑在一起令文章整体有不和谐之感，从而令改卷老师怀疑 该考生有作弊的嫌疑。通过句子写作这一关，可参考如下步骤：
1.确保句子的正确性，即准确表达思想而且没有语法错误。以＂ There be＂句型为例，错误的句子：There are many people like to go to the movies.正确表达：There are many people who li ke to go to the movies.考生最容易犯的错误是在 there be 之后 又用了一个动词作谓语，使句子结构出现严重错误。除了要小心避免 语法错误外，我们也不能忽视作文中经常出现的严重汉化的英语，即 中式英语，比如：”Man is iron, and food is steel.", ＂Women are half side sky.＂ “The food in the dining hall is diffi cult to eat”。如何克服汉化思维关键在于动笔前先思考一下类似 的英文句式，并且注意谚语的翻译不能随心所欲，尽量找到规范的翻 译方式。正如我们所知道的,英语句子通常包含主语和谓语结构,才能 表达某一完整意思。真正理解和掌握这一点,可以帮助我们避免许多 语法上的毛病。在句子结构方面避免下列几种毛病： 1． 串句（run-on sentences）2． 破句（fragmentary sentences）3． 赘句（wordy sentences/ redundancy）4． 修饰语错位（modifiers in wrong position）5． 悬垂修饰语（Dang1ing Modifiers）6． 结构不平行（Non-parallelism）
7． 主谓不一致（subject-verb disagreement）1． 所谓串句,是指两个或多个句子串在一起,误当成一个句子。串句 的表现形式主要有三种 1）两个完整句子只用逗号隔开 English is a required course in most colleges，a student m ust pass it before he earns his degree.2)两个完整句子不适当地用连词 and 连接 I intend to go with your brother and you may do as you plea se.3)两个完整句子串在一起 Students should be careful of punctuation trouble will resu lt if they are careless.2． 破句是串句的另一个极端把句子的一部分当成一个句子。In ten seconds I made my decision.A decision that changed the next seven years of my life.If a person possesses the ability and desires to go to coll ege, I don’t think money should stop him.Even though in s ome cases it does.第一个例子中 “A decision that changed the next seven years of my life.”是一个带有定语从句的名词词组, 实际上只是这个句 子的一部分。第二个例子中，从句“Even though in some cases it does.”被错当成一个句子.3.悬垂修饰语 一个修饰语必须非常明确地修饰句中的某一个词或某一组词.有些修 饰语初看好像修饰某个词语,但实际上什么也没有修饰,那么这个修 饰语就是悬垂修饰语。误：Losing sixteen pounds，her clothes began to look baggy.正： Losing sixteen pounds, she found that her clothes began to look baggy.以下是几种主要的悬垂修饰语 1)分词短语悬垂 当句子中的主语不是分词短语所表达的动作发出者,这个分词短语就 悬垂了。Looking to the future，the computer field may seem very at tractive to many.2)动名词悬垂
误：On hearing the news, my heart sank down.正：On hearing the news, I felt my heart sinking down.3)不定式悬垂 误：To pass the exam, this exercise must be done.正：To pass the exam, you must do this exercise.4)省略句悬垂 误：When a baby, his parents abandoned him.正：When he was a baby, he was abandoned by his parents.4.结构不平行平行结构是把两个或两个以上意思并列的成分，用同等的语法形式来 表达的一种修辞手段.They expect to hear lectures this morning, join discussions this afternoon, and attend the dance tonight.They always enjoy listening, talking, and dancing.这种结构整齐对称,使句子流畅,语意贯通并富有节奏感.误:Students need textbooks, notebooks, and they need pens.正:Students need textbooks, notebooks and pens.误:Knowing how to study and to learn to budge time are impo rtant for college students.正:Knowing how to study and learning to budge time are impo rtant for college students.误:What we want and the thing we do are often opposite.正:What we want and what we do are often contradictory.2.注意句式的多样性，语言生动且富于变换才能最终打动评卷 老师从而获得高分。不能从头到尾都是 I am„, he is„, I like„, 这样的简单句。增加句子形式的多样性。应避免全文使用同一长度、结构相似的句子，使长句与短句、单句与复句，倒装句与强调句相结 合，增加文章的说服力与生动性。1）适当运用同位语，插入语，非限定性定语从句，让逗号出现 在你的文章中。同位语 Environmental pollution, a phenomenon w hich lasted a number of years, has grown more and more seri ous.推荐用于开头对核心名词做出解释。2）倒装，Only in this way can we solve the problem.建议 最好使用在文章结尾处更显得掷地有声。
3）无灵主语，即没有生命的东西充当主语。当我们要讲述一个 经验性的事实或者常理时，不要过多使用“I think that”议论文中 过多使用“I” 容易影响文章的客观性。使用无灵主语就可以解决这 个问题 Past experience has taught us that we should not depe nd on others for everything.(Past experience 就是无灵主语)T he past decade witnessed her change from a beautiful young lady into a shabby woman.4）排比，可以增强语言表达的力度和整个文章的气势。例如在 95 年 1 月的考题“Can money buy happiness”中运用排比就可以收 到比较理想的效果。Many people die for money, lie for money, fight for money, and even sell their souls to the Devil for money.以上是讲述写好句子的方法，但因为考场上时间比较紧迫，所以 建议考生务必在考前背诵一些常用的理由句以防在考场上临时思路 受阻而束手无策。如 It can enrich our knowledge and widen our horizon.或者 It can increase the government revenue and re lieve the pressure of unemployment.等等。4． 注意措辞的力度(句型与词汇的选择,尽量将所学句型和词汇
运用到写作中)
a.As I came out of the farmhouse I heard an unusual noise in the distance, one which I had never heard before.I look ed up the valley in the direction from which the sound seem ed to come, but could see nothing.The noise grew, a low ru mbling that grew louder by the second.Then all at once I s aw it, a towering wall of water filling the valley from sid e to side.I turned and rushed back into the house.Anythin g left in the wake of that flood was bound to be swept away.I scooped up my small daughter and, grabbing my startled w ife by the arm, rushed for the stairs.Reaching the top I h ad only a moment to think.Which room? My daughter’s bedro om was furthest from the river bank at the back of the hous e.I thrust my wife and daughter through the door and close d it behind us.By now the roar of the river is deafening.b.I came out of the farmhouse and heard an unusual noise.I had not heard it before and looked up the valley to see w hat was making it.I saw nothing, the noise grew louder and louder, then I saw a great deal of water rushing down the valley.It looked dangerous so I went inside very quickly a nd took my wife and daughter upstairs, but was not sure whi ch room to go in.as my daughter’s room seemed best we wen
t in there as quickly as possible as the noise of the water was so loud.5．改错练习1．Born in a small town in South china in 1937, he grew up to be a musician.2.The girl is too young.3.He likes to sing, to swim, and table tennis.4.We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very cha rming young woman.5.She told my sister that she was wrong.6.He was knocked down by a bicycle, but it was not seriou s.7.To get up early, the clock was set at six.8.Rotten in the cellar, he had to throw the potatoes away.9.In Dreiser’s Sister Carrie, he describes a penniless gi rl’s way to success.10.An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize.11.In college, students should learn to analyze problems o n their own.Try to help them to acquire this ability.12.His job was a policeman.13.By taking a No.10 bus is one way to get there.14.They were waiting for the meeting to begin.They talked with each other.They talked about women’s volleyball tea m.The team had won victories in Tokyo.15.Walking into the classroom, the teacher carried a big b ook under his arm.16.he saw an old man get on the bus, quickly standing up t o offer him the seat.17.The girl’s bag was full of new books and big.18.His spectacles, an English dictionary, a cup of tea, bo oks and notes lay on the small desk.1
第二篇：四级英语作文高分句子
It pays to be honest
诚实是有回报的
The net is increasingly popular
网络越来越流行 Students of universities and colleges Pop music appeals to me
我对流行音乐很感兴趣 Everything cuts both ways
任何事情都有两面性 English is intensely important=English matters much 1.As the economy advances at a fast pace, English plays an increasingly important role in our lives Simply put
简而言之
He believes women cannot be too thin
他相信女人再瘦也不为过
2.It pays to cultivat the innovative spirit among students of colleges and universities.3.On college campuses across the nation,playing online game is intensely popular.E-books/digital books/paperless books
电子书 Online courses/web courses
网络课程
A green campus=an environment-friendly campus 4.It pays to maintain a positive mental attitude when facing adverse situations.put in another way, remaining optimistic in adversities pays off.5.A growing number of college students are hopelessly addicted to matters unrelated to their studies, a worrying trend that should spark public attention.6.We are supposed to be fully aware of the fact that if we continue to harm the environment we are bound to pay heavily/dearly for it.7.As an ancient land enjoying a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years.China currently falls behind advanced countries on many fronts.On many fronts
在很多方面
8.It pays to foster the cooperative spirit on many fronts.9.Thanks to advances in technology and economy, a variety of/diversity of digital products, from mobile phone to digital camera, are intensely popular on the Chinese mainland.10.Recent years have witnessed the growing popularity of the topic of a green campus.11.The past decades have seen the fast-paced development of the nation’s economy.On doubly
毫无疑问的是
12.I doubt that she married him for money There is no doubt that=it is beyond doubt that…
13.There is no doubt that this reform is aimed at sharpening the competitive edge of the students in the tough job market.14.It is beyond doubt that far too many college students fail to be aware that achieving/striking a balance between entertainment and studies matters much.15.Undoubtedly, what you do on campus will have profound impact on you in the days ahead.Individual colleges and universities
各个大学
16.He bought/purchased/acquired this public company 17.With the nation’s economy still in the red, a growing number of college graduates find it is increasingly hard to land a decent job.Loving our country means more than words 18.On my personal level, effective measures should be taken to crack down on piracy/reverse the trend 19.We , college students, are supposed to take the leading role in fighting against this evil trend 20.Only by taking concrete moves can we enjoy a pollution-free environment.Making painstaking efforts
付出艰苦努力
21.Only by making painstaking efforts can we climb the social ladder higher.22.It is not uncommon that far too many Chinese fail to focus on details.place a high value on
重视
23.It is not uncommon that far too many Chinese students fail to place a high value on learning Chinese, their mother tongue The bulk of=the majority of
24.The bulk of Chinese take pride in the country’s abundant natural resources Do all in one’s power to
尽某人最大努力去…
25.While my command of English is not outstanding, I am doing all in my power to improve it Favor A over B
支持A而不支持B 26.While Romney won the first debate, I favor Obama instead of/rather than over him You deserve it
1.你应该获得
2.你活该 Digging into
仔细阅读
Stress A over B
强调A 而不强调B 27.Traditionally, Chinese education stresses mechanical thinking over creativity A to B is what C to D In an effort to=in order to
28.In an effort to reverse the trend, the government has pumped a wealth of resources into this campaign.Launch a campaign
发起运动
29.Personally, the government should launch a campaign to crack down on illegal manufactures Be designed to do=be aimed at doing Awaken sb to the crucial importance of sth
唤醒某人，某事的重要性
30.The government should awaken people across the nation to the crucial importance of respecting intellectual property rights Senior citizens
老人（尤指退休者）be responsible for
…的原因
31.The shrinking population is responsible for this trend.Get actively involved in
积极参与
32.In their leisure hours, they consume a good portion of time getting actively involved in serving as volunteers.It is virtually impossible for sb to do sth
某人做某事几乎是不可能的
33.It is virtually impossible for you to land a decent job without superb professional knowledge and an outstanding command of English.Nothing new
绝非先见，很常见
34.Devoting a good portion of leisure time to learning English is nothing new among my fellow students 35.Setting a grand goal but not taking concrete moves is nothing new among my peers.Be capable of
能够的，有能力的
36.Fat too many Chinese are incapable of thinking independently and critically 37.Others, however, are supportive of this campaign.Others, however, see a different picture.Claiming it pays to devote much time to taking optional courses Generate impacts
产生影响
sth concerns sb
某事使某人担心
38.How to reverse the trend concerns folks from every walk of life Every walk of life
各行各业
As the pillar of our society
作为我们社会的栋梁支柱
39.As the pillar of our society, we ,college students, should shoulder more responsibility to respect intellectual proerty rights/should take the leading role in serving as volunteers in the earthquake-stricken area.40.I am striving to earn more money to relieve my parents’ financial load
41.Folks from all walks of life should strive to play a part in building a pollution-free society Sharpen one’s edge
增强竞争力
42.Our course focuses on teaching the students how to sharpen their edge when taking the interview Last but definitely not the least
最后，但绝不是最不重要的
43.People focusing on immediate benefits are bound to pay dearly for it
44.Last but definitely not the least, our lack of attention on this issue is mostly responsible for it.Move oneself beyond
摆脱
45.It’s my hope that in my college days I could gradually move myself beyond my dependence on parents.In the hope of
以希望
46.I am doing all in my power to earn credits in the hope of graduating earlier.Lend A B’s support
B支持A 47.I sincerely hope that you could lend me your support in the election for class president.48.I sincerely hope that you could do everything you can to promote the environmental awareness among your fellow students.49.He , with his superb performance, is gaining growing popularity on campus.Giant leaps
巨大进步
50.Thanks to giant leaps in technology, could computing is gaining growing popularity across the world.51.If You Are The One, a TV reality show, is gaining growing popularity on the Chinese mainland.52.Sina weibo , the Chinese clone of Twitter, is gaining enormous popularity among net citizens.Enable sb to do sth
使某人能够干某事
53.The nets enables us to communicate with each other in ways that were beyond our imagination.Far outweigh
远远超过，远远大于
54.The strengths of the net far outweigh it’s weakness.55.The virtual world has generated far more positive impacts on us than negative ones.As sb put it
正如某人所言
56.As Kobe Bryant,a legendary figure of NBA, put it ,”it is the teamwork spirit that helps Los Angeles Lakers weather hard times all these years” Taste success
取得成功
57.Mo Yan ultimately tasted success.Be equipped with
拥有
58.High achievers are equipped with a wealth of personal qualities that others lack.A series of=a string of
59.School authorities attribute a string of suicides to our lack of attention on the students’ psychological mental health.60.He stays far ahead of his fellow students on many fronts thanks to his painstaking efforts Attach growing importance to(doing)sth
越来越重视某事
61.After having suffered some major setbacks in his career, he attaches growing importance to execution.As a consequence
结果 I would argue
我认为 At current stage
现阶段
Matter much more
重要的多
62.I would argue that at current stage studies matter much more than entertainment.Be closely linked to
与…有紧密联系
63.Whether you could taste success is closely linked to whether you have a strong will.I couldn’t care less about it
我不关心 I couldn’t care more about it
我很关心
This movie couldn’t be worse
很糟糕的电影 not simply…but…
不仅…而且 push up=drive up
推动某物上升 to be more specific
更具体地说
excessive exploitation
过度开发，过度开采
64.To be more specific, our excessive exploitation of natural resources not only costs us dearly in the short run but may generate profound negative impacts on future generations
In the short run
从短期看来 the post-90s generation
90后 turn around
扭转…趋势 pay lip service
只说不做
65.All parties involved in this pressing issue are supposed to stop paying lip service.Curb the prevalent trend
遏制（不好的）趋势 Wage campaigns
发起运动
Governments at all levels
各级政府 Bring…under control
控制…
66.Governments at all levels are supposed to wage massive campaign to bring the soaring commodity prices under control.Bear fruits
结果实
Bear the costs
承担成本
Bear the consequence
承担成本
67.I harbor a sincere hope that our combined efforts would pay off.68.People from all walks of life should combine their efforts to build our society into a harmonious noe 5
第三篇：英语四级技巧
英语四级考试复习技巧详解
[听力]
精听VS泛听
准备四级听力，要精听，不要泛听。这是第一个需要明确的问题：精听历年四级考题。虽然从宏观上来看，任何听力资料都是有益的，但是鉴于有限的可利用时间，复习资料的选择一定要有针对性。因为要攻克四级考试，一个与提高能力同样重要(而且简单得多)的任务是迅速地熟悉考题。考前一到2个月要坚持听1个小时左右的听力
[词汇]
四级词汇大概有三四千，很厚的一本，不全背，但要挑选背。
精研历年真题。
1.熟悉常考的语法难点和词汇题型。做题的关键是每一题必须能从原文中找到出处，也就是能够证明这道题正确答案的部分，千万不要凭印象。
[阅读]
把握细节，养成习惯
1.首先精研历年真题
2.重视阅读理解中的细节性问题、3.养成适合自己的阅读习惯
4.作真题，提高考试阅读能力
考前一个月要进行针对性的训练，在做阅读的过程中，一定要把握好时间，不能一味追求准确而花费大量的时间
对于快速阅读，具体方法，先大概看一下十个题，查找出现频率最的几个词，记在大脑里，然后回头看第一题，记下几个关键词去原文里定位，快读其实很简单，只要定位准确，一般一眼就出答案。
阅读分为选词填空和精读，选词填空考查大家的四级词汇量，这个要大家平时多积累，精读方法也选读题干，带着问题去原文里找答案，具体方法和快读差不多，只是精读有的时
候你读懂也答不出题目来，说明你理解的还不够。平时学习的办法就是把历年的真题都做一篇，做的时候不要速度要质量，搞懂每一题目在原文里哪里出现，怎样出题考你。做多了你自然会摸出他出题的规律。
选词填空
第一步：快速阅读全文，获取有用信息。
第二步：简单标注所给单词的词性和词义。
第三步：结合上两步进行解题。
[完形填空]
综合全文，着眼细节
1.对于首句应该给与足够的重视，因为往往它就是中心句或是引导句，它的时态往往决定了全文的时态，所以多花一点时间看首句是值得的。
2.然后以句子为单位一句一句地读，一句一句地填空，主要考虑语法、句意、逻辑和上下文联系。暂时填不出来的就空在那里。
3.最后通读一遍，完成没有填的空，再看看填的顺不顺，不顺的地方大胆修改。
[英译汉]
掌握原则按部就班
英译汉首先要掌握4个原则：
一、翻译时既要忠实于原文，又要符合汉语的习惯;
二、翻译不可太拘泥，否则很容易因死守原文语言形式而损害了原文思想内容，好的译文应该是形式与内容的统一;
三、能够直译尽量不意译;
四、翻译的过程应该是先理解后表达。
具体如下：首先，英文段落的首句一般为topicsentence，然后展开说明。展开的写法有多种，可分可总，可下定义，可同义重复，可以代词复指等。利用这一技巧，先通读全文，便能更好理解文章的意思，把握段与段之间的关系，在翻译时就能在上下文中确定词义，译。正确理解原文后，还要通过适当的翻译技巧用规范的汉语表达出来。这些技巧有：
(1)增词法。根据需要增加一些词语，如名词等。
(2)减词法。根据汉语习惯，删去一些词。
(3)肯否表达法。原文为肯定句，译成汉语是为增强修饰效果，可以译为否定句。反之亦然。
(4)变换法。名词译成动词或动词转译成名词等。
(5)分合法。一个长句可分成若干部分来译，或者把原文的几个简单句用一个句子表达出来。
(6)省略法：两种语言由于存在差异，表达时不可能总是对等，经常可以省略一些词和句子成分，如英语中的冠词汉语里没有，译时可以省略。
最后一定要核对原文是否准确、通顺，还要注意关键词的采分点。
[写作]
借助阅读善打草稿
写作文时要放松情绪，消除恐惧感，必要时可借助深呼吸来缓解紧张的心情。
试卷一、二(作文在试卷2)同时发下来，应在做完听力部分后，迅速地看一下作文题，让其在大脑中留有一席之地，这样便于在做词汇、阅读时随时发现写作可借用的词汇句型而不至于在写作时，大脑一片空白，无从下手。
作文无非就考一下记叙文和说明文，偶尔会考写信图表作文等，但这些都归于记叙文和说明文两大类，这两类能写了就不怕什么题材了。考试之前自己准备作文的大框架，比如说，大结构为总分总，总分等等，漂亮的连词要用进去。
一定要认真审题，弄清文章及各段主题，实现由提纲到主题句的转换。可以打一下草稿：摆事实，理清思路，从易于表达，且论证丰富的观点入手，不局限于一种看法、一种表达法或一种句式。
具体写作时最好分段来写，各段之间空二至三行，以利于随时增减或删改。而且字迹要工整，卷面要保持清洁，给判卷人一个好印象。写完后仔细检查作文中用词、句法方面有无不准确的地方;句式有无变化;句与句之间，段与段之间有无合适的连接及过渡等.注意 ：作文和选择是分开齐的,所以一定要先涂卡,再写作文,否则提前半个小时齐选择题卡的时候很仓促.最重要的一点,在考试前一个月,把前10次的考试题目集中做一遍,卷纸大同小异,思路,方法,包括很多知识点总是反复出现,一定是有用的.一定不能不做.有时间的话应该至少做3遍.最后一个具体的建议,目前,每周做两套听力,一天一篇真题阅读(不能超过10分钟),一周一篇写作.等到离考试还有20天,每天做一套真题,循环做2次,正好可以做两遍.
第四篇：2014年6月英语四级写作高分技巧
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英语四级作文想获得高分不准备的话是没有那么容易的，下面小编为大家整理了2014年6月英语四级写作高分技巧，想要拿高分的同学赶紧来看看吧。
首先，要注意一些常见词汇的替换形式。
举个例子，比如说大家在写“很多人认为”时，很多同学会写many people think，像这样一句话很明显就不容易得高分。你应该多考虑一些如：稍微好一些的主语从句：it is widely believed that(人们普遍认为);又比如说many hold the idea that(很多人都有这样的观点)等等。像这样一些简单的词汇和短语之间的这样一种切换是非常重要而且容易提分的。
又比如说在词汇方面，很多人喜欢用important、many、more and more，这都是比较老的梗了，尤其是“越来越重要”more and more important，如果这些词汇不断的重复出现，你的作文可能是得不了高分的。我们就拿more and more important举例。记住，more and more今后我们尽量变成副词的形式，叫increasingly。比如说“更加重要”-increasingly important，或者是increasingly vital or increasingly crucial等等，都会比较不错。所以你得有一个庞大的同义替换库，有些单词可能改变之后感觉更好。其次，每周坚持“一篇两遍”
距离考试还有一个月时间，从现在开始大家必须要开始写作文了，一篇两遍是什么含义呢?首先文章一定是过去真题当中考过的文章，模拟题当中的文章可以在真题的文章全写熟练之后再去写，但是模拟题的文章它的精度和准确度和真题相比会稍稍的有一些差距，所以建议同学们从现在开始每周以历年真题为题一篇文章写两遍。
为什么要写两遍呢?要知道任何文章只写一遍没有任何的效果。第一遍计时完成，第二遍怎么办?你有很多的方式，可以把文章给你的同学、室友看看，他们在看时，很可能会有一些负面的能量产生，比如看不懂，看不下去，很奇怪等等，你需要让他们坦诚地告诉你这些观点，你再进行修正;更加靠谱的方式则是去找一些英文水平比你高的师哥师姐，把文章给他们看，在提出一些可行性意见之后，你按照这样一些可行性意见重新地对这篇文章进行二度创作和修改。一篇文章写一遍不做任何的修改是永远没有提高的，如果能写三遍，甚至写到五遍，我们相信一遍一定会比前一遍更好一些。
要写出好的文章，不仅要有丰富的词汇和句型储备，也要勤于练习，不断修改。考试时虽然没有很多时间修改，平时的推敲却会让你在考场上写得更好。
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第五篇：四级作文高分模版
四级作文模板
一.对比选择型热点追踪
Study Abroad or in China?
There is no consensus of opinions among people as to whether students should study abroad or not.Some people are of the view that the youths should go overseas for further study if possible, while others take an opposite stand, firmly believing that it is of no necessity for students to study in a foreign country.Those people who maintain that it is good for students to go abroad for further study believe that diverse culture background can broaden students’ horizon.They also claim that overseas study can shape students’ personality because they are forced to deal with all kinds of difficulties by themselves.Nevertheless, the other people who contend that domestic education is good enough for students argue that our educational quality has been greatly improved during the past decade.They also point out that domestic education is convenient and economical.As far as I am concerned, the former opinion holds more weight.For one thing, it can strengthen the learners’ abilities to understand and communicate with people from other cultures.For another, the developed countries still have a lot advanced knowledge which is worth our study.When all the factors are examined, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that studying abroad if possible is advisable.二.问题解决型实例：2001年1月（How to Succeed in a Job Interview? 面试在求职过程中的作用、面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是„„），2000年1月（How I Finance My College Education?）1998年1月（My View on Fake Commodities）模板：With the development/improvement of(铺垫),(某一问题).It is necessary that(关注解决现象引出的问题很必要).On the one hand,(理由一).On the other hand,(理由二).Therefore, how to(承上启下句，要解决的问题)is worth paying attention.Firstly,(办法一).Secondly,(办法二).For example,(举例解释解决办法二).Thirdly,(办法三).In other words,(阐明解决办法三).In fact, the ways to(解决问题的办法多种多样)are countless.It’s time that(强调解决问题时不可待).真题演练：How to Succeed in a Job Interview?（2001年1月）
With the development of job market, job interview plays an important role in job-hunting.It is necessary that we should learn some tricks to perform better in a job interview.On the one hand, a job interview offers interviewees and interviewers respectively a chance to know each other within a very short time.On the other hand, excellent performance in an interview will enable the interviewees to exert a good impression on the interviewer and finally win the job.Therefore, how to succeed in job interview is worth paying attention.Firstly, interviewees should dress neatly and properly.Secondly, interviewees should be confident.For example, when asked about professional questions, interviewees should give a clear and definite answer.Thirdly, interviewees should have some knowledge about the company and the position they apply for.In other words, interviewees should prepare themselves something about the interview in advance so as to show that they attach vital importance to the job.In fact, the ways to succeed in a job interview are countless.It’s time that we laid stress on interview because it’s the first step of our work experience.热点追踪The Damage of Public Facilities公共设施破坏严重的问题亟待解决，2、解决办法有哪些，3、你的看法。
The Damage of Public Facilities
With the improvement of living standard, more and more public facilities, such as public telephone booths and ATMs have been installed in the streets.It is necessary that we have to pay attention to the damage of these public facilities.On the one hand, some people use them without care, which leads to inconvenience to others.On the other hand, the damaged public facilities stain the beauty of the city.Therefore, how to prevent public facilities from being damaged is worth paying attention.Firstly, public facilities should be made of hard materials so as to be more durable.Secondly, some devices should be adopted to protect them from being damaged.For example, like cars, we can install alarm devices in public facilities.Thirdly, from my point of view, it is essential that we civilize our citizens to behave morally.In other words, we should tell the citizens that it is shameful to destroy public facilities.In fact, the ways to reduce the damage of public facilities are countless.It’s time that we took most effective ones to protect them.三.观点论证型实例：2003年1月（It pays to be honest）、1999年1月（Don’t hesitate to say “No”）、1997年1月（Practice Makes Perfect）模板：It is true that(指出普遍存在的观点).However,(谈不同的观点).I think(提出自己的观点，即文章的论点).(过渡句，转向观点的论证，根据情况选择具体的词)can be listed as follows.Firstly,(论证理由一).Secondly,(论证理由二).For example,(举例具体说明理由二).Thirdly,(论证理由三).A case in point is that(举例具体说明理由三).It goes without saying that(转折句，提出执行该观点时应注意的事项).There is no doubt that(得出结论).In conclusion(总结全文).真题演练：It Pays to be Honest（2003年1月）
It is true that most of us value honesty highly.However, nowadays we often confront confidence crisis such as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities and so on.I think that we should be honest because being honest is not only beneficial to ourselves but also to others and the whole society.The reasons can be listed as follows.Firstly, only honest people can be truly respected by the others and can make more friends over a long period of time.Secondly, honesty, which is the traditional virtue of the Chinese people, can make our life easier and more harmonious.For example, consumers will not be afraid of being overcharged if dealers are honest, and thus dealers can win over more customers.Thirdly, honesty can make our society more stable.A case in point is that Singapore, a society featuring trustworthiness and integrity, has a comparatively low criminal rate.It goes without saying that being honest is of great benefit to both the community and individuals.There is no doubt that we should foster the spirit of honesty.In conclusion, laying stress on honesty will become the public morals in our society.四.图表说明型
实例：2002年6月，1991年6月模板:(概括性词语最近出现的总体现象)has become a common part of people’s life.And(题目要求讨论的具体现象)has always aroused the greatest concern.What impresses us most is(现象的具体表现).The reasons（现象或现象带来的结果，为下文分析产生的原因做铺垫）are varied.Among the various reasons,(原因一)plays an important part.That is to say,(具体说明原因一).What is more,(原因二).For example,(举例说明原因二).When talking about(作者要讨论的现象),(作者的看法).On the one hand,(支持看法的理由一或说明看法的第一个方面).On the other hand,(支持看法的理由二或说明看法的第二个方面).In brief,(总结).真题演练：Student use of computers（2002年6月）
Using computers has become a common part of people’s life.And the tremendous growth of student use of computers has always aroused the greatest concern.What impresses us most is that, in 2000, college students averagely spent 20 hours per week on computer, which is the size more than ten times that of ten years ago.The reasons why computers are widely used are varied.Among the various reasons the decreasing price of PC plays an important part.That is to say, more students can afford a personal computer.What is more, the Internet provides college students an amazing world to explore, For example, people can get the latest news and information as well as conveniently make friends around the world.When talking about disadvantages and problems existing in student use of computers, I think that their lack of skills and disciplines is the point we should pay attention to, On the one hand, their lack of skills fails students to make full use of the computer and the Internet.On the other hand, their lack of necessary disciplines makes some students indulge in computer games and net world, and even other negative materials, forgetting their major tasks as college students.In brief, there is still a lot to do to help students make good use of computers.热点追踪：Cheating in Exams学生作弊现象越来越严重，2、作弊的原因，3、如何杜绝作弊。
Cheating in Exams
Trying to defeat the cheat has become a common part of people’s life.And cheating in exams on campus has always aroused the greatest concern.And cheating in exams on campus has always aroused the greatest concern.What amazes us most is that many methods are adopted by students.The reasons for cheating in exams are varied.Among the various reasons, to get higher scores or scholarships plays an important part.That’s to say, some students are under great pressure from their parents or they fear to fall behind others, so they to get high scores in exams.What is more, some students just play the time away and want to pass the exams without efforts.For example, they spend the whole night playing PC games but fall asleep in the class.When talking about how to deal with cheating in exams, I think education and punishment might work.On the one hand, we should explain the harm of cheating to the students.On the other hand, punishment or penalty should be given to those who have been found cheating.In brief, we should try our best to put an end to cheating.五.应用文A：批评、抱怨、投诉信：Dear,My name is(姓名).I am(身份).I venture to write you a letter about(表述抱怨内容).The focus of the complaint is(抱怨内容的核心点).For one thing,(抱怨内容的一个方面).For another,(另一方面).Honestly speaking,(客观评论).But(抱怨产生的原因之一).Besides,(抱怨产生的原因之二).All in all, there is still much room for improvement(总结说明所抱怨现象或事物还有很大改进空间).I do hope(表达本人的愿望).Thank you for your time and kind consideration.(信件结尾常用语)
Sincerely Yours,Signature
真题演练：2002年1月假如你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。
A Letter to the Editor of a Newspaper
Dear Editor,My name is Li Ming.I am a senior junior student of the civil engineering school in this university.I venture to write you a letter about the canteen service on campus, which has given rise to many complaints among students..The focus of the complaint is the poor quality of the food.For one thing, the rice is hard, the steamed breads are usually sold cold and vegetables are often overcooked.For another, the prices of the foods are surprisingly high..Honestly speaking, the dining environment has been improved since last year.But there are still enough space and seats for us to have our meals there.Besides, the attitude of the canteen staff is not hospitable at al.All in all, there is still much room for improvement.I do hope we will not suffer another year.Thank you for your time and kind consideration.Sincerely yours,Li Ming
B：建议信模板Dear
I am delighted to learn that(写信的原因).It(引出作者的建议).In my opinion,(表达建议内容).On the one hand,(提出建议的理由
一).On the other hand,(建议的理由二).As to the(具体到某一方面的建议内容), I suggest().If(供被建议人选择的条件).It is unnecessary for you to(建议内容的另一方面).In addition,(其它的建议).I am sure(对建议内容的评价).Please inform me(对建议内容所做的承诺).I am looking forward to(表达本人的愿望).Sincerely Yours,Signature
真题演练：Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter.Suppose you are Zhang Ying.Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the weeklong holiday.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1、表示欢迎，2、提出对度假安排的建议，3、提醒应该注意的事项。
A letter to a schoolmate
Dear Wang,I am delighted to learn that you will visit me for a week during this national holiday.It has been a pleasant surprise to hear from you again after such a long time.In my opinion, Shenyang is your best choice for this vacation.On the one hand, there are many places of interest and historical sites in Shenyang.On the other hand, Shenyang is cultural center with various artistic and musical performances..As to the famous sites, I suggest that you should visit Shenyang Imperial Palace Museum.If you are interested in gardens, Shenyang Botanic Garden won’t disappoint you.It is unnecessary for you to bring anything except your sweaters since it is a little cold in the evenings.In addition, as there will be many people at the railway station, you should not leave your belongings unattended.I am sure you will have a nice time here.Please inform me when you have come to a decision.I am looking forward to seeing you soon
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