初三英语书面表达训练

第一篇：初三英语书面表达训练

中考作文】2013中考英语作文预测

2012中考英语作文预测：8个要准备的话题 1.关于学习英语的话题: 复习要点 Learn English 请你以“How to learn English well?”写份演讲稿80字左右.范文: Dear classmates: We have been learning English for over 6 years and really love it.English is one of the most important langnages in the world.It’s necessary for us to learn it well.How do you study? Everyone learns English in different ways.I think the best way to improve your English is to improve your English skills.They are/include listening reading and writing.We should practice them every day.we should remember more words and grammar.Reading more English story books or novels Watching more English cartoon TVs or moves.Listening English tapes and repeating after the speaker.Second you are not afraid to make any mistakes you speak English as much as possible.Third you ask the teachers when you don’t understand any knowledge.It’s very good for you if you are interested in Egnlish.You will find studying Egnlish is interesting and helpful.One more thing remember “Practice makes perfect”!I hope everyone makes progress.Thanks!

2.卫生健康饮食:健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。

保持健康的重要性

保持健康的方法

保持健康的结论

(你的看法?)1.多吃水果蔬菜保持饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多锻炼健身强体;3.鄙弃不良习惯

(你的看法?)How to stay our health /fit? 范文1: Dear boys and grils : I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? As a middle shool student first you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(绳子).Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals Don’t eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest.Next keep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustn’t drink wine or smoke.They are bad for your health.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.Thank you bye!范文2:Dear boys and girls: I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise eat more junk food isn’t enough time to sleep.If we keep fit we must keep taking exercises every day.Eat lots of fruit and vegetables.Sleep for about 8 hours a night.Stay away from cigarettes/smoking/drugs毒品.Early to bed early to rise/get up.Breathe(呼吸)the fresh air in the open air.Keep happy every day.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.3.假如你叫李华,你校初三年级同学正在开展一场讨论,主题是“初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”。请根据下面所提供的信息,用英语总结出讨论情况。

提示: 70%的学生

30%的学生

应该每天进行体育锻炼,但不要时间过长

锻炼浪费时间、使人疲劳

锻炼能增强体质,保持健康

锻炼以后很兴奋,较长时间不能投入学习

锻炼能使大脑休息,使学习效果更好

锻炼中可能会受伤

要求:语句通顺,句意连贯;词数为80词左右;发言稿的开头已写好,但不计入总词数。

Dear classmates: I’m Li Hua.After the discussion we found that 70% of the students think they should take all kinds of exercise every day but not spend too much time.They think exercise builds body and can keep them healthy.Sports also let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.On the other hand 30% students believe taking exercise is tiring and it’s a waste of time.They say that after having sports they are too excited for a long time to focus on their lessons.And it’s possible to be hurt while doing sports.4.环境问题:今天环境变得越来越糟糕环境问题影响着人们的工作学习生活等而我们的工作生活生产等又使环境污染越来越严重..........如何保护我们的环境?请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”为题写一篇短文。提示:存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重 2.砍伐森林严重 3.大气污染严重 4.白色垃圾 等 要求 : 如何改善/保护环境?至少:3---4个方面, 80字左右的。

范文: How to protect/save our environment/world? The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today.Water is polluted we have no clean water to drink Many trees are cutting down some animals is getting less and less.Some factories is poring dirty air in the sky the population is increasing faster and faster resources is getting less and less…etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health it also has a great affection in the future.people's health has been greatly affected by air noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life we need protect our world.We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere.We want to recycle reduce reuse things.Don’t waste things This saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as possible.We don’t use plastic bags.We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them.We hope our world is more and more beautiful.5.关于“人口问题 POPULATION ”

6.关于中学生使用手机的优缺点,谈谈你的看法(见2008年初中毕业写作专题复习)。范文:略

7.介绍自己的兴趣余爱好(单元四)。

8.春节习俗与计划,如何过2009年的春节,假如你是LINGLING给外国朋友JHON发一份电子邮件。

The spring Festival Dear John, The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.It is on January 1st according to the Chinese lunar calendar(中国的农历).It’s China’s New Year’s Day.So usually a month before the festival people begin to buy food clothes and decorations(装饰)for houses.About a week before the festival housewives are busy preparing the new year dinner.And they will do a lot of washing and cleaning in the houses.People who are far away on business are hurrying to return home for the new year’s family reunion(团聚).On New Year Eve each family will gather tighter eating talking and watching TV for almost the whole night.And there will be some interesting programmes on TV.The children are the happiest of all because they can get presents from parents or grandparents.On Lunar New Year’s Day after getting up people will eat dumplings.When they meet their neighbours or friends they’ll say: “Happy New Year!”

I am ready to spend with together my family on the Spring Festival I’am going to see my grandparents and friends.I ’m going to Disneyland in HONGKONG with my parents I will revise lessons do exercise every day help the old and children.Welcome to China.Waiting for your e –mail.Yours

Lingling

Happy new year to everyone!

英语书面表达

一、人物

1、以“The Most Interesting Teacher”为题，根据下面的提示，写一篇90词左右的英语短文，可以作适当的发挥。

注意：如果是女教师，则称她为“Sue”;如果是男教师，则称他为“Oliver”.1.Who is the most interesting teacher in your heart? And what does the teacher teach? 2.What is the teacher like? 3.Why do you think the teacher is the most interesting? The most interesting teacher

The Most Interesting Teacher I think my history teacher is the most interesting teacher in our school.His name is Oliver.He is a tall man with glasses.He is kind to everyone.In my mind, Oliver is the most knowledgeable person.He often tells us some interesting historical stories in class, such as Cao Cao and Liu Bei.I became interested in history when I was very young.I fell in love with Oliver and his classes.I regard Oliver as the most interesting teacher.2、Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m proud of myself”.(以“我为自己感到自豪”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不计入总词数。)（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）Use the following points as are reference(以下内容仅供参考)What kind of person are you? What makes you proud of yourself?(Give an example/examples.)Why are you proud of yourself?

I'm proud of myself I used to be a shy girl and I used to be afraid of speaking in public.But now I am outgoing.All is because of the last speech competition.I am good at English, so the teacher asked me to enter the speech competition.My classmates supported me and they were sure I could win the competition.I didn't want to let them down.So I encouraged myself to be brave.I took a deep breath and kept smiling.I practiced so }lard that I won the competition successfully.My teacher and classmates are proud of me, and I am proud of myself, too.二、假期计划

3、同学们很快就毕业了, 马上要迎来快乐的暑假和2012年的伦敦奥运会,你的心中是否充满期待?请用英语写一篇90词左右的短文, 和大家分享你心中的暑期计划.写作要求: 1.主要选择通过电视或现场看哪几种比赛项目? 最喜欢哪几位体育明星?为什么? 2.主要安排哪几项体育锻炼活动?(包括时间,地点和目的意义等)注意: 短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的相关的真实姓名,地名,校名等信息.The summer vacation and the 2012 London Olympic Games are coming.It's a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of this coming summer vacation.During these days, I'll choose to watch the Olympic Games by TV, especially I will spend my time on the table tennis, badminton and weight lifting because I like these sports.Of all the players I like Zhang Yining, Lin Dan and l.iu Xiang best.1 think they are very excellent players.As for myself, I'll also plan for several PE exercise activities.Firstly, I'll do morning exercises every morning to build up my body.Secondly, I'll play table tennis with my friends to be a second Zhang Yining.Through these activities, I believe I'll be stronger and more energetic to get prepared for the study of senior middle school.Hello, everyone!Summer vacation is coming.I'd like to talk about my plan for the summer vacation.I have two plans.The first plan is to teach stay-at-home kids in the village.I'm always looking forward to being an English teacher.I will prepare for the class and teach the children carefully.If I do it, I can get much experience about being a teacher.That will be useful for me.As for the second plan, it's to raise money for the children in Yushu.I think we should try our best to help them rebuild their new home.I am sure I can have a special and exciting vacation.Let's be helpful and useful in the summer vacation.That's all.Thank you.4、暑假是每个中学生期盼的一段时光，请你围绕如何过一个轻松、愉快、有意义的暑假，写一篇90词左右的英语短文。

注意：

1、文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名；

2、下列词汇可供参考：summer holiday, travel, do sports, do some reading, help… with housework, take part in …

A Meaningful Summer Holiday Many students maybe look forward to having a good summer holiday.I think traveling is the best choice on holiday.We could have a good rest and go to visit lots of places of interest.We could do some sports, like basketball, football and so on.What's more, we can have fun doing some reading.()f course, we can't forget to help our parents with housework.If we do something to help others who need help, we will have a more meaningful summer holiday.三、一次经历

5、在你成长的历程中，有些日子会让你开心快乐，经久难忘。请以“My Pleasant Day”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，记述你那天的活动和感受（如exciting, fun…）Ways to relax? TV, Computer, Sports, Music, Shopping… Work? Homework, Housework, Cooking, Cleaning… Other things? Enough sleep, Delicious food… 写作要求：1.参考所给提示，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。

My Pleasant Day

Yesterday I was busy, but I was really happy.After breakfast, my parents took me to the amusement park.We took some photos over there.My mother bought me a toy car.I even played the roller coaster and that made me felt excited.After leaving the amusement park, we went to visit my grandparents.I spent the whole afternoon chatting with my grandfather.My parents prepared delicious food for us.We had a wonderful dinner together.What a pleasant day it was!

6、反思可以使每个人成长进步，为未来做好计划可以铸就成功。初中的即将结束，新的高中学习将要学习将要到来。请你用英语记录下一两件最让你感动或遗憾的事，同时为你将来的生活做一点设计，下列句型可以帮助你完成作文：One thing in my mind is …., I am happy that …, It is a pity that I didn’t …., I will…

写作要求：内容真实，要点齐全，行文边贯，词数90词左右。

My life in junior school will come to an end soon.I am happy that I am going to have another chance of beginning my study again.It is a pity that I didn't study harder in the past because I spent a lot of time playing computer games.Once I even fell asleep in front of a computer.However, in last year's Paralympics, Nataliya, a ping-pong player, changed my attitude towards life.She was known as “Venus in Poland” for having only one arm and set: a good example for me.So I will take part in more activities and make more friends to make my life more meaningrul.四、英语学习

7、回想你三年的英语学习历程，丰富多彩的英语课堂活动一定给你留下了许多难忘的印象。请你以“What should we do in English class?”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做，才能使英语学习更有效。

写作提示：1.Listen to the teacher;2.Take part in activities;3.Be confident in ourselves.写作要求：1.文稿须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

2.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；3.词数：80词左右

What should we do in English class?

In English class, we should listen to the teacher carefully.This is the most important for us.When we have any questions, we should ask the teacher or classmates at once.It's necessary for us to take notes in class, too, because reading notes is helpful to review what we have learned in class.When the teacher asks us to practice English in groups, we should take an active part in the activity.We should be confident in ourselves and not be afraid of making mistakes.If we keep on working hard at English, we'll be able to be good at it one day.五、健康

8、某英语网站进行了一次中学生健康情况调查，发现很多中学生的健康状况令人担忧。主要原因有：饮食结构不合理；体育锻炼不足；理压力过大，不能与人很好地沟通等。为此，他们发起了题为“How to keep Fit”的征文活动，倡导中学生的健康生活方式。请你写一篇80词左右的短文，说明如何保持身体健康。（文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息）写作参考：

1、保持健康的重要性

2、保持健康的方法

3、谈谈你的看法

How to Keep Fit

Everyone wants to keep healthy.But how to keep fit? Firstly, you should eat more vegetables and fruits, because they are good for your body, just as the old saying, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” Secondly, you'd better go to bed early and get up early.As we all know “Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy.” Thirdly, you should do more exercise.For example, you can run in the park and the street in the morning.No sports, no life.At last, you should always try to make yourself happy.If you can do these, I think you can keep healthy.Keeping Health

Health is very important for us.Good health can make us enjoy our life and do well in everything.While poor health means nothing.So, we mus keep healthy.How to keep healthy then?

First, it is very important for us to take more fruits and vegetables because they give us enough vitamins, and we have to keep a balanced diet.So we should not eat the food with lots of sugar and fat.Second, we'd better take enough exercise every day to make our bodies strong.Besides, we should be happy every day.Finally, we have to give up those had habits such as drinking and smoking.In a word, to be in good health, we must be in high spirits and take good care of ourselves.六、毕业留言

9、初中生活即将结束，新的生活即将开启，请为你最好的同学写一段毕业留言：他（她）给你留下的深刻印象、你们在一起的快乐时光及对他（她）最美好的祝愿。

写作要求：1.可参考下图所给提示词,也可适当发挥,开头已给出(不计入总词数)2.80词左右.How time flies!We have been studying together for 3 years.You are always so happy that your smiles seem to be more shining than the sunlight.!shall never forget that monthly-examination, in which I got a really low mark.I just felt the sky was going to fall down.Just then, you came out.You comforted me a lot, which encouraged me to keep studying hard.You touched me deeply.You are so diligent a person that you certainly will have a bright future.Good luck to you.七、爱好

10、现在网络越来越发达，中学生上网的利弊已成为人们讨论的焦点。请参考下面的信息并结合自己的观点写一篇90词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。

网络的优点：课后放松，辅助学习，传递信息，开阔视野，网络交友等…

网络的缺点：上网时间长有害健康，沉迷网络游戏，不思学业，不良网站，误导学业，虚拟网络，真假难辨…

Internet plays an important role in my daily life.But it has both positive and negative points.On the one hand, surfing the Internet is very easy and it is becoming more and more popular

among teenagers.They are so interesting and enjoyable that students all love playing them.It's true that it can not only do good for the students but also be of great interest and make them happy and relaxed.On the other hand, surfing the Internet has some disadvantages.Some students are so addicted to the games that they can't get out of them, which would waste time and do harm to their study.What's more, there are some bad materials in the games or on the Internet, which would have a had influence on their health.I think that Internet is a good thing, but we also need to get rid of it sometimes.Habits Habits whether good or bad, are gradually formed.When a person does a certain thing again, he'll be obligea to it in the same way by some unseen force.Thus habit is formed.Once a habit is formed, it is difficult and sometimes almost impossible to get rid of it.It is therefore very important that we should take care in the formation of habits.Good habits have many advantages.Going to bed early and getting up early makes us healthy.Diligence helps to succeed.Honesty helps win the respect and trust of others.If we form bad habits, such as rudeness, laziness, lying and stealing,we might be ruined by them.We ought to keep away from bad habits and try to acquire habits good ourselves and others.八、关系处理

11、父母与孩子之间常有摩擦.父母想让孩子听他们的,按他们说的做,但孩子更愿意自己选择朋友,自己设计(design)未来，更加独立（independent）地生活，所以不和往往在所难免。解决（solve）这一问题的最好办法只有相互理解。孩子们应学会尊重父母，聆听他们的意见，因为他们有更丰富的人生阅历（experiences）.父母也应尽量和孩子交换（exchange）意见，不能过分地责备（scold）和打骂，那样会使孩子远离父母。把孩子当作朋友，这样他们会信任父母，会使家庭生活更幸福。

请根据中文提示，用英语写一篇短文，把以上观点正确表达出来，不少于90词

Parents and Children Parents and children often disagree with each other.Parents want their children to listen to them and do what they ask their children to do.But children want to be free to choose their friends, design their future and live a life in a more independent way.So the disagreement between them can't be avoided.The best way to solve the problem is to understand each other.Children should learn to respect their parents' opinions, for parents have richer experiences of life.Parents should also try to exchange opinions with their children.Don't scold or beat them too much.These will make them away from parents.Treat them as friends.Then children will believe in their parents.It will make family life much happier.How to Get along Well with Others

In our daily life, we have to come into contact with people in every walk of life.Therefore, it is very important for us to know how to get along with other people.To get along well with others and win their friendships, we must observe strictly the following words.To begin with, we need to be honest with others and should always say what we mean.Lies will surely make people stay far away from us in the long run.After all, honesty is the best policy.Second, we have to be humble enough.If we are proud in public, we can hardly win other's respect, not to mention “friendship”.Finally, we must not be selfish.We should learn how to show concern for others.As long as we abide by get along well with others.what mentioned above, we will find it easy

九、梦想

12、请你以未来计划为话题,根据以下提示写一篇90词左右的短文.1.你的梦想职业及居住地等 2.你做出这些选择的理由;

3.你为实现未来计划应做的努力;4.有一天你实现了你的理想,你怎样回报父母,回报社会.My Dream in the Future I have a great dream.I want to be adoctor when I grow up.I will work in the hospital in my hometown.On the one hand, to work as a doctor is very important and useful.Because a doctor can help people who are ill.And a doctor can help people to keep healthy and also help sick people enjoy their life.On the other hand, I can keep not only other people but also my family healthy.When they are ill, I can give them some advice on health.I love my hometown and I love the people there.So I want to be a doctor.At present.I must study hard so that I can learn more knowledge.Then I may go to a medical university.If I am a doctor, I will work hard and try my best to help other people.I hope my dream will come true.十、最喜爱的学科

13、My Favourite Subject My favourite subject is Chinese teacher.I like it because I have a lovely Chinese teacher.She is very kind to us.She teachers us very carefully.And her classes are very interesting and funny.In Chinese class, I always listen carefully ahd take notes.I am not afraid of making mistakes in learning.I often read Chinese novels and watch the TV program-Quiz Show after school.That not only makes me know great Chinese culture and history, but also helps me improve my Chinese skills.Thanks to my Chinese teacher, I will learn Chinese better!

English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old.But at the very beginning,listening seemed a little difficult for me.So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs.And I found it really helped a lot.In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well.For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries.I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.十一、环保

14、从2008年6月1日起，国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料供袋，从而掀起了全国性的“拒塑”环保运动。假如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment”为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。

写作提示：1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋.2.尽可能地再利用使用过的课本.3.离开教室应关灯.4.走路或骑自行车上学龄前5.简述理由: 保护环境,减少污染,节约能源等 写作要求: 1.词数90词左右

2.可根据要点适当增加细节,使文章连贯，3.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名,否则以零分处理.What Can We Do for the Environment Hello, everyone.I'm Li Hua.It's nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.What's more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.We should try our best reduce pollution and waste.In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!

第二篇：英语书面表达限时训练

英语书面表达限时训练

国内某英文报招聘兼职记者，报道2012年奥运会。假设你是李 目前在英国做交换生，想应聘这份工作，请按下列要点写一封自荐信。

1.个人情况：熟悉本地情况，有相关工作经历。

2.能力优势：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、团队合作等。

3.承诺：保证按要求完成任务。

注意：词数100-120，参考词汇：交换生 exchange student Dear Sir or Madam:,I am writing to apply for the job as a part-time repoter for The london Olympic Games.

第三篇：中考英语书面表达训练教案

一． 教学课题：

中考英语书面表达训练教案

二． 教案背景：

外研版、九年级、中考专项复习-书面表达训练。

英语书面表达题是学生比较头疼的题型。学生表达思想时往往写成了汉语式。错误多，不连贯。近几年的中考作文失分很大，有的学生还养成了抄前面阅读理解的习惯。三． 教材分析：

外研版教材每个模块后都设计了针对模块内容writing。这对于学生习作有一定的帮助，但由于题型设计与中考作文要求有差别，加之英语课时较少，有时仅用几分钟时间说说而已，甚至是放弃。缺少系统的练习，学生对作文有畏惧心理，写作方面的障碍自然就多了。

四．教学方法：

本节课针对学生作文练习少，对作文有恐惧心理的特点，设计了低层次，小梯度练习。从句子结构、动词的时态、常用作文的开头、结尾，到作文实战练习，中考作文评析、作文修改。采用自主练习、小组互评、范文共赏的形式调动学生写作的积极性。五． 教学过程： 导入：

Step1：同学们，今天我们针对书面表达题进行专项复习。书面表达题就是要求同学们针对题目的要求用英语写作文，我们在日常作文

中主要出现的错误有： 1.句子结构错误。

eg.I very like music.→I like music very much.I am want to be a doctor.→ I want to be a doctor.2.动词时态、语态使用不当。

eg.He goes to the hospital last Sunday.→

He went to the hospital last Sunday.She chose to give a speech at the party.→ She was chosen to give a speech at the party.3.词汇运用错误。名词、动词、形容词、副词/连词等，也包含短语、不定式使用不当。

eg.They had to work very hardly when they were young.→

They had to work very hardly when they were young.Discuss:小组讨论一下，平时自己在作文过程中常出现的错误。Step2:师：怎样减少出错呢？首先让我们看一下常用的句子结构。句子成分可分为主语,谓语,宾语,表语,定语,状语,同位语。但我们常用的简单句的结构有： 主语 + 谓语(及物动词)+ 宾语 People enjoy music.主语 + 谓语(不及物动词)He often swims in a river.主语 + 系动词 + 表语 You look lovely.I’m impressed.所以我们下笔时要分清句中的主语、谓语、宾语、表语，注意他们的位置。

小组活动：请同学们翻译下列句子。

1.她母亲是一位教师。（Her mother is a teacher.）

2.昨天汤姆去了网球俱乐部。（Tom went to a table tennis club.）Step3：师：接下来让我们讨论一下怎样减少动词时态或语态错误。

生：关键是确定文章的要求，是记叙过去的事还是描写现在或将来的事。

师：很对，2009年潍坊市初中学业水平考试考试书面表达题的要求是：丰富多彩的初中生活即将结束，有哪件事情让你至今印象深刻，甚至难以忘怀？请以An unforgettable experience为题，写一篇英语短文。你们觉得应该用什么时态来写呢？

生：多用动词的一般过去时态。

师：很好。

Step4: 当然文章写作自然有一些常用的开头、结尾可以借鉴。那么常用的开头有： 1.时间开头法：

eg.Today is Thursday,----------

It is 7 o’clock , my father is reading newspaper.2.天气开头法： eg.It was rainy today.It happened on a wet day of July.3.开门见山：

eg.Last weekends we went out for a walk.4.名言引人：

eg.When in Rome, do as the Romans do.------------------常用的结尾有： 1.总结法

eg.Tough we were tired, we felt very tired.2.发出号召或倡议

eg.I’m proud of what I’ve learned.If everyone makes a contribution to protecting our environment , our world will become much more beautiful.3.表达祝愿

eg.I hope you will have a wonderful time.师：当然常用的开头结尾还有不少，希望同学们多总结学习。Step5最后，作文的关键还在于审题：一定要读懂要求。如要求写得体裁、字数、必须包含的内容、书写等等。我们就以2010年潍坊市中考英语试题为例：大家热热身：

某英语网站进行了一次中学生健康情况调查，发现很多中学生的健康状况令人担忧。主要原因有：饮食结构不合理；体育锻炼不足；心理压力大，不能与人很好地沟通等等。为此，他们发起了题为How Io Keep Fit的征文活动，倡导中学生的健康生活方式。请你写一篇 80词左右的英语短文，说明如何保持身体健康。（文中不要出现作者

本人的真实信息）

小组活动：把写好的作文在小组之内交流，选出写得较好的在班内展示。

（小组优秀者到讲台读自己文章）Step6.Sum-up

这节课我们学习了书面表达题的一些解题技巧，当然在实际学习中还需要不断的总结练习，如养成记笔记的习惯。学生个人总结自己学习体会。Step7.Homework:

我们以2011年潍坊市初中学业水平考试作文题为作业：

假设你是某文杂志的“知心姐姐”（Agony Sister）, Helen, 请阅读下面的这封求助信，并根据信的内容写一封回信。要求：1.80词左右；2.文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。

Dear Helen, Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the park.I wanted to take some photos.My father was out at that time, so I took his camera without telling him.Unfortunately, the camera was out of my bag and dropped on the ground when I was climbing the hill.It didn’t work at all.I put it back quietly after I returned home.And I haven’t told him till now.when I face to my father, I feel terrible.What should I do?

Yours, David

Dear David ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes，Helen

六．教学反思：

本节课我从学生习作易出现的错误入手，分析出错的原因，进行及时的练习。开头结尾进行了适当的总结，小组之内交流合作。以潍坊市近三年中考作文为题例，让学生感受中考作文的要求、难度。不足之处是学生练习时间相对少一些。

七．教学资源

2010年山东省潍坊市初中学业水平考试写作答案（满分15分）One possible version: How to Keep Fit

As we all know，health is very important．But how to keep fit? Firstly, we should have a good diet．That’s eating more fresh fruit and vegetables, but less junk food.Drink more water instead of coke or other unhealthy drinks.Secondly, it's good for us to take more exercise, such as running, walking, ball games and so on.At last, we should learn to relax ourselves.We can listen to some light music, chat with families or friends and have a good sleep.To keep fit is not difficult if you care it a lot.评分标准：词数在70—100之间；如果少于70词，应酌情扣分。1．内容充实、语言流畅，能恰当地运用较复杂句式及习惯用法等，语法、拼写错误极少（13—15分）：

2．较通顺完整，有少量语法、拼写错误（10—12分）； 3．基本要点写出，有稍多语法、拼写错误（6—9分）； 4．篇幅不足，错误较多，语句小通顺（3—5分）； 5．双写了个别句子或单词（0—2分）。

2011年潍坊市初中学业水平考试英 语 试 题 写作答案及评分标准： One possible version: Dear David, First, I think you'd better tell your father immediately.It you tell him the truth, he'll be angry with you.But at least you'll prove how honest you are.Then I think you should offer to pay.But you shouldn't use your pocket money.Yes, a camera is expensive, maybe you can't afford it.If you offer to do some jobs around the house, he'll realize that you're truly sorry.Oh, remember to be careful next tune.Best wishes, Helen 评分标准：词数在60—100之间；如果少于60词，应酌情扣分。

1.内容充实、语言流畅，能恰当地运用较复杂句式及习惯用法等，语法、拼写错误极少（13—15分）；

2.较通顺完整，有少量语法、拼写错误（10—12分）； 3.基本要点写出，有较多语法、拼写错误（6—9分）； 4.篇幅不足，错误较多，语句吧通顺（3—5分）； 5.只写了个别句子或单词（0—2分）。

第四篇：英语书面表达

寒假作业Chinese Young People’s Life Goals Today

A recent survey shows that in today’s society, Chinese young people’s life goals have become more diversified than before.When young people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn enough money to buy a house and a car for themselves.In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goal as improving their life quality or to be rich while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job.As for how to achieve their life goals, most of them prefer struggling to realize their dreams.The survey shows that the society is making progress and people’s life goals have become more practical.A recent investigation shows that nowadays the young in China have more diversified goals than ever before.More than half of the respondents aim at making more money to buy themselves a car and a house.44% of them want to improve their living standard while 43.3% of them hope to become rich.Besides, about a quarter of them wish to get a good job in the future.To achieve their goals, 71.9% of these young people said that they would struggle to overcome difficulties on their ways to success.Keeping optimistic

We can know from the passage if we are optimistic we can conquer different kinds of difficulties in life when we meet them, and we will succeed in the end.In my study, I will get discourage when I fail in an exam.I think I’m hopeless and can’t go to my ideal university.Whenever I am in bad mood, my teachers, especially my homeroom teacher, encourages me to be optimistic by saying the proverb “Nothing is too difficult if you put your heart into it.” They also tell me to study harder and give me good advice on my study.I’m grateful to them and agree with them.From now on, I’ll no longer feel frustrated when I fail in an exam.On the contrary, I will still keep optimistic and study harder because I know failure is the mother of success.As long as I don’t loose heart and work hard, I’m sure I’ll succeed in the end.第三周：基础写作：

上周六下午，你们宿舍几个同学去森林公园野炊，回来途中淋了雨。晚上李华头疼得厉害。你给她量体温，发现她发高烧。你马上带她去看医生。医生说她得了重感冒，要卧床休息三天。请你代她给刘老师写一张请假条说明情况，并帮她请假两天（周一、周二），因此她不能参加周二的羽毛球比赛了。

Last Saturday afternoon, I went to Forest Park for a picnic with my roommates.Unfortunately we were caught in the rain on our way home and Li Hua got a dreadful headache.I took her temperature, finding that she was having a fever.So I took her to see the doctor right now and she was advised to be in bed for 3 days.Now I’d like to ask for two days’ sick leave for her, including Monday and Tuesday, and therefore she cannot take part in the badminton game on Tuesday

任务型写作

总结：The writer tried to tell us the importance of setting goals through a beaver’s story.After it built a house for the winter, it set another goal for the spring—to chew down a big tree and succeeded by working hard.你认为制订目标很重要吗？The quest for success always begins with a target.Goal setting is the focus of will to move in a certain direction.Without goals, one will never know what he’s doing, neither will he try his best to do it.你认为制订目标后怎样才能成功？There goes the saying, “Hard work leads to success.” If we want to achieveour goals, we must work hard.Also, we should stick to our goals and never give up when we are faced with setbacks.举例:Last year I took part in an English speech contest.At the beginning I made up my mind to perform best though my English was not good enough.I tried every means and even stood in front of the mirror to practise again and again.Finally I succeeded and become one of the 10 students in the final competition.第四周：基础写作

社会实践是学校教育的一个重要组成部分；书本知识有限；社会实践有诸多好处，能用所学的知识解决实际问题，获取经验，了解社会，端正学习态度，激励学习。

Most of the students think that social practice is not important.In fact social practice is an important part of school education.After all the knowledge we obtain from books is limited.Participation in social practice does a lot of good to us.For example, We can apply what we’ve learned to practical problems, from which we can get more

experience and have more knowledge about our society.Thus we will take correct attitude towards our studies and work harder.任务型写作

总结：From this passage,we know sometimes difficult conditions can really make a man strong, so parents should let their children eat bitter foods, do hard work and experience a hard life.描述你的童年生活 I grew up in an ordinary family, which is notso well off.I could understand the hardshipsmy parents were bearing at that time.Therefore, I work very hard now in the hopeof entering the university and changing thesituation of my family and me.你对童年生活的认识 我认为从某种意义上来说，艰苦的环境可以激发一个人的潜能，为他的成功铺平道路。I think that in a certain sense, difficult situations can stimulate a person’s potential and pave the way for him to succeed.一个人在经历了磨难之后可以变得坚强，勇敢和忠实可靠。One can be strong, brave and faithful after all the hardships he has gone through.总而言之，我认为温室里的花朵经受不起风暴的洗礼，艰苦的生活对孩子来说是有好处的。All in all, I think that flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm and that a hard life is good for children.第四周周六下午

热爱社会工作，性格乐观，富有爱心和责任心；英语口语流利，具有相关的教学经验；工作时间：周六和周日，按每小时5元付费；这份工作给自己在经济和人际关系方面的好处；:表达自己做好工作的决心：把快乐和舒适带给自己工作的对象。

Dear Sir or Madam

I cannot wait to join in the social workers team in our neighborhood.Being optimistic, caring and responsible, I develop a passion for social work.Besides, I am so fluent in spoken English that I was once invited to teach a group of young kids English last summer.What’s more, I have no class on both Saturday and Sundays.If I’m lucky to get the position, It not only provides me a regular source of income by paying me 5 yuan by the hour but also does a lot to improve my skills in interpersonal relationships.It is certain that I will do what I can to bring joy and comfort to whomever I work for.I’m looking forward to your reply very soon.Sincerely yours

Ling ming

就学校取消高三音乐课这一事件给校长写一封信

Dear principal ,I am writing in answer to the decision the school made several days ago.It reminds me of the British school where music plays a big part.In Britain,pupils can study an instrument like the piano or violin or the guitar.They also play music together as a class and have fun, even take part in concerts and organize bands.同学们对学校取消音乐课意见不一Therefore, no sooner had the school announced not to offer music lessons to Senior Two and Three students than we held a heated discussion about its advantages and disadvantages.So far, there has been no consensus on it.你对此决定赞成或反对？Personally, I am among those who argue against the decision largely because music lesson provide us with an opportunity to relieve our heavy academic pressure and promote the mutual understanding between students.（理由)以你自己或他人的感受来说明开设音乐课的利或弊。Actually, nothing please me than music lessons, for I am completely relaxed, not caring about study for a while.Also, I am ready to bear my heart to my classmates and feel close to each other.It is the charm of music that brings all of us a realization that there is still joy in our dull life.So it is better to continue music lessons

汕头一模

1.为何与人合作：现代社会必备；可省时间和精力；更多互相学习的机会

2.与谁合作：A与喜欢的人合作：心情愉快，同甘共苦B与不喜欢的人合作：学会容忍，学会挖

掘其优点

3.你的看法：倾听别人意见，不把你的观点强加给别人，有礼貌地指出别人的错误

Good afternoon,everyone!the topic of my speech today is “being a good parner.”In this busy ,modern world ,if we want to complete our work more efficiently ,we must all learn to cooperate with others ,because not only can cooperation save us a lot of time and energy ,but also we can learn much each other.We`ll be lucky enough to find someone we like to cooperate with due to the fact that we can share our joy and sadness with him.however ,it can be difficult to cooperate with someone we dislike.In this case ,we`ll have to put up with some of his shortcomings and try to discover his advantages.In my opinion ,to be a good partner ,we should try to listen to others`opinions ,never force our ideas on others and if he makes mistakes ,try to point out in a polite way.Thank you for your listening!

失败是件坏事吗？

概括短文要点Failure is a commom thing in life.But there are different attitudes towards failure.Whoever draws a lesson from every failure becomes experienced and succeeds.失败并非坏事，但从失败中站起来并非易事So failure has a different effect on anyone who has a different attitude.As for me ,I like success.Meanwhile I don`t mind failure because it isn`t a bad matter ,and we cen stand up in the failure ,which isn`t indeed an easy matter.失败对胜利者是必修课，重要的基本功As is known ,the defeat to a victor is actually an important basic skill and the required course.你对失败的看法和态度(1)In my opinion ,we should take a positive attitude towards failure.As a matter of fact ,I think failure can stimulate our potential and from it we can learn a lot ,with which we can achieve success.Just as the saying goes ,”Failure is the mother of success.”

(2)In my opinion ,we should take an active attitude towards failure ,because most of us experience the failure thongh few of us are so lucky as to succeed.Failure tells us such things as why we failed and what should we do to correct the mistakes.Failure also tells us how to approach our goals and ensures us failure is the mother of success.广州一模

基础写作简介学校的植物园

1.概况：位于校园西南角，面积1000平方米 2.历史：20年的历史，2008年重建 3.特色：各种花卉、树木、药用植物 4.功能：美化校园、研究植物场所、休闲之地 5.其他：观赏至少许一小时

Located at the south-west corner of our school, the botanical garden is spread over an area of approximately 1000 square meters.The garden is over 20 years old and was rebuilt in 2008.as you walk through the garden, you can see various kinds of beautiful flowers, trees and herbs.If you’re planning to explore the garden, set aside at least one hour.The garden makes our schoool more beautiful and it’s a fantastic place for students to study and learn more about plants or simply to relax for a while.读写任务就学生违纪的处理方式写一篇简评

(1)Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?

概括要点：校长的做法、想法、结果I recentl I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students.The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance.His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.你是否支持该校长的做法，理由While I congratulate the headmaster on his success I do not agree with the methods he uses to achieve it.Suspending students should be the final type of punishment used for misbehaving students, not the first.Quickly removing such students from the school may be of some benefit to the remaining students but it doesn’t solve the problem of poor behaviour.It only shifts the problem from the school to the community.If these naughty students are not in school then they will only be making trouble out of school.Moreover, as the parents of many of these students are working, the students are unsupervised and thus are in danger of falling in with local criminals who will only encourage such bad behaviour and even teach them worse things.假设你是校长，你会如何处理违纪学生？If I was in charge of his school I would place the naughty students in a class of their own, this way the other students could study in peace but the naughty studetns could remain under the supervision of the school and its teachers.The teachers in the naughty class would also have more time to focus on correcting the actions of these misbehaving students.（2）Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?

I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students.The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance.His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.I believe the headmaster is correct to take this action.If a few students are always behaving poorly in class then it will negatively affect other students’ learning.As a result, many innocent studetns will suffer and they will fail to achieve their full potential.If the naughty students are removed from the class then the others can learn in peace.Hopefully the misbehaving students will learn their lessons and when they return their behaviour will be better.If I was in charge of a school I would also be very strict with students who don’t behave well.I would first warn and then suspend students who interrupt the learning of others or disrespect their teachers.But I would also visit the poor student’s home and discuss the problem with his paents so we could find a solution.梅州一模写一篇短文介绍大豆的生长过程

1.发芽的条件：水分充足，温度适宜，种子就开始发芽了 2.第一步：出现幼根，并朝下生长 3.第二步：幼苗出现，并朝上生长，直至变成绿色 4.第三步：主根、旁根、枝叶出现 5.第四步：数月后开花结果

Where there is enough water and the temperature is right, the bean seed begins to grow.In the first stage , a small root comes out and begins to grow downwards.Then a small shoot begins to grow upswards, getting longer and longer until it turns green.At the same time the root continues to grow downward, becoming the main root together with side roots developing around it while the shoot develops leaves all around.It takes only a few months before the plant flowers and bears fruit.经济危机，大学生就业难

概括材料主要内容This passage mainly tells us…;The story is mainly about…

Increasing unemployment would the biggest challenge for China this year with great numbers of rural and urban workers laid off.The government has launched a stimulus package of 4 trillion yuan to stimulate the country’s economy.现状：经济危机影响全球，就业机会少，工人工资低As it is known to all, nearly all countries in the world have been hit by the global economic crisis, leaving few job chances and lower wages and salaries for ordinary people.建议：树立正确的择业观，降低预期工资，先就业再择业，自己创业，开公司，展示自己的才华Under this circumstance, university graduates should have a proper attitude towards their future jobs.It is my suggestion that they should lower their expectation of their future wages or salaries.It’s a good idea for them to take up a job before considering which job to take.To make good advantage of tehir knowledge, they may set up their own business so as to show off their own talent.政府提供各种优惠政策，免除各种税费，提供一定数量的无息贷款In order to help those new graduates, the government has offered many favorable policies such as freeing all kinds of taxes.Supplying certain amount of loans without interest.I’m sure they will succeed and can have a bright future with the help of the government.

第五篇：英语书面表达

2014年济宁市中考英语书面表达

假设你是李华，已报名参加暑期英语夏令营，根据夏令营之活动安排，你需要准备一份关于英语夏令营英语阅读方面的发言稿，具体要求如下：

1.对英语阅读重要性的认识；

2.个人开展英语阅读的情况（1-2点具体做法）及感悟；

3.将来的打算。

参考词汇：play an important part;in the past;borrow books;at the beginning;something easy and interesting, in the future, form a good habit of;read everyday;be helpful for.要求：1.词数，100词左右；（开头已给出，不计入总词数；）

2.可根据具体要求及参考词汇适当发挥；

3.文中不得出现真实姓名。

Good morning, everybody,I’m pleased to be here to talk about my English reading.As we know, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Thanks for your listening.