第一篇:最新高考英语满分作文(应用文书信)
最新高考英语满分作文汇编(应用文书信)
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。注意:
1.词数:100左右:
2.参考词汇:房租€€Tent(n.).I'm very happy to receive your letter, and I'm glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here.I have already found a fiat for you.It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School.The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen.There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I'll try my best to meet your needs.If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!All the best!Yours, Li Hua 满分理由
本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以'which,'引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。Dear Bob, Welcome to China!You wrote to me to find a place for you.I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School.It is on the third floor and there're three rooms in it: a bedroom, a
...kitchen, and a bathroom.There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom.The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Also from this house you can get to your school easily.Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building.It is only one stop.At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I'U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.Best wishes!Yours, Li Hua 满分理由
本文格式正确,内容完整,表述清楚,衔接紧密流畅,时态语态使用准确,特别是结尾末段适度的发挥,既充实了内容,又符合逻辑,成为本文与众不同的亮点。Dear Bob, How are you these days? I'm so glad to know that you'll come to our city to learn Chinese.You asked me to find a place for you.Now I've found one which I think is pretty good.The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop.It's just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom.Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable.By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month.I hope you'll like it.If not, I'll try to find another place for you.Yours, Li Hua 满分理由
本文内在逻辑性很强,由远及近。由外及内,层次分明,错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处,很出彩,再则结构完整,从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。作文:
...Dear Bob, I'm glad to hear from you.Welcome to our city in september.I've found a suitable house for you.The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School.If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.It is a flat on the third floor of a building.It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen.You can cook yourself.The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you.In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair.The desk is next to the window.It will be good for study.The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know.I'll try my best to help you.Yours, Li Hua 满分理由
本文内容详实,描述具体细腻,用词适当准确,如“suitable house”、"not far from''等,另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。
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第二篇:高考各类应用文满分
Writing| 高考各类应用文满分范文十篇
1.感谢信
假设你是李华,梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学深造,现在你已经被悉尼大学化学学院录取,请写封信向梁教授表示感谢。Dear Professor Liang, I am writing to extend my gratitude to you.Because of your help,now I am a student of Chemistry Department of Sydney University.Last June, when I applied to become a graduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuable help.You not only wrote a recommendation(推荐)for me to Professor Wells who works in the Sydney University,but also gave me careful and patient instructions on how to fill the application forms and write the application letters.It is your unreserved(无保留的)help that enables me to obtain this excellent opportunity of further education.For the following two years I will study hard to reward you for your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades.Yours truly, Zhang Ying 2.道歉信
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游,但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件: 1.表示歉意;2.解释原因;3.另约时间。Dear Tom, I'm very sorry that I can't go on a trip to Beijing with you next week end, which I have promised you.I'm writing to tell you the reason for it.Just now, my cousin, Li Ming, who went abroad for further education last year, informed me that he would return the next Saturday morning.He asked me to pick him up at the airport with his parents.As you know, we haven’t seen each other for about a year, so I’ll have to help him in the first place.I really hope that you can accept my apologies and understand me.I would appreciate it if you allow me to fix another time to show you around some places of interest in Beijing.Wish you have a good time this weekend!
Yours,Li Ming 3.申请信
假定你是李华,从互联网((the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);3.希望获准。Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China.I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it.I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English.What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Looking forward to your reply!
Yours 4.通知
假如你是校学生会主席。新年即将到来,为了帮助你校的外国留学生更好地了解中国文化,学生会将为他们举办一个新年晚会。请你根据以下提示,用英语向他们发出口头通知。时间:下周五6:00—8:00地点:教学楼101室 内容:1.唱中国歌
2.比赛用筷子
3.学习包饺子
Good afternoon, everyone.May I have your attention, please?
I'm the chairman of the Students' Union.As the New Year is around the corner(即将到来), we are going to hold a New Year party for you, which is intended to enable you to have a better understanding of Chinese culture.During the party, not only can you sing a Chinese song, but you will also compete with each other to see how skilled you are at using chopsticks.What's more, you'll learn at the party how to make dumplings.It sounds great,doesn't it? The party is scheduled(计划安排)in Room 101 of the Teaching Building from 6:00 p.m.to 8:00 p.m.next Friday.Please make sure you won't miss it.Thank you for your attention.5.邀请信
你们班同学打算周六去爬香山。请给外教Chris写一封英文信,邀请他参加此次活动。具体内容如下:1.时间:8am—5 pm;2.集合地点:校门口;3.交通工具:公交车; 4.携带物品:雨具,午餐,相机。Dear Chris,I'm writing to tell you that we intend to climb the Fragrant Hill this Saturday and I sincerely invite you to go with us on behalf of our class.We are supposed together at the school gate and set out at 8:00 am.The bus will serve as our transportation.We will climb to the top of the hill and enjoy our picnic lunch there, so please take some food with you as lunch.At about 2:00 pm.we will go down the hill along another path and return to our school at about 5.00 pm.You may equip yourself with a camera to record the beautiful scenery and an umbrella or a raincoat is also necessary in case you are caught in a rain.Please spare some time to join us.Your participation can surely add color to our trip and we are all looking forward to your involvement.Yours,Joe 6.建议信
假定你是李华,你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见.请你依据以下内容给主编写封信,内容主要包括:
1.说明你是该报的忠实读者
2.说明该报优点: 1)兼顾国内外新 2)介绍名人成功故事
3.建议:刊登指导英语学习的文章 Dear Editor-in-Chief, Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!I'm a regular reader of your newspaper.I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy.There are many advantages of Global Mirror.Firstly, Global Mirror covers both national and international news.By simply turning the pages, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad.Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them.In a word, thanks to Global Mirror, we are well-informed and keep up with the changing world.As a young student, I wish that I can be a master of English language.Therefore, I suggest that Global Mirror provide articles about English learning for us.Finally, I hope that Global Mirror will become more and more popular.Thank you for your time!
Sincerely yours,Li Hua 7.求助信
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest),你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件:1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况;2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙;3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。Dear Tom,How is it going these days? I keep wondering how you feel about your school life in Beijing.Have you got used to the life in China? Are you enjoying your life? I hope you are.Let me tell you a piece of good news: I'm going to take part in an English speech contest of middle school students in July in the coming summer vacation.So I'm busy preparing for it.But now I have some difficulty in collecting useful information and using proper English words to express my thoughts.Besides, I really want to improve my spoken English, especially the pronunciation and intonation(语调).Of course, as a native English speaker, you can give me some suggestions.In addition, I'm going to visit you after the contest.I'm sure we will have a wonderful time together in Beijing!I can hardly wait to see you!I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua 8.投诉信
你是李华,两周前你从网上一套书虫系列读物(BookwormSeries)昨天才到货,且包装破损,数量不足。请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。要点如下: 1.介绍购物情况2.反映存在问题
3.提出解决方案 To whom it may concern, I am one of your customers I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn't receive them until yesterday.And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn.To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem.I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me.Besides, I'd like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.Looking forward to your reply.Sincerely,Li Hua 9.祝贺信
假如你是李华,你的好友魏芳在中学生英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容,给她写一封祝贺信。内容包括:1.表达你的愉悦心情;2.向她表示祝贺3.请她介绍成功的经验。Dear Wei Fang, I hear that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of Middle School Students, so I'm writing to give my sincere congratulations.You don't know how excited I was when I heard the good news.As your best friend, I am proud of you!Your pronunciation and fluent English left me with deep impression.It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest.Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning English.I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua 10.求职信
假如你是李华,从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构Mid.Senior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员,负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。
ASSISITANTS WANTED Valuable chances are open for high school graduates who are good at English.Their work is to tend the senior students during the break.
Requirements attached:1.Good at English.2.Experienced priority. Contact us by e-mail:Englishtec@163.com. 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Director: I'd like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper.I found this position quite appealing(吸引人的)to me.I've just graduated from high school.Luckily, I am good at English and I can speak English fluently.In addition, I have previous experience.During my stay in middle school, I used to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work.I'm available(有空的)for interview at any time.It would be appreciated if I can get your offer.Sincerely,Li Hua
第三篇:高考英语作文书信
(一)书信 概述
书信是人们在日常生活和工作中进行交际的工具,也是高考书面表达中常见的考试文体。由于民族语言和习惯上的差异,英语信件在书写格式及表达方式上与汉语不大一样,有些地方迥然不同。本章将向大家介绍一般格式及各种常见信件,如家信、祝贺信、道歉信及自荐信等。
一般格式
英文书信的构成可分为8个部分: 信头(Heading)日期(Date)收信人姓名及地址(Inside Name and Address)称呼(Salutation)信文(Body of the letter)结束语(Complimentary close)署名(Signature)附言(P.S.)(1)信头(Heading)信头是指发信人的单位名称或地址。一般情况下发信人只需把自己的地址写(打字,手写均可)在信的右上角,离开信纸的顶头约1英寸,占二三行或四行均可,格式如下:
①齐头式
②缩进式
注意:写地址的次序与中文不同,应先写门牌号码街道,然后城市和国名。写地址时采用齐头或缩进式,以及每行后要不要加标点符号,都没有固定的规定。如写给经常往来的亲友,这项地址也可以省略。
(2)日期(Date)写日期注意下列各点:
①年份应写全,例如不能用“07”来代替“2007”;
②月份应写英文名称,除May, July外,可用缩写,如:Sep., Oct.。但不要用数字来代替,如7/4/99 或7,4,99,因为在英国此日期代表 7th April,2007,而美国则代表4th July,2007。
③日期可用1,2,3,4„11,12„21,22„31等,也可用lst,2nd,3rd,4th„11th,21th„22nd„31st等。
日期的几种写法: a.July 7,2007 b.1st October,2007 c.30 Nov., 2006 d.Sep.3rd, 2007 ④特别注意英文书信日期应紧接着写信人地址下一行,不能像写中文书信那样写在书信签名之后,这是很多学生的常见错误。
精选范文 ①
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(3)收信人姓名及地址(Inside Name and Address)写信人的地址和日期写好以后,接着就要写收信人的姓名和地址,一般的事务信件或给较生疏的朋友的信件要写,而在给极熟的朋友的信中则可省去。这一项写在日期下一行的左上角。收信人姓名写一行,收信人地址可分两行或三行写,和写信人的地址一样,上下可取齐,也可以向右缩进。在姓名前一般要加上称号,称号因人而异。
①对普通男子用Mr; ②对未婚女子用Miss;
③对已婚女子用Mrs,对婚姻状况不明确的通常用Ms(后跟本人姓); ④对男子用Master;
⑤对教授或博士(医生)用Prof.或Dr. 精选范文
(4)称呼(Salutation)称呼指的是信文开头的那种称呼,如Dear , Mr, Uncle,各种称呼因人而异。在称呼后面一般是用逗号,但也有用冒号的。现归纳如下:
①对父母、兄弟、姐妹等; a.Father, b.My dear Mother, c.Dear Sister, d.Dear Tom, ②对亲戚:
a.My dear Auntie, b.Dear Cousin, c.My dear Cousin, ③对朋友、同学
a.My dear friend, b.Dear Mr Jackson, c.My dear Mr Jackson, d.Dear Sir, ④对未婚女子: a.Dear Miss Luce, b.My dear Miss Luce, ⑤对一般女子,不论是否结婚: a.Madame, b.Dear Madame, ⑥对已婚女子:
a.Dear Mrs Helen Jackson, b.My dear Mrs Helen Jackson, ⑦对公司、工厂、学校等: a.Dear Sirs, b.Sirs, c.Gentlemen,(5)信文(Body of the letter)信文是信件的主体部分,也就是信的内容。正文应在称呼下两行开始。信的开头第一个字母通常和称呼开头第一个词平齐。也有往后退四个或八个字母的。下面介绍一些开头语和结尾语。
开头语
①相当于中文的“敬君者”。a.I beg to inform you that„
b.I beg to take this opportunity to inform you that „ c.I have the honor to address you that„
d. I write in a hurry to inform you that„ e.I have the pleasure to tell you that„ f.I'm very much delighted to inform you that„ ②相当于中文的“接读某月某日来信,一切知悉”。
a.I thank you very much for your letter of May 20th „ b.Your letter of May 20th has been received with thanks.c.It gives me great pleasure to receive your kind of May 20th.d.In answer to your kind letter of May 20th, I deeply regret that „ e.I have received your kind letter of May 20th.f.Words can't express my delight on finding your favor of yesterday on my desk this morning.g.Your letter dated May 20th has been received.结尾语 采用三种方法:
①采用分词短语:句末用逗号,不用句号。例如: a.Waiting for your good news, b.Looking forward to your early reply, c.Hoping to hear from you soon, d.Hoping you are enjoying good health, e.Regretting that I can't give you a more favorite reply, f.Regretting the trouble I'm causing you, g.Wishing you every success, h.Wishing you a pleasant journey, i.Wishing you a happy New Year, ②采用介词短语,例如: a.With best regards, b.With kind regards to your family, c.With best wishes to you and yours, d.With best wishes for your success and happiness, e.With best wishes for your success in your new field of work, f.With best regards and wishing you all success, g.With warmest regards, h.With best regards to you and your family, i.With the season's greetings, ③采用完整句子:
a.We are waiting for your good news.b.I hope to receive your early reply.c.We look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.d.I thank you very much for your services, and wish your continued success.(6)结束语(Complimentary Close)结束语的一般写法如下: ①业务书信常用: Yours faithfully, Faithfully yours, Yours truly,Truly yours, Sincerely yours, ②公函常用: Yours respectfully, Respectfully yours, Yours sincerely, ③私人书信常用: Sincerely yours, Yours very sincerely, Yours affectionately, Yours ever,④给亲戚朋友的信常用: Love, All my love,Your(ever)loving son/daughter/cousin , etc.Your affectionate nephew, lovingly, Lovingly yours,(7)署名(Signature)下面是署名的例子: ①个人署名: truly, W.J.Watson Yours faithfully, ②公司署名:
Legend Computer Company Wang Lin Sales Manager(8)附言(Postscript)发信人有时在写完信后又想起一件比较重要的事没有说,可以在信末署名下面几行写上,P.S.(Postscript 的缩写),然后将要补充的话写上。不过要注意写信时最好将事情一次讲清楚,尽量少用或不用P.S.。
以上英文书信结构8个部分在信内的位置如下: 精选范文 ①
Hankou Road Shanghai, China 12th Feb., 1982 The Registrar Oxford University England Dear Sir,I wish enter an Oxford College to study for an Arts degree in English Literature.I enclose a list of my qualifications, and you will see what I have been studying at„University for the last three years.I have, of course, No English examination qualifications.Could you kindly suggest which of the various colleges would be most likely to receive my application so that I can apply to them individually?
Looking forward to an early reply, I remain,Yours truly, Denis Green
P.S.Kindly send me a syllabus.②生日贺信 Dear Bob,Tomorrow is your birthday.I imagine your family is planning a celebration for you.I write this letter to offer you my heartiest congratulations and best wishes for merry returns of the day.With my sincere wishes for your success,Yours truly,Tom
③圣诞节及新年贺信 Dear Mary and Helen,A merry Christmas and a Happy Year to you!Allow me to offer you Season Greetings.May the New Year will bring you a bright and prosperous(繁荣)future.My family who are well and happy, join me in my good wishes.Yours very sincerely,Barbara
④感谢信 Dear Sir,With feelings of deep gratitude I address you to give my
thanks for your noble and generous efforts by which my son was saved from the lake.Surely,if it had not been for your help, my son would not be alive now.I shall be most happy to have a chance of serving you in return.I extend you again a thousand thanks for the great favor.Yours faithfully,Wang Bing
⑤ Dear Harry,I expect to leave Shanghai for Nanjing next Monday and intend to stay there for a month or so.You told me you had been there for a long time and knew a lot of people.I, therefore, shall thank you if you will kindly let me have one or two letters of introduction to them as I am an entire stranger in that place.Yours, John
⑥申请信(申请作为研究助理)Dear Sir,I'm a graduate student in the Physics Department of Qinghua University.Recently I read that you are hiring an assistant to do research on
solar physics.As you can see from my re' sume'(简历).I have had experience in this field.I'm very interested in your project and hope to work with you.My telephone number is 83745102.Thank you for your consideration.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely, Wang Ling
练习
①假定你的名字是李桦,你给World Youth杂志寄去了你的姓名住址,征求笔友。下面是你收到的一封信,请给此信写一封约100字的回信。(2007)South Street Epping T33 B54 UK
6th Jan.,2007
Dear Li Hua,I got your name and address from “World Youth”and I would like to be your penfriend.I am a boy of 14.I live with my parents in Epping, a town near London.I go to the Epping School.I'm in form 2.This term we have maths, physics, biology, history, English and physical education.For my foreign language I take French.I would like to take Chinese only they don't teach it here.After school I like playing football and I am on the school team.I also like collecting stamps.Can you send me some Chinese stamps?
Please write and tell me about yourself and your school.Your new friend,Alex Baker
②英语杂志 BBC ENGLISH有一专栏“Can I help you?”专门解答读者提出的英语问题。专栏编者叫Jill Welfare(女)。该杂志社地址是:BBC English Magazine, P.O.Box76, Bush House, London WC2B 4PH, U.K.假定你叫李红,是北京第一中学高三学生。现由你写一封信到该杂志社请教以下两个问题:
a.你的老师认为应该说:“He is taller than I.”但你听到有人说:“He is taller than me.”你想知道哪个对及为什么?
b.你想知道further和farther在意义上、用法上是完全一样,还是有什么不同?
注意:
a.只要把该问题的问题问清楚,不要翻译试题说明。(字数:80~120)b.不要在信中使用自己的真实姓名和地址。参考词语 have„to ask mean the same thing
③假定你的名字是魏勇,住在北京东长安街233号。
今年6月份,美国青年学生Jack Gooper随青年访华团访问北京。最后一天在青年宫举行告别会(farewell party)。你参加了,坐在Jack Cooper旁边,散会时你和他互相拿错了对方的笔记本(notebook)。事后你翻看笔记本,发现他的名字地址,才知道拿错了。现在你把笔记本寄回去给他,写一封简单的信说明,同时请他把你的笔记本按你所给的地址寄来给你。(字数:80~140)参考词语
take„by mistake look into by post at the address
④假定你叫李霞,是天津市第二中学高三年级学生,你在阅读英文中遇到一些问题,4月25日你写信给复旦大学的王教授,请他抽出一个小时的时间来为你解答学习英语中的一些问题,请王教授安排时间和地点。(字数:80~100)参考词语 senior grade three appreciate spare
⑤下面是某中外合资企业刊登在China Daily上的一则招聘广告。Office secretary, with experience in book-keeping, Type-writing Public relations, operating PC=(personal computer)Address, age, health and education A950 Tomas Office
请根据广告中所提出的招聘职务、应聘条件和你自己的简要情况,用80个左右单词写一封自我介绍信,联系地址A950 Tomas Office。假定你的名字是王华,通信处是威海市45信箱(P.O.Box 45)时间为1999年7月8日,注意书信格式。
参考词语 be fit for in good health teach oneself
⑥假定你叫林华,是学生会干事,你于8月9日写信给在京的美国朋友Charlie。你和Charlie自春节以来没有见面,他刚刚从南京旅行回来,向他问好。
为了庆祝五四青年节,学生会计划举行各种活动,将召开晚会,举行座谈会,请历史老师讲中国青年运动史,并拟请Charlie介绍现在美国青年的生活、学习及工作情况。
注意:信件包括上述全部内容,可适当增加细节,使全文连贯。参考词语
青年节:The Youth Day 春节:The Spring Festival 学生会:The Student Union ⑦假设你是环宇丝绸贸易公司(Huanyu Silk Trade Company)人事部主任Maty Walter,请用英语给一位名叫Li Gang的求职者写一封100词左右的回信,通知他公司经理将与他面谈。写信日期为2月8日。信的内容要点如下:
面谈地点:经理办公室。
面谈时间:3月18日,上午9点半。面谈内容:求职动机、特长及录用后的打算。体检时间:面谈一周之后。录用与否:4月初告知。参考词语 have a talk medical examination
⑧某进出口公司在报上登了一则广告,想招聘一名秘书,其条件如下:
年龄不超过28周岁,未婚;男性身高1.72米以上,女性身高1.60米以上;身体健康;大学毕业,会两门外国语者优先(但必须懂英文);能进行计算机操作。
假如你是李卫,想应聘,请根据上述要点写一封100字左右的求职信。参考词语 ask for the job operate a computer
⑨假如你叫Mary, 你的朋友Jane生病了,主要是因为工作太辛苦,又缺乏锻炼。请你写一封信给她,劝她每天至少要运动一个小时,并告诉她;你明天休息,将去看望她。
注意写信格式。(字数:80~100)⑩假定你的名字叫王红,你的朋友孙刚邀请你参加他的生日晚会,你不能去。请你给孙刚写封信,表示歉意,并说明理由:因要参加高考,没有办法答应。最后要表示祝贺并送上生日贺卡一张,你住在上海市长沙路192号,写信日期1999年7月1日。
注意书信格式。(字数:80~100)(11)假定你是英国学生(John),在上海二中学习,于6月1日给Babara写信,谈谈伦敦与上海的不同,100~120字,内容如下:
伦敦
上海 汽车靠左行
汽车靠右行 很多人乘汽车上班
多数人骑自行车上班 阴天多
晴天多 一星期工作五天
一星期工作五天 懂汉语人少
懂英语的人多 学生较放松
学生较勤奋 参考词语 气候:climate
(一)书信
①
××Middle School Guangzhou, China March 17, 1999 Dear Alex,I've just received your postcard and I am very pleased with it.The city where I live is called Guangzhou.It is a big city in the south of China.The climate here is good.It is not so hot in summer and quite mild in winter, though it rains a lot in spring.There are flowers everywhere almost throughout the year.So we call Guangzhou“the Gity of Flowers”.Guangzhou is a famous and important city.Its industry is rather developed, and many meetings are held here.Guangzhou has many places for sightseeing.For example,the Baiyun Mountain,the Yuexiu Park and the Cultural Park.If you come I'll show you around.I am looking forward to your coming.Your friend,Li Hua
Beijing
②
People's Republic of China July, 2007
Ms/Miss Jill Welfare, “Can I help you?” BBC ENGLISH Magazine P.O.Box 76, Bush House London WC2B 4PH U.K.Dear MS/Miss Welfare, I have two questions to ask you.1.I have heard some people say“He is taller than me.”instead of “He is taller than I.” Which is correct? Can you please explain why? 2.Do “further” and“farther” mean the same thing? If not, what is the difference? When do we use the one and when do we use the other? Will you please answer these questions for me?Thank you very much.Yours truly, Li Hong
233 Dong Changan Street
③
Beijing People's Republic of China July 17, 2007 Dear Jack,In June when you were visiting Beijing on the last day of your trip a farewell party was given at the Youth Palace.At the party I sat next to you.Then at the end when we went away we took each other's notebook by mistake.I discovered this only afterwards when I looked into the notebook and found your name and address inside.I am now sending your notebook by post to you.Will you please send my notebook to me at the address which is given above? Thank you very much.I hope you will visit Beijing again soon.Your Chinese friend,Wei Yong
No.2 Middle School
④
Tianjin April 25, 2007 Dear Professor Wang,I'm a senior Grade Three student.I study in Tianjin No.2 Middle School.I have some questions on my English reading.I'd like you to help me with them.I'll appreciate it very much if you would kindly spare me an hour or so.And I'll be very glad to receive your letter telling me when and where we shall get together.Hoping this won't trouble your too much.Yours, Li Xia
P.O.Box45
⑤
Weihai City July 8th,2007 A950 Tomas Office Dear Sir,I've read your ad.in yesterday's China Daily.I feed I am fit for the job needed in your company.I'm 20 years old and in good health.After graduation from a middle school.I taught myself English for two years.I studied book-keeping, typewriting and public relations.I'm good at both operating personal computer and English in listening and speaking.I'm interested in the position of a secretary.I want very much to be accepted by your company, I'll work hard if I can be a member in your company.Wanghua
⑥
Aug 9th Dear Charlie,We haven't seen each other since the Spring Festival.I was told that you had just come back from Nanjing, and how about your trip?
May 4 is The Youth Day in China.In order to celebrate it many activities will be held by the Student Union in our school.We plan to have a party and a talk.A history teacher will talk about the history of the Chinese Youth Movement.Since students are interested in how the young people in the United States are living,studying and working, I hope that you will come and tell us something abut it.We would appreciate it If you could come.I hope that we will meet soon.With best wishes,Yours truly, Lin Hua
⑦
Huanyu Silk Trade Company Feb.8th, Dear Li Gang,Glad to have received your letter.I'd like to tell you that our manager is going to have a talk with you in his office at 9∶30 on the morning of March 18.Here are some questions you are expected to answer:
Why do you want to work in our company? What are you good at?
How many foreign languages do you know? What do you plan to do if you are employed?
There will be a medical examination a week later.We'll let you know whether you will be employed or not at the beginning of April.Wish you good luck,Yours sincerely, Maty Walter
⑧
Oct 8,2007 Dear sir,After reading your advertisement for a secretary in today's newspaper.I want to ask for the job.I am Li Wei, 25 years old, male, and unmarried.I am 1.75 metres tall and I am healthy and strong.I graduated from Qinghua University three years ago.I have been an English teacher in No.1 High School in Anyang, Henan Province since then.I'm good at English and my students like listening to me.I can also speak and write in French, and operate a computer and type very well.I would like to be a secretary very much.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Wei
⑨
April 30 My dear Jane,I'm sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you've got better now.You have been working so hard and have so little exercises This is very harmful to your health.I suggest you take at least one hour's exercises every day.It will do you good.If you keep on doing exercises every day, you will certainly feel better.Tomorrow is a holiday.I'll come to see you.With best wishes,Truly yours,Mary
192 Changsha Road
⑩
Shanghai, July 1st 1999 Dear Sun Gang,Thank you for inviting me to your birthday party, but I'm afraid I can't come.I have so much homework to do.You know, I will have the college entrance examination next week.And it is so important to me.However, I'll be thinking of you alone.I am writing this letter and send you this birthday card to express my best wishes to you.I wish your party success and also wish you many happy returns.Yours Truly, Wang Hong
The No.2 Middle School
(11)
Shanghai China July 1st Dear Babara,It is Children's Day and I have a day off.I'm
going to tell you something about China.In our country cars are driven on the left side of the road, but here on the right side.Many people of London go to work by car while most people in Shanghai go to work by bike.The climate of Shanghai is better than ours, which is fine for long But London has so many cloudy days.Workers in Shanghai work five days a week just as in London.Students here work hard at their lessons and a lot of people can speak English.It's a pity that students in our country don't make full use of time and few know Chinese.That's all for today.Please write to me.Yours Lovely,John
第四篇:高考英语书信
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申请信
【写作要求一】
假定你是李华,从互联网((the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);3.希望获准。
注意:1.数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好.【优秀满分范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China.I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it.I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English.What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Looking forward to your reply!
Yours Li Hua
【写作要求二】
假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一些优秀学生,利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示,用英语给校评选组写一封申请信: 1.对此活动的认识(如对本人、学生及社会的益处等)2.个人优势(如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等)3.你的计划(如怎样进行辅导等)注意:1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯; 3.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。参考词汇:晨曦希望小学Chenxi Hope School
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two.As far as I am concerned, I believe to teach English for pupils from Chen Xi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutor, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach, because I have good character, being independent in life and proficient in English.That’s why I apply for the position;I hope I can join the instructive activity.My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing.What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment.I hope you can offer the opportunity.Yours sincerely, Li Hua
建议信
【写作要求】
假定你是李华,你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见.请你依据以下内容给主编写封信,内容主要包括: 1.说明你是该报的忠实读者
2.赞赏该报优点:1)兼顾国内外新闻 2)介绍名人成功故事 3.提出建议: 刊登指导英语学习的文章
注意:1.词数100左右,开头语己为你写好; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【优秀满分范文】
Dear Editor-in-Chief,Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!I’m a regular reader of your newspaper.I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy.There are many advantages of Global Mirror.Firstly, Global Mirror covers both national and international news.By simply turning the pages, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad.Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them.In a word, thanks to Global Mirror, we are well-informed and keep up with the changing world.As a young student, I wish that I can be a master of English language.Therefore, I suggest that Global Mirror provide articles about English learning for us.Finally, I hope that Global Mirror will become more and more popular.Thank you for your time!
Sincerely yours, Li Hua
求助信
【写作要求】
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest),你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件: 1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况; 2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙; 3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。注意: 1.词数:120—150;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【优秀满分范文】
Dear Tom,How is it going these days? I keep wondering how you feel about your school life in Beijing.Have you got used to the life in China? Are you enjoying your life? I hope you are.Let me tell you a piece of good news: I’m going to take part in an English speech contest of middle school students in July in the coming summer vacation.So I’m busy preparing for it.But now I have some difficulty in collecting useful information and using proper English word to express my thoughts.Besides, I really want to improve my spoken English, especially the pronunciation and intonation(语调).Of course, as a native English speaker, you can give me some suggestions.In addition, I’m going to visit you after the contest.I’m sure we will have a wonderful time together in Beijing!I can hardly wait to see you!I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua
感谢信
【写作要求】
假定你是李华,你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里,你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据写作要点和要求给Sue写封电子邮件。
写作要点:1.对她表达感谢之意;(议论)2.介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情;(记叙)3.希望了解她的近况。(询问)
要求:1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。2.短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。3.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯; 4.书写须清晰、工整。
5.邮件中不能体现本人真实信息。【优秀满分范文一】
Dear Sue,I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China.It’s almost a month since you left us.We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.We are busy as usual.We had an English speech contest the other day.I won the first prize!This again reminds me of all your kind help.Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them.The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood.Will you come back to see Sue Wood?
How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students.Hope to keep in close touch.All the best.Yours Li Hua 【优秀满分范文二】
Dear Sue,How are you doing?
I am writing this letter to say “thank you.” First and foremost, it is clear that you, just like “our foreign mother”, were very patient to us.Additionally, needless to say, you taught me a lot, not only English knowledge but also your life wisdom;consequently, all of us have fallen in love with English and study.Last but certainly not least, there is no doubt that we had a great time together, which we will keep in mind forever.By the way, I can't wait to tell you something new about my class.After you left for the America, we had an English competition.We all did very well, using the knowledge you told us.No one can deny you helped us so much!Sue, can you give me some information about your life in America? I miss you so much.I am looking forward to your early reply!
Best wishes!Yours love /truly, Li Hua
邀请信
【写作要求一】
假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华, 你校举办关于“人与自然”的英语演讲比赛, 邀请Ms.Smith做评委。请参照以下内容给她写一封信.1.时间:6月15日下午 2:00-5:00 2.参赛选手:10名学生3.联系人:李华(电话 123456)注意:词数100左右;可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Ms.Smith,I'm Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university.I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15.It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours.Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and Nature”.It’s my honor if you can accept our invitation.Please call me at 123456 if you have any question.I am looking forward to your reply.With best wishes.Yours Li Hua
【写作要求二】 你校新华中学将于下周末举行第二届校文化节,学生会主席李华代表学校全体师生邀请北京大学大学外籍教授Smith先生做关于中美文化差异的讲座。信的内容包括:
讲座时间: 11月28日早上9点到11点 讲座地点: 3号教学楼201教室 联系方式:Englishtec @163.com 词数100左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Professor Smith,I am Li Hua, chair of the Students’ Union of Xinhua Middle School.Our school will have the Second Culture Festival next weekend and I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the cultural differences between America and China, which will begin at 9 o’clock and end at 11 o’clock on Nov.28th in Classroom 201 of the third teaching building.As an expert in international culture, you must have a good knowledge of the cultural differences between America and China, so we hope you could help us increase our knowledge and clear some cultural confusion.Could you please contact us in advance at Englishtec @163.com if you could come to our culture festival? We are looking forward to your reply.Yours Lihua
投诉信
【写作要求】
你是李华,两周前你从网上一套书虫系列读物(BookwormSeries)昨天才到货,且包装破损,数量不足。请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。要点如下: 1.介绍购物情况 2.反映存在问题 3.提出解决方案 注意:
1.词数100词左右
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯 3.开头结尾已给出,不计入总词 可能用到的生词:投诉complaint n.【优秀满分范文】
To whom it may concern,I am one of your customers(顾客).I ordered(订购)a set of(一套)Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday.And much to my disappointment, thebooks were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn.To makematters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every rightto ask you to deal with this problem.I hope that you either return my money ordeliver a new set of books to me.Besides, I’d like to be informed of theprocess of your dealing with my complaint.Lookingforward to your reply.Sincerely, Li Hua
祝贺信
【写作要求】
假如你是李华,你的好友魏芳在中学生英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容,给她写一封祝贺信。
内容包括:1.表达你的愉悦心情;2.向她表示祝贺; 3.请她介绍成功的经验。
注意:1.词数100左右; 2.开头和结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数;3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:英语演讲比赛 the English Speech Contest 【优秀满分范文】
Dear Wei Fang, I hear that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of Middle School Students, so I’m writing to give my sincere congratulations.You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news.As your best friend, I am proud of you!Your pronunciation and fluent English left me with deep impression.It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest.Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning.I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua
求职信
【写作要求】
假如你是李华,从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构Mid.Senior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员,负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。
ASSISITANTS WANTED Valuable chances are open for high school graduates who are good at English.Their work is to tend the senior students during the break.
Requirements attached:1.Good at English.2.Experienced priority. Contact us by e-mail:Englishtec@163.com.
注意:1.短文词数100字左右;2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称;
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Director:
I’d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper.I found this position quite appealing to me.I’ve just graduated from high school.Luckily I am good at English and I can speak English fluently.In addition, I have previous experience.During my stay in middle school, I used to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work.I’m available for interview at any time.It would be appreciated if I can get your offer.Sincerely, Li Hua
第五篇:英语作文应用文写作技巧书信类
类型:
书信、通知、日记、海报、便条、启事、欢迎词、欢送词、告别词、广告
书信类型: 事务书信和私人信件(求职信、投诉信、慰问信、建议信、说明信、感谢信„)
重点考查的几类书信:
建议信、求职信/申请信、抱怨信/投诉信 几种书信常用的表达式
①建议信
You have asked me for my advice with regard to„ and I will try to make some suggestions.I would like to suggest that„
It is important to„
It helps to „
It should be a good idea to„
I think it would be a good idea/ more beneficial if you could„
Why not„?/ Why don’t you„?
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.最关键的部分就是用不同的句型提出建议,并辅以适当的联系词来连接这些建议。此外,不要忘了在建议的后面附上自己建议的理由用以充实自己的文章。例文1
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据要点写封回信。
要点:1.参加中文学习班
2.看中文书刊、电视
3.学唱中文歌曲
4.交中国朋友
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可适当增加细节
3.开头语已为你写好
June 8, 2008
Dear Peter,I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.____ _______________________________
Best wishes,Li Hua
【写作指导】
信件类型:建议信
内容: 写信人就某事或某问题提出建议
主体时态:一般现在时
正文部分:必须给对方问题明确答复;建议的内容要层次清楚,目的明确,具有合理性和说服力;语言要正确、清晰、礼貌、体贴,易于对方接受。
【 范文】
Dear Peter,I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions.First, it is Important to take a Chinese course,as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because bydoing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.You can also makemore Chinese friends,who will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try and write me in Chinese next time.Best wishes,Li Hua
②求职信/申请信
I learned from„/ I read„in(the newspaper)„
I am thinking I am suitable for the job/position.I graduated from „/ I have rich experience in doing„
I will devote myself to it if I can get it./ I would appreciate it if you can give a chance.I’m looking forward to your reply(interview)./ Hope for an early reply.例文2
假如你是卜曼宜,你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机,因有质量问题,要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点,用英文写一封电子邮件。
要点:
1.问题:手机不响铃,不能发短信; 该产品已售完,无法更换;型号新,无配件,无法维修。
2.要求:公司应尽快予以更换。
注意:1.词数为100左右
2.参考词汇:配件 ——spare part
3.电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好
Dear Sir,I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R.China_____________________________________________
Thank you for your consideration.Sincerely yours
Bu Manyi
【写作指导】
信件类型: 抱怨信
内容:写信人针对未能解决的问题提出抱怨,希望得到对方的帮助
主体时态:一般过去时
正文部分:
①切中要害,客观说明存在的问题。
②怨之有节,重在解决问题(有礼有节,说明存在的问题对自己造成的不利影响或危害;必要时也可提出自己对存在问题的解决办法或建议)。
③语言力求简洁。
【 范文】
Dear Sir,I am writing to you for the mobile phone of...Ten days after that, it didn't ring and send short messages.Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one.Later I went to the repairman.He said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.I was so desperate on hearing that.How can I wait that long? Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.Thank you for your consideration.Sincerely yours,Bu Manyi
③抱怨信/投诉信
I am writing to make a complaint /to express my dissatisfaction about„
I would like to get this matter settled by the end of this month.I hope you can give me a satisfying reply and deal with this matter seriously.I trust you will take my complaint seriously and do something to this matter.I must warn you that unless you do something about the situation, I will be forcedto take legal action.例文3
假设你是李华,申请到一家外资企业工作,你需要用英文给该公司经理写一封信,介绍
自己的基本情况,信件必须包括下面全部内容:
姓名: 李华;出生年月: 1981年8月;
出生地: 广东省佛山市;
学历: 1994—2000 佛山第一中学
2000—2004 广州大学计算机系
2004—至今在一所中学工作
所学主要课程: 计算机、中文、数学、英语、体育
特长:计算机编程
爱好: 音乐、游泳(曾获大学游泳比赛一等奖)
联系电话:5673678
E-mail: lihua6688@yahoo.com.cn
要求:简介必须包括以上全部内容(信的开头和结尾已经写好)
Dear Manager,___________________________________________
I am looking forward to your reply.Thank you very much.Yours Truly,Li Hua
【写作指导】
信件类型:求职信
内容:写信人申请工作
主体时态:一般现在时,一般过去时
正文部分:
1、介绍信息来源(开篇交代句)。
2、表明求职心愿(写信目的。)
3、介绍个人简历。
4、摆出求职优势。
5、提出获职打算。
6、请求答复联系。(通讯地址、邮政编码、电话号码、电子信箱等)
7、表明感激之情。
【 范文】
Dear Manager,I learned from the newspaper that your company wanted to hire a computer engineer.I am interested in this position and writing to apply for it.Now I’d like to introduce myself.My name is Li Hua and I was born in Foshan City of Guangdong Province in August 1981.I studied in Foshan No.1 Middle School from 1994 – 2000, and thenI came to study in the Computer Department of Guangzhou University for four years.I majored in computer science, but my strong point is computer programming.In addition, I studied Chinese, maths, English, P.E.and now I am working for a high school.I also like pop music and swimming very much, and I once won the first
prize for swimming in the school competition.If I am accepted, I’ll work hard and try my best to make a contribution to the company.My telephone number is 5673678.E-mail: lihua6688@yahoo.com.cn
I am looking forward to your reply.Thank you very much.Yours Truly,Li Hua
随堂演练
假如你叫李华,你的家乡原来有座茂密的森林,但现在已变成了荒漠。请根据下面几幅图的内容,向一家英文报社写一篇“Protecting The Forest”的短文。注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头已为你写好
Protecting The Forest
My hometown used to be a beautiful place.内容要点:
1、家乡原来青山绿水,很美。
2、人们毁林种庄稼,过度放牧,造成水土流失、土地荒漠化。
3、发表你的看法。
分析下面学生习作,找出问题,并修改。
(1)Some years ago, my hometown used to be a beautiful place.There is a forest on the hill.Many animals and birds lived there.But later people wanted to plant crops.They began to destroy the forest.They also feeded their crows and sheep on the grass.The trees and grass disappeared.And the forest became wasteland.So when wind blows, the sand on the ground flies into the air.It is harmful to be environment and our health.In our opinion, people should be punished for the bad result.We must ask the
public to protect the environment.If every of us take action, we can live better.【分析】
【修改】Dear editor, Some years ago, my hometown used to be a beautiful place.Thick trees and green grass could be seen all over the hills.As time went on, people destroyed almost the whole forest to grow more crops.To make matters worse, people let their cattle eat up the grass.So, you can only see wasteland instead of green forests now.As a result, when it rains, the soil is washed down the hills and into the rivers.Strong winds also blow away the valuable soil that lies on the top of the fields.I do hope all the people will take good care of the forests and plant more trees to improve our living conditions.Yours, Li Hua