第一篇:考研英语写作最常用的95词
考研英语写作最常用的95词、accident n.意外事件 , 事故、achievement n.成就 , 功绩、activity n.活跃 , 活动性 , 行动 , 行为 , 4、adopt [E5dCpt] vt.采用 , 收养、advantage [Ed5vB:ntidV] n.优势 , 有利条件 , 利益、Afford vt.[ 常与 can, could, be able to 连用 ] 担负得起费用(损失、后果等), 花费得起 , 经受得住;抽得出(时间)7、ambition n.野心 , 雄心、approach n.接近, 逼近, 走进 , 方法 , 步骤 , 途径 , 通路 vt.接近, 动手处理 vi.靠近、attract vt.吸引 vi.有吸引力 , 引起注意、bribe [braib] n.贿赂 vt.贿赂 , 向...行贿、chance [tFB:ns] n.机会 , 可能性 , 偶然性 , 运气、cheat [tFi:t] n.欺骗 , 骗子 v.欺骗 , 骗取、client [5klaiEnt] n.[ 计 ] 顾客 , 客户 , 委托人、Communication [kE7mju:ni5keiFn] n.传达 , 信息 , 交通 , 通讯、compare [kEm5pZE] v.比较 , 相比 , 比喻 n.比较、compete [kEm5pi:t] vi.比赛 , 竞争、Concentrate [5kCnsentreit] v.集中 , 浓缩、Consequently [5kRnsIkwEntlI] adv.从而 , 因此、contribution [7kCntri5bju:FEn] n.捐献 , 贡献 , 投稿、Convenient [kEn5vi:njEnt] adj.便利的 , 方便的、decline [di5klain] vi.下倾 , 下降 , 下垂 v.拒绝 , 衰落、decrease [di:5kri:s] n.减少 , 减少之量 v.减少、demand [di5mB:nd] n.要求 , 需求(量), 需要 v.要求 , 需要 , 要求知道 , 查询、Depict [di5pikt] vt.描述 , 描写、Duality [dju(5Aliti] n.二元性、Economy [i(5kCnEmi] n.经济 , 节约 , 节约措施 , 经济实惠 , 系统 , 机体 , 经济制度的状况、education [7edju(5keiFEn] n.教育 , 训导 , 训练 , 培养 , 教育学、effect [i5fekt] n.结果 , 效果 , 作用 , 影响 ,(在视听方面给人流下的)印象、Efficiency [i5fiFEnsi] n.效率 , 功效、Emphasis [5emfEsis] n.强调 , 重点
31、enjoy [in5dVCi] vt.享受...的乐趣 , 欣赏 , 喜爱
32、Enrich [in5ritF] vt.使富足 , 使肥沃 , 装饰 , 加料于 , 浓缩
33、ensure [in5FuE] vt 保证 , 担保 , 使安全 , 保证得到 v.确保 , 确保 , 保证
34、Entertain [7entE5tein] vt.娱乐 , 招待 , 接受 , 怀抱 vi.款待
35、Environment [in5vaiErEnmEnt] n.环境 , 外界
36、Expense [Ik5spens] n.费用 , 代价 , 损失 , 开支 , 费钱之物
37、fee [fi:] n.费(会费、学费等), 酬金
38、figure [5fi^E] n.外形 , 轮廓 , 体形 , 图形 , 画像 , 数字 , 形状 , 身份
39、finance [fai5nAns, fi-] n.财政 , 金融 , 财政学 vt.供给...经费 , 负担经费 vi.筹措资金
40、fulfill [ful5fil] vt.履行 , 实现 , 完成(计划等)41、GDP abbr.国内生产总值(gross domestic product)
42、Government [5^QvEnmEnt] n.**, < 英 > 内阁 , 政治 , 政体
43、healthy [5helWi] adj.健康的 , 健壮的 , 有益于健康的
44、Implement [5implimEnt] n.工具 , 器具 vt.贯彻 , 实现 v.执行
45、implication [7impli5keiFEn] n.牵连 , 含意 , 暗示
46、improve [im5pru:v] v.改善 , 改进
47、indicate [5indikeit] vt.指出 , 显示 , 象征 , 预示 , 需要 , 简要地说明
48、indifferent [In5dIfrEnt] adj.与 to 连用)不感兴趣的;漠不关心的;不注意的 49、inseparable [In5sepErEb(E)l] adj.不能分离的;不能分开的 50、Internet [5IntEnet] n.〈计〉因特网,互联网
51、Issue [5isju:] n.出版 , 发行 ,(报刊等)期、号 , 论点 , 问题 , 结果 ,(水 , 血等的)流出 vi.发行 , 流出 , 造成...结果 , 进行辩护 , 传下
52、maximum [5mAksimEm] n.最大量 , 最大限度 , 极大 adj.最高的 , 最多的 , 最大极限的
53、Measure [5meVE] n.尺寸 , 量度器 , 量度标准 , 方法 , 测量 , 措施 vt.测量 , 测度 ,估量 , 分派 , 权衡 , 调节 vi.量
54、Media [5mi:djE] n.媒体
55、million [5miljEn] num.百万 , 百万个
56、mobilize [5mEubilaiz] v.动员
57、necessity [ni5sesiti] n.必要性 , 需要 , 必需品
58、negative [5ne^Etiv] n.否定 , 负数 , 底片 adj.否定的 , 消极的 , 负的 , 阴性的
59、Offspring [5RfsprIN;(?@)5C:f-] n.(单复数同形)儿女 , 子孙 , 后代 , 产物
60、operation [7CpE5reiFEn] n.运转 , 操作 , 实施 , 作用 , 业务 , 工作 , 手术 , 军事行动
61、Patient [5peiFEnt] n.病人 , 患者 adj.忍耐的 , 耐心的
62、performance [pE5fC:mEns] n.履行 , 执行 , 成绩 , 性能 , 表演 , 演奏
63、phenomenon [fi5nCminEn] n.现象
64、pollution [pE5lu:FEn,-5lju:-] n.污染 , 玷污
65、Popular [5pCpjulE] adj.通俗的 , 流行的 , 受欢迎的 66、population [7pCpju5leiFEn] n.人口
67、poverty [5pCvEti] n.贫穷 , 贫困 , 贫乏 , 缺少
68、present [pri5zent] n.赠品 , 礼物 , 现在 , 瞄准 adj.现在的 , 出席的 , 当面的 69、pressure [`preFE(r)] n.压 , 压力 , 电压 , 压迫 , 强制 , 紧迫
70、priority [prai5Criti] n.先 , 前 , 优先 , 优先权
71、producer [prE5dju:sE] n.生产者 , 制作者 , 演出人 ,(电影)制片人
72、Protect [prE5tekt] vt.保护
73、Protection [prE5tekFEn] n.保护
74、Punish [5pQniF] vt.惩罚 , 处罚
75、quality [5kwCliti] n.质量 , 品质 , 性质
76、realize [5riElaiz] vt.认识到 , 了解 , 实现 , 实行
77、reduce [ri5dju:s] vt.减少 , 缩小 , 简化 , 还原
78、relationship [ri5leiFEnFip] n.关系 , 关联
79、report [ri5pC:t] n.报告 , 传说 ,80、Responsible [ris5pCnsEbl] adj.有责任的 , 可靠的 , 可依赖的 , 负责的 81、retailer [5ri:teIlE(r)] n.零售商
82、Reveal [ri5vi:l] vt.展现 , 显示 , 揭示 , 暴露
83、satisfactory [7sAtis5fAktEri] adj.满意的 , 赎罪的 84、significance [si^5nifikEns] n.意义 , 重要性
85、similar [5similE] adj.相似的 , 类似的
86、situation [7sitju5eiFEn] n.情形 , 境遇 ,(建筑物等的)位置
87、slogan [5slEu^En] n.口号 , 标语
88、Source [sC:s] n.来源 , 水源 , 消息来源 , 原始资料 , 发起者
89、statistic [stE5tIstIk] n.统计数值,统计量
90、steady [5stedi] adj.稳固的 , 稳定的 , 坚定的 , 扎实的 , 坚定不移的 91、Strategy [5strAtidVi] n.策略 , 军略
92、Sustainable [sE`steInEbl] adj.可以忍受的 , 足可支撑的 , 养得起的 93、totally[5tRt(E)lI] adv.完全地 , 整全地
94、traffic [5trAfik] n.交通 , 通行 , 运输 , 贸易 , 交通量 , 交易 , 交往 , 通信量
95、Vividly adv.生动地 , 鲜明地
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第二篇:考研英语写作
高分范文展示:
The global economy, who is sleeping over that stretcher, like a helpless-sick wreck, is being practiced emergency treatment by worldwidebanking systems, which are trying their best to save the market intensively by cooperation.Conspicuously, that’s a horrible depiction related to/concerning the the world.the top of the list which should never be overlooked.First of all, , as the case of would make its comeback every 10-30 years on the average, so would this time.Furthermore, the overestimation of economic prosperityhas resulted in a great multitude of foams/bubbles in the securities and the realties.gues, who made use of installment policy to speculate in real estate industry, thus, only spending 30% of totally-needed funds in possessing 3 apartments, with the aggregate price over RMB 2 million.Actually, it is not the Day of Judgment.What we are glad to see is the keyword – “cooperation”and we will surely get through this tough period before long.好句写法:把句子拉长→加修饰:
(1)n.+ who/which/that… 加从句
e.g.Many peopletakeseriously the lifestyle of chasing for luxuries.那些把一个人拥有财产的数量当作评判其社会地位的唯一标准的人们,会很重视追逐奢侈品的生活方式。
(2)n./句子结尾 + v.-ed(en)(被动)/ v.-ing(主动)加分词(定语后置)
e.g.youngsters, ranging from/who range from 20 to 30 years old ranging fromwith研究发现,和十年前的5%相比,现在有近24%的年轻白领表示不清楚自己想要什么。
(3)n.+ with + n.(修饰语)加限定词
e.g.A pretty girl → a girl with an angel-like face and a fairy-like figure
e.g.Nowadays, a lot of riches like buying luxurious autos to show/display their success and existence.当今,很多有钱人喜欢通过买豪车来显示自己的成功和存在。
→These days, withdefined as the typical marks of 句型模仿:
07 阅读text3最后一段:
From the middle-class family perspective, much of this, understandably, looks far less like an opportunity to exercise more financial responsibility, and a good deal more like a frightening acceleration of the wholescale shift of financial risk onto their already overburdened shoulders.* Looks far less like… a good deal more like… 看起来不像是……而更像是……
模仿→05大作文:养老足球赛
From our conscientious and clear-minded perspective, much of this behavior, undoubtedly, looks far less like like a 依据我们的良知,毫无疑问,大多数这种行为并不能提供合理分配赡养老人义务的机会,相反,它更像是一种加剧中华传统美德“尊老爱幼”走向大规模衰败的危险行为
大作文——开头what、中间why/effect、结尾how
What——虚开头(首段首句)
(1)坊间流传多年的所谓经典套话
As can be seen in the picture given above…
→ Asgiven above…
e.g.悲观乐观 man, passion-sufficient and energy-continuous, is climbing upon a ladder to reach to his shining blue print.(2)直接描述
e.g.12002年作文:美国女孩穿着中国传统服饰
There is a beautiful American girl, who is standing over there in a Chinese traditional costume, smiling just like a flower.a Chinese traditional costume.e.g.2 2010年作文:文化“火锅”,既美味又营养
those dishes and cooking ingredients in a Chinese traditional hot-pot, including e.g.2012年作文:悲观乐观 What——[描述+宽泛、宏观的点评](首段第二句)
It is aa significant information that 主题has been in the spotlight in current society主题 has aroused wide concern at any corner of our social consensus.e.g.家庭成员关系 * 首段第二句和第二段首句应该有一定层次感,首段第二句提出一个观点/现象,第二段首句再将其具体化/细节化,直击中心。
Why/Effect——实开头:(主题句)+ 原因/影响(内部:自身 / 外部:社会、媒体)+ 例子
(1)主题句:
Among the topic concerning主题(抽象), as the depiction/picture shows, the most cardinal tip is related to the issue of主旨中心思想(具体).e.g.家庭关系
Among the topic concerning the depiction shows, the most e.g.出国留学人数/考研人数/公务员人数(2)引出原因
Several factors could weigh heavily for the happening of ____, yet, suspended at the top of the list are the following two aspects.To begin with, _____.Additionally, _____.e.g.中国传统文化/美德的缺失(3)引出影响
It is hardly necessary for me to cite all the evidence of the revolutionary influences(that)the 现象 gives rise
to.To begin with, … Apart from… ,* 表示导致的短语:Contribute to Result in/trigger/induce/spell/invite
* 表示原因:inducement/incentive
e.g.人人考公务员 result in.To begin with, … Apart from … , * Apart from用法:Apart from(mentioned above), …(new information)= Besides, … , Google could owe its success to the brilliance of its founders, Sergey Brin and Larry Page.* 表示归因于:owe/ascribe/attribute… to …
(4)举例子
A good case blowing my mind now is 人/物, who/which …
e.g.慈善/真正的成功
A good case blowing my mind now is a world well-known man, whose name is Bill Gates, industry after his retirement.* 例子不能单独提出,例子前面要有一个论点,或者在例子后面要有一个点评和结论,这样才是一个完整的举例(名人名言也同理)。
How——提出建议(Suggestion):规则、思想、行为
(1)制定规则:
Lay down/Establish the effective/reliable/available/practical regulations to …呼应主题.(敬老)(保护环境)(留学)
(2)改变思想:
Deliver the moderate 主题词 outlook to guide us both physically and mentally.e.g.Deliver the moderate outlook to guide us both physically and mentally.成功观/生活观/物质观/世界观/知识观/能源观
(3)规范行为:
Exert/Implement/Practice the rational 主题词 manners to live in a much more harmonious/compatible atmosphere/circumstance.circumstance.(4)补充说明方法:名人名言(适用于最后一段提完建议之后)
万能套话:
As a classic saying goes,千里之行,始于足下
应用:提完建议之后
Yet, it is very probable to say without any exaggerationthat depending on the lack of 主题词, many citizens/youths would have immersed in such an extreme condition for a long time.Does it have opportunities for us to make achange ? / Is it possible to make a change? Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely handle/optimize/refrain from … as long as the above mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.e.g.养老 Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely refrain from as long as the above mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.e.g.奢侈浪费
Yet, it is very probable to say without any exaggeration that depending on the lack time.Does it have opportunities for us to make a change? Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.特别讲解:主体段落的展开(第二段)
(1)单向话题:要么褒,要么贬
原因展开:
The factors contributing to… are vastly complex.Some attribute it to ….Others place the blame on / Others place the high value on ….Still the rest complain of/ attach importance to …
e.g.为什么很多年轻人最终会抽烟
The factors contributing to a big rise in are vastly complex.Some attribute it to(2)双向话题
e.g.中国传统风俗习惯的改变是好还是坏
According to my humble perspective, every sword is double-edged.is both positive and negative.To begin with, it goes without denying that the new-changed customs and habits have distinct advantages.On one hand, they On the other hand, they eliminate “culture gap” to Although / Whilebidding farewell to the bygones enjoys considerable merits, it still have their own drawbacks when the following point is taken into account.A good case coming to my mind now isof the Chinese virtues – raising seniors.After all, * 举例子的时候,要实现从手段到效果的跨越(我们要怎么做来达到什么效果)
小作文——Simplified(简明扼要)字数:100-120
* 大作文的套话和模板不能用在小作文中!
* 小作文写作时必须覆盖每个题目要求的要点
(1)Letter——邮件、信件:生活化/接地气
a)邀请信
学术邀请(充满敬意):
开头:正式邀请(含参会时间和主题)
主体:介绍会议安排
结尾:希望得到正式回复,并确认
Dear Professor ___,It is my great honor to extend you our sincere invitation of an academic forum held on 具体时间 in/at 地点,which focuses on the topic of主题
The forum mentioned above will be arranged as followings.Firstly at 8 a.m.will start the 主题involves.Afterwards, there will be another arrangement, including ___.Then at around 时间, 另一个安排.I really hope you can make it.If it is possible, I would like to ask you for sending me your bank
account, and I’ll pay you 40 percent of the total lecture fees as the deposit.最后期限.落款
范文:
Dear Professor Liu,It is my great honor to extend you my sincere invitation of an academic forum held on Jan.1 in The Nation’s Theatre, which focuses on the topic of Chinese traditional culture.The forum mentioned above will be arranged as followings.Firstly at 8 a.m.will start the opening of the forum, which involves a brief presentation with regard to the prospects as well as plights thatthe promotion of Chinese culture may encounter.Afterwards, there will be another arrangement concerning a micro-movie of the cultural relic exhibition, which will last 15 minutes.Then at 9 to 11 o’clock, you would be highly expected to present us a lecture named “World Needs China”.I really hope you can make it.If it is possible, I would like to ask you for sending me your bank account, and I’ll pay you 40 percent of the total lecture fees as the deposit.Reply, if you please before next weekend.Li Ming,The Supervisor of XXX
b)申请信
学校组织社团评优,要写申请。你是学校创新社(Innovation Agency)的负责人,请你代表你们社参与评优,写一封申请信。
范文:
Dear Sir or Madame,Innovation Agency – “Most Improved Organization Award”.private tools’ rebuilding the living.building to make it accessible/easy to wheelchairs..Yours faithfully,Li Ming
c)回复投诉信(对别人投诉的回复和安抚):承担责任,尝试挽回
有人投诉你负责的勤工助学中心某学生表现糟糕,部分原文:
I will not use your temporary staff any more for their disastrous performance.范文:
Dear Sir,temporary administration assistant you received from my organization,.We really care about our clients and that is why we will try to give some explanation about what happened.candidate training.work for you.Yours faithfully,Li Mingd)销售信(空格处填入产品名)
Last year, we achieved a 215% increase in the sales of our ______.We believe that this happy state of affairs be attributed to two causes.First, we managed to avoid passing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients.Second, we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have ever produced.And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season’s ____ are, if anything, more persuasive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors.We believe that your will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.We look forward for you to favor us an order.e)现场笔录证明
You’ve come across a serious crash last night when a taxi heavily knocked down a passerby.Now the police asked you to offer a certificate of witness involving following points:
1.The time and place
2.The process of this emergency
Witness on a Crash
It was 时间 in a 星期 night, 日期, when I was about to enjoy my late snack a first aid to the young and phoned ambulance at once.Signature:Li Ming
(2)Notice——通知、告示
a)失物招领(Lost and Found):信息要有所保留,不能全部透露
Case: You’ve picked up an ED(电子辞典)
1.Time and place
2.The feature of this electronic dictionary(留一个最大特征来核实对方身份)
3.Your information for contact
Lost and Found
On the evening of 日期regular magazine.of this ED the phone number Sincerely yours,Li Ming
第三篇:考研英语写作
1.图画作文
It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about _______(图画主题),which is ______________(进一步的说明)。He seems to be saying that_______________(给出细节)。In my opinion,___________(个人阐述)。
This simple picture is a wake up call for ______(所涉群体,如the whole of the human race)。Therefore,it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put an end to _____________(问题所在)。One the one hand,we must _________________(建议一)。It is clear that the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _________(进一步说明)。On the other hand,________________(建议二)Only in this way can we___________(展望前景)。
2.图表作文
The chart gives us an overall picture of the ____________(图表主题)。The first thing we notice is that_______________(图表最大特点)。This means that as __________,_________________(进一步说明)。
We can see from the statistics given that _______________(图表细节一)。After ving_________(细节一中的第一个变化),the _____Ved+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化)。The figures also tells us that_________________________(图表细节二)。(数据位置,如In the second column),we can see that ____________accounts for _______(进一步描述)。
Judging from these figures,we can draw the conclusion that___________(结论)。The reason for this,as far as I am concerned is that_____________(给出原因)。/ It is high time that we Ved(发出倡议)
各位可爱的同学:
考题为应用文写作,所以要注意:
1.条理清楚,按照下列老师所列每种应用文的格式把内容写完整。
2.可以先用中文把提纲要求包含的信息都写下来,再翻译成英语。这样可以确保不会把应该包括的信息漏掉。
3.不要写错误的单词,宁可用简单易懂的单词代替,注意卷面清洁和工整。预祝大家都考上心仪的学校,制定好复习计划,按部就班,调整好心态好好复习,你的心愿一定能实现,人生该吃苦该拼搏时就要拼搏!各位加油!
一. 祝贺信(Letter of Congratulations):
祝贺信的写作与普通信件没有什么大区别,但应注意:
1.必须包括对收信人的称谓。
2.必须包括对收信人的祝贺。
3.必须包括写信人的姓名。
4.措词真诚、轻松愉快,切忌言过其实。
Sample:
Dear Guojun,I heard that you graduated with high honors from Southeast University last month.I know that all your family must be very proud of you, and as your friend, I feel the same.I wish you greater and more brilliant success in your studies and work in the future.With best wishes.Yours sincerely,Qi Zi
常用祝贺信用语
1.Warm congratulations on your success in passing the entrance examination to … university.热烈祝贺你考上了……大学。
2.Please accept our sincere wishes for your…
请接受我们对您……的衷心祝愿。
3.I extend my best wishes for your success.衷心祝愿你成功。
4.May each new year bring you new hope.愿每个新年都给您带来新的希望。
二、道歉信(Letter of Apology)
Sample:
May 5
Dear Carole,I am very sorry that I missed your phone call yesterday.I shall be at home tomorrow morning.Would you please call me again?
Sincerely yours,Lisa
道歉信常用语句
1.Please accept my sincere apologies.请接受我们诚挚的道歉。
2.Please accept my sincere apologies for the lateness of my birthday greetings.3.
I am sorry I missed your …
对不起,我错过了你的……
4.I’ve to offer you an apology for not coming to your party.未能参加你的庆祝会,我得向你道歉。
5.Please accept my sincere apologies for…
请接受我对……诚挚的歉意。
Ex.就下述内容写一封道歉信:
你的一位朋友昨天来看望你,你正巧外出未遇,对此你写信表示歉意,并约他明天再过来。
May 5
Dear Tom,I am very sorry that I was out when you called on me yesterday.Could you come again tomorrow evening as I have something important to discuss with you?
Sincerely yours,Lisa 更多例子:
1.因未能践约赴宴致歉 Unable to keep one’s promise
Dear [Miss Nancy],Much to my regret I was unable to keep my promise to attend your [birthday] party [last Saturday], owing to the fact that my [little son] was suddenly taken ill early [that day].Hoping to see you soon.Truly yours,亲爱的[南希小姐]:
[小儿][上周六]突然生病,因此未能应约赴[生日]宴,殊觉抱歉,希原谅,再见。
祝好!
2.因迟复来信致歉 Because of answering one’s letter late
Dear [David]:
I am afraid that you will think me unpardonably negligent in not having answered your letter dated [7, December] sooner, but when I have told you the reason, I trust you will be convinced that the neglect was excusable.When your letter arrived, I was just in [Hong Kong].As my family could not forward it to me during my absence, it has been, therefore, lying on my desk until the moment when I took it up.Now the first thing I have to hasten to do is to write to you these few lines to express my deep regret.I enjoyed many pleasant sights during my trip.I shall be pleased to give you an account to of them when I see you next.Yours,亲爱的[戴维]:
请原谅我收到您[12月7日]的来信后迟迟未复,现将原因告诉您,相信您一定会谅解的。您的来信到来时,我正巧在[香港],家人无法及时转递。你的信一直放在我写字台上,直到我回到才看见,拖至今天才回信,深表歉意。
这次出去旅行饱览了许多美丽景色,下次见到您时,将告诉您一切。
祝好!
3.因未能及时还书致歉 Unable to return borrowed book on time
Dear [Kate]:
Excuse me for my long delaying in returning to you your “Robinson Crusoe” which I read through with great interest.I had finished reading the book and was about to return it when [my cousin] came to see me.Never having seen the book, [She] was so interested in it that I had to retain it longer.However, I hope that in view of the additional delight thus afforded by your book, you will overlook my negligence in not returning it sooner.Thanking you again for the loan.Sincerely yours,亲爱的[凯特]:
我迟迟未能归还您的那本《鲁滨逊飘流记》,请原谅。该书我读得津津有味。读完后,正预备归还您时,我的[表妹]来访,见这本书也感兴趣,定要借去一读。为了让别人也能分享您那本书所给予的乐趣,我不能及时归还。我想再延迟些日子奉还,谅您不会介意的。
再次感谢您的慷慨。
祝好!
4.因遗失借书致歉 Because of losing a borrowed book
Dear [Frank]:
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the valuable book you were so kind to lend me [last week].I read it [everyday] and intended to finish it [next month].[Last night] when I came to my room, it was nowhere to be found.I will try to recover it as soon as possible.If I fail to find it, I will get a new book for you.But I am afraid it can never take the place of the old one.Old books are like old friends.Once lost, they can never be replaced.They are connected with cherished associations which the new ones can never have.And for this irrecoverable loss, I am to blame.I was so careless with my things.This is a warning to me to be more careful in the future.Yours truly,亲爱的[弗兰克]:
很抱歉,[上星期]您借给我的那本书竟遗失了。我[每天]都在看,准备[下个月]看完。[昨晚]我回到我的卧室,到处也找不到那本书。我将尽力找到它。万一找不到,我只好买一本新的还您。
但是,新书恐怕不能代替那本旧书吧!旧书跟旧友一样,一旦失去就不能再得。旧书与往事相连,这种不可弥补的损失,皆由我起。我对待一切太大意了,这次给我一个警告,叫我以后要小心。
三、慰问信
慰问信应写得真切,注意措辞,对轻病或者小损失,慰问信应写得轻松一些。相反,对严重病情或重大损失,信就应该写得深沉一些。慰问信写时应注意:
1.写给受伤人的信要简短,中肯。信中不必问询事故发生的过程、原因、见证人等。
2.慰问信中应写一些被慰问者喜欢或熟悉的事物,如病人的爱好、兴趣等,以使病人得到宽慰。
1.向朋友问候 A letter of inquiring after someone’s health
Dear [John]:
I am extremely sorry to hear that your illness, which we had thought was clearing up, has become more serious, and that your have had to go into hospital.Let us hope that it will be for only a very short time, and that you will soon be out and about again.Everybody here sends his best wishes to you for a quick recovery.With kind regards,Yours sincerely,亲爱的[约翰]:
听说你病了,我深感不安。原来我们还以为您的病情有所好转,事实上却反而加重,而不得不住进了医院。但愿这是短时间的,很快不会恢复健康。这里每个人都祝愿您早日痊愈。
特此问候
2.问候朋友的母亲 Inquiring after the health of a friend’s mother
Dear [Mr.Wang],I felt very sorry indeed when I heard of [your mother]’s illness, and am anxious to know how [she] is of late.Under a separate cover I am sending [her a box of assorted biscuits] with my best regards.Sincerely yours 亲爱的[王先生]:
听说您的母亲身体欠安,深表忧虑。不知令堂近况如何,实为惦念。随信另寄上[什锦饼干一盒],并致以最良好的问候。
您忠诚的
[吴洋]
3.祝贺朋友病愈 Congratulations on someone’s recovery
Dear [Jane]:
I learn, with very great pleasure, that the illness which has so cruelly caused great anxiety among your relatives and all those who know you has changed for the better and that you are now recovering, for which I therefore desire to congratulate you warmly.I hope that you will soon be completely restored to health.Yours sincerely
亲爱的[简]:
在您患病的这一期间内,亲戚朋友无不为你挂虑,听到你的病已有好转,并已逐渐痊愈,十分快慰,特地向你祝贺。
望你早日完全痊愈。
4.慰问丧偶的朋友 A letter of inquiring to those who lost their husband or wife
Dear [Mrs.Harper],I would like to express my sorrow at the recent death of your [husband].In the long time it was my privilege to enjoy [Professor of Harper]’s friendship.I found [him] a sincere and helpful associate, with whom it was a pleasure [to work].The knowledge that my thoughts are with you at his time will, I hope, be of some comfort to you.Truly yours
亲爱的[哈珀女士]:
获悉你的[丈夫]最近逝世的消息,深表遗憾。
长期以来,能与[哈珀教授]保持友谊是我的荣幸。[哈珀教授]是一位我最乐于与其一道[工作]的忠实而有帮助的朋友。
但愿我此时的问候,能给您带来一些安慰。
四、传真
传真是通过传真机传递的信函,大多为业务信函。企事业单位都有专用的传真纸,纸上面印有现成的传真格式,拟发传真时按格式填写即可。下面为一种常见的传真格式:
发传真人单位名称、地址=电话和传真号码、电子邮件网址
TO:(收传真人单位)
DATE(发送传真日期)
ATTN:(Attention, 收传真部门或个人姓名)
FAX NO:(传真号)
FROM:(发传真部门或个人姓名)
PAGE(S):(所发传真页数)
RE:(Regarding, 传真内容标题)
(传真信函):
称呼语:
信体:
客套结语:
署名:
五、请求信
Example 1.1903 Huashan Road
Shanghai 200030 July 8, 1995
Dear Sirs,I wish to enroll your intensive English program before I attend a university in the fall of 1996.Your sending me application materials at your earliest convenience will be greatly appreciated.Sincerely yours,Wang Xiaoping
Example 2.Wang Xiaoping
1903 Huashan Road
Shanghai 200030
July 6,1998
Dear Sirs,I want to pursue a Master’s degree in Electrical Engineering at your university.My intended date of entrance is Spring, 1999.Would you please send me the application forms for admission?
Sincerely yours
Wang Xiaoping
六、布告(Announcement):布告的写作和便条一样,也比较简单。只要注意以下几点即可:
1.在正文上方的中间位置应该注明布告的性质。2.
正文中简单明了地说明布告的事宜。3.
正文右下方应该注明发布告的单位。4.
发布告的日期可以省略。Sample:
Lost and Found A lady has picked a wrist watch in the shopping center and turned it over to our office.The owner of the wrist watch may come to claim it with his or her identification card.Lost and Found Office
七、(Notice):英文通知的写作也可采用不同形式。有的是采用句子的形式予以陈述,而有的则只做以简单的罗列。一般应注意以下几点: 1.必须包括notice字样,而且每个字母都应采用大写。
2.内容必须包括时间、地点、事宜和通知对象等。表达须准确,措词也要较正式。
3.必须包括写通知的个人或者单位的称谓,而且一般都放在通知的右下脚。
4.必须包括写通知的日期。
Sample:
NOTICE
May 4, 2003 Mr.Wang, the general manager of Shanghai Golden Palm Computer System Limited Company, will give a lecture on Modern Information Management Model at 6:30 p.m.on March 12.The one-and-a-half-hour lecture will be held in the Multi-media Lecture Room.Students of Information Management are invited to attend the lecture.Information Management Department
Example 拟一张请计算机系的学生于10月5号星期三下午1:30到系会议室听关于环境保护报告的通知。
NOTICE
Oct.2, 2004 All students of the Computer Department are requested to meet in the department conference room at 1:30 p.m.on Wednesday, October5, to hear a report on environmental protection.The Computer Department Office
八.便条 基本写作格式
便条内容和类型不尽相同,可以灵活变通。但各类便条必须包括以下几个基本要素;1)Date:便条日期2)Salutation:称呼3)Body:正文4)Signature:署名
样例
收条:即收到钱物之后,给交钱或送物人写张字据,说明已经收到某物,可留作证据。条据上需写明钱物名称和数量、立据人及日期。不得涂改。
Jan.23rd,2003Received from Student, Wang Zihao one hundred yuan only for this months tuition fee.Li ManFor the Finance Office ofForeign Language Institute
欠条;留下字据,表示欠某人某物。条据上需写明钱物名称和数量、立据人及日期。不得涂改。
Sept.16th, 2002Borrowed from the Foreign Language Department Reference Library three books as follows:A copy of History and Anthology of English Literature by Wu WeirenA copy of A Survey of American Literature by Chang YaoxinA copy of World Literature by Jiang Chengen
Wu Zhuo
For the Office of
Social Science Department
留言:用书面留下要说的话。留言涉及的方面很多,包括约会,通知,请求等任何可用便条留下的口信。
TuesdayDear Li,As the Spring Festival is drawing near, Im very glad to invite you to come to a dinner party with several other friends of ours.Im sure we will have a very happy time and enjoy ourselves thoroughly.Would you like to come on time at 5:00 p.m.today, to Room 6 of Lijing Hotel?
Yours always, Jiayang
请假条:往往指由于生病或特殊情况不能亲自当面请假,用假条的形式告假。所以,请假条大多是病假条。可以自写,也可请他人代写。写假条最重要的是说明原因和请假的期限。
Jan.10thDear Ms.Jiang,I am terribly sorry that I shall be unable to attend this mornings two periods of English Class due to a bad cold and high fever.Enclosed is a certificate from the doctor who said I must stay in bed for a few days.I will go back to school as soon as I recover.Yours respectfully,Tian Ye
常用句子I shall feel obliged if you will favor me with a call at your earliest convenience.如您方便,请早日来电,我将不胜感激。
Delighted!Will call at 2 p.m.tomorrow.来条收悉,定于明天下午两点拜访。
Encl.: Doctors Certificate of Advice.附;医生证明I shall be bery happy to call at your house at 6:30 this everying.Until then,...我定于今晚6:30去你家,望等候。
Upon receiving this note, please come to my office.见条后,请立即来我办公室。
Mr.Li stands in urgent need of your service.李先生急需你的帮助。
I happen to be in urgent need of 200 yuan.我因有急事,需要200元。
Yours note with an admission ticket enclosed is much appreciated.留言和一张入场券均已收到,不胜感激。
Im very grateful to you for your kind invitation, and Im sure to come to see your concert.承蒙邀请观看你们的音乐会,我一定按时到场。
Please accept this little figt as a small token of my esteen for you.奉上这小小的礼物,以表达我对您的崇高敬意。
结束语I trust my absence will not cause you any serious inconvenience.望我的缺席不会给你带来太大的不便。
Please favor me with an early reply.敬请早复。
Hoping that the matter will be dealt with as soon as possible.希望能及早处理此事。
Please give an extension of leave for three days.请准予续假三天为盼。
九、简历(resume)简 历 1 结构要点: 简历是个人经历的书面表达形式,应包含个人信息、教育背景和工作经历。有时还可包含事业目标(objective或career objective)、其他经历(activities)、获奖情况(awards)和特长(special skills)等。举例:Suppose you are going to graduate from the university.Write a resume in about 100 words to apply for a job.Do not use your own name, using “Li Mei” instead.Sample:
RESUME Personal Data: Name:Li Mei Sex:Female Address: Room 602, Dormitory Building 12,Wuhan University Wuhan, Hubei, 430021 Date of Birth:June 16, 1983 Place of Birth:Zunyi, Guizhou Telephone:(027)87273548, *** Email:angellimei@gmail.com Hobbies:painting, reading, Internet surfing, dancing Foreign Languages:English Objective: To work as a regional sales representative who is responsible for sales activity and coordination Education:
2002 ~ Present Studying at Wuhan University Bachelor of Arts in finance 1999 ~ 2002 Studying at Zunyi No.1 High School 1996 ~ 1999 Studying at Zunyi No.7 Junior High School Work Experience: None Special Skills and Technical Qualifications:
I am professionally trained in finance and economics.In addition to Mandarin, I can speak, write and read English fluently.I had two parttime jobs in Taiping Company and Zhida company, which helped me gain some sales operation knowledge and sales plan-ning experience
简 历
语言注意点: 简历忌过长或用词空泛,提供的信息应有用、如实,编排须整齐有系统。
举例:Suppose you are Tan Wen, English teacher at Taiyuan Institute of Technology.Write a resume in about 100 words to apply for a new job in another city.Sample: Tan Wen Taiyuan Institute of Technology Taiyuan, Shanxi Province telephone:(0351)6523787 Experience 2000 ~ Present Working as a lecturer of English at Taiyuan Institute of Technology Teaching undergraduate(nonEnglish majors)intensive reading, extensive reading, listening, writing Teaching graduate(nonEnglish majors)writing Education 1997 ~ 2000 Studying at Shanghai Teacher's University Master of Arts in American Studies 1993 ~ 1997 Studying at Shanxi University Bachelor of Arts in English Language and Literature 1990 ~ 1993 Studying at Mianyang Senior High School 1987 ~ 1990 Studying at Mianyang No.5 Junior High School Personal Data Sex: Female Date of Birth: June 27, 1976 place of Birth: Mianyang, Sichuan, China Marital Status: Married, without Child Health: Excellent
十、申请信
结构要点申请信是向收信人提出某个请求的信件,包含三个部分: 1. 提出请求; 2. 说明原因; 3. 请求回复并表示感谢。
举例:Write a letter in about 100 words to apply for a scholarship from a foreign university.Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.Dear Sir, I wish to apply for admission to your department as a graduate student.I am writing to ask whether it will be possible for you to grant me a full scholarship.I have just graduated from Shanghai University of Finance and Economics and got my bachelors degree last month.During my four years in the university, I have passed all the compulsory courses of study with high marks.Furthermore, I have chosen a wide range of optional courses such as literary, history and public speaking to widen my horizon and sharpen my mind.My father, a professor of English in Nanjing University, has been teaching me English since I was a child.So I believe I will not have any language difficulties while learning in your country.I would be most grateful if my request receives your favorable consideration.Thank you in advance and look forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely, Li Ming 语言注意点申请信开篇应点明主题,语言简练。接着说明做此申请的原因,即自己所具备的申请条件,这一部分需重点明确,论述充分。最后请求回复并表示感谢时,应采用礼貌、诚恳的措辞。
举例:Write a letter in about 100 words to apply for a membership in a community service team.Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.Dear Sir, I have heard that a service team which aims to help the old and the handicapped will be organized in our community.I am very interested in it and want to join the team.I now study in Tongji University and my parents live here.It is known to all that it is a virtue to help others in need.As a college student, I am eager to do something for the society.Helping others is meaningful in that we not only bring others convenience and strength but also gain pleasure and satisfaction ourselves.Therefore, please allow me to join the team.I will certainly try my best.Yours sincerely, Li Ming
第四篇:考研英语写作替换词.新东方老师总结
1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的),promising(有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替换bad 如果bad做表语,可以有be less impressive替换
eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.注:用many, if not most 一定要小心,many后一定要有词。Eg.Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all ,替换most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因为是书面语,所以要加that)7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing 8: shared 代 common 9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits)10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion 11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly 13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful, 14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer 15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very 16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable...替换 unnecessary, avoidable 17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb.be interested in 18.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect 20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear 21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth 23.desire 替换want.24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to 25.bear in mind that 替换remember 26.enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)27.interaction替换communication 28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth 29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance 30.next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible
写作词汇杂谈
存
在come to be;come into existence;come to birth;come into being 考虑consider;take into consideration;take into account 考虑到in consideration of 用尽力气exhaust one’s strength;use up one’s strength 开动initiate;set going 准备…brace for;prepare for 在于lie in;rest on;rest with 主动take the initiative 不算exclusive of;not counting;leaving out 应该得到deserve;have right to;is worthy of 避免avoid;shun;get around;circumvent 幻想fantasy;play of the mind 以此标准来算by this criterion;by this standard 乍看之下at first glance 面对in the face of;in the presence of 以by means of;by virtue of;by the use of 不惜代价at all costs 每况愈下from bad to worse 承受错误造成的后果in reaping the harvest of his mistakes 取得同意…get the go-ahead to 不择手段unscrupulously;by hook or by crook 想法与作法beliefs and practices 内情ins and outs;turns and twists 关键时刻the critical moment 虽然although;notwithstanding;albeit;though 根
据according to;on the basis of;on the ground of(that);in the light of;in line with;in accordance with 逃避问题evade the question 增大enlarge;extend;aggrandize 澄清clarify;make clear 赔偿compensate for;give…as compensation for 实现carry out;implement;realize;make…come true 假定suppose;assume;postulate;hypothesize 极端的radical;extreme 极端的措施drastic measures 剩下的the rest;the remainder;what is left 换言之in other words;put another way 结果result;aftermath;consequence 优点advantage;strength;strong point;merit;benefit 简言之put simply;in short;in brief;in a nutshell 举
例
而
言for instance;for example;to illustrate;let us cite 特别是an illustration;to cite a concrete case 特
别
是especially;more than others;particularly;in particular 既然…now that…;seeing that…
迹象inkling;hint;clue;a slight suggestion 缺
点disadvantage;demerit;shortcoming;drawback;weakness 除去do away with;eliminate;remove;get rid of 缺少for lack of;for a deficiency of 毕竟after all;all in all 范围scope;field;realm 潜力potential;行为conduct;behavior;doings 隔绝isolate;insulate 分辨出identify;recognize 不易懂的elusive;hard to understand 展开unfold 回馈feedback 主导的人
物a dominant figure;a controlling man;the most influential person 观点viewpoint;point of view;perspective;standpoint 正在进行中is underway 只是一种姿态is merely a gesture 立场position;stand;stance 意向inclination;leaning;intention 特权privilege;a special right 来自stem from;come from 一件事的不同说法alternative statements of fact 交织intertwine;interweave 好奇心the eager desire to know;curiosity 尊敬respect;esteem;think highly of 顽固的headstrong;obstinate;stubborn 暗淡的gloomy;dark;dim 巨大的huge;gigantic;colossal;vast;enormous;tremendous 探索explore;fathom 执行carry out;execute;do 现代modern times;modern age;contemporary age 偏见prejudice;bias;partiality;predilection 混乱chaos;commotion;confusion;disturbance;tumult 无弹性(僵硬)rigid 无缺点的flawless;airtight 无药可救incurable 无法避免的unavoidable;inevitable 细密的计划elaborate plan 取消cancel;annul;abolish 解药a cure for…;a remedy for;谜puzzle;riddle;enigma
第五篇:考研英语 应用文写作
考研应用文写作(A节作文)一.应用文写作要求: 1 内容全面(覆盖面)2 语言自然(词汇丰富,衔接手段的应用)3 语法正确 语域得体(正式与非正式)5 格式正确
二.写作类型:1信件(私人及公务)备忘录摘要报告
三.写作总体把握:确定文章格式 与语域,抓住关键词,合理想象, 确定文章内容与结构
应用文分类破解 信件写作
(A)信件格式:称呼 正文 结束语
签名 第一段自我介绍句型: I am
(a staff member of)_____________.写作目的句型: I am writing the letter in purpose of _____________.感谢对方来信的句型: It is really a surprise to receive your letter of June 18.Your letter of June 18th has arrived.What a pleasing surprise!
thThank you for your letter of June 18.2 结尾段句型: 1)表示感谢:My thanks to you for your general help are beyond words.I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation to the kind assistance you render me.I apologize for all the inconvenienced I have Caused
2)期待回信
I am looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.I look forward to hearing from you soon.B 求学信写作
1首段: 自我介绍,申请原因, 说明写信目的 2 主体:自己的背景资料,询问对方学校的资料结尾: 希望尽快收到答复,表示感谢与期待
常用句型:
th1)I am writing to inquire about the entrance to your university.2)I wish to apply to your esteemed department as a postgraduate student.3)Your university is a well-staffed and well-equipped institute with a long history and a fine tradition of scholarship.4)Would you please be kind to furnish me with some related information?(P27)
C 投诉信 自我介绍,引出投诉内容 2 描述个人经历
时间、地点。First, …..then…..Later,….Next,….Soon,…..Eventually,….引起有关人员或公众注意,避免再次发生 4 希望能尽快得到满意答复 常用句型: 1 I’m writing to put forward some opinions about I’m writing to complain about I’m writing to you to express my dissatisfaction with 4 I hope that the authorities concerned will consider my suggestions and improve the situation as best as they can.We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind.D 求职信 说明信息来源,表明写作目的和应聘职位.2 详述个人经历和能力:教育程度,所学专业(或询问薪水待遇)3 希望获得面试机会,提供联系方式,感谢对方关心 常用句型: I have read your advertisement in _____, and I should be grateful if you could consider me favorable for this position.2 I am writing to apply for the position of __________ which you advertised in ____.3 I am writing to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of ___ you have advertised in I graduated from the ________ university majoring in ______.I have been working in ______ since my graduation, and therefore attained a fair knowledge and experience in this field.I would appreciate it if you could grant me an interview so that I could explain in more details.6 With the kind of experience I have accumulated, I would expect a salary of not less than ___ 7 If you want to know more about me, please contact me at ________.求职信范文
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a waitress.Enclosed with the letter is my resume, which further details my qualifications and previous work experience.Not only do my qualifications and work experience make me a perfect candidate for the job, but my personality is well suited to working as a waitress.I am a very friendly person who can quickly establish rapport with people of all ages.I would like to meet with you at your earliest convenience, to discuss the possibility of working at your restaurant.Thank you for your consideration of my application.I look forward to meeting you in the near future.Your sincerely Li Ming The principle of hard work applies to 应用文写作(二)推荐信写作
第一段:介绍自己背景,与被推荐人的关系以及为何事推荐
常用句型: As________(自己的背景或者与被推荐者的关系), I take great pleasure in recommending _________for acceptance into(for the position of)________.I am_________.I am writing with pleasure to recommend _____, one of my favorite students, as far as all that I know, for the position in your company.第二段:具体说明被推荐者的细节 常用句型: With good educational background and excellent character, ______ is qualified to apply for an appropriate position in your company.第三段:表示期待以及愿意进一步提供信息 常用句型: A long journey begins with the first step.As far as I know of him, I am very pleased to write this letter of reference to support ______, a very promising young man to apply for ________.If you want to know more information about him, please don’t hesitate to contact me at _____.According to my knowledge of him in the past three years, I believe _____is qualified for this position.Should you need any further information about this student, please feel free to contact me ______.感谢信句型
Please accept my belated thanks for__________.I really appreciated your ___________.I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for _________.备忘录写作 Date: To: From: Subject: 正文:
通知的写作
Notice /announcement All students are requested to be present at the meeting to be held in the school auditorium on Saturday , January 14, 2005 at 3:00 pm.The meeting scheduled to take place this Tuesday is postponed until further notice.写作病句回顾 There are many ways to know the society.For example, by TV, radio and newspapers.2 When he made the decision.He found he began to regret.English is a compulsory course in many colleges, and a student must pass it before he earns his degree.4 The problem is that your brain is less and less efficient, your process is slower and slower.However, there are still many students applying for teaching positions, teachers are very popular in our society.6 Take photos is my habit during travel.7 Our class has more than 200 students, often forcing me to sit on the floor.8 Because I want to be a scientist, so I worked very hard.9 I want to buy something that you will like it.Knowledge, it is the most important things of our world.To make progress, many factors have to be taken into account.12 In Nanjing, the weather is fine, you can enjoy your life here.Getting married is easy, staying married is a difficult matter.To learn English well is not an easy work.15 But it may occur many problems.16 Being a professor needs knowledge, patience and your virtue.Seeing this, many thoughts came into his mind.However people who hold the view :global shortage of fresh water On the top of that, with the increasing of the factory.(前面句号改成逗号,前面不是一个完整的句子)There will need fresh water For example , a child lives with his parent for 18 years, when he go to university , he even don’t know what clothes to wear in every seasons.there is(删除)the flower fades in the same situation without the green house.Face(facing)this situation, drastic measure have be taken to and this unhealthy trend This picture vividly depicts that the athlete rushing to the end of line that is marked “start” in front and “end” in behind.But others do not agree with it, and believe there is several opportunity in everyone.more and more people come to realize that(删除)the important of kownledge.