MBA联考英语作文（大全）

第一篇：MBA联考英语作文（大全）

投诉信

日期 Dear sir,(第一段)I am sorry to inform you that I am unhappy about__________________，so I regret to have to complain _____________（提出投诉，表示遗憾）(第二段)There are ________________(问题1)，______________(造成的影响)；___________________(问题2)，_________________(造成的影响)；（该段主要用于陈述不满的原因）。（第三段）

I would appreciate it very much if your company could look into the matter and arrange for a replacement of the faulty goods promptly.So I propose that you___________________________________________, I am looking forward to your earliest reply.（该段主要提出补救的建议）

Sincerely yours XXX

常见词和关键词：late delivery，cause，fulfill order，on checking the goods receive(当验货时)，I found that, since the late delivery has caused dissatisfaction among our customers, I considering, discount, I suggest that, I propose that, recently, refuse, as you known, after-sales service, breakdown, immediate, shipment, delay，道歉信

日期 Dear sir，（第一段）

Thank you for your letter of ______（时间）.I am very sorry to hear about your problems with my faulty.I had no idea that you were in any way dissatisfied.(感谢对方告知实情，并表示道歉)（第二段）

If you had let me know earlier, I could have investigated this immediately.Please allow

me

to

explain

what happened.__________________________________(解释原因)； ————————————（提出解决方案）；if you experience any difficulties, please call me or fax me at once and I will take immediate action.（该段用于解释原因并提出解决方案）（第三段）

Please let me apologize to express how sorry I am.I will make efforts to prevent a recurrence.(我们将尽力防止此事再次发生)

Sincerely yours XXX

常见词和关键词：excellent,apologize

感谢信

日期 Dear Sir,（第一段）

I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for your warm reception while I ______________________。（告之感谢对方什么）（第二段）

Your sincerity was most impressive.Without your help, things would not have gone so smoothly.___________;_____________;______________(l列举对方如何帮助我们)。It is hard to imagine what my life have been like without your care and help.（恭维对方，描述如何帮助我们）（第三段）

I am anticipating further cooperation.In return for your hospitality, I would like to invite you to ____________（邀请来做什么），I am looking forward to seeing you again at that time.（对未来关系展望）

Sincerely yours XXX

常见词和关键词：hospitality，warm reception,heartfelt thanks,colleagues

邀请函

日期 Dear XXX，（第一段）

I am delighted to invite you and your delegation of 10 people to pay a working visit to china for a week in September or October 2011.the propose of visit is_____________________(邀请来做什么事情)；（第二段）

I highly appreciate our undergoing the discussion on_____________(在什么地方的讨论)，and expect a have fruitful meeting with you in China.By the way, your group’s board,lodging and all other expenses will be coverd by us.Should you have some questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.Very truly yours XXX

图表作文

（第一段）

The chart gives us an overall picture of the ____________（图表主题）。The first thing we notice is that_____________（图表最大特点）/the changes in the number of _____over the period from______to_____.This means that as ___________________（进一步描述）。(该段描述图表的性质，简单阐述其特点)

（第二段）

As can see from the above chart, _____________（图表细节一）。After ving_________（细节一的变化），the ____________（紧跟着的变化）。The figures also tells us that___________________图表细节二）。In the secondary，we can see that ______________accounts for _________（进一步描述）。

A number of factors may have contributed to this situation.Above all,________________（原因1）,second,_________________(原因2),A major reason is that_________________________（原因3）。（该段对图表的数据进行说明，并阐述原因）

（第三段）

Judging from this chart，we can draw the conclusion that___________（结论）。It is high time that we ______________（发出倡议）。/there is every reason to believe that the trend will continue in the foreseeable future.总结 关键词汇：

increase,decrease,fell,decline,sharply,dramatically,significantly,rapidly,steadily,slightly,remained unchanged, rise gradually, peaked at, low level, reached the peak, three-fold increase, A increase gradually while B decrease, A and B are closely related, table，对比观点型

（第一段）

In recent years, there has been a heated debate over the relative importance of _________versus_______.Whereas some people hold that __________is more important than _________, others argue that the reverse is true.(对全文进行概述)（第二段）

Those who take the first view assume that ___________(对观点进行介绍),in contrast, the second opinion is based on the assumption that_________________(对观点进行介绍).（第三段）

As for me, I advocate the first view point.The reasons are as follows: Firstly, _____________________________________________________ Secondly, ___________________________________________________ Finally, _________________________(阐述自己选择的观点的理由)In my opinion, it does not make sense to generalize about which is more important, ___________ or ____________.Their relative importance depends on specific contexts.So the debate is essentially a chicken-and egg problem.关键词：nowadays, for example，问题解决型

（第一段）

In recent years, there has been a lot of debate over____________（问题）/ scandal was disclosed, people and government and international communities were shocked.It is reported that________________(写一个报道内容)，this situation calls for close attention from the general public.(该段对问题进行描述)（第二段）

A number of factors have contributed to the emergence of this problem.Firstly, _________________________________________________ Secondly, ________________________________________________ Thirdly, ________________________________________________ Another factors worth mentioning is that_____________________(该段要写问题产生的原因或者影响)（第三段）

To solve the problem, several measures can be taken.Premerily, ____________________________________________ Secondly,_________________________________________ The most significant measure is___________________________(该段要写解决问题的方法)关键词汇：positive effect , negative effect, to reduce the negative effect, A large number of ,the situation is associated with several factors, incident，accident, is likely to harm the reputation of , address, issue, It is necessary to, domestic-brand, distributor, fundamental，对立观点型

（第一段）

Across the world throughout history, it often happens that different people perceive the same objective thing differently.For example, two typical points of view have been expressed concerning_____________________(引出文章讨论的对象)(第二段)Some people think that ________________, they cite the following as major reasons: firstly, ______________,secondly,__________________.（介绍第一种观点，并解释原因）(第三段)Others argue that _________________.they base this argument mainly on The following grounds: first, _______________.second,_____________.（介绍第二种观点，并解释原因）

For my point, I advocate the first viewpoint.My reasons are as follow: First,_______________.second,______________.third,____________.(发表自己的观点并说明原因)或者都不同意，自己提出新观点：

I do not agree with other of the view.In my opinion,_______________, The reason why_______________________________________ 关键词汇：disagreement, whereas, different people have different view, thereby，独立观点型

(第一段)In recent years, more and more people tend to______________________ /there has been a growing trend among___________________________ /with the development of economic globalization, more and more people___________________。This phenomenon is receiving more and more attention from the general public.(该段要求对事实进行描述)（第二段）

I think we should take a positive/negative attitude towards it.The reasons are as follows.First, _________________, second,_________________.Finally,_______________.(该段表明自己的观点，并说明原因)（第三段）

From the above analysis, we can see that _____________________.there is every reasons that this trend will continue and even grow stronger in the future, because_____________________./I firmly believe that_____________________(该段总结展望)关键词汇：

opportunity, personally, oppose, convinction, rethink, strategy, owing to, appeal, on the practical side, as well as, benefit from this sort of, not only…but also, obviously,

第二篇：MBA联考英语写作例题及

便条就是一种简单的书信，内容简短，大多是临时性的留言、要求等。是在有急事需告诉别人而又不能面谈时，就可以写便条，如请假条、留言条等等，一般不写地址，与普通书信基本相同。具有用途广泛、形式简单、文字要求不严格的特点。便条都不用邮寄。例一：请假条。写请假条时，如有医生出具的证明，最好一起附上。Dear Mr.Pike，I very much regret I was unable to attend school this morning owing to a severe attack of illness.I am enclosing here with a certificate from the doctor who is attending me, as he fears it will be several days before I shall be able to resume my study.I trust my enforced absence will not give you any serious inconvenience.Sincerely yours Jack 亲爱的派克先生：

非常抱歉，我因今晨突然生病不能前来上课。现附上医生证明，医生担心我也许要几天后才能上课。希望我这次身不由己的缺勤不致给您带来很大的麻烦。

忠实于您的杰克

例二：留言条。可用于说明一件事、做一次活动安排以及询问等等，应直截了当。写留言条，日期部分写在右上角，一般只写星期几，或星期几上午、下午或具体钟点。Dear peter: I have done all my things here.i sincerely thank you for the trouble you have taken for my sake.I am leaving for home by train at two this afternoon.this is to say good-bye to you.Please kindly remember me to your wife.Yours ever, Jack 亲爱的彼特：

我在这里的事情已经全部办好。这次麻烦你了，我万分感激。我定于今天下午两点乘火车返家，特来辞行，并请代向你的妻子问好。

挚友

杰克

The bar chart above demonstrates clearly that some changes havetaken place in terms of the situation of part-time jobs in a certain university.Although the participation percentage of part-time jobs from university thefirst year to the third year almost remain stable, we can see that percentageof university the fourth year has been on a sharp rise。

In the freshman year, based upon the data of the chart, the participationpercentage of part-time jobs is nearly 67.77%;the second year, 71.13%;thethird year, 71.93%.Surprisingly, the percentage rises dramatically to 88.24%in the senior year。

For my part, it’s of no difficulty for us tocome up with some possible factors to account for this trend.For example, dullnessand loneliness are common problems of seniors, therefore more seniors take partin part-time jobs.But the sources of this phenomenon go way deeper.It is theturbulent employment environment that shapes this trend.For hunting jobs andthen broadcasting their ambition, seniors try all means to gather workingexperience.I believe that finding reasons can be described as a bridge betweenproblems and solutions.(187words)(文都 徐可风)

网络综合a blessing or a curse?

As TV enters more and more families, people begin to wonder about its advantages and disadvantages.Some believe that it is a blessing, while others hold that it is a curse to society.Let's look at the good points of TV.Firstly, it can bring people new information in time from every corner in the world.People can enjoy their favourite programs at home.For example, Discovery is the program I like most, not only because it is interesting, but also because it provides some knowledge I cannot get from books.But on the other hand, TV may exert bad influence on people.A case in point is that some programs are full of violence and these programs unwittingly set terrible examples for audience.As a result, people, especially juveniles, are led to commit crimes.In my opinion, the attitude toward TV all depends on oneself.Mature persons are always capable to keep themselves away from its bad influence.But one thing is important： we should make full use of its advantages and avoid its disadvantages.● How to...题型

模板1

Along with the great economic development/the development of people's living standard in China and the high call for dealing with 主题 , more and more people are coming to realize the serious problem caused by 主题.But how to solve this problem?

As a matter of fact, there are many ways can contribute to solving this serious problem, but I think the following ones may be most effective.First of all is 方法1.Another way to solve the problem of 主题 is 方法2.Finally 方法3.These are not the best and the only several measures we can take.But there is no doubt that attention must be paid and it is clear that the task demands great efforts.The government/We should take considerable efforts to achieve the goal.(119 words)

范文:

How to solve unemployment problem?

Along with the great economic development in China and the high call for dealing with unemployment problem , more and more people are coming to realize the serious problem caused by unemployment.But, how to solve this problem?

As a matter of fact, there are many ways that can contribute to solving this serious problem, but I think the following ones may be most effective.First of all is to change people's traditional idea and encourage them to channel their own career.Another way to solve the problem of unemployment is to develop the tertiary industry.Finally we can find other ways to solve this problem.For example, increasing government investment.These are not the best and the only several measures we can take.But there is no doubt that attention must be paid and it is clear that the task demands great efforts.The government should take considerable efforts to achieve the goal.模板2

主题 is an annoying problem for people all over the world.I believe it can be dealt with on three levels: internationally, nationally, and last but not least, on a personal level.In my opinion, strict international regulations should be made.At the same time, 方法1.On the national level, government must see to it 方法2.Lastly, what can we do as individuals? First, 方法3.For instance, 例子.Second, 方法4.In a word, 主题 is a problem that can be solved if people take actions in cooperation.(81 words)

范文:

How to fight against pollution?

Pollution, with the development of modern industry, is becoming an annoying problem for people all over the world.I believe it can be dealt with on three levels： internationally, nationally, and last but not least, on a personal level.In my opinion, strict international regulations should be made.At the same time, every country should realize the seriousness of pollution and put all our heads together to fight against it.On the national level, government must see to it that severe measures should be carried out.These measures could help to reduce pollution and protect our environment.Lastly, what can we do as individuals? First, I think we should make changes to our life styles.For instance, we can try and use public transport or bicycles as much as possible.Second, we can protest against any bad actions.In a word, pollution is a problem that can be solved if people take actions in cooperation.模板3

主题 is the foundation of our future development.If 主题 become poor/sick/worse, it is impossible for us to attain our goal.On the other hand, if 主题 become strong/good, we can achieve our dreams.How can we have good 主题 ? First, we should 方法1.Second, we should 方法2 , such as 例子.Third, there is a proverb that says, “ 谚语.” If we pay attention to 主题 , we can avoid 缺点1 or at least 缺点2.In conclusion, nothing is more valuable than 主题.In good 主题 , we can get more development.In good 主题 , we can lead a happy life.(90 words)

范文:

How to improve our health?

It is known to us all that health is the foundation of our future success.If our health become poor, it is impossible for us to attain our goals.On the other hand, if our health becomes good, we can finally achieve our dreams.How can we have good health ? There are some advices for you as follows.First, we should keep on doing exercise every day.Second, we should form some good habits , such as early rising, taking exercise regularly.Third, there is a proverb that says, “Prevention is better than cure.” If we pay enough attention to our health , we can avoid getting sick or at least cure ourselves of a disease while it is still at an early stage.In conclusion, nothing is more valuable than health.In good health , we can get more development in our career.Only being in good health , we can lead a happy life.模板4

Today the problem of 主题 has become more and more serious.现象1,2,3.If the problem continues to become worse like this, we will suffer the serious bad effect.Concerned people have put forward some methods to deal with the problems.The government has established laws to protect 主题.Still more measures should be taken to solve the problems.People should be further educated to recognize the importance of the problems and use more reasonable methods to cope with the problems.Only in this way can we have a better and wonderful future.(88 words)

范文：

How to protect environment?

Today the problem of environment has become more and more serious.The world population is rising so quickly that the world has become too crowded.We are using up our natural resources and at the same time polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals.If the problem continues to become worse like this, we will suffer the serious bad effect.What we will leave to our offspring might be a desperate future.Concerned people have put forward some methods to deal with the problems.The government has established laws to protect air, forests and sea resources and to stop environmental pollution.Although we have already achieved some success, we still have a long way to go.Still more measures should be taken to solve the problems.People should be further educated to recognize the importance of the problems and use more reasonable methods to cope with the problems.Only in this way can we have a better and wonderful future.模板5

When asked about one of the biggest problems today, many people say that 主题 is most threatening.They are afraid of the bad influence caused by 主题.To this problem, most people respond with the demand for 方法1.Indeed, this is urgently needed, for 原因.If we adopt this method, we can partially solve the problem.Moreover, we should take more effective ways to cope with the problem.So in the long run we must 方法2.Man is highly adaptable and creative.Since we can solve a lot of thorny problems, why can't we deal with this problem successfully?(97 words)

范文：

How to solve the energy problem?

When asked about one of the biggest problems today, many people say that energy crisis is most threatening.They are afraid of the bad influence caused by energy crisis.Although many people have realized this and some concerned experts have taken many measures, the crisis is still threatening.To this problem, most people respond with the demand for more rigid conservation of natural resources.Indeed, this is urgently needed, for the present habitual waste of energy is very serious.If we adopt this method, we can partially solve the problem.Moreover, we should take more effective way to cope with the problem.So in the long run we must develop new sources of energy instead of merely conserving the limited supplies.No mountain can never be conquered and no problem can never be solved.Man is highly adaptable and creative.Since we can solve a lot of thorny problems, why can't we deal with this problem successfully?

第三篇：2012年MBA联考必备作文

2012年MBA联考必备作文(1)

1.信仰是精神的支柱和动力

古代楚国有个卞和，在山中发现了一块璞玉，于是将那块璞玉献给楚厉王，厉王让玉匠鉴别，而玉匠说那是石头，结果厉王把卞和当作骗子而砍去了左脚。然而卞和对那块璞玉依然深信不疑，后来再次把它献给武玉，结果与上次一样又被砍去了右脚。武王死后，文王即位，卞和抱着那块璞玉在楚山下哭，一连哭了三天三夜，眼泪流尽继而流血，卞和痴心不改，最后那块璞玉终于通过玉匠的鉴定，证明是块罕见的宝玉。这就是历代传颂的“和氏璧”。

“和氏璧”的故事告诉我们这样一个真理，那就是：信仰是人们的精神支柱和动力。

人有了坚定的信仰，才能为实现自己的理想而进行不屈不挠的斗争。正是这种对真理的坚信不移，卞和才有着如此坚定的决心，才不惜舍去自己的双脚，要让美玉展现它的光彩，要让真理得到公认。

为了信仰就要付出代价，甚至生命。每年全世界亿万伊斯兰教徒都要去麦加朝圣，每年也因此要发生因酷热和拥挤而造成的大量伤亡。那么究竟是什么力量驱使他们那样虔诚地涌向麦加呢?我们只要看看他们深深跪下的双腿、低低俯下的脊背，还有每一张脸上那诚挚的表情，就会明白--那就是信仰。

人不能没有信仰，就是说人不能没有目标，不能没有追求。曾经是社会主义国家的“老大哥”的苏联如今江山易帜。苏联的解体固然有着多方面的原因，但是丧失了对共产主义信仰却是其中最根本的一个。信仰正如人的骨架，失掉了，人便垮了。面对社会主义苏联的结局，人们无不痛惜地说：“共产主义信仰不能丢，丢掉了，社会主义江山就要垮台。

从古到今，有无数志士仁人为捍卫自己的信仰曾献出了自己宝贵的生命。不管是罗马百花广场的火刑柱上印着的为科学的信仰而被活活烧死的布鲁诺的无畏形象，还是天安广场上人民英雄纪念碑上记载的无数为了他们的信仰而付出血的代价的革命先烈，无不是因为有坚定信仰的支柱和鼓舞，才表现出一往无前的献身精神的。

今天，我们要振兴中华，要建设有中国特色的社会主义，万万不可丢掉共产主义信仰，相反，要准备为之付出更高的代价。我们只有把共产主义的信仰化作全国人民的精神支柱和动力，具有中国特色的会主义，才能早日建成。

让我们进一步坚定共产主义的信仰，并在这一信仰的支柱和鼓舞下，为振兴中华奋勇前进吧!

2.有效率的乐观主义

古时候有这样一个笑话：一人从集市上买回一罐油，由于急着赶路，不幸罐索朽腐，油罐坠地摔碎，他头也不回地继续前行。路人提醒他：“你看你的油罐碎了。”他回答说：“已经碎了，看有什么用，只能耽误走路。”我想，这大概就是人们常常想到、常常念着的“乐观主义”了。

可见，乐观主义能帮人战胜许多愁虑、困难、穷苦、失望。

人生总会碰到恶魔的。一个人的目的愈远，计划愈大，他的工作所经过的途径也愈远;在前进的时候，有许多愁虑、困难、穷苦、失望，都是当然要碰到的恶魔。乐观主义的人，就像这个扛油罐的人一样，是不怕这些恶魔的摧沮的，反而会振起精神，抱着希望，向前干去!因为他们知道，倘被恶魔所屈服，便灭亡了;只有抱着乐观主义的态度，才能战胜恶魔，取得胜利!

凡是要做得好的事情，都不是随随便便就行的，都不是容易的。你自己要立于什么地位?要达到什么地步?情愿付什么代价?你所希望的地位或地步总在那里，不过必须先付足了代价的人，才能“如愿以偿”。沿着大成功的一条路上，有许多小失败排列着，最后的成功是在能用坚毅的精神，伶俐的眼光，从这许多小失败里面寻出教训，尽量地利用它，向前猛进。而这种”寻出“和”尽量地利用“，惟有抱乐观主义的人才能够办到。

有许多人，对乐观主义有一种误解，以为乐观主义的人不过是“喜皮笑脸”“随随便便”“一切放任”“撤撤烂污”“得过且过”“唯唯诺诺”。请君切莫误信这种谬说。真正的乐观主义的人是用积极的精神向前奋斗的人，是战胜愁虑穷苦的人。这类的苦境，常人遇着，要”心胆俱碎“"一蹶而不能复振”的;只有真正乐观主义的人才能努力奋斗，才敢努力奋斗!所以讲到乐观主义还不够，要有“有效率的乐观主义”才行。

古今中外，因了有极强烈而有效的乐观主义，战胜各种艰难险阻取得胜利的大有人在。牛顿发明地心吸力学说的时候，全世界人反对他;哈费(Harvey)发明血液循环学说的时候，全世界人反对他;达尔文宣布进化论的时候，全世人反对他;贝尔(Bell)第一次造电话的时候，全世界人讥笑他;莱特(Wright)初用苦工于制造飞机的时候，全世界人讥笑他。讲到孙中山先生，最初在南洋演讲革命救国的时候，有一次听的人只有三个。这许多人都因抱着乐观主义的精神，而为世人所称道。

极强烈而有效的乐观主义，能使人们战胜全世界的胡涂、盲从、冷酷、恐怖、怨恨和反抗。而且工作愈伟大，所受的反抗也愈厉害，简直成为一种律令，对付这种厉害的反抗，最重要的武器就是乐观主义。一个人，缺少了乐观主义精神，难免在各种恶魔面前败下阵来。

你要想使自己的事业取得成功么?那就请你拿起乐观主义这一降魔镇妖的法宝吧!

3.我知道得太少

气象、地理学家竺可桢，在离他逝世两个星期前的一天里，当他得知外孙女婿来到他家，便迫不及待地叫他讲授高能物理基本粒子的基本知识。老伴劝他：“你连坐都支持不住，还问这些干什么?”竺老听了老伴的话儿，一边咳嗽一边说：“不成，我知道得太少。”

好一个“我知道得太少”!这种谦逊好学，不耻下问，甘拜人师，永不满足的精神，正是我国人民的传统美德，也是人生道路上走向光辉顶点的基本要素。

竺可桢在气象学上辛勤耕耘，数十年如一日地进行长期观察研究，一生硕果累累。谁能想到，一个蜚声中外的大科学家，竟还在84岁的高龄，在生命处于垂危之际，先后五次向晚辈求教“补课”，孜孜不倦。不能不说这正是我国谦逊好学，不耻下问，甘拜人师，永不满足的精神这一传统美德在一个大科学家身上的生动体现，正是他能走向人生光辉顶点的基本要素。怎能不令人深深敬 佩呢?

人类史上，一个巨人的诞生，一门科学的创立，给社会带来了巨大的进步，但它并没有结束认识真理、认识客观世界的进程，科学真理的路儿仍在不断地仲延。随着时代的进步，科学的发展，学科愈来愈多，社会分工也越来越细，因此要不断进步，就必须不断学习。因此，谦逊好学，不耻下问，甘拜人师，永不满足的精神，永远是走向人生光辉顶点的基本要素。

这使我想起牛顿这位一代杰出的学者、现代科学的奠基人，他发现了万有引力定律，建立了成为经典力学基础的牛顿运动定律，出版了《光学》一书，确定了冷却定律，创制了反射望远镜，还是微积分学的创始人……功绩显赫，光彩照人，可当听到朋友们称他为“伟人”时，却说：“不要那么说，我不知道世人会怎么看我。不过我自己只觉得好像一个孩子在海边玩耍的时候，偶尔拾到几只光亮的贝壳。但对于真正的知识大海，我还是没有发现呢。”有这样谦逊好学，永不满足的精神，牛顿的成功是必然的!

古今成大事业、大学问者，无不是因为有了这种谦逊好学，不耻下问，甘拜人师，永不满足的精神，才达到人生的光辉顶点的。

中国有句古话：“学海无涯”。面对大千的世界，知识的宝山，惟有谦逊好学，不耻下问，甘拜人师，永不满足的精神，才能在人生的漫漫征途中不掉队，为祖国做出应有的贡献。

我们要有勇气像竺可桢老人那样说出“我知道得太少”。有这样，才能在求知的崎岖道路上奋然前行。

第四篇：MBA全国联考作文

备战2014年复旦托业模拟考试A3卷答案

语文：

有效性分析：

1.宫斗剧讲的是“斗”，是争宠夺权，因此，看这些剧，会刺激人们在生活中卖弄权术、使用阴谋。是因果无关。就好比，人们看警匪片就会抢银行，看功夫片就会上少林寺去学武术一样荒唐。

2.只要你人在社会中，终究不能逃脱一个“斗”字资源和空间，在特定的范畴内，比如公司，比如朝廷，比如江湖。混淆了“斗”在不同场合的内涵。在不同的场合，“斗“的含义不同，“斗”的激烈程度也不同。

3.人性有个共同的弱点：即我们在一个有限的资源环境内，必然会为了扩大自身的利益而进行斗争。不当假设，人性本恶。其前提也不必然推出结果，人们除了斗争还有别的选择。

4.这个判断是没有标准的，就像“一万个人有一万个哈姆雷特”，道德评价的标准也是没有标准的。混淆了个人标准与公众标准的区别，也就混淆了“标准”的概念。

5.批判这个电视剧是没有必要的，作为电视剧，反倒能为我们提供更多的思索空间，这空间没有抛弃道德，缺少前提依据。再有，即便这个电视剧没有抛弃道德，也不意味着提升和尊重道德。

论说文： 【参考文】

生活，需要经常的清点

我们都知道要定期地对自己的物品清理查点，哪些是生活必要的，哪些又是对生活并不太重要的，以此来决定对它们的取舍。其实生活也是如此，需要经常地清点，我们在清点生活的过程中，清点着生命。

人的生命是非常短暂而有限的，而我们渴望得到的东西，希望去做的事却是很多的。这个好，那个也不错，但是我们必须要清醒地意识到人的生命是有限的，人的能力也是有限的，应该对自己要做的事有所取舍选择，将自己的精力放在自己最该去做、最想去做的事情上，专注而有目标，这样做事情才会有希望。如果一个人在一生中不能够经常地果断地舍弃一些不该投入精力的事情，什么都渴望得到，时时、处处都劳心劳力，其结果只能是让自己失望。所以，生活真的需要经常清点。

舍得舍得，有舍才有得。小草舍弃了活在大树的浓荫里，才生长得更加坚韧；小鲤鱼舍弃了平淡地游弋在水中，逆水前行克服困难，才迎来了最终跃过龙门的成功；居里夫人舍弃对享乐的追求，潜心研究，最终为人类对放射性物质的研究作出了巨大的贡献；陈景润舍弃了安闲自在地做一件平凡的事，而胸怀大志，在简陋的生活环境中埋头苦干，实现了他多年的目标——证明出了哥德巴赫猜想。他们之所以取得成功，很重要的一个原因就是他们都将自己的精力放在一件事上，一个目标中，全身心地投入对理想的追求。

每个人都是多梦的，对未来有着各种各样的设想，对要干的事有各种各样的想法，但要明白的是精力有限，总会有取有舍，有失有得。将自己的精力放在最重要的事情上，他的追求才会有价值，有希望，即使到头来没有鲜花和掌声，他也是成功的。因为，毕竟，他没有遗憾。

放弃了追求享乐，才能活得更好，更有价值；放弃了纷繁世事，才能集中精力去做大事；放弃了思绪乱飞，才能平和心境，追求自然；放弃了世俗的偏见，才能寻觅到久已失去的自我。

所以，生活，真的需要经常地清点。

英语：

translation：

自由市场经济完全建立在供求原则的基础之上。有了这样的原则，消费者便可以把钱花在那些他们认为最值得购买的商品和服务上，从而也就决定了那些企业能继续生存。这样，那些最受欢迎的企业，或是其产品、服务需求量最大的企业就得到了消费者的青睐。从这个意义上说，也就实现了高效。那些能满足消费者需要的企业在市场中就会繁荣发展，而他们那些效率较低的同行们则因消费者不愿把钱花在他们的商品上造成资金短缺，最终被市场彻底淘汰。

在这样的体制中，美国的企业实际上不得不达到最高的效率。通常情况下，一个地方的高效率在其他的大多数地方也会是高效的，因此，在以竞争求完美为特色的环境中形成的美国企业无论选择在哪儿出售他们的商品，都是颇具实力的竞争者。

备战2014年复旦托业模拟考试A4答案

语文解析

56.论证有效性分析解析

1、官方对延迟退休讨论的慎重并不能说明该讨论不会有实质性突破。官方的慎重只是对待该讨论的态度，并不是该讨论是否会有实质性突破的原因。原文显然将两者强加因果。把官方对讨论结果的态度，看成决定讨论结果的原因。

2、欧美发达国家实行延迟退休，因此推断我国也应该实行该制度，有不当类比的嫌疑。首先因为我国即使GDP名列世界前列，但是因为人口基数大，人均GDP很小，多数人民并不如欧美富裕。何况，不同国家在经济实力之外，在医疗卫生、文化信仰等方面有很大差异，不能说欧美发达国家实行，我国就应该实行。

3、考虑通过延长工时来代替延迟退休是犯了混淆概念的错误。从后文可以看出，延迟退休本质是延长劳动者供给养老金的年限，缩短领取年限，而非因为国家劳动生产力量不足。如果延长工时又按原定年龄退休，那么既挤占了组织对年轻劳动力的需求，阻碍了年轻人就业，又没有对缓解养老金缺口产生任何帮助。

4、老教师的返聘无法推断延迟退休对劳动者都有好处，这段话有以偏概全的嫌疑。教师只是劳动者大军的一小部分，还有很多工人，承担繁重的体力劳动。仅以教师群里的情况来推断整体是不恰当的。

5、原文提到“因为制度无法实现，所以尚不到考虑的时机”，这两者因果关系存在问题。研究论证制度的可行性和有效性是制度实施的前提，不能因为暂时无法实施而否定制度研究的必要性。

6、退休金有支付风险，并不能因此怀疑此项制度的存在基础。保证支付是非常关键的大事，但是有支付难题并不代表应该质疑此项制度的存在意义。讨论延迟退休就是在研究如何解决支付难题，如果真如此的话，退休金制度都没有了意义，何必又讨论延迟退休这样的手段问题？

7、青年就业的确至关重要，但是退休问题也是全社会关心的焦点。哪一方面的重要都不是不考虑另一方面的理由。青年就业重要虽然正确，但无法推断因此就要先解决就业问题。原文有因果关系错误的嫌疑。因为最终的解决方案可以是两方面同时推进或者权衡考虑，而非仅先考虑某一方面。

57.论说文(范文)：

慎独

孔子说他到了70岁之后，就能随心所欲而又不破坏规矩。也就是说，70岁的孔子，随心所欲都能做到慎独了。至于70岁之前呢，要做到慎独，却必未能随心所欲。圣人都是这样，又何况是凡夫俗子的我们呢。

慎独是一种境界。在一个大的集体中，大家互相约束，互相监督，那么你可能行为无过，然而这不是慎独的境界。真正的慎独是你独自一个人的时候，你能否做到：桂花迎面吐香而不去折，小草汲水高长却不去踩，垃圾满地你欣然清扫，朋友的冒犯你毫不放在心上„„慎独的境界就是人生中可望且可即的境界，是你我应该追求的境界。

我们都是凡夫俗子，如何才能做到慎独呢？《三字经》云：“人之初，性本善。”既然我们的本性都是善良的，那么，我们从理论上讲都能做到慎独。既然我们都可以做到慎独，而孔子70岁之前还不能在随心所欲的情况下做到，慎独，所以我们的第一要务就是不能什么事都随心所欲。“随心”本没有错，但心随所有的欲望（无论好坏）就不好了。魏征在《谏太宗十思疏》中说：“将有作，则思谦冲以自牧。”、“诚能见可欲，则思知止以安人。”我们要把握的就是“自牧”与“知止”。“自牧”就是用道德来约束自己，用正确的行为来洗涤自己的良心；“知止”就是懂得适可而止，没有人约束自己，自己却知道该停止时停止——这样才能做到慎独。

《笑傲江湖》中的君子剑岳不群是出了名的伪君子，在人前他总是一副正义的面孔，好似他就是圣人一般；而私下里，他干的却是丑恶的勾当：偷林家的辟邪剑谱，暗杀定逸师太，嫁祸自己的弟子„„当然他最后也没有得到好下场。现实中也有和岳不群一样的人，但是他们一开始未必都是伪君子吧，只是很多人没有做到慎独，以为没有人知道就可以谋得非分利益，放弃了慎独，以致从本质上放弃了良知，也放弃了成为一名君子的最后可能。可见，慎独虽不能随心所欲地做到，却是一刻都不能丢弃的。

苟子在《劝学》中说：“君子博学而日参省乎己，则知明而行无过矣。”日日反省自己，在独处的时候省察自己，那样我们也就不会害怕迷失自己，而能做一个不随心所欲的自己，坦荡着慎独。英语答案：

翻译

根据发表在《柳叶刀》杂志的最新研究，引起心脏病的促因并非过度锻炼或者精神压力过大，空气污染才是引起心脏病的“罪魁祸首”，研究人员发现穿梭在各种交通工具之间，诸如开车或是行走，位于诱发心脏病的各种致命诱因之首。来自伯明翰大学环境与呼吸科的教授Jon Ayres说：“大气污染不仅对中风、心脏病以及癌症有着直接的影响，而且环境污染对人体的呼吸系统有着巨大的负面作用。关于如何保护我们的呼吸系统，我们向专家请教怎样才能降低空气污染对呼吸系统的危害。

有一则研究报告显示，如果在伦敦Marylebone 路上行走，人们呼吸的污染物的量大约等于吸烟48分钟造成的危害。为了减轻与污染物的直接接触，专家建议我们避免在主干道上行走。这些主干道，交通最繁忙，交通堵塞也最多，交通堵塞时发动机会释放更多的尾气。

写作(范文)Part A: Dear Manager，I am writing to complain about the quality of the cell-phone I bought last Saturday at your store.Sincere the day when the cell-phone was purchased, problems have emerged one after another.For one thing, the battery is annoying as it barely supports the cell-phone’s operation for one day.For another, the cell-phone sometimes shuts off automatically without my operation.Therefore, I wish to exchange it for another cell-phone or declare a refund.I would be grateful if my problem receives due attention.Yours sincerely，Zhang Wei Part B: On Oct，13th，a two-year-old girl was knocked down by a minibus when she is playing alone on the street in Foshan city, Guangdong Province.In the following seven minutes，more than 10 passers-by walked past this little girl lying in a pool of blood, turning a blind eye to her.Finally, only a woman who makes her living by collecting garbage gave a hand to this wound little girl.Recently, this issue has aroused wide concern about whether we should help strangers.People’s viewpoints vary from person to person.A small group of people tend to hold that we should not rush to help strangers under many circumstances.They seem to understand those passers-by’s behavior of not offering help to the girl.According to them, quite a number of factors contribute to this idea, of which the first and foremost one is that helping strangers involves risks of getting hurt or cheated.What is more, we may do more harm than good in urgent situations because of our physical or intellectual limitations.They assume that it is not safe to move the little girl without sufficient medical knowledge.In contrast, there are still a vast majority of people maintain that we should help the strangers as much as we can.Their first reason why we should help others, friends or strangers is that it makes us happy and gives us inner peace.In addition, helping others makes the world more livable and lovable.From my point of view, the latter viewpoint seems more convincing and acceptable to me.We should be ready to help strangers because it makes us feel better and makes our society more beautiful.

第五篇：MBA MPA考试联考英语小作文大作文万能

一、建议信

1、模板：

Para1 S1 写信目的Para2 S1 处境现状（严重）。S2 有建议。S3 建议1。S4 建议2。（S5 建议3。）Para3 S1 感谢。S2 期待。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Dear Sir or Madam,(/To whom if may concern / To those concerned,)

【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of making some suggestions to improve the service of our library.【P2S1】Although our library functions positively(积极的)in enriching the students’ campus life, its service goes far from being desired.【P2S2】In my eyes, the following measures need to be taken as soon as possible.【P2S3】In the first place, why not arrange an inquiry desk at the circulation hall? 【P2S4】In addition, the students should have access to the latest issues of foreign magazines.(【P2S5】Lastly, you should(/ had)better maintain strict order at the reading room.)

【P3S1】Thank you for spending time(in)reading this letter(/I sincerely hope that you will take my advice into consideration).【P3S2】I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience(方便;合宜)(/I am looking forward to seeing some new changes in the service).Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

二、感谢信

1、模板：

Para1 S1 写信目的（感谢）

Para2 S1 原因1。S2 原因2。S3 感谢方式（邀请对方）。Para3 S1 再次感谢。S2 祝福对方。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Dear Jack(/ Tom / Judy)，【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of expressing(/extending /conveying)my sincere thanks(/gratitude)to you for your warm reception(/hospitality)while I was in America(/While I participated(参加，参与)in the exchange program in America).【P2S1】Your generous(慷慨的, 大方的,慷慨给予的)help made it possible that I had a pleasant stay and a chance to know America culture better.【P2S2】Besides, I consider it an honor for me to made friends with you and I will cherish(珍爱, 珍视, 爱护，钟爱)the goodwill(友谊)you showed to me wherever I go.【P2S3】I do(/genuinely /sincerely)hope that you would(/will)visit China in due course(适当的时候)so that I could enjoy the opportunity to repay yours kinds and refresh our friendship(加深友谊).【P3S1】Once again, please accept my heartfelt gratitude(由衷感谢).【P3S2】Wish you all the best.Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

三、祝贺信

1、模板：

Para1 S1 写信目的 Para2 S1 艰辛（你）。S2 激动（你）。S3 值得（你）。S4 鼓舞（我）。S5 骄傲（我）。

Para3 S1 再次祝贺。S2 期待更大成功。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Dear Jack(/ Tom / Judy)，【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of expressing(/extending /conveying)my warmest congratulations on your graduation from the Graduate School(/your promotion to general manager of the company(荣升公司总经理)).【P2S1】I know how hard you have worked to attain(（通常经过努力）实现, 达到, 获得，得到)this goal.【P2S2】Therefore, I can imagine your excitement when you realized such an ambition(after all these years of painstaking efforts(艰苦努力)).【P2S3】Indeed, no one could have been more deserving than you.【P2S4】On the other hand, for me, it will be a real encouragement to see your efforts rewarded(看到你的能力得到回报).【P2S5】In short, I take great pride in your current achievements.【P3S1】Once again, please accept my heartfelt(/sincere/genuine)congratulations on your success.【P3S2】I wish you will farther success(更大的成功).Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

四、推荐信

1、模板：

Para1 S1 写信目的Para2 S1（其）现状。S2（其）目的。S3（其）困难。S4（其）愿望。S5（己）期待。

Para3 S1 感谢。S2 期待（套语）。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Dear Jack(/Judy)，【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of introducing(/recommending)to you Li Ming, one of my best friends(/colleagues/students/classmates).【P2S1】Presently(/At present)he(/she)is studying at Sichuan University.【P2S2】He(/She)will go to Harvard University in your place for farther study.【P2S3】As it will be the first time for him to study abroad, he will most likely encounter（碰到）a variety of problems(通用句).【P2S4】He(/She)hopes to obtain your guidance in many ways.【P2S5】I would be grateful if you could can kindly offer help(通用句).【P3S1】Thank you for your due attention to this letter(/Thank you for spending time(in)reading this letter).【P3S2】I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

五、辞职信

1、模板：

Para1 S1 写信目的Para2 S1 有因。S2 原因（工作性质）1。S3 原因2。S4 强调目的（辞职）。Para3 S1 感谢（曾经提供机会）。S2 期待批准。（S3 致歉损失。）

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Dear Mr.Wang，【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of informing you of my decision to(通用句)resign(/resigning)from my current position.【P2S1】After two months of work, I find it inappropriate(不合适的)for me to take the position as an editor for the following reasons.【P2S2】Firstly(/In the first place / First and foremost), I ever expected the job to be challenging and rewarding(挑战与回报), which has turned out to be the opposite.【P2S3】Besides, the salary has proved to be much lower than you originally promised and I have a large family to spport.【P2S4】Therefore I have made up my mind quit after much deliberation(深思熟虑;研究).【P3S1】Thanks(/Thank you)for having offered me the splendid(/golden)opportunity to work with the outstanding staff(优秀员工)here.【P3S2】I genuinely(/sincerely)do hope that you will approve of my resignation.(【P3S3】I am genuinely sorry for any inconvenience caused.)

Yours faithfully(忠实地), Zhang Wei

六、求职信

1、模板：

Para1（S1 自我介绍。）S2 写信目的。Para2 S1 有资质（条件）。S2 条件1（教育背景）。S3 条件2（工作经验）。（S4 条件3（自身素质）。）S4 其它详细见简历。

Para3 S1 感谢。S2 期待。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Dear Sir or Madam,(/To whom if may concern / To those concerned,)

【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of applying for the position as advertised in China Daily(/the local newspaper / on TV).【P1S2】I am an undergraduate from Sichuan University.【P2S1】My qualifications are as follows(/My qualification, I believe, amply meet your requirements).【P2S2】In the first place, my specialty(/specialty / major), English education(/marking), ensures(/guarantees(保证;商品保证))that my educational background is right(/perfectly)in line with(跟„一致)this job.【P2S3】In second, my previous experience as a middle school English teacher(/a sales manager(„/assistant))has helped lay a solid foundation(坚实的基础)for the work here.(【P2S4】In the third, I a good team player, self-motivated and eager to learn.)【P2S5】Please refer to my attached my resume for more details.【P3S1】I would appreciate it very much if you could schedule an interview.【P3S2】Looking(/I am looking)forward to your reply(to hear from you)at your earliest convenience(方便;合宜).Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

七、邀请信（公函）

1、模板：

Para1 S1 自我介绍。S2 目的。

Para2 S1 活动1。S2（套语）邀请。S3 活动2。S4（套语）邀请。Para3 S1 再次邀请。S2 期待（回复/来否）。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Dear Sir or Madam，【P1S1】I am head(/director)of the Household Electric Appliance Plant, which is a leading manufacturer of high-quality recording equipment.【P1S2】I am writing this letter for the purpose of inviting you to an exclusive(发布会)presentation of our new models of Digital Recorders.【P2S1】The occasion(活动)(/presentation)will take place at Noble Hotel on the third of January.【P2S2】I would feel it a great honor if you could come.【P2S3】There will also be a reception at two P.M.【P2S4】I hope you will attend too.【P3S1】Since your presence(参加)is so important to this presentation, I do(/sincerely / sincerely)hope you can make it(由衷希望您想法设法前来参加).【P3S2】We are looking forward to seeing on the day.Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

八、道歉信

1、模板：

Para1 S1 写信目的Para2 S1 致歉（具体原因）。S2 深深歉意。S3 解决办法1。S4 问题解决。Para3 S1 再次歉意。S2 期待谅解。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Dear Bob，【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of making an apology to you for my carelessness(粗心大意)(/expressing / conveying / extending my sincere apologies to you for my carelessness).【P2S1】When I arrived(/returned)home, I found(that)I had forgotten to return the music CD that you were so kind to lend me.【P2S2】I feel badly(/awfully)sorry for it.【P2S3】As I understand this CD is one of your favorites, I’ll try my best to send it back as soon as possible.【P2S4】According to the regulations concerned, it will take almost a week to reach Canada.【P3S1】Once again, please accept my heartfelt apology.【P3S2】I sincerely hope that we can keep corresponding with each other.(/ 【P3S1】Once again, I am sorry to my inconvenience caused.【P3S2】I sincerely hope you can accept my apology.)

Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

九、投诉信（complaint）

1、模板：

Para1 S1 写信目的 Para2 S1 原因（总述）。S2 原因1。S3 原因2。S4 处境。Para3 S1 要求。S2 期待解决。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

To whom if may concern(/ To those concerned,)

【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of making a complain about the laptop I bought last week.【P2S1】The reason for my dissatisfaction(/complaint)is that a few problems occurred in the use.【P2S2】To begin with, the system often broke down for no reason and some important data were lost.【P2S3】More over(/ in addition), the color of the screen was abnormal, and could not be adjusted.【P2S4】Considering these(鉴于以上原因), I find it difficult to go on with my work.【P3S1】I believe that you will take this matter into serious consideration and gibe a satisfactory reply.【P3S2】At the same time(/In the meantime / meanwhile), I sincerely hope to see improvement in your products(/service / management).Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

十、请求信

1、模板：

Para1 S1 写信目的Para2 S1 有要求。S2 要求1。S3 要求2。S4 要求3。S5 我的计划。Para3 S1 再次请求。S2 感谢/期待。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Dear Sir or Madam,(/To whom if may concern / To those concerned,)

【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of finding a child in a remote area to offer financial aid(/contributing to “Project Hope” by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area).【P2S1】My requirement are as follows(/The candidate should amply meet the following requirements).【P2S2】In the first place, he must be very poor and truly in need of help.【P2S3】Besides, he must be self-motivated and eager to learn.【P2S4】Last but not the least, he must be willing to return to his home town after graduation from university.(【P2S5】And I would send him a certain sum of money each semester term from this year on until he finishes his higher education.【P3S1】I would be most grateful if you could help me in this matter.【P3S2】Your prompt reply would be highly appreciated.(通用句)

Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

十一、通知

1、模板：

Para1 S1 缘由。S2 主题。S3 要求（总述）。S4 要求1。S5 要求2。S6时间/地点。S7希望/欢迎。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Notice 【P1S1】To improve the student’ ability and enrich campus life(/extracurricular activities(课外活动)), the Postgraduates’ Association is recruiting volunteers for an international conference on globalization.【P1S2】The qualifications for the applicants are as follows.【P1S3】To begin with, the candidates should have outstanding skills at English.【P1S4】In addition, they must have a strong professional sprit, cheerful personality and be aged under 35.【P1S5】Last but not the least, the students with relevant working experience are preferred.【P1S6】Those who are interested in this activity may sign up with the monitor of their classes before February 1,2011.【P1S7】Everybody is welcome to join in it.【署通知单位】Postgraduates’ Association

【通知时间】January 15, 2011

十二、备忘录

1、模板：

Para1 S1 缘由+主题。S2 内容（有）。S3 要求1。S4 要求2。S5 报名时间地点。S6期望。(时间+收发人+事由)

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Data: January 15, 2011

To: All students of the English Department From: Class Monitor, Zhang Wei Subject: Spring Excursion(正文Message:)

【P1S1】As spring arrives and the weather turns to be agreeable(怡人的)，the department has decided to organize a spring excursion in a suburban county(Huairou District).【P1S2】The activities include mountain-climbing and picnic(爬山和野餐).【P1S3】All the students of the English Department anr encouraged to participate.【P1S4】We remind(提醒)you of the necessity(必要)of bringing some food and water as well as wearing comfortable shoes.【P1S5】Those who are interested in this activity(/excursion)may sign up with the monitor of their classed before April 1, 2011.【P1S6】Everybody is welcome to join in it.十三、报告

1、模板：

Para1 S1 目的Para2 S1 主要活动（总述）。S2 活动1。S3 活动2。S4 活动3。Para3 S1 接下来。S2 期望/展望。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

To: Professor Barbara From: James Green Data: January 15, 2011

Subject: First progress report on graduation thesis(毕业论文)(正文Message:)略。

十四、大作文

1、模板：【4|5|2阵型】

Para1 【己点】S1 有现象+具体现象。S2 有不同“点”。S3 正点+反点。S4 己点。

Para2 【己据】S1 有据（总）。S2 据1。S3 例1。S4 据2。S5 据3（换句话说To put it in another way）。

Para3 【己据】S1 强化己点。S2 预测（评论）。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：【2010年1月MBA 作文】

【P1S1】In this chart, it can be seen that the subscription number of mobile phones in developed countries had a steady but slight increase from 2000 to 2007 and has remained constant since then.【P1S2】Meanwhile, the subscriptions in developing countries have witnessed a dramatic increase, especially from 2004 to 2008.【P2S1】It’s no difficult job to come up with some possible factors to account for this phenomenon.【P2S2】At the top of the list is the recent huge improvement of people’s living standards in developing countries.【P2S3】It is reported that, with the rapid economic growth of these counties, mobile phones have become a life necessity overnight rather than a luxury.【P2S4】Besides we must admit that developing countries have a far larger population and accordingly a larger demand for mobile phone services than developed countries.【P2S5】Finally, what is responsible for the situation is that the mobile phone service in developing countries has been increasingly cheaper these years.【P2S6】In developed countries, however, the speed of the mobile phone service had been more efficient and therefore the market was soon saturated.【P3S1】As discussed above, it is no surprise to see this difference..【P3S2】And I firmly believe that this established trend will continue for quite a while in the forthcoming years.========================

【P1S1】These days, there is an increasingly hot topic among the general public which concerns the phenomenon that a growing number of college students are willing to work as a nurse after graduation.【P1S2】Whenever it comes to this issue, there will spring up a wide variety of voices.【P1S3】Some people view it as beneficial, while still some others consider that it is not suitable or acceptable for a developing country like China.【P1S4】So far as I am concerned, I am inclined to support the former view.【P2S1】It is of no difficulty for me to put forward some arguments to illustrate my standpoint.【P2S2】At the top of the list, with the rapid development of Chinese economy and the steady improvement of living standard, there is an increasing demand for high quality nurses.【P2S3】Based upon a recent Internet survey, about 56% of Chinese families in big cities are in need of this kind of highly educated workforce.【P2S4】What’s more, we must admit that there is a fierce competition in the current Chinese employment market.【P2S5】Last but not the least, the fact cannot be ignored that, in the long run, as an emerging profession in China, highly educated nurses will be widely recognized and respected.【P3S1】There is no denying the fact that people will have diverse views on the same issue, but my standpoint is clear and well founded in the foregoing discussions.【P3S2】Therefore, I believe, the current trend should be encouraged rather than discouraged or even banned.