第一篇:英语四级写作投诉信
英语四级写作投诉信范文
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投诉信:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next term.I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.The reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior.His friends constantly visit him and he regularly holds noisy parties.In addition, he sometimes borrows my things without asking me.Under these circumstances, I find it different to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind on my assignments.I am sure you will agree that the solution is for me to move into a room of my own, where I will be free from such distraction.I would be grateful if you could fond a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.Yours sincerely, Li Ming
第二篇:英语投诉信写作
(一)投诉信 A letter of complaint
关键词:委婉性 重要性 紧迫性
注意点:1.开门见山(写信目的)2.委婉又据理力争(词句要有力量)3.条理清晰
写作思路:1.简单介绍自己,同时道出要抱和失望的总领句
2.罗列具体存在的问题 ① ② ③ 体现重要性
3.问题的紧迫性及表达自己希望解决问题的要求或方式
投诉信结构公式
右上角:日期
左上角:称呼
正文:
第一段:表明自己的身份,说明写信目的,因何事投诉何人或机构。
第二段:具体阐述投诉的内容和投诉的理由。
第三段:提出解决建议并期望尽快解决,表示感谢。
右下角:署名
投诉信模板
Dear
,I am
.Here I am writing to you to call your attention to some problems about ______.For one thing,.For another,.Besides,.(强调重要性或委婉的恭维).So it is urgent to take measures to
.Here I do demand
.I am looking forward to
.Thank you very much.Yours sincerely
Signature
升级版
Dear_______,I am ______(自我介绍).I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_____.The reason for my dissatisfaction is _______(总体介绍).In the first place,_______(抱怨的第一个方面).In addition, ___________(抱怨的第二个方面).Under these circumstances, I find it ________(感觉)_______(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).I appreciate it very much if you could _______(提出建议和请求), preferably ______(进一步的要求),and I would like to have this matter settled by ____(设定解决事情最后期限).Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
• Task one: • 假如你是李雷,请你就本校食堂(canteen)的状况,给校长(principal)写一封抱怨信, 内容要求如下: • 饭菜贵质量差 • 服务不好
环境嘈杂拥挤 Dear Mr.Principal,I am Li Lei from Class 10 Grade 3.Here I am writing to express my disappointment with the canteen problems on campus.First, the dishes at our canteen are rather expensive with by no means good quality and taste.Furthermore, far from being kind and warm-hearted, the workers always appear to be cold and impatient to us students.What’s worse, the canteen is becoming more and more crowed and noisy which definitely is not good for us to enjoy our meals in such environment.Nutritious and delicious meals do play a basically important role in our studying life, so it is urgent to take measures to improve the current situations.I look forward to hearing from you with a satisfactory answer.Thank you very much.Sincerely
Li Lei
用升级版模式写
学校受污染
【内容提示】
假如你是市一中的学生,名叫王红。你要向本市一家报刊编辑(editor)写封信,反映你校受污染的问题,呼吁有关部门采取措施,保护环境,防止污染。请你用下面的素材写100词左右的一封信。
你校位于山脚下,一条小河从旁边流过,院内树木四季常青,鲜花争艳,景色美似花园。但两年前,附近建起一家化工厂,排出大量污水、废气,造成校园污染,严重影响了师生健康。请有关部门出面解决这一问题。
【作文示范】
School Polluted
No.1 Middle School
March 5, 1997
Dear Editor,Our school lies at the foot of a mountain with a small river passing by.It used to look like a beautiful garden.There used to be green trees and all kinds of flowers in our school yard all year round.But great changes have taken place since a chemical works was built near our school two years ago.It produces poisonous gases and pours a large amount of waste water into the river.The terrible pollution has done great harm to us students and teachers as well as to the surroundings.It's time for us to take steps to protect our surroundings and prevent them from being polluted.Yours ever,Wang Hong
【写法指要】
投诉信(letters of complaint)通常是写给厂家、商店、消费者协会、报界或厂家、商店的上级主管部门,揭发产品质量的低劣、服务态度的糟糕,抱怨不应出现的情况或问题等,以求得解决的信件。写投诉信要实事求是地把问题讲清楚,态度要冷静,做到有礼貌,不能恶言伤人。
这封信的作者用的是对比法,先写学校的地理位置和原先学校的优美环境,后写化工厂建起后对学校造成的污染,最后提请报界呼吁保护环境的问题。写得有理有据,令人信服。
第三篇:英语投诉信万能写作
考研英语投诉信万能写作模板
投诉信是对于产品、服务等的不满意,进而需要写出自己的意见和要求。第一段需写写信的目的以及自己的一个概括的期望:常用套话比如I venture to write to complain about-----+定语从句;I would be grateful if you could do anything necessary to solve the problem facing me.第二段阐述两、三方面所面临的产品或服务的问题及后果:there are several aspects underlying this complaint.For one thing,......For another,......In addition,......第三段给出具体的期望,比如退款或更换新产品:It is my sincere hope that you could give me full refund or replace it with a new one.Your kind reply to this letter at your earliest convenience would be very much appreciated.
第四篇:英语四级写作万能
新东方英语四级:http://edu.21cn.com/kcnet1820/ 英语四级一对一咨询qq:1613508081段首句
1.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____.Some people suggest that ____.2.俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______.It"s the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.3.现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First, ____ Second,____.What makes things worse is that______.【外语教育&网】
4.现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。
Nowadays,it is common to ______.Many people like ______ because ______.Besides,______.5.任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.6.关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,……
People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say that ______.To them,_____.7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.8.……已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.9.……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……,但是为什么呢?
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that______ while.Obviously,______,but why? 新东方英语四级:http://edu.21cn.com/kcnet1820/ 英语四级一对一咨询qq:1613508081
第五篇:四级英语写作
说明原因型模板
(一)Currently, XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory —— nothing is more valuable than XX It is clear that(1).If you(2), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(4).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon(6).With reference to my standpoint, I think(7).注释:
1、XX的第一个优点
2、支持XX的做法来源:恒星英语学习网
3、不支持XX的做法
4、XX的第二个优点
5、举例证明优点二
相应作文:The importance of self-confidence Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory —— nothing is more valuable than self-confidence.It is clear that(self-confidence means trust in one's abilities).If you(are full of self-confidence, it will bring your creative power to play, arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything).Failure will be following with you。It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(the secret of MMe.Curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular).It will exert a profound influence upon(the achievement of one's ambitions).With reference to my standpoint, I think(he that can have self-confidence can have what he will).说明原因型模板
(二)In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on(1).The factors for(2).First of all,(3).Then, there comes a case that(4).Moreover,(5).Especially when(6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that(7).In this way, we should behave just like(8).相应作文: The impact of Television In recent years, with the development of science and technology, 80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV, offering as many as 50 channels.It has caused a heated debate on(the impact of television on children).Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.The factors for(parents' worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it.).First of all,(with so many programs to choose from, children are not getting as much exercise as they should).Then, there comes a case that(some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school).Moreover,(the effect on children's minds are more serious than the effect on children's bodies).Especially when(the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them).Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that(they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children's TV viewing).In this way, children will not be influenced too deeply.说明原因型模板
(三)For most of us today,(1).From above, we can find that the reasons why(2)are as follows.The primary reason, I think, is(3).Second,(4).The third reason, actually, is(5).The
significance for(6).Therefore,(7).注释:
1、人们针对XX的态度和举措
2、归纳现状
3、第一个原因
4、第二个原因
5、第三个原因
6、重申造成现状的最重要原因
相应作文:Pollution Most of us today(recognize that environmental pollution has been a greatly serious problem.lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air.many fish die of poisonous water.thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas.therefore, environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling, or bringing death not only to human beings, but also to wild life.)From above, we can find that the reasons why(environment are polluted more and more seriously)are as follows.the primary reason, I think, is(the reason of harmful substances into environment.for example, to prevent insects, farmers make use of great amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests.however, they pollute air, water and land).Second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly).the third reason actually is(the result of a growing population in the world.everyday, so much litter and waste are poured out from houses, also pollute the environment).The significance for(controlling pollution)noted that it's high time that more effective measures should be taken.Therefore,(new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories.moreover, in the households, there is an obvious need to reduce litter and waste.let's make our good efforts, and the world will be a safer place to live for us).说明原因型模块
(四)These days we often hear that(1).It is common that(2).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing,(3).For another,(4).What is more, since
(5),it is natural that(6).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying.We should do something such as(7)to improve he present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.注释:
1、提出论题
2、说明现状
3、理由一
4、理由二
5、理由三
6、理由三引起的后果
7、解决方法
相应作文:Pollution of environment These days we often hear that(our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment).It is common that(many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed.).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing,(the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded.).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology).What is more, since(the industrial revolution),it is natural that(a great number of factories have been
springing up like mushrooms.The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth.We should do something such as(planting more trees, equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources)to improve the present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.图表式作文写作模板
It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years(as X varies).At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of……(多少).What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are……(多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all,……(第一个原因).More importantly,……(第二个原因).Most important of all,……(第三个原因).From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time(if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).提纲式作文写作模板
1、对立观点式
A.有人认为X 是好事,赞成X,为什么?
B.有人认为X 是坏事,反对X,为什么?
C.我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。An example can give the details of this argument: There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
2、批驳观点式
A.一个错误观点。
B.我不同意。Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。There might be some element of truth in these people's belief.But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief.(以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。
3、社会问题(现象)式
A.一个社会问题或者现象
B.产生的原因
C.对社会和我们生活的影响
D.如何杜绝。(如果是问题的话)
E.前景的预测。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem.(X has increasingly become a common concern of the public).According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子)。There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文写法。X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects.参照辩论式议论
文的写法。A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm.同上Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will……
辩论式议论文模版
(一)Some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that
观点1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that
观点2.As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all,论据1.More importantly,论据2.Most important of all,论据3.In summary, 总结观点。As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或From above, we can predict that 预测。
辩论式议论文模版
(二)People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that
观点1.While others point out that
观点2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing,论据1.For another,论据2.Last but not the least,论据3.To conclude, 总结观点.As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或From above, we can predict that 预测。
辩论式议论文模版
(三)There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(争论的焦点)。Some people are of the view that
观点1.While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that
观点2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all,论据1.Furthermore,来源:恒星英语学习网
论据2.Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is,论据3.A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that 总结观点。As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或 From above, we can predict that 预测。
展现问题篇
问题的常用词:question, problem, issue
Recently, the issue of......has been brought into public focus.近来,_______的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。
Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes
have taken place in people's attitude towards some traditional practice.现在我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代,很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很
大改变。
Recently the issue of whether or not...has been in the limelight and has aroused wide
concern in the public.近来,是否_______的问题已经非常明确而且引起了社会的广泛关注。
The issue whether it is good or not to....has aroused a heated discussion all over the country.______的利与弊已在全国范围内引起热烈的讨论。
At present, some people think....while others claim...Both sides have their merits.目前,一些人认为_______而另一些人则认为_______。其实,两种观点都其可取之处。People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue.对于这种极具争议的话题,我们很难作出绝对的回答。People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。The controversial issue is often brought into public focus.People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue.这中极具争议性的话题往往很受社会的关注。不同的人对此问题的看法也不尽相同。When asked..., some people think.....while some prefer...说到______,有人认为________,而另一些人则认为__________。Just as the saying goes: “so many people, so many minds”.It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person.俗话说:不同的人对此有不同的看法是可以理解的。To this issue, different people come up with various attitudes.对于这个问题,不同的人持不同的观点。There is a good side and a bad side to everything, it goes without saying that...万事万物都有其两面性,所以,勿庸置疑,____________。When it comes to..., most people believe that..., but other people regard...as....提到_________问题,很多人认为_________,不过,一些人则认为______是____.When faced with...., quite a few people claim that...., but other people think as...提到_________问题,仅少数人认为________,但另一些人则认为_________。There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of....There who criticize...argue hat...., they believe that...,but people who favor.., on the other hand, argue that...目前,_______问题争议较大。批判_______的人认为_______,他们认为_______,不过,另一方面,赞同_______的人则认为_________。Some people are of the opinion that..有些人认为_____________。Many people claim that...很多人认为_____________。A majority of 绝大多数 A large number of 很多人 Some people contend that...has proved to bring many advantages(disadvantages)有些人认为________有很多有利之处(不利之处)。Those who argue for...say that...economic development of the cities.觉得_____的人认为,______ 城市的经济发展。Some people advocate that....有些人在坚持认为_________。They hold that...他们认为_________。People, who advocate that..., have their sound reasons(grounds)坚持认为______的人也有其说法(依据)。Those who have already benefited from practicing it sing high praise of it.那些从中受益的人对此大家褒奖。Those who strongly approve of...have cogent reasons for it.强烈认同_______的人有很多原因。
Many people would claim that...有人会认为___________。来源:恒星英语学习网 People who support...give some or all of the following reasons.那些支持_________观点的人列出了如下原因:________。But others hold the view that...但是,另外一些人则认为_______。观点的用词:Attitude, opinion, 与其搭配的动词以及词组:Take, have, come up with,set orth, put forward等。But on the other hand, there are also quite a few people who strongly advocate that..,.不过,另一方面,也有少部分人坚持认为_______________。But people who are..., on the other hand , maintain that...不过,另一方面,________的人认为__________。However, there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.然而,很多人对此有不同的看法。
综合篇
Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention,one of which is that....随着社会的不断发展,出现了越来越多的问题,其中之一便是____________。As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.然而,对于此类问题,人们持不同的看法。(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up
with different attitudes 有不同的看法)
As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....随着社会的发展,人们开始关注.....来源:恒星英语学习网
People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting求职的过程中,人们慢慢意识到面试的重要性。
As to whether it is worthwhile....., there is a long-running controversial debate.It is quite
natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.关于是否值得___________的问题,一直以来争论不休。当然,不同的人对此可能持不
同的观点。
In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma.在都市的发展中,我们往往会陷入困境。
Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....最近,这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注,有人开始担心______________。
The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid
economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段,经济全球化、都市化的速度不断加快,随之给我们
带来了很多问题。
......plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the
present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?“
_______显得非常重要而成为当今世界所关注的最大的问题,这是无可厚非的。不过,问题是:”我们该如何抉择?"
Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges,现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代。