第一篇：高三改错 看图作文雷锋
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，校报英文版正在开展“续写雷锋日记”活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，将你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来，向校报投稿。注意：1．日记的开头已为你写好。2．词数不少于100。
This morning, I was jogging in the park when I caught sight a wallet on a bench.Clearly, someone had left it there by an accident.I picked it up and checked the contents.Inside them, I found some money or a card with a phone number.Believing that the owner would be worried, I immediately try the number.A man answered it in an anxious voice.Hearing that I had his wallet, he signed with relief and told me he would return right away.Ten minute later, the man arrived.After confirm he was the owner, I handed the wallet back to him.With his thumb down, he expressed his thanks to me repeated.Seeing the smile on face, I felt happy that I was able to help.考察看图作文 【写作指导】
本题考察的是看图作文。要求以李华的口吻并用日记的形式来描述图片内容。所以使用一般过去时和第一人称。要点：1.李华早晨起来在公园里跑步，发现了长凳上有一个钱包。2.打开钱包，发现里面有一些钱和名片。3.李华联系钱包的主人；4.对方过来取钱包，并表扬李华的好行为。
看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字，再根据这些要点谋篇布局。要求考生把看到的图画用文字表达出来，除了能表达清楚图画中的信息外，考生还需要根据词数要求，适当拓展并发挥想象，从而使文章的叙述不单调。如果是记叙文类的写作素材，考生要注意故事的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、过程、结果这六个要素；如果是说明文或议论文，考生则首先要对图画的内容进行描述，然后围绕图画的信息进行说明或议论。此时考生一定要注意把握图画的中心思想，写出图画要反映的内容。【一句多译】 1.钱包里面是一些钱和一张印有电话号码的卡片。
①Inside it, I found some money and a card with a phone number.②Inside it were some money and a card with a phone number.2.听说我捡到了他的钱包，你送了一口气并告诉我他马上就过来。
①Hearing that I had his wallet, he sighed with relief and told me he would return right away.② On hearing that I had his wallet, he sighed with relief and told me he would return right away.Saturday, May 3 Fine This morning, I was jogging in the park when I caught sight of a wallet on a bench.Clearly, someone had left it there by accident.I picked it up and checked the contents.Inside it, I found some money and a card with a phone number.Believing that the owner would be worried, I immediately tried the number.A man answered it in an anxious voice.Hearing that I had his wallet, he sighed with relief and told me he would return right away.Ten minutes later, the man arrived.After confirming he was the owner, I handed the wallet back to him.With his thumb up, he expressed his gratitude to me repeatedly.Seeing the smile on his face, I felt happy that I was able to help.
第二篇：高三英语看图作文
As can be seen in the picture, a
family including parents and a little boy, sitting in the car, but seems to be in trouble.The mother wants to go right, at the meantime, the father insists to go left.Well, the boy sitting in the middle of them, with a confused face.In my opinion, the picture tries to convey the meaning that people should communicate with each other very often when they hold a different idea.Especially when parents have a conflict on the education of their children.Communicating
with
others ,including their children, can gain a good result.There are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, family members can talk calmly and feel at ease if their opinion can be listened by others.Futhermore, in the second place, the family can get better advice from each members’ idea.In this way, communication cannot only gather good advice , but also can reduce the conflict between family members.What’s more, children will also live with happiness.So, why not listen to others as
well as children’s advice? Communication is so magic that it can not only lead to family harmony, but also gain a good outcome.
第三篇：高三复习短文改错1+答案
短文改错专练
（一）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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March 29th, Dear Diary, I’m writing this at my room.It’s almost midnight and I have to getting up early tomorrow, but I can’t sleep.I’m thinking about my future!Every day, my parents asks me, “What do you want to be when you grow?” The problem is: I don’t know!My mom always says, “Be a doctor!” And she doesn’t understand — to be a doctor, you have to study for a long, long time and that’s not her idea of fun.Also I’m really bad at biology at the school.My dad says, “Be a pilot!” Is he crazy? He knew I hate flying!Now I’m getting tiring, so I’m going to bed.I can think about my future in bed.I get my best ideas when I’m lain down.B
I have known my friend Rebecca for a long time.We firstly met at a friend’s birthday party five years before.We found out that we both liked singing and dancing, so I invited Rebecca over to my place.We listened to the music together and soon became best friends.Three years ago, Rebecca’s parents invited me go on holiday with them.It is great.We spent three wonderful weeks in a little cottage.Rebecca and I loved walking along the beautifully beach.We took a lot of photos and had a lot of funs.Last year, Rebecca’s father changed her job, and they moved to other town.Since then we haven’t seen each other very much, but we’ve talked in the phone and we’ve written emails to each other.C
Dear Joe, How are you? Thanks to your post — good to know when you’re OK.I’ve got news too.I’m going on holiday next weeks with my brother and Anna, a friend from school.We’re going to stay on a farm with four days!We’re going to look after the animals and doing some horse-riding.I’m sure I’ll love it.You know how crazy I am about the animals!I want to learn all about the cows or the horses.I hope I will have some times to go walking in the hills, too.Well, right now I’m going to finish homework — lots to do before the holiday!I’ll write to you when I get back to telling you about my holiday.Yours, Nadia
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People had always been interested in bees.This interest may have begun with the honey what bees make.In the fact, it has been found that people have been eating honey for thousand of years.In the more recently past, people were interested in the way bees made honey.They admired the way bees seemed to working so hard.Some languages even developed expressions about people working like bees.In English, for example, we talk with a “busy bee”.Now scientists has a new reason to be interested in bees.They have discovered that bees able to communicate with each other.Research has revealed some surprised facts about this, but there are still many mysteries.E
Yesterday afternoon, I took the No.6 bus to go home.It was crowded on the bus, and I had listened to music by my earphones.Suddenly I saw the name of the bus stop that I should get off, so I got off the bus in hurry.When I arrived home, I realized that I had left my bag on the bus.My ID card and ten books were in the bag.I was worried and eager to finding it, so I went to the bus companies for help.Fortunate, at the Lost and Found, I see my bag.I wanted to thank the person who had found my bag, and the staff there said the person hadn’t left his name.How a good man!
F
I read an interested piece of news on a newspaper today.According to Professor Richard Wiseman, only less than a quarter of the British achieved their New Year goals because they do it in the wrong way.He studied 700 volunteers who made a wide ranges of New Year goals, including quitting smoking, losing the weight, or gaining a qualification.Just 22 percent of the participants managed to meeting their goals or described their progress like “very successful.” The reason so much failed was that they took the wrong approach and led by self-help books in the wrong way.They tended to spend a lot of time on thinking about the “bad things” what would happen if they did not achieve their goals instead of taking action.G
Last weekends, I went shopping by myself.It was a sunny day and I feel very happy.When I had bought anything I needed, I went to the bus stop to take a bus.Unfortunately, there were too much people at the bus stop.Then it was my turn to get on, there was no room.I had to wait the next bus.Suddenly, it started to rain.I had no choice but to call a taxi.Half way through the journey, the taxi was broke down.I was filled with angry when I saw an emptier bus go by.Finally, I decided to walk home in a rain.What an unlucky day!
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My name is Li Hua and I wanted to be class monitor.I am responsible, sociable, or easy-going.I enjoy serving others.Additionally, I have vary interests.I love singing and playing the drums as well soccer.I am also a good listener and be always open to different opinions.I am confident that I can do the job good.Being a student myself, firstly, I will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our classes can improve their studies.For those students who is falling behind, I will find ways to help them to catch up.Secondly, I will serve as a bridge among teachers and students.Finally, I will arrange parties so we can relax.I believe I am the right person to this post.答案
1....at my room.2....have to getting...3....my parents asks...4....when you grow?” 5.And she doesn’t...6....not her idea of...7....at the school.8.He knew I hate...9....I’m getting tiring...10....I’m lain down.1.We firstly met...2....five years before.3....to the music...4....go on holiday...5.It is great.6....beautifully beach.7....a lot of funs.8....changed her job...9....to other town.10....in the phone...A
at → in getting → get asks → ask
grow后加up And → But her → my 去掉the knew → knows
tiring → tired
lain → lying
B
firstly → first before → ago 去掉the go前加to is → was
beautifully → beautiful funs → fun her → his
other → another in → on / over
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1.Thanks to your...to → for
2....to know when...when → that或去掉when 3....next weeks with...weeks → week 4....with four days!with → for 5....and doing some...doing → do 6....about the animals!7....or the horses.8....have some times...9....finish homework...10....to telling you...1.People had always...2....what bees make.3.In the fact...4....thousand of years.5....recently past...6....working so hard.7....we talk with...8....has a new reason...9....bees able to...10....surprised facts...1....I had listened...2....by my earphones.3....that I should...4....bus in hurry.5....to finding it...6....the bus companies...7.Fortunate, at the...去掉the or → and
times → time
homework前加my
telling → tell
D
had → have what → that / which
去掉the thousand → thousands recently → recent
working → work
with → about
has → have
able前加are
surprised → surprising
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去掉had by → with
that → where
hurry前加a
finding → find companies → company
Fortunate → Fortunately
8....I see my bag.see → saw 9....and the staff...and → but 10.How a good man!
How → What
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1....an interested piece...interested → interesting 2....they do it in...do → did 3....a wide ranges...ranges → range 4....losing the weight...去掉the 5....managed to meeting...meeting → meet 6....like “very successful.” like → as
7....so much failed...much → many 8....and led by...led前加were 9....time on thinking...on → in或去掉on 10....what would happen...what → that
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1.Last weekends...weekends → weekend 2....I feel very happy.feel → felt 3....anything I needed...anything → everything 4....too much people...much → many 5.Then it was my...Then → When 6....wait the next bus.the前加for 7....was broke down.去掉was 8....filled with angry...angry → anger 9....an emptier bus...emptier → empty 10....in a rain.a → the
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1....I wanted to be...wanted → want 2....or easy-going.or → and 3....have vary interests.vary → varied 4....as well soccer.soccer前加as 5....be always open...去掉be 6....do the job good.good → well 7....in our classes...classes → class 8....who is falling...is → are 9....among teachers...among → between 10....to this post.to → for
短文改错专练
（二）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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Dear Sarah, I’m writing because I want to apologize to what I did last week.I’m really sorry.I know we said 8:30, and I would’ve gotten here on time if everything hadn’t gone wrongly.I was late because my watch broke and I didn’t know what the time it was.So you see, I would’ve arrived on time if my watch hadn’t broken.Then I have to walk because I’d missed the bus.And then I fell over and my trousers got dirty, so I had to go home and get changing.Then I decided to catch another buses, but it was too late.I would have phoned you and my brother had taken my mobile phone.Anyway, I hope you aren’t too angrier with me.Hope to hear you soon.Yours，Jack
B
Today my classmate and I went to a farm for a trip.I get up at six o’clock and we set off by bus.On the bus, some of us sang, and some of us talked.We all had good time.Two hours late, we arrived at the gate of the farm, that the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome.After we were shown around the big farm, they began to plant trees.It was really a good way to getting close to nature and protect the environment at the same time.Next, we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat on the open air.Finally, we went home at half past four.Although all of us was tired, our trip was really very more unforgettable.C
Both my father and mother has been wanting me to study abroad.They think that it’s natural to master a foreign language in an English-speaking country and that studying abroad at early age will enable me to be dependent.Moreover, it will be easier to me to gain advanced knowledge of technology, that will prepare me for a brighter future.Moreover, my good friend, Zhang Hua doesn’t agree with them.He thought my English is too limited to communicate with foreigners.Besides, the cost is too much for his family.In my opinions, I should continue to study in China.As long as I study hard at now, I’ll make great achievements in the future.D
Advertising informs consumers about newer products available on the market.It gives us information with everything from shampoo to toothpaste to computers and cars.But there is one serious problems with this.The information are actually very often misinformation.It tells us the products’ benefits but hides its disadvantages.Advertising not only leads us to buying things that we don’t need and can’t afford, but it confuses our sense reality.“Zoom toothpaste prevents bad teeth and gives you the white teeth!” the advertisement tells us.And it doesn’t tell us the complete truth that a health diet and a good toothbrush will have the same effect.E
My grandfather had had enough of his cat.He was tired of her scratching all the furnitures and made a mess.So he gave her to a friend, who lived on the other side of town.He told his friends that he was getting so old to look after her.A week later, in a very cold winter day, my grandfather returned home from shopping and surprised to see the cat on his doorstep.My grandfather was moved by the fact that his pet had found his way back from the other side of town in such a cold weather.He took the cat outside and gave her lots of loving attention.He decided he will never give her away again.F
Bedouin, the Arab people who live in the desert, living in a traditional society.This means they live on much the same way as their ancestors did.People who live in traditional societies has strong ties to the past.Customs and beliefs have changed very slower.They fear that when changes will make their lives worse rather than better.Values are passing on with little changes from one generation to the next.Yet changes do take place.All cultures change, but they change much quickly at some periods than at other.In very recent years, changes have taken place very quickly everywhere, including deserts of Southwest Asia and North Africa.G
My uncle and aunt come home one evening and discovered huge hole in their roof.They also found that their dog was dead and their furniture were covered in horrible-smelling matter.Upset by which they saw, they phoned the police.After the police looked into the problem, they were told what had happened to.It seemed that the container holding the wastes from the toilets on a passing plane had burst openly.The contents froze in the atmosphere as it fell towards the ground.Then the resulting block of ice crashed through the roof and broke into piece, killing the dog after melting in their house.H
Taking parts in recreation activities help us keep fit.There are various kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music, watching TV, playing chess, or going to cinema.But I think we’d better to have more outdoor activities.As students, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting tired.But it’s a good idea to play basketball, football, table tennis, go swimming, do some runnings, or even go for a picnic.Our brains also need changes to make it smart and active.In a word, exercise is good for the health.答案
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1....apologize to what...to → for 2....gotten here on...here → there
3....gone wrongly.wrongly → wrong 4....what the time...去掉the 5....I have to...have → had 6....get changing.changing → changed 7....another buses...buses → bus 8....and my brother...and → but 9....too angrier with...angrier → angry 10.Hope to hear you...you前加from
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1....my classmate and...classmate → classmates 2.I get up at...get → got 3....had good time...good前加a 4.Two hours late...late → later 5....that the farmers...that → where 6....they began to plant...they → we 7....to getting close to...getting → get 8....on the open air.on → in 9....all of us was...was → were 10....more unforgettable.去掉more
C
1....mother has...has → have 2....at early age...early前加an 3....to be dependent.dependent → independent 4....be easier to me...to → for 5....that will prepare...that → which 6.Moreover, my good...Moreover → However 7.He thought my...thought → thinks 8....for his family.his → my 9.In my opinions...opinions → opinion 10....hard at now...去掉at
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1....about newer products...newer → new 2....with everything...with → on / about 3....serious problems...problems → problem 4....are actually very...are → is 5....its disadvantages.its → their 6....buying things...buying → buy 7....sense reality.reality前加of 8....the white teeth!”
去掉the 9.And it doesn’t...And → But 10....a health diet and...health → healthy
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1....all the funitures...furnitures → furniture 2....made a mess.made → making 3.He told his friends...friends → friend 4....so old to look...so → too 5....in a very cold...in → on 6....and surprised to...surprised前加was 7....found his way...his → her 8....such a cold weather.去掉a 9....the cat outside...10....he will never...1....living in a...2....live on much...3....has strong ties to...4....changed very slower.5....when changes will...6.Values are passing...7....with little changes...8....much quickly at...9....than at other.10....including deserts...1....aunt come home...2....discovered huge...3....were covered...4....which they saw...5....had happened to.6....holding the wastes...7....had burst openly.8....it fell towards...9....broke into piece...10....after melting in...outside → inside
will → would
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living → live
on → in
has → have slower → slowly
去掉when passing → passed
little → few
much → more或quickly前加more
other → others deserts前加the
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come → came huge前加a were → was which → what 去掉to wastes → waste openly → open
it → they
piece → pieces
after → before
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1.Taking parts in...parts → part 2....help us keep...help → helps 3....kinds of activity...activity → activities 4....going to cinema.cinema前加the 5....better to have...去掉to 6....sit too longer...longer → long 7....brains getting...getting → get 8.But it’s a good...But → So 9....some runnings...runnings → running 10....make it smart...it → them
短文改错专练
（三）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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Dear Sandra, You’ll never guess where I’m writing this email.A cave!You know we’re on holidays in Spain.Well, we spend a few days in Barcelona first.We had a good time there, though one day I didn’t feel very good.I think I ate too much ice cream the day before.Anyway, when I left Barcelona, we came to spend a few days in Granada.However, we couldn’t get a hotel — too many tourists and not enough bed!Then the hotel owner said, “Why don’t try the cave hotels?” We thought he were joking.Living in caves? But there we are and it’s wonderful.We’re enjoying it much that we don’t know when we’re going to leave.We’re never going to have enough time to explore for everything.Take care!
Ben
B
My uncle buys a satellite dish, which is a large round piece of metal that receives satellite television.He decided to set up himself.He climbed up the ladder and attached the dish with the side of his houses.After he finishing, he and my aunt relaxed for the evening in front of the TV.The next day was very much hot, and they decided to stay at home and watch TV.That afternoon they heard lots of shouting outside.When they went outside, they saw that the house opposite were on fire.Fortunately, the fire was putting out.It turned out that the fire had started because my uncle’s satellite dish had been concentrating the sun’s rays on the curtains of her neighbor’s house but had caused the fire.C
Christmas is supposed to be a time express our love and goodwill towards others.It is supposed to be a time which we perform acts of kindness for people less fortunate to ourselves.But do we think of the other people when we sat down to our Christmas dinner? Of course not — we’re too busy eating those delicious foods related with Christmas.We are too busy wondering that the presents we gave were as nice or better than the one we received.They forget to think of the sick and the homeless.The whole idea of Christmas has complete changed.What a shame!
D
A thief broke into our house and filled his bag by our possessions when he suddenly feeling a pair of eyes on him.Looking up, he sees an eagle staring at him with cold, merciless eyes.At first the man was too frightening to move, but after ten minute he tried moving quietly towards the door.Therefore, the eyes just followed him and he couldn’t move.Eventually, my parents returned to and found the thief in our house.When my father turned the light, the thief could see that the eagle was just a toy.But it was too late and she was arrested.My father said that the toy eagle were better than any watchdog.E
Nowadays more and more students were found cheating in exams.Some copy from each other;some copy from their text books, reference books or prepared note;others use modern communication tool such as mobile phones.Cheating in exams will cause some worse effects.For one thing, it will result unfair competition and destroy the creativity of bright students.For another, students who often cheats in exams will develop bad habits and won’t be able to meet the needs of society in the future.So how can cheating in exams be stopped? On my opinion, severe punishments should be put into the effect to prevent students from cheating.At the same time, great efforts should be made to make students understood what kind of person society needs or try to build up their honesty.F
Dear Jack, I’m glad to learn that you will come Beijing to learn about Chinese culture as an exchange student.At the moment, I am studying English in my school but I always get better grades in my class.I’m good at the spoken English, so I’m sure I will communicate with you frequent.Beside, my parents are open and kind and is friends with many of my classmates.I believe you will be one of their friend too.Therefore, I invite you to live in my home during you stay in Beijing.I’m willing to helping you as much as I can.Best wishes!
Yours，Li Hua
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My friend Jake is eighteen years old and lives in a small village, not far with the city of Nottingham.He grew up in this village, so he knows everyone here.But he feels boring in the village.At the moment, he travels Nottingham every day to the shop where he works.This is a bus at 7:30 in the morning and the latest bus back in the evening is at 5:30.From the September, however, he’s going to stay in Nottingham with his aunt and uncle when his cousin join the Navy.He can use his cousin’s room.He’s really looking forward to live in Nottingham.He’ll be able to go out with his friends in the evening and he doesn’t have to get up earlier in the morning to catch the bus.H
Last night, our neighbor visited my family and complained for the noise from our home at night.We feel very sorry to cause so much trouble.I explained why my parents fixed our kitchen at night because we worked all day and only came back home in the evening.What’s more, they fixed the kitchen by themselves because the high cost of workers.Since my parents are not professional, so it took them a long time to fix it.Considering the noise and trouble the neighbor were having, my parents decided to hire some workers to fix our kitchens on the weekend.We promised we would finish the work as soon as possibly.At last, we expressed our shame again and the neighbor forgiving us.答案
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1....on holidays in...holidays → holiday 2....we spend a few...spend → spent 3....feel very good.good → well 4....when I left...I → we 5....not enough bed!
bed → beds
6.“Why don’t try...don’t → not或try前加you 7....he were joking.were → was 8.But there we are...there → here 9....it much that...much前加so 10....explore for everything.去掉for 1.My uncle buys...2....to set up...3....with the side of...4....of his houses.5.After he finishing...6....very much hot...7....were on fire.8....was putting out.9....her neighbor’s...10....but had caused...1....express our love...2....which we perform...3....less fortunate to...4....the other people...5....we sat down to...6....related with...7....that the presents...8....the one we...9.They forget to...10....has complete...1....his bag by...B
buys → bought up前加it with → to houses → house finishing → finished 去掉much were → was putting → put her → his but → and
C
express前加to
which → when to → than
去掉the sat → sit
with → to that → whether / if one → ones
They → We
complete → completely
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by → with
2....feeling a pair...feeling → felt 3....he sees an eagle...sees → saw
4....frightening to move...frightening → frightened 5....after ten minute...minute → minutes 6.Therefore, the eyes...Therefore → However 7....parents returned to...去掉to 8....turned the light...the前加on或light后加on 9....she was arrested.she → he 10....eagle were better...were → was
E
1....were found cheating...were → are 2....or prepared note...note → notes 3....communication tool...tool → tools 4....some worse effects.worse → bad 5....will result unfair...unfair前加in 6....cheats in exams...cheats → cheat 7.On my opinion...On → In 8....put into the effect...去掉the 9....understood what kind...understood → understand 10....or try to build...or → and
F
1....come Beijing to...Beijing前加to 2....but I always get...but → and 3....better grades in...better → good 4....the spoken...去掉the 5....with you frequent.frequent → frequently 6.Beside, my...Beside → Besides 7....and is friends...is → are 8....of their friend...friend → friends 9....during you stay...you → your 10....willing to helping...helping → help
G
1....not far with...with → from 2....he feels boring...boring → bored
3....travels Nottingham...Nottingham前加to或into 4.This is a bus...This → There 5....the latest bus...6....the September...7....his cousin join...8....to live in...9....he doesn’t have...10....get up earlier...1....complained for...2.We feel very sorry...3....explained why my...4....we worked all day...5....because the high...6....so it took them...7....were having...8....fix our kitchens...9....as soon as possibly.10....forgiving us.latest → last 去掉the
join → joins
live → living doesn’t → won’t earlier → early
H
for → about / at
feel → felt
why → that
we → they
the前加of
去掉so were → was
kitchens → kitchen
possibly → possible forgiving → forgave
第四篇：看图作文
期末考试
乖乖、闹闹和淘淘是三只可爱的小老鼠，它们住在一个院子里，是从小一起长大的好朋友。它们平时一起上学、一起玩、一起写作业，形影不离。乖乖平时爱看书，学习也最好；闹闹平时爱说话，总是吱吱说个不停；淘淘非常淘气，曾经跑到花猫家门前去玩，被小花猫咬掉了半只耳朵。
今天，是这学期的最后一天，也是最重
要的一天：期末考试。三个好朋友早早地就起床来到了学校，排着整齐的队伍准备进入考场。乖乖走在最前面，他非常高兴而且信心十足，因为他已经复习了好多天。闹闹紧跟在乖乖后面，他一点也不紧张，还在回头回脑的跟淘淘有说有笑地聊着天。淘淘走在最后，面带微笑，看起来也是自信满满。
三个小家伙都为这次考试做好了充分的准备，因为它们知道取得了好成绩才能实现愿望，乖乖最想去书店，闹闹最想去看电影，淘淘最想去游乐场，同学们，你们猜猜它们的愿望能实现吗？
第五篇：看图作文
【课题】：看图作文
【年级】：三年级
【教学目标】
1、教会学生认清图画，并能说出图中所画内容
2、引导学生发挥想象，将图画写清楚
【教学重难点】
1、教会学生认清图画，并能说出图中所画内容
2、引导学生发挥想象，将图画写清楚
【教学过程】：
一、故事导入
在意大利佛罗伦萨附近的海滨小镇里，一个名叫列昂纳多·达·芬奇的孩子出生了。他的童年在祖父的田庄里度过，虽然孩提时代的达·芬奇聪明伶俐，勤奋好学，兴趣广泛，但相信谁也不会想到就是这样一个孩子，将来会成为世界上有史以来最具影响力的人物之一。他歌唱得很好，很早就学会弹七弦琴和吹奏长笛，他的即兴演唱，不论歌词还是曲调，都让人惊叹。他尤其喜爱绘画，常为邻居们作画，有“绘画神童”的美称。在他14岁那年，父亲送达·芬奇到意大利名城佛罗伦萨，拜当时最有名的画家弗罗基奥为师。正是这位老师，用其独特的教学方法与严谨、严格的教学手段为后世塑造了一位伟大的人物。
弗罗基奥是一位严厉的老师，达·芬奇的每一个小差错都会被他责罚，因为他确信小毛病不改，将来一定会铸成大错。他没有急着教达·芬奇绘画技巧，也没有让达·芬奇创作什么作品，他的第一堂课就只安排达·芬奇画鸡蛋，并且要求其一丝不苟地照着样子去画；第二堂课还是画鸡蛋；第三堂课、四堂课、连续几个月的时间，一直都只让达·芬奇画鸡蛋。达·芬奇画了一个又一个，刚开始不耐烦还可以调整，久而久之终于无法忍受，甚至怀疑这个老师是不是有真的本事。
“为什么一直让我画鸡蛋？到什么时候才能画完？”
看到达·芬奇不耐烦的样子，老师并没有生气，只是微微一笑说：“不要以为画鸡蛋简单容易，要知道，在一万个鸡蛋中，都没有两个形状是完全相同的，即使是同一个鸡蛋，只要变换角度去看，形状也会不同，比如说，把头抬高一点或是放低一点，这个鸡蛋的轮廓就会有差异，所以，如果想要在纸上将它们完全形象地画出来，就必须下苦工夫。”达·芬奇似乎有所顿悟，一时没有说话。
“叫你反复画鸡蛋，就是训练你细致地观察所画的对象，然后用手和笔细腻、准确地画出来。只要做到手眼一致，那么以后画什么都会得心应手。”
听完老师的讲话，达·芬奇终于领悟到老师的良苦用心，心悦诚服，每天自觉地、默默地坚持画鸡蛋，终于有一天他所画的鸡蛋，各个特点不同，各个形象逼真。
达·芬奇不断的努力与坚韧不拔的毅力，再加上深刻的思考，终于慢慢进入了状态，绘画水平大幅提升。后来经过漫长的艺术实践，达·芬奇创作了多幅不朽之作，最终成为一代宗师。其中，最为著名的《蒙娜丽莎》现在还陈列在巴黎卢浮宫，堪称镇馆之宝。
师：读了这个故事，你们有什么感想？
生：（回答）
师：对了。其实我们不管画画也好，还是写作文也好，都离不开仔细的观察。所以，今天我们来学习一下看图作文，考考同学们的观察力。（板书：看图作文）
二、教授新课
师：我们把课本翻到56页，一起来看看这4副图上都画了什么
（带领学生仔细看图）
师：我们一起来看看这篇范文。勾出图画上没有的句子。
生：（学生勾画）
师：这些都是图画上没有的。小作者是怎么添加进去的呢？
生：通过想象
师：对了我们在写看图作文的时候，除了要仔细观察之外，还要发挥我们的想象力，把图片上的内容丰富起来。（板书：仔细观察；展开想象）
师：那我们现在就来考考同学们的想象力。把书翻到60页。这里有一副图，现在发挥你们的想象力，再往图上画上你所想到的东西。然后起来说一说，看谁既画得好，又说得棒。生：（学生动笔绘画，并请学生起来描述自己所画的内容。）
三、学生实践
师：看来同学们都说得很不错。不过，有的同学会说，能不能写下来呢？现在我们就来试试吧！书上61页，作文大练笔，看看这两幅图都画了写什么？最后一幅图上应该画上什么呢？开动你的小脑筋，将最后一幅图画出来，并动笔将三副图写下来。
四、板书设计
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