第一篇:大学英语四六级作文
Sth will make our life more enjoyable, that is to say, sth can add color to the dull routine of every day life.。。能让我们的生活更美好,也就是说。。可以给我们枯燥的生活带来色彩
2)For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment 对于很多人来说,学习一门新技术占据了他们的生活和充实了他们的生活。
3)。。。, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom.。。占据了某人大部分时间,使得某人没空想东想西(充实了某人生活)
4)What's more, living in school can save them a great deal of time on the way between home and school everyday, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work.住校为学生省去了不少时间,这样学生可以把更多的时间用在学习上
5)Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.一点一滴,这样做可以丰富我们的知识和拓宽我们的视野
6)For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge.Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.对于想过一种有意义的人来说,抽空学习一门新技术很重要
7)The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable
position in the future job markets.兼职可以让学生们学习个人技巧,这样可以在找工作时更有竞争力
8)By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.学生不仅可以提高学习成绩,还可以获得在课本上学不到的工作经验
There is no doubt that(job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as merits.毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.提出建议:
It is high time that we put an end to the(trend).该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …该是采纳…的 的建议,并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了.There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of …
毫无疑问,对…问题应予以足够的重视.Only in this way can we… 只有这样,我们才能…
Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that… will lead us in danger.很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that…
毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会…
It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.论证
From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why…
给出原因:
This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons.First, … Second, … Third, …
这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先, … 第二, … 第三, …
I quite agree with the statement that… the reasons are chiefly as follows.我十分赞同这一论述,即…,其主要原因如下:
列出解决办法:
Here are some suggestions for handling… 这是如何处理某事的一些建议.The best way to solve the troubles is… 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是…
People have figured out many ways to solve this problem.人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.强调
still, Indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially.Obviously, clearly.比较
like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.对比
by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.列举
for example, for instance, such as, take …for example.Except(for), to illustrate.时间
later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.顺序
first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.可能 presumably, probably, perhaps.解释
in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.递进
What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again.让步 although, after all, in spite of…, despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen.转折
however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on the other hand, unfortunately.whereas原因
for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.结果
as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as consequence.总结
on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.其他
Mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent(在很大程度上), for most of us, in many cases, in this case,As is shown in the graph… 如图所示…
The graph shows that… 图表显示…
As can be seen from the table,… 从表格中可以看出…
From the chart, we know that… 从这张表中,我们可知…
All these data clearly prove the fact that… 所有这些数据明显证明这一事实,即…The increase of ….In the city has reached to 20%.….在这个城市的增长已达到20%.In 1985, the number remained the same.1985年,这个数字保持不变.There was a gradual decline in 1989.1989年,出现了逐渐下降的情况。
第二篇:大学英语四六级作文
一、2010上海世博会
The World Expo in 2010 Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo.The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia.So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians.()ur government has promised that it will be the best one.And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly.As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.二、如何做一个可爱的上海人
How To Be A Lovely Citizen Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now.As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit.First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful.Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others.Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future.三、考证热
1)近几年大学校园内出现“考证热” 2)产生这一现象的原因
3)你的看法 【行文思路】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述近几年大学校园内的“考证热”;分析越来越多的大学生热衷考取各种证书的主要原因;阐述“我”对大学生“考证热”的看法。
Certificate Craze on Campus
In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students.[1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, [2]quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certificate [2]of some kind.[4]Why does this craze appear?
[4]There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon.First, [5]it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates.With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market.How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe.Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards [6]by which many employers measure a person’s ability.In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.[7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it comes to certificates, [9]since certificates [2]do not necessarily prove one’s ability.Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is [10]nothing but wasting time.To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical value.【亮点点评】
[1]祈使句使用恰当。randomly意为“随意地,随机地”。
[2]限定词使用恰当,使文章表达更严谨,增强了说服力。
[3]that引导同位语从句,修饰the idea。
[4]设问句引出原因,容易引起注意。
[5]强调句型,此处是强调主语。
[6]which引导非限制性定语从句,充当介词宾语。
[7]用于引出“我”的观点。
[8]“当谈到或提及…时”。
[9]since引导原因状语从句,表示既定的原因,常译为“既然”。
[10]“只是,仅仅”。“而不是”。
【佳句临摩】
1.佳句:You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind.临摩:离婚率上升尽管令人难过,但却是不争的事实。
___________________________________________________________________________.2.佳句:Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person’s ability.临摩: 在过去的三十年,发展中国家在许多方面都取得了很大的进步,其中包括健康水平的提高。
___________________________________________________________________________.3.佳句:From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates.临摩:我认为,对于我们来说,更重要的是尽可能提高自己的能力而不是获得更多的证书。
四、追求名牌
1)现在很多大学生都喜欢追求名牌
2)产生这种现象的原因是什么
3)你如何看待这一现象
【行文思路】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述目前热衷于大学生追求名牌的现象;分析大学生热衷名牌的原因;阐述“我”对大学生追求名牌的看法并提出建议。
Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands
Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands.From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands.[2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as well.This phenomenon has aroused wide attention.[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands.[2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste.They expect others to admire their high class and good taste.[2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students.[2]Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.[3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability.[3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class.[3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.【亮点点评】
[1]“有…倾向”。
[2]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、意义连贯。
[3] follow表示“跟随,追求(趋势或时尚)”
[4]用于引出原因。
[5]which引导非限制性定语从句。
[6] it为形式主语,不定式为真正主语。
[7]“远远超出他们的消费能力”。beyond表示“超出…范围”。
[8]强调句型,此处是强调主语。not…but连接并列成分。
[9]“而不是”。
【佳句临摹】
1.佳句:It is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.临摹:对大学生来说,了解校园以外的世界是非常必要的。
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2.佳句:In modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which have a great attraction to young college students.临摹:在世界上或许没有什么游戏像赌博
像赌博的那么有害和危险了,它经常会导致一个人破产,还会玷污人的心灵。
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3.佳句:Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous brands.临摹:很多同学经常玩电脑游戏,这是浪费时间,而不是一种有益的放松方式。
五、助学贷款申请信 1)简单介绍个人情况
2)说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额
3)保证会合理利用贷款并表明还款的决心
【行文思路】
本题属于情景式命题,要求写一封申请信。根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:简单介绍自己的情况,表明写信目的:申请助学贷款;说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额;保证合理利用贷款并表明还款决心,最后表示感谢。
A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan Sep 12th, 2008
To whom it may concern,I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied Physics.I am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four years.My parents are both laid-off workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education.[3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation.[4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly.[4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan.I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted.And I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely yours,Song Xue 【亮点点评】
[1]“主修…”,现在分词作伴随状语。
[2]“超出…的能力范围”。
[3]“使事情更糟糕的是”。
[4]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[5]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构。
[6]“我保证…”,that引导同位语从句。
[7]“不遗余力”。
【佳句临摩】
1.佳句:To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation.临摩:令人更迷惑不解的是,很多飞机都从大海上离奇消失了。
___________________________________________________________________________.2.佳句:Therefore, the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.临摩:由于周围交通不便利,人们只得步行回家。
___________________________________________________________________________.3.佳句:Meanwhile, I’ll spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan.临摩:全国人民都不遗余力地支持北京举办奥运会。
第三篇:大学英语四六级作文
大学英语语法总结之四六级作文模板tanhongjun2009
大学英语四六级作文模板
Nowadays/recently, the phenomenon/… of …has been brought into public attention.It`s shocking /…to notice that there are an increasing number of…, and it has exerted a good/great/bad influence on society.[叙述现象]
Obviously , It`s more difficult/…for sb to… ,and there are all sorts of reasons for this phenomenon/occurrence.First and formost ,some students claim that … it`s mainly because…
In the next place,some others maintain that…
Furthermore ,few people are more cautious about… they hold out that …
Mostimportantly , …[分析原因(正面)]
Others , however , hold a different view.they point out that …
Additionaly …[分析原因(反面)]
From my point of view , It`s of great importance for us to do sth.so that ,we should pay more attention to it , in order to gain some social experience.It`s because of the diffculties in doing sth that we should spare no effort to take measures to achieve this goal.Thus , I`am sure , it will bring about many benefits to us in the future/long run.[自我看法]
[ About 160 words] 常用句型:
A 组:好方/惯促进无知(常用长句表达)
① be a good way of doing sth
② Make it a good habit of doing sth
③ help promote understanding and communication between …and …
④ without knowing the meaning behind them , they just do sth for …
B组:知道谢序好难同重力(To 的短语)
① as is known to all②thanks to③ in order to
④ do good to⑤take trouble to / have difficulty in doing sth
⑥ agree to/with⑦is of great importance for sb to do sth
⑧ spare no effort to do sth
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第四篇:大学英语四六级作文
大学英语四六级作文:如何写出高分句式
一、句子开头多样化英语(论坛)是一种句型结构灵活多变的语言。由于拘泥于传统语法框架,许多初学写作的人都喜欢用名词开头写句子。这样写倒是无可非议,但若通篇文章都是干巴巴的同样结构的句子,就显得呆板生硬,缺乏生气了。事实上,在英语写作中除名词可放在句子的开头外,许多其它词类及词组均可放在句子开头的位置。
例句:Women leave their homes to take a fuller part in society as time passes.上面这句话至少还有两种开头方式:
1.As time passes, women leave their homes to take a fuller part in society.2.To take a fuller part in society, women leave their homes as time passes.二、避免一个“I”写到底
初学英文写作的人的另一通病是一个“I”写到底,句首僵硬,缺乏变化。
试读下面这段文章:
One thing in particular I remember made me feel grateful toward my mother was that one day I went and asked her for my own garden, and she let me have my own little plot.I love it and take care of it well.I loved especially to grow peas.I was proud when we had them on our table.I would pull out the grass in my garden by hand when the first little blades came up.I would patrol the rows on my hands and knees for any worms and bugs, and I would kill and bury them.上面这一段共用了八个“I”。当然上文若出自一个幼童笔下,倒不乏天真纯朴的趣味。不妨改写如下:
According to my recollection, one thing in particular that made me feel grateful toward my mother was the day I went and asked her for my own garden, and she did let me have my own little plot.I love it and take care of it well, especially the growing of peas.Having them on the table made me proud.I would pull out the grass in my garden by hand when the first little blades came up and would patrol the rows on my hands and knees for any worms and bugs, killing them and burying them.改写后的段落仅有三个“I”,一看就出自成人手笔。
三、注意句子的紧凑性
1.当两个句子是围绕着同一主题的不同方面进行说明时,可以将两句中相同的成分省略,形成并列句,从而使句子更加紧凑。这也就是省略结构所表达出的英文的紧凑性。需要注意的是两句中形成对应关系的something要完全一致才可以省略,而且与相同成分相关的短语(主要是动词短语中的介词)不可以省略。另外,如果表示比较结构的句子前后有相同成分,而且此成分有短语修饰,后面的相同成分要由代词来置换,而不能直接将其省略。(如下面的例句三)
例句: They should acquire knowledge not only from books but also from the society.他们不仅要从书本中学习知识,还要从社会中汲取知识。
Either Sally must be responsible for the matter or we’ll be(responsible for the matter).或者赛丽对此事负责,或者由我们来承担责任。
The population of this country is three times as large as that of its neighbor.这个国家的人口是它邻国的三倍。(汉语可以说是它邻国的三倍,但英语一定要说是它邻国的人口的三倍,这也是英语较为汉语更为严密的一种表现)
2.条件句也是使句子紧凑的一种表达方式。这里我们介绍一下in which在条件句中的用法,它相当于条件句的引导词if,这时可译作“如果...那么...”或“当...时”。
例句:An ensemble that performs B in which the other performs A is excused from the rehearsal after that concert.当另外一个乐团演奏A(乐曲)时,那麽演奏B(乐曲)的乐团就有充分的理由不去彩排了。
第五篇:大学英语四六级高分作文
第一类:问题解决型,如环境污染,大学生是否该兼职,大量使用塑料袋等
1、提出问题
2、分析原因或说明弊端
3、解决问题(归纳总结,预测趋势,建议措施)
第一段好一点的开头语句:
Nowadaypeople’focusisattractedonthe issueof……
/Nowadaypeopleingrowingnumbersarebeginningrelizethat……/Nowadayit is widelyacknowledgedthat……
第二段好一点的开头语句:
Thereason for this is not far toseek.First…….Second…….Third……/There are serveal reasons/elements/factors/causeseatedas follow…… 接下来写原因或者好处如以下语句可以用
Oneof the benefits is that…….But it has a hamful effect on on……
/The significant benfit/harm is……(注:此句中significant就是important的意思,四六级写作中禁用significant,因为那个词太低端的,没有得分点。同理也禁用People)
第一段好三点的开头语句:
Based on the above statements/From what we have discussed/Judging from the
above evidence.We can predict the tendency that……/We may safely draw a conclusion that……
建议结尾:
Evidenced, it is high time that we took measure toslove this issue /problem/Immediate measures must be taken before it getstoo serious/late
第二类:正反观点型
第一段观点A
When asked about……/When to comes ^/faced with…………many people believe
that ……,they think/hold/argue/claim/maintain/advocate………………
/When it comes to ^people’s opinions differ.Some hokd the opinion that……….There is ageneral discussion today about the issue of………….These who advocate…………argue that…………
第二段:
while others think /believe …………
三段:
Weighting the pros and cons of this arguments,I am inclined to agree the former/latter point of view that…………
/In my ipinion /To my mind /As for me.Ihold a balance view /a combination of the two is a better choice.…………