第一篇:大学英语四六级短文写作
大学英语四六级短文写作
(一)对立观点型
Should Firecrackers Be Banned?
(1)
setting off firecrackersit festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children.firecrackers, festivals would become dull and cheerless.suffered both by the people who set them off and by innocent bystanders.firecrackers are a waste of money and resources.be done by banning firecrackers from public places.In addition, the setting off of firecrackers should be restricted to festival days.(2)
setting off firecrackers an ancient Chinese custom that should be preserved.They also argue that firecrackers make festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children.Without firecrackers, festivals would become cold and cheerless.banned.They point out that firecrackers are responsible for fires which destroy property, and for injuries suffered both by the people who set them off and by innocent bystanders.Besides, they maintain that firecrackers lead to a waste of money and resources.firecrackers
(二)解决问题型
3.My View on Fake Commodities quality and the like.’ rights, wasting their money and threatening their health and even lives.the production and sale of fake goods cause serious losses on the part of honest and lawful producers.the destruction of fake commodities means a grievous waste of the nation’s resources.the identifying and refusing sub-standard commodities.(三)谚语警句型
4.Haste Makes Waste “Haste makes waste”by step.Even simple operations can easily be spoiled if we rush to complete them, neglecting important stages in the process.One should make full preparations before beginning any task.Without a good command of pronunciation, we can never hope to speak in an understandable way.Similarly, if we do not learn to spell properly and to acquire a basic grasp of grammar, we will never succeed in writing good compositions.(或fable goes that a farm tried to help the shoots grow by pulling them upward, only to find that they ’s and 1960’s.At that time, the Chinese people were so eager to develop their economy that they took some improper measures, only to hinder the expansion of economy.)
(或the age of 11 or 12, I began to learn to ride.Eager to ride as well as others, I started by sitting on the saddle at the very beginning.Predictably, I often fell from over the bike.Lots of time had been wasted before I realized that I should do it step by step.I tried to slide by standing on one pedal.Then I began to ride the bike from under the cross bar.Finally, I succeeded.)and assess the problems ahead before moving to the next step.And remember, Rome was not built in a day.(四)图表图画型
5.Changes in the Ownership of Houses in China
1950’s to 20% in 1990’s, that of private houses has from 30% to 80% during the same period of time.purchased houses in their own favor.(五)应用写作型
6.A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus
January 12th, 2002 the canteen on campus.To be frank, I am rather disappointed at the food quality, price and service in the canteen.First, the dishes are scarcely well cooked and most of them taste the same.Secondly, most of the dishes there are priced so high that some students cannot even afford them.Thirdly, the service in the canteen is far from satisfying and the inside of the canteen always seem untidy.To solve the problem, I suggest that another canteen be built and a mechanism of competition be introduced between the old and the new.Besides, both the canteens should be subject to the students' supervision.Dining is an everyday issue for students.It may affect their academic performance.Therefore,Li Ming
以上是经典范文,下面是通句,完全可以背下来直接用,写作时可以节省很多时间
1)先背3个句子Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more…..are commonly and widely used in everyday life.(讲重要性)The popularity of digital …will have great influence on our work, study and everyday life.On the one hand …, But on the other hand.(讲影响)
3To conclude, …..are just like a double-edged sword.With them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life.However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.(结尾段)
Ps:灵活运用第1句和第2句,根据不同模板自由组合。
2)模板(2个模板)开头段:先讲重要性,然后转讲不好的地方。
中间段:措施
结尾段:先来个小转折再进入总结
开头段Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more…..are commonly and widely used in everyday life.However, what worries most of us is that…… 中间段 Firstly….Secondly…..Lastly but in no means least……
结尾段 To conclude, …..are just like a double-edged sword.With them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life.However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.开头段:先讲重要性,然后转讲争论
中间段:转折(即列出两种不同人的观点)
结尾段:直接进入总结(即你的观点)
开头段:It is accepted that ….Plays a significant part for both …, and what’s more , a lot of attention is being drawn to the change of…..However, whether … deserves such an attention , people’s ideas vary.中间段:On the one hand, some people hold the view that …..On the other hand, a great many people insist that….结尾段:From my perspective, however….(你的观点).Therefore, it’s time that(措施之类的)
6级作文万能句子(补充在”…..”里面的万能句子,自己琢磨每个句子放在哪里比较适合)重点背:1)5)6)7)句子,最好全部都被过一遍,自己琢磨怎么用。
1)Sth will make our life more enjoyable, that is to say, sth can add color to the dull routine of every day life.....能让我们的生活更美好,也就是说,....可以给我们枯燥的生活带来色彩
2)For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives
and the source of their happiness and contentment 对于很多人来说,学习一门新技术占据了他们的生活和充实了他们的生活。
3)......, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom.......占据了某人大部分时间,使得某人没空想东想西(充实了某人生活)
4)What's more, living in school can save them a great deal of time on the way between home and school everyday, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work.住校为学生省去了不少时间,这样学生可以把更多的时间用在学习上
5)Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.一点一滴,这样做可以丰富我们的知识和拓宽我们的视野
6)For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge.Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.对于想过一种有意义的人来说,抽空学习一门新技术很重要
7)The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.兼职可以让学生们学习个人技巧,这样可以在找工作时更有竞争力
8)By taking a major-related part-time job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, which they will never be able to get from the textbooks.学生不仅可以提高学习成绩,还可以获得在课本上学不到的工作经验
9)Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.10)1Sth can produce positive effects on …in more than one way.什么东西可带来好影响 2Sth may bring about negative impacts on …什么东西可带来不好的影响
11)sth is a queer thing.It brings you great gifts with one hand, but it stabs you at the backwith the other.(将两方面的利弊转折句,相当喜欢这句啊!呵呵)
第二篇:大学英语四六级短文改错
Until the very latest moment of his existence, man has been bound to the planet on which he originated and
developed.Now he had the capability to leave that planet ___1___ and move out into the universe to those worlds which he has
known previously only directly.Men have explored parts of ___2___ the moon, put spaceships in orbit around another planet and
possibly within the decade will land into another planet and ___3___ explore it.Can we be too bold as to suggest that we may be ___4___ able to colonize other planet within the not—too—distant ___5___ future? Some have advocated such a procedure as a solution to the population problem.ship the excess people off to the
moon.But we must keep in head the billions of dollars we ___6___ might spend in carrying out the project.To maintain the earth’s population at its present level.we would have to blast off into space 7,500 people every hour of every day of the year.Why are we spending so little money on space ___7___ exploration? Consider the great need for improving many ___8___ aspects of the global environment, one is surely justified in
his concern for the money and resources that they are poured ___9___ into the space exploration efforts.But perhaps we should look at both sides of the coin before arriving hasty conclusions.___10___
答案:
1.had-> has
2.directly-> indirectly 3.into->onto / on 4.too-> so 5.planet-> planets 6.head-> mind 7.little-> much 8.Consider-> Considering 9.they-> / 10.arriving 后加at 或 arriving-> reaching
考点例析:
例1: If his aim is inaccurate and he scores a goal, enjoys S3.____ the hunter’s triumph of killing his prey.解析:这是由一个条件状语从句引导的复合句。但主句只有谓语动词enjoys,缺少主语,因此要步上主语。根据从句的his aim可推断应该加上主语he。
例2:Nuclear physicists who interested in the structure of 5._________ atoms cannot observe protons, electrons and neutrons
directly.解析:如果将who后面的部分作定语从句,那么它绝少谓语,故将who去掉,此时分词短语interested in直接作定语修饰前面的physicists。或在who后加are,补全定语从句。
例3:This alliance guarantees that all leprosy patients, even they S6.______ are poor, have a right to the most modern treatment.解析:even是副词,后面不能直接跟句子,根据句子的意思,应该在even后加if或though。
巩固与拓展
1.A student of music needs as long and as arduous a training
to become a performer a medical student needs to become __________ a doctor.2.This trip can be found in a booklet, Passport to the Pub:
The Tourists’ Guide to Pub Etiquette, a customers’ code of
conduct for those want to sample “a central part of British ________ life and culture.3.When a new robot is introduced to a small suburban
factory, a Shinto priest is invited to inaugurate._________
4.Since the law made easier to get a divorce, the number of __________ divorces has increased.5.Another changehas been caused by the fact people are _______ living longer nowadays, and many old people live alone
following the death of their partners
巩固与拓展:
1.在performer后加as
此处为同级比较,固定结构为as...as...,而原句比较的对象a medical student前缺少连词as。
2.want-> wanting或those后加who
for为介词,后面的宾语时代词those,不可再跟主谓结构。故将want改为wanting,用现在分词短语作定语修饰those,或者在want前加who构成定语从句修饰those.3.inaugurate后加it
4.made后加it
句子主语是law,谓语是made,easier是宾语补足语,逻辑宾语是to get a divorce,可见此句缺少形式宾语it.5.fact后加that
fact之后的部分是同位语从句,补充说明fact,其引导词不能省略。
综合训练
1.small-> smaller
该句后面有than,所以前面应该是smaller。
Many peolpe than ever are drinking coffee these days--but in small 1.____ quantities than they used to.Some manufacturers of coffee makers are
trying to make advantage of this trend by developing diminutive machines 2.___ that brew(煮)smaller amounts of coffee.Two U.S appliance companies---Black&Decker, basing in Twson, Maryland, and Toastmaster Inc.3.___
of Columbia, Missouri---has recently introduce ”drip" Coffee makers that 4.____ brew one or two cup servings of coffee.Neither of the products brew the 5._____ coffee directly into a cup or mug, eliminating the need for a separate
carafe.Since many people make a pot of coffee in the morning and drink 6.____ only a single cup, the new cofee makers should reduce the wasted coffee.Black&Decker’s Cup-at-a-Time spends $27, while Toastmaster’s Coffee 7.___ Break retails for $20.Black&Decker also makes a coffee maker drips coffee directly into a 8.____ carry-around thermal carafe.The carafe, a glass vacuum bottle, is supposed to keep the coffee fresh for hours.The product, called the Thermal Carafe coffee-maker, comes with a built-in lid that opens during the brewing
process, closes when it is completed.There are several models, including 9.____ one that firs under the counter, ranging from $60 to $110 at price.10
1.small-> smaller
该句后面有than,所以前面应该是smaller。
2.make-> take
take advantage of 为固定搭配,意思为“利用”,与其同样意思的词组还有make use of。
3.basing-> based
base和它的逻辑主语是被动关系。be based on sth 以什么为基础 base sth on sth …以…为基础
what are you basing this theory on ?你这种理论的根据是什么?
4.has-> have
句子的主语是two US appliance companies, 谓语动词要用复数。
做短文改错先找句子主干:判断时态,单复数
5.Neither-> Both
根据文章的中心观点,这里时说两种产品都如何。故要用both 先通读全文,了解文意
6.and-> but
本句的意思应该是:大部分人都是早上煮一壶咖啡 但却只喝一小杯。并列句前后应该是转折关系。
7.spends-> costs
spend的主语必须是人,此处主语是物,应该用cost表示 “该物花费了多少”。
8.maker 后加that或which
一个句子在没有连词的情况下不能带有两个谓语,本句的谓语是makes,而drips和之后的部分应该是定语从句修饰coffee maker,又由于先行词在从句中作主语,所以引导词不能省略。
9.closes前加and
在英语中,用逗号连接两个独立的主谓结构是不对的,所以要在closes前加and。
10.at-> in
表示“在...方面”,使用介词in.
1.有比较级than一定注意形容词为比较级
第三篇:大学英语四六级写作讲稿
大学英语四六级写作讲稿
一.四六级作文测试基本要求及分析 1. 四级考试写作要求:
《大学英语教学大纲》和《大学英语课程教学基本要求》都对培养学生的英语写作能力做了明确规定,即学生能在半小时内完成120字左右的短文,包括书信等应用问题写作,要求文理基本通顺,表达思想清楚,无重大语法错误。通过分析历年的真题,我们不难发现:英语作文考查的类型基本包括议论文(一般为三段论式的论说文字),说明文(目前侧重于这方面的写作训练),图表作文(要求描述性的语言要贴近图表信息,真实反映语言水平)和应用文写作(包括书信、便条、通知、海报
等)。2.近年四级写作改革变化追踪 2005.6
In Honour of Teachers on the Occasion of Teacher’s Day(演讲致辞型)2005.12
Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?(议论文)
2006.6
An announcement for a voluntary program(应用文)
2006.1CCTV Spring Festival Gala(议论文)
2007.6
Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?(议论文)2007.12
Elective courses to choose(议论文)
2008.6
Recreational activities(议论文)
从上面的题目变化趋势看,描述现象、分析原因、个人看法仍是四、六级考试写作部分主要考查的重点,在今后相当长的时间内,英语写作教学和辅导的主要突破口应集中在说明文、议论文和应用文上
此外,仔细研究06年6月24日以后的四级试卷,我们还可发现,新四级的写作题目与校园生活密切相关,学生普遍感觉亲切,体裁包括两篇议论文,一篇应用文。不仅如此,新四级写作题中提供的文章框架清晰,思路比较明确,绝大多数考生都能利用“经典句型”或“万能模板”写出及格的作文。尽管新四级前两次都考查了议论文,但这并不能说明写作的重心有任何偏移。根据考试改革方案和课程教学要求的相关规定,应用文写作、说明文和议论文仍将是新四级作文的主
攻方向。3.时间配置:
30分钟
1)审题(3分钟): 2)写作(25分钟): 3)检查(2分钟):语法(时态、冠词、主谓一致)、拼写、标点
4.具体要求:
1)语言第一位:表达通顺、无重大语言错误
(1)基础一般:简单原则、安全
第一(“平淡如水”、“简洁就是美”、“绚烂之极,归于平淡“,“与其写一个错误的复杂句,不
如写一个正确的简单句。”(2)基础较好:句子结构词多变 2)结构第二位:(1)逻辑性:
A.并列:and/or/but B.因果:because/in that, since/as, for C.转折:but/however(2)关联词:
3)内容第三位
二.四级写作高分策略
新四级考试并没有改变对写作的测试标准和要求,但在出题顺序上却做了明显的调整:写作作为第一项考查的内容,被提到新四级试卷的最开头,这令许多考生感觉不适应,部分网友甚至认为这是在折腾考生。其实,提高写作能力虽然较难,但写作教学却是一片大有可为的沃土。在过去十多年的英语写作辅导中,笔者坚持认为:考生如果坚持做到如下几点,就不难在规定的时间内写出一篇成功的英语作文。1.制造语言亮点
A.尝试使用中高级词汇替代低级词汇(主要是形容词和副词)
Good results-----favorable results Bad effects-------negative effects Big changes------great changes;
(Data)show that-----indicate;demonstrate Important--------significant;crucial;vital More and more(problems等名词)-------an increasing number of(problems)
More and more(important等形容词或副词)-------increasingly(important)All kinds of--------a variety of Many-----------a number of Deal with-------tackle
Possible--------likely(可用人或讨论的问题做主语)B.英语四六级考试写作30个最经典替换词 1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的),promising(有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替换bad 如果bad做表语,可以有be less impressive替换
eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they records are less impressive.4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.注:用many, if not most一定要小心,many后一定要有词。
Eg.Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理用most, if not all ,替换most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因为是书面语,所以要加that)7:affair ,business ,matter替换thing 8: shared代 common 9.reap huge fruits替换get many benefits)10:for my part ,from my own perspective替换 in my opinion 11:Increasing(ly),growing替换more and more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything,或little or nothing替换hardly 13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful, 14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替换customer 15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely替换very 16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable...替换 unnecessary, avoidable 17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb替换sb take interest in / sb.be interested in 18.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect 20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear 21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger替换cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth替换..reasons for sth 23.desire替换want.24.pour attention into替换pay attention to 25.bear in mind that替换remember 26.enjoy, possess替换have(注意process是过程的意思)27.interaction替换communication 28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth 29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance 30.next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible C.几个不能随意使用的词
“good”,”bad”,”terrible”,”something”这几个词在学生作文中反复出现。这几个词本身并没有问题,是英语常用词,但是,很多情况下,应该使用意义更准确的词。学生使用这几个词是因为懒惰,词汇量贫乏或者是缺乏修改。
四、六级作文要求的字数很少,一个意思只能用一个句子表达,句子里的关键词就要力求准确。good 原稿: Sports are definitely good for mental health.改后稿: Sports are beneficial to one’s mental health.原稿: Travelers can meet with people form other parts of the world and may develop a good relationship.改后稿: Travelers are able to make friends with people all over the world.bad 原稿:Some fake and shoddy goods are bad for people's health.改后稿: Fake goods can be dangerous to one’s health.terrible
原稿:Nowadays, the city has a lot of problems, terrible traffic, polluted air, too much noises, etc.改后稿: Today, many cities suffer from traffic congestion and air and noise pollution.something 原稿: There is something more important and that money can’t buy, for example, love.改后稿: There are more important things than money such as love.原稿:It means that people can master something perfectly by practicing it.改后稿:The meaning is that with constant practice, you can master what you set out to.2.捕获闪光词
基本表达(Basic Elements of English Writing):
越来越:be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of 人们认为:it is generally/widely believed/held/agreed that 许多问题:a host of/a number of problems 引起人们注意:claim call/attract general/public/world attention to sth.意识到:there is a growing awareness/realization of/that, awaken sb.to the fact/danger 适应新的形势/变化:adapt/adjust/accommodate oneself to new environment/change 接触各种思想/经历:be exposed to new ideas/experiences/problems 接触社会:come into frequent/close contact with the world/society 获得成功:achieve/accomplish success 提出观点/建议:advance / put forward / come up with the arguments/ideas/suggestions 作出努力:make tremendous/persistent/sustained effort to do sth., take great pains to do(with work/study)影响学习/工作:interfere with studies/work 产生影响:have/exert a profound influence on life/personality, have a dramatic/undesirable effect on 较好地驾驭生活:be a better pilot of one's life 剥夺机会/权力:deprive oneself of the chance/right/opportunity 取代旧的方式:substitute for/take the place of the old way 采取措施:take effective steps/measures to 控制我们的环境:take/gain increasing control over our own environment 躲避危险/挑战:shy/run away from the dangers/challenge 满足要求:meet/satisfy/accommodate the demand of 补偿损失:compensate for/make up for the loss/damage 解释某现象:account for/explain the phenomenon 对……很好的了解:have a better understanding/appreciation of, have a new perspective on.provide/gain an insight into 把某因素考虑进去:take sth.Into account(consideration), give much thought to 品位人生/自由/青春:savor the life/freedom/youth 培养对……的信心:develop/foster one's interest/confidence in 经历变化/困难/艰险:undergo/experience great changes/hardships/experience 表现出自信心等:project one's confidence/feeling/image 生活充满不公正的地方:life is full of minor irritation/injustice 追求学习/职业:pursue one's academic interest/professional career 学习知识/技术:pursue/acquire knowledge/technology/skill 被看作学习的……榜样:be held up as a good example 交流经验/知识:share experience/ideas/problems/knowledge 发挥/起到重要作用:play an(important/active/great)role/part 逃学/缺课:skip school/a class/a meeting/a lecture 知识/经验丰富:rich in knowledge/experience 确立/追求目标:set/pursue a goal/higher standard 到达目标:achieve/accomplish/stain the goal/aim/objective 克服困难:overcome obstacles/difficulty 面临危险/困难:be confronted/faced with/in the face of danger/difficulty 阻碍了成功:stand in the way of success, be an obstacle/barrier to success/growth 阻碍了发展:hamper/impede/stunt the development of 持传统的看法:hold conventional wisdom 发表看法:voice/express one's opinion 持相反/合理的观点:take the opposite/fresh view 揭穿某种一贯的说法:shatter the myth of 求得帮助:enlist one's support/help 缩小差别:bridge/narrow/fill the gap/gulf(between city and country)把成功/错误归咎于:attribute/own the success/failure to 对……重要:be indispensable/important/vital to 施加压力:put/exert a academic pressure on 重视:assign/attach much importance/significance to 强调:place/put much emphasis/stress/value on 把注意力集中在:focus/concentrate one's attention/efforts/thoughts upon 提供机会/信息:provide/offer/furnish an opportunity/information for sb.抓住机会:grab/seize/take the opportunity 得到机会:enjoy/gain access to a opportunity/information 有可能:there is(little/much)possibility/likelihood that, chances/the odds are that 展开竞争:compete against/with sb.for the prize/position/control/the mastery of 开展运动:conduct(carry on/undertake/initiate/launch/wage)a(vigorous/nation-wide/publicity/advertising)campaign(for/against)对我很有/没有什么意义:make much/little sense to me 带来无穷的幸福/满足:be a source of happiness satisfaction/contentment/pride/complaint 献身于:devote/dedicate/commit oneself to a cause/career 大不(没什么)两样:make much(little/no)difference 真正重要的是:what really matters/accounts is …
改变生活旅程:change/alter the course of life 建立在大量的学习/实践上:built on tremendous amount of study/practice 进行调查/执行任务:conduct/carry out an study/task/experiment 辞去工作/学习:leave/quit one's job/work/school 参加考试/竞赛等:enter(for)the examination/contest, race 参加活动/讨论:take part/participate/be engaged in sports/activities/discussion 影响思想/态度/事件的形成:shape one's thinking/attitude 进入大学/社会/家庭/劳力市场/职业:enter a school/college/society/the work force/professionals 实现自己的理想/愿望:realize/fulfill/achieve one's dream(hops/wish/desire)减轻压力/紧张:reduce/alleviate/relieve the stress/pressure/tension 提高社会地位:enhance/improve/upgrade social status/position/standing rise to the position of leadership 提高技术/能力:sharpen(increase/improve/enhance/boost)one's skill/ability 加快/促进发展:accelerate/facilitate/advance/enhance/boost the development of 随着生活节奏的加快:with the quickening pace/rhythm/tempo of modern life/society 开阔眼界/兴趣:broaden one's interest/outlook, expand(broaden/enlarge)one's mental horizons 有助于了解/发展/宣传/解决:contribute much/little/greatly/to a better understanding of/the popularity of/the growth of/the solution of 有助于解决问题:go a long way to(towards)solving the problem 迷恋名利/分数:be obsessed/preoccupied with grades/fame/fortune 把时间花/浪费在:spend/waste time doing sth., put in hours doing sth.利用机会/技术:make(full/better)use of/take advantage of opportunity/time, tap/harness technology potential/skills/talent 把知识/经验运用到…:apply/put the theory/knowledge/experience… to practice/daily life/good use 取得进步:make much progress/strides/gains in 充分发挥潜力/能力:develop one's ability/potential to the full, give full play to one's ability 充满激情/渴望:have a burning desire/a great passion fo
第四篇:大学英语四六级写作(辩论式)
大学英语四六级写作模板——辩论式议论文
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Some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that 观点1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that 观点2.As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all, 论据1.More importantly, 论据2.Most important of all, 论据3.In summary, 总结观点.As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或 From above, we can predict that 预测.模版2
People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing, 论据1.For another, 论据2.Last but not the least, 论据3.To conclude, 总结观点.As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或 From above, we can predict that 预测.模版3
There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(争论的焦点)。Some people are of the view that 观点1,while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all, 论据1。
Furthermore, 论据2。
Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is, 论据3。
A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。
As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
第五篇:大学英语四级考试短文写作
大学英语四级考试短文写作
四项基本技能:听、说、读、写
传统上:听和说、读和写
现在的新视角:听和读(input)、说和写(output)
一. 四级英语评分标准
120个词:(10句话):每一段写3-4句话,写3个自然段
出题方式:命题作文、看图画或图表作文,根据所给文章(中文或英文)写出文章概要或大意,给出关键词作文等。
二. 四级作文题型
(一)正反阐释题
2000年6月
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? The first sentence has already been written for you.You should write at least 120 words, and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1.很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试,理由是。。
2.也有人持不同意见。。
3.我的看法和打算
99年6月; 98年6月 97年6月; 96年6月;95年1月;05年12月; 06年12月
(二)阐释原因、描述危害题
00年1月;99年1月;97年12月;01年1月
(三)永恒话题
97年1月
(四)写一封信
01年6月;02年1月;03年6月(见证书);04年1月;04年6月;05年1月;
05年6月
三. 四级作文评分原则
CET作文采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。
1. 第一段要推敲
第二段看有没有主题句,第一句就写主题句
第三段总结
看作文就是看两点:第一看组织结构,第二看语言表达
2.检查五个方面的语言错误:
1)检查三个一致问题:主谓一致,时态一致,单复数一致
4)检查拼写错误
3.格式有2种:
(1)每一段缩进去4个字母,每一段之间不空行(传统格式)
(2)每一段顶格写,每一段之间空一行(流行格式)
4.评分标准:
11分――切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。
14分――切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性好。基本无语言错误,仅有个
别小错。
字数不足酌情扣分。
注:只写一段者:0-4分;只写两段者:0-9分(按规定三段的作文)提供三点提
纲的作文
建议:无论提纲是几点,都要写到三段或四段
经原国家教委批准,四、六级考试已从1997年6月份起采用“作文最低分”制计算成绩,其中足见国家对提高大学英语写作能力的重视程度。按规定,考生作文若为0分,无论其总分是否高于60分,均作不及格处理;若其作文分高于0分,低于6分,报成绩时,需从总分中减去6分,再加上实得作文分。也就是说,要从总分中减去实得作文分与6分之间的差额部分。
四. 四级英语作文范文
1. Should Firecrackers Be Banned?
2. Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?
五. 主题句练习
1.确定以下主题句是否恰当。
Players on one team take turns batting, and the other team tries to put the batters out.The batter hits the ball and then tries to run around the bases and get “home” safely.The other team tries to put the batter out by catching the ball before it hits the ground, throwing the ball to the base before the batter gets there or by tagging the batter with the ball.The batter can stop at any one of the three bases if it is impossible to make it “home”.university you want to attend to get the necessary forms and information concerning that particular university’s entrance requirements.Then you must follow the steps outlined in their response.You will probably have to send copies of your high school diploma, get letters of recommendation, and write an essay on why you want to study there.You may have to achieve a certain score on the TOEFL test and have your scores forwarded to the university.Finally, you will have to contact the American embassy to start the procedures to obtain a student visa.refreshing swim.Then I walk along the beach and collect shells.Later you’ll find me relaxing in the warm sunshine and making sand castles.Then I sleep for a while before I open the basket of food and drinks that I always pack to take.those students can get to class on the bus.Many universities have a special shuttle bus that is provided for student transportation.Some students like to ride to class on bicycles.This is good exercise.Also, it is easier to find a space to leave a bicycle than to find a parking space for a can on a crowded university campus.Those students who live close to campus or on campus can enjoy a leisurely walk to their classes.2.写出相应的主题句。
1.______________________________________________________________________.The white pages of an American telephone book give the phone numbers of residences.The blue pages contain the numbers of government offices, and the yellow pages have advertisements and business numbers.There are maps as well as indexes at the back of the book.The telephone books of larger cities ma provide separate books for different sections of the city, while those of small towns may have room to include the numbers from several towns all in one book.2.________________________________________________________________________.First, the fast-food restaurant is good for people who must have a quick bite because of a busy schedule.Second, the food is inexpensive yet tasty.A person can eat an enjoyable meal out and stay within a limited budget.Finally, the food is usually consistent.For example, a cheeseburger from a well-known fast-food restaurant looks and tastes about the same no matter where in the world it is purchased.Consequently, buyers know exactly what they are getting.3.选出不支撑主题句的例子。
1)Ways to get rid of hiccups
A.breathe into a paper bag
B.hold your breath to the count of 10
C.have someone frighten you
D.make an appointment with your doctor
2)Steps for planning a trip
A.purchasing a map
B.working late
C.making an itinerary
D.reserving a ticket
3)Reasons for car accidents
A.fast driving
B.drinking and driving
C.not following traffic regulations
D.giving signals
4)Advantages off small apartments
A.good school facilities
B.easy to clean
C.cheaper to furnish
D.relatively inexpensive
5)Characteristics of a good restaurant
A.efficient waiters
B.tasty food
C.jacket and tie required
D.pleasant atmosphere