雅思作文满分的女学生（含5篇）

第一篇：雅思作文满分的女学生

西安市庆安中学高中二年级的陈晨，一个17岁的小女孩，喜欢书法、爱练太极、打乒乓球，像别的女孩子一样爱漂亮。但不同的是，今年2月21日，国际英语雅思考试(IELTS)的考场上，这个来自西安市庆安中学高中二年级的女孩，仅用了40分钟，以一篇漂亮的作文得到了雅思历次考试有史以来全国首个作文满分

近日获得新东方教育科技集团首次颁发的高分特等奖。同时，她的听说读写综合成绩为7.5分。看到这个成绩，陈晨自己也感到非常意外。

从开始上雅思辅导，到参加考试，她一共才用了一个多月的准备时间。而这一个多月的背后则是长达数年的不断坚持。

兴趣就是最好的老师

说起自己当初学英语，陈晨笑言，这是一个美丽的意外。正经开始学英语应该是从初中开始。但初一的时候，她并不喜欢英语。因为当时她的英语口语特别不好，加上这种学习是和考试挂钩的，功课的压力，让她很难对这门难学的功课产生好感。但到了初二，这种局面就完全转变了。初二的时候，陈晨班里来了一位外教。他的课堂内容几乎是全英语教学。但陈晨非但没有发怵，反而通过这位外教老师活泼轻松的课堂教学慢慢喜欢上了这门不久前还毫不“感冒”的课程。直到现在想起来，陈晨还一直感激这位引领她踏上英语学习之路的老师。

培养纯正英式思维

很多人都懂得阅读是英语学习的基础这个道理。但真正能做到这点和凭借这点确实取得成绩的人却仍是少数。陈晨认为，自己取得今天这个意想不到的好成绩，绝大部分功劳还属平时的阅读功底扎实。对于阅读，她有自己独到的体会。陈晨说，自己平时阅读的英文大多数都是报纸和杂志，对于那些大部头的经典英语原文名著，她倒不是很“执着”。听英语广播、看英语原声电影和英文杂志、参加英语角，都是她课余时间的最大爱好。“我喜欢听布莱尔演讲。当你发现外国人说的话你大多能听懂时，就会希望自己能听得更多、说得更多。”这次雅思作文能得满分，陈晨和她的老师都认为全都要归功于她地道的“英式思维”。而这正是她平时大量阅读英文报纸、杂志所积累的扎实的基本功。

西安新东方学校校长、著名雅思老师张亚哲在谈到陈晨的情况时说，对于目前的雅思考试，学生完全可以通过大量做题、背作文、背模句来应考。但结果大家也都看到了，最好的成绩不过如此。但真能把英语吃进去，并且融合出适合自己的东西的人太少了。其实陈晨这次的雅思作文满分，就得益于她地道的英式思维。她的作文内容并不深奥，词汇也并不艰深，但能得到雅思考官的认同，就因为他们在中国看到了一篇从未见过的典型性英式文章。

字典是个宝

常见学英语的学生都随身携带着小巧的电子辞典，每每在做题的时候抱着这个小玩意儿狂按。对这种学习辅助工具的依赖几乎成了所有学生的通病。谈到这点，陈晨很肯定地说：“我从来不用那种翻译工具。”但她选择了另外一种辅助工具——字典。陈晨最喜欢的一部字典是《牛津大词典》。她告诉记者，从开始学英语一直到现在，她从字典里获益良多。

这种权威性强的字典往往会对一个单词有全方位的解释和剖析。通过结合词组、句型等方式，可以帮助加深对单词的记忆印象，而且字典内的举例完全是英式的思维方法，都是典型的英式英语。陈晨说，她自己有好多小本，每个小本上都是从各种英文资料上摘抄的例句。有的是从英文杂志上摘抄的，有的是从字典里摘抄的，就是这一个个小本子，使陈晨的思维模式、英语表达越来越像一个标准的英国人。陈晨笑言，好在打基础的时候就走对了路，没有落下什么中式英语的毛病。这次的作文满分也就是成功摆脱了固有的中文翻译式作文。

个性思维能力比较强

除了英语学习外，打乒乓球、练太极、写书法等等都为陈晨所爱。正是由于对各类知识的广泛涉猎，陈晨的个性思维能力比较强。据张亚哲介绍，其实雅思考试主要考查的还是学生的个性思维能力，必须要言之有物才能得到考官的青睐。所以平时注意积累自己的观察事物能力，练就总结归纳能力，也是取得高分的必要手段。

第二篇：雅思满分作文欣赏

雅思满分作文

It is certainly true that today traffic in cities throughout the world has become a major problem.This is obvious from the number of vehicles on our roads and the amount of pollution they cause.Probably the traffic problem is due to individuals travelling for work, study or shopping purposes, and this is evident in the rush hours we experience every morning and evening.It is also true that, these days, such daily commuting is not always necessary because people can do these things from home.We can see this in the options Information Technology gives us today.For instance, on-line work, distance learning and shopping facilities are all available via the Internet.However, even if everyone had access to the technology and the opportunity to work from home, it is unrealistic to think that everyone would want to.Even though the technology for working, studying or shopping on-line makes this option a possibility, nevertheless it would mean people had less freedom of choice and less social contact in their lives.This would have a large impact on society as a whole.So, in conclusion, I think that while this practice could reduce the traffic problems in our cities, it is most unlikely to be an acceptable solution.In terms of other solutions, perhaps we need to think more carefully about facilitating public transport and limiting private cars in our city centres.The development of public transport that is not road-based, such as sky trains or subways, would probably be a more acceptable alternative measure to reduce jams on our roads.-------------

首位雅思作文满分的学生感言

西安市庆安中学高中二年级的陈晨，一个17岁的小女孩，喜欢书法、爱练太极、打乒乓球，像别的女孩子一样爱漂亮。但不同的是，05年2月，国际英语雅思考试(IELTS)的考场上，这个来自西安市庆安中学高中二年级的女孩，仅用了40分钟，以一篇漂亮的作文得到了雅思历次考试有史以来全国首个作文满分近日获得新东方教育科技集团首次颁发的高分特等奖。同时，她的听说读写综合成绩为7.5分。看到这个成绩，陈晨自己也感到非常意外。

从开始上雅思辅导，到参加考试，她一共才用了一个多月的准备时间。而这一个多月的背后则是长达数年的不断坚持。

兴趣就是最好的老师

说起自己当初学英语，陈晨笑言，这是一个美丽的意外。正经开始学英语应该是从初中开始。但初一的时候，她并不喜欢英语。因为当时她的英语口语特别不好，加上这种学习是和考试挂钩的，功课的压力，让她很难对这门难学的功课产生好感。但到了初二，这种局面就完全转变了。初二的时候，陈晨班里来了一位外教。他的课堂内容几乎是全英语教学。但陈晨非但没有发怵，反而通过这位外教老师活泼轻松的课堂教学慢慢喜欢上了这门不久前还毫不“感冒”的课程。直到现在想起来，陈晨还一直感激这位引领她踏上英语学习之路的老师。

培养纯正英式思维

很多人都懂得阅读是英语学习的基础这个道理。但真正能做到这点和凭借这点确实取得成绩的人却仍是少数。陈晨认为，自己取得今天这个意想不到的好成绩，绝大部分功劳还属平时的阅读功底扎实。对于阅读，她有自己独到的体会。陈晨说，自己平时阅读的英文大多数都是报纸和杂志，对于那些大部头的经

典英语原文名著，她倒不是很“执着”。听英语广播、看英语原声电影和英文杂志、参加英语角，都是她课余时间的最大爱好。“我喜欢听布莱尔演讲。当你发现外国人说的话你大多能听懂时，就会希望自己能听得更多、说得更多。”这次雅思作文能得满分，陈晨和她的老师都认为全都要归功于她地道的“英式思维”。而这正是她平时大量阅读英文报纸、杂志所积累的扎实的基本功。

对于目前的雅思考试，学生完全可以通过大量做题、背作文、背模句来应考。但结果大家也都看到了，最好的成绩不过如此。但真能把英语吃进去，并且融合出适合自己的东西的人太少了。其实陈晨这次的雅思作文满分，就得益于她地道的英式思维。她的作文内容并不深奥，词汇也并不艰深，但能得到雅思考官的认同，就因为他们在中国看到了一篇从未见过的典型性英式文章。

字典是个宝

常见学英语的学生都随身携带着小巧的电子辞典，每每在做题的时候抱着这个小玩意儿狂按。对这种学习辅助工具的依赖几乎成了所有学生的通病。谈到这点，陈晨很肯定地说：“我从来不用那种翻译工具。”但她选择了另外一种辅助工具——字典。陈晨最喜欢的一部字典是《牛津大词典》。她告诉记者，从开始学英语一直到现在，她从字典里获益良多。

这种权威性强的字典往往会对一个单词有全方位的解释和剖析。通过结合词组、句型等方式，可以帮助加深对单词的记忆印象，而且字典内的举例完全是英式的思维方法，都是典型的英式英语。陈晨说，她自己有好多小本，每个小本上都是从各种英文资料上摘抄的例句。有的是从英文杂志上摘抄的，有的是从字典里摘抄的，就是这一个个小本子，使陈晨的思维模式、英语表达越来越像一个标准的英国人。陈晨笑言，好在打基础的时候就走对了路，没有落下什么中式英语的毛病。这次的作文满分也就是成功摆脱了固有的中文翻译式作文。

个性思维能力比较强

除了英语学习外，打乒乓球、练太极、写书法等等都为陈晨所爱。正是由于对各类知识的广泛涉猎，陈晨的个性思维能力比较强。据张亚哲介绍，其实雅思考试主要考查的还是学生的个性思维能力，必须要言之有物才能得到考官的青睐。所以平时注意积累自己的观察事物能力，练就总结归纳能力，也是取得高分的必要手段。

第三篇：雅思写作满分

题目： 题目： Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by

wealthy parents.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

范文： 范文： Some feel that the children of low income families are better equipped to

deal with difficulties posed by the ‘real world’ when they grow up and they also believe the privileged children of wealthy families are less fit to deal with these difficulties.The implications and veracity of this argument seem self-evident, but in fact require closer examination.(58words)点评： 1+ 1 ’ 模式，最后 1 句为主题句。此段的主题句稍微有点特殊，它的确否定了前 面所提到的观点，从而表达出了自己的观点，此外还引出了下文。特别是最后半句： but in fact require closer examination，感觉是在抛砖引玉。

The popular wisdom is that children of poorer families learn early on the value of a buck, and are thus naturally better suited to stretching money when

times get tough in adulthood.Inversely, the children of wealthy families, thoseborn with a silver spoon in their mouths, are believed to be completely ignorant of the value of money, having had everything provided for them in their youth and oftentimes erroneously expecting the same situation in adulthood.They are believed to be prone to overspending and financial irresponsibility.This belief, though logical, overlooks one key point which is , of course, education.(100words)点评： 1 ’ +3 模式，第 1 句是主题句。请注意，从此段的内容来看，这是个让步段(即 分析自己并不赞成的观点)。虽然 4 段论的作文的主体段是两面讨论，但是本人还是喜欢

这样的写作，即主体段的观点还是有侧重的，把让步段放在前面，最后 1 句话引出下一段，这样过度地很自然，而且自己的观点也比较明确！

The basis of this argument is , of course, knowing the value of money, and the idea that children of the poor know this, and those of the wealthy do not.

Who though, is in a better position to teach their children the value of money;someone skilled in earning and keeping it, the wealthy parent, or someone who can not seem to acquire it, the poor parent? Both wealthy and poor

children are equally likely to acquire an education in money, whether it is formal, or in the school of hard knocks.Conversely, both children are as likely to ignore this education.(101words)点评：这段的内容感觉写得不够直接，还是在分析对方观点的漏洞！请注意，前面让步段已 经这么写过了，那么这一段最好是正面地论证自己的观点，这样从内容上来说更 convincing 一点！此外，需要说明的是，大家发现作者的内容还是有一定深度，但是这是 要有一定的英语功底才行的！如果英语功底不行的话，建议内容不要

写太深，因为那样容易 造成考官看不懂你在说什么！

A poor child may believe that one can get along, if not as easily, without wealth.A wealthy child may be well trained by a parent steeped in the knowledge of money management;the key to developing this skill is education.点评：最后一段有点像是提出解决这个问题的办法，即 education.它没有像传统的结尾 段那样简单的重申自己的观点。

总结之总结：全文的观点有待揣摩，作者很明显是不赞成题目的说法，即 Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents.

但是作者自己是更偏向穷人家的孩子呢，还是富人家的孩子呢？！根据文章来看，作者是中 立，他所看重的是他们所接受的教育。In other words，整篇文章又是一次中立的写法。在雅思考试中，这种写法经常使用，还是非常实用的，大家可以学习一下。此外，文章中有 很多好词好句，特别是长句，值得模仿一下 七分作文 题目： 题目： Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success.Others argue that happiness depends on completely other factors.Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.

范文： 范文： In recent years, the discussion of whether personal happiness is directly associated to economic success has become a controversial toward it differ widely from person to person.issue.Notions

Some people believe that happiness is related to economic success because only money can make people’s life more enjoyable.When it comes to economic success, the majority of people believe that money means a luxurious life.

To begin with, if someone owns great success on economic, that means he can spend more money on whatever he likes and spend more time on his hobbies.Emotionally, money can buy happiness at least to some extent.That is to say, you can buy things that you like in order to fulfill your needs and vanities

and this makes you feel happier.You can also enjoy the best education and social welfare.Thirdly, economic success implies high social class and status, which can make people feel happy and respectable.(51ielts.com)

Opponents, however, hold the view that happiness does not depend on economic success but completely other factors.First of all, numerous studies show that happy individuals are successful across multiple life domains ,

including marriage, income, work performance and health.The happiness exists not only because economic success makes people happy, but also because positive affect engenders happiness.What’s more, It is indisputable that

there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to fact the dangers of starvation and exposure, but some of them sill lead a happy life because they keep the happy spirit.Last but not least, mo

money can not buy everything, such as friendship, true love and health.You can buy things corporeal , but you can never spend money to ask for more time.

In the final analysis, both sides have sound foundations

.However, if

asked to make a choice, I will not hesitate to assent to the latter.I firmly believe that happiness is not only related to economic success but also links to other factors which are much more significant.

第四篇：雅思9分满分大作文赏析

雅思9分满分大作文赏析

在雅思班，我惊喜的发现我教了十年雅思，居然碰到了难得一见的9分文章，我给了几位前任的IELTS Examiner打了分数，都给出了9分。我们来欣赏一下：

范文：

Globalization is a declarationof war upon all other cultures.And in culture wars, there is no exemption of civilians, there are no innocent bystanders.Why should it be expected that ancient and rooted civilizations are going to accept this peripheralisationwithout a struggle? The answer to that is that globalization carries an implicit promise that it will relieve poverty and offer security—perhaps the most ancient of human dreams.Because of the power of global capitalism to create wealth, it is assumed that this priority must sweep aside all other human preoccupations, including all existing institutions, interpretations and searches for meaning in the world.It is disingenuous to assume that economy, society and culture operate in separate spheres.This suggests that, one, exposed to the globalizing imperative, no aspect of social life, customary practice, traditionalbehaviour will remain the same.There have been, broadly, two principal responses in the world, which we may call the fatalistic and the resistant.It is significant that among the most fatalistic have been the leaders of G-7, Ex-President Clinton said globalization is a fact not a policy choice Tony Blair said it is inevitable and irreversible.It may be considered paradoxical that the leaders of the most dynamic and expanding economies in the world offer such a passive, unchallenging view of what are, after all, human-made arrangements.These are among the richest and most proactive regimes, which can wage endless war on the great abstraction, that is terror, topple regimes and lay down one WTO law for the poor and another for themselves.Is their helplessness in the presence of these mighty economic and cultural powers?There are two aspects to resistance.One is the reassertion of local identities—even if local actually means spread over very large parts of the world.The reclaiming of the local is often focused in the field of culture—music, songs and dance.This suggests an attempt to guaranteeit from the effects of economic integration;a kind of cordon sanitaria set up around a dwindling culture.Some people believe it is possible to get the best of both world—they accept the economic advantages of globalization and seek to maintain something of great value—language, tradition and custom.This is the relatively response.The other has become only too familiar: the violent reaction, the hatred of both economic and cultural globalization which may not merely perceive, but feel in the very core of their cognition, as an inseparable violation of identity.The resentment of many Muslims toward the U.S and Israel, the defensiveposturing of Vindu fundamentalism, opposed both to Islam and Christianity, are the most vivid dramatizationsof this.

第五篇：雅思A类满分小作文经典示例

最权威的国际教育服务平台

雅思A类满分小作文经典示例

Writing 1 Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Write your answer in a word processing program on your computer.The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club's activities, facilities and opening hours.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make any comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.Club satisfaction survey table

Range of activities--------Very satisfied---------Satisfied---------Not satisfied

Ferrale members---------------35%----------------------35%-------------------30%

Male memebers----------------55%----------------------40%---------------------5%

Club facilities

Ferrale members---------------64%----------------------22%-------------------14%

Male members------------------63%----------------------27%-------------------10%

Opening hours

Female members---------------72%----------------------25%--------------------3%

Male members------------------44%----------------------19%-------------------37%

范文:

The table compares the opinions of male and female club members about the services provided by a city sports club.We can see from the responses that the male members are generally happy or satisfied with the range of activities at the club, with only 5% dissatisfied.In contrast，资料来源：教育优选 http://www.xiexiebang.com/

最权威的国际教育服务平台

however, only about two-thirds of female members were positive about the activity range and almost a third were dissatisfied.The genders were more in agreement about the club facilities.Only 14% of women and 10% of men were unhappy with these, and the majority(64 and 63% respectively)were very positive.Finally, the female respondents were much happier with the club opening hours than their male counterparts.Almost three-quarters of them were very satisfied with these and only 3% were unhappy, whereas nearly 40% of the men expressed their dissatisfaction.Overall, the table indicates that female members are most unhappy with the range of activities, while male members feel that opening hours are the least satisfactory aspect of the club.资料来源：教育优选 http://www.xiexiebang.com/