中考英语写作要求

第一篇：中考英语写作要求

书面表达步骤

1）课标语言技能五级目标中对写的要求是：能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师的指导下进行修改；能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系；能简单描述人物或事件；能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。

2）中考书面表达试题的话题是课标规定的话题，所需用的语言基础知识，是以初中学过的最基本的词汇与句式为出发点。通过让考生用英语描述自己的生活或学习体验，来检验他们的创造性运用语言的程度。通过测试反映出不同层次的学生都有话可说。要写好书面表达主要应把握好：主题鲜明性，语言的得体性和寓意的连贯性。

3)英语书面表达写作程序

◆认真审题，明确题目要求表达的中心思想和反映这一中心思想的全部内容要点和深层结构，分析研究题目和给出的材料的真实意义，推导出短文的主题思想和内容要点。

◆将材料的内容要点逐点（单词和短语）用英语表达出来。为句子表达奠定基础，并减少错误。

◆将内容要点组成句子。先连成简单句（短小、简单，不容易出错），再根据行文整体的需要和使文章生动的需要将几个简单句通过增加适当的连接词或短语组合成复合句，或将有的简单句改成恰当的介词短语、非谓语动词短语等短语的形式，使短文具有可读性和生动性。

◆连句成文。将已写好的句子依据要求排列成文和适度分段。

◆修改补充适当的连接成分。开头结尾要精彩！

◆修改短文：

1）核对题目给出的要求，看是否有内容要点遗漏。

2）复读写好的短文，通过语感检查有否语言形式上的错误和不当之处。

3）对于应用文要检查的要求。

4）检查所写短文的词数是否符合要求。如果词数不够，可以适当增加点减掉一些次要的成分。

4）把握好书面表达的评分标准.下面是大连市2009年英语书面表达的一挡和二挡的标准：

书面表达评分标准

（一）评分原则：

1.本题满分20分，内容5分，语言8分，逻辑5分，书写2分，按五个档次给分。

2.评卷采用整体评分的方式，评分时，首先考虑短文内容是否符合题目要求，根据其任务完成的情况初

步确定所属档次；然后按该档次的具体要求进行衡量，确定和调整档次，最后给分。

3.评分的主要参考指标为：内容的完整性、语言的得体性、组织机构的逻辑性、上下文的连贯性，篇幅

80词左右（允许字数上下浮动20词），其中内容要点可用不同的方式表达，鼓励对紧扣主题的适当发挥。

4.若词数少于60词或书写较差，影响理解从所得分中减去2分。

5.两人的评分相差3分以上（含3分）要进行三批。

6.拼写与标点符号的误用是影响语言准确性的重要因素，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度酌情扣分。

英语、美语拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

（二）内容要点：

1.When do you usually get to school? 2.What do you do at school? 3.What do you think of your school life?

（三）各档次评分参考标准：

第一档(17-20分)：出色完成了试题规定的任务。有很好的能力用自己的话表述观点，有围绕主题的合理发挥，内容符合逻辑，覆盖了所有要点，组织结构清晰，表达意义得体，选词贴

切，语言基本无误或有少量拼写错误，标点、大小写正确，语言准确。

第二档（13-16分）：较好完成了试题规定的任务。有能力用自己的话表述观点，有围绕主题的适当发挥，内容比较符合逻辑，覆盖了所有要点，组织结构比较清晰，表达意义的选词贴切，标点、拼写大体上正确，语言较准确，不影响读者的理解。

第二篇：中考英语写作

中考英语作文万能模板：阐述主题题型要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述．

１． 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义．２． 分析并举例使其更充实． 中考英语作文万能模板：解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径１． 问题现状

２． 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(步说明现状说明Ａ的现状))．Second,---------------(举例进一Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解决方法一).For another

-------------(解决方法二).Finally,--------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解决方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future isawaiting us because--------------(带来的好处).中考英语作文万能模板：说明利弊题型这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）１． 说明事物现状

２． 事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）３． 你对现状（或前景）的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(Besides-------------------（Ａ的优点之二）Ａ的优点之一.).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(Ａ的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(Ａ的第二个缺点)．

Through the above analysis, I believe that the

positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法)．

(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------（对前景的预测)．)中考英语作文万能模板：议论文的框架(1)不同观点列举型（选择型）

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, __________.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因一

原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.People, however, differ in theiropinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand二_____.Therefore, there，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____ is no doubt that ___观点原因二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only

because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.（2）利弊型的议论文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___advantages and disadvantages in __作文题目______.In fact, there are both 题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___secondly ___优点二_____.优点一______.AndJust As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___一______.In addition, ____缺点二______.缺点To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that 讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the

case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.中考英语作文万能模板：图表作文的框架as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the

figure/percentage in___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decreasethe table(graph/picture/pie/chart),(goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two good reasons

accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the factresponsible that ________.for _______.Inaddition, ________ isMaybe there are

some other reasons to show ________.But it is generallyreasonsarebelieved commonly convincing.that the above mentionedAs far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.Iboth sound and well-grounded.am sure my opinion is中考英语作文万能模板：现象说明文（新中国成立以来发生了翻天覆地的变化，）

Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________.There are many reasons

explaining__________________________.The main reason is____________________.what is

more_________________________.thirdly__________________________.As a result_______________.Considering all

there,________________________.For one

thing_____________________,for another____________.In Conclusion____________________.中考英语作文万能模板：一种事物或现象（负面意义倾向）

关于A的话题,早已引起了广泛的社会关注。如今在电视、报纸、日常生活的很多角落，都有越来越多的关于A的议论。

给A一个精确恒定的定义并非易事，因为它的概念涉及了科学、人性、思想、经济、社会、自然等广阔的领域。一般而言，我们可以这样描述A…

A能成为公众关注的焦点，主要是由于它对个人、集体乃至整个世界都有着不容忽视的不良影响。

认 真分析后我们可以看到，A对社会/世界 /健康的不利有很多。首先，从最直观的角度来看，A的出现直接损害了（这里加入一句针对性的话，如人类的身体健康和环境的平衡）。（举例）。其次，从更深一层次上讲，它为人类的精神文明蒙上了一层阴影。更可怕的是，由于A所产生微小利益，却促成了许多可悲的人们为其忘乎所以，破坏了人类生存的法则和空间。

事实上，A的出现是社会发展和人类进步的产物，A所带来的危害是人类进化过程中付出的代价。同时，A的产生来源于部分人们的自私和趋利性，他们看到的是肤浅和片面的利益，而从未从整个全局和人类整体的利益出发去认识和分析它。这使得A始终挥之不去。对此，我奉劝他们，跳出狭小的角落，用长远和全局的眼光去重新审视A。

而如今，我们已深受其害，要想消除它的危害，我们必须从根源上杜绝它的产生，我们每一个人都应给予A高度的重视，用系统的和科学的方法去解决，唯有这样，避免它带来更多损失，我们人类前进的脚步才会更加平稳，更加欢快的迈向辉煌的明天。

中考英语作文万能模板：说明原因型模块（3）

Currently,XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate

the theory---nothing is more valuable than XX.It is clear that(1).If you(your dreams willcome true.On the contrary, if you2), as a result ,(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(look4very far to find out the truth , in respect that).You donn't have to

we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon(6).With reference to my standpoint ,I think(附加

7).一、英语书信的常见写作模板 开头部分：How nice to hear from you again.Let me tell you something about the activity.I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.I’m China for a visit.pleased to hear that you’re coming to I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.结尾部分：With best wishes.I’m looking forward to your reply.I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.二、口头通知常见写作模板 呼语及开场白部分：Ladies

attention, please? I have an announcement and gentlemen, May I have your to make.正文部分：All the teachers and students are required to

attend it.Please take your notebooks and make notes.Please discussion in groups.listen carefully and we’ll have a Please come on time and don’t be late.结束语部分：Please come and join in it.Everybody is welcome to attend it.I hope you’ll have a nice time here.That’s all.Thank you.三、议论文模板1.导入：正反观点式议论文模板第whether we should...1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about Our opinions are divided on this topic.（导入话题）

（观点有分歧）

正文： 第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方观点）Here are

the reasons.First...Second...Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由)

第against it.3段：However, the others are strongly Their place...reasons（反方观点）2~3What’s are more...as

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或者B”

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第A.The main reason is that...Another reason 2段：There are many reasons why I prefer is that...(赞同A的原因)

第some extent...(3段: Of course,列出B 1~2also 个has B的优势advantages)to 结论：

第A is much better than B.From what has been 4段: But if all these factors are considered, discussed conclusion that...(above, we may finally draw the 3.观点论述类议论文模板：得出结论)オ 导入：

第As a student, I am strongly 1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题

decision.The reasons for this may be listed as follows.（亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对）in favour of the

（过渡句，承上启下）

正文：

第2段：First of all...Secondly...Besides...(列出

2~3个赞成或反对的理由)结论：

第3段：In conclusion, I believe that...（照应第4.“How to”1段，构成“总—分—总”结构）

类议论文模板：导入：

第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题 正文：

第serious 2段：Many ways can help to solve most effective.First of all...Another way to problem, but the following may this be solve the problem is...Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)结论：

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四、图表作文写作模板The chart gives us

图表主题.The first thing we notice is that an overall picture of the 图表

最大特点

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一、英语书信的常见写作模板 开头部分：

How nice to hear from you again.Let me tell you something about the activity.I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.结尾部分：

With best wishes.I’m looking forward to your reply.I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.二、口头通知常见写作模板 呼语及开场白部分：

Ladies please? I have an announcement to make.and gentlemen, May I have your attention,正文部分：

All the teachers and students are required to attend it.Please take your notebooks and make notes.Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.Please come on time and don’t be late.结束语部分：

Please come and join in it.Everybody is welcome to attend it.I hope you’ll have a nice time here.That’s all.Thank you.三、议论文模板

1.正反观点式议论文模板 导入：

第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should...Our opinions are divided on this topic.（导入话题）

（观点有分歧）

正文：

第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方观点）

Here are the reasons.First...Second...Finally...(2~3个赞成的理由)

列出第3段：However, the others are strongly against it.（反方观点）

Their reasons are as follows.In the first place...What’s more...In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)

结论：

第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.（个人观点）オ

2.“A或者B”类议论文模板：

导入：

第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways.Others, however, argue that B is much because I think A has more advantages.better.Personally, I would prefer A

正文：

第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A.The main reason is that...Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因)

第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent...(列出1~2个B的优势)

结论：

第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B.From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that...(得出结论)オ

3.观点论述类议论文模板： 导入：

第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题

As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision.（亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对）

The reasons for this may be listed as follows.（过渡句，承上启下）

正文：

第2段：First of all...Secondly...Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由)

结论：

第3段：In conclusion, I believe that...（照应第1段，构成“总—分—总”结构）

4.“How to”类议论文模板：

导入：

第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题

正文：

第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective.First of all...Another way to solve the problem is...Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)

结论： 第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take.But it should be noted that we should take action to...（强调解决此类问题的根本方法)

四、图表作文写作模板

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第三篇：中考英语写作复习

中考英语写作复习·请假条

便条可以看作是一种形式简单的书信。常见的英文便条有请假条、留言条和借条等。它们格式简单、用词通俗、开门见山、简明扼要。

请假条和留言条的结构是一样的，即由称呼、正文、签名和日期四个部分组成。

「写作示例」

假如你叫李明，因患重感冒今明两天不能上学。请你参考下面所给词语，给你的外籍英语教师写一张请假条，说明你这两天不能上学的原因。

Not feel well，a bad cold，stay in bed，can‘t go to school for two days，get well soon（杭州市中考题）

「参考答案」

Tuesday

Dear Mr Green，I‘m sorry to tell you that I’m not feeling well today.This morning I went to see the doctor and he told me that I had caught a bad cold.And he also asked me to stay in bed for two days.So I can‘t go to school today and tomorrow.I hope I’ll get well soon.Yours，Li Ming

第四篇：中考英语写作1used

中考英语写作

一、掌握写作技能，知道该怎样动手。

写作涉及的问题很多，除了语言各方面的问题外，还有思想内容和所用材料、组织条理、书写格式等。

1、掌握各种体裁文章格式

（1）记叙文（Narration）

这是最普遍、最基本的一种文体。写作中应遵循以下几点。〈1〉交待要素，即人、时、地、事。〈2〉按事件发生的先后顺序叙述完整、具体。〈3〉要重点突出，目的明确。记叙文所记的都是过去发生的事，原则上通常用过去时态写。

（2）说明文(Exposition)、描写文(Description)

这是英文常见的两种文体，以解说和描述为主要表达方式。

（3）日记(Diary)

这是把自己当天生活中经历的有意义的事以及见闻或感受记录下来的书面形式。文体自由，通常用第一人称写。

格式如下：

a.Oct 26 , 1999 Wednesday Fine

It is two months since I began this diary„„.b.Friday May 1st Cloudy

Today is May Day „„

(注意：常用以表示天气的词有Fine, Cloudy, Rainy, Windy, Snow等)

“12月21日是星期天，天气晴朗。上午9：00你在去看电影的路上遇到一位外宾。他不知道去邮局怎么走，显得很着急。你走上前告诉他怎么走，他很感激。虽然你看电影迟到了，但你并不介意，你为能用英语与外国人交谈感到高兴。字数40-60个。”

December 21st , Sunday Fine

When I was on my way to the cinema at 9:00.I met a foreign visitor.He didn't know how to get to the post office.He looked worried.So I went over and told him the way.He said “Thank you” to me.I was late for the film, but I didn't mind.I'm glad that I cantalk with a foreigner in English.(4)书信（letters）

一般分为私人信函（Personal letters）和正式信函（Business letters）。英文书信从信封到正文，其格式与汉语有许多不同。书信由以下几个部分构成：a.信头（Heading）

寄信人地址和写信日期，写在信封右上角，地址由小到大。例：NO.19 Middle School

320 DenShan Road

NanChang, JiangXi

China, 330006

August 28 2000

b.信内地址（Inside address）

收信人姓名地址在左上方，位置比信头低一至二行。私人信件一般不写信内地址。c.称呼（Greeting/Salution）d.正文（Body）e.结束语（Ending）f.签名（Signature）1

(5)通知和便条（Notice , Note）

一般至少有口头通知、书面通知两种形式，至少包括：

1、时间，2、地点，3、活动内容。

便条一般有留言条，请假条。特点是：格式简单，开门见山，三言两语。

例如：

a.Attention, please.I have something to tell you„„

b.Notice

All the League Members are requested to meet in classroom 403 onMonday(Sep.25th)at 5:00 to discuss the sports meeting.c.TELEPHONE MESSAGE

From: LiLei To: Tom

Date: Sep.19th Time: 8:00 a.m.Message: Please go to the museum with LiLei tomorrow at 9:00 by bus.Hello, everyone.I have something to tell you.It is Sunday tomorrow.We're going to visit the Monkey Island.There we can see the animals and we'll climb the hill.We will go there by bus.Let's meet at half past seven at school gate.We'll have lunch at the Monkey Island.So please bring some food with you.That's all.Thank you.(6)其它

除上述常见文体外，还有补全对话，电话对话，寻物启事等。学生要掌握上述文体格式，尤其是考试常用文体，如书信、日记、通知、记叙文、留言条等。

素材：

(1)Proverbs:

Do in Rome as Romans do.East or west, home is best.Rome was not built in a day.Home is where the heart is.(2)Useful structure

a.It is time for sb.to do sth.b.I would like to„„

c.It takes sb.some time/ some money to do sth.(3)Good sentences

a.Thank you for teaching us so well.b.Best wishes for Teachers' Day.c.It's really nice of you.d.I hope everything goes well.(4)连词的应用：并列关系：and, as well as, or„ 转折关系：but, yet, how－ever„； 时间关系：when ,while, after, before, then, after that„；

因果关系：so，there－for，as a result„；

目的：in order to，in order that，so as to, so that„；列举：for example ,such as„； 总结性：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking„

(5)结构：

First, A.Second, B.Third, C.Firstly, A.Secondly, B.Finally, C.First of all, A.In addition, B.Last but not least, C.(6)积累常用过渡词、过渡词组、以及句型套路。

表示“接着、不久”有：soon, in a short time, shortly afterwards, soon afterwards, soon after that, before long, anon, followed by sth., It was not long before„等表示“其次”有：in addition, besides, furthermore, moreover等

表示“个人观点”的句型有：I believe / think that„/I am greatly convinced that„I am assured that„/in my opinion, in my view, from my point of view, to my mind等

书信常用开头有：I’m glad / pleased to hear from you./It is so great to receive your letter./It is such a pleasure to receive your letter of Mar.25.I am terribly sorry to have taken so long to reply to your last letter.I hope this letter finds you in good health.(7)开头：

1、名人名言A proverb says, “ You are only young once.”

As everyone knows, No one can deny that…

2．数字统计 According to a recent survey …/ A recent statistics shows that …

(8)结尾1.如此结论

Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that

更多过渡短语： to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus更多句型： Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…

2．如此建议：Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.中考英语写作专练

1、Letter

例文：

North

Bao’an Road

Shenzhen，Guangdong，China

June

19，2004

Dear Jim，How are you ？I’m very glad to write the letter to you.My name is Li Ping.I’m a Chinese boy.I’m from Shenzhen，China.Do you know Shenzhen？ It’s a beautiful modern city in Guang-dong.I study in Shenzhen Middle School.Our school is very large and beautiful.I’m in Class One，Grade 3.There are 45 classes in our school.We study Chinese，maths，English and other subjects.I like English very much.I like playing computer games，football and watching TV.I have many friends.We help each other and learn from each other.There are three people in my family.They are my father，my mother and I.I want to make friends with you.Please write to me soon.Hope to hear from you soon/ I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.Best wishes.Yours sincerely，Li Ping2、Announcement / Notice

Announcement

Girls and boys / Ladies and gentlemen，May I have your attention，please ？ / Attention，please./

I’ve got announcement to make./ I’m very glad to tell you that anEnglish lecture will be held in the lecture hall / theater from 3 p.m.to5 p.m.on Friday，March 1st.It will be given by Professor Li Ping fromBeijing University.The topic is“ How to learn English well”.You may takenotes if you like.And you may ask any question on English learning /study after the lecture.Please attend the lecture on time / don’t be late.That’s all，thank you.Notice

The students of Junior Grade One and Two will go to Xiangshan Park on June 25th.We will climb the hill and have a picnic on the top of it.After that，we will visit the famous botanical garden nearby.Please put on / wearyour sports shoes and bring your picnic lunch and drinking water with you.We will meet / get together / gather in front of our school gate at seven o’clock in the morning.The buses are going to leave at 7：20.So be sure to come on time.Those who want to go should register their names with the Students’ Union before Thursday.The Students’ Union

June 20th，2004

[范文]

Advantages and Disadvantages of Wearing school uniforms

Wearing school uniforms has both advantages and disadvantages.In myopinion, it make students feel proud of their schools.In addition, it builds a common spirit of unity among students.Furthermore, it reminds students of the value and history of their school.However, some students dislike them becouse of their simple colors, boring designs and bad quality.So I think that peaple should improve the quality of the school uniforms.网上交友 Making Friends on Line

These days many students like to make friends on line.Most of them think it's interesting to know a stranger through the Internet.As a matter of fact, only a few of them have succeeded in getting a real good friend in this way.Most of them have been cheated.Some of them have committed crimes with the friends on line.So we should be careful of making friends on line.We'd better pay more attention to our study.2008年奥运会我要做一名志愿者

I want to be a volunteer of Beijing Olympic games.I realized the time flies.I must study english very hard.Because English is very useful and it is very important.And to be a volunteer of the Olympic games is good for myself too.I can make some friends from different countries and learn more about sport, about Olympic.But the first thing to prepare this is study hard, I am confident i will to be a good volunteer and I will show the world that our country and our cities are so perfect in the world.

第五篇：中考英语记叙文写作

中考英语记叙文写作指导

记叙文是记人叙事的文章，它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果，即我们通常所说的五个“ W ”（what, who, when, where, why）和一个“ H ”（how）。记叙文的重点在于“述说”和“描写”，因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚，描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。

一、记叙文的特点

1.叙述的人称

英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人读后感到真实可信，如身临其境。如：

The other day, I was driving along the street.Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast.I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side.But it was too late.The car hit my bike and I fell off it.用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：

Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard.On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover.Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short.What could he do? Then he had a good idea.2.动词的时态

在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。

3.叙述的顺序

记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。

4.叙述的过渡

过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：

In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things.Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao.It is really a beautiful city.There are many places of interest to see.But what impressed me most was the sunrise.The next morning I got up early.I was very happy because it was a fine day.By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red.In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing.The sun was very red, not shining.It rose slowly.At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball.At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.What a moving and unforgettable scene!

5.叙述与对话

引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：

I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something.Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front.I thought maybe someone was knocking the door.I asked who it was but I heard no reply.After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor.I realized it was the cat.I felt released.这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整：

I was in the kitchen cooking something.“Crash!” a loud noise came from the front.Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, “Who?” No reply.After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor.“It's you.” I said, quite released.二、写好记叙文的基本要领

1.头绪分明，脉络清楚

写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材

都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2.突出中心，详略得当

在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：

One night a man came to our house and told me, “There is a family with eight children.They have not eaten for days.” I took some food with me and went.When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured（破坏外貌）by hunger.There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger.I gave the rice to the mother.She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice.When she came back, I asked her, “Where did you go?” she gave me this simple answer, “To my neighbors-they are hungry also!”

3.用活语言，准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文：

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away.He was soon lost among people and traffic.He could not find the way back home and started crying.Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying.They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened.Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived.The two students decided to take him home.Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound.She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it.She served them with tea but they left.修改后：

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street.After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home.But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic.When he could not find the way home, he started and crying.Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop.They immediately went up to him.“Little boy, why are you standing here crying?” they asked.“I want Mom, I go home.” said the boy, still crying.“Don't worry, we'll send you home.”

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house.With the help of a policeman, they finally found it.When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house.Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea.