2008年8月16日雅思A类大作文

第一篇：2008年8月16日雅思A类大作文

最权威的国际教育服务平台

2008年8月16日雅思A类大作文范文

可采用一边倒写法比较好写，相应的就是三个主体段，主体段1讲很多媒体当中的犯罪细节都是为了赚钱，所以可信度差；主体段2讲媒体报道犯罪细节对潜在的罪犯提供了指导；主体段3讲媒体报道犯罪细节对于犯罪受害者不公平，结尾段总结。

Some people think the media should not report details of crimes to the public.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the crime rate hovering at high levels, the print as well as the broadcast media thrive on detailed crime coverage.They dedicate large proportions of their space or airtime to ghastly crime stories and this trend is showing no sign of abating.Whether the media should publicise detailed accounts of criminal acts has triggered spirited debate.Many assert that the news media should refrain from revealing details of crimes.Speaking from myself,I cannot agree more with their view.In the first place,given the mercenary motives behind most detailed crime coverage,it is advisable for us to discredit and discourage this practice.Today,most news outlets have their own crime reporters covering the police beat.Yet the principal purpose of such assignment is,in most instances,not to uphold the criminal justice system or to alarm the citizenry over some very real criminal threats,but to jack up newspaper circulations or television ratings.Consequently, much detailed crime coverage is biased, magnified, misrepresented,deliberately titillating or fraudulent.It only serves to terrorise communities and leave a multitude of law-abiding citizens constantly apprehensive, if not paranoid,about crime.In the second place,detailed reports of crimes by the press afford the potential criminals very instructive learning materials,which are hard to obtain otherwise.Recounting premeditated crimes in graphic detail in the public domain helps those who are in the process of planning some criminal act perfect their schemes.Drawing on the well-documented crime stories in the media,would-be criminals learn how to avoid the pitfalls in their crime,thereby making themselves harder to identify and track down after the crime is actually carried out.And this in turn,may aggravate the already soaring crime rate.Thirdly,detailed reports of heinous crimes may permanently traumatise the victims of the reported crimes.Without the victims’ consent,glaringly vivid and graphic accounts of flagitious crimes may constitute recurring nightmares to the individuals

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who have been victimised by these crimes.And given the pressure to “scoop” their rivals,to expedite things news outlets rarely consult the victims before they depict lurid details of horrific crimes to the public,in an attempt to satisfy the base curiosity of some crime-obssessed readers and viewers.In sum,detailed crime coverage in the media is,more often than not,sensationalised so as to boost their market penetration.Even when some crime reporters wish to play the role of an objective chronicler, the divulged details can serve to facilitate future crimes and force crime victims to relive the horrible moments they experienced during the crime.And I am convinced if detailed crime coverage goes unchecked,it will continue to exert baneful influence on individuals,communities and societies.资料来源：教育优选 http://www.xiexiebang.com/

第二篇：雅思大作文-环保类

环保: environmental protection 环境保护 environmentally-friendly 环保的 preserve v.保护，保存 污染：

Pollute= contaminate, 污染（动词）pollutant 污染物

Pollution=contamination 污染（名词）垃圾: rubbish, garbage, trash, waste, litter 处理: dispose of, burn, bury(landfill垃圾场), dump倾倒，recycle 回收

plastic bags塑料袋, drinking cans饮料罐 biodegradable packaging 可降解包装, throwaway 可丢弃的 disposable 可丢弃的 discourage v.不鼓励 燃料

non-renewable 不可再生的

fossil fuels矿石燃料: natural gas, coal, petroleum limited/finite natural resources 有限的自然资源 alternative energy替代能源 replace=substitute v.取代

(wind power, hydropower水电, solar(lunar)power太阳能, nuclear power核能 radioactivity n.辐射性

use up, deplete, exhaust v.用光，耗尽 conserve v.节省，节约, consume less v.少消耗 危害动物: poaching非法打猎，盗猎, damage natural habitat 破坏自然栖息地, rare breed稀有物种, endangered species濒危物种, extinct adj.灭绝(die out, disappear动词), animal rights activist动物权益保护者 , natural reserve(giant panda大熊猫)自然保护区, protect wild life保护野生动物, disastrous灾难性的, devastation破坏, have disastrous effect on…对。。有灾难性的影响 危害植物: vegetation植被

deforestation森林消失, landslide山体滑坡, 危害环境: carbon dioxide二氧化碳, acid rain酸雨(erode腐蚀)greenhouse effect温室效应(worsening, deteriorate, deterioration恶化)global warming全球变暖

ecological system=ecosystem生态系统

green belt绿化带, sand storm沙尘暴,(filter v.过滤)arouse people’s awareness/consciousness of environmental protection提高公众的环保意识

第三篇：2013-11-16雅思A类写作大作文

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2013年11月16日雅思A类大作文范文

——来自环球雅思慎浩老师

题目：Across recent world, only a few languages are increasing in use, while some（=287 words）

范文：

第一段：社会背景+正向观点+自己观点

社会背景（全球化+经济融合-----有效交流的基石-----互通有无 +多边贸易）+正向观点（某些语言蓬勃发展—优点＞缺点）+自己观点（某些语言普及-------国家间经济相互交流）

Nowadays, along with globalization and economic integration, certain languages recognized and accepted by a sizeable percentage of countries, as the corner stone of available communication between countries, further some languages instead of that of various ones outweigh its demerits.After thoughtful consideration, I am convinced that a few languages being are in service of 如今，伴随着全球化以及经济一体化，大多数国家认可与接受的某些语言，作为各国有效沟通的基石，促进多国的贸易以及互通有无。因此，一些人认为 一些语言蓬勃发展而不是各种语言的蓬勃发展的优点远超过其缺点。深思熟虑之后，我认为一些语言的普及和应用有利于国家之间经济的相互交流。

句子分析：

Nowadays, along with globalization and economic integration, further 状语：Along with : 伴随。。adv

主语： Certain languages recognized and accepted by a sizeable percentage of 语法：Certain languages recognized and accepted by a sizeable percentage of ：Adj +N +done +介宾结构 = adj + N +adj +adv

as the corner stone of available communication between countries：插入语

作为国家之间有效交流的基石

谓语：Further vt 促进

宾语：Mutual exchange of needed products and multilateral trades

Mutual exchange of needed products n 互通有无

Multilateral tradesn 多边贸易

作为国家之间有效交流的基石

第二段：论点 +论据+例证+结论

论点（主语：支持观点：少数语言使用-----国家间的经济互补以及合作）+论据（没有语言作为有效媒介------无法正常进行---经济合作与交流）+例证（英语 –起不可替代作用 1 提升沟通效率 2 解决矛盾纠纷）+结论（普及某些语言优势明显）

On one hand, popularization and application of some languages facilitate economic complementation and between countries better.without languages as media to enhance effective communicating, economic cooperation and the most widely used language, utilized by plentiful countries plays an irreplaceable role in terms of enhancing efficiency of communicating among countries greatly and tackling the conflicts and disputes among multinational corporations effectively.From this point, the superiorities of popularizing some languages applied broadly are prominent.一方面，（论点）一些语言的普及和应用更好地促进国家间的经济的互补与合作。（论据）换句话说，没有促进有效沟通的语言作为媒介，国家间的经济合作与交流不能正常运行。（例证）例如，英语，作为最广泛使用的语言，被大多数国家使用对于极大地加强国家之间沟通的效率以及有效解决跨国企业之间矛盾与分歧起了不可替代的作用。（结论）从这个角度讲，普及一些广泛使用语言的优势是凸显的。

句子分析：

English, as the most widely used language, utilized by plentiful countries plays an irreplaceable role in terms of enhancing efficiency of communicating among countries greatly and tackling the conflicts and disputes among multinational corporations effectively.主语：

English, as the most widely used language, utilized by plentiful countries

N,同位语，done +prep +n =N, 同位语，adj + adv

谓语：

plays an irreplaceable role : 起了不可替代的作用

宾语：

Enhancing efficiency of communicating among countries greatly and tackling the conflicts and disputes among multinational corporations effectively

解析：adv 修饰 doing

极大地加强国家之间沟通的效率以及有效解决跨国企业之间矛盾与分歧

第三段

让步段（另一种观点合理性+对此观点反驳）

（另一种观点：多元文化丧失+对此反驳观点：加快语言发展成为必然趋势 原因 1 多元文化融合规避不必要的纠纷与分歧）

On the other hand, a series of issues also arise out of only utilizing a few languages,such as forfeit of diverse cultures, which exerts irretrievable deficiency toward diverse development across the world.However, accelerating development of certain languages that are widely used turns out to be the irreversible tendency, in the view of better integration of diverse development of various countries and evading dispensable disputes and divergence evoked by more utilizing disparate languages.另一方面，仅仅使用某些语言会引发一系列的问题，例如多元文化的丧失，对世界多元化的发展造成无法弥补的损失。然而，促进某些广泛使用的语言的发展成为不可逆转的趋势，鉴于各国多元化发展的更好的融合以及规避由过多的使用不同的语言引发的不必要的争论和分歧。

句子分析:

Accelerating development of certain languages that are widely used turns out to be the irreversible tendency, in the view of better integration of diverse development of various countries and evading dispensable disputes and divergence evoked by more utilizing disparate languages.主语：

Accelerating development of certain languages that are widely used

促进某些广泛使用的语言的发展

Doing + N +定语从句

谓语

Turn out to be vt 成为

宾语

the irreversible tendency 不可逆转的趋势

状语：

in the view of better integration of diverse development of various countries and evading dispensable disputes and divergence evoked by more utilizing disparate languages.In the view of + better integration of diverse development of various countries and evading dispensable disputes and divergence evoked by more utilizing disparate languages

鉴于+各国多元化发展的更好的融合以及规避由过多的使用不同的语言引发的不必要的争论和分歧

第四段： 总结全文观点

（支持观点：促进语言发展符合社会发展趋势原因：社会经济更好的发展）On balance, after summarizing what is outlined above, I hold the point of view/ that furthering development of certain languages to coincide with trend of development of the current society is mainly embodied in incomparable superiority, considering its role toward accelerating economic and social development better.总而言之，在概括以上观点之后，我持有这样的观点认为促进符合当今社会发展趋势的某些语言体现出不可比拟的优越性，考虑到对于更好的促进经济以及社会发展的作用。

句子分析：

after summarizing what is outlined above, I hold the point of view that furthering development of certain languages to coincide with trend of development of the current society is mainly embodied in incomparable superiority, considering its role toward accelerating economic and social development better.状语：

after summarizing what is outlined above：介宾结构做状语

主语谓宾： I hold the point of view

宾语从句：

that furthering development of certain languages to coincide with trend of development of the current society is mainly embodied in incomparable superiority, considering its role toward accelerating economic and social development better.主语：

furthering development of certain languages to coincide with trend of development of the current society

谓语：is mainly embodied in 主要体现

宾语：incomparable superiority 不可替代优势

条件状语：Considering its role toward accelerating economic and social development better（更好的促进经济以及社会发展的作用）

第四篇：雅思A类大作文真题（最终版）

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雅思A类大作文真题范文

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雅思A类大作文真题题目：Some people say that all young people should be required to stay in full-time education until they are at least 18 years old.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(Word count=275)

雅思A类大作文真题范文：

Education has always been the most experienced profession and industry in the world, anddiscussions on it have always found a new angle.Receiving full-time education prior to adulthood(18 years old as a general practice)is held as truth, which this essay almost fully roots for.It is true that continuous schooling before 18 years old benefits learners and their families.In reality, education helps as much the growth of professional skills as the development of character, both of which will most likely bring material life comforts and higher life purposes.Consequently, with personal development guaranteed, domestic situations—be they of the families individuals are from or will create—will be bettered in due course.It is also true that countries and governments will benefit from national talents.The young are the future, and thus are paid attention to by means of education.Without knowledge and skills, which are likely acquired at schools at different levels, the prospects of national advances arein jeopardy.Thus, lasting education for young people is of necessity.However, it would not be nitpicking to state that a dozen years of education sometimes might seem only wishful.With regional differences within a country or beyond boarders, certain families are still stricken by starvation, warfare, or poverty, and their younger generation are forced out of the luxury of education at all, let alone a continuous one before the beginning of adulthood.Globally, it is not rare that children or teenagers are willingly joining the labour force to sustain family economy, or are helplessly enlisted in military forces.In sum, the statement in question shows goodwill that might be shattered by reality.以上就是环球雅思老师为大家带来的雅思A类大作文真题范文，希望大家仔细研读，值得借鉴！环球雅思祝你成功！

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