2013年高考英语作文冲刺训练六给校长写信反映作业多

第一篇：2013年高考英语作文冲刺训练六给校长写信反映作业多

2013年高考英语作文冲刺训练六 给校长写信反映作业多

郑州市高中英语名师工作室 昝亚娟

你叫李华，是一名外语特色的高中学生。你发现教师们布置的作业太多，同学们很难按时完成。一些同学经常因完不成作业而被罚站。

请根据下面的写作提纲，给校长写一封信，反映作业过多这个问题。内容包括：

1、写信的目的；

2、存在问题和恶果；

3、提出你的建议。

字数：120字左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

【话题词汇】call one’s attention to唤起对……的注意too much太多assign布置 after class 课下stay up late熬夜不睡on time 按时at the back of在……的后面 be bad for 对……有害punishment惩罚relax放松improve 改进break down（身体）衰弱下来

【参考范文】 Dear Headmaster, I am Li Hua, a student from Grade Three.I’m writing to call your attention to the problem that we students have too much homework.As you know, our teachers assign so much homework for us that we can hardly finish it after class.So we have to stay up late to get our homework done.Some students who fail to finish it on time are asked to stand at the back of the classroom as punishment.With so much homework to do, we have no time to play sports or relax, which is bad for our health.I am worried that if nothing is done to improve the situation, our health will break down.I hope teachers should assign less homework so that we can have enough time for sleep and exercise.Do you agree with me?

Yours

Li Hua 【采分点点击】本文主题明确，结构严谨，语言流畅，表达自然。行文中用了较多的高级词汇、短语和句型。

1.高级词汇和短语：call one’s attention to, too much, after class, stay up late, on time, at the back of, be bad for，break down 2.高级句型：

状语从句: our teachers assign so much homework for us that we can hardly finish it after class, so that we can have enough time for sleep and exercise.宾语从句：I am worried that if nothing is done to improve the situation, I hope teachers should assign less homework 定语从句: As you know, Some students who fail to finish it on time are asked to stand at the back of the classroom as punishment.which is bad for our health.同位语从句：the problem that we students have too much homework，

第二篇：2012年广东省高考冲刺英语作文训练

高三英语作文参考范文

一．

Patience Is The Secret of Success

The story is about an unforgettable lesson of the writer from an old man while fishing on the bank of the lake, through which the writer realized patience was very important and that it was the secret of success.I have a similar experience.Once I waited for a bus at the stop for 30 minutes, but no bus came.I couldn‟t wait any longer and decided to walk to school.But no sooner had I left than the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it.If I wanted to take the next bus, I would have to wait for another 30 minutes.Only then did I realize the importance of patience.Being impatient will waste all the efforts that we have made.Patience also plays an important part in our study and work.With it we can achieve more.Now, whenever I am to lose my patience, I‟ll think of the experience of waiting for a bus.二．To help or not help

The passage mainly tells us that a man was hurt in a car accident, but people around him, including the writer did nothing to help him, which resulted in the injured man‟s death on the street.After reading the passage, I was completely shocked.As far as I‟m concerned，whenever people are in trouble, we should offer them help regardless of the consequences.If I had been on the spot, I would have called an ambulance and the police without hesitation.Once, I was walking in the street when suddenly a man came up to me and robbed me of my watch.Frightened, I called for help loudly.Just then, a young man shouted, “Stop that guy！”.Finally, people around united and caught the robber.To help or not to help shows a man‟s quality.Wherever you are, if you have a chance to show your good qualities, just do it!Remember, your contribution counts!

三．Hold on to one[„s belief

This passage tells us that Monty Roberts, who had such strong belief that he didn't give up his dream all the time even though he was discouraged, and eventually he succeeded in owning a horse ranch.For a person, belief always plays an important role in his/her life.As a saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Anyone who has strong belief can realize his dream and enjoy a colorful life.Otherwise, he will lose himself on his way of life.Belief is so important that it can change one's fate.As a deaf man, Beethoven went on working with his strong belief in the last years of his life, though he was not able to hear his own fine music.Marie Curie, a famous scientist, also set a good example.In 1898, Marie found a new element.In order to improve her discovery, Marie and her husband worked hard.It was because of their great effort that they saw the dim blue light of new element--radium.Her dream came true at last.From my point of view, it can be seen that one with firmly-held belief is likely to make a great achievement and master his own life.2009高考作文

一． Last weekend, I had an interview with Professor Wang, an eye-doctor, concerning the issue of short-sightedness of school children in China.According to Professor Wang, slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted, ranking the first in the world.He also pointed out that the causes for short-sightedness are so complicated that no medicine can cure short-sightedness.He suggested that school children avoid overuse of their eyes and do more outdoor activities.He particularly reminded us that how to hold a pen is also related to short-sightedness.二．Should tourists take photos with animals?

Koalas in wildlife parks can‟t fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them.The government is thinking of making the tourists‟ behavior illegal to protect the animals.When people are visiting wildlife parks, they like to take photographs with animals.Reasons for this are varied.Some people may think that taking photos with animals is fun in contrast with taking photos with other persons.Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals during their visit.If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me.My life would be greatly affected and I won‟t feel happy at all!I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself.However, I don‟t agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals.Tourist pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they can‟t have a photo with an animal.Perhaps wildlife parks can set some special time and during this time, tourists can take photos with animals.It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animas.2012年调考英语作文

读写任务高分作文：

Ashamed of his mother‟s scar, a boy was disappointed at first when his mother attended the teacher-parent meeting.However, he became moved and regretful after knowing his mother had got the scar when protecting him in a fire.The story above reminds me of my experience.When I was a child, I was distinguished for telling lies.At first, people around me was cheated by me easily, and they didn‟t trust me any more.One night, I caught a brothers for help.However, neither of them wanted to send me to the hospital.At that moment, my mother, who had been ill for years, sent me to the hospital immediately.Consequently, I became well but my mother had to stay in hospital for weeks.If my mother hadn‟t sent me to the hospital, she wouldn‟t have been in a worse condition.What the love she gave me.From then on, I realized that I shouldn‟t lie to others any more and I always tried to behave myself.Gradually, I am no longer what I used to be and always praised by neighbors as a trustworthy girl.What a profound influence my mother have on me!

From my perspective, we children should devote ourselves to our parents in return for their love.Never should we ignore their feelings whenever they are in trouble.Besides , what we can do to please them is that we should try our best to study well and never give up in the face of difficulty.A little boy was ashamed of his mother‟s scar.When his mother attended the parent-teacher meeting, he was disappointed.After knowing the cause of his mother‟s scar, the boy felt ashamed of himself and cried, hugging his mother.There was a time when I was very naughty and always made my mother angry.As a result, many relatives didn‟t like me and sometimes even scolded me without any reasons.One day, I got a fever and my mother took care of me all the time, taking me to the hospital and cooking healthy and my favorite food.At that time, I asked her whether she didn‟t like me, she just replied, “You are the only son who can‟t be taken place of in my heart.‟ Hearing that, I burst into tears.What my mother has done for me makes me know that no matter who you are, no matter who you will be, you‟re just the person who will always be accepted and valued by your parents, in spite of your faults and difficulties.They will be always there to give you hope and courage when you‟re confronted with misfortune and hardships.Therefore, be good to your parents and take care of them.In my opinion, only by realizing our dreams and making a better life for our parents can we live up to their expectations and repay their devoted love.基础写作高分作文：

There are 62 students in my class, and two thirds of them used to take a part time job or are taking one now, working in a shop or a library as well as in a restaurant as waiters.The reasons why they take a part time job are different.Around half of them are for the purpose of solving the financial problems in poor families, while others regard it as a good way to apply their knowledge to social practice as well as enrich their social experience.However, still some students don‟t take a part time job because they are under great stress as a senior three student and they don‟t have time.Besides, the low pay and no permission from parents are also the main reasons why don‟t take a part time job.

第三篇：2013年高考英语作文冲刺

2013高考英语作文冲刺

一、对比观点

模板一

There is a widespread concern over the issue that _____ 作文题目.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二___ _.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点

Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一).For example, they think ②-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one

thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一).For another thing,⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二).Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).二、利弊型作文:这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)

1.说明事物现状2.事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)3.你对现状(或前景)的看法

模板一

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文题目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___优点一______.And secondly ___优点二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺点一______.In addition, ____缺点二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.三、图表题型作文:要求考生从一个表格或者图片出发，按照要求写作, 分为三个步骤来写：

1.说明图表:主题句+图表说明1+图表说明2+图表说明3 如，As the bar chart shows, ____ during the years of ____ to ____.2.说明引起变化的原因:主题句+原因1+原因2+原因3 如，Several factors

contribute to _____.____.(原因1)And ______.(原因2)Furthermore, ______(原因3)All these result in ____.3.说明影响或者提出解决办法:主题句+建议+前景预测

如，However, ____ is faced with some problems.With _____, ____, the effect of which is not only discouraging, but also challenging.So my principle is to pay due attention to ___, but not just to ____.图表作文模板 一

As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture,____ has been on rise/ decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____.From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____.On the one hand, ____.On the other hand, _____ is due to the fact that ______.In addition, ______ is responsible for _____.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.四、解决方法题型:要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径1.问题现状2.怎样解决(解决方案优缺)

In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(说明A的现状).Second,---------------(举例进一步说明现状)

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解决方法一).For another-------------(解决方法二).Finally,--------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解决方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(带来的好处).阐述主题说明原因题型:要求考生从一个主题出发，按照提纲要求写作，对这类题型，通常分为三个步骤来写：第一段、总结描述,先用一句话描述当今社会的某种现象或者事物，并且用简单的话扩展说几句：主题句+扩展句;

第二段、分析原因,主题句+原因1+原因2+原因3

第三段、表明自己的观点并结束全文,在结尾的时候，一定要表明自己的观点。阐述主题说明原因题型模板

Nowadays, there are more and more __ _ in __ _.It is estimated that ___.Why have there been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is ______.Besides,_____.The third one is _____.To sum up, the main cause of it is due to _____.It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing,_____.For another thing, _____.All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.五、谚语警句性议论文

模板一

The good old proverb----------------(名言或谚语)reminds us that----------------(释义).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,-----------------(理由一).For example,-------------------(举例说明).Secondly,----------------(理由二).Another case is that---------------(举例说明).Furthermore ,------------------(理由三).In my opinion,----------------(我的观点).In short, whatever you do, please remember the saying------.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.图画作文:要求考生根据一幅图画(一般是一个或是两个，很少出现三副图的时候)，首先描述图画的大致情况，然后要求考生对图画进行适当的阐释(解释、说明和分析)，最后要求考生给出自己的建议、观点、原因等等。一般写三段。

第一段：描述图画

1、As is vividly shown in the picture(如果两个的话用pictures，也可以用drawing，同样的如果两个的话用drawings，如果是图表则用table,两个图表则用 tables)above, 图画的内容。The picture(如果两个的话用pictures，也可以用drawing，同样的如果两个的话用drawings，如果是图表则用table,两个图表则用 tables)tells(注意，如果是前面的图画是复数，则用tell)us that 这个图片的大致反映的意思。

2、Recent years people in 地名(比如中国、北京、美国等等)have witnessed the fact that 描述图片里的现象，And it is very common/usual to see that in recent

years.第二段：解释，说明和分析图片

1、The implied meaning of the picture(注意，同上进行单复数的处理)should be taken into account seriously.First/To begin with, 揭示涵义/原因/结果1，Second/What’s more, 揭示涵义/原因/结果2。Last but not least/Finally, 揭示涵义/愿意/结果3(如果有的话)。And the social problem(如果是现象的话可以用phenomenon)has arisen the great concern/care of our whole society/world/all the people.2、There may/might be three(也可以是两个哦，那就是two啦)factors which contribute to/are responsible for/explain/can make clear the 图片解释的现象。First of all, 原因1。And then the second reason is that 原因2。The last reason，I think，is that 原因3。

第三段：给出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题的办法

1, In my view / point of view(or As for me), We should take some measures as follows to deal with the problems followed in the picture.First, we should 具体的措施1.And then we have to / must 具体的措施2.Only in these ways, can weSolve the problem of 具体的问题.2, It is true that these unique / secial points can / could together remind us that we should take some measures to solve it.采取的措施1和2.Only in this way can we 实现的目标!

必备句型： 1.As is described in the picture...2.The purpose of the picture is to show us that...3.We can deduce form this picture that...4.The picture indicates / conveys the meaning that

5.More and more people have come to realize.6.Now it is commonly held that...but I doubt whether...7As is shown in the picture, we can see clearly the relationship between...and...8.There is much discussion today about...9.Anyone with the least common sense knows that...10.Thanks to.., more and more..11.As more and more people.., much attention should be placed on...12.No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of..., but the common recognition of the necessity of...might be the first step towards change in the right direction.模板一：图画作文

This illustration depicts_________(图画中的人物)Ving,with______________(补充说明).Recently it has become common for people in many walks of life to_____________(进一步阐释)

It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about _______(图画主题), which is ______________(进一步的说明).He seems to be saying

that_______________(给出细节).In my opinion, ___________(个人阐述).This simple picture is a wake up call for ______(所涉群体，如the whole of the human race).Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put an end to _____________(问题所在).One the one hand, we must _________________(建议一).It is clear that the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _________(进一步说明).On the other hand, ________________(建议二)Only in this way can we___________(展望前景).六、书信作文模板

I am extremely pleased to hear from you.And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____.……(正文内容)

I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerelyyours,七、记叙文题型:要求考生写一篇记叙文，描述事件发生的时间、地点、原因、人物及结果，最后对事件进行简单分析，时态一般用一般过去时,分为三个步骤来写：

1.第一段、总结描述,交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点：

开篇句：About _____ O'clock one evening(moring… 等时间)in _______, 扩展句：________.(展开描述一下事件，人物，事件等)

2..第二段、具体描述,具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果起因+经过+结果

3.第三段、对事件的分析,分析句1+分析句2+分析3

八、英文信函题型:要求考生根据提纲写一封英文书信，对这类题型，通常分为5个步骤来写：

时态根据所写的具体内容来确定，写发生在过去的事情就用过去时，现在的就用现在时，将来的打算等用一般将来时)

1.第一段、文章开头：称呼(通常已给出)2.第二段、寒暄语句，引出写信的目的：寒暄句+主题句(注：寒暄句和主题句可以是同一个句子)3.第三段、根据提纲扩展主体段落：主题句+扩展句1+扩展句2+扩展句3.4.第四段、表明自己的观点，并结束书信主体段落,在最后要他谈自己的看法.第五段、寒暄句+落款

2013年高考英语作文万能句子

提出建议（提出个人建议和意见）：

It is high time that we put an end to the（trend.该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …

该是采纳……的建议，并对……的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。

There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of …

毫无疑问，对……问题应予以足够的重视。

Obviously, If we want to do something , it is essential that 显然，如果我们想做某事,重要的是…

Only in this way can we …只有这样，我们才能…… It must be realized that …我们必须意识到……

结尾时作总结的10个万能句型，总结观点或者社会问题，优势劣势以及给出解决办法

1.至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为……

As far as I am concerned，I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.I think that ……

2.总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。

In a word，the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ……Only in this way can ……in the future.3.但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势（好处）。例如，……，而……。然而把这两者相比较，我更倾向于（喜欢）……

But ……and……have heir own advantages.For example，…… while…… Comparing this with that，however，I prefer to……

4.就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为…… Personally,I believe that...Consequently,I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because……

5.随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自己的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。

With the development of society，……So it‘s urgent and necessary to ……If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society，it will be better and better.6.至于我（对我来说，就我而言），我认为……更合理。只有这样，我们才能…… For my part，I think it reasonable to…… Only in this way can you……

7.对我来说，我认为有必要……。原因如下：第一，……； 第二，……；最后……

但同样重要的是……

In my opinion，I think it necessary to……The reasons are as follows.First ……second …… Last but not least，……

8.在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现……。

It is difficult to say whether ……is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of……。however，from a personal point of view find……

9.综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论……

From what has been discussed above，we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that……

10.如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是……

If we can not take useful means，we may not control this trend，and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly，so what we should do is……

(一)段首句

1.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to ____.Some people suggest that ____.2.俗话说(常言道)……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______.It“s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many ca4.现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外(而且)……。

Nowadays，it is common to ______.Many people like ______ because ______.Besides，______.3.任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.4.关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为(说)……，在他们看来，…… People's opinions about __ vary from person to person.Some people say that ___.To them,_____.5.……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.6.……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

_____ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.7.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢?

According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______ while.Obviously，______，but why?

(二)中间段落句

1.相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。

On the contrary，there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time，they say____.2.……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，(也是)非常重要的。首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……

______is necessary and important to our country”s development and construction.First，______.What“s more, _____.Most important of all,______.3.有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。

There are several measures for us to adopt.First, we can______

4.面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……，另一方面，Confronted with______，we should take a series of effective measures to______.For one thing，______For another，______

5.早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。It is high time that something was done about it.For example._____.In addition._____.All these measures will certainly______.6.为什么…?第一个原因是;第二个原因是;第三个原因是,总的来说,的主要原因是由于……

Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______.7.然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。

However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______.8.尽管如此，我相信……更有利。Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous.9.完全同意……这种观点(陈述)，主要理由如:I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.(三)结尾句

1.至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为……

As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.I think that ____.2.总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。

In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future.3.但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于(喜欢)……

But ______and ______have their own advantages.For example, _____, while_____.Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______.4.就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为…… Personally, I believe that_____.Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______.5.随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。

With the development of society, ______.So it”s urgent and necessary to ____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.6.至于我(对我来说，就我而言)，我认为……更合理。只有这样，我们才能…… For my part, I think it reasonable to_____.Only in this way can you _____.7.对我来说，我认为有必要……。原因如下：第一，……;第二，……;最后……但同样重要的是……

In my opinion, I think it necessary to____.The reasons are as follows.First _____.Second ______.Last but not least,______.8.在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现……。

It is difficult to say whether _____is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of______.However, from a personal point of view find______.9.综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论……

From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that____.

第四篇：高中英语教学论文 高考英语作文的考前冲刺训练

高考英语作文的考前冲刺训练

[摘要]本文分析高三学生高考前的英语学习状况和英语作文存在的问题，重点论述教师指导考生备战高考英语的教学策略。通过背记英语范文、限时训练、教师面批的方法，有效地提高考生高考英语作文的卷面分数和写作水平。

[关键词]背诵范文、限时训练、教师面批、学生写作能力的提高

一、调整学生考前的训练策略 新课标指出，英语教学的总体目标是培养学生的语言综合运用能力。写作是语言表达的最高形式，提高写作能力是语言教学追求的最高目标和境界。然而，在听、说、读、写四大技能中，写作一直是最容易被忽略的环节。在高考英语备考中，学生普遍存在这样一个误区：大部分学生的英语学习时间多花在语法单项选择题。因为单选题是客观题，只有唯一的答案，做对了有成功感。做错了费时不多，请教老师或同学，很容易得到满意的答复。但客观题注重考查考生的某个知识点在真实语境中的具体运用，尤其是语法知识点，讲究答案的唯一性，比较机械，无法体会语言的活的灵魂。再讲，高考单选题的分值占全卷的15%，而书面表达却占25%。因此，考生考前的复习一定要调整学习策略，备战好英语书面表达，使该题目完全可能成为学生全卷分数的一个增值点。

二、分析学生习作存在的问题，探索写作前的引导过程

高三毕业班的学生经过第一第二轮的语法专项和综合训练，学生积累了一定量的英语词汇，按理英语写作应该不成问题。然而，教师遇到的现象是‘听到写作学生畏难，改到作文教师犯难。”主要原因是学生的英语习作病句多，汉语式表达，表达不到位，复合句使用不当，个别学生依赖或借助电子辞典，文章全篇使用不常见、不通俗、修辞手法不妥的生词或词组，结尾段不够精悍和达意。结果学生的卷面分值只能大打节扣。因此，指导学生开篇布局十分重要。方法如下：（1）.依据不同的文章体裁，启发提问学生应该采用何种主要时态。例如2005年广东高考作文看图写画，介绍中国经典成语故事守株待兔，其主要的时态是一般过去时。（2）.引导提问学生采用何种人称。例如写日记务必用第一人称。（3）.启发提问学生写作中应该使用哪些关键词、词组、复合句，筛选出学生认为合理的较喜欢的承上启下的词语，例如因果类：because, thanks to,时序类：firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally, 递进类：what’s more, to make the matters worse,并列类：and, as well as, 强调类：especially, 总结类：in short, in a word。该部分的词语，老师编写印发给学生背诵备用。（4）.无论什么体裁的文章，尽量做到分段作文。以写三段文为好。文章的开首句要开门见山，层次分明，说理清楚。文章的结尾段要求考生会写出个人的观点和感悟。

三、强化背诵和听写范文，提高书面语的表达能力。背诵英语范文能培养学生的语感，以形成对英语正确表达方式的认同感，对写作形成潜意识是有益的。中国人常讲：“读书破万卷，下笔如有神。”学习范文的益处可以帮助考生学习文中的用词造句，布局谋篇。为了不占用学生课余太多的时间，教师可以利用早读，每次30分钟。教师预先选印好各种体裁的文章印发给学生。每次早读课，先由教师点拨范文中的难词难句，妙词妙句，亮点和采分点。例如：范文中的中文句子“由于鱼不知饥饱，致使好多鱼因过度进食而死亡。”英文范文译它为“Some of the fish have been killed because they have no sense of being full.”句中“have no sense of”就是亮点和采分点。再如，有篇看图文章要求学生描写市民怎样清除街招，护花，修路等来美化城市。范文用这段话：Our citizens picked up waste paper，took off unsightly posters and weeded the garden.Some workers were busy fixing streetlamps，mending roads，pruning bushes and painting fences aside.句中unsightly posters，prune bushes，weed the garden。均是课外知识，语言是“约定俗成” 1 的。我们写作就需要“入乡随俗”，多积累语言材料，做到厚积而薄发。再如，议论文的结尾，最好能呈现作者的观点和建议。例如，写反对浪费的文章，结尾可用这么一句：“In my opinion，we should call on more and more people to fight against waste.Only through these measures can we reduce waste.一个倒装句足以令评卷老师眼前一亮而留下良好的印象，点评完毕，教师组织全班学生大声地朗读文章，然后各自背诵文章的范文。背诵强化了正确的语言文字的输入，对学生高考写出规范的英语很有效。最后教师给学生听写范文，这一符合认知规律的教学活动环节，帮助学生把已存在脑海里的东西有机地取出，适当地调整，为我所用，使学生有话可说，有东西可写。

四、限时训练，全收全改，点评鼓励。

越临近高考，教师越注意每周一次的堂上作文练习，增加学生的实践经验。教师让学生在规定的20～25分钟内模拟写一篇120～150字间的高考英语作文。这样做的好处是，学生在写作中体会诸如句式结构，词语搭配，提醒学生多留意谓语动词的构成形式。包括其使用的时态，语态，语气等。另外，误用关系代词和成份欠缺也是学生在写作中易犯的一个通病，需时时提防。学生只有通过堂上限时训练，应用范文例句，学会使用过渡词，连接词或其他一些衔接成份，注意首尾呼应，才能用好语言，真正提高英语写作水平。

学生作文完毕，教师要全收全改，改完要给学生一个明确的指示。诸如，文章时态用得对不对，那一句好，那一句欠什么，正确的应怎样表达，鼓励学生尽可能多地运用复杂的语法结构和词汇知识。如：非谓语动词形式，感叹句，介词短语，动词短语，以降低文章的枯燥乏味，增强文章的采分点。文章拥有灵活多样的表达手法，已成为高分作文的一道看点和亮点。最后，教师给每个考生写一两句鼓励的话，以便使师生距离拉近，师生并肩作战。这一做法往往收到非常好的效果，使学生由厌写变得爱写，渴望成功。

综上所述，教师应按照新课程标准的要求，坚持有目的、有计划、有步骤地对学生进行系统的写作训练，让学生进行多种形式和多方面的书面表达练习，以达到学生真正地掌握书面表达的技巧，能用英语表达思想的目的。

经过我的指导教学，学生的写作能力在最后的冲刺阶段明显地呈现出来，许多同学份份刷新，一次次地打破自己原有的记录。我通过探索实践，获得丰富和宝贵的教学经验，我感激我自己的努力，我感恩我的学生给予我欢欣的汇报！

第五篇：高考英语作文万能冲刺必备

写写帮文秘助手(www.xiexiebang.com)之高考英语作文万能模板

冲刺必备

【篇一：邀请信】【篇首句】介绍自己，简要说明活动，并邀请对方。

1.i’m wang ming from yuwen school，the president of the student union.我是来自育文学校的王明，学生会主席。

2.an english speaking contest of our school will be held on august 6.我们学校有一场英语演讲比赛将在8月6号举行。3.there will be a party in my garden on sunday.周日，在我的花园里会举行一场聚会。4.i’d like to invite you to judge it.我想邀请你做它的裁判。

5.i’m writing to invite you to...我写信是邀请你......6.i wonder if you can come to...我想知道你是否能来......【篇中句】介绍活动具体内容，并说明受邀人参加理由。

1.it will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。

2.we will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。3.during the afternoon, we’ll...together.下午，我们会一起......4.remember to take water and lunch with you.记得带上水和午餐。

5.by the way, you may take bus no.322 in front of your apartment and it will take you directly to the club.顺便说一下，你可以乘坐你家公寓前的322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。

6.i know you are a native speaker of english and an english teacher, and i, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest.我知道你的母语是英语，还是一个英语老师。我，代表我们学校，真诚的邀请你来比赛现场。

【篇尾句】期待对方接受邀请，并期待对方尽快回复。

1.will you be available during that time? please contact me at 1234567 at your earliest convenience.那期间你有空吗？请方便时尽快给我打电话1234567。

2.would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation?

请尽快告诉我你能否接受我的邀请好吗？

3.we will feel much honored if you could come.如果你能来，我们会非常荣幸。

4.we are looking forward to your coming.我们期待着你的到来。

5.i am longing to see you soon.我期待着尽早见到你。

【篇二：建议信】【篇首句】说明写信目的。

1.i'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school.such problems are quite normal.perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。

2.i have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to china for ten days next month.perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。

3.i'm writing to you to present what i think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）.我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。

4.you have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn chinese , and i will try to make some suggestions here.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。5.i'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life.here are a few suggestions.很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。

6.i'm very glad to have received your e-mail.now i'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn english well in high school.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。

【篇中句】介绍详情、提出具体建议。1.i'd like to suggest that...我想要建议......2.in my opinion,...在我看来，......3.if i were you, i would...如果我是你，我会......4.you'd better do.../not do...你/不......5.it's necessary for you to read some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes.with more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of chinese history and culture.在你来亲眼看到这些地方之前，你 有必要读一些关于这些地方的书。有了关于这些地方更多的知识，你将会更好的理解中国的历史和文化。6.first of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class.首先，你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。【篇尾句】提出希望采纳建议，并祝福。

1.i hope these suggestions will be of use to you.remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。

2.i hope these suggestions will be of use to you.remember: the man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。

3.best wishes!

（给你）最美好的祝愿！

4.i hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway.i would be more than happy to see improvement.无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。

5.i believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account.whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！

我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。

6.i sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you.if there is more i can do to help, please let me know.我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。

【篇三：口头通知】【篇首句】引起注意。

1.hello, everybody/everyone.2.ladies and gentlemen.3.may i have your attention, please? i have an announcement to make.请注意，好吗？我要通知一件事情。

4.attention, please!i have something important to tell you.请注意！我有重要的事情要告诉你们。（此步句型虽少，但都是精华哦！）【篇中句】主要内容。

1.there will be a party/speech/contest held by the english department in the hall of the library on saturday evening.周六晚上，在图书馆大厅，英语系将会举行一场聚会/演讲/比赛。2.in order to welcome our friends from the united states, the student union will organize a party in the school hall on saturday evening, august 15.为了欢迎我们来自美国的朋友，学生会将会在8月15号星期六晚上组织一场聚会。

3.our school has decided to hold an activity to climb xiangshan hill this sunday.我们学校决定这周六组织去爬香山。

4.it will begin at 5 pm and last about two hours.它将在下午5点开始，持续大约2个小时。

5.the school will arrange several buses to take us there.学校会安排几辆公交车带我们去那里。

6.there will colourful activities then, such as singing, dancing, exchanging gifts with one another and so on.到时会有丰富多彩的活动，比如唱歌、跳舞、互换礼物等等。【篇尾句】要求/邀请参加+注意事项。

1.those who are interested in the activity are welcom.欢迎对此活动感兴趣的人参加。

2.those who want to take part in it please sign up at the student union.想要参加的人请在学生会报名。

3.please come and join in it.everyone is welcom to attend it.请来参加。每个人都是受欢迎的。

4.remember to take your hats and gloves.记得带上你的帽子和手套。

5.remember that we are required hats and water.记得我们被要求带帽子和水。

6.please come on time and don’t be late.请准时到来，不要迟到。

【篇四：申请信】【篇首句】介绍自己，简要说明信息

来源，并提出申请。

1.i'm li hua, from class one, senior two.我是李华，来自高二一班。

2.i have read in the newspaper that a secretary is wanted in your company.我在报纸上看到你们公司在招聘一名秘书。3.i read the announcement of the experience life that you have posted on the internet and i am interested in it.我在网上看到你们发布的体验生活的消息，我对此很感兴趣。

4.i am extremly pleased to see your advertisement for an english tutor（家庭教师/助教）in the newspaper.我很高兴在报纸上看到你们招聘家庭教师/助教的广告。

5.i am writing to apply for the summer camp in your school.我写信是想申请加入你们学校的夏令营。

6.i am writing to tell you that i'm suitable for the job you are advertising.我写信是想告诉你，我适合做你们在广告上刊登的这份工作。【篇中句】突出自己特点，具体说明胜任理由。1.i think i'm qualified for the position.我认为对于这个职位我是有资格的。

2.in the first place, i have strong written and spoken communication skills.首先，我有很好的写作和交流技巧。

3.what's more, i am well acquainted with the western culture.（be acquainted with 熟悉）

而且，我非常熟悉西方文化。

4.last but not the least, i have good personality, and i am independent in life.最后但也是很重要的一点是，我有很好的性格，并且在生活中很独立。5.i think it's of great use to me.for one thing, i can gain some experience for my future job;for another, i can make more friends.我认为它对我是有好处的。一则，我能够为未来的工作获得经验；二则，我可以交到更多的朋友。

6.i am sure i can do my best in the job.我保证在工作中会尽努力。

【篇尾句】请求给予机会，期望尽快回复。

1.i will be much grateful if you can give me the opportunity.如果你能给我这个机会，我会非常感激。2.i hope you can offer me the opportunity.我希望你能提供给我这个机会。

3.i hope i can be accepted as a member of your summer camp.我希望我能够成为你们夏令营的一员。

4.if you need to know more about me, please contact me at 189......如果你需要了解我更多，请给我打电话189......5.i am looking forward to your early reply.期待你的早日恢复。

6.i am looking forward to hearing from you soon.期待早日收到你的来信。

【篇五：投诉信】【篇首句】介绍自己，说明写作目的：

投诉。

1.i’m li hua.i feel bad to trouble you but i’m afraid that i have to make a complaint about your restaurant.我是李华。很不想给你添麻烦。但是，恐怕我不得不对你们餐馆进行投诉。

2.i’m writing to you to complain about...我写信是投诉......3.i want to express my dissatisfaction about the woolen scarf i bought from your company.我想要表达我对从你们公司买的羊毛围巾的不满。【篇中句】说明投诉问题、后果，并提出合理建议。

1.in the first place, the food is too salty and the water isn't served in time.in addition, the music you broadcast is too noisy.under these circumstances, i find it hard to sit here having dinner quietly.首先，食物太咸，水没有及时端上来。而且，你们播放的音乐太吵了。在这样的环境下，我很难安静的坐在这里吃饭。

2.while i was on holiday in hong kong about a week ago, i bought a green shirt for 300 hk dollars in your shop, but there seems to be something wrong with it.when it's washed, it fades in colour.now i can't wear it.大概一周前我在香港度假的时候，我在你们店里花300港元买了一件绿色衬衫，但是看上去似乎有一些状况。当被洗的时候，它会掉色。现在，我不能穿了。

3.it arrived on time the day before yesterday.but when i checked it, i found a hole in the middle.i was astonished because the hole was obvious and i didn't think you should neglect this deficiency（缺陷）.它是前天按时到的。但是当我检查时，我发现中间有个洞。我很震惊，因为这个洞和明显，我认为你们不应该忽略这个缺陷。4.i have dialed your service number for several times but it was always busy.我多次拨打你们的服务电话，但它总是占线。5.now this problem keeps worrying me.现在这个问题一直在困扰我。

6.to improve the situation, you can take the following measures.为了改善状况，你们可以采取下面的措施。

【篇尾句】希望给予考虑，并期待对方尽快回复。1.thanks for your consideration.感谢你的考虑。

2.i hope you will give due attention to this matter.我希望你给予此事应有的重视。

3.i believe you will take my complaint seriously.我相信你会认真考虑我的投诉。

4.i’ll appreciate it if my demand is met.如果我的要求被满足，我会非常感激。5.i’m looking forward to your early reply.期待着你早日答复。

【篇六： 道歉信】1.道歉信结构

道歉信通常包括三部分内容：1.表示歉意，道歉的原由；2.出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施；3.请求原谅。语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增进彼此的感情。2.道歉信模板 dear ______，①i am truly sorry that ______（道歉的原因）.②the reason is that ______（介绍原因）.③once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.④hope you can accept my appologies and understand my situation.yours sincerely,li ming

3.道歉信中开头段常用句式和套话

i am writing this letter to express my regret… 我写这封信是想表达我的遗憾......i am writing to apologize for… 我写信是为......道歉。

i would like to give you my apology for… 我想为......向你道歉。i am very sorry to say that… 我很抱歉......i must apologize about(not)doing sth… 对于做了/没做......，我必须道歉。

please accept my sincere apology for… 请接受我对于......的真诚道歉。i am writing to say sorry for… 写信是想对......说抱歉。i am terribly sorry, but… 我很抱歉，但是......4.道歉信中结尾段常用句式和套话

once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.我对于所造成的任何不便再次道歉。please allow me to say sorry again.请允许我再一次说抱歉。

hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.希望你们能够接受我的道歉，理解我的处境。

i sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.我真诚的希望你能够站在我的位置想一想，并且接受我的道歉。