第一篇：高三复习短文改错1+答案
短文改错专练
（一）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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March 29th, Dear Diary, I’m writing this at my room.It’s almost midnight and I have to getting up early tomorrow, but I can’t sleep.I’m thinking about my future!Every day, my parents asks me, “What do you want to be when you grow?” The problem is: I don’t know!My mom always says, “Be a doctor!” And she doesn’t understand — to be a doctor, you have to study for a long, long time and that’s not her idea of fun.Also I’m really bad at biology at the school.My dad says, “Be a pilot!” Is he crazy? He knew I hate flying!Now I’m getting tiring, so I’m going to bed.I can think about my future in bed.I get my best ideas when I’m lain down.B
I have known my friend Rebecca for a long time.We firstly met at a friend’s birthday party five years before.We found out that we both liked singing and dancing, so I invited Rebecca over to my place.We listened to the music together and soon became best friends.Three years ago, Rebecca’s parents invited me go on holiday with them.It is great.We spent three wonderful weeks in a little cottage.Rebecca and I loved walking along the beautifully beach.We took a lot of photos and had a lot of funs.Last year, Rebecca’s father changed her job, and they moved to other town.Since then we haven’t seen each other very much, but we’ve talked in the phone and we’ve written emails to each other.C
Dear Joe, How are you? Thanks to your post — good to know when you’re OK.I’ve got news too.I’m going on holiday next weeks with my brother and Anna, a friend from school.We’re going to stay on a farm with four days!We’re going to look after the animals and doing some horse-riding.I’m sure I’ll love it.You know how crazy I am about the animals!I want to learn all about the cows or the horses.I hope I will have some times to go walking in the hills, too.Well, right now I’m going to finish homework — lots to do before the holiday!I’ll write to you when I get back to telling you about my holiday.Yours, Nadia
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People had always been interested in bees.This interest may have begun with the honey what bees make.In the fact, it has been found that people have been eating honey for thousand of years.In the more recently past, people were interested in the way bees made honey.They admired the way bees seemed to working so hard.Some languages even developed expressions about people working like bees.In English, for example, we talk with a “busy bee”.Now scientists has a new reason to be interested in bees.They have discovered that bees able to communicate with each other.Research has revealed some surprised facts about this, but there are still many mysteries.E
Yesterday afternoon, I took the No.6 bus to go home.It was crowded on the bus, and I had listened to music by my earphones.Suddenly I saw the name of the bus stop that I should get off, so I got off the bus in hurry.When I arrived home, I realized that I had left my bag on the bus.My ID card and ten books were in the bag.I was worried and eager to finding it, so I went to the bus companies for help.Fortunate, at the Lost and Found, I see my bag.I wanted to thank the person who had found my bag, and the staff there said the person hadn’t left his name.How a good man!
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I read an interested piece of news on a newspaper today.According to Professor Richard Wiseman, only less than a quarter of the British achieved their New Year goals because they do it in the wrong way.He studied 700 volunteers who made a wide ranges of New Year goals, including quitting smoking, losing the weight, or gaining a qualification.Just 22 percent of the participants managed to meeting their goals or described their progress like “very successful.” The reason so much failed was that they took the wrong approach and led by self-help books in the wrong way.They tended to spend a lot of time on thinking about the “bad things” what would happen if they did not achieve their goals instead of taking action.G
Last weekends, I went shopping by myself.It was a sunny day and I feel very happy.When I had bought anything I needed, I went to the bus stop to take a bus.Unfortunately, there were too much people at the bus stop.Then it was my turn to get on, there was no room.I had to wait the next bus.Suddenly, it started to rain.I had no choice but to call a taxi.Half way through the journey, the taxi was broke down.I was filled with angry when I saw an emptier bus go by.Finally, I decided to walk home in a rain.What an unlucky day!
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My name is Li Hua and I wanted to be class monitor.I am responsible, sociable, or easy-going.I enjoy serving others.Additionally, I have vary interests.I love singing and playing the drums as well soccer.I am also a good listener and be always open to different opinions.I am confident that I can do the job good.Being a student myself, firstly, I will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our classes can improve their studies.For those students who is falling behind, I will find ways to help them to catch up.Secondly, I will serve as a bridge among teachers and students.Finally, I will arrange parties so we can relax.I believe I am the right person to this post.答案
1....at my room.2....have to getting...3....my parents asks...4....when you grow?” 5.And she doesn’t...6....not her idea of...7....at the school.8.He knew I hate...9....I’m getting tiring...10....I’m lain down.1.We firstly met...2....five years before.3....to the music...4....go on holiday...5.It is great.6....beautifully beach.7....a lot of funs.8....changed her job...9....to other town.10....in the phone...A
at → in getting → get asks → ask
grow后加up And → But her → my 去掉the knew → knows
tiring → tired
lain → lying
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firstly → first before → ago 去掉the go前加to is → was
beautifully → beautiful funs → fun her → his
other → another in → on / over
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1.Thanks to your...to → for
2....to know when...when → that或去掉when 3....next weeks with...weeks → week 4....with four days!with → for 5....and doing some...doing → do 6....about the animals!7....or the horses.8....have some times...9....finish homework...10....to telling you...1.People had always...2....what bees make.3.In the fact...4....thousand of years.5....recently past...6....working so hard.7....we talk with...8....has a new reason...9....bees able to...10....surprised facts...1....I had listened...2....by my earphones.3....that I should...4....bus in hurry.5....to finding it...6....the bus companies...7.Fortunate, at the...去掉the or → and
times → time
homework前加my
telling → tell
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had → have what → that / which
去掉the thousand → thousands recently → recent
working → work
with → about
has → have
able前加are
surprised → surprising
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去掉had by → with
that → where
hurry前加a
finding → find companies → company
Fortunate → Fortunately
8....I see my bag.see → saw 9....and the staff...and → but 10.How a good man!
How → What
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1....an interested piece...interested → interesting 2....they do it in...do → did 3....a wide ranges...ranges → range 4....losing the weight...去掉the 5....managed to meeting...meeting → meet 6....like “very successful.” like → as
7....so much failed...much → many 8....and led by...led前加were 9....time on thinking...on → in或去掉on 10....what would happen...what → that
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1.Last weekends...weekends → weekend 2....I feel very happy.feel → felt 3....anything I needed...anything → everything 4....too much people...much → many 5.Then it was my...Then → When 6....wait the next bus.the前加for 7....was broke down.去掉was 8....filled with angry...angry → anger 9....an emptier bus...emptier → empty 10....in a rain.a → the
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1....I wanted to be...wanted → want 2....or easy-going.or → and 3....have vary interests.vary → varied 4....as well soccer.soccer前加as 5....be always open...去掉be 6....do the job good.good → well 7....in our classes...classes → class 8....who is falling...is → are 9....among teachers...among → between 10....to this post.to → for
短文改错专练
（二）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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Dear Sarah, I’m writing because I want to apologize to what I did last week.I’m really sorry.I know we said 8:30, and I would’ve gotten here on time if everything hadn’t gone wrongly.I was late because my watch broke and I didn’t know what the time it was.So you see, I would’ve arrived on time if my watch hadn’t broken.Then I have to walk because I’d missed the bus.And then I fell over and my trousers got dirty, so I had to go home and get changing.Then I decided to catch another buses, but it was too late.I would have phoned you and my brother had taken my mobile phone.Anyway, I hope you aren’t too angrier with me.Hope to hear you soon.Yours，Jack
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Today my classmate and I went to a farm for a trip.I get up at six o’clock and we set off by bus.On the bus, some of us sang, and some of us talked.We all had good time.Two hours late, we arrived at the gate of the farm, that the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome.After we were shown around the big farm, they began to plant trees.It was really a good way to getting close to nature and protect the environment at the same time.Next, we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat on the open air.Finally, we went home at half past four.Although all of us was tired, our trip was really very more unforgettable.C
Both my father and mother has been wanting me to study abroad.They think that it’s natural to master a foreign language in an English-speaking country and that studying abroad at early age will enable me to be dependent.Moreover, it will be easier to me to gain advanced knowledge of technology, that will prepare me for a brighter future.Moreover, my good friend, Zhang Hua doesn’t agree with them.He thought my English is too limited to communicate with foreigners.Besides, the cost is too much for his family.In my opinions, I should continue to study in China.As long as I study hard at now, I’ll make great achievements in the future.D
Advertising informs consumers about newer products available on the market.It gives us information with everything from shampoo to toothpaste to computers and cars.But there is one serious problems with this.The information are actually very often misinformation.It tells us the products’ benefits but hides its disadvantages.Advertising not only leads us to buying things that we don’t need and can’t afford, but it confuses our sense reality.“Zoom toothpaste prevents bad teeth and gives you the white teeth!” the advertisement tells us.And it doesn’t tell us the complete truth that a health diet and a good toothbrush will have the same effect.E
My grandfather had had enough of his cat.He was tired of her scratching all the furnitures and made a mess.So he gave her to a friend, who lived on the other side of town.He told his friends that he was getting so old to look after her.A week later, in a very cold winter day, my grandfather returned home from shopping and surprised to see the cat on his doorstep.My grandfather was moved by the fact that his pet had found his way back from the other side of town in such a cold weather.He took the cat outside and gave her lots of loving attention.He decided he will never give her away again.F
Bedouin, the Arab people who live in the desert, living in a traditional society.This means they live on much the same way as their ancestors did.People who live in traditional societies has strong ties to the past.Customs and beliefs have changed very slower.They fear that when changes will make their lives worse rather than better.Values are passing on with little changes from one generation to the next.Yet changes do take place.All cultures change, but they change much quickly at some periods than at other.In very recent years, changes have taken place very quickly everywhere, including deserts of Southwest Asia and North Africa.G
My uncle and aunt come home one evening and discovered huge hole in their roof.They also found that their dog was dead and their furniture were covered in horrible-smelling matter.Upset by which they saw, they phoned the police.After the police looked into the problem, they were told what had happened to.It seemed that the container holding the wastes from the toilets on a passing plane had burst openly.The contents froze in the atmosphere as it fell towards the ground.Then the resulting block of ice crashed through the roof and broke into piece, killing the dog after melting in their house.H
Taking parts in recreation activities help us keep fit.There are various kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music, watching TV, playing chess, or going to cinema.But I think we’d better to have more outdoor activities.As students, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting tired.But it’s a good idea to play basketball, football, table tennis, go swimming, do some runnings, or even go for a picnic.Our brains also need changes to make it smart and active.In a word, exercise is good for the health.答案
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1....apologize to what...to → for 2....gotten here on...here → there
3....gone wrongly.wrongly → wrong 4....what the time...去掉the 5....I have to...have → had 6....get changing.changing → changed 7....another buses...buses → bus 8....and my brother...and → but 9....too angrier with...angrier → angry 10.Hope to hear you...you前加from
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1....my classmate and...classmate → classmates 2.I get up at...get → got 3....had good time...good前加a 4.Two hours late...late → later 5....that the farmers...that → where 6....they began to plant...they → we 7....to getting close to...getting → get 8....on the open air.on → in 9....all of us was...was → were 10....more unforgettable.去掉more
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1....mother has...has → have 2....at early age...early前加an 3....to be dependent.dependent → independent 4....be easier to me...to → for 5....that will prepare...that → which 6.Moreover, my good...Moreover → However 7.He thought my...thought → thinks 8....for his family.his → my 9.In my opinions...opinions → opinion 10....hard at now...去掉at
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1....about newer products...newer → new 2....with everything...with → on / about 3....serious problems...problems → problem 4....are actually very...are → is 5....its disadvantages.its → their 6....buying things...buying → buy 7....sense reality.reality前加of 8....the white teeth!”
去掉the 9.And it doesn’t...And → But 10....a health diet and...health → healthy
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1....all the funitures...furnitures → furniture 2....made a mess.made → making 3.He told his friends...friends → friend 4....so old to look...so → too 5....in a very cold...in → on 6....and surprised to...surprised前加was 7....found his way...his → her 8....such a cold weather.去掉a 9....the cat outside...10....he will never...1....living in a...2....live on much...3....has strong ties to...4....changed very slower.5....when changes will...6.Values are passing...7....with little changes...8....much quickly at...9....than at other.10....including deserts...1....aunt come home...2....discovered huge...3....were covered...4....which they saw...5....had happened to.6....holding the wastes...7....had burst openly.8....it fell towards...9....broke into piece...10....after melting in...outside → inside
will → would
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living → live
on → in
has → have slower → slowly
去掉when passing → passed
little → few
much → more或quickly前加more
other → others deserts前加the
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come → came huge前加a were → was which → what 去掉to wastes → waste openly → open
it → they
piece → pieces
after → before
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1.Taking parts in...parts → part 2....help us keep...help → helps 3....kinds of activity...activity → activities 4....going to cinema.cinema前加the 5....better to have...去掉to 6....sit too longer...longer → long 7....brains getting...getting → get 8.But it’s a good...But → So 9....some runnings...runnings → running 10....make it smart...it → them
短文改错专练
（三）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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Dear Sandra, You’ll never guess where I’m writing this email.A cave!You know we’re on holidays in Spain.Well, we spend a few days in Barcelona first.We had a good time there, though one day I didn’t feel very good.I think I ate too much ice cream the day before.Anyway, when I left Barcelona, we came to spend a few days in Granada.However, we couldn’t get a hotel — too many tourists and not enough bed!Then the hotel owner said, “Why don’t try the cave hotels?” We thought he were joking.Living in caves? But there we are and it’s wonderful.We’re enjoying it much that we don’t know when we’re going to leave.We’re never going to have enough time to explore for everything.Take care!
Ben
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My uncle buys a satellite dish, which is a large round piece of metal that receives satellite television.He decided to set up himself.He climbed up the ladder and attached the dish with the side of his houses.After he finishing, he and my aunt relaxed for the evening in front of the TV.The next day was very much hot, and they decided to stay at home and watch TV.That afternoon they heard lots of shouting outside.When they went outside, they saw that the house opposite were on fire.Fortunately, the fire was putting out.It turned out that the fire had started because my uncle’s satellite dish had been concentrating the sun’s rays on the curtains of her neighbor’s house but had caused the fire.C
Christmas is supposed to be a time express our love and goodwill towards others.It is supposed to be a time which we perform acts of kindness for people less fortunate to ourselves.But do we think of the other people when we sat down to our Christmas dinner? Of course not — we’re too busy eating those delicious foods related with Christmas.We are too busy wondering that the presents we gave were as nice or better than the one we received.They forget to think of the sick and the homeless.The whole idea of Christmas has complete changed.What a shame!
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A thief broke into our house and filled his bag by our possessions when he suddenly feeling a pair of eyes on him.Looking up, he sees an eagle staring at him with cold, merciless eyes.At first the man was too frightening to move, but after ten minute he tried moving quietly towards the door.Therefore, the eyes just followed him and he couldn’t move.Eventually, my parents returned to and found the thief in our house.When my father turned the light, the thief could see that the eagle was just a toy.But it was too late and she was arrested.My father said that the toy eagle were better than any watchdog.E
Nowadays more and more students were found cheating in exams.Some copy from each other;some copy from their text books, reference books or prepared note;others use modern communication tool such as mobile phones.Cheating in exams will cause some worse effects.For one thing, it will result unfair competition and destroy the creativity of bright students.For another, students who often cheats in exams will develop bad habits and won’t be able to meet the needs of society in the future.So how can cheating in exams be stopped? On my opinion, severe punishments should be put into the effect to prevent students from cheating.At the same time, great efforts should be made to make students understood what kind of person society needs or try to build up their honesty.F
Dear Jack, I’m glad to learn that you will come Beijing to learn about Chinese culture as an exchange student.At the moment, I am studying English in my school but I always get better grades in my class.I’m good at the spoken English, so I’m sure I will communicate with you frequent.Beside, my parents are open and kind and is friends with many of my classmates.I believe you will be one of their friend too.Therefore, I invite you to live in my home during you stay in Beijing.I’m willing to helping you as much as I can.Best wishes!
Yours，Li Hua
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My friend Jake is eighteen years old and lives in a small village, not far with the city of Nottingham.He grew up in this village, so he knows everyone here.But he feels boring in the village.At the moment, he travels Nottingham every day to the shop where he works.This is a bus at 7:30 in the morning and the latest bus back in the evening is at 5:30.From the September, however, he’s going to stay in Nottingham with his aunt and uncle when his cousin join the Navy.He can use his cousin’s room.He’s really looking forward to live in Nottingham.He’ll be able to go out with his friends in the evening and he doesn’t have to get up earlier in the morning to catch the bus.H
Last night, our neighbor visited my family and complained for the noise from our home at night.We feel very sorry to cause so much trouble.I explained why my parents fixed our kitchen at night because we worked all day and only came back home in the evening.What’s more, they fixed the kitchen by themselves because the high cost of workers.Since my parents are not professional, so it took them a long time to fix it.Considering the noise and trouble the neighbor were having, my parents decided to hire some workers to fix our kitchens on the weekend.We promised we would finish the work as soon as possibly.At last, we expressed our shame again and the neighbor forgiving us.答案
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1....on holidays in...holidays → holiday 2....we spend a few...spend → spent 3....feel very good.good → well 4....when I left...I → we 5....not enough bed!
bed → beds
6.“Why don’t try...don’t → not或try前加you 7....he were joking.were → was 8.But there we are...there → here 9....it much that...much前加so 10....explore for everything.去掉for 1.My uncle buys...2....to set up...3....with the side of...4....of his houses.5.After he finishing...6....very much hot...7....were on fire.8....was putting out.9....her neighbor’s...10....but had caused...1....express our love...2....which we perform...3....less fortunate to...4....the other people...5....we sat down to...6....related with...7....that the presents...8....the one we...9.They forget to...10....has complete...1....his bag by...B
buys → bought up前加it with → to houses → house finishing → finished 去掉much were → was putting → put her → his but → and
C
express前加to
which → when to → than
去掉the sat → sit
with → to that → whether / if one → ones
They → We
complete → completely
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by → with
2....feeling a pair...feeling → felt 3....he sees an eagle...sees → saw
4....frightening to move...frightening → frightened 5....after ten minute...minute → minutes 6.Therefore, the eyes...Therefore → However 7....parents returned to...去掉to 8....turned the light...the前加on或light后加on 9....she was arrested.she → he 10....eagle were better...were → was
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1....were found cheating...were → are 2....or prepared note...note → notes 3....communication tool...tool → tools 4....some worse effects.worse → bad 5....will result unfair...unfair前加in 6....cheats in exams...cheats → cheat 7.On my opinion...On → In 8....put into the effect...去掉the 9....understood what kind...understood → understand 10....or try to build...or → and
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1....come Beijing to...Beijing前加to 2....but I always get...but → and 3....better grades in...better → good 4....the spoken...去掉the 5....with you frequent.frequent → frequently 6.Beside, my...Beside → Besides 7....and is friends...is → are 8....of their friend...friend → friends 9....during you stay...you → your 10....willing to helping...helping → help
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1....not far with...with → from 2....he feels boring...boring → bored
3....travels Nottingham...Nottingham前加to或into 4.This is a bus...This → There 5....the latest bus...6....the September...7....his cousin join...8....to live in...9....he doesn’t have...10....get up earlier...1....complained for...2.We feel very sorry...3....explained why my...4....we worked all day...5....because the high...6....so it took them...7....were having...8....fix our kitchens...9....as soon as possibly.10....forgiving us.latest → last 去掉the
join → joins
live → living doesn’t → won’t earlier → early
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for → about / at
feel → felt
why → that
we → they
the前加of
去掉so were → was
kitchens → kitchen
possibly → possible forgiving → forgave
第二篇：短文改错
短文改错
（一）I am interested at swimming very much.At first, I went swimming just to keep health.Now my dream was to swim for my country in the Olympics.Though practicing in the pool is very bored, but I still work very hard in order to realize my dream.Because my hard work, I have already come first in much important competitions.In the competitions, I’ve made lot of friends and we’re very close.It’s much easier to have friends which are swimmers because they also have to get up early to practice like you and they understand this kind of life.短文改错
（二）One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later.Tony saw parents.Mom said,” How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.短文改错
（三）Last summer vacation, I went on a school trip with mine classmates.We visited a farm in a countryside.We took a bus for a while, and then we walked here.We saw a lot of different kinds trees and villages along the way.Some farmers were worked hard in the farm when we arrived.One of the farmer showed us around, introducing differently crops to us.We fed chickens, picked some green apples and took up many beautiful photos.It was really interesting and at the same time, I learned a lot about farming.What an excited school trip!
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（四）I’ve been playing baseball for six year and I’m the only girl on an all-boys baseball team.Our strict coach wants us do our best when we are playing.So it’s not always about winning.He also tells us to just smile and enjoyed ourselves.I take advice he gives me and bring them to my game.Some people say girls can’t play baseball.Hear that doesn’t get me mad.Instead, it makes me play more harder.I want to be knew for being a good player, not just for being the only girl on the team.If you’re a girl who want to play ball, just play you heart out!
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（五）My uncle drove his car meet his friends.When he found there was still some time leaving before the train had arrived, he wanted to take a short sleep.He was falling sleep when a woman came and asked him the time.He opened his eye and answered, “Half past eight.” With a “Thank you!” a woman left.On a short while this happened again.So my uncle wrote “I don’t know the time” on a piece of paper and put them on the window of the car.A few minutes late, an old man came and woke him up, “Hi, young man.I can tell you that time it is.It’s nine o’clock now.”
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（六）When I began my senior high school years, I had difficulty to learning English.I dared not speak English in the public because of my poor pronounce.I could not get high marks, but I always used bad grammar.Afraid of be laughed at, I never put up my hand answer questions in class.When my English teacher Miss Li learned about this, she encouraged me and lend me a hand, that helped improve my English.With her help, I became interest in English and finally got high marks.Miss Li, like a shining star, shines on her path to success.短文改错
（七）Dear Tim, How time flies!It has been a month since you go to America.What is everything going? Next weekend I will take part in a national English speaking competition to be holding in Shanghai.It will be a good chance to improve your English and make friends with students from other part of China.But right now I’m not sure that I can remember all the words for a competition.Anyway, I will hope I can get a good result.I am looking forward seeing you again and hope we can have a true great time then.Yours, Li Hua
短文改错
（八）As a service dog, Sandy’s job is help manage a medical condition I have.My condition can be dangerously.When something bad happen, Sandy will tell my parents immediately.Of course, I help take care of Sandy, too.I feed him, walk him, but even take him just about everywhere I go.If I don’t bring Sandy to me, he will get upset.Once he stays with my grandparents for a few hours while my parents and I went to the beach.Sandy was upset in the whole time.He never stopped look for me.When I got home, he was such happy that he rushed to me.I love his dog very much.4
第三篇：短文改错
短文改错
高考英语短文改错题要求考生判断一篇短文中十行(自1995年以来)文字是否有错，如果有错误就将其改正。
此题型旨在测试考生发现、判断并改正短文中错误的能力，以及考查考生准确运用词法、句法、行文逻辑等的综合能力。
本题型侧重考查考生的词汇和语法基础知识，但并不是单纯的知识检测，而是考查考生在阅读的过程中运用语法知识解决实际问题的能力。
纵观近几年高考短文改错，不难发现其设题方式比较固定：正确为1个，多词或缺词共计3个，错词为6个，其比例为1：3:6。
下面引用近几年的高考题来分析一下此题的三种错误类型：多词、缺词和错词。
一、多词
1.多冠词
(l)Suddenly,I caught a sight of my English teacherin the crowd.【解析lsight是不可数名词，且catch sight of是固定搭配，意为“看见”。
(2)For e】cample, when l was a child, the rain was amystery.【解析】，am为不可数名词，泛指时前面不用冠词。
【知识拓宽】
(1)不可数名词表示泛指时不用冠词。
Modern people know more about the health, havebetter food，and„
(2)与by连用的交通工具及air，land，sea等名词前不用冠词。
by bike骑自行车，by sea由海路，乘船
(3)有些名词(如school，class，hospital，church，prison，bed，table，town等)与相应介词连用，表示进行和这些词直接相关的活动时，前不用冠词。
___ _去上学，_______坐牢，_______在吃饭
(4)球类运动、棋类游戏前，不用冠词。
___ _打篮球，_______下棋
(5)mo。t副词作“非常”解时，前面不用定冠词the。
She is most pretty.她非常漂亮。
(6)。或though引导让步状语从句，构成倒装结构，前置的单数名词前不用任何冠词。
Child as he is,he knows a lot.虽然他只是孩子，知道的却很多。
2.多介词
(l)ln fact,they are planning to visit China in next yeaL
(2)We practice for three times every week..(3)So l'm really sorry that l won't be able to come inthis time.【解析】以上三例都是作时间状语的名词短语前多了介词。
(4)„but we do not seem to get much time to talkabout together.【解析】talk about意为“谈到„„”，是及物动词短语，后须接介词宾语，但根据本句语境，此处不必接宾语，故去掉about。
【知识拓宽】
(1)last night, next week, this year, one day,threetimes等名词词组直接充当时间状语，前面不用介词。
(2)有些动词在汉语中是不及物动词，在英语中却是及物动词，由于受汉语影响，可能多一个介词。
serve for the people, follow after the teacher, marrywith her,make him as our monitor,play with Tom in amatch(画线介词多余)
(3)有些表示地点的副词，其意义中已包含to，如果再加to，则多余。
on one's way to there, return to home, go to upstairs(画线介词均多余)
(4)有些副词或介词词组后加另一个介词，构成复合介词，若后面没有介词宾语，介词则多余。同样，有些动词短语是“动词十介词”结构，若后面没有介词宾语，介词则多余。
①If you won’t go，I'll go instead of.(画线介词多余)
②She listened to but heard nothing(画线介词多余)
(5)有些动词或形容词后接名词或代词时，须加一个介词，但接从句时，必须去掉介词。
①l never knew about a ride down a river could be soexciting.(画线介词多余)
②I am sorry for that he won't come(画线介词多余)
3.词义重叠
(1)Whenever I see them l will often think of myEnglish teacher.【解析】在whenever l see them这一时间状语从句后再用often显得重复，应去掉。
(2)1'11 spend all the whole weekend reading andpreparing for it.【解析】the whole weekend意为“整个周末”，再加上all，词义重叠。
【知识拓宽】
(1)有些词受汉语影响，多一副词或介词，造成词义重叠。
return back回来，repeat again重复，flee away逃走，enter into进入，blue color蓝色，stop down停下来，raiseup举起来，unpack open打开
(2)定语从句中的一个名词，已由关系代词取代，再用其替代词是多余的。
I do remember you having apologized to the old lady Imet her last week
(3)单音节的形容词或副词比较等级加-er.-est，多音节加more、most，但二者不能同时重叠使用。
As a result, people in the modern world generally livemuch more longer than people in the past.4.出现冗言现象
(l)Today l visited the Smiths-my first time visit toan American family.【解析】本句中的first修饰visit，visit此处为名词，意为“我的第一次访问”，time多余。
(2)Now I can't watch much television,but„【解析】根据上下文，此处应是“我根本不能看电视”，因此受汉语影响，多了much，造成冗言。
【知识拓宽】
(1)状语从句与主句之间多一并列连词。
①Though he tried his best, but he failed.②The more he has, and the more he wants.(2)充当状语的介词短语与主句之间多一关系代词或关系副词。
①In the last five years that they have climbed churches一②„in other places where you are limited to a certainnumber...(3)充当状语的分词与主句之间多一并列连词。
Sitting down,and he began to work.(4)从属连词后多一个that。
She was absent from the meeting because that she was ilL(5)复合宾语前多一个that。
I found that her lying on the ground.5.固定搭配中多词
(1)I was used to watch it every night.【解析】此处属于used to do与be used to两个固定搭配的误用，应去掉was，取“过去常常”之意。
(2)„in any other words,Iam only a child.【解析lin other words为固定搭配，意为“换句话说”，而any other意为“任何别的„„”，与本文上下文不符。
6.行文逻辑上多词First, let me tell you something more about myself.【解析】由first可知是刚开始向别人讲述自己的故事，故只能说something，而不能加more。
二、缺词
1.名词前缺限定词
(1)Each player must obey^captain, who is theleader of the team.the【解析】此处应加上the，特指“球队的队长”。
(2)The day before the speech contest^Englishteacher talked to me.my【解析】根据上下文分析，此处English teacher是有所指的，指的是“我的”英语老师，故加上my，表达一个更确切的概念。
(3)I'1I take this chance to wish you^ wonderful timeon your birthday.a【解析lwish sb.awonderful time为固定搭配，意为“祝某人玩得愉快”。
【知识拓宽】
(1)在“so+形容词十可数名词单数”结构中，名词前不能缺a或an。
This is so good a book that we will buy it.=This is such a good book that we will buy it.(2)little,few表示肯定时，前面不能缺a，意为“一些”。
如a little water，但是“每隔几分钟”应说成every fewminutesa
(3)有些不可数名词(如metal, beauty, iron, tea,coffee, ice, youth, pleasure, success, failure等)，表示“一种”“一个“一份”时，应加上a或an。
Work is a pleasure to me.(4)“the+姓氏复数”表示一家人时，the不能省。
The Browns like to go skating.(5)表示“两者之中比较„„的一个”时，比较级前应加the。
He is the taller of the two boys.(6)在句中可数名词不可单独使用，前面应有限定词，如his,that,Tom's,the,a等。
When we walked to the car, Bill smiled and shook^head.his2.缺动词不定式符号to(1)I'd like very much^come but I have anexamination on Monday morning.to【解析】like后面不能直接加动词，需加to，构成固定搭配“would like to do”，意为“想做„„”。
(2)一.and will do all they can^ make sure that l geta good education to【解析】不定式作目的状语，不定式符号to不可省。
【知识拓宽】
(1)不定式作后置定语，不定式符号to不能省。
But then there are always more mysteriesAlook into:_____to
(2)-般说来，两个实义动词不能并列使用，中间常用to连接。
①7Ihe World Health()rganization and other organizationsare workingAimprove health all over the world_____to
②i had always wantedA retum to the village _____to
(3)feel, hear, let, make,have, see, notice, watch,ob。rv。等动词变成被动结构时，充当主语补足语的不定式不能省去to。
Little Tom was made to do heavy work
(4)为了避免重复前面的动词，后面的不定式常常省略，但要保留不定式符号to。
We wanted to go to the lecture, but we weren't able to
3.缺系动词
(l)neyA eager to Imow everything about China：.'were【解析】eager为形容词，必须加系动词构成系表结构。
(2)What^ your favourite sport?IS【解析】本句缺谓语动词，应加is。
(3)I'd like to^ your pen-friend, and.be/become【解析】本句考查I'd like to do结构，根据上下文，必须加上系动词。
【知识拓宽】
(1)由于受汉语语法规则的影响，有些形容词作表语时，常常缺少系动词。
She is afraid of her boss.(2)在被动结构中，由于缺少助动词，变成了主动语态，造成错误。
„and let you know when the book you want has^returned and is ready for you to pick up.been4.缺介词(l)We must keep in mind that we play for the teaminstead^ ourselves._____ of【解析linstead of为固定短语，意为“而非，而不是”，后接宾语。
(2)„but the others spent a lotA time arguing_____of【解析la lot of是固定习语，意为“许多，大量”，后加宾语。
【知识拓宽】
改错题对介词的考查，重点是一些固定搭配，再如：
WhenI have free timeI go^along walk..for，因此，同学们在学习和复习中应牢记一些固定搭配。
5.缺连词In one class,l learned^ it rained.why【解析】本句因缺连词而造成句子成分残缺，只有加上why，句子的意义才完整。
【知识拓宽】
(1)在汉语中，分句与分句之间往往不用连词，但在英语中却不行。
It began to rain,^ they had to stop working.and
(2)受母语影响，几个同类词并列连用时，它们之间往往缺一连词。
CDi told Mother, Father, Sister,^ all my friends herewhat a great time I had.and②He looked inside but saw nothing.(3)that引导的主语从句置于句首时，that常常不能省。
That light travels in straight line is known to all.(4)引导同位语从句的连词that，when等常不可省。
(DThe doctors came to the conclusion that the patientwas suffering from cancer.②i have no idea when he will return(5)在even if，even though，as if'as though等短语中，第二个连词不能少。
He walks as if/though he were drunk
三、错词
1.可数名词单复数误用
(l)They were eager to know everything about Chinaand asked me lots of question
(2)We study quite a few subject, such as maths,Chinese, English and physics.(3)We practise three times every week and oftenwatch football match on TV together.(4)She said that she and my schoolmate' all.wishedme success,.(5)„so that l'11 get good marks in all my subject.___
(6)„and many happy return of the day_____
(7)I used to love science class-all of them-biology,chemistry, geography, physics.【知识拓宽】
对名词单复数的考查是高考的热点之一，几乎每年考查一处。因此，为了对名词错误判断准确，应该：
(1)弄清名词是可数名词还是不可数名词。
We stopped to rest for a while and to drink somewaters from a stream water
(2)掌握好可数名词复数的变化规则。
There are branch library in many villages libraries
(3)要熟练运用名词的所有格。
2.时态误用
(l)We havea good tinte talking and laughing together.had
(2)I learn about you from my English teacher, MissFang.learned
(3)I was a member of our school football team am
(4)I arn happy with any programme but the othersspent a lot of time...was
(5)I remembered her words and calm down calmed
(6)They did not want me to do any w,ork at home do【知识拓宽】
动词时态是短文改错考查的热点之一，一般说来每年考查一处，而且近几年高考主要考查现在时与过去时的使用，再如：I had an examination on Monday moming.have
3.非谓语动词误用
(l)It was very kind of them to meet me.at the railwaystation and drove meto their home drive
(2)I look forward to hear from you soon hearing
(3)Play football not only makes us grow up...Playing
(4)I was often alittle tired after a day's work andwatch TV demands very little effort.watching【知识拓宽】
(1)由以上考例可见，v.-mg形式作主语、宾语或状语是考查的热点。
CDi'ii spend the whole weekend reading and preparefor it.preparing②After learn the basics of the subject, nothing elseseemed very practical to me.learning
(2)过去分词与现在分词的区别是另一考查热点。此时重点要看分词与主语或逻辑主语的关系。
①After an hour or so, we began to feel veryfrightening.frightened②„but now l am interesting in football.interested(3)被动语态中的过去分词误用成动词原形。
Books may be keep for four weeks.kept(4)掌握好动词不定式带to与不带to的差异。
(5)有些动词后接不定式，有些动词后接动名词，应分别牢记这些动词。
4.主谓不一致
(1)Playing football not only makes us grow up talland strong but alsoglve us a sense of fair play and teamspirit.gives
(2)Now my picture and the prize is hanging in thelibrary.are【知识拓宽】
(1)谓语动词的单复数一般取决于前面主语的单复数。
Anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing toborrow them.costs
(2)not only;一but also, neither.—nor.一，either.or..-等并列连词连接两个主语时，谓语动词的单复数应采取就近一致原则。
(3)There be结构中，谓语动词也应采取就近一致原则。
But then there is always more mysteries to look into.are
(4)注意把集合名词(如family，class，team等)和不定代词(如all，none等)放在具体语境中，判断其谓语动词的单复数。
5.代词不一致
(l)The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.their
(2)And they must not break the rules too often if wewant to win the game.we(3)Now someone at home reads instead.everyone/everybody【知识拓宽】
(1)根据上下文判断，出现了代词不一致。
①1 felt that it helped me understand how the worldworks.they②They have been to Europe many timesWe
(2)倾向于考查学生对不定代词、形容词性物主代词、名词性物主代词以及代词的主格与宾格等诸方面知识的掌握与运用能力。
And I can’t forget the good food you cooked forl me
(3)人称代词性别上的误用也是常见的错误形式之一。
6.连词误用
(l)~esaid that she and my schoolmates all wished mesuccass,but it didn’t matter thatI would win or notwhether【解析】it为形式主语，whether l would win or not是真正的主语，意为“我是否能赢”。
(2)lt looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor andaguest.or【解析】句意为：看起来我的父母亲把我当成了“visitor”或“guest”。二者为选择关系而非并列关系，故将and改为or。
(3)It is a very important exam butI can't afford tofail it.and/so【解析】此处应是并列或因果关系，而非转折关系。
【知识拓宽】
(1)正确掌握各连词的含义及其在从句中的应用。
①„because I felt that they helped me understandwhat the world works.how②Most people can quickly get help from a doctor orgo to a hospital sir ce they areill when/if
(2)熟练应用表示并列、选择、转折、因果等关系的连词：and, or, but, so, therefore, however等.①She was smiling but nodding at me.and②Therefore, there are still some countries wherepeople have shorter lives.However
(3)弄清whether和if的含义及用法区别。
„and whether you pay the cost of sending apostcard,the librarian will write to you.if
7.关系代词与关系副词误用
I live inBeijing,where is the capital of China.which【解析】此处是非限制性定语从句，关系代词which作主语。
【知识拓宽】
(1)正确区分关系代词之间的区别，尤其是that和which的区别。
„in other places you are limited to.a certainnumber, of that some may be novels.which
(2)正确区分关系代词与关系副词的区别，并掌握它们的用法。
However,there are still some countries there peoplehave shorter lives.where
8.词性误用
(1)Also the sport teaches us the important ofobedience.importance【解析】本句应该用名词importance作动词teach的直接宾语。
(2)Unfortunate, there are too many people in myfamily.Unfortunately【解析】此处应该用副词unfortunately作状语，意为“不幸的是”。
(3)After learning the basics of the subject,nothingelse seemed very practically to me.practical【解析】。eem为系动词，后面应接形容词作表语。
【知识拓宽】
词性误用指的是动词与名词混淆，副词与形容词混淆等。这就要求我们在平时学习中重视词性及各类词在句中的基本功能。再如：
I'm sure we'IIhave 8 wonderfully time together.wonderful
9.限定词误用
(1)Today I visited the Smiths-my first visit to aAmerican family.an【解析】American为元音音素开头的单词，故应用部定冠词 an
(2)wemay be one family and live under a sameroof，„the【解析】same意为“同样的”，前面应加定冠词the。
10.近义词混用They did not want me to do any work at family......home【解析】family侧重指“家庭这个结构或家里的人。，而home则侧重指“家庭的所在地”。因此，“在家里”应用athome。
【知识拓宽】
在英语中，有许多同义词、近义词和反义词，在平时学习中应抓好基础，牢记每一个词的基本含义。再如：.Uncle Ben will alsogo back for Christmas.come总之，平时学习中应加强对基础知识的积累，熟练掌握高考词汇、基本词法、句法，同时还应加强阅读能力的训练。因为，较快的阅读速度、较好的语感和牢固的基础知识是做好短文改错的重要前提。平时训练短文改错时，不应只是为了做题而做题，而应善于总结、摸索答题的规律。
参考答案
一、1.(3)go to school;in prison;at table(4)play basketball;play chess
三、1.(1)question-*questions(2)subject—subjects(3)match-*matches(4)schoolmate—+ schoolmates(5)subject-+ subjects(6)return—.retums(7)class-classes
第四篇：高二英语短文改错专题复习高二英语短文改错专题复习
高二英语短文改错专题复习高二英语短文改错专题复习知识总结归纳：
短文改错的题是一篇意思连贯，但有九行文字中各有一个语法或用词错误的英语短文。它所涉及的知识面很广，能力要求较高。而且题中所设的错误常常是考生自己在写作中经常出的语法错误，是专门针对考生的弱点而设的。但它又从另一个角度考查了语法知识的运用。因此，做题时，应从以下几个方面着手解题：动词使用错误；名词使用错误；形容词，副词使用错误；连词使用错误；代词使用错误；冠词使用错误；介词使用错误，上下文逻辑错误等。
在研究每一行的句子时，首先把握句子的意思，然后划分句子的成分：主语；谓语部分；宾语；状语：地点，时间，方式等。如果句子是并列句或复合句，先分开各部分小的分句，根据各个分句之间的关系判断使用的连词是否正确。然后再研究各个分句的成分。
（一）名词使用错误：名词一般在句中做主语或宾语，名词的错误主要在于名词单，复数的错误使用。
1.They were eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question.： question是可数名词根据本句的意思，前面有lots of修饰，应当改为复数形式。2.We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics.：subject是可数名词根据本句的意思，前面有quite a few修饰，应当改为复数形式。
3.We practise three times every week and often watch football match on TV together.：根据本句的意思match在此应当改为复数形式。
4.Happy birthday, Peter, and many return of the day.：return在此是名词，应当改为复数形式：many returns of the day是祝贺人们生日的固定用语：祝你健康长寿。
5.He said that she and my schoolmate all wishes me success.：all 在句中提示了除我以外schoolmate应当是复数形式。
6.On the way up I was taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful.：picture应当改成复数形式，因为作者一路上忙于照相，不止仅照一张像。另外还要注意名词所有格形式上的错误使用。
That kind of lie, a little, does two things: it keeps your friend feeling from being hurt….：根据句子意思：有时一个小小的谎言（善意的）可以使你的朋友的感情免遭伤害friend应当改为friend’s
（二）动词使用的错误：
<一> 作为谓语动词，注意谓语动词在时态，语态，与主语是否一致以及用词方面的问题。1.My favourite sport is football.I was a member of our school team.：全句的基本时态应当是现在时，was应改为am 2.Playing football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit.：主谓一致的错误。Give的主语是Playing football，动名词作主语是单数形式，应改为：gives 3.I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.：前半句是说过去的事情used to do ：过去常常做某事。use改为：used 4.…the scenery was so beautiful.The time passes quickly.Evening came down.：时态错误。全句是过去时态，passes 改为passed 5.As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.：动词形式的错误。句中有三个连续的动作做谓语。因此visit不是伴随状语，是第二个谓语动词，应该为visited.6.The Internet is a computer network that use the telephone system to link millions of computers around the world.：句中定语从句中的谓语动词use 的主语是先行词a computer network，是单数形式，所以按主谓一致的原则use改为：uses.<二> 作为非谓语动词，现在分词，过去分词，动名词，不定式形式的使用错误，同时注意非谓语动词在平行结构中出现的错误。
1.Not far from the hotel, there was a shop with all kinds of clothes hang up.：hang up在此做定语修饰先行词clothes，应改为现在分词形式表示挂着各种衣服。
2.He had worked on farms and in shops where he spent his spare time studied by himself.：定语从句是说：他把业余时间花在学习上，按句型结构：spend some time doing something.所以studied应改为：studying.<三> 形容词，副词使用错误：
注意：① 形容词和副词的比较级，原级，最高级使用方面的问题。② 修饰比较级的副词的错误使用。③ 以ing和以ed结尾的形容词的混用。④ 形容词和副词的混用。
1.I never knew a ride down a river could be so much exciting：much修饰比较级形式，在此没有比较级的意义，所以去掉much.2.I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together.：形容词与副词混用。Have a wonderful time：过得非常愉快。wonderfully 改为：wonderful 3.…his mother was very poor that she had to send him to a rich family who had no child.：本句含有so…that 句型。very改为：so 4.People will work few hours than they do now.：这是一个含比较级的句子。（句中有than），few 改为比较级形式fewer 5.Computers will be more smaller and useful….：比较级smaller前面的修饰词应该是副词much。More与多音节形容词或副词原形构成比较级。more改为much 6.Last week, I went to a movie, which was very moved.形容词moved指人受到感动。本句的定语从句的主语是movie。应当是moving.<四> 连词使用错误：并列句连词and与but的误用是历年高考题中常考的内容。复合句如宾语从句，状语从句，定语从句中主，从句的连接词的误用根据主从句的关系可以发现。1.My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there.：前后两句的关系是并列关系or应改为：and 2.My grandma was the best cook in the world but could make the most delicious dishes.前后两句是并列关系不具有转折意义。but改为：and 3.It deosn’t matter that I would win or not.Matter后面的从句是whether…or not结构。That改为：whether 4.An Eskimo boy becomes a man since he kills his first polar bear.：根据句子意思：在Eskimo男孩杀死他的第一只北极熊之后，才真正成为一名男子汉。Since改为：after 5.The fine-furniture store ∧I work has been in business since the 1920s.：I work是定语从句修饰先行词The fine-furniture store，The fine-furniture store在从句中做地点状语，应加关系副词where.解题思路：
首先要理解整个短文的含义，逻辑关系，篇章结构。再仔细研究每一句的意义。借助划分句子成分的方法判断每一部分是否有错误。读句子时一定以整句为单位。【典型例题】
A（2004全国卷I）Dear Ralph I’m a newcomer here of a small town.I would 1.from describe myself as shy and quietly.Before my classmates, 2.quiet it seems always difficult for me to do things∧ well as 3.as them.I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as 4.at a fool.So I feel unhappy every day.5.√
Besides, I have few friends, I don’t know that they 6.why
don’t like to talk with me.Sometimes, we talked to each other 7.talk very well in class, but after class we become stranger at 8.strangers once.I am trying to improve the situation since it dosen’t 9.but seem to work.Can you tell me about what I should do? 10.about去掉 分析：
1.来自一个小镇的新生。强调“来自于”用介词：from 2.describe oneself as +形容词，所以quietly改为quiet 3.缺少连词，这是同级比较结构as…as，加上as 4.介词错误：词组laugh at somebody：嘲笑某人。
6.宾语从句连词的错误，that 本身没有意义可以省略，本句是说：我不知道他们为什么不喜欢我。
7.时态错误，全篇用的是现在时。
8.名词单复数的错误，主语是we，宾语与主语呼应，应该是复数形式。9.这是一个并列句，前后为转折关系。10.根据句子意思，about多余。
B全国卷III2004 You can find all kinds ∧information in just 1.of a few minute on the Internet.It’s like going to a 2.minutes huge library without have to walk around to find 3.having your books.Recently even though, many people 4.去掉even have been discussing the dangers of the Internet.5.√ They have been reports in America about people 6.There trying to steal person information for bad purposes.7.personal Finding information on the Net is easily.But not all 8.easy information are good to society.For example, you 9.is can find such information like how to kill people.10.as The problem will become more serious in the future.分析：
1.all kinds of是固定词组，of 不能缺少.2.a few 后面的名词是复数形式。minute是可数名词 3.without是介词，后面跟动词ing形式。
4.even though：即使，此处表示“虽然”。应去掉even 6.此处表示：在美国有报道说…..应当用表示“有…”的句型：there be… 7.此处表示“个人的信息”，需要用形容词做定语。personal：个人的。8.is后面是形容词形式。
9.information是不可数名词。后面的谓语动词用单数形式。10.such…as是固定句型。【模拟试题】（答题时间：45分钟）A You can find all kinds information in just 1._____ a few minute on the Internet.It’s like going to a 2._____ huge library without have to walk around to find 3._____ your books.Recently even though, many people 4._____ have been discussing the dangers of the Internet 5._____ They have been reports in America about people 6._______ trying to steal person information for bad purposes.7._______ Finding information on the Net is easily.But not all 8.________ information are good to society.For example, you 9.________ can find such information like how to kill people.10.________ The problem will become more serious in the future.B This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, 1._________
The most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring 2._________ Festival.My grandma was the best cooker in the world 3._________ but could make the most delicious dishes.One time, I just 4._________ couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner.As I was 5._________ about take a picture from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in 6._________ the kitchen looking at me.Shake her hand, she said, ‘It 7._________ isn’t a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize 8._________ and controlled me at my best till the dinner started.You 9._________ know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.” 10.________
参考答案 A 1.在kinds后面加of ：all kinds of 是固定短语。这里缺少了介词of 2.名词“数”的错误, minute是可数名词，有a few修饰，应改为：minutes 3.have改为：having：without是介词，后面的动词应该是动名词形式。4.去掉even：even though：即使。此处表示：虽然。5.此行正确。
6.They改为：There：本句表示：有一份报告。用there be 句型。7.person改为：personal：此处指个人的信息，应该用形容词形式。8.easily改为easy：be后面接形容词。
9.are改为is：主语information是不可数名词。
10.like改为as：such…as为固定句型，表示：象……这样的……。B 分析：
1.boy是可数名词，第一次提到，前面必须加a 2.本句是说：欢渡春节。When在此多余.3.用词不当，cooker：炊具。Cook：厨师。4.前后两个分句是并列关系。
6.be about to do something 是固定句型。7.Shake her hand在本句中做伴随状语。应该用ing形式。8.全句都在叙述过去的事，用过去时。
9.本句是说：控制自己。宾语应改为反身代词。10.several后的名词应是复数形式。
第五篇：短文改错24-41
24.Our neighbor has two sweet dogs which seems lovely.I fell in love with the at the moment I saw them.For several days, I had been able to ask them to come near me by offer ‘doggie treats’.Today all of them took treats from my hand.I was happy that I was able to final gain their trust.It occurs to me that there are people of my acquaintance also seem fearful, and distant for me.I promise today that I will not judge them, and will simply extend my hand.I hope that they will trust their attempts at friendship.25.I was sitting on the train commuting to work in this morning.I notice a lady who was pregnant.However, no one offered him a seat, even those who were sitting in the disabled seats.I was really enjoying sit down as I suffered vertigo and struggled bear it on the train.However, I eventual offered my seat and stood for my commute.To be honesty, my feet hurt badly.But I did feel such good because I let someone who needed a seat much more than me have what she needed.If someone needs help in the future, I can’t still lend a hand.I have to share this wonderful story sharing by my cousin Jane.She is in her first competition and went into a panic when another one swimmer swam over her.She felt very frightened and call out to the life guard.Immediate a 17-year-old young man jumped in and came near him and talked to her.He said “I can’t touch you and you won’t be qualified.However, if you like, I will swim a rest of the way with you”.And he did that, and my precious cousin was able finish her challenge.Isn’t that absolute wonderful?
Yesterday, I got an opportunity help an injured neighbor.His right leg was injuring with some major infection.Obviously, he was seemed very worried, for no one else was at home.So I took her to hospital at once.When we arrived there, I discuss his treatment with a doctor.The doctor advised him to receive proper treatment or to rest for a long time, that I thought was quite right.I either bought some medicines for him.Three hours passed quickly before I had everything arrange.Then I drove home, tried but happily.To help children living in poor mountainous areas, the Students’ Union organize an activity of donating books.It took place in our school hall in the afternoon of last Saturday.Students present were very pleasing to be able to help those children.And some of it wrote encouraging words on the donated books.Meanwhile, they expected the Students’ Union organize this activity as often as possibly.At last, we received about five hundred book.The activity turns out to be the success.Because of not only does it help those children in poor mountainous areas but also lets us treasure which we have now.Today was so a peaceful day.I go to see my friend and her boyfriend earlier in the day.She is getting her kidney stone remove later this week.I wanted to spend some times with her before the operation.Her boyfriend is recovering from her own surgery from 2 weeks before.I brought her some sweet food or a pair of earrings.In the return she sent me home with a cake.I had a small piece and it was deliciously.I plan share the cake with others tomorrow.I was laying on my bed relaxing after a long day.Music was playing and I was taking the time to reading a book.Just as I turned on the page an old song started playing who always reminded me of Mom.I put the book down but listened.Mom had been died for 23 years, but sometimes I still felt like it was only yesterday.I closed my eye and allowed the flood of memories to wash over me.And my heart ached as I thought of how I still missed him.I wiped the tears from my cheeks as song finished.Then I looked out of my window at the night sky, and send an “I love you, Mom” from my lips to Heaven’s ear.31
I was having a rough morning, feeling rather tiring.So I went to our school coffee’s shop to calm down.I was in my own world, and then saw the woman in front of me in line.She tells the cashier that she was going to pay for whichever I wanted to get.I was grateful and rather confused.As a result, I asked him why.In my surprise, she said, “You are a student, right? This is my way helping students.” I was touched and what she had said really made me happy.32
I went to a supermarket nearby to buy few things.There were two lady collecting food for a winter food drive for a charity.I had bought a few cans of food and two chocolate bars, where I handed to them.I thanked them for spend time at their weekends collecting for those in need.They all smiled and thanked me.They said it was just that they needed.Honestly spoken, their kind action really touched me.After this experience I wouldn’t have done that, but now I’m brave enough for personally greetings and eye contact
Today I got stick behind a mini bus on the narrow street of my neighborhood.As I sat there angrily, I had looked up and saw a man.He was wearing an uniform coming out of a house.I could tell that the bus block my way was for him.He turned around and waved goodbye to his very elderly mother whom was watching him from the house.Then, as he was about board the bus, he turned, smiled, and waved at myself.My anger left and tear were rolling as I smiled and waved back.I was late for work but I had the good day ever!I smiled to everyone I saw.34
In July 21, I, together with some people gathered at Youth Square at 5 am.Then we boarded a bus, where took us to Wuling Mountain, taking us two and a half hour.To tell the truth, Wuling Mountain is a really attractive spot, where the scene was beautiful enough.When first climbing mountain, I felt excited, and walked fast, only take some pictures now and then.There was a large number of tourists that day, making the path crowded.At noon, I had a simply lunch, for I took some food with me.We had returned at four o’clock, laughing and talking.Tired but happy, we arrived home safely and sound.35
I like many sport.But swimming is my favorite sport.When I am six years old, my parents often took me to a swimming pool.He taught me how to swim and told me not be afraid of water.Later I became very interesting in swimming.Now I go swim every afternoon in the swimming pool.Swimming is really a great fun.Unless you swim in the water, you will feel like a lovely fish, feeling very free.In the way, I took part in the swimming match last week in our city.But I won the match!
We had moved house 9 months ago.Before that we had lived in a same house for 20 years.Our next-door neighbours have lived in their house even long, so we have known them for the full 20 years.They are a lovely retire couple, Bob and Jean.Bob has just gone in hospital because of a serious illness and is not expected live.We took a 2-hour-round trip to visit her on Sunday in hospital.We sang some happy songs so told him all our news.However, we couldn’t hold back tear.Then we hugged and cried together, Jean including.37
It was cloudy day with little rain in the air.I stood at the roadside waiting for a taxi while suddenly I felt a voice beside me.It was a boy who was wearing poor cloth.I felt very disgusted that I tried to pull myself away.The boy kept follow me shouting out “Big brother!Big brother!” and I didn’t answer him at all.I heard him call out again, which makes me angry.So I shouted at him that we had no money to spare.However, the boy said to me, “Brother, will you please to help me cross the road!” I held the boy’s hand firm and helped him cross the road.38
After fill my gas tank I walked in to pay.The mother of the girls were digging through her purse.She had bought some small snacks for her children but still needed five more dollar to pay for them.She sighed and started to pick out the snacks to put it back.“I got it,” I said and put the money on the counter.The Mom turned and looked me with watery eyes.Then sudden she stepped forward and hugged me.I felt the burst of warmth in my heart.The Mom let me to go and said, “Thank you.” She smiled, grabbed the snacks and hurry out to her children.I stood there watching them leave.39
I stare from the window of my hotel room.A older gentleman was helping a young girl as she struggled walk down the beach.I ate in the hotel restaurant in that evening.I watched as the same young girl continued to get up from the table and reach for her walker.She grasped it firmly with both hand, leaning heavy.She made her way out of the restaurant, smile.As I drank me coffee in the hall the next morning.I noticed a sign saying “Special Olympics Relays”.Ah, I thought, that mustn’t be what the walking lessons were all about.40
On the morning of the Olympics, I felt forcing to watch Elizabeth’s Olympic event.I cheered as she crossed a finish line—the second place.She smiled as she stood on the award platform, and tears slipped down his cheeks.She told the crowd, “I especially want thank my grandpa for believing in me when I have no one else.” I found her late.I said, “Congratulation!” As we talked, she said that she and her parents were hit by a drunken driver at three years ago.She was the only survivor.Elizabeth smiled but hugged her grandpa.“Everyone gave up hope whether I would walk again.My grandpa was the only one who doesn’t.”
Yesterday afternoon, I went back home and found the door to my house opened.On the doormat was a pair of shoes were belonging to my mom.I got into the house and headed direct to the bedroom.I found her weep uncontrollably.I tried to ask her why was wrong but she couldn’t explain.Instead, she became much sad.I seated her down on the bed and bring her a glass of waters to drink and helped her cool down.When she was stable, she told me the reason of her sadness.She thought great wrong had done to her.
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