大学英语四六级短文改错

第一篇：大学英语四六级短文改错

Until the very latest moment of his existence, man has been bound to the planet on which he originated and

developed.Now he had the capability to leave that planet ___1___ and move out into the universe to those worlds which he has

known previously only directly.Men have explored parts of ___2___ the moon, put spaceships in orbit around another planet and

possibly within the decade will land into another planet and ___3___ explore it.Can we be too bold as to suggest that we may be ___4___ able to colonize other planet within the not—too—distant ___5___ future? Some have advocated such a procedure as a solution to the population problem.ship the excess people off to the

moon.But we must keep in head the billions of dollars we ___6___ might spend in carrying out the project.To maintain the earth’s population at its present level.we would have to blast off into space 7,500 people every hour of every day of the year.Why are we spending so little money on space ___7___ exploration? Consider the great need for improving many ___8___ aspects of the global environment, one is surely justified in

his concern for the money and resources that they are poured ___9___ into the space exploration efforts.But perhaps we should look at both sides of the coin before arriving hasty conclusions.___10___

答案：

1.had-> has

2.directly-> indirectly 3.into->onto / on 4.too-> so 5.planet-> planets 6.head-> mind 7.little-> much 8.Consider-> Considering 9.they-> / 10.arriving 后加at 或 arriving-> reaching

考点例析：

例1： If his aim is inaccurate and he scores a goal, enjoys S3.____ the hunter’s triumph of killing his prey.解析：这是由一个条件状语从句引导的复合句。但主句只有谓语动词enjoys，缺少主语，因此要步上主语。根据从句的his aim可推断应该加上主语he。

例2：Nuclear physicists who interested in the structure of 5._________ atoms cannot observe protons, electrons and neutrons

directly.解析：如果将who后面的部分作定语从句，那么它绝少谓语，故将who去掉，此时分词短语interested in直接作定语修饰前面的physicists。或在who后加are，补全定语从句。

例3：This alliance guarantees that all leprosy patients, even they S6.______ are poor, have a right to the most modern treatment.解析：even是副词，后面不能直接跟句子，根据句子的意思，应该在even后加if或though。

巩固与拓展

1.A student of music needs as long and as arduous a training

to become a performer a medical student needs to become __________ a doctor.2.This trip can be found in a booklet, Passport to the Pub:

The Tourists’ Guide to Pub Etiquette, a customers’ code of

conduct for those want to sample “a central part of British ________ life and culture.3.When a new robot is introduced to a small suburban

factory, a Shinto priest is invited to inaugurate._________

4.Since the law made easier to get a divorce, the number of __________ divorces has increased.5.Another changehas been caused by the fact people are _______ living longer nowadays, and many old people live alone

following the death of their partners

巩固与拓展：

1.在performer后加as

此处为同级比较，固定结构为as...as...，而原句比较的对象a medical student前缺少连词as。

2.want-> wanting或those后加who

for为介词，后面的宾语时代词those，不可再跟主谓结构。故将want改为wanting，用现在分词短语作定语修饰those，或者在want前加who构成定语从句修饰those.3.inaugurate后加it

4.made后加it

句子主语是law，谓语是made，easier是宾语补足语，逻辑宾语是to get a divorce，可见此句缺少形式宾语it.5.fact后加that

fact之后的部分是同位语从句，补充说明fact，其引导词不能省略。

综合训练

1.small-> smaller

该句后面有than，所以前面应该是smaller。

Many peolpe than ever are drinking coffee these days--but in small 1.____ quantities than they used to.Some manufacturers of coffee makers are

trying to make advantage of this trend by developing diminutive machines 2.___ that brew（煮）smaller amounts of coffee.Two U.S appliance companies---Black&Decker, basing in Twson, Maryland, and Toastmaster Inc.3.___

of Columbia, Missouri---has recently introduce ”drip" Coffee makers that 4.____ brew one or two cup servings of coffee.Neither of the products brew the 5._____ coffee directly into a cup or mug, eliminating the need for a separate

carafe.Since many people make a pot of coffee in the morning and drink 6.____ only a single cup, the new cofee makers should reduce the wasted coffee.Black&Decker’s Cup-at-a-Time spends $27, while Toastmaster’s Coffee 7.___ Break retails for $20.Black&Decker also makes a coffee maker drips coffee directly into a 8.____ carry-around thermal carafe.The carafe, a glass vacuum bottle, is supposed to keep the coffee fresh for hours.The product, called the Thermal Carafe coffee-maker, comes with a built-in lid that opens during the brewing

process, closes when it is completed.There are several models, including 9.____ one that firs under the counter, ranging from $60 to $110 at price.10

1.small-> smaller

该句后面有than，所以前面应该是smaller。

2.make-> take

take advantage of 为固定搭配，意思为“利用”，与其同样意思的词组还有make use of。

3.basing-> based

base和它的逻辑主语是被动关系。be based on sth 以什么为基础 base sth on sth …以…为基础

what are you basing this theory on ?你这种理论的根据是什么？

4.has-> have

句子的主语是two US appliance companies, 谓语动词要用复数。

做短文改错先找句子主干：判断时态，单复数

5.Neither-> Both

根据文章的中心观点，这里时说两种产品都如何。故要用both 先通读全文，了解文意

6.and-> but

本句的意思应该是：大部分人都是早上煮一壶咖啡 但却只喝一小杯。并列句前后应该是转折关系。

7.spends-> costs

spend的主语必须是人，此处主语是物，应该用cost表示 “该物花费了多少”。

8.maker 后加that或which

一个句子在没有连词的情况下不能带有两个谓语，本句的谓语是makes，而drips和之后的部分应该是定语从句修饰coffee maker，又由于先行词在从句中作主语，所以引导词不能省略。

9.closes前加and

在英语中，用逗号连接两个独立的主谓结构是不对的，所以要在closes前加and。

10.at-> in

表示“在...方面”，使用介词in．

1.有比较级than一定注意形容词为比较级

第二篇：大学英语四六级短文写作

大学英语四六级短文写作

（一）对立观点型

Should Firecrackers Be Banned?

（1）

setting off firecrackersit festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children.firecrackers, festivals would become dull and cheerless.suffered both by the people who set them off and by innocent bystanders.firecrackers are a waste of money and resources.be done by banning firecrackers from public places.In addition, the setting off of firecrackers should be restricted to festival days.(2)

setting off firecrackers an ancient Chinese custom that should be preserved.They also argue that firecrackers make festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children.Without firecrackers, festivals would become cold and cheerless.banned.They point out that firecrackers are responsible for fires which destroy property, and for injuries suffered both by the people who set them off and by innocent bystanders.Besides, they maintain that firecrackers lead to a waste of money and resources.firecrackers

（二）解决问题型

3.My View on Fake Commodities quality and the like.’ rights, wasting their money and threatening their health and even lives.the production and sale of fake goods cause serious losses on the part of honest and lawful producers.the destruction of fake commodities means a grievous waste of the nation’s resources.the identifying and refusing sub-standard commodities.（三）谚语警句型

4.Haste Makes Waste “Haste makes waste”by step.Even simple operations can easily be spoiled if we rush to complete them, neglecting important stages in the process.One should make full preparations before beginning any task.Without a good command of pronunciation, we can never hope to speak in an understandable way.Similarly, if we do not learn to spell properly and to acquire a basic grasp of grammar, we will never succeed in writing good compositions.(或fable goes that a farm tried to help the shoots grow by pulling them upward, only to find that they ’s and 1960’s.At that time, the Chinese people were so eager to develop their economy that they took some improper measures, only to hinder the expansion of economy.)

(或the age of 11 or 12, I began to learn to ride.Eager to ride as well as others, I started by sitting on the saddle at the very beginning.Predictably, I often fell from over the bike.Lots of time had been wasted before I realized that I should do it step by step.I tried to slide by standing on one pedal.Then I began to ride the bike from under the cross bar.Finally, I succeeded.)and assess the problems ahead before moving to the next step.And remember, Rome was not built in a day.（四）图表图画型

5.Changes in the Ownership of Houses in China

1950’s to 20% in 1990’s, that of private houses has from 30% to 80% during the same period of time.purchased houses in their own favor.（五）应用写作型

6.A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus

January 12th, 2002 the canteen on campus.To be frank, I am rather disappointed at the food quality, price and service in the canteen.First, the dishes are scarcely well cooked and most of them taste the same.Secondly, most of the dishes there are priced so high that some students cannot even afford them.Thirdly, the service in the canteen is far from satisfying and the inside of the canteen always seem untidy.To solve the problem, I suggest that another canteen be built and a mechanism of competition be introduced between the old and the new.Besides, both the canteens should be subject to the students' supervision.Dining is an everyday issue for students.It may affect their academic performance.Therefore,Li Ming

以上是经典范文，下面是通句，完全可以背下来直接用，写作时可以节省很多时间

1）先背3个句子Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more…..are commonly and widely used in everyday life.(讲重要性)The popularity of digital …will have great influence on our work, study and everyday life.On the one hand …, But on the other hand.（讲影响）

3To conclude, …..are just like a double-edged sword.With them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life.However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.（结尾段）

Ps:灵活运用第1句和第2句，根据不同模板自由组合。

2）模板（2个模板）开头段：先讲重要性，然后转讲不好的地方。

中间段：措施

结尾段：先来个小转折再进入总结

开头段Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more…..are commonly and widely used in everyday life.However, what worries most of us is that…… 中间段 Firstly….Secondly…..Lastly but in no means least……

结尾段 To conclude, …..are just like a double-edged sword.With them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life.However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.开头段：先讲重要性，然后转讲争论

中间段：转折(即列出两种不同人的观点)

结尾段：直接进入总结（即你的观点）

开头段：It is accepted that ….Plays a significant part for both …, and what’s more , a lot of attention is being drawn to the change of…..However, whether … deserves such an attention , people’s ideas vary.中间段：On the one hand, some people hold the view that …..On the other hand, a great many people insist that….结尾段：From my perspective, however….(你的观点).Therefore, it’s time that(措施之类的)

6级作文万能句子（补充在”…..”里面的万能句子，自己琢磨每个句子放在哪里比较适合）重点背：1）5）6）7）句子，最好全部都被过一遍，自己琢磨怎么用。

1）Sth will make our life more enjoyable, that is to say, sth can add color to the dull routine of every day life.....能让我们的生活更美好，也就是说，....可以给我们枯燥的生活带来色彩

2）For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives

and the source of their happiness and contentment 对于很多人来说，学习一门新技术占据了他们的生活和充实了他们的生活。

3）......, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom.......占据了某人大部分时间，使得某人没空想东想西（充实了某人生活）

4）What's more, living in school can save them a great deal of time on the way between home and school everyday, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work.住校为学生省去了不少时间，这样学生可以把更多的时间用在学习上

5）Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.一点一滴，这样做可以丰富我们的知识和拓宽我们的视野

6）For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge.Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.对于想过一种有意义的人来说，抽空学习一门新技术很重要

7）The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.兼职可以让学生们学习个人技巧，这样可以在找工作时更有竞争力

8）By taking a major-related part-time job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, which they will never be able to get from the textbooks.学生不仅可以提高学习成绩，还可以获得在课本上学不到的工作经验

9）Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.10）1Sth can produce positive effects on …in more than one way.什么东西可带来好影响 2Sth may bring about negative impacts on …什么东西可带来不好的影响

11）sth is a queer thing.It brings you great gifts with one hand, but it stabs you at the backwith the other.(将两方面的利弊转折句，相当喜欢这句啊！呵呵）

第三篇：英语四六级考试：如何做改错

改错

首先要说的是：CET6每次改错要你指出错误的地方肯定有错，绝对不会没错，而且肯定在这行，不会到前面或者下面去！

然后要说的是：从上次CET6改革来看，改错的判卷方法改变了。找出错误0。5分，改对错误0。5分

有错的一句话，最多10个英语单词，大家首先按词性来划分一次

名词错误的可能

（1）名词单复数

只有这1种可能，而且到现在的改错，我就记得就1次单复数没考，其他场次必考！

形容词错误的可能

（1）意思颠倒，要改成反义词

这个错错每次改错题目都有，所以看到错的句子有形容词，先上下文看看，有没有意思反了（2）词性错误

2个形容词在一起，那肯定有一个是修饰另外一个的，所以要改成副词

介词错误的可能性

（1）固定短语的搭配问题，不如key to,answer to, be faced with等

这个错错每次改错题目都有，所以看到错的句子有介词，先看左右，有没有搭配错误

连词错误的可能性

（1）承上启下的错误

有时候，表示递进的，但题目中给出even if，所以要把if去掉；有时表原因的，但题目中是therefore，所以要改成because。这样的错误也时常出现，但不是每次出现（2）非限制性宾语从句只能由which引导，题目中很会用that来误倒

代词错误的可能性

（1）代词与先行词不一致

前面说了是单数，后面用了them，所以要改成it。这类的错误也经常发生

动词错误的可能性（大头！）

（1）时态错误

明明文章在说过去的事情，但用了个is，所以要改成was 这个错错每次改错题目都有，所以看到错的句子有动词，先看上下，有没有时态问题（2）主谓不一致

they was doing „„ 这样的错误，找不出么，6级也别考了（3）非谓语动词提前形式的错误

viewed„„，they were doing„„ 像这样的情况，viewed就要改成viewing 如果后面是it,前面是ing形式，也要注意的（4）平行结构错误

前面连着2句都是to做什么，to做什么and do什么，这时候就要在这个do前加to 如果是to doing，就要改成to do

以上这些错误在考试中占6-7分左右，大家可以一定要抓住，后面的分数就难拿了

另类错误

（1）易混淆的词

比如：His persistence was awarded when the car finally started 中间的awarded是错误的，应该改成rewarded（2）从上下文来看，应该改动的词 一般发生在名词的身上！比如前面说美国人吃饭的习惯，后面写了chinese，那就要改成American（3）固定词组用错一个，造成意思完全改变

比如：It also takes rise to a blurring of the dis tinction between science and technology 要把takes 改成 gives 这样的难点错误，解决方法是，能改则改，不能改确定哪个词错，骗2个0。5分

总的评注：做改错题一定要具有一双“慧眼”。重要的不是自己会运用一个语法点或知识点，而是能够识别出错误的用法，以审查的眼光去面对每一个改错题。这就需要掌握必要的答题步骤和技巧。

答题步骤：

1.一般来说，做题时千万不要拿起来就改。先花

一、两分钟从头到尾通读全文，对文章大 致内容有所了解，做到心中有数。

2.然后把重点放在有错误项的标题号行，寻找较容易辩认的语法错误，如主谓不一致、时态、语态使用错误、非谓语动词错误等等。

3.如果错行中不存在上述明显错误，则应查看是否有词语搭配错误，易混词错误、词性错误等等细节错误。

4.如果错行中既不存在语法错误，也不存在词汇错误，则从整体上查看上下文意思是否连贯，连接词是否使用正确，是否有逻辑混乱的现象，如否定句误用成肯定句造成句意不通等。注意：有时没有错项的行对改错很有帮助。

5.找到错误项之后，按要求形式进行改正、删去或增添，并设法找到一个正确项使句子在 语法、语义和逻辑上都成立

3．改错题的具体解题方法

现在我们来讨论改错题的具体解题方法。如前所述，改错题可以大致分为六个类型，所以我们的讨论也针对这六个题型来进行。A．时态错误的发现与解决

我们来看2001年第79题：Immediately before him was

a„he put it into his collar，so that it falls across his shirt．此处的上下文明显地表现出过去时态的特征，因为在本行之前有明确的过去式was，那么如果was无错误，falls就必然是错的。然后根据题目可知was所在行无错误，所以falls应改为fell

由此我们可以看到，发现时态错误的关键是确定文章背景时态。句子的时态一般情况下应与文章的背景时态相一致，如不一致，则就会是错的，这就要求我们在通读文章时要留心。此外，就像这道题所反映的，有关的动词或者时间状语也是有用的。在解决的问题上，要注意同类时态的选择问题。譬如发现文章中的过去时态是错误的，而应当选用现在时态，则要注意是用一般时还是完成时。

需要注意的一点是，在利用时间状语或是有关动词来 _进行判断时，应该肯定该判断的依据是正确的，否则会导致错误。因此，背景时态是进行判断的最可靠的标准。

B．介词错误的发现与解决

首先来看介词本身用法错误的题型：A very flat piece of bread that looked，to him，very much as a napkin．在本题中，介词as是错误的，应用like取而代之。就这种题而言，准确掌握介词本身的意义是最根本的。As一般当做“作为”讲，而like的意义则是“像”。如果能精确地掌握它们的区别，那就会对题目的错误一目了然了。此外，有些介词有其习惯的用法，如2001年6月第75题，at the country就应改为in the country。对于这些习惯的用法，应多练多总结以利掌握。

然后是介词搭配。在所判断的行中有介词时。首先要考虑的就是该介词是否可以与其他的名词或动词构成固定搭配。如1996年6月第75题，because of its large student body consisting in many people„该题中in无疑是错误的，因为consist of是一个固定的搭配。对于此类题，熟悉有关的搭配本身就是解题的方法。

C．主谓一致的错误发现及解决

前面已经说过，主谓一致主要是数的一致。我们特别 要注意的是一些既定的语法规则，考试往往是比较侧重于考这些规则的。下面是有关规则的总结：

the majority作主语，谓动用第三人称单数。the majority+复数名词作主语，则用复数。the flock of+复数，谓动用单数。

表示价值，重量，长度，时间等名词，尽管是复数形式，谓动也用单数。a number of+复数，谓动用复数；the number of+复数，则用单数。neither„nor„连接两个并列主语时，以第二个名词为准。more than one+复数名词，谓动为单数。

kind，form，type+of+名词，以kind，form，type的数为准。

a series／species／portion+of+名词，用单数。many a+单数，谓动用单数。名词+and+名词表示一种概念时，用单数。

neither of+复数，谓动用单数。从句做主语，谓动用单数。an average(total)of+复数后用复数，the average(total)of+复数后用单数。a body of+复数，谓动用单数。

这些规则只是其中常考的一部分，其他的还有待于大家进行总结。总之，熟练地掌握这些规则，应付主谓一致类的考题就会很容易了。

D．动词错误的发现与解决

我们首先来看2001年1月的第80题：But perhaps we should look at both sides of the coin before arriving hasty conclusions．本题中所考查的是短语动词。英语中有许多的短语动词，是很难从字面上判断其意义的。其中与介词构成短语的动词是最常见的。例如本题中的arrive，必须与at搭配成为短语动词之后才能与conclusion搭配。我们在分析题目的时候，发现有动宾搭配的时候，应该考虑该动词是否是一个短语动词，并进而分析构成该短语动词的介词有无遗漏。对于短语动词的熟悉是一个长期积累的过程，需要随时总结与记忆。以下是六级考试中常见到的短语动词：

account for, add up to, back up, break down, break away from, bleak out, break up, break in, break off, bring about, “bring up, bring out, bring down, build up, call off, call for, call on, carry out, check in, clear up, come off, come around, count on, cut down, cut off, do away with, dwell on, fall back on, fall out, get over, get out of, get at, give out, give up, give off, hang on, hold back, keep back from, keep up with, lay off, lay down, live up to, look into , look forward to, look over, make up, make out, pass away, put up with ,role out, run out of, set about, take over, take up, take in, take off, turn up, turn out, work out等。

还有一种常考的动词的用法就是语态。如2000年1月第79题：One is surely justitied in his concern for the money and resources that they are poured into the space exploration．在本题中，由于从句的主语they与pour的关系是主动的，因而不可以用被动语态。在所分析的文字中包含谓语动词，那么应该分析是否是这方面的问题。其中应该重点分析主语与谓语动词的关系是主动还是被动。

E．连接词错误的发现与解决

我们首先来看2000年6月的第73题：However．a second person thougt that this was more a question of civilized behavior as good manners．本题所考查的就是比较连接词的用法。从前文的more我们就可以看出，下文的as是不恰当的，正确的答案应是比较连接词than。一般来说，比较连接词所考查的重点集中在88与than的用法上。句意中是否还有比较意义是很容易辨别的，我们一旦觉察到句子有比较的意思，就应考虑是否是as与than的用法混淆。

此外定语从句的连接词也是要特别注意的。我们看 2000年6月的第74题：Instead，this other person told us a story，it he said was quite well known．在这里，句子的后半段很明显是一个非限制性的定语从句，所以应将it改为which。非限制性的定语从句的连接词在近几年的考试中反复出现，应该引起我们的重视。解决此类问题的方法是。凡是发现有复合句的分析对象，首先就要考虑从句的连接词。首先看是否有连接词，其次看连接词是否正确，尤其是which与 that的不同应用。F．语言环境类错误的发现与解决

从历年的考题来看，语言环境类的错误是最有章可循的。这类错误一般是一行中的关键词与上下文所体现出来的意思完全相反。例如2000年6月第72题：A well—man． nered person„walks down a street he or she is constantly un-aware of others．本句的文意是一个有礼貌的人在街上走的时候是不会旁若无人的。而句中的unaware明显与句意是不符的。此类题的解决也较简单，那就是将不符合文意的词改为它的反义词即可。

改错练习中应注意的问题

A．首先要注意的是，在阅读和分析的时候，不要仅仅针对有错误的行进行分析。分析时不

要以行为单位，而应当以句子为单位。理由很简单，以行为单位进行分析容易使我们割断上下文之间的联系，导致分析的片面性。

B．在分析时态是否恰当时，应考虑整个文章的时态，根据上文句子的时态来判断下文句子的时态时，必须保证上文的时态正确，以免一错再错。

C．关于做题的时间的问题。改错的练习有一点特殊，那就是一定要在练习中养成检查的习惯，因为很多题目的判断是依赖对于文章背景的把握的。务必保证检查的时间。考虑到这个题型的特点，全部的做题时间要在15分钟左右，其中的5分钟左右应该是用来检查的。

D．在检查时，对于增、删的地方要再三斟酌。一般而言，考题中改的地方多，而单纯的增删是很少的，要注意句子的完整和通顺。

E．对于真题的总结问题。真题是一定要总结的。因为六级改错的考点是有限的，它不可避免的要重复出现。总结以往的考点就意味着对将来考题的预习。总结的方法也是简单的，你可以仅仅将考过的题摘录下来，注意经常熟悉就可以了。

第四篇：短文改错

短文改错

（一）I am interested at swimming very much.At first, I went swimming just to keep health.Now my dream was to swim for my country in the Olympics.Though practicing in the pool is very bored, but I still work very hard in order to realize my dream.Because my hard work, I have already come first in much important competitions.In the competitions, I’ve made lot of friends and we’re very close.It’s much easier to have friends which are swimmers because they also have to get up early to practice like you and they understand this kind of life.短文改错

（二）One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later.Tony saw parents.Mom said,” How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.短文改错

（三）Last summer vacation, I went on a school trip with mine classmates.We visited a farm in a countryside.We took a bus for a while, and then we walked here.We saw a lot of different kinds trees and villages along the way.Some farmers were worked hard in the farm when we arrived.One of the farmer showed us around, introducing differently crops to us.We fed chickens, picked some green apples and took up many beautiful photos.It was really interesting and at the same time, I learned a lot about farming.What an excited school trip!

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（四）I’ve been playing baseball for six year and I’m the only girl on an all-boys baseball team.Our strict coach wants us do our best when we are playing.So it’s not always about winning.He also tells us to just smile and enjoyed ourselves.I take advice he gives me and bring them to my game.Some people say girls can’t play baseball.Hear that doesn’t get me mad.Instead, it makes me play more harder.I want to be knew for being a good player, not just for being the only girl on the team.If you’re a girl who want to play ball, just play you heart out!

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（五）My uncle drove his car meet his friends.When he found there was still some time leaving before the train had arrived, he wanted to take a short sleep.He was falling sleep when a woman came and asked him the time.He opened his eye and answered, “Half past eight.” With a “Thank you!” a woman left.On a short while this happened again.So my uncle wrote “I don’t know the time” on a piece of paper and put them on the window of the car.A few minutes late, an old man came and woke him up, “Hi, young man.I can tell you that time it is.It’s nine o’clock now.”

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（六）When I began my senior high school years, I had difficulty to learning English.I dared not speak English in the public because of my poor pronounce.I could not get high marks, but I always used bad grammar.Afraid of be laughed at, I never put up my hand answer questions in class.When my English teacher Miss Li learned about this, she encouraged me and lend me a hand, that helped improve my English.With her help, I became interest in English and finally got high marks.Miss Li, like a shining star, shines on her path to success.短文改错

（七）Dear Tim, How time flies!It has been a month since you go to America.What is everything going? Next weekend I will take part in a national English speaking competition to be holding in Shanghai.It will be a good chance to improve your English and make friends with students from other part of China.But right now I’m not sure that I can remember all the words for a competition.Anyway, I will hope I can get a good result.I am looking forward seeing you again and hope we can have a true great time then.Yours, Li Hua

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（八）As a service dog, Sandy’s job is help manage a medical condition I have.My condition can be dangerously.When something bad happen, Sandy will tell my parents immediately.Of course, I help take care of Sandy, too.I feed him, walk him, but even take him just about everywhere I go.If I don’t bring Sandy to me, he will get upset.Once he stays with my grandparents for a few hours while my parents and I went to the beach.Sandy was upset in the whole time.He never stopped look for me.When I got home, he was such happy that he rushed to me.I love his dog very much.4

第五篇：短文改错

短文改错

高考英语短文改错题要求考生判断一篇短文中十行(自1995年以来)文字是否有错，如果有错误就将其改正。

此题型旨在测试考生发现、判断并改正短文中错误的能力，以及考查考生准确运用词法、句法、行文逻辑等的综合能力。

本题型侧重考查考生的词汇和语法基础知识，但并不是单纯的知识检测，而是考查考生在阅读的过程中运用语法知识解决实际问题的能力。

纵观近几年高考短文改错，不难发现其设题方式比较固定：正确为1个，多词或缺词共计3个，错词为6个，其比例为1：3:6。

下面引用近几年的高考题来分析一下此题的三种错误类型：多词、缺词和错词。

一、多词

1.多冠词

(l)Suddenly,I caught a sight of my English teacherin the crowd.【解析lsight是不可数名词，且catch sight of是固定搭配，意为“看见”。

(2)For e】cample, when l was a child, the rain was amystery.【解析】，am为不可数名词，泛指时前面不用冠词。

【知识拓宽】

(1)不可数名词表示泛指时不用冠词。

Modern people know more about the health, havebetter food，and„

(2)与by连用的交通工具及air，land，sea等名词前不用冠词。

by bike骑自行车，by sea由海路，乘船

(3)有些名词(如school，class，hospital，church，prison，bed，table，town等)与相应介词连用，表示进行和这些词直接相关的活动时，前不用冠词。

___ _去上学，_______坐牢，_______在吃饭

(4)球类运动、棋类游戏前，不用冠词。

___ _打篮球，_______下棋

(5)mo。t副词作“非常”解时，前面不用定冠词the。

She is most pretty.她非常漂亮。

(6)。或though引导让步状语从句，构成倒装结构，前置的单数名词前不用任何冠词。

Child as he is,he knows a lot.虽然他只是孩子，知道的却很多。

2.多介词

(l)ln fact,they are planning to visit China in next yeaL

(2)We practice for three times every week..(3)So l'm really sorry that l won't be able to come inthis time.【解析】以上三例都是作时间状语的名词短语前多了介词。

(4)„but we do not seem to get much time to talkabout together.【解析】talk about意为“谈到„„”，是及物动词短语，后须接介词宾语，但根据本句语境，此处不必接宾语，故去掉about。

【知识拓宽】

(1)last night, next week, this year, one day,threetimes等名词词组直接充当时间状语，前面不用介词。

(2)有些动词在汉语中是不及物动词，在英语中却是及物动词，由于受汉语影响，可能多一个介词。

serve for the people, follow after the teacher, marrywith her,make him as our monitor,play with Tom in amatch(画线介词多余)

(3)有些表示地点的副词，其意义中已包含to，如果再加to，则多余。

on one's way to there, return to home, go to upstairs(画线介词均多余)

(4)有些副词或介词词组后加另一个介词，构成复合介词，若后面没有介词宾语，介词则多余。同样，有些动词短语是“动词十介词”结构，若后面没有介词宾语，介词则多余。

①If you won’t go，I'll go instead of.(画线介词多余)

②She listened to but heard nothing(画线介词多余)

(5)有些动词或形容词后接名词或代词时，须加一个介词，但接从句时，必须去掉介词。

①l never knew about a ride down a river could be soexciting.(画线介词多余)

②I am sorry for that he won't come(画线介词多余)

3.词义重叠

(1)Whenever I see them l will often think of myEnglish teacher.【解析】在whenever l see them这一时间状语从句后再用often显得重复，应去掉。

(2)1'11 spend all the whole weekend reading andpreparing for it.【解析】the whole weekend意为“整个周末”，再加上all，词义重叠。

【知识拓宽】

(1)有些词受汉语影响，多一副词或介词，造成词义重叠。

return back回来，repeat again重复，flee away逃走，enter into进入，blue color蓝色，stop down停下来，raiseup举起来，unpack open打开

(2)定语从句中的一个名词，已由关系代词取代，再用其替代词是多余的。

I do remember you having apologized to the old lady Imet her last week

(3)单音节的形容词或副词比较等级加-er.-est，多音节加more、most，但二者不能同时重叠使用。

As a result, people in the modern world generally livemuch more longer than people in the past.4.出现冗言现象

(l)Today l visited the Smiths-my first time visit toan American family.【解析】本句中的first修饰visit，visit此处为名词，意为“我的第一次访问”，time多余。

(2)Now I can't watch much television,but„【解析】根据上下文，此处应是“我根本不能看电视”，因此受汉语影响，多了much，造成冗言。

【知识拓宽】

(1)状语从句与主句之间多一并列连词。

①Though he tried his best, but he failed.②The more he has, and the more he wants.(2)充当状语的介词短语与主句之间多一关系代词或关系副词。

①In the last five years that they have climbed churches一②„in other places where you are limited to a certainnumber...(3)充当状语的分词与主句之间多一并列连词。

Sitting down,and he began to work.(4)从属连词后多一个that。

She was absent from the meeting because that she was ilL(5)复合宾语前多一个that。

I found that her lying on the ground.5.固定搭配中多词

(1)I was used to watch it every night.【解析】此处属于used to do与be used to两个固定搭配的误用，应去掉was，取“过去常常”之意。

(2)„in any other words,Iam only a child.【解析lin other words为固定搭配，意为“换句话说”，而any other意为“任何别的„„”，与本文上下文不符。

6.行文逻辑上多词First, let me tell you something more about myself.【解析】由first可知是刚开始向别人讲述自己的故事，故只能说something，而不能加more。

二、缺词

1.名词前缺限定词

(1)Each player must obey^captain, who is theleader of the team.the【解析】此处应加上the，特指“球队的队长”。

(2)The day before the speech contest^Englishteacher talked to me.my【解析】根据上下文分析，此处English teacher是有所指的，指的是“我的”英语老师，故加上my，表达一个更确切的概念。

(3)I'1I take this chance to wish you^ wonderful timeon your birthday.a【解析lwish sb.awonderful time为固定搭配，意为“祝某人玩得愉快”。

【知识拓宽】

(1)在“so+形容词十可数名词单数”结构中，名词前不能缺a或an。

This is so good a book that we will buy it.=This is such a good book that we will buy it.(2)little,few表示肯定时，前面不能缺a，意为“一些”。

如a little water，但是“每隔几分钟”应说成every fewminutesa

(3)有些不可数名词(如metal, beauty, iron, tea,coffee, ice, youth, pleasure, success, failure等)，表示“一种”“一个“一份”时，应加上a或an。

Work is a pleasure to me.(4)“the+姓氏复数”表示一家人时，the不能省。

The Browns like to go skating.(5)表示“两者之中比较„„的一个”时，比较级前应加the。

He is the taller of the two boys.(6)在句中可数名词不可单独使用，前面应有限定词，如his,that,Tom's,the,a等。

When we walked to the car, Bill smiled and shook^head.his2.缺动词不定式符号to(1)I'd like very much^come but I have anexamination on Monday morning.to【解析】like后面不能直接加动词，需加to，构成固定搭配“would like to do”，意为“想做„„”。

(2)一.and will do all they can^ make sure that l geta good education to【解析】不定式作目的状语，不定式符号to不可省。

【知识拓宽】

(1)不定式作后置定语，不定式符号to不能省。

But then there are always more mysteriesAlook into:_____to

(2)-般说来，两个实义动词不能并列使用，中间常用to连接。

①7Ihe World Health()rganization and other organizationsare workingAimprove health all over the world_____to

②i had always wantedA retum to the village _____to

(3)feel, hear, let, make,have, see, notice, watch,ob。rv。等动词变成被动结构时，充当主语补足语的不定式不能省去to。

Little Tom was made to do heavy work

(4)为了避免重复前面的动词，后面的不定式常常省略，但要保留不定式符号to。

We wanted to go to the lecture, but we weren't able to

3.缺系动词

(l)neyA eager to Imow everything about China：.'were【解析】eager为形容词，必须加系动词构成系表结构。

(2)What^ your favourite sport?IS【解析】本句缺谓语动词，应加is。

(3)I'd like to^ your pen-friend, and.be/become【解析】本句考查I'd like to do结构，根据上下文，必须加上系动词。

【知识拓宽】

(1)由于受汉语语法规则的影响，有些形容词作表语时，常常缺少系动词。

She is afraid of her boss.(2)在被动结构中，由于缺少助动词，变成了主动语态，造成错误。

„and let you know when the book you want has^returned and is ready for you to pick up.been4.缺介词(l)We must keep in mind that we play for the teaminstead^ ourselves._____ of【解析linstead of为固定短语，意为“而非，而不是”，后接宾语。

(2)„but the others spent a lotA time arguing_____of【解析la lot of是固定习语，意为“许多，大量”，后加宾语。

【知识拓宽】

改错题对介词的考查，重点是一些固定搭配，再如：

WhenI have free timeI go^along walk..for，因此，同学们在学习和复习中应牢记一些固定搭配。

5.缺连词In one class,l learned^ it rained.why【解析】本句因缺连词而造成句子成分残缺，只有加上why，句子的意义才完整。

【知识拓宽】

(1)在汉语中，分句与分句之间往往不用连词，但在英语中却不行。

It began to rain,^ they had to stop working.and

(2)受母语影响，几个同类词并列连用时，它们之间往往缺一连词。

CDi told Mother, Father, Sister,^ all my friends herewhat a great time I had.and②He looked inside but saw nothing.(3)that引导的主语从句置于句首时，that常常不能省。

That light travels in straight line is known to all.(4)引导同位语从句的连词that，when等常不可省。

(DThe doctors came to the conclusion that the patientwas suffering from cancer.②i have no idea when he will return(5)在even if，even though，as if'as though等短语中，第二个连词不能少。

He walks as if/though he were drunk

三、错词

1.可数名词单复数误用

(l)They were eager to know everything about Chinaand asked me lots of question

(2)We study quite a few subject, such as maths,Chinese, English and physics.(3)We practise three times every week and oftenwatch football match on TV together.(4)She said that she and my schoolmate' all.wishedme success,.(5)„so that l'11 get good marks in all my subject.___

(6)„and many happy return of the day_____

(7)I used to love science class-all of them-biology,chemistry, geography, physics.【知识拓宽】

对名词单复数的考查是高考的热点之一，几乎每年考查一处。因此，为了对名词错误判断准确，应该：

(1)弄清名词是可数名词还是不可数名词。

We stopped to rest for a while and to drink somewaters from a stream water

(2)掌握好可数名词复数的变化规则。

There are branch library in many villages libraries

(3)要熟练运用名词的所有格。

2.时态误用

(l)We havea good tinte talking and laughing together.had

(2)I learn about you from my English teacher, MissFang.learned

(3)I was a member of our school football team am

(4)I arn happy with any programme but the othersspent a lot of time...was

(5)I remembered her words and calm down calmed

(6)They did not want me to do any w,ork at home do【知识拓宽】

动词时态是短文改错考查的热点之一，一般说来每年考查一处，而且近几年高考主要考查现在时与过去时的使用，再如：I had an examination on Monday moming.have

3.非谓语动词误用

(l)It was very kind of them to meet me.at the railwaystation and drove meto their home drive

(2)I look forward to hear from you soon hearing

(3)Play football not only makes us grow up...Playing

(4)I was often alittle tired after a day's work andwatch TV demands very little effort.watching【知识拓宽】

(1)由以上考例可见，v.-mg形式作主语、宾语或状语是考查的热点。

CDi'ii spend the whole weekend reading and preparefor it.preparing②After learn the basics of the subject, nothing elseseemed very practical to me.learning

(2)过去分词与现在分词的区别是另一考查热点。此时重点要看分词与主语或逻辑主语的关系。

①After an hour or so, we began to feel veryfrightening.frightened②„but now l am interesting in football.interested(3)被动语态中的过去分词误用成动词原形。

Books may be keep for four weeks.kept(4)掌握好动词不定式带to与不带to的差异。

(5)有些动词后接不定式，有些动词后接动名词，应分别牢记这些动词。

4.主谓不一致

(1)Playing football not only makes us grow up talland strong but alsoglve us a sense of fair play and teamspirit.gives

(2)Now my picture and the prize is hanging in thelibrary.are【知识拓宽】

(1)谓语动词的单复数一般取决于前面主语的单复数。

Anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing toborrow them.costs

(2)not only;一but also, neither.—nor.一，either.or..-等并列连词连接两个主语时，谓语动词的单复数应采取就近一致原则。

(3)There be结构中，谓语动词也应采取就近一致原则。

But then there is always more mysteries to look into.are

(4)注意把集合名词(如family，class，team等)和不定代词(如all，none等)放在具体语境中，判断其谓语动词的单复数。

5.代词不一致

(l)The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.their

(2)And they must not break the rules too often if wewant to win the game.we(3)Now someone at home reads instead.everyone/everybody【知识拓宽】

(1)根据上下文判断，出现了代词不一致。

①1 felt that it helped me understand how the worldworks.they②They have been to Europe many timesWe

(2)倾向于考查学生对不定代词、形容词性物主代词、名词性物主代词以及代词的主格与宾格等诸方面知识的掌握与运用能力。

And I can’t forget the good food you cooked forl me

(3)人称代词性别上的误用也是常见的错误形式之一。

6.连词误用

(l)~esaid that she and my schoolmates all wished mesuccass,but it didn’t matter thatI would win or notwhether【解析】it为形式主语，whether l would win or not是真正的主语，意为“我是否能赢”。

(2)lt looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor andaguest.or【解析】句意为：看起来我的父母亲把我当成了“visitor”或“guest”。二者为选择关系而非并列关系，故将and改为or。

(3)It is a very important exam butI can't afford tofail it.and/so【解析】此处应是并列或因果关系，而非转折关系。

【知识拓宽】

(1)正确掌握各连词的含义及其在从句中的应用。

①„because I felt that they helped me understandwhat the world works.how②Most people can quickly get help from a doctor orgo to a hospital sir ce they areill when/if

(2)熟练应用表示并列、选择、转折、因果等关系的连词：and, or, but, so, therefore, however等.①She was smiling but nodding at me.and②Therefore, there are still some countries wherepeople have shorter lives.However

(3)弄清whether和if的含义及用法区别。

„and whether you pay the cost of sending apostcard,the librarian will write to you.if

7.关系代词与关系副词误用

I live inBeijing,where is the capital of China.which【解析】此处是非限制性定语从句，关系代词which作主语。

【知识拓宽】

(1)正确区分关系代词之间的区别，尤其是that和which的区别。

„in other places you are limited to.a certainnumber, of that some may be novels.which

(2)正确区分关系代词与关系副词的区别，并掌握它们的用法。

However,there are still some countries there peoplehave shorter lives.where

8.词性误用

(1)Also the sport teaches us the important ofobedience.importance【解析】本句应该用名词importance作动词teach的直接宾语。

(2)Unfortunate, there are too many people in myfamily.Unfortunately【解析】此处应该用副词unfortunately作状语，意为“不幸的是”。

(3)After learning the basics of the subject,nothingelse seemed very practically to me.practical【解析】。eem为系动词，后面应接形容词作表语。

【知识拓宽】

词性误用指的是动词与名词混淆，副词与形容词混淆等。这就要求我们在平时学习中重视词性及各类词在句中的基本功能。再如：

I'm sure we'IIhave 8 wonderfully time together.wonderful

9.限定词误用

(1)Today I visited the Smiths-my first visit to aAmerican family.an【解析】American为元音音素开头的单词，故应用部定冠词 an

(2)wemay be one family and live under a sameroof，„the【解析】same意为“同样的”，前面应加定冠词the。

10.近义词混用They did not want me to do any work at family......home【解析】family侧重指“家庭这个结构或家里的人。，而home则侧重指“家庭的所在地”。因此，“在家里”应用athome。

【知识拓宽】

在英语中，有许多同义词、近义词和反义词，在平时学习中应抓好基础，牢记每一个词的基本含义。再如：.Uncle Ben will alsogo back for Christmas.come总之，平时学习中应加强对基础知识的积累，熟练掌握高考词汇、基本词法、句法，同时还应加强阅读能力的训练。因为，较快的阅读速度、较好的语感和牢固的基础知识是做好短文改错的重要前提。平时训练短文改错时，不应只是为了做题而做题，而应善于总结、摸索答题的规律。

参考答案

一、1.(3)go to school;in prison;at table(4)play basketball;play chess

三、1.(1)question-*questions(2)subject—subjects(3)match-*matches(4)schoolmate—+ schoolmates(5)subject-+ subjects(6)return—.retums(7)class-classes