第一篇：英语专四系列：作文之赏析--出国留学的利与弊
英语专四系列：作文之范文赏析--出国留学的利与弊 题目：Studying Abroad: Hardships and Rewards 写作要求
Nowadays more and more students choose to go abroad after they graduate from colleges and universities.They say that they benefi t a lot from it, though some people argue that there are many hardships and diffi culties.What’s your opinion about it?
Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
Studying Abroad: Hardships and Rewards
You are to write in three parts.In the fi rst part, state specifi cally what your idea is.In the second part, provide reasons to support your opinion OR describe your idea.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.Failure to
follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.审题思路
本题是一个观点选择型的题目，就目前大学生在毕业后选择 留学的利弊孰大孰小进行分析。题目可以从以下几个方面入手：
思路1：利大于弊
虽然有困难，但整体上利大于弊，利体现在 ：1.教学软件硬件优异 ；2.有利于将来就业等。
思路2 ：弊大于利
虽然有好处，但整体上弊大于利，弊体现在 ：1.费用昂贵 ；2.文化差异，难以融入其中等。
思路3 ：应具体问题具体分析，因人而异
留学有益，体现参考思路1；
留学也有弊端，体现参考思路2 ；
是否选择留学，应根据个人情况而定。
Studying Abroad: Hardships and Rewards
There is no denying the fact that studying abroad is a hotly debated2 topic today.As far as I’m，concerned, I believe hardships and rewards coexist and people have to consider it from all sides.引言部分：作者先提出留学是个热门话题，然后说明留学有利有弊应全面综合来考虑。这表明下文将既讲利又讲弊。
Obviously, studying abroad has a number of rewards.In the first place, a student can have access to advanced science and technology as well as desirable working conditions which mightnot be available at home.In the second place, he can be exposed to entirely new
ideas and trends.Last but not least, by living and studying in a foreign country, one can improve his foreign language much faster than at home.Nevertheless, as every coin has two sides, studying abroad also confronts one with a series of hardships.For one thing, learning a foreign language is far from an easy thing at the beginning for most people.For another, a completely new environment with different customs and habits may
also be a barrier to overseas students, especially to the young.An added difficulty lies with finance: it can cost a lot to study abroad.主体部分：作者先说有几个显而易见的益处是列举观点时常用的句式。然后用“In the first place,...In the second place,...Last but not least”。nevertheless进行转折，说明留学会让人遇到很多困难。这时列举所用的句式换为“for one thing...for another...”使文章更富有变化。
Therefore, studying abroad should be viewed as a two-edged sword, which presents us with10 both benefi ts and troubles.The best policy11, as I see it, is to take into consideration his financial conditions and his ability to adapt to new surrounding.Personally，I’d choose to go abroad and study if I find it necessary.总结部分 ：作者概述上面所列利弊，用“a two-edged sword”来概括再恰 当不过，并提出选择出国留学的标准应该是“take into consideration his financial conditions and his ability to adapt to new surrounding”。
亮点回放
1.there is no denying that:“无可否认” ；还可以用undoubtedly，without doubt等更为简洁的表达方式。
2.hotly debated: “被激烈讨论的” ；相当于“heavily/frequently discussed”，但比之要g更地道些。
3.rewards: “奖赏、报酬、报答” ；此处表示“回报”，近义词为“returns”。
4.have access to: “能获得”，access的形容词accessible也经常使用在be accessible to的词组中，注意与之区别。
5.desirable:“令人满意的，称心如意的”，另外它的反义词
undesirable表示
“不尽如人意的”。
6.be exposed to: “暴露在„„之下”，此处还可以用 “be faced with，be confronted with”等。
7.confront sb.with sth.: “使某人遭遇到
（某事）”，此处注意与be exposed to的区别，前者不以人为主语，用主动语态 ；后者以人为主语，用被动语态。
8.far from: “远离”，此处表示
“远非”，相当于never，但语气委婉些。
9.barrier:“障碍”，近义词还有
“obstacle，block，hardship，setback”等。
10.present sb.with sth.: “给某人带来某物”，也可以用
“provide sb.with sth.”，但present 显得更正式些。
11.policy : “政策、方针、保险单”，此处 “the best policy ”表示“最好的办法”，用法地道。
第二篇：英语作文有关出国留学的利与弊
出国留学
Nowadays, many people like to study abroad.Studying abroad is often considered as a great opportunity which will lead to bright future in one's ride of passage.Not only can we learn different cultures and knowledge from foreign countries, studying abroad can also enrich our lives.One coin has two sides.Likewise, different people have different minds.Conservative and negative concerns about studying abroad have been gradually emerging from our society.People start to wonder what goes wrong with studying abroad.There are a couple of issues worth of our discussions.Disadvantages of studying abroad may affect one's life culturally and economically.We Chinese will experience cultural shocks if we study abroad and live in another country.Some peers may not be able to adapt to a new environment of their studying and living, which may be very different from that of theirs.Life is beautiful, and it is hard.If one does not feel comfortable with the new culture of another country, he will not be happy about studying in that country.In addition, studying abroad can cost students a great deal of living expenses.Some Chinese students are so academically successful that they receive scholarships in their studies.However, most peers who study abroad do not receive scholarships.Furthermore, they have to deal with many unexpected hardships by living away from their parents and homeland.For example, medical insurance, daily foods, clothes, rents and transportation can generate a large amount of living expenses.Often time, they need to heavily depend on their parents' overseas monthly payments.I have discussed some benefits and disadvantages of studying abroad.Life is not easy that we know.My belief is that for those students who study abroad should build strong characters in facing of unexpected difficulties in their life.2
第三篇：高中生出国留学利与弊
Going abroad offers us a valuable chance to learn the native language in a real situation.It is also helpful for us teenagers to know more about the foreign culture,which can enlarge our knowledge(make us become more learned).As a result,a large number of people support the view of sending teenagersto study abroad.Meanwhile,others have the opposite opinion.They think it not wise(unwise)to do so.They say children are still too young to look after themselves.Also,they may feel lonely and uncomfortable in everyday life,having no parents to take care of them for such a long time.In fact,fees are a serious problem parents have to work out.(Not every family can afford to send their child abroad).In my opinion,studying abroad(going abroad to study)is of much help.It can not only practise self-controllingbut also get children used to social situations at a very early age.The spacial experience will become a great treasure in their later life.
第四篇：中学生出国留学利与弊
中学生出国留学利与弊
毕竟中国还是发展中国家，更需要我们来将她建设得更强大，然而，闭门造车是不可取的。出国留学，会扩大知识面，学到更多的东西，留学最终是为了我们的祖国啊！
哈佛女孩刘亦婷在学习期间，根据她的平时观察和了解，对我国中小学生与美国中小学生的学习和生活现状进行了对比，并归纳8个方面。(1)身体素质对比，美国学生占较大优势。(2)独立工作能力对比，美国的多数学生胜过我国学生。(3)基础知识对比，我国学生超过美国学生。(4)团队精神对比，我国学生不如美国学生。在美国学生中经常讲“团体精神”。(5)主动性与首创精神对比，美国学生大都比我国学生强。我国学生考虑的是做事要有章可循。而美国学生显得放开。(6)人际交往能力对比，美国学生比我国学生强。(7)动手能力对比，美国学生强。他们在课内外动手实践机会多；到博物馆、展览馆参观允许参观者动手操作。在课内也是如此。在家里，美国学生的家务也做得多，如在住宅四周剪草。(8)刻苦学习对比，我国学生与美国学生差不多。
现在，我国正在深化教育改革，提高教育质量，刘亦婷以智慧的眼力提出8点，使我们放眼世界，可以为鉴。
要是一味的出国留学丰富自己，而不是把自己的知识拿来建设国家，那就是没有爱国之心的结果。有人说：“出国留学不好，还不如上清华北大”。是的，清华北大固然好，但出国留学的本质并不只在于学习。不管每个人出国的初衷是怎样的，到最后他肯定会发现，出国的经历本身对个人便是一笔无形资产。除了单纯的学习，留学更多的是提供了一个了解外部世界和不同文化的机会，也许在这方面的收获还要大过求学本身所得到的。从国外回来的人水平不一定就比没有出国的人高，但他看问题的视角肯定会更丰富。
The middle-school student goes abroad to study the advantage and shortcoming after all China or the developing nation, needs us to come to construct her formidable, however, divorces oneself from reality may not take.Goes abroad to study, can expand the aspect of knowledge, learns more things, the abroad study finally is for ours motherland!
Harvard girl Liu Yi Ting in study period, according to hers usual observation and the understanding, has carried on the contrast to our country elementary and middle school students and the American elementary and middle school students' study and the life present situation, and induces 8 aspects.(1)physical quality contrast, the American student occupies the big superiority.(2)independent working ability contrast, US's most students exceed our country student.(3)elementary knowledge contrast, our country student surpasses the American student.(4)team spirit contrast, our country student is inferior to the American student.Speaks “the association spirit” frequently in the American students.(5)initiative and creativity contrast, American student mostly compared to our country student.Our country students consider are work must have a legal basis.But the American students appear let loose.(6)human communication ability contrast, American student compared to our country student.(7)begins ability contrast, American student.They begin inside and outside the class to practice the opportunity to be many;To the museum, the exhibition hall visit allows the visitor to begin to operate.In the class also is so.At home, the American student's housework also does a lot, if all around cuts the grass in the housing.(8)assiduous study contrast, our country student and the American student are similar.Now, our country is deepening the education reform, improves the education quality, Liu Yi Ting by the wisdom eyesight proposed 8 o'clock, causes us to take a broad view the world, may be the warning.If constantly goes abroad to study enriches own, but is not brings own knowledge the construction country, that does not have the patriotic heart result.Some people said that,“Goes abroad to study not well, on might as well Qing hua Beijing University”.Yes, the Qinghua Beijing University is no doubt good, but goes abroad to study not only the essence and lies in the study.No matter each person goes abroad how is the original intention, definitely can discover to finally him, the study abroad experiences itself to individual then is an intangible asset.Except the pure study, studied abroad many is provides one to understand perhaps the outside world and the different cultural opportunity, also wanted the serious offense in this aspect harvest to study itself obtains.From the human level which overseas comes back on the study abroad person has not been not necessarily higher than, but he looked the question the angle of view definitely can be richer.
第五篇：英语专四系列：作文之赏析--大学生活的价值
英语专四系列：作文之范文赏析--大学生活的价值
题目：The Value of University Life 写作要求
Nowadays some students feel bewildered about the value of college life.Apart from acquiring knowledge, what else could college students get from the time spent in a university?
What’s your opinion about the value of college life?
Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
The Value of University Life
You are to write in three parts.In the fi rst part, state specifi cally what your idea is.In the second part, provide reasons to support your opinion OR describe your idea.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.Failure to
follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.审题思路
本题是一道个人观点表达型的题目，说明对大学生活价值的看法，可以从下面几点着手 ：
思路 ：1.肯定大学生活有价值 ；
2.大学生活的价值体现可以从大学教育对人生观的影响、知识的获取、各种能力的培养等方面来讲。
The Value of University Life
There are reports about businessmen, tars, celebrities who are
undereducated and even did not graduate from high school.Therefore, some college students doubt about the value of college life.As far as I’m concerned, I’d say college life is the most valuable in the following aspects.引言部分 ：作者先说明有些学生对大学生活是否有价值产生怀疑的原因，然后开门见山地提出自己的观点，并用in the following aspects引出下文。
Time spent at a university is the most worthwhile period in a young person’s life.This is a time when a student begins to form his or her ideas about life in general.Attending classes and studying in the library keep a student busy and provide him or her with access to valuable information, adding to his or her knowledge base.Campus life can also be rich and colorful.Most universities offer a variety of extracurricular activities such as sports events, contests, and other social gatherings, enabling the students to experience relief from study and homework.Students often form lifelong friendships through various experiences during university life.主体部分：分为三个自然段，从获取知识、结交朋友、为未来做
好准备三方面说明大学生活的价值所在。这三段的结尾句都是该段的总结句，使文章的逻辑非常清晰、结构紧凑.During the time a student spends at university, he not only develops his intellectual11 abilities, but also develops social skills as well as knowledge and wisdom necessary for choosing a future career.By learning how to balance intense study and recreation , a student will be well prepared for the challenges of future responsibilities.Therefore, it’s only too natural to draw the conclusion that university life, if enjoyed fully and made best use of, is very rewarding in various ways.总结部分：作者用therefore自然引出结尾，并用 in various ways 呼应首段的following aspects，使文章整体感很强。
亮点回放
1.celebrities:“名人”，比使用famous people来得正式。
2.undereducated:“受教育不足的，未受良好教育的”，也可以用poorly educated，该词的使用显示了作者较大的词汇量。
3.doubt about:“对„„表示怀疑”，注意与suspect之间的区别。
4.aspect: “方面、方位” ；常用搭配为in this aspect（在这个方面）。
5.worthwhile:
“值得做的”；注意与worth和worthy之间的区别，另外worthwhile还常用于it is worthwhile to do sth.。
6.in general: “大体上、一般来说”；近义词有in the main，generally(speaking)。
7.add to:“增加” ；近义词为increase，注意与add...to和add up to的区别。
8.base: “基地、基础、基线” ；此处也可以用foundation，另外注意base作为形容词表示卑鄙的、不道德的”。
9.relief: “轻松、减轻”；注意与它搭配的介词是from。
10.lifelong: “终身的” ；通常同学们都会使用all one's life来表示
“一辈子”这一概念，但用lifelong这一形容词更为简洁
明了。
11.intellectual: “智力上的、聪明的” ；还可以作名词，表示“知识分子”。
12.intense: “强大的、强烈的、紧张的” ；这里的意思是“紧张的”，很多同学会误写成nervous study，当然此处也可以用busy来替代。
13.recreation:“娱乐” ；该词的使用体现了作者较大的词汇量。
14.only too...to: 一般情况的too...to结构表示“太 „„而不能”，此处加上only就变为“非常„„去做„„”的意思了，不过too后面所接 的词得是正面词汇，这里表示的意思是“得出以下结论是非常自然的事情”。
15.rewarding:“有报酬的、值得的、有益的”。
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