第一篇：新东方王江涛四级作文解析及—手机与上学
新东方王江涛四级作文解析及范文—手机与上学
新东方在线
王江涛
2015年6月的大学英语四级、六级考试已全部结束，新东方在线四、六级教研、辅导团队第一时间对四级真题进行解析。以下是新东方名师王江涛对在对四级作文的真题命题规律进行解析的同时，对三篇作文逐一进行了解析并提供了参考范文，供广大考生参考。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below.You should start you essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on the kid’s understanding of going to school.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 150 words.命题解析
本题要求首先简要描述图画，然后评论这个孩子对上学的理解。图画显示：一个小孩问母亲：如果我的手机已经知道一切，为什么我还要上学呢？显而易见，本题主旨为手机是否可以取代上学。
国内写作考试中已经反复考察手机这一热点话题。2009年MBA写作考察“手机短信”，2010年考研英语
（二）写作考察“手机入网”，2013年12月四级写作考察“手机在人们生活中越来越多的使用”，也考查了“网络对学习的影响，以及教育是否仅仅是获得信息”。2014年12月，考研英语
（一）写作再次考察“手机时代的‘聚会’”。如果考生研究过之前的写作真题，诸多表达均可使用。本题尤其和13年12月四级写作考察的“网络对学习的影响”异曲同工，几乎就是原题重考。
写作思路：
1、本题首段应简要描述图画，指出当代有些年轻人认为手机可以取代上学。
2、次段最好进行正反论证，说明手机虽然可以帮助获得大量信息，但无法取代教育，教育绝非仅仅是获取信息。
3、第三段最好提出建议措施：我们应该合理使用手机，同时学校教育必不可少、不可或缺。
新东方在线王江涛老师参考范文：
It is subtly revealed in the portrayal that a young boy is talking with his mother in their house.The boy asks confusingly, “Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything?”
We often hear of successful people who are largely “self-taught”.I say largely because, in all cases, they have received some formal teaching, whether it was from a teacher in a classroom, or from parents or a relative at home.In my case, I am glad I always learned from teachers, from fist grade all the way through my Master’s degree.A good teacher adds considerably to the materials contained in the textbooks.In conclusion, it takes a great deal of self-discipline to learn a subject via mobile phones with only self-study, having no guidance or instruction from a teacher.A skilled and talented teacher can add so much richness to what is being learned.I believe it is always better to have a teacher to some degree.如图所示，一个小孩正在家中和他的母亲谈话。这个男孩疑惑地问：“如果我的手机已经知道一切了，我为什么还要去上学呢？”
我们常听人说某某成功人士多半靠“自学”成才。之所以说“多半”是因为所有的成功人士都曾接受过正规教育，有的是在教室里听老师讲课，有的是在家里由父母或亲属给上课。拿我来说，我很庆幸从大一一直到硕士研究生毕业我都在跟着老师学。一位好的老师可以教给你许多课本材料以外的东西。
总之，在没有老师指点的情况下，通过手机自学一门学科需要严格的自律。而一位经验丰富且有才华的教师能教给你许多书本知识以外的东西。所以我想，在某种程度上，有老师教总归更好。
第二篇：新东方 王江涛 四级写作笔记&十大必背
新东方·王江涛·四级写作笔记&十大必背范文
新东方·王江涛
四级写作笔记&十大必背范文
王江涛四级写作笔记
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第一原则：书写工整，卷面清晰。
第一：是否写满（字数）。是否三段？是否两头小、中间大。
第二：首句是否是主题句。
第三：扫描，往往是首末句。一定要写好。以及第一句。
只要有些亮点就可以了。
第二原则：字数原则。120——150
一行十个词比较合适。12-15行
就是十句话，就要三段。
长短结合，以段句为主。长句——15到20个次。6短10长。
提高实力；掌握技巧。
1）十遍精读；（范文）
第一角度：语言：精彩词汇/精彩词组/精彩句型/句子结构[简单句/ 从句（3-5个）/时态（四级已现在时为主，只有举例论证、图表用过去时]/冠词/主谓一致]
第二角度：结构、关联词（3-5）、同义替换、代词替换（英语多用代词）。
第三角度：内容：观点、原因建议、2）背诵（最好方法）
背到滚瓜烂熟、脱口而出。
3）默写（语法、拼写、标点错误。修改了错误，分数就上去了）
4）中译英。（找出不同——自己差的地方）
5）写作。考前5-十篇（模仿的过程）
技巧：
万能框架；
总结框架——从一篇文章；或不同文章。
每段每句话都来自不同文章。60个词就够了。不能多。
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词汇：
1）记忆法
新东方·王江涛·四级写作笔记&十大必背范文
4500词。而需要的只有2-3千
背单词【记忆法：7是一个神奇的数字！1：快速突破！（混个脸熟）
词汇弱点，集中记忆。
当天要重复一遍。大多是阅读词汇，只需要认识。2：了解用法；3：做题体会。】
用纸挖个小洞，只能露出词就好了。
第一遍——正序
第二遍——逆序！
第三遍——乱序！
建立对应干系。
词汇书不用很复杂。基础好一天450。
上午背单词在12点之前结束。没有前摄干扰。
不需要读出来，只要建立外形之意义。
盖中文，说意思。
每隔5分钟，重复前五分钟内容。半小时重复前半小时内容。
晚上没有后摄干扰，有助于记忆。
必须有3次没有后摄干扰才会深刻。
词汇量上去问题就不大。
2）词根词缀法
3）联想法
4）泛读法
应用文
书信——重点
11分之七都是应用文。书信（5次一次——目击见证书——来自国内的高考。感谢信——感谢老师；建议信——投诉食堂属于公务书信所以要表扬）或口头作文（导游词、竞选演讲）
机构：不认识负责人（希望工程）——DEAR SIR,（DEAR MADAM)(TO WHOME INCONCERN(老师喜欢英国英语，用逗号）
PRESIDENT（有六个意思）
经理（manager）
个人：关系不亲密——
私人书信：直呼其名。
3-5个从句。
新东方·王江涛·四级写作笔记&十大必背范文
提纲一般有三点。第一句：提纲可以选作主题句。第二句作自我介绍（公务书信）；第三句写写作目的（英文开门见山）。
第二段：改写提纲二。第二句写两点原因或情况。第三句：小结（也可不写）。
第三段：第一句改写提纲三；第二句：表示感谢（英文比较虚伪）（只有建议信不需要感谢，投诉信都需要感谢的）习惯句型：
my thanks to you for your generous help are beyond the words.(大胆使用主系表替代主谓宾，显得比较书面化。）
words fail me when i want to express my sincere gratitude to you.i take this opportunity to show my heartfelt(衷心的）appreciation to the kind assistance（帮助）you render（给与）me.第三句：期待回信。i am looking forward to hearing from you soon.i look forward to your favourable（好意的）reply atyour earliest（尽早的）convenience.YOUR PROMPT ATTENTION TO MY INQUIRY（需要）WOULD（委婉，多用）BE HIGHLY Appreciated。（英文多用被动，——以理服人）
书面作文——送分！
落款：
yours sincerely，li ming
这种落款是万能的。
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论说文写作
另一种题型。
1）语言（第一位、结构第二位、内容第三位）
如今常考夹叙夹议文章。（时间顺序）
描写文——如今偶尔考描写性段落（目击）。（空间顺序）
论说文-——重点。
语言：第一标准——基本正确
extansive knoledge（广泛的知识)
第二标准——丰富多变。
不要反复用一个词汇。
i hold the opinion that。
新东方·王江涛·四级写作笔记&十大必背范文
句型、词组（可以轻易改造成句型）、词汇（精彩的）（think——reckon、assume、assert、）due——enough
be of importance。
结构问题：
英文尤其讲究！思维差异！中文情感分段，英文逻辑分段。
中文：读者体会。英文：作者交代
中文迂回模式。（重心放在最后）英文直线模式。（中心放在最先）
逻辑，一般是总分总。
1，关联词体现结构
启（启动观点、文章）
承（观点承接，正面论证：分类论证、first and formost【最重要】to begin with，more over，further more，因果论证；英文前果后因in that……for【不能放句首】
举例论证：）
转（yet，whereas……）
合（合并归类。
末端首句，23短尾句）
2、同义替换
3、代词替换（名词）
内容第三
观点不重要。
it is high time that……
三大优秀句型：倒装句；强调句；虚拟语气。都会帮你长分。
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不能为了过四级而考四级。
看碟！多看原版影视；（阿甘正传，西雅图夜未眠，情归巴黎）
老友记。纽约最地道口语。
欲望都市
狮子王、冰河世纪
听英文歌曲
流行音乐原版在欧美。
新东方·王江涛·四级写作笔记&十大必背范文
多读写。
女生《罗密欧与朱丽叶》
《简爱》（简写版）
《爱情故事》
男生《圣经》（语言是最优秀的！希伯来文翻译来的！）
《希腊罗马神话》（西方文明源头）（中国对外翻译出版社）
《老人与海》
海明威的作品。
千万不要查字典，懂多少算多少。
教父！
掌握方法。听写！很多来自于托福——世界最难，把语速放慢罢了。
男生一般形象负面，女生常正确。比萨一般不好吃，苹果派好吃！
听写！听写一盘磁带——必及格。
听一句、写一句（基础差者，可以用四级听力）
听一段写一段（翻来覆去）
听力最好教材：
listen to this（外研社）（中级足够）
step by step（华东师大出版）
口语：跟读模仿！
阅读——背诵！对听说读写都有好处！
被新概念三，阅读的最好教材！
写作：中译英！
听写新概念
先看中文，翻译，再听写，跟读模仿或背诵！
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快速阅读：
先看题干，再看文章！
寻找明显信号！
中心话题！
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王江涛四级写作十大必背范文
1、留学
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Studying Abroad.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1、目前很多中国学生出国留学，2、出国留学的好处，3、我的看法。
Nowadays, going abroad for studies is enjoying a striking popularity among adolescents.Importance should be attached to studying abroad.There are a great many advantages of studying overseas.First and foremost, living and studying abroad offers students a different perspective of the world.On a university campus, international students are likely to encounter their
counterparts from various countries and areas and are exposed to diverse ideas and values.What is more, overseas experience is the best opportunity for the real-life use of foreign languages.There is no better opportunity to improve
second-language skills than living in the country in which it is spoken.Generally peaking, it is my view that although going abroad is expensive and perhaps painful, the payoff is worthwhile.In the first place, in addition to knowledge, overseas students can gain precious experiences that those who stay at home will never have.Furthermore, overseas experience, frustrating and painful as it may be, is conducive to the growth of adolescents.新东方·王江涛·四级写作笔记&十大必背范文
2、就业
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Jobs for Graduates.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline Job hunting has always been a headache for college students.Though many graduates are employed right after graduation, some are not.Most serious of all, some still have no idea where to go working even a long time after graduation.below:
1、大学生难找工作，2、原因很多，3、解决的办法。
The reasons for this phenomenon are various.On the one hand, a few years ago colleges and universities enrolled so many students in popular majors, such as economy, finance and so on that the number of graduates was greater than the need in the market.On the other hand, most graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable job to do than go to the country.I reckon this problem can be solved if both colleges and students take measures.First, they should research the market and develop special skills to suit its need.Second, students’ attitude towards employment should be changed.They should go to small cities and country.There they can also give full play to their professional knowledge.In a word, if we pay much attention, the situation can be improved.新东方·王江涛·四级写作笔记&十大必背范文
3、网络
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Internet.You should write at least In recent years, people are developing an inseparable relationship with Internet.As is known to all, it is convenient for us to click the mouse when surfing on line, either to entertain ourselves or to meet the work’s needs.120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、互联网使用的现状，2、大学生是否应该使用互联网，人们的看法不同，3、我的看法。
On the one hand, no one denies that Internet is currently one of the most useful media in our daily life.As a college student, I get on line every day to exchange information through e-mails with my net friends.But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain a regular and wholesome lifestyle.Thus, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence.After all，Internet is invented to enrich our life, and to improve the efficiency of our work rather than shackle us with a chain.新东方·王江涛·四级写作笔记&十大必背范文
4、考试
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Views on Examinations.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、大学都用考试来衡量学生的成绩，2、考生可能带来的副作用，3、我对考试的看法。
In most colleges and universities the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject.Although it does the job quite efficiently, its side effects are also enormous.To begin with, examinations lower the standards of teaching.Since teachers are often judged by examination results, they are reduced to training their students in exam techniques.No subjects can be taught successfully merely through being approached with intent to take examinations.In addition, the most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits.As the examination score is the only criterion for his academic performance, a student is driven to memorize mechanically rather than to think creatively.In fact, few of us admit that examinations can contribute anything really important to the students’ academic
development.If that is the case, why cannot we make a change and devise something more efficient and reliable than examinations?
新东方·王江涛·四级写作笔记&十大必背范文
5、老师
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The most unforgettable Teacher I ever In my life I have met a great many teachers who are really worth recalling.But perhaps the most unforgettable one I ever know is my English teacher.Know.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、我生活中最难忘的老师是……
2、为什么他（或她）令我难以忘怀，3、结论。
What frequently brings back memories of my school teacher is his special qualities.First of all, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer—an awakening of a passion for learning.He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty and perfection of English language and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field.Second, I was attracted by his lively wit.I remember that we students always anticipated his class with great eagerness because his lecture were humorously delivered, never failing to provoke chuckles or loud laughs.Although it is nearly two years since I attended his last class, he is the talk of our old classmates, and I know part of him has already stayed in my heart.新东方·王江涛·四级写作笔记&十大必背范文
6、求学信
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter applying for admission into a college or university.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1、入学条件，2、学费和奖学金，3、住宿情况。
Dear Sir or Madam，I am a Chinese student who wishes to apply for admission into your prestigious university.My plan is to start my course next term, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information.First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I already have a bachelor’s degree from Beijing University, but I wonder if there are any further
academic requirements.Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for
international students.Third, what is the situation regarding accommodation?
I look forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed institution.Yours sincerely，Li Ming
新东方·王江涛·四级写作笔记&十大必背范文
7、邀请信
Directions: You want to invite some friends to a party.Write an invitation letter to them individually: Dear Snoopy，I am greatly honored to formally invite you to participate in Mr.Guo Jing’s wedding ceremony with Ms.Huang Rong to be held
1、邀请参加晚会，2、说明举办晚会的原因，3、将安排哪些活动。
at Beijing Grand Hotel from 8 to 10 p.m.on April 1, 2007.As you are a close friend of us, we would very much like you to attend the celebration and share our joy.The occasion will start at seven o’clock in the evening, with the showing of their wedding ceremony.This will be followed by a dinner party.At around ten, we will hold a small musical soiree, at which a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss.If you do not have any prior appointment on April 1, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.Yours sincerely，Li Ming 新东方·王江涛·四级写作笔记&十大必背范文
8、投诉信
Directions: You live in a room in college which you share with Dear Sir or Madam，I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room another student.You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting.Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college.1、要求下学期换一个新房间，2、解释原因，3、要求单间。
next semester.I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior.For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him;for another, he regularly holds noisy parties.In these circumstances, I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind in my assignments.I am sure you will agree that the only solution is for me to move into a room of my own.Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.Yours sincerely，Li Ming
新东方·王江涛·四级写作笔记&十大必背范文
9、致辞
Directions: Write a speech on the opening of a conference of no less than 120 words.In your speech, you should: Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Beijing!To begin with, I would like to make a brief introduction to myself.I am the president of Motorola(China)Electronics Ltd.1、进行自我介绍，2、详细介绍大会内容，3、结束语。
The following is my introduction to the conference.First, it is my great honor to be here with all of you and declare open the Conference of International Trade Cooperation.Second, on behalf of our company, I would like to express my heartfelt welcome to all the guests and delegates.Last, I believe our cooperative efforts are sure to be productive.I wish all of you enjoy yourselves during this conference and hope the above information will help you.If you have any question for me, please feel free to ask at any time.Thank you for your attention.新东方·王江涛·四级写作笔记&十大必背范文
10、告示
Directions: The Students’ Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest.Write an announcement which covers You should write about 120 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement.the following information:
1、比赛目的、时间、地点，2、参赛者的要求，3、裁判和奖励的细节。
Chinese Speaking Contest
February 3, 2008
To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week(10 February)at the Students’ Auditorium.Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week.Five professors will be invited to be judges.The first six winners will be given awards.Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.The Students’ Union
Department of Chinese Language and Literature
第三篇：新东方【王江涛】考研英语指导：考
考前写作突破-轻松三步走
第一步：通读教材，消化笔记。要把我们网络课堂发的教材，写作教材，包括讲义，再通读一遍。另外我们讲课的课堂笔记需要整理好，消化掉。每年都有很多同学听课的时候记了很多笔记，之后也不看，那是没用的。我们讲的笔记都是考研的精华，要消化掉。每一个单词，应该掌握拼写；每一个句子，应该至少把它背下来。这个问题要在11月之前给解决掉。第二步：背诵、默写、仿写20大必备范文
1、背诵
我们给大家提供了20大必背范文：10篇小作文和10篇大作文。(王老师编写的《高分写作》)如果你还没有背下来，应该在1月1号之前，把它们都背下来。而且要背到滚瓜烂熟，多多益善。为什么要这么做呢？因为如果背得不熟，上了考场什么都想不到。有同学反映，20篇文章全都背完了，但上了考场头脑一片空白，这就是因为背得不够熟练。我们在课堂上讲过，老师是根据你现场发挥的句子打分的，如果全用模板去写，那是零分。要怎么现场发挥呢？就是要靠平时所背的这些文章。上了考场，看到考题，如果你背过相关的表达，把它写上就可以了。所以如果背得不熟根本就没法用。
2、默写
光背是不够的。有些同学基础不太好，好多单词自己觉得会了，其实还是不会拼写。所以一篇文章背熟了之后，把书合上，把它默写下来。默写下来之后对照一下范文，会发现，如果和范文的意思一致，但有些错误，比如语法、拼写、标点的错误。文章背得滚瓜烂熟还是写错了，那么上了考场更不可能写对了。这就是你写作的弱点。然后对照范文，寻找差距。哪些地方写错了，把它纠正过来。我们这20篇必背范文中的每一个单词，都要掌握拼写。尤其是一些基础不太好的同学，比如还没有通过四级的同学。我们这20篇文章已经囊括了考研写作最常用的词汇，核心词汇大概要3000个。掌握了，考研基本就够用了。
3、仿写模仿进行写作。背完一篇文章之后，要有意识地积累表达。比方说，这篇文章中有没有万能词汇，或者常用的句型。背完每篇文章之后，使用这篇文章的表达，去写另一道题目。比如背完07年的作文，用它去练08年的作文。换一道题目，这些表达尽可能多的去使用。如果平时不用，上了考场是想不到的。
第三步：总结框架，考前模考。这个阶段放在2010年1月1-9号。把作文的框架总结一下。小作文框架总结：
小作文一般考书信，写7句话左右。小作文100个词，框架最多50个词，另外一半的字数，一定要上了考场现场发挥。第一段：自我介绍，写作目的； 第二段：改写提纲。
第三段：表示感谢，期待回信。这四个句子就是万能句型。可以占大约四五十个词。
2、大作文框架总结：
大作文主要是准备图画作文。大作文的框架字数不要太多，最多占一半的字数。大作文160个词，框架最多80个词。
第一段：图画描述段，怎么去描述一幅图画。挖掘细节词，串连成句。细节挖掘的越多越好。把图画的细节词一网打尽。
第二段：意义阐释段，去分析这个图画的意义。第二段一般写5句话左右。第一句就是主题句，再次点出图画的象征寓意，像08年的作文，象征寓意是合作。第二部分是论证，写3句话。有很多种论证手段，任何问题可以从5个角度展开论证，可以使用6种论证手段。而判卷老师喜欢看到3种论证手段：第一种，因果论证。第二种论证手段是举例论证。举一到两个例子。可以举自己的例子，也可以举社会热点例子。第三种论证手段是联系现实，把图画和现实进行联系。第三个部分是小结：概括论证，总结本段。第三段：建议措施段，去发表评论，总结。写4句话：第一句话就是结论句，也就是整篇文章的结论句，也是第三段的主题句。第二个部分就是针对双方，提建议。提两点建议。最后一部分是结尾，展望未来。使用几种句型，如倒装句、虚拟语气等。给老师最后来一个好的印象。
第四篇：新东方四级作文
一、对比观点题型
（1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
1．有一些人认为……
2．另一些人认为……
3．我的看法……
The topic of ①________（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②________（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③________（理由二）.Moreover, ④________（理由三）.While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,________（支持B的理由一）.Secondly（besides）,⑥____________（理由二）.Thirdly（finally）,⑦____________（理由三）.From my point of view, I think ⑧________（我的观点）.The reason is that ⑨____________（原因）.As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice
（2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点Some people believe that ①________（观点一）.For example, they think ②________（举例说明）．And it will bring them ③________（为他们带来的好处）.In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④____（我不同意该看法的理由一）.For another thing, ⑤____（反对的理由之二）． Form all what I have said,I agree to the thought that ⑥____（我对文章所讨论主题的看法）．
二、阐述主题题型
要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述．
1． 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义．
2． 分析并举例使其更充实．
The good old proverb ________（名言或谚语）reminds us that ________（释义）.Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,________（理由一）.For example, ____________（举例说明）.Secondly,________（理由二）.Another case is that ________（举例说明）.Furthermore , ____________（理由三）．
In my opinion, ________（我的观点）.In short, whatever you do, please remember the say____A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.三、解决方法题型
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径
1． 问题现状
2． 怎样解决（解决方案的优缺点）
In recent days, we have to face a problem——A, which is becoming more and more serious.First, ________（说明Ａ的现状）．Second, ________（举例进一步说明现状）Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing, ________（解决方法一）.For another ________（解决方法二）.Finally, ________（解决方法三）.Personally, I believe that ________（我的解决方法）.Consequently(作为结果，因此), I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________（带来的好处）.四、说明利弊题型
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）
1． 说明事物现状
2． 事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）
3． 你对现状（或前景）的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First ________（Ａ的优点之一）.Besides ____________（Ａ的优点之二）
.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that ________（Ａ的第一个缺点）．To make matters worse,____________（Ａ的第二个缺点）．
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to ________（我的看法）．
（From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way, ________（对前景的预测）
五、议论文的框架
（1）不同观点列举型（选择型）
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.（2）利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over（the issue that）___作文题目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___优点一______.And secondly ___优点二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺点一______.In addition, ____缺点二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.（3）答题性议论文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over（the issue that）__作文题目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途径一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____。
Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.（4）谚语警句性议论文
It is well know to us that the proverb: “ ___谚语_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____谚语的含义_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.（also theoretically）
A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.（一）
Nowadays many people prefer(______)because it plays a significant role in our daily life.Generally speaking,its advantages can be seen as follows.On one hand,(______).One the other hand,(_______).But every sword has two blades.The negative aspects are also aparent.One of the prominent disadvantages is that(______).To make matters worse,(______).Through the above analysis,I believe that The Positive aspects far outweighs its negative aspects.Whatever effects it has,one thing is certain,(_____)itself is neither good nor bad.It is the uses which is put on it that determines its value to our society.Some,others and I
（二）There is no consensus among people as to the view of(_____).The opinions vary from person to person.Some people hold the idea that(____).A case in point is that(_____).On the other hand, other may have a quite different view.According to them,(_____).The most typical example is that(______).Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments,I am inclined to agree with the latter.Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some extend,but(_____)is more convincing.My view
（三）When asked about(_____),some people hold the idea that(_____).As far as they are concerned,(______).But I could not agree with them in several points.In my opinion,(_____).The reason for my choice are listed as follows.First of all,(______).In addition,(______).Last but not the least,(______).For the reasons mentioned above,I firmly believe(______).一、篇章连贯：可以通过文章内容的内在联系来表现篇章的连贯性。
1、具体到一般： 表现形式为先举例具体的事例进行分析、说明，进而得出论证或结论，在段末往往以主题句的形式表现出来。
2、一般到具体：表现为在文章段首以主题句的形式出现，然后通过具体的叙述、说明、举例使主题句变得具体、明白、易懂。
二、常用句型
１、开头
It's well known to us that...Recently,...has been brought to popular attention/has become the focus of public concern.One of the universal issues we are faced with / that cause increasing concern is that...People's view/opinions /ideas on...vary from person to person.Some people think that...they hold this opinion because...However,others hold that...2、主要论述方法
A is to B what C is to D
According to..., but there is no evidence whatsoever to show...The example cited,while suggestive of these trends,is insufficient to warrant their truth because there is no reason to belivev that the data drawn form...is representative of...As it stands, this argument suffers from three critical flaws.3、结尾
In my opinion,it is more advisable to do...than to do
Taking into account all these factors,we may reasonably come to the conclusion that...It is time to take the advice of...and to put special emphasis on the improvement of...We should solve the problems that we are confronted/faced with
It is high time that we put an end to...Otherwise,...分析型作文
根据内容的不同，分析型作文一般可分为分析原因型、分析作用型、分析优劣型、分析影响型、分析状况型、分析决定因素型及分析解决方法型等不同类型。
引出原因的四种表达：There are three/various reasons for...;What are the possible reasons for.../Why...?;Possible reasons for...may be as follows;Possible reasons for...may be a , b and c;
引出具体解决方法的四种表达方式：There are three/various solutions to the problem;What are the possible solutions to it?;Possible solutions to it areas follows;Possbile solutions to it may be part-time job,scholarship and financial aid.常用句型
１、分析影响／利弊
There are three/a number of consequences of......brings about some great/serious consequences
...involves/entails some great/serious consequences
Its side effects are enormous
Perhaps the most serious/obvious consequence is...The immediate result is......deprives/strips people of......is/becomes the victim of...2、分析原因
There are probably three / a number of reasons for...why...?/What are the reasons for...?
This phenomenon involves / entails several complicated factors /reasons
...is mainly because of/due to/owing to...It is due to...,rather than..., let alone......ont only because...,but(also)because......partly/in part because..., partly/in part because...Corrupts/erodes one's minds/virtues
One/We may lay/place blame for B on A
...Contributes to...Some may attribute.../it to......undermines......poses a threat to...3、分析问题／现象
There are too many examples/instances of...Nowa days, every one of us is confronted/faced withtoo many examples/instances of...Some...Others...Still others...Even there are those who..Sometimes,...More often,...4、分析解决方法
Such a tragedy would not happen if we knew the following ways to handle...(虚拟语气)The key words are...,...and...Only in this way,could/can...(倒装结构）
It is high time that...The impact could be minimized if we follow the ways / suggestions above
These are the secrets of a successful...
第五篇：2011新东方英语四级作文(免费下载)
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模板一 How to Deal with Stress-如何面对压力
How to Deal with Stress(如何面对压力)1．为什么会有压力? 2．如何面对压力? [写作导航]第一段先用定义法指出压力是什么，以及压力的危害；第二段写压力的各种来源；第三段写如何面对压力，可针对第二段的来源，举例说明各种解决办法；最后一段提醒人们面对压力方法要对头，不可走歪路。
[范文]
Stress is a state of being upset that happens when we are under pressure.Both our feelings and our bodies get upset.We can even get emotionally and physically sick if we have too much stress for too long.Stress can come at us from every direction.For instance, it can come from fights with other people.It can come when we have too many things to do and too little time to do them.It can also come when we do not have enough money to pay for what we want.Since stress can make us sick, we have to learn how to deal with it.There are good ways and bad ways to do so.We should deal with stress in good ways, of course.Good ways to cut down on stress include changing our lifestyles.For example, we can learn either to get along with people or to stay away from them.We can decide what to do now, what to do later, and what to leave off doing forever.We can also figure out how to get money or we can cut down on what we want.We should not deal with stress in bad ways because bad ways to cut down on stress just lead to more troubles, for example, skipping out and leaving our work undone, blaming our problems on someone else, stealing or cheating.模板二 My View On Private Tutoring-家教之我见
My View On Private Tutoring(家教之我见)1．家教与日俱增； 2．家教的优缺点； 3．我的看法。
[写作导航]第一段可先围绕提纲开始，然后引出家教也有优缺点；第二段主要围绕优点来写，可从对家长、对从事家教的大学生以及对孩子本人等几方面来谈；第三段谈缺点，可从孩子的娱乐、从事家教的大学生的学习等方面来谈；第四段谈我的看法，弊大于利。[范文]
Nowadays, an increasing numbers of parents ask college students to act as private tutors to their kids.Like everything else, private tutoring also has advantages and disadvantages.Generally speaking, the advantages can be listed as follows.First, private tutoring is helpful to the parents.Many parents are so busy with their work that they have no time to help their children with their lessons.Besides, private tutoring is good for the tutors themselves.They can make some money while providing a service for others.Most important of all, private tutoring is beneficial for kids.Since the parents can't help when the kids have problems, private tutoring seems to be a wise choice.However, private tutoring also has disadvantages.To begin with, it takes so much of the kid's time that they can hardly find time for rest and amusement, which is harmful to their health.To
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make matters worse, some tutors have too many kids to teach so that they neglect their studies at school.Worst of ail, some tutors only offer tips for test taking rather than teaching kids what is really needed.According to the above analysis, it is clear that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.Therefore, it is proposed that great emphasis be laid on the stimulation of the kid' s learning and the cultivation of their potential Moreover, kids should be given more time to play so that a new and healthy generation will emerge.模板三 English Teaching at College-大学英语教学
English Teaching at College(大学英语教学)1．有人认为大学英浯教学非常成功。2．有人认为大学英语教学是个失败。3．我的看法或建议。
[写作导航]开始先分述两种看法，认为大学英语教学成功的人以大学英语考试人数一直猛增及英语能力强的人在各行各业所做的贡献为依据支持自己的观点；认为大学英语教学失败的人则以大学生口语差、翻译和写作水平低为依据支持自己的看法；而“我”认为大学英语教学有进步，但仍存在问题，如教师一言堂，应试教育等；“我”建议大学英语教学应彻底改革，大力培养学生的各项语言技能。[范文]
Some people say that English teaching at college in China has proved to be successful Take College English Test as an example, more than four million students have taken it and the number is still increasing year by year.This means that increasing numbers of people are aware of the necessity and importance of English learning.What is more, large numbers of students who are competent in English are making their contributions to the county in all walks of life.Others, on the other hand, suggest that English teaching at college in China is a complete failure.They suggest that, on the whole, most graduates still can't communicate with native speakers properly in spoken English.Besides, they are incompetent in both translation and writing.I think great progress has been made in English teaching at college in China over the past 15 years.Yet, there are still some problems.On the one hand, English teaching at college in China is still teacher centered, although the student centered approach has been advocated for years.The teacher dominates the class, leaving students little time to practice.On the other hand, English teaching at college in China is still test oriented.Passing College English Test has been regarded as a prerequisite for graduates to get jobs on the job market.So great emphasis is given on how to pass the tests rather than on how to develop the students' language skills.As a result, students do not have the language competence though most of them have passed College English Test.Therefore, it is my strong feeling therefore that English teaching at colleges in China should go through some radical reform.Priority should be given to the development of the four language skills rather than to develop the skills in passing the examination.模板四 How to Use Our Brain-用脑之道
How to Use Our Brain(用脑之道)1．人脑的重要性及作用。
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2．如何科学用脑。
[写作导航]先写大脑的特性和作用(复杂、智能的器官，使人区别于动物等)；再写大脑越用越灵，但过度使用也会出问题，为第三段作铺垫；第三段从两方面说明如何合理用脑：一是劳逸结合，手脑交替；二是从科学的角度，利用数据，说明过度用脑可能给大脑带来的伤害。
[范文]
Human brain is the most complex and intelligent mechanism in the world.It is the major factor that distinguishes man from animals.With our brain we get to know the world and make a good use of the world to our benefit.Our brain is a product of constant use through millions of years.Other things can be used up, but used properly, our brain can never be exhausted.In fact, the more we use it, the more capable and efficient it will become.Excessive use of the brain, however, will causea lot of problems.So it is useful to know how to use our brain wisely.First, handwork or physical labor is good exercise as well as rest for our brain.Doing handwork and brain work alternatively can help develop both our brain and hands.Secondly, we should avoid doing brainwork for long hours on end.The brain, though 3% of the body weight, when at work, consumes 20% of the oxygen carried by 16% of the blood in circulation.A long period of brainwork may cause, through lack of bodily activity, slow blood circulation and inadequate oxygen supply to the brain, resulting in inefficiency and possible damage to the brain.模板五 Student Use of Computers
Student Use of Computers Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Student Use of Computers.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below:
上图所示为1990年，1995年，2000年某校大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化。
1．请说明发生这些过程的原因(可从计算机的用途，价格或社会发展等方面加以说明)； 2．你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题? Student Use of Computers
This chart shows the increase of student use of computers from the year 1990 to 2000.As we can see, in 1990 the average number of hours a student spends on the computer per week is 2.In 1995, however, the number doubles and in 2000, it soars to 20 hours per week.There are many causes for this change.For one thing, computers can do a lor of things
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that may be difficult for man to do, making man's work easier.So, many people turn to computers for help when they want to have their job done.For another, computers are becoming cheaper day by day.As a result, many universities install them in large numbers and many families can afford to buy one, consequently, they are always available for the students to use.But the prime reason, I think, is that with the development of society, computers are used in ahnost all walks of life.Those who are specialized in operating computers are badly needed.If a student is good at computer, chances will be greater for him to get a job.Many problems also arise in students use of computers.One problem is that some students spend too much time sitting in front of their computers, as a result, their bealth is affected.The other problem is that some students chat or play video games for a long time on computers, wasting a lot of their precious time.So it is suggested that these students make a scientific and positive use of the computers.模板六 Ownership of Houses in a Big City Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Ownership of Houses in a Big City in China.You must base your composition on the following instructions(given in Chinese):
1．根据上图描述该市住房产权的变化； 2．分析产生这些变化的原因；
3．说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响。
Your composition should be no less than 120 words.Remember to write it neatly.Ownership of Houses in a Big City in China
Great changes have taken place in the ownership of houses in cities in China from 1990 to 2000.While the number of state owned houses decreased, that of private houses increased.In 1990, seventyfive percent of the houses were state owned whereas only twenty five percent of the houses were private.In 2000, however, the proportion of state owned houses reduced to twenty percent and that of private houses increased to eighty percent.There are many reasons for the great change in the ownership of houses in cities.The development of the economy is the most important one.Thanks to this development, people make more money than they used to.As a result, they can set aside some money to buy houses after their daily necessities are satisfied.The measures the government adopts may be the next incentive.Nowadays, people can have access to various kinds of loans from banks when buying the house.The large supply of housing may be the last reason.Wherever you go, you can see houses of various designs and sizes available for people to choose.These changes will have a great influence on both the living standard of the individual and the productivity of the society.People can live in the spacious houses of their own and the
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government can increase the productivity by using the money from selling the houses.The Problem of Human Population时间:2009-05-07 14:00作者: 点击:1051次
模板七 The Problem of Human Population
1．据统计一千年前地球上有不到4亿人口。2．人口暴涨的原因。3．因此……
It has been estimated that a thousand years ago there were less than 400 million people on earth.However, in the recent thousand years human population has increased nearly 20 times.Nowadays the world population has reached more than 7000 million.The population.First, a lot of people can't get employment, which is a universal problem in the world.Second, in developing countries there are not enough shelters for too many people and so some people are not properly housed and even are exposed to the elements.Third, in underdeveloped countries a lot of people suffer from hunger because of food shortage, which in turn causes many other problems, malnutrition, disease, etc.Fourth, there are not enough schools for so many people and so a lot of people are illiterate.Therefore, to eliminate these problems, human beings should take effective measures to control population.模板八 How to Reduce Stress-如何减少压力
How to Reduce Stress(如何减少压力)1．现代社会人们的压力与日俱增； 2．压力太大的危害； 3．减少压力的办法。
[写作导航]首先陈述随着现代生活节奏的加快，人们的压力也在增大，虽然适当的压力对人有好处，但压力太大就会产生副作用，从而影响工作、学习和健康，所以要学会减轻压力；第二段阐述减轻压力的办法，比如降低对自己的要求、接受现实、不要攀比，多与朋友
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沟通等；最后总结全文，提出希望。
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As the pace of modern life continues to quicken, many people are in the habit of rushing through life.Some admit that stress seems to be on the increase all the time.A certain degree of stress is beneficial to us, but too much stress is certainly harmful, and sometinles may even harmful to our health and physique.So it is necessary to know how to reduce stress.There are many ways that can help us solve this problem, but the following may be the most effective.First, learn to COllie to terms with yourselves.Don't set a goal that is too high because there are many things in this world that are beyond your reach.Learn to be content to go as far as you can.Second, learn to COllie to terms with the world around you.Don't try to change other people or other things.There are people and things in this world that you can do nothing about.So learn to accept them.Third, don't be too interested in material things and don't try to “keep up with the Joneses.” Don't harbor any jealousy, vanity or resentment to others.Be satisfied with what you have.Finally, keep in touch with your friends.Talk with them, share with them your happiness and misery.This will help to make you feel better.These are not necessarily the only ways to solve the problem, and it is my hope that everyone can reduce the too much stress in his work and study and live a relaxed happy life.模板九My View on Job-hopping
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on dob-hopping.You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1．有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作，因为…… 2．有些人喜欢经常更换工作，因为…… 3．我的看法。
My View on Job-hopping
People have different attitudes towards their work.Some prefer to stick to one occupation as their lifelong career.These people are of the opinion that one can never do his work well unless he is devoted to only one job in his lifetime.So if one changes his job frequently, he will not get the necessary experience needed in his work.Others, on the other hand, like to change their jobs at times.In their opinion, people work in order to make more money.If they havea chance to get a better paid job, they will certainly try to get this chance.Besides, if a person does only one job all his life, he will certainly be bored with it.My idea is that interest is the most important if one wants to excel others in his job.So if a person is not interested in his job, job hopping is normal and even necessary.Otherwise, he will suffer from his work, and inevitably, he is not likely to succeed in his career.模板十 How to Read Better and Faster
How to Read Better and Faster(如何读得好又快)1．阅读的重要性；
2．如何克服不良阅读习惯；
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3．如何读的又快又好；
[写作导航]第一段举例说明阅读的重要，并引出如何才能读得好又快；第二段详细列举各种阅读的不良习惯，如出声读、摇头晃脑读、用手指着读等；第三段是如何成为读得好又快的读者的具体建议，如地方要安静、精力要集中、靠上下文猜词义等；最后简练结尾。
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Reading is not only relaxation.To keep up with their work, many people must read letters, reports, publications, office documents, a never ending flood of words.In an examination, the ability to read and to comprehend quickly can mean the difference between success and failure.But the fact is that most of us are poor readers.Fortunately, almost anyone can learn to read faster and with greater comprehension.Here are some suggestions on how to deal with some bad reading habits.If you mouth each word as you read, this slows down you toa snail's speed.The best way to correct this problem is to place a finger on your lips and hold them firmly shut till you've broken the habit.If your head swings as your eyes move along a line, lock your head between your hands as you read.If you point to each word with your finger, grip the reading material firmly with both hands or sit on your hands while you read.Here are more suggestions to train you to read better and faster: Read in aquiet spot, as free from distraction as possible.But don't daydream;force yourself to concentrate on what you are reading.If you come across unfamiliar words, try to guess the meaning from the context, then check the meaning in a dictionary later.Don't reread.Pretend the words disappear as your eyes pass over them.You'll probably be surprised to find that you didn't miss anything important.Try to glance only at nouns and verbs in sentences to see how much you can get out of reading this way.The secret of success is constant practice.What you get will be worth the effort 模板十一
Is It Harder for an Adult to&n Is It Harder for an Adult to Learn New Languages?(成人更难学外语吗?)1．成人学习一种新的语言是否比儿童困难? 2．阐述原因。[写作导航]第一段从人们的普遍看法入手，即年龄越大，学外语越难，然后提出质疑：这是真的吗?否定之后指出，这并不一定，通常随着年龄增加，学语言的能力也增强；第二段陈述原因，一是因为成人社会阅历丰富，二是因为成人逻辑思维能力强，三是因为成人自控能力超过儿童；最后一段以鼓励成人学好外语结尾。[范文]
Most people think that the older you get, the harder it is to learn a new language.This is because they believe that children learn languages more easily and efficiently than adults.Thus, at some point in our lives, maybe around ages 12 or 13, we lose the ability to learn languages well.Is it true that children learn a foreign language more efficiently than adults? It may not necessarily be the case.In fact, the ability to learn language increases as the age increases, from childhood to adulthood.There are several possible explanations for these findings.For one thing, adults know more about the world and, therefore, are able to understand things more easily than children.Moreover, adults can use logical thinking to help them see patterns in the language.Finally, adults have more self discipline than children.All in all, the common conception that children are better language learners than adults may
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not necessarily be true.Hopefully, this would encourage adult learners to become successful language learners, no matter what new languages they want to learn.模板十二
Why My Spoken Enslish is Poor?
Why My Spoken Enslish is Poor?(口语不佳探因)1．英浯口语很重要；
2．我的英语口语差的主要原因； 3．我的对策。
[写作导航]本文应首先阐述英语，语的重要性，紧接着举例支持，说明英语口语在现代社会中的重要；第二段结合“我”自己，列出英语口语不好的几个主要原因；第三段指出，只要有决心，措施跟上，英语口语就一定会好起来。文章用汉语格言“世上无难事，只要有心人。”或英语格言“Where there is a will，there is a way．”收尾，会很有说服力。
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When we study English, we learn to listen, speak, read and write.Of these abilities, speaking is the most important.As we all know, the fundamental means of commUnication is speaking.Onlyby speaking to each other directly can two people exchange their ideas freely and efficiently.This is especially true in modern times when we live in a “global village”, where joint ventures and overseas tourism become commonplace.Many employers in joint ventures speak English, so do most of the tourists.Many difficulties will arise if we can't express ourselves fluently in English.In spite of my awareness of its importance, I seldom find chances to practice and improve my oral English.So, I am still very weak with regard to this respect.one reason is that my pronunciation and intonation aren't good enough.The other is that I am so shy that I am always too nervous to find the exact words to express my ideas and feelings.As a result the best way for me to do is to remain silent when others are practicing and making great progress in their oral English everyday.Now I am attaching much more importance to oral English and I have made up my mind to seize every opportunity to practice.I begin to participate actively in all kinds of English activities, such as going to “English Corners”, talking in English with my classmates and with native speakers.“Nothing is difficult in the world if you really put your heart to it.” as the Chinese saying goes.If I can build up my confidence, if I am not afraid of losing face any more, if I really work hard on it, I am sure my oral English will be excellent someday.模板十三 Advantages and Disadvantages of Cell&nbs Advantages and Disadvantages of Cell Phones(手机的利弊)1．手机使用的普遍性； 2．手机的优点；
3．手机的危害及我的建议。
[写作导航]先指出当前手机使用很普遍，然后用事实(随处可见人们用手机通话，许多大学生、高中生都有手机)来支持主题句；手机的优点主要是方便通信，甚至上网，还体现在突发事件(疾病、交通事故)的求助上；手机的缺点主要是辐射和干扰他人，因此我建议尽量少用，重要场合(开会、上课时)关机。
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Cell phones have become increasingly popular in China these days.Wherever you go you can see people using cell phones.Many college students, even high school students, have cell phones.Cell phones have brought people a lot of benefits, but the most important is that they are convenient.With cell phones in their hands, they can keep in touch with anybody they want.If they want to get some information from the Internet, they can easily have their dream realized via cell phones too.Furthermore, if someone has a heart attack or a traffic accident, a call to emergency hospital or to the police can quickly bring him the help he wants.However, cell phones can also bring people problems.The most serious is the electric wave radiation which is thought to be harmful to users' brains.Another problem is that when people are having a meeting or having a class or at a concert etc, the ring of the cell phone may interrupt others.So I think people should use cellphones as little as possible and turn them off when they are attending important meetings or attending classes.模板十四
Why Living Off Campus Is Popular?
Why Living Off Campus Is Popular?(校外租房何以流行?)1．学生校外租房住宿较普遍； 2．校外租房住宿的原因； 3．我的看法。
[写作导航]第一段从学生租房现象普遍过渡到探究其原因，结尾句引出下段；第二段首先指出校外租房住宿的好处，首先，住在校外可省去与他人相处的烦琐，可集中精力学习；其次，住在校外可有更多自由，如熬夜、不受限制地上网等；最后，住在校外可有更多的隐私权；结尾段谈“我”的看法，即事物都是一分为二的，住在校外会失去体验校园丰富生活的机会，还会错过学会与他人相处的机会等。
[范文]Nowadays living off campus enjoys great popularity among college students.Why, then, do students do so when they are provided with very modern apartments and good services on campus? The reasons can be listed as follows.First, living off-campus can relieve the student from time consuming and energy consuming trivialities.Since people from different places have different personalities, habits, and interests, etc, some students think that it is difficult for them to get along with their pals.If they live off-campus, they don't have to spend time worrying about and thinking of how to get along with their roommates.In this way, they will have more time for their studies.Secondly, living off-campus can offer them a lot of freedom.Freed from the regulations of the university, they can do whatever they want in whatever time they like.For example, they can stay up late, reading books or surfing on the Internet.Lastly, living off campus can give them more privacy.If they live in a dormitory, they have no “human rights” so far as privacy is concerned.I think living off-campus has both its benefits and shortcomings.If we live off campus we will not have the chance to experience the rich and colorful social life on campus.Away from our classmates, we will not have the chance to learn how to communicate with those who have divergent opinions.We will lose the chance to learn to cooperate with others.模板十五
HOW to Succeed in a dob Interv
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HOW to Succeed in a dob Interview(面试成功之术)1．求职面试非常普遍； 2．如何在面试中取得成功。
[写作导航]第一段可写成引入段，指出面试很普遍，但仍有些人不知如何成功面试，自然转入第二段；第二段可从衣着、言谈、自信等方面着手，也应包括自己对专业知识、工作经历和兴趣的介绍；最后一段是结尾段，可总结全篇收尾。
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When applying for a job, many people, school graduates in particular, have to have an interview with the employer before they are offered the job.Many graduates, however, do not know how to succeed in such an interview.The following are some of the rules to abide by.To succeed in an interview, the applicant should demonstrate certain personal and professional qualities.Since much of the first and lasting impression of a person is the clothes he wears, the applicant should take care to appear well but modestly dressed, avoiding the extremes of too elaborate or too casual clothes.Besides, he should pay close attention to his manner of speaking, which should be neither showy nor familiar but rather straightforward, granmatically accurate, and friendly.In addition, he should be prepared to talk knowledgeably about the requirements of the position for which he is applying in relation to his own professional experience and interests.And finally, a really impressive applicant must convey a sense of serf confidence and enthusiasm for work, a factor that att interviewer value highly.The applicant who displays these characteristics, with just a little luck, witt certainly succeed in the typical personal interview.If you can bear these rules in mind, chances are that you will succeed in a job interview The Importance of Physical Exercises-体时间:2009-05-07 14:01作者: 点击:1231次
模板十六 The Importance of Physical Exercises(体育锻炼的重要性)汉语提示：据报道，我国年轻人，特别是大学生的健康状况不容乐观。请写一篇150字左右的文章，说明体育锻炼的重要性。
[写作导航]先从所给提示“我国年轻人，特别是大学生的健康状况不容乐观”入手，引入主题：造成这一结果的原因是忽视体育锻炼；第；段详细列举体育锻炼的重要性，如加速血液循环、增进新陈代谢、消耗多余脂肪、促进睡眠等；最后一段总结体育锻炼的好处，呼吁人们积极参加锻炼。
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It is reported that the health of young people in China, college students in particular, is not as good as is supposed to be.There are many reasons for this fact, but the main reason is that many people ignore the importance of physical exercises.Why, then, are physical exercises so important to our health? First, physical exercises can improve blood circulation, speeding up the supply of nutrients and oxygen to every part of the body and the removal of waste from the blood through sweating and exhalation.Secondly, physical exercises can promote a healthy metabolism.It helps with the digestion and absorption of food, thus giving everyone a good appetite.Thirdly, physical exercise can help consume excessive fat in the body, preventing people from putting on too much weight, thus keeping them in good shape.Finally, after physical exercises we usually need a good rest and a sound sleep at night, refreshing us for the next day's work.In conclusion, physical exercises not on[y keep us fit and strong, but also help us to be
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successful in our lives.It is, therefore, strongly suggested that young people spare some time to take an active part in various kinds of physical exercises.模板十七
Harmfulness of Video Games-电子游戏危害谈
Harmfulness of Video Games(电子游戏危害谈)1．许多年轻人沉溺于电子游戏中。2．电子游戏的危害。3．解决的办法。
[写作导航]第一段可陈述许多年轻人陷入电子游戏不能自拔的现象；第二段罗列电子游戏的危害，如对身体的危害、对学习和工作的影响，以及不良电子游戏对年轻人道德会产生不良影响等；第三段可从充分认识电子游戏的危害、取缔非法网吧和鼓励开发健康游戏等方面提出解决问题的办法。
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In spite of objections from public opinion, many students can't draw themselves away from video games.It seems that the more they are prohibited from playing the games, the more they are tempted to do so.Many students indulge themselves in playing these games.Video games are harmful to both the individual and society in many ways.First, they endanger the young people's health.Sitting in front of the computer for hours on end is bad for the player's eyesight as well as his entire physique.Secondly, they distract the young people%attention from their work and study.Absorbed in the games, the player often forgets to go to work or class.Sometimes even if they are at work or in class, they are still thinking of the games they played or are going to play after work or after class.As a result, they quickly fall behind others in their work and study.Thirdly, they lead young people to moral degradation.Some young people are especially interested in games that are filled with violence.If they play these games a long time, they may also settle disagreements through violence, which may give rise to higher crime rate.Therefore, it is time we took effective measures to solve this problem.On the one hand, young people should be made fully aware of the danger of video games.On the other, illegal video game houses should be eliminated, and software producers should be encouraged to make more beneficial video games in the future.模板十八
Why More and More Students Are
Why More and More Students Are Absent from Class?(学生何故逃课?)1．有人认为学生缺课的原因在他们本身； 2．有人认为学生缺课的原因在老师； 3．我认为„„
[写作导航]第一段可从两方面陈述提纲，然后引出“我”的看法；第二段先分析学生方面的原因：大学生自由多了，如不严格要求自己，就会睡过头、上网或干其它事情；还有些学生误认为工作经历比书本知识更重要，因此选择了打工而不去上课；然后分析老师方面的原因，如教学方法陈旧，教材过时，课堂乏味等；最后一段提醒人们关注并解决这一问题。
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Increasing numbers of college students are cutting classes, which has caused a great deal of social concern and criticism.Some think that the larger part of the blame should go to the
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students.Others, however, think that it is the teachers who should be responsible.But I think both the students and the teachers have fault of their own.Compared with middle school students, college students have relatively more “freedom”.If they are not strict with themselves, chances are that they will oversleep in the morning, go to the Internet or find other activities to entertain themselves during class hours.In addition, some students have the misconception that work experience is more important than theoretical knowledge when it comes to job hunting.So they busy themselves in part time jobs when they should be attending class.On the other hand, some teachers still conduct classes in the old fashioned way.Their classes are so boring that they make many students fall asleep.Besides, some textbooks are so out of date that they think it a waste of time attending classes.In a word, both the students and the teachers should be wide awake to this serious problem and make great efforts to use the time at college to its best advantage.
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