开放英语英语作文集锦

第一篇：开放英语英语作文集锦

作文1（日常活动、主要工作、社交生活）Dear Bob,I’ll tell you something above my daily life in this email and hope you will find it interesting.I usually get up early and go to work at 8 o’ clock.I have lunch in the office.And I come back home at six.As a secretary, I deal with phone calls, emails and faxes during work hour’s.I also do the paper work for the manager.After work, I like to do shopping with friends or watch TV at home.Sometimes, I also like to chat on the Internet.Best regards,Michelle

作文2（童年的梦想、目前的情况、对未来的希望）

fun in a big shopping mall and you can enjoy a more colorful nightlife.But there are also many disadvantages.It is much nosier than in the country.Air pollution is more serious.It is not easy to park your car.It costs more to live in town.To name but a few is enough.Therefore, I prefer country life.作文7（保持身体健康的重要性、方法、意义）Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy.Without a healthy body, we can do nothing.For me, there main ways to keep healthy.First ,it necessary to keep a balanced diet ,which is the basis of good health.It is better

作文11（理想的工作是什么、理由、如何实现理想）

Everybody has his dream for his career in the future.He or she might want to be a teacher ,a doctor ,a scientist ,a sportsperson and so on.To tell you the truth ,my ideal job is in business.The idea came into being when I was a child.With the development of market economy ,there are many prosperous opportunities in business.I like reading stories about some successful businessmen such as Bill Gates ,Li Jiacheng ,etc.I believe I will be a man like them some day.Now, I am majoring in Dear Jennifer,Thank you for telling me about yourself.I’d like to let you know more about me too.As a child, I wanted to be a detective.I thought a detective was really great because he could solve criminal cases to do justice.But my dream never came true.I’m now a librarian, dealing with books every day.The work is nothing thrilling, but I like it.Since there are more and more electronic materials, I hope that we have an e-library built soon.Looking forward to hearing from you again.Best wishes,Lan

作文3（事件发生的时间和地点、人物、事件的经过）

One day last week, a girl parked her car outside a fashion house.As soon as she was inside, two men opened the car door, started the engine and drove away in just one minute.There was a police patrol car nearby.So the girl got in the police car and they drove in the direction where the thieves escaped.Twenty minutes later, they found the car waiting at a busy crossroad for the traffic lights to turn green.Needless to say, the car thieves were caught red-handed.作文4（自主学习与远程教育、自主学习与合作学习、你自己的学习情况）

Autonomous learning is an important learning style in distance education.It is an essential skill for distance learners because they study alone most of the time.They do not meet their tutors or classmates very often.However, distance learners can learn a lot from each other.So autonomous learning and collaborative learning go hand in hand.I am a distance learner.I have to do most learning tasks by myself.Meanwhile we have group activities every two weeks to complete some learning tasks or share experiences.I have found both forms of learning very helpful.作文5自我介绍

My name is Li Xiaoping, I am 23 years old.I am from Lanzhou city of Gansu province.Now I live in Jiayuguan.I am a teacher.I work in a school here.I teach English and I like my work.I am a outgoing person and I have many friends.I have a lot of hobbies, such as swimming, bicycling, playing badminton, walking, and so on.I often play with my friends in weekends。

作文6（有一种观点认为：城市生活比乡村生活好、你对这种观点的看法、你的结论）Some people believe that town life is better than country life.I don’t agree with this.Town life can be convenient to us in many aspects.For example , you can move around easily ,shopping can be more for us to have more fruit and exercises everyday.Secondly ,it is important to take regular exercises ,such as swimming ,jogging and so on.Last but not least ,it is essential to keep in a good mood.Relaxation and entertainment are ways to renew our spirits and release our stress.When we make healthy habits a part of our everyday life, we are bound to keep healthy.作文8（最喜欢的交通方式、理由、结论）In a modern city, there are many means of transportation, such as subway, taxi, bus and so on.But my favorite means of transportation is by bike.First ,riding a bike is good for keeping healthy.I spend one hour riding a bike to my office on my working day ,and I think it is a good form of physical exercise.Secondly ,it is money-saving.Recently ,the private car drivers always complain the price of gas is higher and higher ,but if you ride a bike ,it will cost you nothing.Thirdly ,it is beneficial for protecting the environment ,so it is a “green” form of transportation.Therefore, although it has some disadvantages, I like riding a bike best.作文9（你家的位置、房间的功能、表达对家具条件的态度）

My home is a newly-built house in the north of the city.We have three rooms in addition to the kitchen and bathroom.The first room is the main room or living room.It is for having meals ,relaxing ,reading ,watching television and so on.It is the busiest room in the house.The second room is my daughter’s bedroom.She sleeps and dresses there.The third room belongs to my wife and me.It seems quite spacious because we have little furniture.We sleep ,prepare lessons and generally relax there.I think home is cozy and I like my home.作文10（喜欢的电视节目、理由、结论）CCTV today offers a great variety of programmes to meet different need and tastes.For example ,the weather forecast ,serials ,films ,sports and so on.My favorite TV programmes ,however ,is the news.There are several points that are worth mentioning.For one thing, it covers news about important events both at home and abroad.Besides the news it provides is timely and reliable.Finally, it broadcasts in the evening during the so-called “golden time”.It saves me much time reading through news-papers for current affairs.In short, watching the news on CCTV has become part of my daily life.Computering.I must study hard to get myself qualified for my future job.作文12描述你家某个房间的室内情况 My Bedroom，I have a small plat with three rooms.The biggest one is my bedroom, which is decorated beautiful and cozy.The big bed is so attractive when I am off duty every night.There is a TV set with the size of 27 inch in front of my bed.So I can often watch TV on my bed very comfortably.There is also a computer beside my bed.Sometimes I get up to go surfing in the mid-night.I like my curtain very much.Its pink color is charming.I do not like my bureau（衣柜）.I am waiting for the next salary to change it.13、（1）了解对方后的情况（2）你的近况（3）邀请对方方便时来访

Dear Ben,We haven’t seen each other for ages since graduation.How are you!How's your life in that city? Have you been used to the food there? Please write to let me know more about your life there.Well, I'm fine and last week our whole class went to visit the Oriental Pearl Tower in Shanghai.You can see really beautiful view from the top of it.Next month, I am going to take the CET-6 test and I'm busy preparing for it.If you are free, welcome to my hometown.I will be a satisfying guide.Yours sincerely, William14、（1）告诉对方最近将去旅游（2）了解对方所在地的旅游景点（3）请对方给予安排 Dear Tom, How are you!I have finished my final exams these days and I'm going to pay a visit to your city.I've been fascinated by your hometown.Would you like to tell me something about those places of interest? I want to have a preview of your city and decide where to go.And please tell me how you’ll arrange my schedule.I don't care whether to live in the hotel or stay at your home.I'm looking forward to your letter.Yours sincerely, William15、（1）了解对方近来的情况（2）通知对方同学将在元旦举行聚会（3）请对方参加 Dear Martha,How are you!How's your life in that city? Have you been used to the food there? Please write to let me know more about your life there.Well, we are going to have a party on the New Year's Day.I hope you can come and celebrate with us.We have not seen each other for a long time and we all miss you.So welcome back and we will have fun together.Please write to tell me about your plan then.I'm looking forward to your letter。Yours sincerely, William16、（1）了解对方最近的学习情况（2）你的学习情况（3）请对方说说提高英语水平的经验。

Dear Franklin,How are you!How is your study recently? Do you like your new school there? Generally speaking, I'm handling my study well.But I still find myself weak in grammar and I also want to know how to improve my reading skills.I have tried many ways, however, they didn't work.I want to know how you study English so well and would you like to share your experience with me? I'm looking forward to your help.Yours sincerely, William17、（1）你的近况（2）请对方帮你购买英语语法书（3）邀对方方便时来访

Dear Kevin,How are you!I have been very especially good at English and Computer.In my off hours I often swim, play football, and I'm also interesting in music and collecting stamps.I'm always interesting in entering an multinational company, I'm glad to have the chance of this interview please me a chance.介绍无锡的行政区划: Wuxi city has controlled over two county-level cities and seven districts.The two county-level cities are Jiangyin and Yixing.The seven districts are Chongan, Nanchang, Beitang, Binhu, Xishan, Huishan, and the new district.Wuxi is well-known for its light industry and beautiful sceneries.Yinxing is the capital of pottery.The rich Huaxi Village is in Jiangyin.Chongan district is the center of Wuxi.There are many big department stores 24：写一篇短文，讲述开学以来你在英语学习上取得的进展。字数在50-70词之间为宜。This term I learned a lot of new things: new words, new phrases and many English stories.Because I studied hard on it, I could understand many texts well and I could read some simple English novels.Besides, I could talk with foreign friends in English.In a word, I made a great progress in English.I liked English very much.25：写一篇短文，讲述你童年的一件趣事。字数在50-70词之间为宜。

hot summer day when I was four years old, I begged my mum to buy me a bear-shaped ice cream.I couldn’t understand why the ice cream is giving off steam.After a while, I found the bear’s nose was gone.well since I came to this new city.I love my new school and get along quite well with my new friends.Now I need your help to buy some grammar books on English for me.They were all sold out here in the bookshop of my city.I don't need them so urgently.It is Ok if you bring me next time when you are free to come and visit me.I'm looking forward to you letter.Yours sincerely, William18、（1）告诉对方你将参加英语4级考试（2）询问对方如何做准备（3）请对方建议一些参考书

Dear Mike,How are you!I will take the CET-4 exam next week.I am not very clear what to do.I know you are very good at English, and would you please give me some suggestions? I found myself weak in vocabulary and reading.I'd appreciate it if you can recommend some useful reference books to me.I'm looking forward to your letter.Best wishes, Yours sincerely, William19、One possible version AnnouncementDear Teachers and Students:A lecture will be delivered by Professor Wang from the English Department.It will start at 2:30 p.m.in room 518 this Saturday.Professor Wang will mainly talk about the following ideas of Adam: In a capitalist system people are selfish and forced to do business in order to become rich and strong in power.This is good because it can help factories produce more goods at lower prices, provide more jobs for people and improve the whole society.All the students teachers of the English Department are asked to attend the lecture and have a discussion after the lecture the same day.20、你是李冬，刚刚大学毕业申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英语写一篇介绍自己基本情况的短文。短文应包括下表所列的全部内容。姓 名：李 冬 出生年月： 1982年5月 出生地：广州市I学 历：1989 – 1994 光明小学1994 – 2000 广州市第七中学2000 – 2004 中山大学所学专业：市场管理特长：英语、电脑星魂业余爱好：游泳、集邮、足球、流行音乐有注意：1.必须用短文形式;2.词数100左右;3.短文第一句已经写好。

My name is Li Dong , I 'm just graduated from Zhongshan University.I'm born in may 1982 in Guangzhou, before study in Zhongshan University I studied in Light grade school and The NO.7 middle school of Guangzhou.I studies market managing in as my major in University.And I'm there.Wuxi is my hometown.I love my hometown Wuxi.介绍无锡公园(旅游): There are many tourism attractions in Wuxi.Some of them are very famous, such as LiYuan Garden, XiHui Park and Nanchan Temple.LiYuan Garden is near the Taihu Lake.XiHui Park is in Beitang district.Nanchan Temple is in the center of Wuxi.People can go there by bus.21开学以来，我更加认真地学习英语，通过自己的努力，我的英语水平有了进一步的提高。词汇量有了较的大的提高，阅读水平也有了较大的进步，做作业的速度也有了较大的提高。我非常高兴，要谢谢老师的鼓励和支持。School begins, I more and in earnest study English, passing own effort, my English level had the further exaltation.The phrase remits the big exaltation that the quantity compares, reading the level to also have the bigger progress, the speed that overdoes the industry also had the bigger exaltation.I am very happy, thank the teacher's encouragement and the support

22小时候，我最讨厌学校考试，有一次，在就要考试的前一天的晚上，我非常紧张地守住日历，不准任何人去撕掉，妈妈走过来，问我：“这是为什么？”，我大声地说：“如果不撕掉这一页，明天我就不用考试了”。现在想起来还很好笑。

In childhood, I disliked the school examination most , having once, at the evening of the first 1 day that will examine, I all nervely guarded the calendar, prohibiting anyone to tore, mother came over here, asking me:“This is why?”, I loudly say:“If don't tore this page, tomorrow I need not examined”.Think of now still very funny.23我在一家电信部门工作已经二十多年，现在主要负责安排公司的行政事务，管理着车队，安排汽车接送职工上下班，安排公务用车，每天都是早出晚归，非常辛苦，但是，我一直都非常喜欢我的工作。

I believes the section work more than 20 years at an appliance already, mainly being responsible for the administration business that arranges the company now, managing the car brigade, arranging the automobile to connect to send the officers and workers the top and bottom class, arranging the official business with the car, everyday is go out early and return till late, very hard, but, I have been all liking my work very much.“Eat it now or it will melt soon,” mum said.I refused: “No, no!I will eat it after I put the nose back on the bear.”26：写一篇短文，描述你的工作。字数在50-70词之间为宜。

I am a landscape gardener in a local gardening company.I love the spring because I like the green grass and all kinds of beautiful flowers in the garden.So I chose this job—landscape gardener.My job is very interesting.It is a favorite time for me to work in a garden because I can make a very nice environment for people

第二篇：高考英语开放作文万能模版

没有时间的万能模版

As we can see in the picture, there is a 东西while 东西Why? Different people may hold different opinions.In my opinion, however, the picture seems to convey a significant and 来（这里没办法，只能靠自己）.As we know, such a phenomenon is not rare nowadays but very common.But few people realize the essence of this problem due to a lack of potential awareness.Therefore, we should pay more attention and take some effective measures, which is definitely of great help and benefit.For example, we should就可以，很简单就行。Only in this can we deal with such a problem effectively and properly.Similarly, only in this way can our life be more harmonious.•

第三篇：开放英语3作文

开放英语3参考作文 patient as well as dynamic.Besides that,1.描述你的朋友 he has a good eye for detail I have got a good friend.Her name is Wu Ming.with an excellent memory.He likes taking She is tall with dark eyes, dark hair and white skin.responsibility for doing things.She looks like her mother.He is the best person you want to hire.I I am now studying in STRTVU for my further

certificate and knowledge.I come here to study half a month.Every time I have to study several

subjects or get the CIA, listening, and computerShe likes walking, talking, and discussing life with her father.She also likes looking after animals.She is artistic and musical, very funny and very good natured.She is outgoing and she likes meeting new people.She is now studying at Nanjing Radio and TV University.She likes learning English via Internet.She hopes working in London in the near future.2.给商场经理写一封70-90词的投诉信 Dear Mr.Gao, I am writing to complain about the work you have done to my colour TV, which I bought from your shop.I bought the colour TV from your shop last week.But when I came home and turned it on, I found there was no picture at all.I tried and tried for a long time, however, there’s still no picture.So I visited your shop again, telling them about the problem.But they said it must be my fault.I am very dissatisfied with your service.I hope you will replace the TV with a new one or refund me as soon as possible.Yours sincerely,(your name)3.写一篇100词左右的短文，描述你就读的学校的情况 I am studying at Nanjing Radio and TV University.This university offers variety of open and distance courses for adult learners.The students can study here and receive a diploma when they get enough credits.This university has three campuses and many classroom buildings.In these buildings there are many computers.They are all linked to the Internet.The students can use computers to learn the courses at home or in the offices.However, they also can go to the classroom buildings to have face-to-face lessons.This university is really good for busy adults.It will be a very interesting and exciting learning experience to study at this university.4.写一封介绍信 Dear Mr.Smith, I am writing to introduce Mr.Wang, my former student to you.He would like to make an appointment to see you as soon as possible.He wants to apply for the marketing manager post.As far as I know, he is the kind of the person working to deadlines and working alone.He is

think you will give him an opportunity for an interview.I look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely, 5.介绍自己 My name is Wing Ling.I was born in Nanjing City, Jiangsu Province.My father worked as an engineer in a large factory which makes colour TV.I studied in a primary school and a secondary school in Nanjing.Later I studied at a local vocational college majoring in business.I am an office worker at a big company.I live in a flat not very far from my office building.I am currently working on open courses which are offered by central Radio and TV University.I am working very hard at them.In my spare time I likewatching TV, listening to radio and sometimes I go swimming with my friends.At the weekends I often go out shopping in different stores and supermarkets, and sometimes stay at home reading.6.谈一谈你所在城镇发生的变化 Great changes have happened in my hometown.Ten years ago there were only ten homes, however there are hundred new homes.In the enter of the town, there is one very wonderful statue, many tourists often take photos there.A lot of old blocks of flats have been demolished.Many families have bought new cars, so the local government has to issue new parking regulations.At present one new school is being built.It will be finished next month.People in my hometown are leading one happy life there.7.有关自己爱好 My hobby is reading.Since I was seven years old, I have been reading in my spare time.I often read novles, peoms, stories and so on.I often go to the library to borrow some books which I am interested.Sometimes I go to the bookshop to select some.There are over 2000 books in my study now.My friends often come and enjoy reading with me.I like reading so much that I have a good knowledge in writing.I have got over 10 awards.I am now learning to write peoms.In my life books are my best friends and I will like them for ever.8.自己学习情况介绍 coaching.In fact , the

knowledge in every subject is hard for me, because I don’t havetoo much

time in teaching myself in the spare time.I have to work on the

weekdays.I work in school, so sometimes I have to do extra work for the

graduating grades.Thanks to the teaching methods of the RTVU, I think

it’s a little easy to understand the contents of the subjects.The

coaching teachers are always caring for us in studying here.So I think it

looks like a real university or a warm home for me.9.作文2：Notice

假设你是王华，想去北京21st Century 报社应

聘，请根据下面表格写一封80-90词左右的应聘信。

姓名吴华职业记者工龄11年

出生日期1965年7月6日出生地中国吉林长春

求职信

Dear Sirs,My name is Wuhua, born on July 6th, 1965 in Changchun, Jilin Province,China.I am a journalist and have already had eleven years of working

experience.I can speak Japanese and Germany besides English and of course I’m good at operating computer.I graduated from Journalism Department of Beijing University in 1990 and

then worked as a journalist in Shenzhen Daily till December, 1996.I studied in BBC from 1997 to 1998 and since I came back in January, 1999, I have been head of the news section.I will be very lucky if I can work in your newspaper----The 21st Century.And I think I have abilities to do the job well.Yours Sincerely, Wuhua

10.作文1：假设你是汕尾广播电视大学学生干

部，贵校要举办一次英语讲座。请根据下面提示，用英文写一份书面通知。全篇字数：100词左右。

时间：2004年5月5日，星期六晚7：30~9：30。

地点：多媒体报告厅主讲人：美籍教授Iycidro.内容：美国印第安人与美国历史。

注意事项：可邀请朋友或校外同学参加，不要迟到。听完报告后，要求用英文写一篇感想。

通 知NOTICE

There will be an English lecture on American Indians and America History

by Miss Iycidro, an American professor from Shenzhen TV University.It will be given in the

hall of the Culture Centre in our university on

Saturday evening from 7:30 to 9:30, May 5, 2004.Those who are interested

in it are welcome.And you may also invite your friends from other schools to attend it.Be sure not to be late.After the lecture , please write a report about it in English.Student Union May 4, 2004

11.描述你敬佩的或特别喜欢的家庭成员

I’m going to write about someone I look up to.The person I look up to is my father.His name is Gao Ming.I look up to him because he is wise and kind.He is always very kind to my mother, the children, our relatives and our friends and his friends.he is

always ready to give his hand to all the others.He always knows what he can do and how he can do.He never does something wrong.He is tall and handsome.He has a round face and bright eyes.He smiles alot.He has a darker skin.12.利用提示就一起谋杀案写一篇新闻报道 Criminals:A woman Verdict:Guilty Date of trial:Yesterday

Crime:Murdered her husband

Arrest:At home, cutting up body, claimed it was meat for her dinner

Evidence:Tests showed it was human flesh

Sentence:25 years, prison

A woman was accused of murder yesterday.She was guilty of murdering her

husband.She was arrested at hom when she was cutting up her husband body,she claimed it was a meat for her dinner.The meat was tested and the

tests showed it was human flesh.The woman was sentenced to 15 years in prison.13．Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage to state your views on the topic: My ideal job.You should write at least 80 words and base your writing on the Chinese outline below:

1.你理想的工作是什么；2.你的理由；3.如何实现你的理想。

My ideal job

Every person has his own ideal job.Some people wish to be doctors, while others want to be teachers and so on.As far as I am concerned, I have been dreaming of being a guide for a long time.First, my major is the manage of tourism, so I want to get a job about tourism.Secondly, good guides are knowledgeable and amiable, meanwhile, they have wide vision.Finally, guide can constantly expand his knowledge and understand lots of customs about different cultures and countries.To achieve my dream of being a qualified guide, I have to make sufficient preparations.Fro one thing, I must learn my specialty well and travel at my spare time, just as the saying goes: “Seeing is believing.” For another, I should enhance my

eloquence so that I can express the allusion about the view clearly.What’s more important ,I should control my mood freely and treat every traveler kindly.Being a good guide is difficult, but I believe if I endeavor to do this things in all hands.I’ll be successful sooner or later.2．Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage to state your views on the topic My favorite means of transportation.You should write at least 80 words and base your writing on the Chinese outline below:

1.哪一种是你最喜欢的交通方式；2.阐述你的理由；3.作出结论。

My favorite means of transportation

In a modern city, there are many means of transportation, such as subway, tax, bus and so on.But my favorite means of transportation is by bike.First, riding a bike is good for keeping healthy.I spend one hour riding to my office on working days.I think it is a good form of physical exercise.Secondly, it is money saving.Recently, the private car drivers always complain the price of gas is higher and higher, but if you ride a bike, it will cost you nothing.Thirdly, it is beneficial for protecting the environment, so it is a“green” form of transportation.Therefore, although it has some disadvantages, I like riding a bike best.3．Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage to state your views on the topic: My Favorite TV Program.You should write at least 80 words and base your writing on the Chinese outline below: 1． 你最喜欢的电视节目是什么；2．你喜欢它的理由；3．作出结论。My Favorite TV Program

CCTV today offers a great variety of programmes to meet different needs and tastes.For example, the weather forecast, serials, films, sports and so on.My favorite TV programme, however, is THE NEWS.There are several points that are worth mentioning.For one thing, it covers news about events both at home and abroad.Besides, the news it provides is timely and reliable.Finally, it broadcasts in the evening during the so called “golden time”.It saves me much time reading through newspapers for current affairs.In short, watching the news on CCTV has become part of my daily life.4．Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage to state your views on the topic: How to keep healthy.You should write at least 80 words and base your writing

on the Chinese outline below:

1．保持身体健康的重要性；2．保持身体健康的方法；3．重申保持身体健康的意义 How to keep healthy

Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy.Without a healthy body, we can do nothing.For me, there are three ways to keep healthy.First, it is necessary to keep a balanced diet, which is the basis of good health.It is better for us to have more fruits and vegetables everyday.Secondly, it is important to take regular exercises, such as swimming, jogging and so on.Last but not least, it is essential to keep in a good mood.Relaxation and entertainment are ways to renew our spirits and release our stress.When we make healthy habits a part of our daily life, we are bound to keep healthy.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage on the topic My home.You should write at least 80 words and base your writing on the Chinese outline below:1． 描述你家的位置2． 各个房间的功能

3． 表达你对你们家居条件的态度

I live in a pleasant flat with my parents which is in the center of my hometown..We have three rooms.The first room is the main room or living room.It is for having meals,relaxing,reading,watching television and so on.It’s the busiest room in the house.The second room is my parents’ room.They sleep there,store their clothes and dress there.The third room is my room where I sleep and listen to music.The kitchen is mainly for cooking.The bathroom is for doing all the usual personal activities and for washing clothes.I like my home.I’d like to live somewhere bigger.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter to a new friend, telling him/her about your ambitions and dreams.You should write at least 80 words and base your letter on the Chinese outline below:1.童年的梦想2.目前的情况3.对未来的希望

Dec16th,2007Dear Mary,How do you do!This is the first time that I write to you.Since you know little about me,I’d like to introduce my dreams and ambitions to you.My dream in childhood was to be a famous writer.I loved reading so much that I tried my best to read books as many as possible.When I grew up, I became very interested in science especially artificial intelligence.Now I am studying programming in North America.My ambition is that I’d like to go to the North Pole one day.

第四篇：电大开放英语作文

Changes in life

Over the recent years, I′ve seen great changes in my life.Many aspects are to be concerned, but by simply specifying how my family are better off now than ever before suffices it all.We used to live in a cramped and gloomy room, and things were not so good as we had to strive for light and even more fresh air.Now, in this spacious and luminous room that I¨m talking about, I′m leading a life that′s more than satisfactory and getting around here and there is no longer a big problem.Changes in Life

Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.Take my family for example.My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past.But now we Call long distance at home.And once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information.But now we get the news by watching TV.Another big change is in my living conditions.When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with fiirniture.But now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment.In short, our life has become comfortable and convenient.Changes in Life

My hometown, which is in the south of ×× Province, is a very beautiful village.It lies on the east bank of a small river, surrounded by green mountains, In the past my hometown was poor, and people led a hard life.They couldn't afford to send their children to school.But ,great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past twenty years.Many families.have not only color TV sets, but also telephones, fridges, computers, and so on.New roads, houses, schools, hospitals have been built.People in my hometown are working hard for a better life.How to Keep Healthy

some people put less time to their own body in order to earn money.Perhaps they think money is more improtant than health.I consider that opinion is very foolish.Because money doesn't buy health forever.So it is improtant to keep healthy.In my opinion ,first ,we must keep balance to eat ,we school eat morw fruit and vegetable ,eat less meat and drink less coffe and so on.Second ,now ,people are busy in working or studying all day.Sports time get less and less.It causes people's health get worse.So we should do more sports to keep healthy.At last ,people shoudn't be too exhaysted.Myst have eight hours to sleep every day.I believe if you from a goo bality in daily life ,you must have a healthy boby to work and study well.How to Keep Healthy

It is absolutely necessary to take some exercise every day.Research shows that getting plenty of exercise make the heart beat faster and the lungs work harder.This strengthens the heart, reduces the chance of heart attack, and helps lower blood pressure.That's why more and more people are becoming active in various kinds of sports and exercises.Every morning many people get up early and take much exercise.Some practice shadowboxing and swordplay while others run, jog, walk or dance to music.In the afternoon, there are also many people keen on sports.Some play basketball or volleyball or table tennis, others go in for gymnastics or track events.Through sports and exercise, people become healthier and stronger.How to Keep Healthy

It is very important for us to take more fruits and vegetables because they provide vitamins and they help in the process of digestion.Secondly, we have to keep a balanced diet and maintain regular eating habits.Proper nutrition is important for good health.Avoid food with lots of sugar and fat.Eat plenty of foods high in protein.Thirdly, we

Had better do morning exercise every day, do sports frequently to make our bodies strong.Besides, we have to avoid too much work pressure.Getting too tired all the time may definitely weaken our defense system, making us get sick easily.Finally, we have to get rid of those bad habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking.My TV University Life

After making great efforts, it was my honor to be a TV university student in2009.From then, I was engaged in long distance education.During my TV university, I exerted myself to learn my all kinds of web-based courses through internet.To understand and grasp the main point of my courses, I also joined online discusses forums to communicate with teachers and classmates.Once finishing daily homework ,we all sent our homework to tutor by e-mail.When I met any doubts in my studying, I solved the difficulties and puzzles in tutorial.My TV university experience gave me too much pleasure in seeking for meaning of life ,it enriches my knowledge and opens my eye-reach.My TV University Life

I am engaged in long distance education.My web-based courses are English, Chinese, Computer, Maths, Politics, etc.I like English best.We can join online discussion forums, but it's very difficult for me to understand what the speaker says.Every day we complete our home work on the computer and send our homework to the tutor, though sometimes he or she is not online.He or she will solve the difficulties and puzzles in tutorial.I love my TV University life.My TV University Life

Consider about the future, I am engaged in long distance education, which have a sort of web-based courses, including Chinese, Math, International Business and English.Through join online discussion forums, I have a great progress.By send our homework to the tutor, we can know how we learned in the study.When solve the difficulties and puzzles in tutorial, I get it we closed to the aim gradually.It is my TV University life.I am glad to have the time and learnt more from it.

第五篇：如何写好高考英语开放作文

如何写好高考英语开放作文

——浅评学生开放作文的习作

首都师范大学附中马德玲

海淀教师进修学校柳宁

一、命题原则

今年高考将使用新的考试说明。根据2003年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(北京卷)考试说明，最大的一个变动就是在书面表达题型，即由以往的一篇情景作文调整为情景作文和开放作文两小题。将书面表达题，由以往的25分增加至35分。

新增加的第二篇作文英文为open-ending composition。它所给提示比较简略，要求学生根据提供的情景，写一段接续文字。这篇作文要求学生充分发挥想象力和创造力，自己拓展主题，组织篇章结构，既能体现出学生活跃的思维。又能表现出他们的逻辑思维能力和灵活运用英语的能力。它要求学生必须在短时间内写出一篇内容充实新颖、思想健康、符合逻辑、交际得体的，字数不少于30个字的作文。

二、解题要点

由于开放作文是今年高考的新题型，因此同学们写作的时候没有前车之鉴（范文）可循；另外对评分标准（15分）也无据可查。但是根据考试说明中对开放作文的评分原则，我们可以得知只有那些内容充实、思维活跃、逻辑清晰，交际得体的文章才能够得高分——第四档（11－15分）。而那些内容贫乏，句式单一的文章，尽管可能没有语法错误，也不能够得满分。

那么，如何写好高考开放作文呢？我们根据教学中学生们平常练习时所出现的问题，一起进行分析、探索，初步总结出要写好作文应该注意到几点事项，现在提供给大家参考：

1、认真审题，即：审语境、审人称、审时态

2、要紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应

3、注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读者的意识

4、要进行细致描写，有细节的支撑

5、要有主次之分，详略得当

6、要力求内容新颖，必须符合逻辑

7、要做到思想健康，积极向上

三、解题步骤

我们先拿一篇开放作文为例，根据它所给提示的简略语境。看一看如何着手审题。

SITUATION： One Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping were playing in the woods when they found a bird on the ground.They picked it up and found it wounded.Supposing you are Li Hua and Wang Ping.Please tell us what you did with the bird.在拿到题以后，我们首先要按做到如下思考：

1、审语境： 一个星期六的下午，李华和王平在树林里玩，这时他们在地上发现一只小鸟，他们拣起小鸟的，发现小鸟受伤了

2、审人称： Supposing you are Li Hua and Wang Ping.从此句的提示中可以看出时要求你以李华和王平两个人的口气续写，因此人称就该是we。

3、审时态:Please tell us what you did with the bird.在这个提示语中的did正是决定学生在写作中所用的时态应该是过去时。

四、浅评习作

我们先共同来看一看同学们已经写好的文章，找出其中的问题所在：

例1：

If I were Li Hua I would try my best to save the bird.I would put the bird carefully into my soft hat to keep it warm.And then carried it to an animal hospital as soon as possible.I think doctor could help it.If the bird can live I would carry it back home, and took care of it until it can fly back to the woods.If it couldn’t live, I would buried it.I think whoever meet this thing will do just like what I did.Everybody would like to see this bird family live happily together, isn’t it?

【分析】

可以说这篇文章没有符合要求，因为整篇文章使用了虚拟语气。从文章的开始If I were Li Hua I would try my best to save the bird.I would put the bird carefully into my soft hat to keep it warm„ 就表示一种与事实相反的陈述：“要是我是李华我就会如何„„”，从作者的意识上就根本没有把“我”当做“李华”，这就没有符合我们刚刚在审题时所提到的：“假如你是李华和王平，讲述你们对这只鸟做了什么。”因此这篇文章严重不符合要求。

例2： First find the wound of the bird quickly.Second, tidy the wound carefully and softly and remember not to make the bird pain a lot.Then put some medicine on it and tie a cloth around the wound.【分析】

从这篇文章的叙述语气上看，作者使用了祈使句。我们都知道祈使句是表示一种命令、请求等，它一般是表示将来的时态的行为。这篇文章还是犯了与前一篇同样的错误，违背了此篇作文的时态要求。

例3：I was worried about the little bird when I had picked it up.Its leg was seriously hurt.So I decided to bring it to see the doctor.But Li Hua told me that the doctor couldn’t see the animals.At last we put it on a big tree, because we believed it could be safer in the woods than in the city.We hoped it could be better now.【分析】1.从这篇文章的人称上看，存在着一定的问题。我们在审题时知道

了人称要用we, 按照要求此处应该是以俩个人的口气写的，可是本文却使用了“I”一个人。另外，有的同学还用了they, 同样违背了文章关于人称要求。

2.上面的文章还存在着一定的逻辑性问题。因为第二句已经提到了小鸟的腿严重的受伤，而第五句话中则说我们把小鸟又放回到树上。虽然有“we believed it could be safer in the woods than in the city.”和“We hoped it could be better now.”，但是既然小鸟的腿已经严重的受伤，按照正常逻辑思维，再把小鸟放回树上一般来说它也不可能活下去。

例4：First we are looking at the bird carefully in order to know where the bird has wounded.Then we treated the bird carefully and decided to take the bird to see a doctor, where it could have a better medical care.After that, when the bird is getting better, we let it free.【分析】这篇文章很简洁。请看划线部分，作者在这里只是单纯提到“仔细处理了一下”，但是并没有说明究竟是如何处理的。缺少细致的描写，就像建房只搭架子不用砖一样，显得空洞无味。英语写作有一条座右铭，那就是 “show more than tell”，意思是细节表达一定要多于抽象陈述，也就是写作要细节化或举例说明。我们尽量用看得见、摸得着的东西来具体表达思想。才能使文章充实、有趣，符合开放作文要求的。

例5：One day afternoon, Wang Ping and I were playing happily in the wood.We were playing balls and suddenly the ball ran into the other side of the road.I hurried to get it when I saw a bird lying there and I found it was wounded.We quickly took it to the hospital and the doctor gave the bird some medicine and we took it back home then.It was getting better and better and we decided to set it free the next day.【分析】洋洋洒洒的一篇文章，从语言上看没有问题，似乎很完美。就要求而言，似乎也提到了what we did。但是从文章的整体结构上看，前面的三句话都是和本文要求关系不大，只有后面的两句回答了作文的要求。也就是说这篇文章的五分之三都是脱离主题多余的话，何况文章前面已给了简略的语境提示。此文章没有做到主次之分，得不了满分。

例6：Wang Ping told me that he was a little hungry and we could eat the bird.I agreed with him and we found some dry wood and put it together.Then we cooked the bird.It was really delicious.What a happy day.【分析】文章语言没有问题，虽然也回答了what you did with the bird.。但事情发展的结果是把小鸟烤着吃了，而且感觉It was really delicious。结尾还说“ What a happy day.” 在世界绿色和平组织提倡人类要爱护动物，保护大自然的文明活动中，这种行为可不是人们愿意接受的。作为学生还是应该写一些思想健康的事情。

只有同学们在注意到了以上几点以后，要积极不断地总结经验，多读好范文，勤练笔常写作，才能在短时间内写出好文章。

我们来欣赏下面的两篇文章，分析一下他们的写作特点：

例7：Thinking that it might die without treatment, we took it home.I made a little nest for it and gave it some rice to eat.Some days later, the bird recovered.We took it out and let it be back to the woods.I thought we had done so good a thing.例8：We put the bird in my hat and took it to the animal hospital.The doctor said that one of its wing was hurt.He gave us some medicine and told us to put it on the wound once a day.We took the bird home and took good care of it.A few days later, the bird could fly again.【分析】这两篇文章的特点是语言清晰自然，非常切合文章的要求。几个动词清晰地表达了要求中提到的what you did。文章符合逻辑，主次分明，思想健康，我们认为是两篇很好的文章。

我们再来看下一篇文章，比较一下，看它的特点在哪里：

例9：We tried to save the bird by giving it some water and food.And then we decided to take it to the animal hospital，but it was too late.After a short while, the bird couldn’t move at all and it was dead.So we dug a small hole and put the bird into it as a tomb.What a pity!

【分析】这篇文章与前两篇同样是步骤清楚，基本符合了文章的要求。另外，它的独特之处，就是新颖一些。很多同学看到语境提示后，普遍、直观的想法就是去救小鸟，并且救活它，结局是皆大欢喜。而这篇文章写的也是在努力救小鸟，但是没有救活，后来还给它做了个小坟墓，似乎在寄托哀思。从这点来看也能表现出我们对动物的爱护。这不正是体现了文章的新颖之处吗？的确，除了上面所提到的要注意的问题以外，内容新颖也是至关重要的。我们在写作时要注意的是求新并不等于求怪，并不是说越希奇古怪、越离谱越好。内容新颖并非是别人完全没提过的、全新的想法，而是别人在相同的情景之下讲得比较少的，又不违背逻辑的想法。因为新颖的思路能够充分表现学生的创造力，这正好符合新课标所提倡的素质教育，因此这一点是举足轻重的。

另外，我们还要提醒大家注意：① 文章尽量要能够做到首尾呼应，使文章有一定的完整性。② 文章还应该做到“交际得体，表达完全与规定语境中交际对象的需求相吻合”。即具有一定的读者意识，要根据不同读者的需求，选择适当的语言风格与写作内容，也就是说在阅卷老师看完你的文章以后不会对你所表达的语言有疑虑。这样可以不影响得分。③ 字数要符合要求，不要过多也不要太少，过多了显得罗嗦，太少了又无法表明意思。按要求不少于30字。尽量使用口语化语言。

写作的形式是多种多样的。除了考试说明样卷中叙述形式以外，还有描写、说明、议论等形式，我们在进行开放写作练习时要鼓励学生深入思考，挖掘题材，力求内容充实、新颖、健康，同时还应该要求学生注重细节表达，培养学生写作时的读者意识。

书面表达是考查考生语言综合运用能力的题型。而语言知识是语言运用能力的基础，要提高语言综合运用能力就必须具备必要的语言知识。因此，在对学生

进行写作技巧训练的同时也要重视语言的基础知识。