第一篇:考研大,小作文的区别
小作文
小作文是一封申请信(letter of request),但是从题目上看,并不接近英美教科书中典型的应用文,而是带有中国特色的出题方式。大家一定要紧扣提纲,对情景有深入的理解和准确的把握。提纲与2005年第一次出的小作文题目一样,也是不采用分点罗列的方式,而是放在一起陈述,这与大作文是不同的。大作文绝大多数时候都会分点罗列。大家在行文中一定要注意涵盖要点,同时也要做到表达流畅、语言准确贴切。
请大家注意一个重要的细节,字不要写得太大。2006年的答题纸二是双面横向设计的,正面为22行,上面十行是五道翻译题,每题两行,每道题前均有题号,从46一直到50。下面十二行写小作文,前面有题号,为51。两种题目之间留有间隔,这种新的设计很不错。反面也是22行,所有行之间的间距相同。大家注意,这样的格子对于想写长文章的同学来说,是相当有限制的。大家的字一定要写得中等或偏小一点才能写得下并看上去舒服。由于加页是几乎不可能的,所以大家在一开始写的时候就要计划好。
正面的左侧约五分之一的地方自上而下分别是第二部分即阅读理解C节、第三部分写作A节及写作B节评分的地方,所以去掉这个区域,留给小作文的地方就更小了。建议大家将Dear Mr.Johnson这样的抬头紧邻着题号51写,日期在右边稍微抬高就可以了(上面说过这一行比较宽)。实际上不写日期也不会扣分,不过一定不要将日期写到信的最后去。信最后的落款要占两行,有一行写到十二行之外的页下空白处是无伤大雅的,而且很可能是非常有必要的。相反,如果连十二行都未占满,阅卷老师就有可能会考虑字数是否够。
由于教育部考试中心这次在下发《英语试题参考答案和评分参考》时并未象往年一样下发作文样卷,所以上海阅卷点的大组长们共同确定了十份样卷,也就是小作文5、6、7、8分各一份,大作文11、12、13、14、15、16分各一份。这些都是在字数符合要求的作文中挑选的。实际上绝大多数的小作文都取得了上面的分数。总体感觉似乎比去年好一点,去年是6分最多,其次是5、7、8分,今年感觉7分与5分的数量差不多,有的学校甚至7分卷更多一点。而大作文还是普遍没有大的改观,16分非常少,16分以上的寥寥无几,感觉总平均分仅比去年略高,但应该还是不到11分。可以看出,上海老师对大家的要求是相当严格的。许多老师都是多年阅卷的“行家”,对于文章的把握相当准确,对于分数的判定也相当敏锐。
今年阅卷有个感受,就是小作文的分数拉不开,得高分的大多是写得长的文章,把落款写到下面。很长时间来我都在细细揣摩阅卷老师们的微妙的心理反应与心理变化,对于这一点,我感觉很象国际象棋里的兵“触底成后”。
在写作小作文时,千万不要信口开河,如有个学生说每年想给资助的孩子二百万元,还有个学生自称是professor。有些学生对题目理解有误,这是不应该的,比如有个学生讲了一个具体的孩子的故事,说这个孩子很可怜,令人同情,所以要资助他。这道题是要求写明自己想要捐助怎样的孩子,这里要求写作者的想法,还不知道具体的孩子的情况。
小作文也应分段来写,不要只写成一段。
大作文
大作文不写标题不扣分,但是写错则会给阅卷老师留下不好的印象,这样就得不偿失了。请大家注意:最好不要反着写大作文。答题纸二的背面写大作文,看到上面的题号52,就不会搞反了。
大作文的字数不够肯定是要扣分的,今年的情况似乎更加严重。由于考研的答题卡设计较为紧凑,与四六级不同,所以写得短被扣分的幅度要更大。如果以中等大小的字体写满全页,当然在正常分段,每段开头均有空格的情况下,大概能写240词,而根据多年的写作批改经验——不超过240词,是绝对不会对阅卷老师产生“写得太长”的感受的。当然每个老师对长文章的感觉不尽相同,有的可能300词才觉得长,但是240词应该是低端临界值。
今年出现一个趋势,就是大作文的字数不够被猛扣分。有些同学功底不错,只是在考试时没掌握好时间,但这种错误有时可能是致命的。题目的要求非常清楚,要求大家写160至200词。不写到160词肯定扣分,这是毫无疑问的。原则上是少1-10词扣一分,但是字数不足很可能漏点,即三点只写两点或者一点,这样扣起来就厉害了。大家切记:参加写作阅卷的老师中有不少都是自己非常喜爱写作的人,越是这样的老师对字数少扣分扣得越狠。一般说来,不到16行肯定要扣分。另外,字写得差或模糊也是如此。有的同学长时间以来有不良的写作习惯。没有批过作文的人可能永远也想象不到看快没油的圆珠笔写成的作文时那种痛苦的感受,或者看到写一个词点一个点的作文时那种几近疯狂的感觉。
许多大组现在都和我们大组一样,自己分成两个小组,一组改翻译,一组改作文。所以小作文和大作文有可能由同一个老师改,但翻译由另一个老师改。有的大组在阅卷时将小作文和大作文也分开来改,这样更科学,但也需要更多时间。
在大作文中,切记千万不要抄阅读理解。今年发现有的同学将自己写的部分与抄的阅读部分间隔起来,阅卷老师给了3分。还有个同学前四段抄阅读理解原文,最后写了一句:Beckham is a English.I hate him.全文只有这一句与题目有关,后来根据轻易不判0分的传统,勉强给了1分。
写大作文时切记要扣紧主题,切不可离题太远,导致最后回不来或由于时间关系写不完。另外,各部分之间的比例应适当,如第一段就不要太长。与主题相关的关键词语要用对,如追星中的追求,可以用pursue,但不要把pursuit当成动词来用。
语言水平的提高决非易事,仅举两例。
比如在最后下结论时,有的同学要表达“做自己”的概念,这里应使用“Be
yourself”,但不少同学用“Do yourself”,这就不对了。
又如:I think this men who persuit stars have no culture.这个同学可能要表达“我认为这个追星的人没文化”的概念,可改为:I believe that this person who adores stars is not educated.更好的写法是:Those people who are indulged in star worship, in my belief, are not independent individuals.希望大家用心体会,多吸纳范文中好的词句,而后将它们有意识地用到自己的文章中,之后通过多次修正,必能获得进步。阅卷心得体会—2007年今年阅卷已是第九个年头,上海的试卷比去年减少了2.9%,是多年来首次出现减少。现将最新的感受记录下来,与大家分享。
今年的作文题目如下:
Section Ⅲ Writing
Part A
51.Directions:
Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address.(10 points)Part B
52.Directions:
Write an essay of 160~200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should
1)describe the drawing briefly,2)explain its intended meaning, and then
3)support your view with an example/examples.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)小作文
小作文是一封建议信(letter of suggestion),与大学生活扣得很紧,是大家熟悉的话题,比较容易把握。题目特点是指令中的描述非常简单,只有一句话——写信给校图书馆,提出改进服务的建议。
小作文的分数差距不大。大部分同学都做到了结构完整、格式不出错的基本要求。大作文
大作文非常玄妙,值得细品。首先,很可能从今年开始大作文将经历由时事向哲理过渡的重大变革。其次,出题人将尽量用图画来表达意图,而不借助或少借助图中或图旁的文字,这样意义表达得会更深刻,对考生的思考力和判断力的要求也就更高。第三,图画的含义深刻,可以接受的解释也较多,但要想取得高分,必须紧扣图画,把握住其中的精髓。最
后,题目要求中明确提出要举例。这不是第一次,如2004年的大作文就曾提出要举例
(support your view with examples)。还记得当年大家讨论后认为举一个或多个例子均可,今年的指令首次出现了an example/examples,这一方面可见出题人的精心,另一方面也可看出如果我们用心,就能够提前一步把握考研试题的发展方向。
今年判分更加严格了,这主要体现在大作文上。与主题无关的文章,如有些考生照抄阅读理解,一律给0分。如果考生没有理解图画的意思,扣分也非常厉害。比如有一个考生将漫画看成了三幅图,他描述道:一个小男孩在图一中玩足球,一个胖男人在图二中玩,一对老夫妻在图三中玩。三幅图的寓意是:每个人都应当锻炼身体。还有一位考生写道:可以看出一个人在射门,一只动物在守门——画图者提醒人们一定要爱护动物。有个考生写道,一个人射门,三个人守门,引申到有的政府部门一定要提高效率。另有个考生写道,一个强壮的人与一个弱小的人比赛,还让强壮的人先踢,这样的规则很不合理,由此引申到构建和谐社会一定要有人人平等的法律与规则。实际上,写成贫富差距、社会公平、生态平衡、自私问题或赡养老人问题的考生并不少。可能他们脑中已有了现成的文章,上了考场就往上硬套。有的考生虽然不算完全跑题,但也只能算是勉强有一点点联系,比如有个考生就写道:从图中写以看出,在任何时候脑中都应保留危机意识,这种意识对个人与社会的发展都有利。虽然其后的论证比较清晰流畅,但最关键的却缺失了——无法看出是怎么从图画推导出“危机意识”的。有的甚至将漫画中的人看成了鸡、鸭、猴等,很是令人失望。
至于模板,大家一定要理解清楚,根据不同的文章做相应的调整,这样才能取得良好的效果。这些年阅卷中常碰到一些文章,一看就知道背过我书里的范文——如果考生能吃透文章,并能根据具体问题做出适当的变化,就能获得满意的分数;如果是死记硬背,不考虑当前文章的实际,情况就不容乐观了。总之不能硬套模板。
现在的阅卷老师越来越认真负责,投机心理不可取,况且有些老师比较激进一点,对某些低级错误不会给多少分——出现一次可能还能容忍,一旦出现两次就很麻烦。所以大家先要保证不出低级错误,然后再尽量增加闪光点。
今年的高分比去年少,16分以上的文章就更少见了。今年第一次提出了“14分以上谨慎”的指导原则,因此这次大作文的平均分可能会偏低。当然这也与今年题目抽象度较高有关——虽然主题的界定比较宽,但要深入浅出,颇为不易。高速批改的阅卷者的心态变得更加微妙,可能变得更激进,更易由较少甚至单独的例证来作出判断,所以大家应该尽量减少无法容忍的错误。
今年答题卡的版式设计与去年完全一致,所以请大家好好看看我去年的心得。请大家最好将小作文写满12行,大作文至少写16行,要得高分至少要写18行。
其他一些具体的建议:态度要认真,字要写得尽量干净整齐;把作文写在规定的位置上,在两篇作文中均不要以标1、2、3的方式分点阐述,而是借助连接词等手段;不要将关键词写错,如有一个考生从题目到全篇都将confidence写作了evidence,这就很可惜;最
好使用水笔,忌用铅笔,不宜用圆珠笔,使用钢笔要避免墨迹;不要空行、隔行写字,一定要按格子来写;不会写的词应该换个同义或近义词,一定要避免空着或写汉语。
随着这本小册子的再版,同学们的电话、短信与邮件纷至沓来,有时在食堂吃工作餐也有没教过的学生跑来请教——多是关于写作的捷径。今天我不想谈写作,而想谈谈硕士论文。写出一篇硕士论文的最好办法是从第一学期的课程中的某章某节最令你痴迷的一个微观的小问题开始,不断地搜集资料、阅读、思考、记录下心得„„之后你就走上了奇妙的旅程,你不会觉得辛苦,也不会再对写作感到手足无措。欢迎大家与我交流,祝大家成功!
第二篇:考研英语一二区别
英语二与英语一有什么区别?
2010年考研多了一套全国联考的英语试卷—“英语二”,它和英语一有什么区别?
答:英语
(二)是一套新出现的考研英语试卷,它和以前的考研英语试卷(现在改称英语
(一))一样,由教育部考试中心组织命题,并在考研统考中使用。英语
(二)所考查的题型和英语
(一)高度近似。
首先是称之为“英语知识运用”的部分,其实就是我们所熟悉的完形填空,共20题,10分。
第二部分是阅读理解,分成两种题型,第一种是我们常见的一篇文章,后面五道选择题,共四篇文章,20题,总分40分;另一种对应英语
(一)中的“新题型”部分,有10分,大纲给出了三种题型,最简单的一种是看完一篇文章后判断后面五个题的正误,难度居中的是看完一篇文章后,有五个不完整的句子,后面有七个词组,从这七个中选五个去补全前面的五个句子。这种题型像英语
(一)中“七选五”的简化版。最难的要数标题搭配了:一篇文章,有五个段落标出来,另外给出七个标题,让你找出五个和段落相匹配的。试卷的第三部分是翻译,有15分,和英语
(一)不一样的是,它是全文翻译,不是就给你划五个难句。最后一块就是写作了,这个也和英语
(一)一样,分大作文和小作文。小作文考书信或摘要,大作文考图表或图画。
①学术型研究生一定是考英语一,部分专业学位研究生是考英语二,因此要看招生简章确定
②英语一和英语二对词汇量的要求一样,但英语二在词汇的要求上略低
③英语一是翻译五个难句,而英语二翻译部分是全文翻译,但相对而言,英语二的翻译更浅
④英语一和英语二小作文要求一样,而英语二大作文更容易一些。
总体上看,英语二比英语一简单,但是题量和英语一是一样的,因此要养成在规定时间内,做完规定题目的习惯,加快做题速度,特别是翻译和大小作文的速度。
第三篇:考研小作文
Harbin New Oriental School李海斌
考研小作文
投诉信/抱怨信
Directions: you share with a room in the university with your classmate, because he always has friends to see him, brings your things without asking you and has a party in the room.Write a letter to your Accommodation Commission and require changing a new room next term.范文
Dear Sir or Madam,I, a student in the university, am formally writing the letter to you for the purpose of expressing my extreme complaints about my roommate.I must explain the reasons for my dissatisfaction.First of all, he has so many friends that they always come to visit him and disturb my studying.Secondly, because he always brings my things without asking me, I suffer from the pains of not finding them.Thirdly, he sometimes holds a party and never cleans the room.I will appreciate it if you could take actions to dispose it.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
道歉信
弄坏了IPAD 范文
Dear friend,I, as your best friend, am cordially writing the letter to you for the purpose of expressing my apology for my mistake.I have always been cherishing this ipad as treasures.However, one day, I took this Ipad to home and then I put it on my studying table in my room when my mother was cleaning the room.As a consequence of my mother’s carelessness, she cleaned it on the floor.Unfortunately, its screen was broken.But I have bought a new one.If not possible, I am ready for any reasonable penalty.I felt sorry for any inconvenience and sadness I have caused.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
辞职信
Directions: Four months ago, you got a job as an editor for a magazine.But now you find that the work is not what you expected.you decide to quit.Write a letter to your boss Mr.Wen:
1.tell him your decision to quit
2.give out your reasons, and
3.make an apology 范文
Dear Mr.Wen,I, as a staff of your company, am formally writing the letter to you for the purpose of quitting the job as an editor for a magazine.I have always been cherishing this job as treasures and appreciate the opportunity of having worked with you and other colleagues.However, there exist several reasons accounting for my leaving.First of all, my dream is that I can engage in my major that I learned in the university.Secondly, this job is beyond my ability to challenge.Thirdly, I want to further study to improve myself.I therefore decide to quit this job.Please accept my sincere apologies for any inconveniences my leaving may incur.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
建议信
Directions: give some advice to your library.范文
Dear Sir or Madam,I, a student in this university, am formally writing the letter to you for the purpose of putting forward some advice about my library.I can find no better suggestions other than the following two.For one thing, our library is so cold that some student studying here get a cold and therefore we should add the number of heaters.For another, in order to establish a better and more quiet studying environment, we should work out some rules to prohibit using mobile phones and talking with each other in the library.I will appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming 推荐信(东西,事)
Iphone 5范文
Dear Sir or Madam,I, as you best friend, am happily writing the letter to you for the purpose of recommend a phone, Iphone5, to you as a result of its perfection.There exist several reasons accounting for my recommendation as follows.First of all, its appearance is concise and includes two colors: white and black.Secondly, some main popular functions, which involves QQ, Email, IE explorer and their like, is made into this kind of phone.Thirdly, its price is acceptable, which is a little higher than similar products in the market.I do hope that you can extract some time to buy it and I am sure that you will like it.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
申请信
Directions:
China and America are holding cultural communication activity and exchanging students to study in the opposite country.Now write an email to the department concerned to apply for a foreign student to study in your home.范文
Dear Sir or Madam,I, a Chinese student, am sincerely writing the email to you for the purpose of applying for a foreign student to study at my home.I have been a dream of studying with a foreign student and I do hope that you can give me a chance to achieve my dream.There exist several reasons accounting for my application.First of all, I have a good knowledge of English and communicating in it flulently.Secondly, I can teach you Chinese culture and take you to Chinese museum to know about Chinese history.Thirdly, my home is near the school so we can walk to school.Thank you for taking my matter into consideration.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
邀请人参加…(会议,活动,聚会)
Directions:
You are a secretary of boss Mr.Wen.Next month your company will hold a conference about contemporary education reform in London on May 5th at 8:00.On behalf of your boss, write a letter to some people who take part in it invite them.范文
Dear Sir or Madam,I, on behalf of my boss Mr.Wen, am formally writing the letter to you for the purpose of inviting you to London at 8:00 on May 5th.We all know that you are busy but I do hope you can exert some time to take part in it.There are our plans as follows.First of all, we will discuss the problem in education.Secondly, we will study the directions of education.Thirdly, we will lead you to visit some schools.The conference may be ended on the plan.If convenient to you, would you please reply to let me know whether you can come or not? I am looking forward to meeting you on that day.Yours sincerely,Li Ming询问信
Directions: You want to study abroad at a certain university.Write a letter: 1.inquire about the situations there, and2.ask about qualifications,3.fees and accommodation 范文
Dear Sir or Madam,I, a Chinese student, am eagerly writing the letter to you for the purpose of asking for some information about your university.I have always been paying more attention to your university for these days.Would you provide some information as follows? First of all, could you tell me the situations there such as canteen, market and its like? Secondly, you had better give me some materials about qualifications.Thirdly, you can send some documents concerned about fees and accommodation.I will appreciate if very much if you could give me information that I want to know as soon a possible.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming 感谢信
Directions:
You will graduate from your university in July and you found that during four years in your university you friends and teachers made a lot of contributions to you.Now write a letter to your friends or teachers to express your thanks 范文
Dear my friend,I, as your best friend, am cordially writing the letter to you for the purpose of expressing my sincere appreciation for what you did for me before.I came across a trouble that I was stole by a thief when I was walking in the street and thereforeI have no money to support my daily study life in the university.However you contribute to my expense of me kindly for one month at the cost of saving your own allowance.If there were no your help, I would never have a happy life.I will remember it forever.I do hope that I can have a chance to meet you and I miss you from the bottom of my heart.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Ming
报告*** 注意格式
Report
I, _______, have been doing the research about______(主题)for _______(时间)and summarize the important points as follows.First of all, _______(结果—危害);Secondly, ________(结果—危害);Thirdly;__________(结果—危害).I suggest that some effective measures should be taken to _______/some laws and regulations should be worked out to _______ and some people should be educated to ______.关于汽车购买的报告
1. 买进口汽车的人越来越多 2. 买进品豪华车的人也在增多
关于近几年税收的报告
1.中产阶级家庭不能支付现有税收 2.高收入家庭纳税很少 告示
Directions:
The Students’ Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest.Write an announcement/Notice(通知)which covers the following information: 1)the purpose of the contest, 2)time and place of the contest, 3)what is required of the candidates, 4)details of the judges and awards.You should write about 100 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement.Chinese-Speaking Contest
To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese-speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week(14 January)at the Students’ Auditorium.Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week.Five professors will be invited to be judges.The first six winners will begiven awards.Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.The Students’ Union
Department of Chinese Language and Literature
Tittle
For the purpose of doing __________, we will hold __________ at ________(地点)on __________(月日,年).There are our plans as follows.First of all, ____________.Secondly, ___________.Thirdly, _____________.Everybody is welcomed to be present at _______(地点)
The Students’ Union
Directions:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an announcement to welcome students to join to a club.You should write at least 120 words following the outline
given below:
1.本社团的主要活动内容 2.参加本社团的好处 3.如何加入本社团
Welcome to English Club
Welcome to English Club!It could serve as a platform to show your outstanding abilities and help you develop a range of great skills.You can be involved in a variety of activities including staging musicaldramas, holding group discussions, watching Oscar-winning movies, and so on.These after-class activities could offer you ample opportunities.First, your active participation is helpful to strengthening the sense of responsibility and managing interpersonal relations.Second, various activities organized by us could raise your level of proficiency in English.A good command of English empowers you to enjoy decided competitive edge over your peers.You can entries is January 22.Come on, join us now!
English Club
备忘录
Directions: You are the president of a company.Write a memo Percy Shelley, the Vice President on the employee’s training on computer: The need to train the employeesDetailed informationAsk him to write a plan
To: Percy Shelley(某人), Vice President(职务)From: Li Ming(某人), President(职务)Subject: Computer Training of the Staff Date: January 10, 2010
As we discussed earlier this week, I agree with you that our firm is faced up with problem of the high rate of computer illiteracy of the staff.We need to make up a plan for training our employees in the new field.I would like you to design our own in-house computer-training program.We had better classify the employees and put them through the program for training in turn.Write up a brief proposal, describing what you think the program should cover.Assume the class runs four hours a week for eight weeks.Also, assume people have no prior computer knowledge or any formal coursework in computer.今年的重点:
投诉信
Directions: You bought a new electronic dictionary from the supermarket three days ago, but now you find that the content of dictionary isn’t what you want to have.In addition, its functions are suit for what the assistant told you.Now write an email to Manager Mr.Wen to express your complaints and require changing a new one.Dear Mr.Wen,I, a customer buying an electronic dictionary three days ago, am formally writing the email to you for the purpose of expressing my extreme complaints about your service and your products.I must explain several reasons for my dissatisfaction.First of all, the content of dictionary is insufficient, not including the Oxford and Longman dictionary.Secondly, some functions are not useful and they are fit for what your assistants said.Thirdly, this electronic dictionary is higher
than it is worth.I will appreciate it very much if you could change a new type one.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
申请信
Directions: Some international department concerned is organizing the activity that China and America can exchange students to study and live in the respective country.Write the email to it and apply for a foreign student to study in your home.询问信
Directions: You want to study abroad at a certain university.Write a letter: 1.inquire about the situations there, and2.ask about qualifications,3.fees and accommodation 范文
Dear Sir or Madam,I, a Chinese student, am eagerly writing the letter to you for the purpose of asking for some information about your university.I have always been paying more attention to your university for these days.Would you provide some information as follows? First of all, could you tell me the situations there such as canteen, market and its like? Secondly, you had better give me some materials about qualifications.Thirdly, you can send some documents concerned about fees and accommodation.I will appreciate if very much if you could give me information that I want to know as soon a possible.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
第四篇:考研作文万能--小作文
考研英语小作文必背范文--感谢信
感谢信
Thanks for One’s Hospitality
Directions:
Your delegation has just returned from a visit to a university in Great Britain.And you were warmly treated there by Professor Herthwell.Please write a letter to express your thanks to him for his hospitality and hope for further cooperation。
Dear Prof.Herthwell,Many thanks for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during our delegation’s recent visit to your university.It was nice of you to introduce me to so many of your famous professors and celebrated scholars at your university.We had a safe and sound trip home.Now we have resumed our work。
Meanwhile, I hope you will someday pay a short visit to our university and give us some lectures on “Modern Western Economics”。
Please have no hesitation in writing to me if you want me to do something for you in China。
With best wishes。
Sincerely yours,Li Dong
以下是感谢类小作文写作中的几句常用语:
Thank you very much /indeed for---
I am obliged to you for your assistance during---
Thank you very much for the gift you sent me.It is one of the most wonderful gifts I got on my birthday。
Thanks to your effort, we had our most successful---ever。
Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget。
Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you。
考研英语小作文必背范文--求学信
Dear Professor Smith,I am writing to apply for admission to your university for further studies in the field of Physical Chemistry leading to a Ph.D.degree.I would also like to apply for a position as a teaching assistant.Would you please send me the necessary information and forms?
I am 26, male, majoring in chemistry.I received my M.S.degree from Nanjing University of Science and Technology in 1994.I have been working as a teaching assistant in the chemistry Department there。
An early reply would be appreciated.Thank you。
Respectfully yours,(Signature)
Li Ming 求职信
Applying for the Position of Assistant for Marketing Project Manager
Directions:
You are a senior of English for Business.A German company in China is recruiting an assistant to marketing project manager, which requires a good command of English and knowledge in German especially.Write a letter of about 100 words applying for the position, introducing yourself and asking for an interview.You needn’t write the address.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter, using “Wang Lin” instead。
Dear Sirs,I am graduating from the Shanghai Institute of Foreign Trade this summer.As a student of English for Business, I hope to work for a foreign company after graduation。
In the past three academic years, I have proved myself to be a straight student, awarded a succession of scholarships.My English is particularly good and German happens to be my second foreign language, which will live up to the requirements set by a wholly foreign-owned enterprise like yours。
I apply for the position of assistant to your marketing project manager.You will find me a good team player, self-motivated and eager to learn.I believe I can be of value to your company。
Enclosed please find my resume。
I should be very happy if you would arrange an interview with me。
Yours sincerely,Wang Lin
请求信
例一
Dear___________,I am writing to formally request to___________(请求的内容)
The reason for ______________is that______________________________(给出原因).I________, so I ___________________________________(给出细节)
I would also like to request ________________________(提出进一步的要求).I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.Thank you for your attention to these requests.If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at____________(电话号码).I look forward to a favorable reply.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
例二
Dear_____________,①I am_____________(介绍自己的身份).②I will/am_____________(与请求有关的自身现状).③I''d like to_____________(阐明自己的请求).④I will appreciate your_____________(有关该请求的详细信息).⑤I''m going to _____________(对方如能帮助实现请求,自己将要做些什么).⑥Here are the reasons why_____________(承上启下,开始解释原因)
⑦For one thing, _____________(请求的原因一);For another, _____________(原因二).⑧Therefore, _____________(总结写信的目的).⑨ I shall be much obliged to you if you _____________(对收信人的期望).⑩Thanks for your king consideration and Ilook forward to receiving your earliest reply.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
考研英语高分小作文模板之投诉信
Dear_______,I am_______________________.(自我介绍)I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_______.The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______________(总体介绍).In the first place,_________________________(抱怨的第一个方面).In addition, ____________________________(抱怨的第二个方面).Under these circumstances, I find it ___(感觉)to ____________________________(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).I appreciate it very much if you could_______________________(提出建议和请求), preferably __________(进一步的要求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ______(设定解决事情最后期限).Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
考研英语作文万能模板应用文系列之建议信
一、信函写作:称呼、正文、落款
1、审题—-判断是个人书信&事务公函
决定:
语域使用:正式:使用礼貌表达,不用缩略语(对公)
半正式:可以使用缩略和口语表达(对私)
非正式:(一般不考)——It depends
呼语: 特定的写信对象:Dear XX
不明确收信人:Dear Sir/Madam, or To Whom It May Concern
2、正文
三段(8句):写作目的段、细化段、感谢或者期待。
3、各种信函内容安排
1)建议信:2007年及2009年Part A真题及解析。
A.基本结构
Dear„/To Whom It May Concern,第一段: 写信目的,自我介绍,赞扬在先,仍需改进;
第二段: 建议细节;
第三段: 期望改进,表示感谢。
Yours sincerely,Li Ming
B.2007年Part A 真题及解析(建议信)
Directions:
Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address.To Whom It May Concern,I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to spend my spare time.Generally speaking, the services you offer here are quite good;however, I have some suggestions for you to adopt.And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration.To begin with, will you please prolong the time for reading? In the daytime, most of the students are having classes, so they can’t come to the library.Moreover, some of the books on shelves are out of date.If you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines, we will be very pleased.I really wish to have a more comfortable library.Thank you for your time and consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
C.建议信框架
Dear XX/To Whom It May Concern,I am xxx who„.Generally speaking, the services you offer here are quite good;however, I have some suggestions for you to adopt.To begin with,„建议一;Moreover, „建议二。
Thank you for your time and consideration.And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
考研英语作文万能模板应用文系列之致歉信模板
一、信函写作:称呼、正文、落款
1、审题—-判断是个人书信&事务公函
决定:
语域使用:正式:使用礼貌表达,不用缩略语(对公)
半正式:可以使用缩略和口语表达(对私)
非正式:(一般不考)——It depends
呼语: 特定的写信对象:Dear XX
不明确收信人:Dear Sir/Madam, or To Whom It May Concern
2、正文
三段(8句):写作目的段、细化段、感谢或者期待。
3、各种信函内容安排
3)致歉信:2008PartA真题及解析。
A.基本结构和常用句型
Dear„,第一段: 表明写信目的:道歉,阐述道歉原因;
第二段: 提出解决方法;
第三段: 再次道歉。
Yours sincerely,Li Ming
B.2008 Part A 真题及解析(致歉信):
Directions:
You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there.Write him a letter to
1)make an apology, and
2)suggest a solution.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the den of the letter.Use “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address.Dear Bob,I am writing to express my apology to you.Several days ago, I borrowed your music CD when I lived in your house.Unfortunately, after I came back from Canada, I found it in my luggage.I was in such a hurry that I forgot to return it to you.I will send it to you by post or express as soon as possible.If necessary, I will compensate for any troubles it may cause.Once again, I feel so sorry for any inconvenience caused.Please accept my apologies.Sincerely yours,Li Ming
C.道歉信框架
Dear xx,I am writing to apologize to you for my failing to „.道歉理由。
Excuse me for my carelessness in making such a mess.To make up for the inconvenience caused, I would like to...补偿一。补偿二。
Once again, I feel so sorry for any inconvenience caused.Please accept my apologies.Sincerely yours,Li Ming
考研英语作文万能模板应用文系列之辞职信模板
一、信函写作:称呼、正文、落款
1、审题—-判断是个人书信&事务公函
决定:
语域使用:正式:使用礼貌表达,不用缩略语(对公)
半正式:可以使用缩略和口语表达(对私)
非正式:(一般不考)——It depends
呼语: 特定的写信对象:Dear XX
不明确收信人:Dear Sir/Madam, or To Whom It May Concern
2、正文
三段(8句):写作目的段、细化段、感谢或者期待。
3、各种信函内容安排
4)辞职信:2005年Part A真题及解析(辞职信)。
A.基本结构和常用句型
Dear„,写信目的表明要辞职;
给出辞职原因(兴趣,专业,性格);
感谢栽培并表示抱歉。
Sincerely yours,Li Ming
B.2005年part a 真题及解析(辞职信):
Directions:
Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine design and fashion.but now you find that the work is not what you expected.You decide to quit.Write a letter to your boss, Mr.Wang,Telling him your decision, stating your reason(s), and making an apology.Write your letter with no less than 100 words.Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter;use “Li Ming” instead.You do not need to write the address.Dear Mr.Wang,I am writing this letter to apologize that I will quit the position as an editor of your magazine for the reason of myself.Two months ago, I was accepted by the design and fashions as a member of it.I was deeply impressed by the kindness, diligence of all staff members around me.But during the span of working here, I have come to realize that the job probably is not suitable for me because I want a more peaceful life, such as a teacher.And you know that I am not an outgoing girl.I find that I am not able to devote all my efforts to a job which I do not really like.So I am awfully sorry to tell you my decision to quit.Please accept my apology.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
C.辞职信框架
Dear XX,I am writing this letter to apologize that I will quit the position as „(职位)for the reason of myself.During the span of working here, I was deeply impressed by the kindness, diligence of all staff members around me.But I have come to realize that the job probably is not suitable for me because„理由(兴趣爱好专业)。
So I am awfully sorry to tell you my decision to quit.Thank you very much for offering the opportunity to with an outstanding staff here.Please accept my apology.Yours sincerely,Li Ming 考研英语作文万能模板应用文系列之慰问信模板
一、信函写作:称呼、正文、落款
1、审题—-判断是个人书信&事务公函
决定:
语域使用:正式:使用礼貌表达,不用缩略语(对公)
半正式:可以使用缩略和口语表达(对私)
非正式:(一般不考)——It depends
呼语: 特定的写信对象:Dear XX
不明确收信人:Dear Sir/Madam, or To Whom It May Concern
2、正文
三段(8句):写作目的段、细化段、感谢或者期待。
3、各种信函内容安排
5)慰问信:
A.基本结构
Dear„,表示同情,进行安慰;
鼓励其努力;
在此表示同情,并希望其早日复原。
Yours sincerely,Li Ming
B.范文解析
Dear Li Gang,I was really shocked and saddened to hear of your unhappy experience in the earthquake.There is little that anyone can say or do at a time like this to ease your grief, but I would express my deepest sympathy.In the next day or so you will receive a little package from me.I hope you like it, and that it will be useful at your present moment.What’s more, please don’t hesitate to contact me if there is anything else I can do now and always.I do hope you will soon get well again and be able to come back to school.Be assured of my availability and eagerness to help in any way I can.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
C.慰问信框架
Dear XX,I was really shocked and saddened to hear of„.There is little that anyone can say or do at a time like this to ease your grief, but I would express my deepest sympathy.In the next day or so you will receive a little package from me.I hope you like it, and that it will be useful at your present moment.What’s more, please don’t hesitate to contact me if there is anything else I can do now and always.I do hope you will soon get well again.Be assured of my availability and eagerness to help in any way I can.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
Dear XX,I was really sorry to hear of„.I wish there were something I could say or do to„.In the next day or so you will receive a little package from me.I hope you like it, and that it will be useful at your present moment.What’s more, please don’t hesitate to contact me if there is anything else I can do now and always.I do hope you will soon get well again.Be assured of my availability and eagerness to help in any way I can.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
考研英语作文万能模板应用文系列之祝贺信模板
一、信函写作:称呼、正文、落款
1、审题—-判断是个人书信&事务公函
决定:
语域使用:正式:使用礼貌表达,不用缩略语(对公)
半正式:可以使用缩略和口语表达(对私)
非正式:(一般不考)——It depends
呼语: 特定的写信对象:Dear XX
不明确收信人:Dear Sir/Madam, or To Whom It May Concern
2、正文
三段(8句):写作目的段、细化段、感谢或者期待。
3、各种信函内容安排
6)祝贺信
A.基本结构
Dear„.,表示祝贺,为之高兴;
祝贺缘由,劳有所获;
寄予期望,取得更大成就;
再次祝贺。
Yours sincerely,Li Ming
B.范文解析
Dear Zhang Jian,I am just as proud as you can be of you and send my sincerest congratulations on your admission to Beijing University as a postgraduate.During the past four years, you kept improving and devoted yourself into your major study.I am delighted that the four years of your study has been rewarded in this way.It is obvious that you will have a promising future in front of you.Congratulations again.I wish you will make great achievement in you future study and life.I am looking forward to hearing more good news in your studies and research work.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
C.祝贺信框架
Dear XX,I am just as proud as you can be of you and send my sincerest congratulations on„.During the past four years, you kept improving and devoted yourself into„.I am delighted that the four years of your effort has been rewarded in this way.It is obvious that you will have a promising future in front of you.Congratulations again.I wish you will make great achievement in you future study and life.I am looking forward to hearing more good news in your studies and research work.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
考研英语作文万能模板应用文系列之申请信模板
一、信函写作:称呼、正文、落款
1、审题—-判断是个人书信&事务公函
决定:
语域使用:正式:使用礼貌表达,不用缩略语(对公)
半正式:可以使用缩略和口语表达(对私)
非正式:(一般不考)——It depends
呼语: 特定的写信对象:Dear XX
不明确收信人:Dear Sir/Madam, or To Whom It May Concern
2、正文
三段(8句):写作目的段、细化段、感谢或者期待。
3、各种信函内容安排
9)申请信:2006年Part A 真题及解析(申请信&请求信:工作,求学,奖学金)
A.基本结构和常用句型
Dear„,告知信息来源及写信目的;
突出重点的自我介绍(专业,学习成绩,英语水平,学习能力,性格及合作精神);
附简历;
表示感谢。
Yours sincerely,Li Ming
B.2006年Part A真题及解析(申请信&请求信)
Directions:
You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area.Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate.You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.Write your letter in no less than 100 words.Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter, use“Li Ming”instead.Do not write the address.(10points).To Whom It May Concern,I am writing this letter to you to ask if there is a child in need of financial sponsorship through the Hope Foundation。
I am willing to give financial aid to those children who have not had a chance to receive education in poverty-stricken area.I would like to help two kinds of children:first ,those who do not have a stable source which can cover their education fees, and second, those whose academic performance in school is excellent.I have decided to commit myself to save the necessary financial aid required to accomplish my goal.I would also like to be kept informed as to the academic progress of each student every term.I have not doubt(There is not doubt)that I meet the criteria required for a sponsor and look forward to hearing from you.Thank you for your consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
C.常用句型
I learnt from the newspaper that you want an accountant and I would like to apply for the job.I am writing to apply for
Enclosed is my resume to provide additional information about my undergraduate work.I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss further how my qualifications meet the needs of your organization.Thank you for your time and consideration.考研英语作文万能模板应用文系列之推荐信模板
一、信函写作:称呼、正文、落款
1、审题—-判断是个人书信&事务公函
决定:
语域使用:正式:使用礼貌表达,不用缩略语(对公)
半正式:可以使用缩略和口语表达(对私)
非正式:(一般不考)——It depends
呼语: 特定的写信对象:Dear XX
不明确收信人:Dear Sir/Madam, or To Whom It May Concern
2、正文
三段(8句):写作目的段、细化段、感谢或者期待。
3、各种信函内容安排
10)推荐信
A.框架
第一段: 写信目的,指出写信人和被推荐人的关系;
第二段: 推荐原因(品质,能力,性格等):多写优点肯定成绩;
第三段: 总结说明被推荐人值得被推荐(例如能胜任某项工作)。
B.范文
Dear sir/ Madam,It is with great pleasure that I recommend to you Zhang Jian, an outstanding graduate majoring in Business Administration.I have been in charge of Mr.Zhang’s class since they were freshmen, so I know his well.He is courteous, sincere and hardworking.He took several courses in computer science, which strengthened his administration ability.And his excellent communication ability and a good command of English add a lot to his managerial skills.I believe Zhang Jian is the right person for the position as an administrator in your company.I recommend him without reservation and believe you will find him a helpful and responsible staff member.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
考研英语作文万能模板应用文系列之询问信模板
一、信函写作:称呼、正文、落款
1、审题—-判断是个人书信&事务公函
决定:
语域使用:正式:使用礼貌表达,不用缩略语(对公)
半正式:可以使用缩略和口语表达(对私)
非正式:(一般不考)——It depends
呼语: 特定的写信对象:Dear XX
不明确收信人:Dear Sir/Madam, or To Whom It May Concern
2、正文
三段(8句):写作目的段、细化段、感谢或者期待。
3、各种信函内容安排
11)询问信:考研英语大纲样题应用文部分(询问信)。
A.基本结构和常用句型
Dear „,自我介绍,表明写信目的是咨询某事;
询问细节;
感谢及相关信息。
Yours sincerely,Li Ming
考研英语作文万能模板应用文系列之备忘录模板
备忘录/告示类应用文写作(Memorandum/Notice)
1、告示类
A.文章结构
标题居中—notice/announcement
日期---标题下一行右侧(Jan.7, 2012)
正文:
第一段: 通知目的;
第二段: 具体信息;
第三段: 联系方式、表示欢迎。
B.范文分析
Announcement
Jan.7, 2012
In order to improve students’ ability, the Postgraduate Association is recruiting volunteers for a conference about globalization which will be held in the coming May.To begin with, the volunteers are requested to speak English fluently and are expected to be active and open-minded.Furthermore, the volunteers will be trained for 5 days and therefore the senior students with more free time are preferred.Anyone who is interested with it please contact us, and send your resume to the email address: 123456@163.com
考研英语作文万能模板应用文系列之邀请信常用句
型
一、信函写作:称呼、正文、落款
1、审题—-判断是个人书信&事务公函
决定:
语域使用:正式:使用礼貌表达,不用缩略语(对公)
半正式:可以使用缩略和口语表达(对私)
非正式:(一般不考)——It depends
呼语: 特定的写信对象:Dear XX
不明确收信人:Dear Sir/Madam, or To Whom It May Concern
2、正文
三段(8句):写作目的段、细化段、感谢或者期待。
3、各种信函内容安排
7)邀请信
A.基本结构
Dear„,发出邀请;
为何邀请细节;
期望参加。
Yours sincerely,Li Ming
B.范文解析
Dear Professor Wang,It is my honor to inform you that there is a “Culture Festival” held in mu school.Would you like to give us an excellent lecture on Psychology in the auditorium of our campus at 6:30 P.M., Sept.13th?
Since psychology has caused more and more concerns among the students, and you are an expert in the area, we all expect your acceptance and your wonderful lecture.I very much hope that you will accept the invitation.And I am looking forward to hearing back from you.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
C.常用句型
We are having a farewell party/a gather together/meeting/seminar in(place)on(date)at(time).Would you like to come?(不太正式)
It is my honor to inform you that there is an academic meeting in(place)on(date)at(time).We would be too glad to invite you as„(正式)
I very much hope that you will accept the invitation.And I am looking forward to hearing back from you.
第五篇:考研小作文
通知
通知
Directions: Suppose your university is going to host a summer camp for high school students.Write a notice to 1)briefly introduce the camp activities, and 2)call for volunteers.Notice
June 20, 2014
To enrich extracurricular activities, our school intends to hold a summer camp for students from high school on July 6, 2015.The event will include English learning and basketball games.Thus, volunteers for this camp are badly needed to assist us in organizing the relevant affairs, including reception, distribution of documents, etc.Candidates must have adequate patience with the adolescents.Besides, the volunteers ought to have outstanding skills at English.Students who have previous experience as volunteers are preferred.Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before June 30, 2014.投诉信
Direction: You just bought an English dictionary from a famous e-commerce site only to find it not as good as you expected.Write an email to the customer service center to
1)complain the poor quality of the dictionary, and
2)give reasons for your complaints.Dear Mr.Wang,(大家注意此处是逗号)
As a regular customer, I am writing this letter to complain about the quality of dictionary bought from the bookone.com.I ordered an Oxford Dictionary of Contemporary English a week ago.Apart from the delayed delivery, many pages in the dictionary are missing and some of the pages are reversed, which are totally unacceptable to me.I would like to get a refund or at least change it for a new one.And I trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind.Yours sincerely,(逗号)
Li Ming(无符号,千万不要打点
建议信
Write a letter to your university canteen, making suggestions for improving its service.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET.Dear Sir or Madam,I am a student of our university, who often have meals in our canteen.Generally speaking, our canteen provides quite good food.However, I still have some suggestions for you to make our canteen more popular among students.To begin with, I wonder whether you could provide more varieties of food.We do not have many options when eating in our canteen now.To continue, some students have complained about the price of the food there, would you please lower it down?
I do hope to have a better canteen.And I would be highly grateful if you could take my suggestions into consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
询问信
Write a letter inquiring a travel agency about the trip to Mount Huangshan.Some necessary details must be included.Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.Dear Sir or Madam,I would like to travel to Mount Huangshan this summer.I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding the following aspects.First, my family will come with me.Therefore, I would like to know the details about this trip, such as the accommodation, the plans and the money it will cost.Besides, how do you deliver these materials to me? What’s the deadline before we make the final decision? How do I pay for you?
Thank you for your attention.I am looking forward to your immediate response.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
申请信
Directions:
You want to apply for the following job: a personal secretary to the general manager, write a letter to Mr.Byron to:
1)show your interest,2)describe yourself, and
3)explain why you would be suitable for the job.Dear Mr.Byron,I am writing to apply for(求职)the position as the personal secretary to the general manager./(求学)(the opportunity for further study in your university).I am fully confident that I am the right candidate.To begin with, I major in secretary and will graduate from Peking University.I have a good academic performance in school and have been the top five students for four years in my grade.In addition, I am an open-minded, cooperative and ready-to-help girl.Enclosed is my resume to provide additional information.Thank you for your time and consideration.I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Yours Li Ming
请求信
Directions: You find your study load is too heavy.Write a letter to your college teacher: 1)you need to withdraw from two courses,2)explain the reasons,3)ask if it is possible to obtain a refund.Dear Professor Smith,I am writing to formally request to withdraw from two courses: Introduction to Elementary Education and Teaching Methods.The main reason for reducing my course load is that I find it extremely difficult to manage six courses.Because I really have to work part time, I have no other choice but to decrease my course load.Besides, I would also like to request a tuition refund.I am sorry for any inconveniences I have caused by this change in plans.Thank you for your attention to these requests.If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me at 82036600.I look forward to hearing from you soon.Yours Li Ming
祝贺信
Directions:Your friend Smith told you he had started his own business.Write a letter to him to congratulate him and give him some helpful suggestions.Dear Smith,I was happy to learn that you had opened your own firm and I would like to express my warmest congratulations.The final realization of your long-cherished dream should be attributed to your diligence, persistence and ambition.I am glad that your consistent pursuit of dream is rewarded now.As a good friend of you, I advise you to keep your ambition.Moreover, in response to challenges, please never overestimate the difficulties and underestimate your ability.Please accept my congratulations again.And I do believe you and your firm will achieve one success after another.Sincerely yours,Li Ming
感谢信
Directions:
You have just returned from a visit to a university in Great Britain.And you were warmly treated there by Professor Smith.Please write a letter to express your thanks to him for his hospitality.Dear Prof.Smith,I would like to thank you very much for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during my recent visit to your university.It was nice of you to introduce me so many of famous professors and celebrated scholars at your university.I feel obliged to you for the selfless assistance you render me.I appreciate it more than I can say.Finally, I wish I can have an opportunity to repay your kindness when you come to China in the near future.Again with many thanks.Sincerely yours,Li Ming
备忘录
Directions:
Write a memorandum of about 100 words to the student service department and ask them to fix a telephone for each dormitory.Your Memo should include:
(1)Your purpose.(2)The reasons.(3)Your sincere hope.Memo
Date: Aug.8, 2013
To: The leader of student service department
From: Li Ming
Subject: Telephone fixing
I would like to remind you that we are in need of a telephone for each dormitory.As university students, we need to cope with the daily increasing communications with teachers, friends and people outside the campus.We need a telephone to get and send message, which is important for us.Though most of us have mobile phones and e-mail address, a telephone in the dormitory is after all the most convenient and cheapest tool of communication.I hope that you will pay attention to this problem and solve it as soon as possible.