六级作文[样例5]

第一篇：六级作文

写作是本人的老本行，高中一般都是21-23这个级别，大学英语作文被老师在班上推介为范文！

对于作文，我说的最多的就是：不走寻常路！你不要以为在网上下载那些所谓的优秀作文，拿来背背，你就成为高手了，其实大错特错！因为我看了之后也觉得一般，甚至有些拙劣，哗众取宠的味道，比如有的所谓优秀作文竟然还用什么be good at，importance，very much，depend on，in my opinion，completely 这样低等的写作词汇，说它低等，那是因为这些词汇已经广为人知，阅卷老师已经看的麻木不仁了！

要写出高人一等的作文，我觉得并不难，只要你有一定的语法基础和一定量的写作词汇（越高级越好），写作句型，就足可以应对常规的高考，四六级考试„„（我记得高中25分满分的作文我可以保持在21-23这个级别，四六级的作文都是110多分）

首先是语法，在你的语法达到一定层次之后，你就可以追求更多的变化了，比如，用虚拟语气句型it is high time that we„„代替常用的it is necessary that we should„„，又如用倒装句代替常见的平铺直叙等，这样可以增加你的语法亮点，让已经有些麻木一直想睡觉的阅卷老师眼睛一亮，在你的试卷上多扫射一番！其次，是词汇，我觉得，在你的语法达到基本不会出错的程度上，作文便应该以词汇取胜，因为在这个层次上，大家的语法都差不多，没什么变化，唯一有变化的就是你的词汇！给你打个比方吧，很多想到“许多”就用many，但是你别忘了many a ；handsome；massive，innumerable，a multitude of ；很多人想到“专家”就写expert，但很少人会想到specialist，很多人在想到“擅长”这词，就写be good at，却不知还有更高级的表达法：be expert at 或者excel in „高手和庸才，就体现在这些细微的差别上！

再次，是怎么将文章润色，从而使你的文章大放异彩！关于这方面，我觉得我自己使用最多的，也是我自创的------叫做“添油加醋”，包括如下几个方面：尽可能地在形容词前使用副词，在介词短语中加入适当的形容词和副词，在过去分词前加入副词，在名词之前尽可能多用形容词„„，总之就是尽可能地使用形容词和副词。我觉得这样做有一个好处，那就是使原本干巴巴的句子变得血肉丰满，比如：

1.The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!

2.In my opinion,the driver’s carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成3For my part，the driver‘s negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident

4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!

第二篇：精选六级作文

The core value can be interpreted as following: The City, built by people, has been evolving and growing into an organic system.People are the most dynamic cells with the best ability to innovation this system.People’s life is closely interactive with the urban morphology and development.With the rapid urbanization, a more extensive relationship and interaction has been established between the city organic system and earth’s biosphere and resource system.People, city and earthare just like three organic systems linking with each other and fusing into the integrity.Throughoutthe whole process of urban development.其核心思想可以这样理解：城市史人创造的，它不断地演进、演化和成长为一个有机系统。人是这个有机系统中最具活力和最富有创新能力的细胞。人的生活与城市的形态和发展密切互动。随着城市化进程的加速，城市的有机系统与地球大生物圈和资源体系之间相互作用也日益加深和扩大。人、城市和地球三个有机系统环环相扣，这种关系贯穿了城市发展的历程，三者也将日益融合成为一个不可分割的整体。

For further reflect of the theme “Better City, Better Life”, five sub-themes are defined;they are “Blending of Diverse Cultures in the City”,” Economic Prosperity of the City”, Innovation of Science and Technology in the City”, “Remodeling of Urban Communities”, and “Rural-urban Interaction”.为了更好地理解“城市，让生活更美好”，上海世博会还设有五个副主题分别是“城市多元文化的融合”、“城市经济的繁荣”、“城市科技的创新”、“城市社区的重塑”、“城市和乡村的互动”。

Creating a Green Campus

Recently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has become a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our society.The concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s mind.Campus plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on students’various environmental protection activities after their graduation.What’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to solve.To make “green campus” come true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable campus.Secondly, it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the waste.Last but not least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the co-effort of the whole society.避错指导

本次作文在题材上，虽然仍然延续了我们所熟悉的校园类话题，但与社会背景有很大关系。刚刚闭幕的哥本哈根世界气候大会使环保减排这个主题成为焦点，在全世界都提倡可持续发展、和谐发展这一背景下的“绿色校园”，同时也是一个社会热点话题，这是我们审题时所必须考虑的。另外开篇时，切忌拖泥带水，应直截了当，使阅卷老师对文章主题一目了然。

【生动的用词】 maintain保持;concept概念;profound长远的;sustainable可持续的;recyclable可循环的。

【丰富的短语】bring benefit to带来利益;play a crucial role in发挥关键作用;under the burden of在„„重负下;come true实现;call for要求。

【同义词转换】

作文表达除了准确，还要做到句式多变，词汇灵活多样。

1.realize → be aware of 意识到

We’d better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us.我们最好意识到周围污染的严峻性。

2.keep → preserve 保持

It is necessary to educate the students to be conscious of the importance to preserve the environment.有必要教育学生意识到保护环境的重要性。

3.lead → conduct 引导

This will help conduct the activities of the college students.这有助于引导大学生的行为。

【话题备考锦囊】

6.The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.“绿色校园”绝不仅仅是一个绿色环境。

7.The construction of “a green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part in various environmental protection activities.建设“绿色校园”将会极大激励学生参与环境保护。

8.To bring “a green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken.为全面实施“绿色校园”，必须采取有效措施。

9.Campus construction is of vital importance not only to the physical development of students but to their mental health as well.校园建设不仅对学生的身体发展很重要，而且对他们的心理健康也很重要。

10.There is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campus.毫无疑问，对于绿色校园应该给与更多的思考。

【话题词汇拓展】

devastation n.毁坏

disastrous a.损失惨重的 doom v.厄运，毁灭

existence n.存在，生活

healthful a.健康的

messy a.肮脏的，凌乱的 participation n.分享，参与

preserve v.保存，保护

preventive a.预防性的 purify v.澄清，净化

stimulation n.激励，鼓舞

arouse consciousness 唤起意识 1.上图所示为某城市1989、1994、1999、2004年参加成人教育(或继续教育)的人数情况，请描述其变化;

2.请说明发生这些变化的原因(可从社会发展及竞争能力方面加以说明)

3.请预测我国成人教育(继续教育)的前景

A Boom in Continuing Education

From the graph, we know the statistics of the Continuing Education participation and the increasing numbers of the participants in X city.In 1989 there were only thirty people taking part in the Continuing Education, but in 1994 the number has grown to eighty? Our thousand people, and in 1999, a hundred and sixteen thousand, and in 2004, the number of Continuing Education participation reached its top: a hundred and seventy thousand.It can be seen easily that there are more and more people who hope to get advanced degrees and gain more knowledge after they began to work.There are many reasons responsible for the great change, and the following are the typical ones.For one thing, during the work people begin to realize what they have learned before is far from enough.They know what kind of knowledge they need.In addition, as the science and technology in China are developing so fast, adults after graduation have to go back to universities to refresh themselves and improve their competitive ability in society.The main reason is the population growth that affects people? promotion chances.Many people without Bachelor have been laid off.Therefore, such competitive social background stimulates many people to continue to study.However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future.I believe one thing is quite certain that education can? be separated from our social development.As our society is developing, more and more people will receive Continuing Education in the future.1.中国传统节日受到冷遇，西方节日日益升温已成为趋势

2.形成这种现象的原因

3.你对这种现象的态度

【范文】

The Prevalence of Western Holidays

It is noticeable that western holidays are becoming increasingly popular day by day, while Chinese traditional holidays are being somewhat neglected.Old people often complain that Chinese New Year has lost its real meaning.To their astonishment, young people in China, ignorant about Chinese traditional holidays, are crazy about Christmas or Valentine Day.There are several possible reasons for this phenomenon.First, western nations, such as the United States and Britain, are powerful and dominant in every aspect.Everything in these countries is assumed to be superior and adored by some modern young people.Second, the prevalence of English as a world language and the development of globalization enable western culture to flood in China.Overwhelmed by such a trend, Chinese unconsciously get involved in western culture.Last but not least, some Chinese people have blind faith in foreign things while dismiss our own possessions with contempt.I am critical of this trend.China boasts a brilliant history and splendid traditions.In modern times, Chinese tradition should be preserved and promoted.But it seems that young people no longer treasure the tradition.On the contrary, they turn to pursue enthusiastically a supposedly more modern culture.If this trend is allowed to continue, the priceless heritage of our ancestors will be replaced by western traditions.Nobody expects such a consequence.So let join hand in hand to protect Chinese tradition.1.据统计，在网上聊天交友、玩网络游戏是目前我国大学生上网的主要活动内容

2.专家认为，那些沉迷于聊天和游戏的大学生，不仅耗费了金钱、时间和精力，还影响了正常的学业和人际交往

3.我们应当如何看待大学生上网的问题

【范文】

What are College Students doing on the Internet?

Nowadays surfing the Internet has become very popular on campus.I am impressed most that many college students spend too much time playing games and chatting on the Internet.As is well known, chatting and playing and can do much harm to us if we spend too much time on the virtual world.Firstly, it is an enormous waste of time and we will have little time for our study.Secondly, those who play games or chat day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep.Thirdly, our social ties will suffer as a result of the immersion in the virtual world.The last but not the least, it will cost us much money.In my opinion, we should deal with the Internet carefully.On the one hand, we can get some pleasure and knowledge from the Internet.On the other hand, we shouldn’t spend too much time, energy and money on the Internet because study is our priority.In conclusion, we should make good and proper use of the Internet.工作的选择

A recent survey shows that people who get higher salaries generally work longer hours than those who get lower salaries.Some people favor higher-paying jobs, even though such jobs always result in longer work time.They believe that money is so indispensable in people’s lives that without it no material comforts or well-being can be guaranteed.However, others have different preferences.They would rather take up lower-paying jobs with shorter hours.In their eyes, money doesn’t necessarily ensure happiness and well-being.They want to spend more time in doing their likes and getting together with their family and friends.As for me, I prefer to take up a job with shorter hours even if it pays less.In my opinion, work is not our whole life.We should allocate enough time to our family and friends and have more time to enjoy our life.Besides, we are not machines.We need time to relax and rest so that we could be energetic enough to do our job better.校园“考证族”的队伍不断壮大，很多学生忙于考区各种资格证书 大学生忙考证的利弊 你的观点

On Qualification-obtaining Fever

Currently, there is a long-lasting fever of obtaining a variety of qualifications among college students, including vocational qualifications and skills certificates.Many students spend their weekends and vocation in preparing for tests on English, Law and Computer Science.Even after their graduation, some of them are still having full enthusiasm on it.No doubt qualifications have attractions of their own.They are evidences to confirm students’ abilities.Work-related or competence-based qualifications may even help students find a satisfactory job, so students hold the opinion that they are obtaining not credentials but opportunities for their future.However, as it is known to all that each coin has its two sides, obtaining qualifications also brings negative influences in spite of its advantages.First, some vocational qualifications are obtained at the expense of the basic discipline study or major learning.Second, it will take 300 to 500 Yuan to go in for a certain certificate, leading to great financial burden.Third, better jobs do not always necessarily follow more qualifications.From my point of view, what matters most is relevant experience or skill, not the number of credentials you have obtained.[Next Page好词佳句]

好词佳句总结：

fever 狂热可用指某种现象

vocational qualification 职业证照

work-related 与工作有关

credentials 学历资历等的资格

at the expense of以„„为牺牲

同学们注意下范文最后一句，使用该句式又稳妥，又能拿个不错的分数。

From my point of view, what matters most is„ not„

1)道路事故会给人们的生命和财产带来很大的损 2)分析道路事故发生的主要原因 3)如何降低事故发生率

行文思路：

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析造成该问题的原因，提纲第3点要求说明解决该问题的方法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出道路事故的严重性及主要危害;分析导致道路事故的主要原因;说明应该如何降低道路事故的发生率。

高分范文：

Road Accidents

Road accidents, as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern.In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents.In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives.The following reasons contribute to road accidents.Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities.More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents.In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even don’t comply with the traffic regulations.For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk.Besides, the weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is a noticeable reason.Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it.Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose.Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations.Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners.Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully.2009年英语六级作文预测范文第二篇

1)随着互联网的普及和应用，网络犯罪开始摆在世人面前

2)应该如何来打击和预防网络犯罪越来越成为人们必须要解决的一个难题

3)作为大学生，你应该怎么做？

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点指出解决该问题的紧迫性，提纲第3点要求谈谈大学生应该如何应对该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述网络犯罪出现的背景及问题现状；指出解决网络犯罪问题的紧迫型，说明解决办法；从大学生的角度谈谈应该如何应对网络犯罪。

【参考范文】

Cyber Crimes

With the popularization of Internet, cyber-crimes have become a serious problem facing us.Nowadays cyber criminals seem to be everywhere on the Internet.To illustrate, some commit fraud or lift intellectual property, others snatch passwords or disrupt e-commerce, and still others unleash viruses to crash computers.As a result, these crimes destroy network security greatly and make computer users suffer great losses。

However, we shouldn’t tolerate these cyber criminals any more.It’s high time for us to take effective measures to fight against cyber-crimes.First, we should reinforce the cyber laws to punish cyber criminals strictly.Moreover, we should develop high techniques as soon as possible to improve intrusion detection and prevent cyber-crimes.Besides, more talented people should be trained and more effective firewalls should be built up so as to make the net immune to all kinds of viruses。

As college students, we have responsibility to join the battle against cyber-crimes.For one thing, we should not use others’ computers unless we get permission.For another, we should be honest to others on the Internet and not release or spread unreal information.In a word, it takes our common efforts to defeat cyber crimes。

1)有些人会选择收入高但工作时间长的工作；有些人则宁愿选择收入低但工作时间却相对较短的工作

2)如果让你选择，你会选择哪种工作？理由是„

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的工作选择，提纲第2点要求表明“我”的倾向，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出人们对工作的两种不同选择倾向：一些人即使需要工作更长的时间也会选择收入高的工作，一些人则宁愿拿低工资也会选择工作时间较短的工作；表明“我”会选择什么类型的工作，说明“我”这样选择的理由。

【参考范文】

My Choice for Job

A recent survey shows that people who get higher salaries generally work longer hours than those who get lower salaries.Some people favor higher-paying jobs, even though such jobs always result in longer work time.They believe that money is so indispensable in people’s lives that without it no material comforts or well-being can be guaranteed。

However, others have different preferences.They would rather take up lower-paying jobs with shorter hours.In their eyes, money doesn’tnecessarily ensure happiness and well-being.They want to spend more time in doing their likes and getting together with their family and friends。

As for me, I prefer to take up a job with shorter hours even if it pays less.In my opinion, work is not our whole life.We should allocate enough time to our family and friends and have more time to enjoy our life.Besides, we are not machines.We need time to relax and rest so that we could be energetic enough to do our job better。

1)现在各种各样的电视选秀节目吸引了许多年轻人

2)为了实现明星梦，一些年轻人甚至放弃了学业，这种现象引起了许多关注

3)你怎么看？为什么？

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点和第2点指出一种有争议的现象，提纲第3点要求表明“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述年轻人热衷选秀节目的现象，引出对其的争议；表明“我”对年轻人热衷选秀节目的看法，并说明“我”的理由。

【参考范文】

Attending TV PK Shows Does No Good to Young People

Nowadays TV PK shows are great hits in China and have attracted many young people.Some youngsters even give up their studies to attend these shows in the hope of becoming famous overnight.Some people think these shows provide young people more chance to show talents, while others believe that attending these shows does no good to the young people.As for me, I prefer to the latter opinion。

It should be admitted that some young people like Li yuchun has stood out from the numerous attendants in the PK show, but that doesn’t mean attending the PK shows is a good way to become successful for young people.The following reasons can support my view.Firstly, TV PK shows breed restlessness and induce young people to hunt after fame at whatever cost.Secondly, TV PK shows can subvert the youngsters’ values.They think attending the PK shows is a shortcut to the success, so they may despise the way of achieving success by hard work.Finally, if the young people fail in these shows, they will suffer a psychological unbalance。

In a word, entering for TV PK shows is not a good way for young people to make a success.I suggest young people should think twice before deciding to attend PK shows。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting.You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1)近年来出现大学生就业难的现象

2)产生这一现象的原因

3)如何解决这一问题

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出目前大学生就业难的现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象产生的原因，提纲第3点则要求阐述应该如何解决这一问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：提出大学生就业难的现象，指出现象的表现；说明现象产生的原因，如大学生追求目标过高等；从几个方面提出解决方法。

【参考范文】

College Students’Job Hunting

Nowadays, the employment of college students is becoming more and more of a problem.About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after graduation, while the things are quite difficult at present.In addition, according to statistics, about 30% of graduate students can’t find a job but stay at home after graduation。

Employment difficulty of college students is due to the following reasons.Among these, the increasing recruitment of colleges and universities plays a vital role.In addition, many colleges and universities fail to adapt their courses to the development of economy。

Considering the seriousness of unemployment of college students, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem.Above all, college students should realize their own defects and further improve themselves to keep their competitive edge in society.Moreover, colleges or universities should provide more trainings and internship opportunities before the students enter the society.Besides, college students should hold a right attitude towards jobs and set their job expectations at a suitable level.Only through these ways can the college students find a satisfactory job and have a brighter future。

In the sound of the whistle, the May meeting of rain and tears.This is a sad moment: the mothers, fathers, sons, daughters, wives, husbands, lovers, teachers, students, friends, colleagues, neighbors…...to at 14:28 on May 12 before the dull, busy, hope , Disappointed, sad, happy…… those beautiful days.Today's Wenchuan Festivals, it is only a short farewell.Life, not just breathing and heartbeat.Man's bitterest sorrows are separation and death not the lives of the border.Pro-people did not leave, everything will continue.In the ruins of the baby crying sound, called a “Wenchuan” new life, born today.在悠远的汽笛声中垂首默立，任5月的雨水和泪水交汇。这是挥别的一刻：向母亲、父亲、儿子、女儿、妻子、丈夫、恋人、老师、学生、朋友、同事、邻居„„；向5月12日14时28分前的平淡、忙碌、盼望、失望、忧愁、欢喜„„那些美丽的温馨日子。

今天的汶川祭奠，一定也只是短暂的告别。生命，并非仅仅是呼吸和心跳。生离死别，不是生命的边界。亲人们没有离去，一切都将延续。在废墟上嘹亮的婴儿啼哭声里，一个叫做“汶川”的新生命，今天降生。

May 12, 2008, let us all Chinese people always remember this day for it, our “national calamity,” the history of the Chinese nation, engraved too many disasters, but never the candidate of our national glories, One of the disaster, and again before loading the line, then let us bury the grief of all good, clean up all the ruins, was once their homes on the land, rebuild our homes, to live boldly, to live On a good living.2008年5月12日，让我们所有中华儿女永远记住这一天吧，我们的“国难日”，中华民族的历史本上，铭刻了太多的灾难，但这永远也难掩我们民族的辉煌，一次次的灾难，一次次的负重前行，那么就让我们掩埋好所有的悲痛，清理干净所有的废墟，在曾经是家园的土地上，重建我们的家园，勇敢地活下去，能活，就好好活。

Broken heart, tend to become very fragile, post-disaster reconstruction, the firm has become particularly important, three minutes after we wiped away tears, we cannot weep, to bravely live, because their relatives in heaven We watched, Tongbuyusheng, sad to tactic is not their wish to see, good to live in, they are to our expectations, think about this, it has the ruins to life for the life of the mother, “Dear Baby, if Can you live, to keep in mind that mother love you ”;think that in order to save the expense of four children and teachers, we go to these family members, in their own lives to give us an opportunity to a live, To them, we have to live better.破碎的心，往往会变得相当脆弱，灾后重建，坚强就变得尤其重要，三分钟过后，我们要擦干眼泪，我们不能再哭，要勇敢地活下去，因为亲人会在天堂看着我们，痛不欲生、伤心欲绝不是他们想看到的，好地地活下去，是他们对我们的期望，想一想，那废墟中以已命换子命的母亲，“亲爱的宝贝，如果你能活下去，要记住，妈妈爱你”；想一想那为了救四个孩子而牺牲了的老师，我们的走了的这些亲人，用自己的生命给我们争来了活的机会，为了他们，我们也要活的更好。

We all Chinese people, is a lifelong hard to forget the day, because today is the “national crisis,” Sadness Wenchuan, the country was sad, we use such a way, to commemorate those in earthquake In the passing away of relatives, we used this as a way for them came in on the road toward heaven, I hope they will be well all the way, when they look back at the earth, will see tens of thousands of their compatriots hand-foot-, Look up to the sky pray for them, so they will not be alone, not lonely。

对于我们所有中国人来说，都是一个终生难忘记的日子，因为今天，是我们的“国难日”，悲情汶川，举国志哀，我们用这样一种方式，来纪念那些在地震中逝去的亲人，我们用这样的一种方式，为他们招魂，在奔向天国的路上，希望他们能够一路走好，当他们回头遥望故土大地时，会看见成千上万的他们的同胞手足，在仰望苍穹为他们祈祷，所以他们不会孤独、不会寂寞。

1)有的大学毕业生选择工作时主要看重高工资，而有的则认为良好的职业发展空间才是更重要的

2)阐述他们各自的考虑

3)表明你的看法

High Salaries or Career Development?

There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different views about what kind of job they should choose.[1]Some of them focus their attention on the jobs that promise high salaries.[1]Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.[2]People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more happiness.[3]With a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich life.Otherwise, they will suffer from depression [4]due to lack of enough money.[2]However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.[5]It is career development that counts most.Without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner or later.In my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us long term satisfaction [6]while high salary would give us short term happiness.Besides, [7]generally speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries sooner or later.So I will [8]give my vote to the career development first and then high salaries.[1]用于引出两种不同的观点或倾向。

[2]用于对比分析两种观点各自的理由。

[3]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构充当状语。

[4]“因为缺钱”。

[5]强调句型，此处是强调句子的主语。

[6]while引导比较状语从句，意为“然而”。

[7]“一般来说”。

[8]“选择”。

1.佳句：Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.临摹：近些年来，越来越多的人开始喜欢洋快餐。

___________________________________________________________________________.2.佳句：However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.临摹：然而，持第二种观点的人认为体育明星们为社会做出了杰出的贡献，因此应该得到特殊待遇。

___________________________________________________________________________.3.佳句：Career may give us longing term satisfaction while high salary would give us short term happiness.临摹：我们之间的共同之处使我们的关系牢固，而不同之处则都会我们如何相互理解。

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1.In recent years, there are more and more people who have showed a preference for western fast food.2.However, the holders of the second view argue that since sports stars have made great contributions to the society, they deserve some special treatment.3.The similarity between us makes our relationship solid while the difference teaches us how to understand each other.1.大学生自主创业已经很普遍

2.大学生自主创业的好处

3.我的看法

范文：

Recently, self-employment has become a popular idea among youngsters, college graduates in particular.Owing to favorable policies, a large number of graduates launch their own business as the starting line of career.Furthermore, some successful examples have already been reported in the newspapers and Internet.Admittedly, there are several advantages for graduates to become self-employed.Firstly, the current intense competition for jobs can be eased to a large extent.Besides, it is apparent that young people can broaden their horizon in this process.Even if unsuccessful, they can learn from their failure and enrich their experience.Lastly, the hardship in self-employment enables graduates to be more diligent, which will be of tremendous benefits to their career in the society.As modern college students, not only should we get a good command of professional knowledge, but also make a clear and reasonable plan for our future career.Personally, I intend to establish my own business after graduation.I am convinced that being self-employed can contribute a lot to my personal development.(170 words)

第三篇：六级作文

话题：Open Courses

1.现在网络公开课很盛行;2.网络公开课有不少好处，也存在一些问题;3.我对此的建议。

范文：

Online open courses are gaining popularity in recent years.Follwoing globally famous universities like Yale and Harvard, some universities in China have also started to offer online open courses.Those courses have attracted people from all classes with different occupations.The courses have brought many benefits to people.Many of the courses are provided by universities in foreign countries, and thus offer fresh ideas to us.Through them, we can keep up with what people are thinking all over the world.But that can also be a problem.Some of the courses may not be very suitable for Chinese students because of cultural differences and may cause chaos on Chinese campus.In my opinion, online open course is useful and we should make use of it to broaden our horizons.But we should also remember to have our own thinking and not be brainwashed by improper ideas.题目：On Blind-date Show

1、目前电视相亲节目很流行

2、出现这种现象的原因是：

3、我对此的看法

范文：

Nowadays, the blind-date shows are becoming more and more popular.Whenever we turn on TV, those incredible senses of blind-date shows would pop up on the screen.Many people, from teenagers to the elderly, are so crazy about these shows that they never miss a single chance to watch them.Three reasons would contribute to the popularity of these blind-date shows.To begin with, there are over 180 million people who remain single long after they have reached the official age for marriage.Moreover, a great number of people would like to amuse themselves by watching other people dating.Last but not least,more and more television producers add a couple of attractive elements to cater for the different tastes of the audience.In my view, the government should impose restrictions to these blind-date shows.Many of these shows advocate money-warship and materialism;quite a few of the guests’ identities are artificial.If these problems are not solved, the misleading effects can be disastrous.题目：Self-help Traveling

1、越来越多的大学生选择“自助游”

2、也会带来一些问题

3、我的看法

范文：

Self-help traveling enjoys great popularity among college students today.The reason may be that they can save a lot of money by arranging the routes, booking cheaper hotels and deciding cheaper transportation tools all by themselves.Convenient and economical as self-help traveling sounds, they still have some potential problems.Perhaps the most important one is the safety problem.Being alone without a group or a tour guide, a traveler may be helpless in face of danger, i.e.robbery, wild animal attacks, etc.In addition, they are more likely to be at risk of getting lost when traveling alone in a city strange to them or in the remote countryside.In my view, self-help traveling can be exciting and challenging and is worth trying.However, before setting out alone, travelers should make good preparations.Besides, they should bear safety and security in mind all the time and keep in touch with their friends or relatives.Thus, they can enjoy both safety and pleasure of exploring different places.题目：On Adversity

1、每个人都会碰到逆境

2、人们对逆境的看法不一

3、我的看法

范文：

Everyone meets setbacks and frustrations in life,and each tries hard to avoid them, only to find that they are just like your own shadow accompanying you all your life.When confronted with adversity, different people make different response.Some people consider it a stumbling block on the road to success,and get depressed or even sink into despair, others consider it the stairway to great accomplishments and try to overcome it with constant struggle.The latter, therefore, will recognize their disadvantages from their temporary defeat,draw lessons from it,and grow stronger each time they have coped with a difficulty.In my opinion, adversity often leads to prosperity.Painful and depressing as it is, overcoming adversity endows us with great confidence that is crucial to success.Great people are not born successful, they are great only because they have tempered their personality and remedied their deficiencies through experiencing countless adversities and defeats，which is actually a goddess of blessing in disguise.Traveling Abroad

In recent years, more and more citizens are traveling abroad.In 1995, the number of people who choose to travel abroad was about 10000.The number quadrupled to nearly 40000 in 2000.And in 2005, the number further climbed above 12000.There are several reasons for the shocking rise.To begin with, the improvement of the life standards makes traveling abroad affordable to more and more people.Moreover, the convenient transportation facilities make more destinations accessible.The last but not the least, after visiting most famous scenic spots throughout our country, exotic cultures seem to appeal more to many citizens.And gradually, they begin to treat traveling abroad as a new fashion.This trend is beneficial for people on the whole.On one hand, it is a very interesting and romantic way to spend one's vacation.On the other hand, it enlarges people's vision by having a look at what is going on in a different country.话题：树立目标

1.树立目标很重要2.原因是„„3.如何设立和达到目标

The Importance of Goal

There is no denying that setting a goal is very important.We find that successful people are always those having and achieving their goals.They set goals, short-term or long-run, to help realize their visions.Why is goal-setting important? By setting goals you are taking control of the tempo of your life.It is having a map to guide you to where you want to head for.With a clear direction, and with certain plans, you will straightly get what you want.On the contrary, without a goal ,you will live a wandering life.You do not know where to go, what you want and why you are listless.Then your life becomes dull and meaningles just like the dead water in a muddy lake.From my point of view, goals are not difficult to set and realize.First, you should make clear what you really want, which constitutes your goals.Then you make detailed palans and follow the through, as many wi话题：How to Enhance

the Sense of Happiness

1.人们对于如何提升幸福感有不同看法 2.幸福感提升不仅包含物质层面，也指„„

范文：

The sense of happiness is of great significance.As a vital factor of life, it brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for loving life, and helps us to create a promising future.However, in contemporary China, it has become a trend for Chinese people to hold different views about happiness and the way to enhance it.In addition to material basis, the sense of happiness also refers to several others aspects.Firstly, based on a recent survey, a majority of individuals admit that they are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately, and their happiness depends more on their success in careers, friendship and love.Secondly, a great many people claim that health is the key to their sense of happiness.It is health that enables them to build up a solid foundation for anything significant.As a college student, I am convinced that never can money equal happiness.To enhance our sense of happiness, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classmates to enrich their knowledge, broaden their horizon and cultivate their ability.1.当今社会，社交网站很流行 2.各人对此看法不同 3.我的看法

话题：Social Network Sites

【参考范文一】

Social Network Sites

In recent years, social network sites like Renren and Kaixin have rapidly gained popularity among all kinds of people.Many people spend a lot of time on those sites chatting, making friends and playing games.Those sites have become a part of their life.The public hold different views on this phenomenon.Some are in favor of those sites for they provide many opportunities to know other people and to know what’s happening in the world.Besides, they’re very convenient to access.One can use a computer or cell phone to log on at home, in a restaurant, or even in the subway.But some people don’t approve of the social network sites.They say that people are wasting too much time on the sites.Some even get addicted to them and abandon their real life.After all, they don’t live in the virtual world.In my opinion, the social network sites can be very helpful when we want to keep in touch with friends, but we must remember that the real world is the most important in our life.1.有人相信知识能改变命运2.有人则认为当今社会光靠知识已经很难改变命运3.我认为„„

Can Knowledge Change One’s Destiny?

【参考范文一】

Can Knowledge Change One’s Destiny?

Some people have always believed that knowledge can change their destiny.Most of them are those from undeveloped areas, and by knowledge they usually mean diploma.They believe that if they send the kids in the family to college and that the kids get a diploma, they can change the kids’ destiny from doing farm work to enjoy a modern and advanced life in the city.However, some hold a different view.They say that in today’s society, knowledge alone is not enough to change destiny.To succeed in this complicated age, one needs not only knowledge, but also good communicating skills and a wide horizon, which cannot be easily learned in class.Knowledge itself is also more complicated than before.With technologies constantly advancing, one needs good learning ability to keep up with the time.In my opinion, knowledge is essential, but it is not everything.To change the destiny, one needs to keep learning various skills, to widen his horizons, and to keep pace with the latest trend.

第四篇：六级作文

莎士比亚诞生400周年

1）文学阅读在学习过程中发挥的作用（reading literature）2）阅读经典的重要性（classic）；当代社会，还需要阅读经典吗？ 各市面向本市招生减少，面向外省招生人数增加

1）文凭（diploma）、考证热（certificate craze）等相关话题 2）勤奋在学习过程中的重要性（diligence）3）勤奋、努力（effort）能带来成功（success）互联网热点相关

1）互联网信息如何正确传播？（misinformation：错误信息;spread： 传播）2）错误的互联网信息，带来的后果？（misleading：误导）

3）互联网科技方便了人们，但人们却变懒了（convenience：方便；don't intend to do sth：不再打算做某事；no longer feel like to do sth：不再愿意做某事）4）人们对互联网、手机等过分依赖（smartphone：智能手机；overdependence：过分依赖）人生哲理

1）什么是信任？如何保持信任（maintain trust）？

2）人际关系处理需要的一些品质相关（friendly：友善；honesty, integrity：诚实；indifferent：冷漠不关心的；intimate：亲密的；密友）

3）成功需要的智慧和品质（persistence：坚持；分散成本，例：不把鸡蛋放在同一个篮子里）

4）优秀道德品质（例，不以外貌取人：appearance）

参考范文：

1.The Importance of Asking Questions

Nowadays, it is common to see that people are active in showing their understanding of things.But when it comes to something that they are not familiar with, seldom do they reveal the ignorance.In fact, they are just afraid of looking like fools.As far as I am concerned, coming up with a question is not necessarily a negative sign.To begin with, people don't have a question when they don't study at all, which means they are not thinking and just letting the days slip by.Another case is that people are actually pondering over some questions that they cannot find answers on their own.However, they choose to keep these questions in the dark for fear that someone else might know their weak points.In this way, they lose the motivation to think about and put forward questions day by day.In brief, there is no need to hold back from asking questions.Just as the saying goes, “He who asks is a fool for five minutes, but he who does not ask remains a fool forever.”

2.Is Becoming Rich the Only Goal of Life?

As the saying goes, “Money makes the mare go.” Living in the contemporary society, more and more people are becoming money-oriented whether voluntarily or reluctantly.Sometimes, they should be reminded that becoming rich is not the only purpose of life.If one spends all his life pursuing nothing but money, he might live in a big house and drive a luxury car when he gets old.However, a person's material need is within limits.One cannot live in two houses and drive two cars at the same time.Neither should one take in two persons' amount of food.Besides, people's desire and ambition to make money could be infinite.More of money doesn't always make us happier.More of Money tends to make us used to that money and desirous of having even more of that.Therefore, we should look around and find other goals of life.For example, one can a meaningful life by discovering his gift and making the best of it.One can also live a happy life by making more friends and building a joyful family.3.How to Enhance Our Sense of Happiness?

Along with the improvement of living standards, people are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately.They are more concerned about how to enhance their sense of happiness.To a large extent, happiness depends on individuals‟ understanding about it.For some people, happiness relies on material basis, without which they can't live comfortably and decently.For others, they believe that happiness has nothing to do with money.Thus to enhance happiness is not equal to improving one‟s material living standards.Instead, people are supposed to confront their life with right attitude, to be active and grateful in order to have a happy life.For my part, money does buy happiness, but only up to the point where it enables one to live comfortably.To boost one‟s happiness not only needs the material but also the spiritual enrichment.It encompasses living a meaningful life, utilizing your gifts and your time, living with reflection and objective.4.In recent years, more and more college students quit school ahead of schedule.Except the minority quitting for objective reasons like health problem,most students leave with the pursuit of an ideal career, as well as more experience and fortune.Several factors may contribute to its emergence.In the first place, some students think that the opportunity cost of spending four years on college campus is too high,and the job market competition is getting fiercer.Therefore, when there‟s a satisfying job available, it‟s worth quitting.In the second place, some hold that the real world is a better school for them to get practical knowledge than traditional schools.Last but not least, the publicizing and popularity of some successful businessmen like Bill Gates and Steve Jobs,who didn‟t finish school but ended up with a great fortune and achievement, set examples for the young generation emphasizing individuality and personality.However, I don‟t think it‟s rational for college students to quit school.Armed with high education and more mature personality, better-prepared graduates can fight for their future more easily.In a word, college education pays off.5.How to Be Successful in a Job Interview

To be successful in a job interview or in almost any interview situation, the applicants hould demonstrate certain personal and professional qualities.Most likely, the first and often a lasting impression of a person is determined by the clothes he wears.The job applicant should take care to appear well-groomed and modestly dressed, avoiding the extremes of too pompous or too casual attire.Besides care for personal appearance, he should pay close attention to his manner of speaking, which should be neither ostentatious nor familiar but rather straight forward, grammatically accurate, and in a friendly way.In addition, he should be prepared to talk knowledgeably about the requirements of the position, for which he is applying in relation to his own professional experience and interests.And finally, the really impressive applicant must convey a sense of self-confidence and enthusiasm for work, as these are factors all interviewers value highly.If the job seeker displays the above-mentioned characteristics, he, with a little luck, will certainly succeed in the typical personnel interview.6.The Impact of the Cellphone on Interpersonal Communication The picture depicts a couple dating in the park.While the man just focuses on his cellphones, and doesn‟t pay any attention to his partner or the nature beauty in the park.This picture reflects a common phenomenon in today‟s society: people spend too much time with their cellphones and communicate less and less with the people around them.Nowadays, the smart-cellphones become more and more important in our daily life.They have made our life more convenient.We are timely aware of the most latest news around or faraway from us.However, everything has two sides.Except for all the advantages, the smart-cellphones also have brought some problems.First, when you‟re focus on the cellphone, you may ignore the beautiful scene around you.What‟s worse, you are just absorbed in your own small world, rather than share your happiness and sorrows with the family.You hardly talk with your family and the ones around you.You become indifferent to them.All in all, let‟s put down the cellphones and spend more time communicating with our family and friends face to face directly.7.Spend Our Leisure to the Best Advantage

Most of us are inclined to feel that it is difficult to spend our leisure properly.When we have holidays, we usually feel bored and do not know what to do.Many people just sit in a sofa watching TV, while many other people stay in bed to venture their dreamland.Actually, having this feeling is quite natural since, in our daily life, we do things more or less in accordance with an unwritten daily routine in our mind.For instance, a student goes to school in the morning, takes lunch at noon, goes home in the evening and does homework at night;while a clerk gets to the office in the morning, takes tea in the afternoon, goes back home in the evening and reads newspaper at night.Gradually and accordingly we get used to the routine in our mind.And once we have holidays, we need not carry out this routine.So we are at a complete loss.How to spend our leisure? Here are some helpful suggestions but the subject matter is to have recreation!If you are an active person, you can go on a picnic, or play some sports games.The fresh air and the fascinating scenery in the countryside may refresh you and the amusing games may make you happier.For those who are not so active and like to stay at home, they may listen to light music or read novels.Indoor games such as chess, cards, table tennis and hobbies such as gardening and keeping pets are also enjoyable.In this way, we will feel relaxed, happier and more energetic.When holidays a re over and we begin to work again, we can do much better with a light heart.8.No one would argue, I think, that money is unimportant.There are certain things that human beings need — food, shelter, medical care and these things cost money.But if one has enough money to live on, to pay for the basic essentials of life, is it important to have a lot more money than that? Will your life improve in proportion to the amount of money that you have? Well, there is no denying that money can buy a lot.Maybe you do not need much money to pay for a simple shelter, but how about if you want a nice big apartment in a nice neighbourhood, or if you want to buy a house? In fact, people do get on each other's nerves if they are crowded together in a small kitchen, if a married couple cannot but share a room with their parents, if children are not allowed to have a little privacy of their own.Moreover, it is nice to get a little pleasure out of life, a little fun from time to time.Unfortunately, many of the fun things that you can do today cost money.In modern cities, for example, on any night, outstanding performers appear in night clubs and on concert stages.Furthermore, you can dine on foods from every corner of the world in the restaurants.So how can it be that many people in modern cities do not have fun? Simple, they do not have the money to take advantage of all these attractions.So, is money the road to happiness? Not really.Large numbers of people work every day, work overtime, work weekends, and make a lot of money.Are they happy? No.They have no time to form or maintain friendship, no time to enjoy themselves.Surely everyone has thought at times, “If only I had a lot of money, I would be the happiest person in the world.” But it is important to remember that money is only a means to an end, not the end itself.9.Overseas Study

The discussion about overseas study has never stopped in the past few years.Let„s have a look at its advantages and disadvantages before drawing the final conclusion.The biggest advantage of studying overseas is the higher academic level and advanced research facilities.What‟s more, by understanding a new culture and meeting different people, students can develop a more reasonable and balanced view towards the world.Last but not least, the experience will be invaluable to character building, which makes most students more independent, diligent and enterprising.However, the negative effects are also obvious.To begin with, if a person does not make full preparations before going abroad, he will have great difficulty adapting to the new environment.In the second place, the cultural differences will hinder the regular life in many ways.Finally, money is always a big problem.Many students have to find part-time jobs to earn money to pay tuition and fees.In conclusion, the advantages of overseas study outweigh disadvantages.Once they return home, the overseas students will make great contributions to our motherland.10.University Students‟ Pursuit of Famous Brands

“What perfumes are you wearing?” “Aren‟t your shoes Nike‟s latest release?” “I like the Mickey bag you bought yesterday.” “I hear the Jack & Jones store is on sale this week.Do you wanna come along?” Don‟t feel surprised if you hear them coming out of the mouth of college students.It‟s quite common to hear and see college students swapping information about the brands they like and the products they use.In fact, discussions about brand names have become one of the college students‟ favourite pastimes.They learn about the latest fashion from each other, exchange tips about when and where to get the item, and buy it at their earliest convenience.“Keeping up with the Joneses” is their conviction —“If the Joneses have it, how could I have not?” About this current mindset of the college students, many people may hasten to show their disapproval.They‟ll probably take it to be a reflection of the students‟ vanity and superficiality.And they may lecture them on the virtue of being thrifty.However, I beg to differ.For one thing, name-brand products are usually quality products.They are something beautiful, endurable, and reliable.“The love of beauty is common to all,” goes the proverb;therefore, there‟s nothing to blame about the pursuit of famous brands.For the other, college students are old enough to make their own decisions.Likewise, they must abide by the consequences if they make an ill-advised one.If they let their pursuit of brands eat into their budget for other more important issues,they should be able to correct their mistakes and keep everything in moderation.So this becomes no other than a good chance to learn management, isn‟t it?

11.Many people try hard to avoid failure because they tempt to think that failure is bad and a person without success is failure and failure means underdog.But the truth is, everyone meets failure in life, and only find that it is just like your own shadow accompanying you all your lives.However, hold a different view, failure is not a bad thing.Great people are not born successful, they are great only because they have tempered their personality and remedied their deficiencies through experiencing countless failures and defeats.Failure inspires people to overcome hardships and difficulties and achieve the final success.Indeed, we cannot always hope to embrace success if we accept failure.But if we harness it and take it as our source of inspiration, we may ultimately enjoy the glory of success

Through some people consider failure a stumbling block on the road to success, but I see it as stairway to great accomplishments.I will recognize disadvantages from my temporary defeat, draw lessons from it, and grow stronger each time I cope with a difficulty.Failure is not a bad thing, seriously.

第五篇：六级作文模版

六级万能作文公式 开头万能公式：

1． 开头万能公式一：名人名言

有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？”，很好办：编！

原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是8，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？

经典句型：

A proberb says, “ You are only young once.”（适用于已记住的名言）

It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（适用于自编名言）更多经典句型：

As everyone knows, No one can deny that…

2． 开头万能公式二：数字统计

原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。

原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：

According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.结尾万能公式：

1． 结尾万能公式一：如此结论

说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子： Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！

更多过渡短语：

to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus

更多句型：

Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…

2． 结尾万能公式二：如此建议

如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？

更多句型：

Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.… 写作绝招

写作的“七项基本原则”：

一、长 短 句原则

工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：

As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！

强烈建议：在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。

二、主 题 句原则

国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感！相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！

特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的！

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）.Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一 二 三原则

领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。

1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗）

2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因：俗）

3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗）

4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）

5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐）

6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐）

7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐）

8）most important of all, moreover, finally

9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）

10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）

建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！

四、短语优先原则

写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其

一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点—精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其

二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办？用短语是一个办法！比如：

I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。

五、多实少虚原则

原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如：

走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room

但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room

小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room

小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room

老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room

所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！

六、多变句式原则

1）加法（串联）

都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：

I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：

Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短语可以用：

besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover

2）转折（拐弯抹角）

批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。

The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短语：

despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding

3）因果（so, so, so）

昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友…可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！

The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短语：

then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

4）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重）

有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如

果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。

举例：This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分：

When to go, Why he goes away…

5）附加（多此一举）

如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他；或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。

The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成；定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。

6）排比（排山倒海句）

文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势！

Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.（气势恢宏）

要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可！

七、挑战极限原则

既然十挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀！

原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如：

The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可一些出这样的句子，不得高分才怪！

写作绝招

文章主体段落三大杀手锏：

一、举实例

思维短路，举实例！提出一个观点，举实例！提出一个方案，举实例！而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子！

In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.更多句型：

To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example

二、做比较

方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的；

世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点（through comparison）和不同点（through contrast）。下面是一些短语： 相似的比较：

in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner

相反的比较：

on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …

三、换言之

没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。

实际就是重复重复再重复！下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!

I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我们举过的例子：

I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.因此可以这样说：I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短语：

in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply

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