六级作文训练(四)

第一篇：六级作文训练(四)

Self-Protection Awareness

培养自我保护意识

Recently, a large number of affairs about sexual assault were disclosed and reported by mass media.As far as I am concerned, people should get some enlightenment from these affairs, such as enhancing and strengthening education in self-protection awareness, especially for children and students.最近，有很多关于性侵的事件媒体揭露和报道。我认为人们应该从这些事件中得到一些启示，比如，提高和加强自我保护意识教育，特别是对于儿童和学生。

Children and students are hurt most in this kind of affairs.As a result, to enhance and strengthen their self-protection awareness is indispensable.In addition, to strengthen the awareness of defending danger is also important.If they can realize the potential danger from someone or something before it happens, they can make some preparations to avoid the danger and reduce the rate of being hurt.因这类事件伤害最大的是儿童和学生。因此，提高和加强自我保护意识是必须的。此外，加强防范危险的意识也是很重要的。如果他们能在事情发生前意识到某人或某事的潜在危险，他们就可以做一些准备来以避免和减少受伤率。

Therefore, I advocate that parents should help their children develop self-protection awareness from birth, such as designing some situation for them to cope with.In addition, parents should teach their children to recognize the danger and how to avoid and reduce the danger from outside.Besides, children also need to develop an excellent ability of observation.因此，我认为父母应该帮助他们的孩子从出生开始就培养自我保护意识，比如，设计一些情况来让他们应付。父母还应该教导孩子认识危险，如何避免和减少来自外界的危险。此外，孩子也需要培养优秀的观察能力。

In a word, to protect children needs both the effort of parents and children

themselves.总之，保护儿童需要家长和孩子他们自己的努力。

第二篇：六级作文训练(十七)

在家办公

Working from Home

Certain companies, especially some small-scale businesses, start to encourage their staff to work from home or use home as their working base for at least part of the week nowadays.Some offer some forms of remote working support to their work-forces, such as equipping them with laptops and installing broadband, and others pay for the telephone bills for these workers.一些公司，特别是一些小型企业，开始鼓励他们的员工在家工作，或使用家庭为他们的工作基础，至少部分的周现在。有些提供远程工作的支持某种形式的工作力量，如配备笔记本电脑和安装宽带，和其他人为这些工人付电话费。

This work pattern is popular because it’s clear that there are a number of benefits for these companies.First, it helps retain employees, especially highly-qualified working parents with childcare responsibilities.Second, it brings higher productivity because the employees have fewer interruptions and less commuting time.Last but not least it offers savings on premises and other facilities.这种工作模式的流行是因为它很清楚，有许多这些公司的好处。首先，它有助于留住员工，特别是高度合格的工作的父母与孩子的责任。第二，它带来了更高的生产率，因为员工更少的中断和减少通勤时间。最后但并非最不重要的研究提供了前提和其他设施的储蓄。

However, there are some potential drawbacks.For one thing, there is difficulty of managing home workers and monitoring their performance and difficulty of maintaining staff development and upgrading skills.For another, it may create a sense of isolation among home workers and it can be harder to maintain team spirit.Therefore, enterprises should weigh the pros and cons before permitting their employees to work at home.然而，也有一些潜在的缺陷。一方面，有管理家庭工人和监测其性能和维护困难员工的发展和技术升级的困难。另一方面，它可以创造一种在家工作者分离可能会很难保持团队精神。因此，企业应权衡利弊之前允许员工在家工作。

第三篇：四、六级作文心得

四、六级作文心得

慎用套词！现在很多老师都建议学生在临考前背一些范文、重点句式，几乎所有的作文参考书上也罗列了一大堆此类范文、重点句式。在应试作文中，这些句式“放之四海而皆准”，曾经让无数考生从中尝到了甜头。但是请大家注意了，时光已经走到了公元2004年，阅卷老师的观念也正在“与时俱进”。现在那些阅卷老师普遍对那些套词恨之入骨。这也不奇怪，虽然有的句子很好，但是如果用的人多了，也就失去了新鲜，甚至会遭到反感。如果一篇图表或图画作文，一上来就是：“Simple as the picture(table/photo/cartoon/drawing/)is，the symbolic meaning it conveys is deep and profound。”很好的句子，不知是哪位传授的，但其影响之大，受众之广，让阅卷老师始料不及。阅卷老师一看就知道是套词，所有的看图作文都能用，于是就当考生没写这句话。再看到这句话，开始反感，觉得考生水平不高，就会用别人的话，反而会留下不好的印象，自然不会给高分；换了份卷子，怎么还是这句话？！直接就给你打入冷宫。这也不奇怪，就算是满汉全席也有吃厌的时候，更何况一个十分钟能见八回的句子？这样出彩的句子尚且如此，更别提那些俗上加俗、倒人胃口的套词了：how interesting the picture is！As can be seen from the picture等等。最让人深恶痛绝的一句是as far as I am concerned…撇开其用法不确切不说，你读一下，算算用了几秒？[a：] [e:] 都是长音，老师在一个段落上不会耗费超过3秒的时间，你想让他看些什么呢？如果你觉得I think 太俗，可以选些不太常用但是语法上毫无错误的表达方法来发表观点。如：I`m convinced that，I strongly believe that，总之，既然你想发表观点，就直接说明，让老师尽快了解，让他1秒钟之内就能判断出你没有跑题就是最成功之处！切记：慎用套词！

长度适中！要求150字左右(四级120字)，不要写太短，免得字数不够，降两档处理。我估计字数大家都不会成问题，我在这里要强调的是：字数可千万别写太多了。要知道，应试作文，按照要求去做是最实惠的，人家要求150字，你为什么偏要奔着200去呢？记住：写得越多，错的必然也就越多！老师阅卷的过程，不就是一个给你作文挑错的过程么？既然如此，何必自讨苦吃呢？

第四篇：四、六级写作精华

关于四级写作

2009年9月13日

评分标准：

 2分-条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子有错，且多数为严重错误；  5分-基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误；  8分-基本切题。有些地方表达不够清楚，文字勉强连贯。语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。 11分-切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但是少量语言错误。 14分-切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误。

注：英语作文一般不少于三段，分开头部分，扩展部分，结尾部分。

开头部分

按作文题目的不同大约可以分为六种：一般性作文（或要性作文），正反作文，引经据典式作文（或名人名言作文）,题目为疑问句的作文，图表作文，应用文。

第一种：一般性作文（或要性作文）格式：引子（引出主题）+谦语+论点+启下

以Reading widely为例

引子：Nowadays,there exists an increasingly hot topic among the _______(especially on __________),which is ___________.例如：Nowadays,there exists an increasingly hot topic among the students, especially on college campus,which is reading widely.谦语;as far as I know, as far as I am concerned,in my opinion,from my viewpoint

论点：________have positive effects on___*__, 例如：reading widely have positive effects on your nowlege extension and horizion broaden, 启下：以上*号处,which results from the reansons as follows.从而可得整篇开头如下：

Reading widely

Nowadays,there exists an increasingly hot topic among the students, especially on college campus,which is reading widely.from my viewpoint

reading widely have positive effects on your nowlege extension and horizion broaden, which results from the reansons as follows.注意:以后在各种问题中，引子，谦语，启下，都不变。

第二种：正反作文

格式：引子（引出主题）+谦语+观点+启下

以Private car为例

引子:As an old ssaying goes ,every coin has 2 sides,which applies to private car as well.谦语: from my viewpoint 1 private car have both advantage and 观点:○shortcoming on our daily life, private car have both positive and ○negative effects on our daily life，启下: which results from the reansons as follows.从而可得整篇开头如下：

Private car As an old ssaying goes ,every coin has 2 sides,which applies to private car as well.from my viewpoint, private car have both positive and negative effects on our daily life, which results from the reansons as follows.第三种：引经据典式作文（或名人名言作文）格式：引子+It means+解释（转述）+启下

以No pains,no gains为例

引子：No pains,no gains(抄题)，which derives from the valuable experience of our forefathers,but it still has its realistic significance even today.解释：It means your success,to some extent,depends on your hardwork , 启下：which results from the reansons as follows.从而可得整篇开头如下：

No pains,no gains No pains,no gains，which derives from the valuable experience of our forefathers,but it still has its realistic significance even today.It means your success,to some extent,depends on your hardwork , which results from the reansons as follows.第四种：题目为疑问句的作文

可分为一般疑问句，选择疑问句，特殊疑问句 一

题目为一般疑问句 ○格式：引子+抄题+简短回答+谦词+转述（立论）+启下

简短回答：of course+主语+助动词 Of course not It all depends 以Should students be abroad studying at the

younger age ?为例

Nowadays,there exists an increasing heated discussion in matters of middle school students’ studying abroad.Then should they be abroad studying at the younger age ? It all depends.From my viewpoint,studying abroad for middle school students has both positive and negtaive effects on their future,which results from the reasons as follows.二 题目为选择疑问句 ○格式:引子+抄题(一定要补全)+简短回答+谦语+转述+启下

简短回答：I prefer to former to later

或It all denpends

以Reading selectively or widely ?为例 Nowadays,there existsan increasingly heated discussion in matters of the content of reading,especially for college students.Then should we read reading selectively or widely ? I prefer to latter.From my viewpiont,reading widely serves as an indispensable part to our study,which results from the reasons as follows.三 题目为特殊疑问句 ○格式：引子（传统）+抄题+回答（立论）+启下

以What could we do for the 2008 olympics?为例

Nowadays,2008 olympic games to be held in Beijing has become a hot topic among the Chinese home and abroad.Then as a college student,what could we do for her ? From my viewpoint,doing what we could from slight detail is of great importance, which results from the reasons as follows.第五种:图表作文

格式:引子+现象结论+描图+论点

引子：An obvious conclusion could easily be drawn from the chart above,*******************.现象结论：*号处。可用词changed dramatically.描图：对图表进行整体大致描述。例如：图表略。

{An obvious conclusion could easily be drawn from the chart above,}引子。{the number of computers owned by every 1000 people has changed dramatically in the past 20 years.}`现象结论。{In 1987,only 3%。of the people can work or play on computers ；While the number soared to 80% in 2007.}描图。{From my viewpoint,computers are being more and more widely used in our daily work and life.}论点。

第六种：应用文

应用文包括感谢信，投诉信，求职信 开头：I’m writing the letter to: 1 apply for position in your company.○2 1.complain ○about the bad quality of the goods I bought the other day.2.complain about the bad service I received.3 express my heart-felt gratitude to sb ○for sth.扩展部分

一般性作文都可用以下格式： first and foremost,………

○2 what is more,………

○3the last but not the least important,………

○对于两面作文：on the one hand ……… On the other hand………

结尾部分

结尾的写法大致可以分为四种：印证主题式，呼吁社 会式，正反对照式，名人名言式。可以根据自己的题 材选择适当的结尾方式。第一种：印证主题式

格式：After pondering this issue on many occasions,it seems not difficult to draw the conclusion that_______________.以part-time jobs为例

After pondering this issue on many occasions,it seems not difficult to draw the conclusion that part-time jobs for college students have both positive and negative effects on their study and future.Inconsequence,we should have a correct attitude to when confronted with it.第二种：呼吁社会式

格式: In a word,the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________.Only in this way ,we can _________in the future.以Private car为例

In a word,the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of private car.Only in this way ,we can enjoy life in the future.第三种：正反对照式

格式：In my opinion,both sides are partly right.When we _______________,we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems,and then make the right choice.以Private car为例

In my opinion,both sides are partly right.When we want to have a private car,we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems,and then make the right choice.第四种：名人名言式结尾

格式：Whatever you do,please remember the saying____________.If you understand it and apply it to study or work,you will definitely benefit a lot from it.以No pains no gains为例

Whatever you do,please remember the saying no pains no gains.If you understand it and apply it to study or work,you will definitely benefit a lot from it.

第五篇：如何攻克四、六级

如何突破四、六级

有些大学四六级通关率特别低，下面我就自己通过四六级的一些复习策略与大家分享一下。

一、听力

听力占有很大的分值，因此我们需要好好攻克此部分。平时，我们可以看一些美国大片，学习他们的的发音。在看电影时我们需要反复看同一部电影，直到不用看字幕就能听懂为止。若要在短时间内攻克部分，我们需要采取以下措施:做历年真题，第一遍仅仅是做出选项；第二遍边听边写，需要反复听，直到把句子写出来为止；第三遍：将自己陌生的词汇、习语记录下来；第四遍：重新做一遍题。需要提醒的是，将自己记录下来的哪些词汇、习语要经常翻看，直到牢记在心。

二：阅读

平时我们可以扩大自己的阅读，刚开始可以看一些简单的英文杂志，到后面可以涉猎一些较难的英文书籍。若要短时间突破四六级，需要狠下功夫，采取以下措施：做历年真题，同样第一遍仅仅需要在限定时间内做完题目；第二遍查看自己出错的原因；第三遍阅读整篇文章，弄懂生词，且把出现频率高的词汇做一记录；第四遍掌握文章中的难一点的句子结构;第五遍：要是文章比较优美，可以花费一定时间背诵下来。

三：作文

平时一定要练习写作，最好养成每天写一篇英文作文的习惯。多背一些好的文章，好的句子，这样写起来会得心应手。遇到写作，先不急于下笔，构思一下文章的大体轮廓，再下笔。写作的时候需要条理清晰，字迹整齐，卷面干净。

四：新题型

谈谈做新题型的技巧：先看题目，找出每个题目中的关键词1-3个，一般是名词；然后快速浏览文章，若一段中有3个词与关键词相同，那么那句的对应段落就是该段。

五：翻译

翻译最重要的我感觉是整个段落的联络性和恰当的句子结构，要把握好这两点。