第一篇:向高分冲刺 掌握中考英语写作六要素http
向高分冲刺 掌握中考英语写作六要素审题要清
看到考题后,先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,根据提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
要点明确
要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐一罗列出。列出提纲
为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下,形成提纲。
写顺全文
写短文时要做到五个方面:
1.避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。
2.多用简单句型,记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或独立主格结构等较复杂的句型。
3.注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。语态、时态要准确无误;主谓语要一致,主语的人称和数要和谓语一致;注意冠词用法,例如:It takes Tom half an hour to go to school by bus.中的an不能写成a;注意拼写,例如:fourteen,forty,ninth等不要写成forteen,fourty,nineth等;注意标点符号和大小写。
4.描写人物时,要生动具体,可以选择使用下列词汇,例如:外形:tall,short,fat,thin,strong,weak,pretty等;颜色:red,yel-low,blue,white,green,brown,black等;心情:glad,happy,sad,excited,anxious,interest-ed等;情感:love,like,hate,feel,laugh,cry,smile,shout等。5.上下文要连贯。同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法:并列关系:and,as well as,or…;转折关系:but,yet,how-ever…;时间关系:when,while,after,before,then,after that…;因果关系:so,there-fore,asaresult…;目的:in order to,in order that,so as to,so that…;列举:for example ,such as…;总结性:in general,in all,in a word,generally speaking…没有病句
中考作文时,由于时间紧、内容多,同学们出错在所难免。因此,改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分,根据错误多少来扣分。因此中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手:(1)看字数是否达到要求,看有无遗漏要点。
(2)看文体格式是否正确规范。
(3)看有无语法或用词上的错误。
(4)看单词拼写、字母大小写是否有错,标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。
(5)注意时态、语态、人称是否上下文一致。
先打草稿
考试中,书面表达应做到先打草稿,写完后多读几遍,检查是否有误,然后再抄到试卷上,注意字迹要工整,不涂、不画、不勾不抹,避免不必要的扣分。更多信息请访问:新浪中考频道 中考论坛 中考博客圈二〇〇九年三月
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第二篇:2018中考英语写作满分必备(六)
第十六篇
【写作要求】
假设你叫李华,你们市将要举行以“How to Eat in a Healthy Way”为题的演讲比赛,请你准备写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1.说明此次演讲的主题(how to eat in a healthy way)。2.我们应该少吃、不吃及多吃的食物有哪些,并说明原因。3.描述自己的健康饮食习惯,并举例说明。4.希望大家都有个好的饮食习惯。作文要求:
1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。
【优秀满分范文】
How to Eat in a Healthy Way
Hello, everybody.I'm Li Hua.Today my topic is how to eat in a healthy way.Firstly, we should never eat fried food or foods with lots of sugar because they are not good for health.Secondly, try to eat more vegetables and fruit.Because they can make us become much healthier.My eating habits are good.For example, I often eat healthy foods, like wholemeal bread, eggs, vegetables and milk for breakfast and rice, noodles, and vegetables for dinner.I hope everyone can eat in a healthy way.第十七篇
【写作要求】
作家雨果说过:“开启人类智慧的钥匙有三把,一是字母,二是数字,三是音符。”从这句话中,我们足可见音乐对人的发展的影响。请你根据以下提示,以Music为题,写一篇短文参加学校的英语作文竞赛。提示:1.音乐使人充满活力,让人快乐; 2.没有音乐,生活就没有乐趣; 3.你最喜欢的音乐是......4.你不能忍受的音乐是......要求:1.80词左右; 2.恰当运用定语从句。
【优秀满分范文】
Music
I like music very much.It gives me energy when I’m tired and it makes me happy when I’m sad.Music is very important in our life.If there is no music, our life won’t be so interesting.Different people like different kinds of music.I like electronic music that’s loud.It makes me excited.I also like music that I can dance to.The Cool Kids is my favorite band.I can’t stand music that is quiet and slow.It makes me sleepy.第十八篇
【写作要求】
为了使同学们与人交往时举止更加文雅,你校学生会正在举办以“How to behave well?”为主题的英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文。(以上背景内容无需表述)短文要点如下:
1.学生应该守时、守信、不撒谎、不说脏话; 2.礼貌待人,热心助人;
3.遵守交通规则;不在公共场所喧哗;不乱扔垃圾; 4.请你就此话题再补充一至两点个人看法。要求:1.不要逐词翻译。
2.在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名。
3.词数60~80。短文首句已给出,不计入总词数。
How to behave well
Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others._____________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】
How to behave well
Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others.As a student,I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises.Never lie to others or say dirty words.We should be polite to others and ready to help people in need.We’d better not talk loudly in public.Don’t throw litter or spit about.And remember to obey traffic rules.Finally,learn to work with others.We need good teamwork in our life.
第三篇:2014年考研英语写作冲刺抓取高分
2014年考研英语写作冲刺抓取高分
14年研究生考试已经进入非常紧张的冲刺复习阶段,往往会有很多考生在这个阶段开始慌了手脚,不知该抓哪些重点知识进行冲刺复习,顾此失彼,错失了最后最佳的复习时间。考研1号的老师提醒考生要抓住自身最薄弱的部分进行强化复习。下面考研1号的老师针对考研英语中的写作部分进行冲刺指导,希望对考生们有所帮助,在所剩不多的日子里可以在英语写作部分上提高一些分数。
首先,运用开门见山直接点题的写作模式。
阅卷人每天要阅成百上千的文章,所以要吸引他们的注意,就不能使用固定常用的作文模板,要有新意。考生在写作的开头要做到开门见山,直接点题。文章开头的好坏直接决定了整篇文章的命运,对于考英语一的同学来说,开头要针对图画进行描写阐述,的正确性。而考英语二的考生们,据的变化,可以进行详细阐述,切记寥寥带过。其次,做好句与句的衔接,要有连贯性。
首段打好了基础,不要考生可从结构、论
这在英语写作中也可以体现,考生在“有助于阅卷
第四篇:2013中考英语写作必须掌握的常用词汇
2013中考英语写作必须掌握的常用词汇
一、表示递进关系的关键词语
besides 此外;除……之外 equally important同样重要的是 furthermore此外;而且
in addition另外;in other words 换句话说;that is say 即;就是;换句话说
二、表示转折关系的关键词语
although 虽然;尽管 even though即使 however然而;可是 on the contrary正相反 though虽然;可是
三、表示选择关系的关键词语
either…or… ……或…… rather than…宁可;胜过 whether…or not是否
四、表示比较关系的关键词语
compare with / to与……比较 in contrast to和……对比
2013中考英语写作必须掌握的常用词汇
二、表示递进关系的关键词语
besides 此外;除……之外 equally important同样重要的是 furthermore此外;而且
in addition另外;in other words 换句话说;that is say 即;就是;换句话说
二、表示转折关系的关键词语
although 虽然;尽管 even though即使 however然而;可是 on the contrary正相反 though虽然;可是
三、表示选择关系的关键词语
either…or… ……或…… rather than…宁可;胜过 whether…or not是否
四、表示比较关系的关键词语
compare with / to与……比较 in contrast to和……对比
第五篇:中考英语作文写作高分框架结构
议论文的框架
(1)不同观点列举型(选择型)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一 _______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand,___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文题目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___优点一______.And secondly ___优点二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, every coin has two sides, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺点一______.In addition, ____缺点二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.(3)2015年中考英语作文模板:现象说明文
Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________.There are many reasons explaining__________________________.The main reason is____________________.what is more_________________________.thirdly__________________________.As a result_______________.Considering all there,________________________.For one thing_____________________,for another________
____.In Conclusion____________________.(4)2015年中考英语作文模板:说明原因型
Currently,A has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory---nothing is more valuable than A.It is clear that ______If you _____, as a result ,your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you_____failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that _____.You donn't have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know_____.It will exert a profound influence upon _____.With reference to my standpoint ,I think _____.(5)2015年中考英语作文模板:说明利弊题型
说明利弊题型
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)
1.说明事物现状
2.事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)
3.你对现状(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(A的优点之一).Besides-------------------(A的优点之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------(对前景的预测).)(6)2015年中考英语作文模板:阐述主题题型
阐述主题题型 要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述.1.阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.2.分析并举例使其更充实.中考英语作文万能模板:解决方法题型 要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 1.问题现状 2.怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(说明A的现状).Second,---------------(举例进一步说明现状)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解决方法一).For another-------------(解决方法二).Finally,--------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解决方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future isawaiting us because--------------(带来的好处).一、开头句型
I....has both advantages and disadvantages.„„既有利又有弊。例如: 1.Obviously television has both advantages and disadvantages. 很显然电视有利也有弊
2.Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages. 居住在城市有利也有弊
3.Compared with cars,bikes have their advantages and disadvantages. 和汽车比较,自行车有它的好处也有它的不好处 举一反三:
1.Although computers bring people a lot of convenience,they have many disadvantages. 尽管电脑给人们带来许多方便,但它们仍有许多弊端
2....has many advantages.For example,...However,just as every coin has two sides,...has its disadvantages.
正如每枚硬币有两面一样
(本例将利弊分开讲,转折过渡自然。just as every coin has two sides也很值得背诵。)
II....play(s)an important role /part in...„„在„„中扮演重要角色/起重要作用。例如:
1.Computers play an important role in science and technology. 2.Computers play a more and more important role in our life. Computers play an increasingly important role in our studies. 3.Education plays an important part in developing our mind. 4.Addiction to alcohol and drugs play a role in homelessness. 除了酒精和药物在无家可归者身上发挥作用 举一反三:
1.Advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life. 广告在我们日常生活中扮演着提供信息的作用
2.In the past,letters played a decisive role in long-distance communication.But now,telephone,email,fax have taken their place.
III.With the development of...,随着„„的发展,例如:
1.With the development of our economy,m any Chinese families can afford a car. 2.With the development of our economy and society,pollution is more and more serious. 3.With the rapid development of science and technology,people can get a college degree by taking online-courses at home. 4.With the current social and technological developments,employees with more knowledge and higher academic degrees are needed. 举一反三:
1.With the rapid increase of China's population,housing problem is becoming more and more serious. 随着中国人口的急剧增加,住房问题越来越突出。
2.With more and more women entering society,people's attitude towards women is changing.
随着越来越多的妇女走入社会,人们对妇女的态度也在改变。
3.With the deepening of Chinese reform and opening up,an increasing number of Chinese families can afford a car.
随着中国改革开放的深入,越来越多的中国家庭买得起车了。
(“越来越多”除了常用的more and more外,还可以用an increasing number of,a growing number of,a significant number of,a great number of等来表达。)
IV.When it comes to...,some people think /believe that...,others argue /claim that opposite /reverse is true.There is probably some truth in both arguments /statements,but...当说到„„,有些人认为„„,但另一些人则持相反的观点„„。这两种观点可能都有点道理,但„„。本结构先用when it comes to ...引出话题,再用some...others ...这个对立的结构引出了两种相反的观点,然后说There is some truth in both...表明严谨公正的态度,最后用but...很自然地引出了自己的论点。请看下面这个例子:
TV a good thing or bad thing When it comes to TV,some people believe that it is extremely valuable,as it provides relaxation,entertainment and education. Others argue that it is harmful for it begins to control our lives and deprives people of time to do other activities.There is probably some truth in both sides.But we must realize that television itself is neither good or bad.It is the uses to which it is put that determines its value to society.
二、结尾句型
英语议论文多以简要总结全文或对所讨论的问题提出解决办法来结尾。总结全文时除常用到in one /a word,generally speaking等外,没有固定模式。提出解决办法时却常使用下一句型。V....take measures to do sth.例如:
1.We should take measures to control pollution in order to save the world. 2.We'd better take effective measures to prevent students from cheating on exams. 3.The government decided to take strong measures against drug abuse4.Urgent measures should be taken to prevent terrorists from carrying out further attacks 常用句型二
一,开头句型
1.As far as...is concerned 2.It goes without saying that...3.It can be said with certainty that...4.As the proverb says 5.It has to be noticed that...6.It`s generally recognized that...7.It`s likely that 8.It`s hardly that...It’s hardly too much to say that...What calls for special attention is that...需要特别注意的是 There’s no denying the fact that...毫无疑问,无可否认 Nothing is more important than the fact that...what’s far more important is that...更重要的是„„
二,衔接句型
A case in point is...As is often the case..这是常有的事„„.As stated in the previous paragraph如前段所述
But the problem is not so simple.Therefore然而问题并非如此简单,所以„„ But it’s a pity that...For all that...In spite of the fact that...Further, we hold opinion that...However , the difficult lies in...Similarly, we should pay attention to...not(that)...but(that)...不是,而是
In view of the present station.鉴于目前形势 As has been mentioned above...In this respect, we many as well(say)从这个角度上我们可以说
However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is...然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面,即
三,结尾句型
I will conclude by saying...Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...All things considered,总而言之It may be safely said that...Therefore, in my opinion, it’s more advisable...It can be concluded from the discussion that...从中我们可以得出这样的结论 From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来„„也许更好
四,能句型
Let’s take...to illustrate this.试举例以兹证明
let’s take the above chart as an example to illustrate this.It’s remains to be further studied...There’s question is how...so that, so...that...