建筑申请留学PS中英文版本（范文模版）

第一篇：建筑申请留学PS中英文版本（范文模版）

It is once said that architecture is frozen music, and a nice building is a beautiful poem ever composed on the fragrant ground.The artistic glamour and practical applicability make it a perfect combination of both beauty and practicality.In the long history of mankind's development, pieces of magnificent movements have been constantly composed, and scores of exquisite verses have been written.This is reflected in those marvelous structures as from China's Great Wall to the Parthenon in ancient Greece, and from the Great Arena in ancient Rome to Egyptian Pyramids.All these breathtaking and soul-stirring wonders, as a token of human civilization, have blended the most magnificent element in the universe with the inexhaustible creative ability of mankind.As a little girl, I was deeply attracted by these architectural wonders shown on books.At that time, I was frequently perplexed by one question--“How could it be if these wonders were constructed and erected on the horizon bit by bit by people?” In order to find out the truth, I began to try putting up these splendid buildings with my little and delicate hands, using toy bricks as the materials.It was from that time on that my desire to explore the secret of architecture started to sprout.Along with my growing up, the young sapling of architecture keeps growing in my mind, eventually turning into the direction of my pursuit.In 1990, I was recommended for admission to one of the best departments of architecture in XXX University, thus starting a pilgrimage to the magnificent palace of architectural arts.As far as the five-year study of my undergraduate courses is concerned, I regard it as a process of fundamental education in which architectural theories and approaches to both classical and modern architecture are comprehensively taught.By virtue of my keen interest and diligence in acquiring knowledge, during the five-year studies in the university, I have made excellent achievements in my academic studies as the top four in our grade respecting academic scores.From my point of view, the five-year study is not only a long process of knowledge accumulation, but a continuous and happy spiritual journey as well.I am deeply absorbed in the infinite space for imagination rendered by architecture in the aspects of its structure, form, color and material.No matter what I have learned is about basic cartography, model-making, or understanding the architectural thoughts put forward by both eastern and western masters on architecture through my own practice and experiments, I can always find delight in studies and a passion for creation.In the artistic palace of architecture, I persist in my learning with untiring vigor and take heart's content to roam in the treasure-house of architectural arts constructed by those respectable predecessors in the field of architecture.Meanwhile, I have also learned to enjoy the joys brought about by architectural designing and put my heart into it through my personal practice.Therefore, by applying my in-depth studying of theories to practice, I have benefited a great deal in my academic studies.Although my remarkable achievements and an excellent graduation dissertation have helped to bring my five-year academic studies to a successful close, my keen craving for the architectural knowledge spurs me on to pursue an advanced and further study for a master's degree.While

doing my M.A.programs, based on my previous solid foundation of professional knowledge, I continued to make a thorough and profound probe into theoretical learning on architecture.During this period of time, I have made a systematic study of the architectural thoughts and ideas advanced by Smith, Foster and Zumthor.Such a systematic theoretical study has thus enabled a tentative and personal viewpoint on architecture to take shape.Along with it also goes my deep interest in the development history of China's modern architecture, which results in my final decision to take this subject as the orientation of my M.A.dissertation.After in-depth and meticulous investigation and survey on the development history of China's modern architecture, I have completed my dissertation entitled “XXX”.In this dissertation, I have managed to probe into the impact and influences exerted by the western trend of thoughts in modern architecture's development on China's traditional architecture complex, and summarized several development climax in the history of China's modern architecture.Moreover, the present coexistence state of multi-elements embodied in China's architectural industry is also analyzed in the last part of my paper.My supervisor spoke highly of my dissertation due to its unique perspective, and my paper also won the honorary title, “The Excellent Dissertation”.Apart from this dissertation, I have also pondered over environment-friendly buildings, and then sorted out my thinking results regarding this problem into a paper which was later published in a domestic periodical“XXXXX”.Upon my graduation, my supervisor had once invited me to retain to work in the university and continued my research on the same subject.However, I realized that I need more practice and experimental experience, despite the fact that I have a fairly solid foundation on my theoretical training.As far as an architect is concerned, experience is the source of inspiration.Bearing this thought in mind, I began to work for one of the best architectural companies in China.During my two years' working in the company, I have undertaken many design projects, most of which have been highly appraised.For instance, the scheme of the XXX , in which I have taken part in designing, won the first prize in the Contest of Project Schemes.A large quantity of practice has thus helped to check my architectural ideas.Nevertheless, this has also revealed some weak points existing in China's present architectural industry considering the aspect of its theories, particularly the lack of necessary guidance by applying theory to practical designing.This insufficiency of theoretical guidance will inevitably result in an artistic height hard for the designed buildings to reach.Such acknowledgment has finally facilitated my thought of pursuing an advanced study abroad.By doing so, I hope I can make a thorough and deeper study of advanced theories and methods of western architecture, thus promoting my design ability to a higher level.One essential inadequacy in China's current architectural design is that architects tend to be overly occupied with the external shape and structure of a building.They overlook the application of new construction technology and fail to take into account the properties of new construction materials.For example, steel structures are beginning to be widely applied on domestic buildings, but few architects have developed a sufficient command of the relevant knowledge in this field, resulting in their relatively low designing level when such steel structures are involved.This is an area that a truly well-trained architect can achieve important breakthroughs.Therefore, I also plan to concentrate my future studies on this area.As I was coming to the bottom line of this personal statement, I couldn't help thinking of the little and delicate hands when I was a young girl, together with the scene of my putting up those toy bricks with those little hands.At that time, I must have imagined that, someday in the future, the once clumsy little hands would sure grow stronger and more creative, and would ultimately write the most beautiful architectural poems from the ground.有人曾经说过，建筑是凝固的音乐，一个漂亮的建筑是芬芳大地上华丽的诗篇。建筑所特有的艺术魅力和实用性让它成为美感和实用的完美结合。在人类历史悠久的发展过程中，矗立起一座座华丽的建筑，写下一篇篇精美的诗句。所有那些令人惊艳、激动不已的奇迹，像中国的长城、古希腊的帕台农神庙、古罗马大竞技场以及埃及的金字塔，作为人类文明的象征，已经融入人类取之不尽，用之不竭的创作能力，成为宇宙中最壮观的元素。

当我是一个小女孩时，被书上所描述的建筑奇迹深深吸引。当时，我经常困惑于一个问题——“人们是怎么一点一点把这些奇迹建造矗立在地平线上的呢？”为了找出真相，我开始尝试用我的小手，把积木作为材料建造这些辉煌的建筑。也就是从哪个时候开始，我想要探索建筑秘密的欲望开始萌芽。

随着成长，建筑的小树苗在脑海里不断的成长，最终成为我追求的方向。1990年，我被推荐进入×××大学建筑系最好的部门，开始向建筑艺术的殿堂迈进。五年的本科学习对我来说是一个全面接受基础教育，即古典和现代建筑理论与方法的过程。在大学的五年学习期间，因为我对知识的渴求和勤奋，取得了优异的成绩，学术研究取得了年级学术成绩的前四名。

为期五年的学习从我的角度来看，不仅是一个漫长的知识积累的过程，也是精神的快乐之旅。我深深地沉浸在建筑的结构、形式、色彩和材料所给予的无限的想象空间。凭借实践和经验，不管学到的是基本制图、模型制作、亦或是对东西方大师建筑思想的理解，我总能找到学习的喜悦和创造的激情。在建筑的艺术殿堂，始终坚持不懈的学习，尽情地在建筑领域可敬的前辈所构建的建筑艺术宝库中徜徉。同时，我也学会了享受建筑设计所带来的乐趣并全身心的投入个人实践。在学术研究中，深入学习理论及运用实践让我受益颇大。

尽管出众的成绩和优秀的毕业论文为五年的学术研究学习画了一个圆满的句号，但对于建筑知识的热衷与渴求促使我更进一步，去攻硕士学位。对于硕士课程，在以前坚实的专业知识的基础上，我将对建筑理论学习作出全面深刻的探究。在这段时间内，我已经对史密斯，福斯特和卒姆托所提出的思想及观点做了系统的学习。这样一个系统的理论研究，让我在建筑上的初步个人观点初具规模。同时，对中国现代建筑发展历史的浓厚兴趣让我决定把这个主题作为研究生论文的方向。通过对中国现代建筑发展历史的深入细致的调查，我已经完成我的论文题目为“×××”。在这篇论文中，我努力探究西方现代建筑思想的发展趋势对中国传统建筑的影响，并总结了中国现代建筑史上的几个发展高潮。此外，在论文的最后一部分分析了体现在中国建筑工业中多元化的共存状态。由于其独特的视角，导师高度评价了我的论文，论文还获得了“优秀论文”的荣誉称号。除论文以外，我思考了环境友好型建筑，然

后整理出有关这个问题的思考结果并将此发表在国内期刊“×××××”。

本科毕业后，导师曾邀请我留在大学工作并继续对同一主题的研究，尽管事实上我有相当坚实的理论基础，但意识到我需要更多的实践和实验经验。对建筑师而言，经验是灵感的源泉。考虑到这一点，我开始在中国最好的建筑公司工作。在公司工作的两年期间，我接受了许多设计项目，其中大部分获得高度评价。例如，我参加了×××项目的设计，项目在设计方案竞赛中荣获一等奖。大量的实践帮助检查了我的建筑理念。不过，这也暴露了中国建筑工业在理论方面存在的一些薄弱环节，特别是在应用理论于实际设计时缺乏必要的指导。而理论指导的不足将不可避免的导致在设计建筑物时很难达到一定的艺术高度。这样的确认最终促使我决定追求国外的先进研究思想。通过这样做，希望我可以全面深入的学习西方建筑的先进理论和方法，从而能把我的设计能力提高到更高水平。

目前，中国建筑设计中的一个重要的不足之处是，建筑师往往过于考虑建筑物的外部形状与结构，他们忽略了一个新的建筑技术的应用，并没有考虑到新建筑材料的性质。例如，钢结构开始被广泛应用于住宅楼区，但很少有建筑师在这一领域已经开发了足够的相关知识命令，这导致他们相对较低水平的钢结构设计。在这一区域，一个训练有素的建筑师可以实现重要突破。因此，我也是计划集中研究这方面。

现在到了这份个人陈述的结束部分，我不禁想到当我是一个有一双小手的小女孩，用那双小手搭建积木，当时，我一定想到，在未来的某一天，曾经笨拙的小手变得更加强大，富有创造性，最终会在地上写出最美的建筑诗篇。

第二篇：留学申请PS

After passing out of engineering college in 1999 with distinction and honors in my Bachelor of engineering, I had the opportunity to join an organization as an engineer in the production department.The company was well known world wide for its quality products and superior engineering.It was there that I realized that the primary objective of any industry was to generate profits by manufacturing products at a reasonable cost.Thus my interest started leaning more towards the financial aspect of the organization.Since then I have been enthralled by the role that finance plays in any industry.It was then that I decided to go in for an MBA in finance.The realization that the prospects for growth were enormous came to me during my two years on the shop floor.It always been my dream to work upwards in an organization and I believe that an MBA from your esteemed institution will help me in achieving that goal.I believe that your institution can provide me a platform from where I can tackle all types of problems in my professional career.The opportunity I seek now is to build overall competence, maximizing my strengths and ionizing whatever weaknesses of youth and inexperience I may have.I want to specialize in Finance;to be in the forefront of modern knowledge in the field of specialization.I want to be trained in an institution that combines a high level of academic research with professionalism and expertise in modern methods of teaching and learning.And this must be in a country that has made innovative breakthroughs in technology, production, marketing management and finance the United States of America.I want to acquire analytical skills necessary for proper appraisal of financial problems for example, and develop a financial culture suitable for a fast-growing economy which has got lot to catch up with-the Indian economy.The education I seek must be one that helps me make sensible investment and financial decision and perhaps teach others through the service of consultancy and counsel.I am looking for an intensive learning environment where I can develop.(a)A critical understanding of the body of knowledge and research relating to business and management.(b)An ability to exercise judgment as to the appropriateness and potential value of concepts, models and techniques learned to the effective management of an organization backed

I believe I have a gregarious personality and a propensity to learn;added to my innate curiosity will certainly provide opportunities.I am confident that I have the enthusiasm, commitment and ability to benefit from the opportunities and challenges provided.I hope your institution will grant me the opportunity to follow my dream

第三篇：留学申请PS写作看过来

在留学申请材料中，除了核心的文书之外，个人陈述也是非常重要的。因为个人陈述其实就是申请者向院校推荐自己，展示自己的一个平台。很多院校甚至对学生的个人陈述的重视程度远超过申请文书，因为院校能够从个人陈述里很好的了解到学生的语言表达能力，写作能力等等。所以同学们同样要重视起来哦！下面让优越论文网服务老师给大家提供一些建议，教大家写好自己的PS。

一、PS的简单介绍。

留学文书包括许多，其中自述是最重要的，也是最难准备的一部分。PS是海外的大学用于了解申请者的个人背景、学习目标、兴趣特长和工作社会经历等信息的重要依据，而国外大学对于申请者个人素质和语言表达能力十分看重，因此在没有面试机会的情况下，一份真实、个性化的作文能深深打动录取教授，能是申请者获益匪浅，成为有力竞争者。二、四标准判断写作内容。

什么样的内容能给读者留下深刻的印象呢？可以通过以下几个标准来判定：

1、新鲜。在众多的申请者中间，与同国人相竞争，除了向西方人展示中国的传统文化、风土人情、中国历史，还要显示出自己的个性，就是与众不同的方面。要做到这个除了对中国的悠久历史文明有比较清晰的了解外，还要学会自己观察和审视，同时要有深厚的英文表达功底，因为涉及独有文化一块一定要表达准确到位。

2、有思想和深度。与读的过程本质上就是读者通过文字和读者交流思想和感情的，所以一篇有思想有深度的文章能够让录取教授对作者的思想和情绪产生共鸣，引发联想并进而对申请者产生好感。

3、轻松。为什么要夸大轻松？因为许多的中国学生都喜欢写自己童年时的逆境，人生历经坎坷，类似的故事不要写得太多。申请者可以准备一些能够让读者放松下来阅读并从中享受申请者的情趣和思想的文章。

4、人文。人文二字并不是很高深，相反是很朴实的。凡是能触及人类本性和心灵层面的都可以归为人文，例如亲情、友情、爱情、责任、荣誉、责任、同情等。要记住，再严密的逻辑推理和再高深的科技，只能prove,但是人文的东西却能够Move大家。

以上就是今天的知识分享啦。大家不妨照着以上的建议写写看，说不定会有意想不到的效果哦！个人陈述写得好的话，能够很好的将个人优势展现出来。优越论文网是一家英国留学申请与论文作业辅导的正规机构,在过去的10年时间里,帮助了英国高校学生顺利申请了一大批英国名校,以及辅导留学生们完成了coursework, assignment, essay, assignment, research proposal, presentation等各种文书的辅导,得到成千上万的留学生的真正认可.到2016为止，优越论文网实现了客服24小时在线一对一的客户沟通；我们拥有最专业的评估团队, 我们的turn-it-in系统检测帮助留学生朋友保证他们的论文原创性； 同时, 我们还有着庞大的英国院校师资力量支持等优势.来大家还有不懂的，记得打电话来咨询优越论文网服务老师哦！

第四篇：美国留学申请PS赏析

美国留学申请PS范文赏析。去美国留学生活一直都是中国人们的首要出国留学选择，美国留学申请是大家都很重视的事情，只有成申请成功了大家才能顺利的去美国留学生活，今天天道小编就给大家带来了美国留学申请中ps范文，希望对大家有所帮助。

美国留学申请材料中的个人陈述PS就是个人陈述或说明，要说出你到底喜不喜欢这个专业、喜欢到什么程度、对未来有什么设想，去读研究生、博士一定要谈对这一领域的看法，说出自己对它的热爱。

要注意的有：

1、PS的长度要适中，600—800英文单词。

2、紧扣专业，主线明确，避免盲目个性化。让招生委员会知道你选择该专业的明确和强烈的动机，同时具备充分的条件完成该专业的学习。

3、结构简单，衔接紧密，主线明确，便于理解。谨记：simple is the best。

4、精心安排PS和其它文件的关系。PS，推荐信，简历等文件构成一整套申请文书，既需要相互应证，也需要这些文件各有侧重点。

5、语言表达上，英语要地道、符合英语的思维习惯和文风，避免“中式英语”。

大家一定要注重这些要点，这对你是否可以成功去美国留学生活很重要。下面是ps范文：

To live a meaningful life everyday;to continually pursue my predetermined worthwhile goals.-My view of life.Could I put myself in the life-threatening working environment? Could I sacrifice my life for the benefits of others? Some people may laugh at my crazy question.To me, that is a serious question I have come a long way to find my answer.“I am not sure whether it is worth to answer”;“What is the true meaning of that question?”

When I was a young child, I watched a soap opera that was about court.I was deeply impressed by the judge’s calmness and the lawyer’s eloquence and resource that were showed in this opera.From then on, I hoped to study law some day.Fortunately, I performed well in entrance examination and got enrolled into xx University.Then I chose law as my major without hesitation.At university, I studied hard and got GPA

3.4.What’s more, I broadly read all kinds of books, including philosophy, history etc.My teachers’ instruction strengthened my understanding of law and makes me understand the significance of law to a country.From my studies, I had a lot of fun and got more interested in law.Moreover, I actively participated in practice in holidays from common company to law firm and tried to apply the theory I had learned into practice.This summer, I had my internship in counselor department in xxx Group Co Ltd which was involved in a business contract dispute, which was submitted to China International Economic and Trade Arbitration Commission for arbitration.As a representative of the requested applicant, I took part in the evidence collection in the early arbitration stage and clearly explained why the 5% balance of goods was not paid on time.After knowing the whole case, I visited my teacher, an Arbitration Law professor, and listened to her opinions.Realizing the counterpart didn’t completely implement their contract duty, I gave reasons

as follows: First, the counterpart company didn’t mention bearing issue, which caused that the delivered machines couldn’t be put into the plant because of the disqualification of workshop.Thus overhaul was necessary, which delayed production and resulted loss.Based on these reasons, the counterpart didn’t completely carry out its duty, so our party did not pay the balance on time.During this time, I found out the evidence and pictures that attested counterpart did not give reasonable suggestion and service, and made a statement in the court.Finally, the arbitration turned out that counterpart compensated our loss, in which the arbiters invoked the reasons that I stated.They had a panel made up of 3 lawyers and 5 company

representatives as agents while we just had 3 persons—two lawyers and me.Under such condition, I was able to cooperate with them and clearly stated my opinions without any nervousness, which got their respect.This matter greatly inspired my enthusiasm on study.In addition, I took part in the contact draft in several companies.In the process, when I met a lot of problems, I

often turned to my teachers for help, which made good impression on them.As I cherished each practice, I studied my specialty and English hard.With effective study method and diligence, I did well both in English and law, which helped me a lot to get scholarship every year.On the other hand, my practice inspired me to study.In practice, I exercised my legal knowledge.I also realize the big gap between theory and its application—sometimes I have master the rules but I didn’t know how to use it in actual case.My practice experiences have not only strengthened what I learned but have supplied new knowledge for me, which is good for my future study and career.In my study and practice, I admired outstanding lawyers’ eloquence and jumping thinking more and more.However, in China, most of lawyers come from theory study and those who can perform well in practice are insufficient.Moreover, after the China’s entrance to WTO, there are a lot of problems with Chinese law.I think, my internship experience is not enough.In practice, I could combine substantive law with procedural law to analyze case, but I still feel my theoretical foundation is not solid enough.What’s more, comparably speaking, the chances that I have to initiatively study and practice are not a lot.Thereby, I am eager to study further abroad to know more about foreign law, thoughts and lawyer career so that I am able to stand out in fierce competition.美国留学申请PS范文赏析。上述内容就是今天为大家带来的关于去美国留学生活前大家准备的申请材料中的ps的范文赏析，希望看过之后对大家有所帮助。

第五篇：申请留学的个人陈述PS

申请留学的个人陈述PS（NB）

极端装B的PS，非大牛不能handle，作者同时被Harvard, Yale, Stanford, Columbia, NYU, Virginia, UCB Boalt, Georgetown, UCLA, BU, USC等录取，所以吧，仰望为主。

全文692词，以39句I...but排比一气呵成。

I am a thinker, but not one to think out loud.I love myself, but am not in love with the sound of my own voice.I want to be loved, but not at the cost of not loving myself.I want to know everything, but realize that nothing can ever be known for sure.I believe that nothing is absolute, but I can absolutely defend my beliefs.I understand that chance is prevalent in all aspects of life, but never leave anything important to chance.I am skeptical about everything, but realistic in the face of my skepticism.I base everything on probability, but so does nature...probably.I believe that all our actions are determined, but feel completely free to do as I choose.I do not believe in anything resembling a God, but would never profess omniscience with regard to such issues.I have faith in nothing, but trust that my family and friends will always be faithful.I feel that religion is among the greatest problems in the world, but also understand that it is perhaps the ultimate solution.I recognize that many people derive their morals from religion, but I insist that religion is not the only fountainhead of morality.I respect the intimate connection between morality and law, but do not believe that either should unquestioningly respect the other.I want to study the law and become a lawyer, but I do not want to study the law just because I want to become a lawyer.I am aware that the law and economics cannot always be studied in conjunction, but I do not feel that either one can be properly studied without an awareness of the other.I recognize there is more to the law than efficiency, but believe the law should recognize the importance of efficiency more than it does.I love reading about law and philosophy, but not nearly as much as I love having a good conversation about

the two.I know that logic makes an argument sound, but also know that passion makes an argument sound logical.I have philosophical beliefs informed by economics and economic beliefs informed by philosophy, but I have lost track of which beliefs came first.I know it was the egg though.I always think very practically, but do not always like to think about the practical.I have wanted to be a scientist for a while now, but it took me two undergraduate years to figure out that being a scientist does not necessarily entail working in a laboratory.I play the saxophone almost every day, but feel most like an artist when deduction is my instrument.I spent one year at a college where I did not belong and two years taking classes irrelevant for my major, but I have no regrets about my undergraduate experience.I am incredibly passionate about my interests, but cannot imagine being interested in only one passion for an entire lifetime.I love the Yankees, but do not hate the Red Sox.I love sports, but hate the accompanying anti-intellectual culture.I may read the newspaper starting from the back, but I always make my way to the front eventually.I am liberal on some issues and conservative on others, but reasonable about all of them.I will always be politically active, but will never be a political activist.I think everything through completely, but I am never through thinking about anything.I can get along with almost anyone, but there are very few people without whom I could not get along.I am giving of my time, but not to the point of forgetting its value.I live for each moment, but not as much as I worry about the next.I consider ambition to be of the utmost importance, but realize that it is useless without the support of hard work.I am a very competitive person, but only when competing with myself.I have a million dreams, but I am more than just a dreamer.I am usually content, but never satisfied.I am a study in contradiction, but there is not an inconsistency to be found.