第一篇：英文写作佳句300例(作文闪光点高分保证)
121.A question begging an answer centers on whether violence is more directly related to the innate characteristic of human being, or whether it is simply a manifestation of the ills of society.Determining the answer will be far from an easy proposition, but is nonetheless one that deserves careful and deliberate consideration.需要回答的一个问题是：暴力与人类的天性联系更直接还是仅仅是社会恶习的体现？做出回答远非易事，而是值得仔细而审慎地考虑的事情。
122.From the standpoint of success, a good work ethic is no less important than an education.Success does, in fact, depend on the total integration of both aspects.从成功的角度来说，良好的职业道德与教育同等重要。事实上，成功的确建立在两方面完全融合的基础上。
123.The growing trend for wives to work outside the home even when their husbands are present and employed is in part a sharing of the financial burden with the husband, and in part a reflection of the need these women feel to have a measurable sense of personal worth.越来越多的妻子到外面工作，甚至和她们的丈夫再一起工作，一方面是为了和丈夫共同承担经济重担，一方面反映了女性感到需要有可衡量的个人价值。
124.Just as honor is a prerequisite for respectability, so is unblemished character a barometer of integrity.正如声誉是可敬的前提条件，无暇疵的品格是正直的晴雨表。
125.Beauty is in the eye of the beholder and the same is true for both the appreciation of art and music.美在观察者的眼中，美术和音乐的欣赏也是如此。
126.The direct correlation between self-esteem and success also applies to one‘s ability to achieve.自尊和成功的直接联系也适用于一个人取得成就的能力。
127.Improving the plight of teachers is indeed a priority item.However, improving the overall education system is likewise no less important.改善教师的困难处境的确是优先处理的一件事情。但是，改进整个教育系统同等重要。
128.China and United States share many things in common.Firstly, both are major world powers.Secondly, the two nations offer mutually beneficial factors for development—Chinawith its vast potential market and labor force, and the U.S.with its advanced technology and management expertise.中国和美国有许多共同之处。首先，两个都是世界主要强国。第二，两个国家相互提供发展的有利因素——中国拥有巨大的潜在市场和劳动力，美国拥有先进的技术和专业的管理知识。
129.The shaky truce in the Middle East bears little resemblance to the realization ofultimate peace.中东不可靠的休战与最终实现和平的相似性很小。
130.Idleness spawns discontent, whereas overwork leads to mental and physical exhaustion.懒惰滋生不满，而过度工作导致精神和身体的疲劳。
131.Large and small enterprises differ in that the former usually involves conglomeratesand the latter private individuals.大企业和小企业的区别在于前者通常涉及联合大企业，后者涉及私营的个人。
132.Both automobiles and bicycles offer a convenient means of public conveyance, with one of the marked differences between the two centered on pollution caused by the former.汽车和自行车都提供公共运输的便利方式，两者的显著区别之一在于前者引起污染。
133.Alcohol and tobacco are both highly addictive substances.However, unlike tobacco,which is known to cause cancer, studies indicate that alcohol does offer some health benefits when consumed in moderation.酒和烟都是很容易上瘾的东西。但是，研究显示，与公认为引起癌症的烟不同，酒如果适量饮用确实对健康有益。
134.One man‘s treasure is another man‘s junk.一个人的宝贝对于另一个人来说是垃圾。
135.AIDS is no longer one of the Top 10 American killers, but the same cannot be said for many countries.艾滋病不再是美国的十大杀手之一，但许多国家的情况并非如此。
136.Individualism was unheard of a short 30-odd year ago during the tumultuous Cultural Revolution.Things have changed today, however, with color returning to the streets of Chinese streets, people gaining a greater degree of self-determination and reform yielding monumental changes in traditional practices.人们在三十多年前混乱的文化大革命时期没有听说过个人主义。然而，今天的情况不同了，中国的街道上又恢复了色彩，人们获得了更大的自主，改革带来了传统方式的巨变。
137.Social inequities of the past are rapidly giving way to expanded social consciousness.过去社会的不公平正在被扩大的社会觉悟迅速取代。
138.Many claim that the world‘s highly developed countries bear sole responsibility for the plight of less-developed nations.I seriously doubt their contentions will bear the brunt of close scrutiny.许多人声称世界上最发达的国家应该对欠发达国家的困境承担全权责任。我非常怀疑他们的观点能经受住仔细审查的冲击。
139.Although media reports expound on the volume of scientific and technological achievements, recent surveys indicate that the rapidity of transforming same into productive forces leaves much to be desired.虽然媒体详细报道大量的科技成就，但是，最近的调查显示，把它们迅速转化为生产力还需要做出很多努力。
140.The popular belief in the invincibility of man is constantly rebuked by revaluations of man‘s fallibility.认为人类无敌的普遍看法经常遭到重新评价人类易犯错误的特点的非难。
141.While the inclination to procrastinate is common, one must fully consider the detrimental impact of unnecessary delays.虽然拖延的倾向是普遍的，但是人们应该充分考虑到不必要的延误造成的有害影响。
142.The tendency to take things for granted is understandable, but the need for one torationally evaluate the circumstances of any situation is absolutely essential.想当然的倾向是可以理解的，但是，理智地估计任何情形的情况是完全必需的。
143.Most people are under the illusion that a college degree guarantees success.There is no such guarantee without hard work.许多人错误地认为大学学位能保证成功。不努力工作就没有这样的保证。
144.Some stubbornly hold to the correctness of traditional practices, but in so doing they seem to totally ignore the fact that progress depends on change.一些人固执地坚持传统做法的正确性，但是，他们这么做，似乎完全忽视了进步依靠变化的事实。
145.Generally speaking, previous parliamentary policy debates ignored the relevance of transparency.总的来说，以前议会中针对政策的辩论忽视了透明度的重要性。
146.A precise definition of poverty is actually very difficult to determine.Where does one draw the line between those who are poor and those who are not? 对贫困的精确定义实际上是很难的。如何在贫穷和非贫穷的人之间划一条界限呢？
147.Admittedly, bribery and corruption are endemic to our political and economic systems,but it doesn‘t necessarily follow that all politicians and business people resort to illicit behavior.诚然，贿赂和腐败在我们的政治和经济系统中很流行，但这并不是说所有的政府官员和商界人士都采取违法行为。
148.There‘s little doubt that a third World War is avoidable, but it is highly unlikely thatregional conflicts will disappear in the foreseeable future.毫无疑问，第三次世界大战是可以避免的，但是，在可预见的将来地区冲突消失是非常不可能的。
149.Some people assume that investing in stock is a safe pursuit, but their assumption fails to hold water when considering the substantial risk involved.有的人想当然地认为投资股票是有把握的事情，但是，考虑到涉及的巨大风险，他们的想当然就说不通了。
150.Some people have called for accelerated across-the-board changes.Their approach quite frankly ignores the need for gradual but effective changes.一些人要求更快速的全盘改变。他们的做法的确忽略了渐进而有效的改变的必要性。
151.There is undoubtedly an element of truth in assertions that capital punishment is necessary, but proponents seem to ignore the fact that the practice has failed to deter heinous crimes.毫无疑问，主张极刑的必要性有正确的成分，但是，支持者似乎忽略了这种做法不能阻止令人发指的罪行这一事实。
152.Many people assume that the extinction of a plant or animal species is of little consequence.Careful examination, however, reveals that the extinction of any one species disrupts the food chain, and the loss of a plant species leads to the disappearance of a key ingredient which might yield a cure for cancer.许多人想当然地认为一种植物或动物的灭绝产生的后果很小。然而，仔细的考察揭示出任何一个物种的灭绝会破坏食物链，一种植物的消失造成有可能生成治疗癌症的药物的关键成分的缺失。
153.At first glance, the characteristics of Bugs Bunny seem comical.However, a closer examination reveals the cartoon character never creates a problem, and instead simply hopes for quiet and peaceful life.This suggests that cartoons most often teach children the difference between good and evil.乍一看，流氓兔的性格似乎滑稽。然而，仔细观察发现这个卡通人物从不制造麻烦，相反，它只希望过安静平和的生活。这说明卡通在大多数情况下教授给儿童好与坏之间的区别。
154.Logically, calls for a New World Order sound valid, and I whole-heartedly agree with some points, but the absurdity arises when considering that the world‘s 200-odd nations have diverse agendas when it comes to development and diplomacy.从逻辑而言，要求形成新的世界秩序听似正确，而且我真心实意地同意一些观点，但是，考虑到世界上二百余个国家在发展和外交上有不同的议事日程，这种要求就显得荒谬了。
155.In spite of claims to the contrary, it is common knowledge that corporal punishment most often has the exact opposite affect intended.尽管有相反的主张，但是大家都知道体法在多数情况下产生适得其反的效果。
156.We were brought up to believe that the role of a man was to provide and the role of a woman was to care for the household and family.Today, however, role reversal is becoming increasingly commonplace.我们从小就相信男人的角色市提供生活所需，女人的角色是照顾家庭和子女。然而，今天，角色的互换变得越来越普遍。
157.Some people tend to tenaciously cling to the misguided concept of racial superiority.Their persistence in doing so, however, does readily reveal the inferior mentality and social incompatibility of certain human beings.一些人顽强地坚持种族优越性的错误观点。然而，他们坚持这样做正揭示了某些人自卑的心理和社会对立性。
158.Some people claim the efficacy of traditional Chinese medicine(TCM)far exceeds that of Western-style pharmaceuticals.More often than not, however, the exact opposite is true.有的人声称中药的功效远远好于西药。但是，通常情况下，事实正好相反。
159.Workers commonly complain that causes for labor disputes rest solely on the shoulders of management.Quite likely the opposite is true.工人经常抱怨劳资纠纷的责任完全在管理者的肩上。很可能正好相反。
160.There are those who claim that competition brings out the best in people.Others contend it simply forces one person to prove he/she is better than another.Advocates vociferously support one position or the other.I suggest the former proposition bears greater relevance than the latter.有些人认为竞争促使人们发挥出最优秀的东西。另一些人认为它只是强迫一个人证明他/她比别人更优秀。提倡者叫嚣着支持其中的一个立场。我认为前一个立场比后一个立场更恰当。
161.Claiming something is true misses the point, while presenting verifiable fact proves its correctness.声称某样东西是正确的没有什么意义，而提出可以证实的事实能证明它的正确性。
162.Suggesting that one thing...is better than another thing...bears no more significance than insinuating that black is better than white.暗示一件东西比另一件东西更好比旁敲侧击地说黑比白好并没有更大的意义。
163.Ignoring cause and effect is exactly the same thing as failing to look both ways when crossing a busy intersection.忽略因果就相当于横穿繁忙的十字路口时没有朝两边看。
164.One who advocates the rights of homosexuals should not be surprised by the belligerent stance of opposition forces.主张同性恋者的权利的人对反对力量的好战姿态不应感到奇怪。
165.The greatest problem with political and religious zealots is their total inability toconsider the views of others.政治和宗教狂热者的最大问题在于他们完全不能考虑别人的观点。
166.The basic stumbling block to global peace rests with the self-serving ambitions of many nations.全世界和平的基本障碍物在于许多国家谋私利的野心。
167.The overemphasis on one particular aspect of a problem often obscures the relevance of other issues.过分强调问题的一个方面经常掩盖了其他方面的相关性。
168.Any presumption that smoking is in anyway beneficial is totally preposterous.任何对抽烟不管怎样是有益的假设都是完全荒谬的。
169.The fallacies of many arguments are quite obvious.许多论证的推论错误是相当明显的。
170.Arbitrarily dismissing the direct link between increasing sexual promiscuity and the rapid spread of sexually transmitted diseases would be foolhardy.An even more foolish mistake would center on denying the need for extensive sex education programs worldwide.武断地无视性乱行为的增多和性传播疾病的迅速蔓延之间的直接联系是鲁莽的。一个更愚蠢的错误是否认在世界范围内开展广泛的性教育项目的必要性。
171.There is absolutely no reason for us to believe that a brighter future for the world is an impossibility.我们丝毫没有理由相信，世界不可能会有一个更光明的未来。
172.Meteorologists offer computer models leaving little doubt that this year‘s El Nino phenomenon has disappeared.气象学家提供计算机模型，充分证明今年的厄尔尼诺现象已经消失了。
173.Facts prove the unjustifiability of claims that China will be unable to feed itself by the year 2020.事实证明：断言中国到2020年将不可能养活自己是不合道理的。
174.Previous explanations of the rising divorce rate in China are simply untenable.The fact is that many marriages were simply based on convenience and wives are no longer willing to accept the abusive domineering attitudes of husbands.以前对中国离婚率升高的解释是完全站不住脚的。事实是许多婚姻仅仅建立在便利的基础上，而且妻子不再愿意接受丈夫作威作福的态度。
175.Claim that entering the Chinese market offers foreign companies an immediate road to profits are grossly misstated and have been proven wrong time and again.The key to entering China rests with the phraseology “vast potential market ”, and how long one is willing to wait for returns.声称进入中国市场会给外国公司带来立即获利的途径是非常错误的，事实已经一次次地证明了这一点。进入中国的关键在于“广阔的潜在市场”这一说法以及为了回报愿意等待多久。
176.Parents are not wrong in enforcing good study habits, but they must not do so at the expense of stifling normal child development.家长把好的学习习惯强加给孩子没有错，但是，他们这么做不能以抑制儿童的正常发展为代价。
177.It is quite reasonable to assume that modern science and technology(S&T)will continue to advance.It is no less reasonable to believe that S&T will radically improve the way we live.However, the same reasoning cannot be applied to improving social interaction.假定现代科学技术将继续进步是很有道理的。相信科技会大幅度地改变我们的生活方式也是同样有道理的。然而，同样的逻辑不能用于改善社会上的相互作用。
178.Belief in the wonders of modern medical science is quite understandable.It is also quite possible that our faiths in the ability of scientists to find the key for prolonging life are well-founded.Yet, the wisdom of prolonging life remains in question when considering the already massive global population and projected future growth.相信现代医学的奇迹是可以理解的。很有可能我们相信科学家能够找到延长生命的关键也是有根据的。但是，考虑到已经非常庞大的世界人口和预计的未来的增长，延长生命是否明智仍有疑问。
179.It is one thing to support euthanasia, but quite another to offer any justification for genocide.支持安乐死是一回事，为种族灭绝提供正当的理由是另一回事。
180.Claiming the need for censorship is one thing, but rationally proving its redeeming valuesrepresents a quite different issue.主张审查制度的必要性是一回事，理智地证明它的可取之处是完全不同的另一回事。
第二篇：英语四级写作高分必备闪光点句型（范文）
2009年12月英语四级写作高分必备闪光点句型
一、“闪光点”
1)主语从句
Why he would reject such a good offer remained unknown all these years.Whether we can succeed or not depends upon our efforts.What you have done for us will be in our memory forever.It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy.It is well-known that„
It is self-evident that„
It goes without saying that„
It is universally acknowledged that„
2)宾语从句
They believe that the central government’s decision to develop the western part of the country and the success of Beijing’s bid to host the 2008 Olympics will open up further opportunities for the country’s development.We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his roommates.Experience from foreign countries suggests that no aircraft manufacturers can survive depending only on their domestic market.3)表语从句
This is where she lived when she was young.Quality is what counts most.The problem is not who will go, but who will stay.What we want to know is whether the government may take measures to tackle this problem.The question is which one you may choose.4)定语从句(限定性和非限定性)
As is shown/demonstrated/illustrated/depicted/described„in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table„，There are many reasons why I want to study in your university.It is estimated that tens of billions of yuan is spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste.The food supply will not increase nearly enough to match this, which means that we are heading into a crisis in the matter of producing and marketing food.5)状语从句(时间，原因，地点，条件，让步，转折等)
When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke becomes a monster(怪物)which will devour him.Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of computers.Although we focus on the needs of exceptional children, we find ourselves describing their environment as well.6)分词短语做定语或状语
Prof.Kang came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire English better.Coupled with the growing quantity of information is the development of technologies which enable the storage and delivery of more information with greater speed to more locations than has ever been possible before.7)强调句
It was him who gave us much hope for the future.8)倒装句
Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem.Scattered around the globe are more than 100 small regions of isolated volcanic activity known to geologists as hot spots.9)省略句
If so, we have to give it up.If necessary„
Whatever the reason„
10)What句型
We totally agree with what you have just said.11)设问句
Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him?
12)被动句
Some measures should be taken to deal with the problem.He is said to have accomplished a lot of great deeds.Many people believe that„(It is believed that„)The government and the public should pay enough attention to„(Enough attention should be paid to„from both the government and the public.)
二.提高
1.The above mentioned issue results from the following factors./ Many factors are responsible for the problem.To begin with, ________.What’s more, _________.Last but not the least, ____________.2.There is no doubt that____________.„
No one can deny that____________.„ It goes without saying that____________.„
3.When it comes to the issue, different people have different opinions.4.Just as any coin has two sides.I believe there is some truth to both.If I am allowed to make a decision, I prefer _____ to _______ because _______.5.sth.is an indispensable part of sth.6.People can not imagine the world without_______./ People can not imagine what the world would be like without_______.7.In my view, we have to think carefully before we make the decision to _____.Question1 ? Question2 ? These questions need to be answered before we make the final decision.8.in all walks of life
9.As an old saying goes，10.Instead of doing sth, we should.„rather than
11.It is true that„, but„ eg.It is true that we can’t do anything without money, but money is not everything.12.attach great importance to sth.13.„ is a hot issue
14.satisfy/meet one’s needs and desires
15.sth.benefit sb.= sth.do good to sb.sb.benefit from sth.sb.receive benefit from/by sth.sth/it.is beneficial to sth./sb.16.try every means to do sth./strive to do sth.17.sb.do sth., while sb.others do sth.else
18.it is supposed to do sth.英语写作：英语四六级考试写作必背的35句型
一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)
~~~ the most + 形容词 + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
Mr.Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。
二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V
例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education.没有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。)例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
四、There is no denying that + S + V...(不可否认的...)
例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~(全世界都知道...)
例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~(毫无疑问的...)
例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子(...的优点是...)
例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create(produce)any pollution.使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子(...的原因是...)
例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子(如此...以致于...)
例句：So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。
十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V~~~(虽然...)
例句：Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.{by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}
虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~
The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V ~~~(愈...愈...)
例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make.你愈努力，你愈进步。
The more books we read, the more learned we become.我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。
十二、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~(借着...，..能够..)
例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。
十三、~~~ enable + Object(受词)+ to + V(..使..能够..)
例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
十四、On no account can we + V ~~~(我们绝对不能...)
例句：On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
十五、It is time + S + 过去式(该是...的时候了)
例句：It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
十六、Those who ~~~(...的人...)
例句：Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。
十七、There is no one but ~~~(没有人不...)
例句：There is no one but longs to go to college.没有人不渴望上大学。
十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V(不得不...)
例句：Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。
十九、It is conceivable that + 句子(可想而知的)
It is obvious that + 句子(明显的)
It is apparent that + 句子(显然的)
例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。
二十、That is the reason why ~~~(那就是...的原因)
例句：Summer is sultry.That is the reason why I don't like it.夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。
二十一、For the past + 时间，S + 现在完成式...(过去...年来，...一直...)
例句：For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination.过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试。
二十二、Since + S + 过去式，S + 现在完成式。
例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自从他上高中，他一直很用功。
二十三、It pays to + V ~~~(...是值得的。)
例句：It pays to help others.帮助别人是值得的。
二十四、be based on(以...为基础)
例句：The progress of thee society is based on harmony.社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。
二十五、Spare no effort to + V(不遗余力的)
例句：We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。
二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事(让...明白...事)
例句：We should bring home to people the value of working hard.我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。
二十七、be closely related to ~~(与...息息相关)
例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health.做运动与健康息息相关。
二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving
= make it a rule to + V(养成...的习惯)
We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。
二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, ~~~(因为...)
例句：Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。
三
十、What a + Adj + N + S + V!
= How + Adj + a + N + V!(多么...!)
例句：What an important thing it is to keep our promise!
How important a thing it is to keep our promise!
遵守诺言是多么重要的事!三
十一、Leave much to be desired(令人不满意)
例句：The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.我们的交通状况令人不满意。
三
十二、Have a great influence on ~~~(对...有很大的影响)
例句：Smoking has a great influence on our health.抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。
三
十三、do good to(对...有益)，do harm to(对...有害)
例句：Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。
Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。
三
十四、Pose a great threat to ~~(对...造成一大威胁)
例句：Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。
三
十五、do one's utmost to + V = do one's best(尽全力去...)
例句：We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。
第三篇：英语六级高分作文闪光点
作文写完检查集中点
1.每个句子是否都有谓语动词；
2.动词的时态和语态；
3.主谓搭配是否恰当；
4.标点符号。高分作文标志
1：是否长短句交叉；
2、是否会使用插入语；
3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；
4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
具体例子下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：
1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I(比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that „
3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think，people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb.be interested in sth.google 替换 search
an army of 替换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；
Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
Coincident with „ 非常地道的句型，表达“与„一致”的意思，替换 With „
Advancement 替换 development
Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替换 enter into
Current(currently)替换 now
Appeal to sb.替换 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替换 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替换 send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to
Emerging 替换 appearing(fading 替换 disappearing)
Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play，do 强调
Positive 替换 important / good 等
A slice of 替换 a part of
Unfavorable 替换 bad
Impacts 替换 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of „ 使用插入语
Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替换 advantage(defects 替换 disadvantage)
Facet 替换 aspect
各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢！
以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下。
1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising
(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替换bad 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。
Eg.Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that„.同理 用most, if not all ,替换most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some
6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因为是书面语，所以要加that)
7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing
8: shared 代 common
9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits)
10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly
13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful，14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer
15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very
16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable...替换 unnecessary, avoidable
17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb.be interested in
18.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear
21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth
23.desire 替换want.24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to
25.bear in mind that 替换remember
26.enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)
27.interaction替换communication
28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth
29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance
30.next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible
应当承认:
Admittedly, a few governments have taken timid measures.2.simply 简而言之:
The answer is simply money.3.discreetly 小心谨慎地:
point out discreetly that„
4.conceivably 可以想象地:
Smoking may, conceivably, be harmful.5.surely 肯定地:
This is surely the most short-sighted policy you could imagine.6.eagerly 渴望地
7.increasingly 不断增长地
While money is eagerly collected in vast sums with one hand, it is paid out in increasingly vaster sums with the other.8.honestly: 诚实地:
the government is honestly concerned about the welfare of its people政府真心实意地关心它的人民的福利
9.certainly: 当然地
As individuals we are certainly weak, but if „作为个人,我们当然是弱小的,但是如果„
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Importance of Reading Classics.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1.读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要。
2.现在愿意阅读经典的人却越来越少，原因是。。3.我们大学生应该怎么做
The Importance of Reading Classics
第四篇：作文佳句(高考高分必备)
If two people share sadness, their sadness will be greatly lessened.However, if two people share happiness, their happiness will be doubled.一learn to share and cooperate.As is universally acknowledged, we are living in a world in which sharing and cooperation are so important.In fact, they have become increasingly prevalent in many aspects from international cooperation to daily lives.Here I would like to share my own experience with you.I can well remember there was a time when I was caught in the sadness of failing the exam.My world turned into grey in my mind until my best friend put his hands on my shoulder, offering to comfort me.The instant I shared my feelings with him, I felt extremely relaxed.Apparently, it was sharing with my friend that pulled me through the dark moment and brought back my confidence.As you can see, Sharing and cooperation is not only physical but also mental satisfaction.“Shared joy is a double joy, while shared sorrow is half a sorrow”.In a word, the more things we share with others, the more happiness we will get in return.The following structures may be helpful:
1.As is widely acknowledged „It can not be denied that„/It is a widely accepted fact that„
2.I can well remember there was a time when„
3.From what has been discussed above, we can draw a conclusion/we may safely arrive at the conclusion that„
4There is a limit to one’s power, but no limit/limitless to the group.5.Sharing is to us what air is to humans.6.While a good cooperation can often simplify the complex, working alone is more likely to complicate the simple.把文章写长的句子：
1.Years of school life has taught me a lot of things,of which what I value most is that we should----
2.Never shall I forget that there was a time when I---I still remember six years ago when I began to do----
3.I had difficulty in improving----(adj.)+状况,+心情描写(desperate,anxious,nervous---about---,I even considered abandoning-
4.It was---who was aware that I had got into a situation where I couldn’t cop with difficulties./Seeing me in such a state----
5.Instead of scolding me,she gave me much---,telling me---Inspired by what she said to me,I came to realize that---
6.With---’s help,I regained my confidence and the following months witnessed me devoting myself to---,finally, my efforts paid off and I made steady/great./much progress in---
7.Believing what---said,I got greatly inspired,I spared no efforts to practice speaking English every day.8.Owing to timely changes,it was not long before I did succeed in---I even---
9.I have learned a lesson from my experience that one should---,which is especially important for a student.Therefore,I tend to set a clear goal for myself first.and then focus all my attention on it.I have been fully aware that only when I have a
concentrated mind can I achieve my success in the end.10.My experience tells me that hopes and dreams are the inspiration that makes me move forward all the time.11.Now looking back, I am so glad that--encouraged me to take music lessons.Without their encouragement,I wouldn’t have achieved such great progress.12.Life is like a road,which is full of twists and turns,sometimes we can’t take the road planned.Being positive gives me a deeper understanding about our strengths and goals to accomplish.13.Most of(A majority of)students believe(hold the view)that part-time jobs can provide them with opportunities to develop(improve/better)their communication ability(social abilities/interpersonal skills人际关系技巧),which is good for(is beneficial to)their looking for jobs(job-hunting)in the future(after their graduation).14.The most important factor we have to take into consideration is sth./that„
15.It is commonly/widely/generally agreed that„(acknowledged that„/ believed that)
16.It is hard to understand that doing part-time job can, to a large extent, broaden our horizon in that we can understand more about the society by knowing a lot of people.17.with the development of science and technology/economy/culture/society/information technology, more and more people are paying attention to„/close/due attention should be paid to
插入语的使用及其他常见表达:：
that is to say,to a certain extent=to some degree在一定程度,to a larger degree在很大程度上
to put it in another way换言之in other words 换句话说primarily/mainly owing to that,partly/partially due to that,be thankful/grateful to sb.for---to express one’s gratitude/thanks to„forgive/ excuse /pardon me for what I did
第五篇：2010年英语六级考试写作高分佳句总结
2010年英语六级考试写作高分佳句总结
负面现象，一般写带来的危害，产生的原因 Undoubtedly，It will have /exert a / produce
considerable/profound / beneficial/ favorable/ undesirable/ negative influence/ effect on… what is more worrisome is that…
1)It may cause /produce /bring about considerable/drastic/ sweeping change/ rise in… 2)This
will
entail
/bring
/involve
some dreadful/serious/pernicious(很有害的，恶性的)consequences
3)Just think/ imagine that /what would happen if…(想一下，如果人人做好事都想回报社会会变成什么)
5)he majority of people would agree that sth has caused serious problems.6)Personally, it is my belief that sth threatens to do more harm than good.7)if allowed to proceed unchecked, the problem will undoubtedly …(带来的一个具体问题)
8)(一些过渡句，正面，反面，原因都可以使用)
9)on the surface of it, this may seem to be ridiculous/ attractive/ funny/ just a popular phenomenon, but If thinking again, we would point out some drawbacks/ strong points/reasons.10)it is superficially plausible/ ridiculous/ attractive/ funny/just a popular phenomenon, but when subjected to analysis ,it turns out that(but a close inspection of the idea would reveal that)it will cause many problems/ result in many advantages/ has its fundamental reasons.11)(一般用于说缺点)it is true that(好处)internet has the power to educate and to entertain, but unfortunately, these benefits are outweighed by the harm it does to dedicated /addicted users.用来总结：
A If no measures are taken to ensure(要具体的写内容)…, a … disaster may not be far away and the next victim will probably be man himself.B if we let this situation continues as it is, we do not know what will happen between people’s relationship in the future.正面现象，一般写带来的好处，原因分析或举例说明
A admittedly, as the reflection of the outlook of the people, sth, as priceless spiritual treasure ought to be preserved and cherished.At the same time there are positive reasons to advocate sth.举例段
A examples to prove the view are abundant.The most persuasive one is the case of sb who;
B this can be illustrated by the example of sb who
C numerous examples can demonstrate the power of sth(cooperation / confidence).a case in point is that(concerning sth)
D such stimulating/ less impressive cases /stories are not rare in our daily life.E to examine this , let’s return to the example of sb/sth 解决问题段：
A(坏东西)Therefore, it is high time that effective measures must be taken to solve the problem.The essential solution, in my opinion, is to ….In addition /apart from this, people’s awareness must be heightened through education and publicity.In a word, we can never solve the problem until all of us take action to regulate people’s behaviors.B(坏东西)therefore, it is imperative for us, people in all walks, to take drastic measures to reverse this disturbing trend illustrated in the picture above.For on thing, we should appeal to the authorities to make strict laws to control… for another, we should cultivate the awareness that sth is of great significance to us.Only in this way , can we(要写的很具体，不要写结局问题，过上幸福生活)(one measure would be to… more importantly/meanwhile/,)
I believe that we humans can surmount this difficulty and we will have a brilliant future.C(好东西可以提倡保护)what should be done to promote(好事情 the communication between people in the present-day society)? Chinese citizens are excepted to enhance their awareness that sth is an indispensable part for sth(the construction of harmonious society).The local and central authorities, not only Chinese but also foreign ones, in coordination with the press, are obliged to … , only through these action can the culture between nations have a glorious future.D(好东西)accordingly, it is vital for us to derive positive implication from these thought –provoking drawings.E(坏东西)if we donot desire/hope the trend to become a reality one day in the future, positive steps must be taken to put an end to sth right now.F(好坏都行)in order to make… we still have tremendous tasks to accomplish.G(好坏)to improve/put an end to the positive/negative situation of , my suggestion are the following steps.H(坏)there is, as a matter of fact, little doubt that immediate action is required to eliminate
I(好坏)we can say this and we can say that, but the most important thing is not to say, but instead to do.J(坏)having recognized the problem, it follows that we must develop a plan of action.
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