第一篇：中考作文的创新表达范文
中考作文的创新表达
一、点击关键词
创新是作文的生命。尤其是面对“开放型”的话题作文，谁最有创新意识，谁写出有新意的文章，谁就能取胜。各地中考作文的评分标准中都有这样的一条：“鼓励有创意的表达。”虽然只有这简单的一句话，但给考生以很大的写作“自由”。这种“自由”，包括“精神的自由”和“笔墨的自由”，简而言之，就是“用我笔写我思”。
二、写作支招
考场作文创新可以从下面四个方面入手。
（一）选材出新
古人云：“良桐方能斫美琴”，材料不新鲜，是不能有创意出新的。我们生活在一个多元并存、共处竞争的时代，社会上的新闻热点，构建和谐社会中的风云事件，校园里的激情辩论，无不跳动着时代的脉搏，涌动着创新的气息。例如，武汉市中考满分作文《“我”为我服务》，作者把眼光投向高科技产物——克隆人。表现了随着“克隆人”的服务和替代，人类不断退化、萎缩，表达作者对社会生活热点问题的关注和忧虑。社会热点问题很多，如战争与和平、北京奥运、信息高速路、博客、素质教育中的综合素质评价等。
（二）立意出新
立意是一篇文章的灵魂。要使立意充满创意，可从下面两个方面着手：
1、多一点对立意“公式”的否定。用蜡烛比喻老师，用蜜蜂象征劳动者……这些立意公式“历史悠久”，千篇一律，毫无新意。只有冲出了立意公式的羁绊，寻找到独特的心灵感悟，文章立意才会高人一筹。
2、多一点对立意角度的选择。在立意的角度上，可以正面着墨，也可以反面着笔。例如一“雪”为话题，一般人立意总是赞美雪的洁白无瑕，这种思维并无新意。如果逆向思维，立意贬雪，抨击雪的虚伪（见不得阳光）、凶恶（依仗狂风，不可一世）、冷酷（千山鸟飞绝，万径人踪灭）和懦弱（任人践踏），这样的立意就很有新意。
（三）形式创新
同样的立意、选材，得分有时因表现形式的不同而有高下之分。因而作文要升格，就要
根据自己的写作特长，选用一般考生少用的文章形式，如书信、日记、寓言、童话、科幻故事、戏剧小品等，这样会使你的文章脱颖而出。即使写常规的三大文体，也要尽可能使文章形式新颖些，如写记叙文，可以设置题记、设置悬念、设计小标题等。
（四）语言出新
语言是思维的外壳，是情感的载体。怎样才能使语言富于个性呢？
1、写出语言的新鲜美。活用新词语，为文章增添生机与活力。
2、写出语言的诗意美。适当引用诗歌名句，可以增加文章的内涵和文采。
3、写出语言的修辞美。巧用修辞，妙用句式，加强对语言的包装。
三、满分作文示例
以“力量”为话题的满分作文： 开在雪山之颠的鲜花 文/吴铭
古之立大事者，不惟有超世之才，亦必有坚忍不拔之志。-----苏轼
寒冷的冬夜，鹅毛般的大雪纷纷扬扬地落下，把地面铺得厚厚的。狂风呼啸，卷着雪片在空中形成了一个个旋涡。
“孩子，考验你的时候来了，家庭的每一个人都要经历这一关。背上行囊，徒步到雪山上去采摘属于你的那一朵鲜花吧。”老者的声音缓慢洪亮，带着一种不可抗拒的威严。
“可是，父亲，为什么不用家族与生俱来的神力让每个年轻人飞到山顶呢？”这声音还带着一丝若有若无的稚嫩，充满了疑惑。
“不，孩子。这花是用你的血汗浇灌的，它疑聚着你在雪地上留下的一个个艰难的脚印。没有自己的艰辛，花朵就不能开放。”
一阵长久的沉默，只听见两人沉重的呼吸。“时候不早了，上路吧。”还是那个缓慢的声音打破了沉静。
阴冷的月光洒在雪地上，看到了一行歪歪扭扭的脚印，很深很深。
年轻人的身影在雪地上慢慢移动，在他眼中，只看见远方的高山，那才是他惟一的目标。远处传来刺耳的笑声：“年轻人，像你这样走还要走多久啊，别听你父亲的，快用你的神力飞向山顶吧，哈哈哈……”
雪地上还是那个顽强的身影在艰难地移动，一次一次迈出腿，一次一次踏进雪地里，再一次一次地把腿从齐膝深的雪层中拔出来。脚印一个一个留在身后，汗珠一滴一滴地从额上滴下来，和脚印融合在一起。
雪片还在往下落，旷野中，四面八方都回响着大雪的威胁。“年轻人，不许再往前走了，否则，我会让你葬身在雪地之中的。”
年轻人似乎什么也没有听到，依然在重复着那个机械的动作，迈腿，踏雪。因为鲜花就在前面。
寒风更猛烈了，大雪更疯狂了。好像要埋没雪地上那一行行血汗凝聚成的脚印和瘦小的身影。不过，这一切都是徒劳，所有的威胁都不能吓倒这个顽强的年轻人。脚印还是那样清晰可辨，是什么力量使他不畏艰难险阻，攀登不已呢？
苏轼的回答就是最好的诠释。
[满分揭秘]
这篇作文运用丰富的想像力，虚构了一个奇幻的故事，诠释了一个深刻的主题：理想（志向、信念、目标）激发人无穷的力量。
小作者力避议论文、记叙文等一般文体，而是大胆采用小说这种文学形式，虚构了一个奇幻的神话般的故事：一个年轻人不畏艰难险阻，攀到雪山之巅去采摘鲜花。这里的鲜花有着深刻寓意：象征着人生的目标、志向、抱负、理想。而青年冒雪攀峰的经历也昭示着人生的奋斗经历。只有不畏艰难、不懈奋斗的人才能实现人生的目标。这个立意如果采用议论文来阐述的话，肯定没有采用小说来得形象、生动。
用诗一样的语言作题目，新颖、生动。引用苏轼的名言作题记，含义深刻，这些都值得借鉴。
四、热身训练
[考题回放]（2006年江苏省常州市中考题）
请以“告别”为题写一篇文章。
要求：①将题目补充完整；②文体不限（若写诗歌则不少于25行）。
[思路点拨]
这道作文题非常自由，除了在文体上要求写成诗歌不少于25行外，在审题、立意、选材上对考生都没有设置障碍。半命题的形式，能使考生迅速打开记忆的仓库，找到写作的素材；考生可以用第一人称写自己某段有关告别的经历，也可以用第三人称写他人告别的场景，还可以谈一谈自己对告别的看法。如果考生的语言功底不错的话，写篇抒情散文也同样不错的！要写好此文，可以从以下几个方面着手：
⑴立意要高远出新。人的一生，伴随着许多多的告别，告别童年，告别朋友，告别亲人，告别这个世界，和心爱的事物告别，和自身恶习告别……在告别中，我们不断长大，渐渐成熟。告别引发了我们美好的祝福，惟有相思似春色，江南江北送君归；我寄愁心与明月，随风直到夜郎西；没有我的岁月里，你要保重你自己……告别意味着新生：已是隆冬季节了，春天还会远吗……
⑵选材要独辟蹊径。选材创新的关键在于“人无我有，人有我新”，在选材上应从小处着手，避开人易选的材料，巧妙地选取自己熟悉的而又与众不同的一点入文。比如同是写告别老师的，一般的同学只是通过回忆，写老师深夜批改作业，冒雪给我补课，“下雨天背我们过河”等写滥了的材料，而你却独辟蹊径，先写自己告别了网吧，再写自己告别了不及格，最后写自己告别恩师，在最后一节点明是恩师帮助我告别了网吧，提高了学习成绩。这样的选材立意肯定是令人刮目相看的。
⑶形式要不拘一格。文章形式也应追求多样，方能锦上添花，有所突破。比如同是写告别网吧，如果你用一般记叙文的形式写，则很难收到好的效果，如果你用相声的形式写，那效果就大不一样，此外还可采用镜头组合，小标题连缀、书信日记、对话访谈等形式创新，让阅卷老师耳目一新。
⑷语言要亮丽出彩。语言是文章的外衣，不同文体的文章对于语言有不同的要求，那么，我们的作文就应该体现出所选文体的语言特点，如记叙文的语言应该简明、生动、形象、传神，而议论文的语言应该鲜明、准确、概括、逻辑性强等，生动的语言会让你的文章，听来生动悦耳，读来朗朗上口，看来光彩照人，考来脱颖而出！
[新题设计]
阅读下面的材料，你一定有很多想法，请选择你感受最深的一点为话题，按要求作文。
有一个故事，事情发生在1997年12月11日。美国著名的“悄悄话”专栏女记者辛迪·亚当，想约克林顿总统的夫人希拉里来个单独采访。多番努力，终于搞定，希拉里同意在她出席了纽约曼哈顿大学俱乐部的一个妇女集合后，跟辛迪谈一个小时。
采访就定在曼哈顿俱乐部里。这个俱乐部有着百年历史，注重传统，古色古香。辛迪先到，在大厅候着。到了时间，希拉里还没有来，她坐不稳了，悄悄地把手机拿出来，打个电话问一下。守门的老头过来了，说：“夫人，你在干什么？”
女记者说，我跟克林顿夫人有个约会。老头说：“你不可以在这个俱乐部里使用手机，请你出去。”说完后，老头就走了，辛迪收起了手机。
一会儿老头又来了，看见这女人没走，还与克林顿夫人在大厅里高谈阔论，在场的有总统府的高级助理们。老头不乐意了，说：“这是不能容许的行为，你必须离开。”克林顿夫人说：“咱们走。”乖巧地拉上辛迪就出去了。
要求：⒈题目自拟。⒉立意自定。⒊文体自选（诗歌除外）。⒋600字以上。⒌话题不能超过故事所能涵盖的范围。
[思路点拔]
这是一则材料作文，可以选择的话题较宽。只要你能从这则材料中得到某一方面的启示，就可以把它作为话题。当然你的启示一定要有根据，有道理，不能牵强附会，超出故事意义的范围。你可以用发散思维的方法，选择一个角度来确定话题。
⒈从看门人忠于职守，坚持原则的角度分析，确定“职责”、“原则”为话题。
⒉从看门人不畏权贵，不因为自己的身份地位低下而屈从的角度，确定“平等”为话题。
⒊从看门人对于自己的职业的选择，感到自信的角度，确定“自信”为话题。
⒋从辛迪和克林顿夫人没有以权压人，礼貌地离开的角度，确定“修养”为话题。
确定话题后，再围绕话题去立意。如选择“原则”话题，立意可以是：坚持原则，才能办好事情；坚持原则面前人人平等，就能赢得别人的尊重……如写记叙文，选择材料从小角度切入：（1）班长不肯打扫教室，身为负责班级清洁卫生的干部，你要班长补扫，并且按规定罚扫一天。班长不从，你是如何坚持原则，迫使班长遵守规定的？事后，班里发生了怎样的变化？你是否赢得了同学们的尊重？（2）还可以讲述小人物坚持原则的故事。（3）也可以写不坚持原则而导致失败的故事。
[作文素材]
[名言警句]
⒈人在履行职责中得到幸福。就像一个人驮着东西，可心头很舒畅。人要是没有它，不尽什么职责，就等于驾驶空马车一样，也就是说，白白的浪费。
（[苏]罗佐夫）
⒉有一种事做不做全看一个人愿不愿意，那就是他应尽的义务。尽义务不能靠说漂亮话，要靠果敢的行动。
（[英]简·奥斯丁）
⒊有的人本领平庸，但做事尽心竭力，他们比那些本领出众但做事敷衍塞责的人强。
（[英]简·奥斯丁）
⒋对待工作的严肃态度，高度的正直，形成了自由和秩序之间的平衡。
（[法]罗曼·罗兰）
第二篇：中考书面表达
中考书面表达范文
1.Introduce yourself
My name is Li Lei.I was born in Fuzhou on December 15, 1994.I’m studying at Yucai Middle School.I learn Chinese, math, English, physics, chemistry, politics, and so on.I like English best.My favorite sport is football.My hobbies are drawing and computer.I’m very happy to live in a happy family.There are 3 people in my family.My father is a doctor.My mother is a teacher.We love each other very much.2．以My Hobbies为题，要求60～80个单词。
I love collecting stamps.I collect all kinds of stamps.I think collecting stamps is great fun.It can bring me happiness, friendship and knowledge.I can also learn a lot about people, history and special times from the stamps.Some of them are very valuable.I like them very much.I am going to give you a very nice stamp.I hope you will like it.What are your hobbies? Can you tell me?
3.谈谈如何预防疾病，保持健康，养成良好的卫生习惯。要求60～80个单词。
It’s very important for everyone to keep healthy.We should have good habits.For example, we should wash our hands before meals, wash our clothes often, not drink cold water and so on.At the same time, exercise is also important.We should often take exercise, because it will make us strong and germs(细菌)will have little chance to get through our bodies.We also should eat healthily.We’d better eat fruit and vegetables, because they are good for our health.If we are healthy, we can live a happy life.4．2008年北京奥运会就要到来，谈谈你将为奥运会作些什么。字数80字左右。Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic Games.What can we do for the Olympic Games? First , I think we must study hard from now on.We must learn to speak English better that we can help foreign visitors who come to China in 2008.Next, we must behave well and improve our environment.We can plant more trees and grass to make our country more beautiful.Then in 2008, we can go to Beijing to be a volunteer(自愿者).We are sure the 2008 Olympic Games will be successful.I can’t wait.5.根据所提示的内容写一篇日记。（字数80左右，要求语法正确，语气通顺。）
1.时间：2007年10月1日2.和同学们去西湖公园游玩。
3．吃完冰激凌后随手把纸扔在地上。4．一个女孩把纸捡起扔进垃圾箱。
5．我们感到惭愧，决定在公园里帮助捡垃圾，为环保尽自己的一份力量。
October l, 2007Sunny
Today is National Day and it is sunny.My classmates and I decided to go to the West lake Park.We had a very good time there.We bought some ice-cream there and after we finished it, we threw the paper to the ground.Just then a little girl ran to us, picked it up and put it into a dustbin nearby.We felt very sorry and decided to help collect rubbish in the park so that we could make contributions to protecting our environment.6.假设你是李雷，请根据下列内容给你的英国朋友吉姆写一封信．告诉他你和同学们上周去鼓山郊游的活动和感受。字数60－80。要求：意思连贯，符合逻辑，所给的提示词必须
都用上。
你们上午7:00在校门口集合，大约8:00到达鼓山…
meet, arrive, at the foot of, climb, on the top, have a party, play games, see, beautiful, proud, live
Dear Jim,Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to Gu Mountain.It is a very famous mountain in Fuzhou.We met at the school gate at 7: 00 and arrived at the foot of the mountain at 8: 00.As soon as we got there we began to climb the hill.It took all of us an hour to climb to the top of the mountain.Then we had a party and played games.From the top we could see the beautiful sceneries of Fuzhou.We are proud that we live in Fuzhou.Write to me soon.Best wishes.Yours,Li Lei
7.谈谈如何利用好网络资源，要求60～80个单词。
The Internet is becoming more and more important to us.Without it, we can’t do work better.We can go shopping without going out of our houses.And we can listen to music or watch movies on the Internet.It can also help a lot with our study.We can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information as soon as possible.But now, some of us work, study or play on the Internet for long time, especially for young people to play computer games.It’s bad for our eyes and health.If we make good use of the Internet, it will be our best friends and help us a lot.8．Great changes in my hometown
More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small, old and poor town.Most of people were
farmers.There were few factories.The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes.They had a hard life.Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years.The people have found a lot of ways of making money.Now there are many tall buildings.They are very beautiful.Roads are wide and clean.People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.Many
people have cell phones and personal computers.People’s living conditions have improved a lot.Thanks to the government’s efforts.my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.9．Make our world more beautiful!
Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans.It’s our duty to take care of the nature around us.Animals and plants are our best friends, and we should share the world with them.We shouldn’t kill wild animals, and we must protect forests because they are animals’ home.We must plant more trees and grass, they can make the world greener.The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have.Let’s do our best to make the world beautiful.10．How to learn English well
As we know, English has become an international language.It is more popular than any other language in China.English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world.But how to learn it well?
The best way is to use it all the time.If we can talk in English, think in English we can learn it well.At school, we should learn to hear, speak, read and write carefully.We should
spend enough time in practicing English.If we keep on working hard at English, we will be able to be good at it one day.11．根据提示写一篇词数不少于 50左右的请假条。
假如你叫陈飞，母亲病了，医生要她在家里躺两三天。你不得不呆在家中照顾她，因为家里没有其他人。请据此用英文给赵老师写一张假条，请两天的假，要求注意格式；时间是五月九日。
Dear Miss Zhao,May 9th
I’m sorry that I can’t go to school today.My mother is ill.The doctor asked her to stay at home for two or three days.I have to take care of her at home because there is nobody else.Now, I’mThank you!
Chen Fei
12.根据以下内容以Bill的名义写一篇失物启事。
昨天（3月20日）下午在化学实验室丢了一副太阳镜，请捡到的同学与他联系，电话号码：776600。
Lost
March 21, 2008
Yesterday afternoon(March 20th)I lost a pair of sun-glasses in the chemistry lab.Anybody who found them will you please ring me? My telephone number is 776600.Thank you very much.Bill.13.招领启事
FOUND
A handbag with some money and a notebook was left on the school playground this morning(March 7th).Will the owner please come to Class 2 Grade3 or call me? My telephone number is 776600.14.通 知
NOTICE(口头)
Boys and girls :
Your attention, please.Here is a piece of exciting news to tell you.There will be a concert at 7:30 p.m.tomorrow.It will be held in School Hall.Some pop singers will sing then.All of you are welcome.Please don’t forget to take chairs with you.Thank you for listening your attention.NOTICE（书面）
A lecture will be given on how to learn English well by Prof.Green from Shanghai Foreign Language Institute in School Hall at 8:00 a.m.on Saturday.Teachers and students are welcome to attend the lecture.Teaching Affairs
Office
March 3rd ,2007
NOTICE(口头)
Boys and girls :
Your attention, please!
The English corner of our little library in our class has been opened.We hope these books are helpful and useful to us all.Everybody can borrow books from our little library now.You should do the following :
a.Borrow only one book every time;
b.Keep the book for just two weeks and return it on time;
c.Take care of the book.Welcome to our little library.Thank you.Class1 ,Grade3
15.留言条
Lin Tao :
I arrived here by plane this morning.I am staying at Room 123 of the Friendship Hotel.Please come as soon as possible.Give me a ring call as soon as you read this note.My telephone number is ***.Li Lei
9:00 a.m.Monday
16.贺 卡
To dear LiLy
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Thank you for helping me with my English!
We hope you will be in good health and do better in study!
Good luck!
Best wishes to you!
From your good friendLi Lei
Dear Miss Zhou,Thank you for your three-year hard working and teaching us so well.Make our best wishes to you!And Happy Teachers’ Day!
Class 1,Grade1
17.条例规定
明天，初三（6）班的同学到化学实验室去上开学以来第一节化学实验课。假如你是班长，请将实验课注意事项在班上宣读。80个词左右。
内容要点：①未经许可，不能进入实验室；②必须仔细听，按照要求去做；③遵循老师的指导，不准乱摸任何东西；④实验结束后，请打扫实验室，物归原处；⑤关上灯和窗
户，锁好门后才能离开实验室。
Boys and girls，May I have your attention, please？I have something to tell you．
1.Don' t go in if you aren't al1owed by the teacher.2.Listen to the teacher careful1y and do what the teacher tell you to do.3.Follow the teacher's instructions.Don' t touch other things that have nothing to do with your experiment.4.Tidy the 1ab and put everything where it was after your experiment.5.Be sure to turn off the lights, c1ose the window, and lock the door before you leave the lab.That's all, thank you!
18.事故报告
When : 9:30 a.m.April 25th , 2008.Where : Guangming Road
Who : A girl , she was talking with her friend while they were riding.What : Her bike hit a car , and she hurt her head and legs badly.Result : The police came and she was taken to hospital.19.电话留言条
rdMessage :
Caller’
第三篇：#中考书面表达专题精选
英语中考书面表达满分范文精选 Class ____________ Name ____________
1.E-mail（电子邮件）
Dear Mr and Mrs Brown, I’m a Chinese boy.My name is Li Hong.I’m very happy to know that I’ll stay in your house for the English Summer Camp.I’d like to say something about myself so that you can know me well.I’m fifteen years old.I have a happy family with three people.I’m studying in No.1 Middle School.We learn eight subjects.I’m interested in all of them.I like reading and playing the piano.I like English very much, but my English is not good enough.I think you can help me with my English.I hope to meet you soon.Best Wishes, Li Hong
2.An announcement（口头通知）
Please be quiet, everyone!I’ve got something important to tell you.Since we are going to have a medical examination in the People’s Hospital on Monday morning, you can’t eat anything.Please gather at the gate of the hospital at eight.That’s all.Thanks.3.NOTICE（通知）
There will be a meeting for all the monitors of our school in the small meeting-room, at 9:00 this morning.The teachers and the students of our school are going to see a film at 4:00 this afternoon.The classes this afternoon will begin at 1:00.be sure not to be late for school, please.The Students Union
June 4
4.A diary(日记)March 8, Sunday Fine I was doing some shopping at ten o’clock this morning when one American couple came into the shop.They told the shop assistant that they wanted to buy a camera.But the assistant didn’t understand what they had said, and they didn’t understand what the assistant said either.They were all very worried.I went over and helped them.They bought a camera at last.They were very happy and thanked me again and again.I’m glad that I can talk with foreign friends in English.5.奥运会
Everyone knows that the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing.All Chinese people are proud of it.As a Chinese young man, I want to go to Beijing to be a volunteer of the Games to service the visitors from all over the world.I think it is very excited because it will make foreign visitors to know the Chinese people and culture better.I will practice my spoken English hard.Because it will help me to communicate with the foreign visitors and service for them better.I believe that my dream will come true in 2008!
6.自我推荐 Dear Chairman, I am a boy student from Class 1, Grade 3.I’d like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club.I am well.I work hard at my lessons.I like helping others.I get on well with my classmates and often help them with their lessons.On my way home, I often help old people cross the street.On the bus, I always give my seat to women with babies.Sometimes, I pick up rubbish in the park.If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends.Besides, I can do more for others.I’ll be glad if I’m received, I am waiting for your answer.Yours, Wang Lin
7.The Changes in My Hometown（家乡变化）
In the past, my hometown was very small.People lived a poor life.The house were old and small.Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere.The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here.Now great changes have taken place in my hometown.The environment has become more beautiful.The mountains have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the sky bluer.There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere.People live a better life.Their houses are large and bright.Many people have their own cars.Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city.I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.8.悔过书
Thank my friend, Mike, for telling me not to play computer games.I have realized it’s bad for me to go to bed so late for playing games.As a result, I had to sleep in class.I couldn’t listen to the teacher carefully.I regretted it very much.From now on, I want to change it.I want to start a new life.I want to study hard, I have made up my mind to listen carefully in class and finish my homework on time.I can get much knowledge on the Internet.I will play basketball with my friends in my spare time.I think I can do that and I will be a good student.9.失物招领
Found A school bag was found on the playground yesterday afternoon.It is black and orange, with a lot of things in it.Anyone who lost it please go to Class 1, Grade 9.I’m Zhang Daming.10.My Pleasant Trip（旅游）
One day when I was in Grade 7, I went to Jiangxinyu Island with my friends by boat.First we climbed the hill, then we flew kites.At noon we sat on the grass having a picnic.The weather was pretty fine that day.In the afternoon we met several soldiers who were only a little older than us.So we could play games together and they also told us interesting stories.We laughed and laughed happily.What a pleasant trip!I will never forget it.11.人物介绍 Dear Alex, How’s it going? I’d like to tell you something about Hong Zhanhui, a great Chinese boy.He was born in a poor family.During the 24 years, he looked after his brother, adopted sister and his sick father.Because when he was a child his mother left the poor family.He took his sister to go to the college.The life he lived was difficult.But he studied hard and after school he did part-time work.He never asked someone for help.It’s very moving.I think everyone must learn from him!
Yours, Zhang Lin 12.英语学习
Everybody has different ideas about learning English, but I think learning English should become our habit.I love English and I have been studying English for four years.I have two foreign pen pals.We write to each other in English.They often tell me much interesting news about their countries.I enjoy telling the stories to my friends at school.I think English gives me lots of fun.And the more I learn English, the more confident I am.In my school, I am the monitor of English.I’m other students’ god example.I’m often praised by me teacher.English helps me succeed in studying.English has been a part of my life.13.环保
Water is very important to humans.It is used in homes, in farming and so on.We know that much water has been polluted.Some factories are pouring waste water.For example, they often forget to turn off the taps.If we don’t have enough water.Land will be dry and crops will die.We can’t live without water, so we should try our best and encourage everyone to protect water resources.We must save water and stop polluting it.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.14.My Mother
My mother is very kind and easygoing.She helps me a lot.She takes good care of my daily life.For example, every morning, she wakes me up and cooks breakfast for me.When I’m in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and cheers me up.I still remember that once I argued with my best friend and was upset.My mother talked with me the whole night and finally helped me solve the problem.With her help, I became a top student in my class.I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me.I believe she will be proud of me in the near future.附：英语中考满分技巧
一、充分准备，打好基础。
为了提高书面表达水平，平时应加强阅读，多背诵一些句形、段落甚至短文。俗话说：“读书破万卷，下笔如有神”，只有多读，多记，多背诵，才能出口成章，下笔成文。此外，还要掌握一些应用文体的写作方法，如书信、日记、通知等，它们大多有固定的格式。
二、认真审题，明确要求
仔细看清写作要求和提示，分清材料的主次，接着确定体裁、格式和人物、地点等要素；最后确定时态，同时考虑相关的语态搭配用法。
三、遣词造句、表达规范
用词要恰当，不可逐句把提示翻译成英语。写作时，应尽量选用你最熟悉、最有把握的词和句型来表达思想。如果有些单词不会些，有些句型不会表达，可以设法绕开，用熟悉的同义词、同义短语或同义句来代替。要学会善于运用适当的关联词，如and, or, but, so，because, since等，以使行文逻辑紧密，自然流畅。
四、认真撰写，卷面整洁
如果考试时间允许，书面表达一定要先写草稿。在抄写入答题卷前，要先进行检查修改。首先检查所写内容是否切题；之后检查主题是否明确，表达方式是否恰当；最后检查所用时态、语态、人称是否符合要求，前后是否一致。英语作文卷面要求：
1.标题应写在第一行的中央。标题中的每一个实词的第一个字母均应大写。2.段与段之间，一般不空行，但每段第一行应缩进3 – 4 个字母所占的位置。3.书写要工整，字体稍大，词间距离要一致，行间距离要一致，尽量避免一个单词隔行书写。
第四篇：中考作文表达技巧 (二)
考场作文必须修改
认真修改过的考场作文，质量会更高一些。
修改的时间主要安排在提纲列出、草稿初成之后，已抄写誊正的作文也可作少量的修改。修改的步骤如下：
1.紧扣主题修改
这是首要的一步，是抓住关键的一步。考场作文在突现主题上出现失误，主要有三种情况，在修改中须特别注意。
（1）、没有扣住主题或是由于套用原先熟悉的材料，或是审题失误，或是对材料理解不当而导致失误，导致扣分。若发现这种情况要马上调整全文的语言，尽量扣住主题。
(2)、主题不鲜明文章或浅、或淡、或散，这时要适当调整结构，适当 增加一些语言表现手段来增强主题的色彩。
(3)、先紧后松即写着写着偏离了主题。在检查发现之后要立即重写部 分段落，设法将文思拉入准确的轨道。
2.紧扣文题修改
作文题有时能表现主题，有很多时候则表现不了。扣住文题修改，既要看 自己的作文能否表现文题所要求表现的主旨意趣，也要看自己的作文是否突出了文题所要表达的重点。修改中应注意：
(1)、看文体色彩如要求写“读后感”，自己在文体特征上是否真正写出了“感”的味道。
(2)、看文章内容如要求描写“一个场面”，自己在作文中是否将其误成了“一件事”。
(3)、看表达重点如要求文章表现“珍惜”的意趣，而自己是否将其谈化为“难忘”。
(4)、看材料审读如文题给了一则寓言，自己从寓言中提炼出来的观点是否正确。
(5)、看理解含义文题要求写“我在花季”，而自己是否写成了“我们在花季”或“我在春天”。
3.对照要求修改
（1）、看表达方式是否按要求使用；
(2)、看文章字数是否符合规定的范围；
(3)、看试卷的“规定”是否已经执行；
(4)、看其它特别的要求是否已经落实。
4.局部敷色着彩
（1）、检查病句、错字、标点、格式；
(2)、重写若干句子；
(3)、重写个别段落；
(4)、扩展一点细节；
(5)、增加一点深化主题的手段。
以上四步中所使用的主要方法有：
一删 删去重复的、空洞的、与主题无关的、离题太远的内容。
二改 改换开头、结尾的句子，改动部分结构，改正文中有误的语言因素等。三增 增加细节，增加深化主题的手段，增加、充实文章的若干内容，增加过渡、照应等方面的手法。
5.修改举例——词语运用方面的修改
一般来讲，作文修改中，对词语的选择，应注意以下八个方面的“求”。
（1）、求表意明白
要对作文中不规范的紧缩语，生造的词语、语意含混容易引起歧义的词语 进行删改。如《统筹方法》中，原有“水开了之后急急忙忙找茶叶，洗壶杯”句，其中的“壶杯”由于“紧缩”而令人费解，后改为“洗茶壶茶杯”。
(2)、求表达准确
要注意准确使用表达基本内容的词语，也要准确、严密的使用修饰语，修改作文时要就在此方面进行删、改、增。如《向沙漠进军》中，原有“人类自从有历史以来就同沙漠作斗争”句，后改为“有史以来，人类就同沙漠不断地斗争”。“有历史以来”改为“有史以来”，符合习惯的说法，表达准确；增加“不断地”这个修饰语，表明了人类与沙漠作斗争的次数之多，时间之长，使文意表达更加准确。
(3)、求表述简洁
要尽力地删去作文中多余的字、词、句。如《统筹方法》中，原有“因为后二种方法都窝了工”句，后来根据语境实际，删去了多余的联词“因为”，将数词“二”改为“两”，这样不仅使语句的表达更加规范，而且也使之更简洁明了。
(4)、求用词恰切
要注意辨析近义词的文体色彩、语境色彩、情感色彩等等，在作文中力求某个地方的某个词的位置是“非它莫属”。如《想和做》中，有“能够苦干本来是非好的，但是只顾埋着头„„其实并不值得赞美”句，后来这句中的“本来”改为“固然”，这一改动十分精妙，“固然”表示承认某个事实，但又不表示出明显的好感，将它放在句中，使句意和语气的表达非常恰当。
(5)、求表达生动主要从词语的修辞、词语的文体色彩、感情色彩方面等方面进行比较、斟酌。如《看云识天气》中，原有“还有的像山、像水、像棉花，像薄纱”句，后改为“还有的像峰峦、像河川、像雄狮、像奔马”。这一改动有几个方面的好处，一是朗读音节和谐，二是准确形象，三是动态色彩增强，表达效果大不相同。
(6)、求表达精炼
精炼比“简洁”还高一个层次，在修改作文时，对词、句都要认真反复品味，看还能不能删去、换用一些字、词。如《想和做》中，原有“对于一个人来说，学习过程中有若干重要的关节”，此句的表达符合“简洁”的要求，但改动中删去了“对于„„来说”，全句便显得十分精炼。
(7)、求搭配合理
搭配合理要考虑到词与词、句与句之间的关系。修改时应主要着眼于：词与词之间的搭配及句与句之间的关联。如《从甲骨文到缩微图书》，原有“秦始皇每天写在竹简和木片上的文字，有120斤重”句，句中“文字有120斤重”属搭配不当。后改为“据说秦始皇每天批阅文书，那些竹简与木片有120斤重”。
(8)求炼字炼句
炼字炼句比“精炼”又高一个层次，它追求词语、句式的表达效果。王安石的“春风又绿江南岸”中的“绿”经历了“到”、“过”、“入”、满”等十来个字的改换才得以确定。《藤野先生》中，原稿中有“责成运送局去找寻，毫无回信”句，后来作者改“毫”为“寂”，这“寂”字鲜明地表现出不仅讲义丢失，而且连追寻也是石沉大海，无声无息，表达了作者的焦急与气愤。考场作文修改中还应注意避免违规或扣分。第一，不要在“读”作文时读出声音来，第二，不要在抄写好的之后再作大的修改。
［练习］修改下文：
星期三，校团总支召开座谈会，到会的15名与会者，就共青团员如何为社会主义精神文明建设的问题展开讨论。大家踊跃发言。有的说，团员首先要起模范作用，当说话做事前，都要想到自己是一名团员。有的说，要提高团员精
神文明建设的意识，不把这一点重视好，就难以开展这项活动。团总支书记最后指出，对有利于精神文明建设的事应该大力提倡，对不尽如人意的地方应该注意改进。
1、说说下文应该从哪几个方面进行修改：
“一字最难写”的联想
据说著名歌唱家郭兰英曾向著名画家李苦禅请教：“什么字最难写?”李苦禅回答说：“一字最难写。”初一听，真不解其意，然而仔细一想，却觉得含意深邃，那就是，世间最简单的事，往往最难做到。
这方面的事例在我们日常生活中真是屡见不鲜。比如饭前要洗手，开会不能随便说话，都是最简单不过了，可是在我们同学中却有不少人总做不到。再说学习吧。我们班许多同学会做复杂的数理化难题，可是最简单的连小学生都会做的四则运算，却常常做错。期中考试后，我分析自己的数学试卷，老师用来拉开档次的两道各十分的难题，我一分不少，我的失分竟全在最简单的基础题上，这真是最简单的事往往最难做到啊。
我联想到达“芬奇画蛋的故事。小时候，达”芬奇在老师的指导下学画。一开始，老师让他画蛋。他想，这有什么难，随手一画就是一个。但老师还是要他画，说他画的不像。画画，恐怕没有比画蛋更简单的了，可是有绘画天才的达“芬奇却画不好。
可见，不管是名人达•芬奇，还是普通的中学生，他们的所作所为，都证明了世间最简单的事往往最难做到。李老的“一字最难写”的含意的确深邃，的确有道理。
(提示：1.“与会者”可改为“团员和团干”，“建设”后面要加上“作贡献”，删去“当”字，“提高”改为“加强”，“不把这一点重视好”改为“不重视这一点”
2.这篇文章的一个主要毛病，是“想”而不“论”，作者用论题＋事例＋结论的简单思维过程代替了阐发和议论，因此既无深度，又无力度。从议论文的写作来看，应是先提出问题，点明“是什么”，然后进行分析，讲清道理，指出“为什么”，最后解决问题，得出结论，说明“怎么样”。可是这篇文章仅仅停留在“是什么”之上，完全没有指出“为什么”，即为什么“世间最简单的事，往往最难做到”，因此应在这个“病点”上着力进行修改。这篇文章的另一个主要的毛病，是用“论据”硬套“论点”，显得简单而生硬。如文中写道：“我们班许多同学会做复杂的数理化难题，可是最简单的连小学生都会
做的四则运算，却常常做错。”这是言过其实，经不起推敲。又如文中写道：“画画，恐怕没有比画蛋更简单的了，可是有绘画天才的达”芬奇却画不好。”这也是言过其实，因为画蛋并不是最简单的事。所以，作者为了套“论点”而将论据进行了“夸大”或“贬低”，对这个“病点”，也应很好地进行修改。)
第五篇：2014届中考书面表达
1、低碳生活
现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活”(low-carbon life)，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。
提示词语：be good for, everyone, ride a bike, think, make a difference, environment, suggest, reuse
低碳生活★ 范文
Low-carbon life is good for everyone.To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes.If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.2、毕业感想初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想(请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名)。
提示词语: three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry
毕业感想★ 范文
How time flies!I have studied in my school for three years.And I will graduate from middle school in a month.I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you.I had so many memories in
three years’ life.One of them impressed me very much.I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult.No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well.Since then, she has kept helping me.Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it.I think I am so lucky to become one of her students.I’ve learned a lot from her.I will try to help others when they are in trouble.I think it is a happy thing to help others.3、如何减压让生活更美好
许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:
(1)同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么;(2)我的压力是什么;(3)我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80~100。
如何减压让生活更美好 ★范文Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world.Students in our class are under too much pressure.Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.I’m always under pressure, too.My parents want me to be the top student in class.So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends.Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy.I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother
agreed with me at last.So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.That’s all.Thank you!
4、健康生活
⑴健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文,首句已给出。
信息提示：健康饮食;早睡早起,不熬夜;参加运动,强身健体。
要求:根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。
健康生活★范文
I think healthy habits are very important for us.All of us want to be healthy.First, we should get enough sleep during the night.We can go to bed early and get up early.Staying up late is bad for our health.Second, we must have the right kinds of food.We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat.We should drink a lot of water.We should have healthy eating habits.Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies.Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day.If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.⑵假如你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语演讲比赛。请按要求写一篇短文。
主要内容包括：
1、保持快乐的心情
2、努力学习
3、积极参加体育锻炼。
注意：
1、字数80字左右，不包含已给出的句子字数。
2、要点完整，适当发挥，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范。
3、文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。
Dear friends, we all want to grow up happily and healthily, so we have to do some things.First, we should keep ourselves happy.Life is not always full of sunshine.When we are in trouble, we should be brave enough to deal with problems.Next , we must study hard.The more knowledge we have, the more confident we will be.Finally, we have to do sports to keep fit.We can go running, play ball games or take a walk after a day’s study.If we do those things well, we will grow up happily and healthily.5、交通问题
越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢?请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)
内容包含：遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。劝父母不能酒后驾车。你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。
参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线 注：第一段已给出，不计入总数交通问题★ 范文
With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life.But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents。
Traffic safety is everybody's business.We must obey the rules.For example, we must walk on the sidewalk, when we cross
zebra-crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast.Don’t play football on the road.we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc。
We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business, can we be safe while driving on roads and walking on sidewalks。
6、城市建设
眉山，我们共同的家园。作为眉山人，应该为建设“美丽眉山”贡献力量。请你围绕“做文明学生，建美丽眉山”这一主题，根据提示信息写一篇短文，谈谈为建“美丽眉山”，中学生应该怎样做？
内容要点提示：践行文明（友善、礼貌待人‘融洽相处等）摈弃陋习（大声喧哗、随地吐痰、插队、乱扔等）保护环境（花草树木、水、纸张、食物等）
城市建设 范文
Meishan is our home.As a student, I think we should do something to make her more beautiful.Here are some of my ideas.First, we should be kind and polite to each other.It is better for us to get on well with others.Second, we mustn’t make noise or spit everywhere.It is also bad manners to throw about and cut in line when shopping.Finally.We should try to protect our environment by saving water and paper.What’s more, to save food is what we should do first.We can also plant more trees and flowers to make our hometown greener and more beautiful.If everyone does so, I ’m sure Meishan is getting better and better.7、光盘行动
今年一月份，我国政府号召全民“拒绝浪费，文明用餐”，加入“光盘行动”。请联系实际，以“Save Food and Eat Healthily”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文,说说我们中学生应该怎样做。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。光盘行动范文
Save Food and Eat Healthily
Our government has called on the people to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life.We middle school students should do something for it.To save food, we shouldn’t waste any of our food.We should eat up all the food.We shouldn’t order the food more than we can eat while we are eating in a restaurant.It is reported that the food that Chinese people waste every year is enough to feed 200 million people for a year.So if we can’t eat up the food that we ordered ,we should ask the waiter for some doggy bags to pack it back home
To eat healthily, we shouldn’t eat junk food but healthy food.It’s good for our health to eat a balanced diet.We’d better not eat in small restaurants.The food and the oil they use are not clean or healthy enough.We’d better eat at school or at home if we have time.8、中国梦
每一个人，每一个国家，都拥有梦想。“中国梦”是目前最热门的话题。作为中学生，你是如何理解中国梦的？你的中国梦是什么呢？为实现你的梦想，你将怎么做呢？假设你叫李红，请以“My Dream”为题，写一篇70-80词的英语短文。
参考词汇：China dream, come true, achieve one’s dreams, give up, hold on to, make up of
中国梦 范文
My Dream
Everyone has his dreams.As young students, we have many kinds of dreams.These dreams are our China dreams.The dreams can be very big, or they can also be small.In fact, a big dream is made up of many small dreams.My name is Li Hong.I also have a dream.I dream of becoming a great scientist.From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream.I must learn as much as I can.When I meet any difficulty, I won’t give it up, and I must get it over.I’m sure it’s very important to dream.Some dreams are more realistic, others are not.No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them.They can just come true one day.9、中国式过马路
最近媒体对“中国式过马路”这一现象进行了尖锐的批评。请你以一个中学生的角色，写一篇短文，对“中国式过马路”这一现象加以评论。现象： 很多人过马路时不看红绿灯。原因： 缺乏交通安全意识匆忙赶时间。措施： 遵守交通规则你自己的建议……
中国式过马路 范文
Chinese style of crossing streets has been a hot topic on the Internet recently.Now many people cross streets without looking at the traffic lights.Why? I think there are two main reasons.Some people lack awareness of traffic safety.Besides, some people are so busy that they don’t want to wait for the green light.However, it has brought danger to themselves as well as to others.So I hope something must be done to avoid traffic accidents.For
example, whoever breaks the traffic rules should be punished.As middle school students, we should obey the traffic rules.What’s more, I will try my best to advise people to obey the rules.Only in this way can we cross streets safely.10、如何学好英语
世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。
要求：1.词数：80—100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数)2.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。★如何学好英语 范文How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us.How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs.Watching English movies is also helpful to us.Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible.Don’t be afraid of making mistakes.The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make.We'd better join the English club and practice with others.Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines.It’s good for us.At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.11、网络游戏
题目：李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80
字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。
提示词：give up concentrate on be(become)interested in★网络游戏范文
Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others.As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well.He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games.Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes.So he must give it up.I can play more sports with him after school.Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games.And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study.Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects.I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying.At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too.If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.12、节约用水
水是生命之源。随着水资源的短缺，节约用水是我们每个人的责任，请以此为话题写一篇不少于80字的短文。
★节约用水范文
As we know, water is very important to man, we can’t live without water.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.But some people don’t care about it.They waste a lot of water in their daily life.Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers.They throw rubbish into rivers, too.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.Something must be done to stop the pollution.And
I think it’s a great shame to waste while millions are in great need of water.I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can.For example, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it.We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces.It’s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me!Only in this way can we live happily.If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference。
13、保护环境
6月5日(June 5)是世界环境保护日，我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重。环境问题影响着人们的工作，学习，生活等，而我们的工作，生活，生产等又使环境污染越来越严重....。如何保护我们的环境? 请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”为题写一篇短文。
提示：存在问题：1.水污染越来越严重;2.砍伐森林严重;3.大气污染严重;4.白色垃圾等。
要求：如何改善/保护环境?至少：3---4个方面，80字左右。
★保护环境范文
How to protect our environment?
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.Water is polluted;we have no clean water to drink.Many trees are cutting down, some animals are losing their living places.Some factories are pouring dirty air in the sky, and the air is badly polluted.Besides, the population is increasing faster and faster, plastic bags are everywhere.People's health has been greatly affected by all kinds of pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life, we need to protect our world。We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere.We must reuse things.It can help to save money and reduce pollution.Also We should take our own bags while shopping.We must plant more trees and stop people cutting them.We hope our world becomes more and more beautiful。
14、介绍家乡
以My hometown为题写一篇60-80字的短文，介绍你的家乡的地理位置，季节、旅游、交通、饮食、特产、民俗等。
★介绍家乡范文My hometown
My hometown Meishan is a beautiful and rich place ,it lies in the south ofSichuan.Meishan is a good place to have fun.It is famous for many kinds of tasty fruits and special local food.the weather is neither too hot nor too cold all year round.there are many wide roads though it ,so the traffic is convenient.When you come to Meishan, you will be impressed with the beautiful scenery as well as the friendly local people.For your next vacation ,why not consider travelling to my lovely hometown ,Meishan?
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