第一篇:“三段式”板块结构快速作文法
“三段式”板块结构快速作文法
学法要点
1.重点:整体思路,用“三段式”板块结构。2.难点:局部思路,用“四步六句法”析要。
一、“三段式”板块结构(整体思路)第一板块:立论。摆出中心论点,点题。第二板块:列据。论证中心论点。1层:简述论据。完整的一件事,点题。2层:提示法论据。一句即一件事,点题。
二、“四步六句法”析理(局部思路)一步:用过渡句,承上启下。1句。
二步:用排比句,横向延伸或纵向开掘,揭示意义,形成有节奏,有层次,语势较强的表述效果。3句。
三步:用引用句,引用名人格言论证中心论点,形成较强的说服力。1句。
四步:用中心句,篇末点题并发出热情号召,尽力去感染读者的情绪。1句。
分四个步骤,用六句话。多则不限,可以突破,但至少是四步六句,否则达不到“析理”的目的。
[例文]
逆境出人才
古今中外那些有作为的人,几乎无不经历过逆境的磨练。逆境对人的成长和进步,具有特殊的激励作用。正如孟子所说:“天将降大任于斯人也,必先苦其心志,劳其筋骨,饿其体肤,空乏其身,行拂乱其所为,所以动心忍性,曾益其所不能。”所以人们常说“逆境出人才”。
八十年代初期,我国上海有一个著名的曹氏学者家庭。父亲在五十年代蒙冤自杀,母亲在街道工作,月薪仅四十余元,却要养活婆婆和四个孩子,经济困难可想而知。大哥曹天予北京大学毕业,却因出身不好而找不到工作,只能当临时工。小妹曹南薇体弱多病,高中毕业不能上山下乡,又因出身不好而没有工作,十八岁的青春少女只得捡废纸贴补家用。但逆境出人才!哥哥的大学课本就是小弟弟妹妹的教材,捡来的废报纸裁下白边订成练习本——环境逼人,自学成才。十年后,四个子女都是一流的学子:大哥曹天予考取英国剑桥大学圣三一学院院士;二哥曹天成考取美国马里兰州大学数学博士;三姐曹南燕考取美国纽约州立大学攻读物理学博士学位。真是“群芳荟萃曹氏家”,这不就是逆境出人才的铁证吗?
历史上这样的例证很多:周文王坐牢写了《周易》,孔子不得志写了《春秋》,屈原流放写了《离骚》,左丘失明写了《国语》,孙膑断足写了《兵法》,司马迁受宫刑写了《史记》……这些都不是“逆境出人才”的有力佐证吗!以上事例充分说明了“逆境出人才”的道理。因为,逆境可以促使人们产生不甘现状,拼搏进取的斗志;逆境,可以磨练人们增强承受力,克服困难的毅力;逆境,可以培养人们积极不等不靠,相信自己,开拓创新的精神力量!巴尔扎克曾说过“苦难是人生的老师”。培根也说:“奇迹多在厄运中出现。”而古罗马大加图说的更深刻:“荣誉的桂冠都是用荆棘编织而成的。”让我们牢记“逆境出人才”的道理,自觉接受磨难教育,迎接挑战,把自己锤炼成适应未来需要的合格人才。
[下水作文]
逆境出人才
有语云:“自古英雄多磨难,纨绔子弟少伟男”。此话中磨难指的是人处逆境,接受来自客观环境的种种挑战。因此逆境是使一个有志气的人的才识,性情,气度发生本质的优良的变化,促进这种人更快更早地适应环境,成就事业。
名著《儒林外史》的作者吴敬梓28岁时到滁州应考,被斥责为“文章大好人大怪”遭到侮辱,应考落第。他三十二岁时怀着“逝将去汝”的愤懑心情离开故土,移居南京,靠卖文和朋友接济为生,并与各阶层人物广泛交游。既有文人、学者、也有道士、伶人。这大大开阔了生活视野,为创作《儒林外史》积累了丰富的素材。艰难困苦折磨了吴敬梓,缩短了他和广大人民之间的生活距离。居住南京时期,吴敬梓把体验的世情,经历的人事,经受的冷暖,看到的嘴脸,统统倾注在《儒林外史》的创作,完成了我国古代讽刺小说的创作。
命运的不堪,生活的困顿和流离,士人们光怪陆离的经历成为小说家丰厚的生活积淀。吴敬梓玉琢成器的主要原因是不屈的毅力和丰厚的阅历。他在科考不得志后寻找另一条谋生的道路,在寒冷的冬季寻觅到一片阳光,实现我“文章千古好”的夙愿,为中国文学长河敬奉了一朵洁白的浪花。吴敬梓的经历证明了“逆境出人才”。
从古至今,身处逆境而事业有成的事例很多。蒲松龄一生穷困,七十二岁援例贡生,除《聊斋志异》外,著述繁多。曹雪芹半生“茅椽蓬牖,绳床瓦灶”。专心致志从事《红楼梦》的写作与修订。知名特级教师余映潮前十年在乡镇中学教书,但他积累了数以万计的读书卡片,终于在数千人注视着的大舞台“沙场秋点兵”而光彩熠熠。著名播音员李修平出身工人家庭,兄弟姐妹多个,青年时生活艰苦,而且他曾经高考落榜。全国人大常委会副主席成思危做过苦工,挣过盒饭,四十多岁才留学成博士,而后成经济管理学专家。他们都是身经风雨的朝代骄子。
以上事例充分说明了“逆境出人才”的道理。因为,逆境能使人产生改变现状的强烈的主人翁意识,是事业之花绽放的力量之源。逆境能使人接受种种人生挫折的考验,是有志之士奋争的智慧之本。逆境能造就有志之士高远的志向,是完善美好人格的必然条件。梁启超说过:“患难困苦,是磨练人格之最高学校。”贝多芬也说:“卓越的人的一大优点是在不利与艰难的遭遇里百折不挠。”让我们明白“逆境出人才”的道理,自觉接受生活的磨砺,广闻博识,努力实践,把自己锻炼成时代急需的人才。
【小试牛刀】
一、实例操作
题目:勤奋就一定能够成才
论点:古今中外,天资中等,但靠勤奋获得成功者,不乏其人。
论据:(简述式)我国杰出的马克思主义经济学家,《资本论》最早中译者,原厦门大学校长王亚南先,少年时家境贫寒,买不起书,他就抄书学习,《左传》、《国语》、《史记》以及唐诗宋词都是手抄本。上中学时,为了抓紧时间苦读,他把竹床锯掉一条腿,只要一翻身,就会掉到地上惊醒自己,起来读书。长大后去欧洲留学,因海上风浪太大,他叫船员把自己绑在船舱的柱子上读书—后来终成中外驰名的大学者。这不是勤奋成才的典范吗?
论据:(提示式)孔子读《周易》,穿竹简的皮绳竟然磨断了三次;司马光做了宰相后还用圆木为枕,为了少睡觉,多写作,终于成就了巨著《资治通鉴》;唐代和尚怀素练习书法,他用坏的毛笔堆成了小丘,周围上万株芭蕉的叶子都被他摘光了练字,终成一代“草圣”。象这样的例子是不胜枚举的。
名言:古罗马大加图说:“学问是苦根上长出来的甜果。”门捷列夫说:“终身努力,便是天才。”华罗庚也说:“勤能补拙是良训,一分辛劳一分才。”爱迪生说:“天才,就是百分之一的灵感加上百分之九十九的汗水。”
二、写作实践
题目:知识改变命运
参考资料:(名言)以学治愚。——韩愈
知识是引导人生到光明与真实境界的灯烛,黑暗是达到光明与真实境界的障碍,也就是人生发展的障碍。——李大钊
知识有如人体血液一样的宝贵。人缺少了知识,头脑就枯竭。——高士其
生活是知识之源泉,知识是生活之明灯。——谚语
第二篇:三段式作文法
2015高考英语作文指导:三段式作文法
所谓三段式就是将一篇书面表达按三段的写作模式谋篇布局。就整体篇章结构而言,如何把握较大的写作空间,三段式的写作模式为最佳选择。三段式的模式写法通常为:
1.第一段开门见山,提出要解决的问题或观点,或者把时间,地点,人物和主要事件及时点出。
2.第二段要摆出事实或提出论据,或者把事情发展的经过详细写出来。
3.最后一段,得出结论或理由。
注意:要学会使用过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”和“粘合剂 ”。恰当地使用过渡词可避免结构松散,层次分明,表意不清等弊端,使文章条理清楚,文字连贯流畅。常用的过渡词有:
递进型: also,(and)besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what’s worse, to make matters worse, not only „but also等;
例:You should go to see her, because she misses you, and what’s more, she needs your help.你应该去看她,因为她很想念你,更重要的是,她需要你的帮助。
You can’t play computer games too much, because it will do harm to your health.What’s worse, it will waste your time.你不能过分玩电脑游戏,因为它会损害你的身体。更糟糕的是,它会浪费你的时间。解释型:that is(to say), in other words, or,namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等;例: He will come on National Day, that is(to say), October 1st.他国庆节,即十月一日来。
转折型:however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the coutrary,on the other hand 等;例:Mr.Crook didn’t come back at the usual time.instead , he met some friends and stayed out until midnight 列举型:firstly„secondly„finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another 等
On the one hand, a lot of people going to the US, but on the other hand, a lot of people coming back from there.一方面,许多人前往美国;另一方面,很多人又从那回来。
I can't stay here for long.For one thing, I've no time.For another, I've no money.我不能在此逗留太久。首先,我没时间,其次,我没有钱。
举例型:for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take„ for example等;
因果型:because(of), since, now that, thanks to, due to;thus, therefore, as a result(consequence),so„ that, so that等;
让步型:though, although, in spite of, despite 等;
顺序型:first„next„and then„finally, first„then„after that„finally 等;
并列型:and, both„and, or, either„or, as well as, 等 时间型:afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardly„when, no sooner„than 等
例:I had no sooner reached home than it began to rain.我一到家天就下起雨来(主句用过去完成时,“than”后面的从句用一般过去时)
No sooner...than...常放在句首,表示强调.这时主句要倒装.No sooner had I reached home than it began to rain.hardly...when 意思为:“还没...就...”
We had hardly gotten there when it began to rain.我们还没到那儿,天就下起雨了.(主句用过去完成时,从句用一般过去时)总结型:in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion 等 见解型:in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned,I’m sure 等
条件型:if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 等.例:You may take this book away so long as you return it on time.
第三篇:三段式作文法123
三段式作文法 重点诠释:
所谓三段式就是将一篇书面表达按三段的写作模式谋篇布局。就整体篇章结构而言,如何把握较大的写作空间,三段式的写作模式为最佳选择。三段式的模式写法通常为:
1.第一段开门见山,提出要解决的问题或观点,或者把时间,地点,人物和主要事件及时点出。
2.第二段要摆出事实或提出论据,或者把事情发展的经过详细写出来。3.最后一段,得出结论或理由。
注意:要学会使用过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”和“粘合剂 ”。恰当地使用过渡词可避免结构松散,层次分明,表意不清等弊端,使文章条理清楚,文字连贯流畅。常用的过渡词有: 递进型: also,(and)besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what’s worse, worse still, to make matters worse, for the worse, not only…but also等;
解释型:that is(to say), in other words, or, namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等;
转折型:however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the contrary,on the other hand 等;
列举型:firstly…secondly…finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another 等
举例型:for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take… for example等; 因果型:because(of), since, now that, thanks to, due to;thus, therefore, as a result(consequence),so… that, so that等; 让步型:though, although, in spite of, despite 等; 顺序型:first…next…and then…finally, first…then…after that…finally 等; 并列型:and, both…and, or, either…or, as well as, 等
时间型:afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardly…when, no sooner…than 等
总结型:in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion 等
见解型:in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned,I’m sure 等 条件型:if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 等
第四篇:三段式作文法
备考2010写作专题1 三段式作文法
重点诠释:
所谓三段式就是将一篇书面表达按三段的写作模式谋篇布局。就整体篇章结构而言,如何把握较大的写作空间,三段式的写作模式为最佳选择。三段式的模式写法通常为:
1. 第一段开门见山,提出要解决的问题或观点,或者把时间,地点,人物和主要事件及时点出。
2. 第二段要摆出事实或提出论据,或者把事情发展的经过详细写出来。3. 最后一段,得出结论或理由。
注意:要学会使用过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”和“粘合剂 ”。恰当地使用过渡词可避免结构松散,层次分明,表意不清等弊端,使文章条理清楚,文字连贯流畅。常用的过渡词有:
递进型: also,(and)besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what’s worse, worse still, to make matters worse, for the worse, not only …but also等;
解释型:that is(to say), in other words, or,namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等; 转折型:however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the coutrary,on the other hand 等; 列举型:firstly…secondly…finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another 等
举例型:for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take… for example等;
因果型:because(of), since, now that, thanks to, due to;thus, therefore, as a result(consequence),so… that, so that等;
让步型:though, although, in spite of, despite 等;
顺序型:first…next…and then…finally, first…then…after that…finally 等; 并列型:and, both…and, or, either…or, as well as, 等
时间型:afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardly…when, no sooner…than 等
总结型:in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion 等
见解型:in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned,I’m sure 等 条件型:if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 等 对比观点题型
(1)
要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1.
有一些人认为。。2.
另一些人认为。。3.
我的看法。。
The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点).The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)
给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点(收集整理:
Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一).For example, they think ②-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二). Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法). 信件开头常用语:
• You letter came to me this morning.• I have received your letter of July the 20th.• I’m writing to you about the lecture to be given next Monday.• I’m writing to ask if you can come next week.• How time flies!It’s three months since I saw you last.• Thank you for your letter.• In reply to your letter about(the exhibition this year)…;• Let me tell you that… 信件结尾常用语:
• Please remember me to your whole family.• Give my best regards(wishes)to your mother.• Best wishes.• With love.• Wish you a pleasant journey.• Wish you success.Wish you the best of health.(luck)• Looking forward to your next visit to China.• Looking forward to the pleasure of meeting you.• Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.阅路和应答: • Go down this street
• Turn night/left at the first crossing • It’s about…metres from here
• You can’t miss it
• In front of behind at/a the corner(不用in)• Pass two blocks • wish you good luck!英语作文万能模版 模块(1)
Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities.It is estimated that(1).Why have there been so many XX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that(2).Besides,(3).The third reason is(4).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to(5).It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing ,(6).On the other hand ,(7).All these measures will certainly reduce the number of XX.模块(2)
In recent years , xx has caused a heated debate on(1).The factors for(2).First of all ,(3).Then , there comes a case that(4).Moreover,(5).Especially when(6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that(7).In this way ,we should behave just like(8).The impact of Television 模块(3)
Currently,XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory---nothing is more valuable than XX.It is clear that().If you(), as a result ,your dreams willcome true.On the contrary, if you(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that().You donn’t have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon().With reference to my standpoint ,I think().模块(4)
For most of us today ,().From above ,we can find that the reasons why()are as follows.The primary reason ,i think, is().Second,().The third reason, actually ,is().The significance for()。Therefore ,().模块(5)
These days we often hear that().It is common that().Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social? For one thing ,().For another,().What is more, since(),it is natural that().To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying.We should do something such as()to improve he present situation ,and I do believe everything will
be better in the future.
第五篇:中考英语三段式作文法
中考英语三段式作文法
重点诠释 :
所谓三段式就是将一篇书面表达按三段的写作模式谋篇布局。就整体篇章结构而言,如何把握较大的写作空间,三段式的写作模式为最佳选择。三段式的模式写法通常为:
1.第一段开门见山,提出要解决的问题或观点,或者把时间,地点,人物和主要事件及时点出。
2.第二段要摆出事实或提出论据,或者把事情发展的经过详细写出来。
3.最后一段,得出结论或理由。
注意:要学会使用过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”和“粘合剂 ”。恰当地使用过渡词可避免结构松散,层次分明,表意不清等弊端,使文章条理清楚,文字连贯流畅。常用的过渡词有:
递进型: also,(and)besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what’s worse, worse still, to make matters worse, for the worse, not only„but also等;
解释型:that is(to say), in other words, or, namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等;
转折型:however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the contrary,on the other hand 等;
列举型:firstly„secondly„finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another 等 举例型:for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take„ for example等;
因果型:because(of), since, now that, thanks to, due to;thus, therefore, as a result(consequence),so„ that, so that等;
让步型:though, although, in spite of, despite 等;
顺序型:first„next„and then„finally, first„then„after that„finally 等;
并列型:and, both„and, or, either„or, as well as, 等
时间型:afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardly„when, no sooner„than 等
总结型:in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion 等
见解型:in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned,I’m sure 等
条件型:if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 等
写作典例 :
假设你是李越,你的加拿大笔友Steve来信说,他和他的一些同学正在学中文,请你推荐两本学中文的词典。根据下表提供的信息,请你给他写一封回信。
英汉词典 新华字典
收词
(字)18000(英语)
20000(汉语)10000
价格 52元 11元
特点 大量例子,用法说明,适合初学者 中国最常用的汉语字典
注意:
1.词数:80左右;
2.参考词汇:推荐recommend;英汉词典The English-Chinese Dictionary(ECE);
新华字典 Xinhua Dictionary(XD)
Dear Steve,_________________________________________________
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Yours
Li Yue
分析:此篇书面表达属于实物说明文,其篇章结构可按三段式进行写作。本文的第一段,可用直接的叙述“I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese”.正文即可作为第二段,其主要内容是对两本词典的一些介绍。结束语即可作为第三段。应将两本词典的特点表达准确,以便加拿大笔友 Steve作出合理选择。表达时,文章的基本时态可考虑用一般现在时。
范文:
Dear Steve,I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.I’d like to recommend the following two dictionaries.The English-Chinese Dictionary is really a good one for beginners.It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words, besides plenty of examples, it has many notes telling you how to use a word.Xinhua Dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary, and it has a vocabulary fo 10,000 words.It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese.Of the two, ECD is more expensive.It costs 52 yuan,and XD costs 11 yuan.Please let me know if you want me to buy one for you.Yours,Li Yue