医学考研英语写作优秀段落

第一篇：医学考研英语写作优秀段落

医学考研英语写作优秀段落

2009-6-22 11:26 【大 中 小】【我要纠错】

阅读时，我们经常会碰到一些过目难忘的段落。这些段落或者表达流畅、文笔优美，或者逻辑缜密、结构严谨。根据表达需要，有不同的功能段落，如现象说明段、观点陈述段、原因列举段、利弊解释段、结论归纳段、趋势预测段、措施建议段等。医学教|育网搜集整理有些优秀段落可以作为写作的功能段落加以背诵，对于我们拓展思路、规范行文大有裨益。在背诵过程中，熟练掌握各种功能段落的行文规则，自己在表达时就能驾轻就熟。下面仅举观点陈述段和措施建议段各一例。

观点陈述段（陈述“民族文化应该成为世界文化”的观点）

A culture of one nation may become international，which is beneficial for all mankind.Since China has opened its doors widely to the outside world，many people from different countries want to visit China.They will come to accept and love Chinese culture as a whole.In addition，Chinese culture should be shared generously with foreign people，who show great interest in it.Meanwhile，as more and more foreigners come to China，they bring aspects of their own culture to share with the Chinese people.In this way，people from various nations in the world will be able to acquire a better understanding of each other and live peacefully together.一个国家的文化可能成为世界文化，这对全人类都有益。由于中国已经向外界敞开了国门，许多来自不同国家的人都希望来看一看中国。他们会开始接受并喜欢整个中国文化，中国文化应该大大方方地让感兴趣的外国人分享。与此同时，随着来中国的外国人越来越多，他们也把他们自己的文化带给了中国人。这样，世界各国的人们就能够更好地相互理解、和平相处。

措施建议段（建议“人口老龄化”的解决措施）

The rapidity of the population„s aging has made it more urgent for the adoption of countermeasures.No doubt，the key is to build a solid economic foundation.Meanwhile，importance should be attached to overall social progress by changing the backward situation in social security，welfare and service.What‟s more，family care and community services should also be encouraged.人口老龄化的加速使采取应对措施变得更为紧迫。毫无疑问，解决问题的关键是建立稳固的经济基础。与此同时，应该重视整体的社会进步，改变社会保障、福利和服务的落后局面。除此之外，应该鼓励家庭照料和社区服务。

第二篇：医学考研英语写作创作流程

(一)审题构思过程(5—10分钟完成)

图画作文

1.列出重要图画细节词

以XX年1月考题为例，图片中是一个美国女孩身着传统的少数民族服装，面带微笑。审题时果断列出可能用到的语汇如：traditional costume, ribbons, necklaces, earrings, majority group, sweet smile, charming features.没有这些词汇的罗列，第一段的描述过程将耗费很多时间。

2.以小见大联想把握象征意义

图画作文关键在于透过表面看实质，精确地点出图画的象征寓意，构思联想不到位会导致跑题或无话可说的尴尬局面。如前题的例子，要毫不犹豫地把图画和所定题目挂钩联想，并要以小见大把握象征意义，美国女孩代表着西方文化或西方人，传统中国少数民族服装则是个象征符号，代指典型的传统中国文化。女孩面带微笑正好传达出西方人接受或热爱中国文化、世界文化融合和中国文化走向世界的深刻意义。

3.把握背景原因和两条建议

联想的过程深入，很容易想到中国改革开放、加入世贸以及全球化(globalization)的国际大趋势。又可以联系到美国的jeans, rock music, hollywood movies, macdonald fast food等cultural symbols在世界的传播普及，进一步阐述“民族的就是世界的”这一命题。文章的收尾部分不妨参照考研作文模式提出两点建议：要保存珍惜传统民族文化；对待西方文化要“取其精华，去其糟粕”，把优秀的文化发扬光大等等。缜密的逻辑构思足以使你表达出丰富的语言，展现出一个考研学生应有的理论素质。

图表作文

1.选出典型的数据—纵横对位

面对图表应当首先结合主题，观察图表数据变化，如果表格、柱形和曲线都比较复杂，则需先确定典型数据，如最高点、最低点以及骤升骤降的时间变化范围，在表格和座标图中精确地纵横对位，想象如何使用demonstrate a dramatic change, increase dramatically, decline sharply, go up steadily, remain on the decline这样的图表术语描述数据变化。

2.把握变化—联系背景原因

想象这种变化和主题的必然联系，拓展思维确定出原因一二三来。如北京市民人均收入增加一定和近几年经济飞速、就业生存方式多样化和全面建设小康社会的国策相关联；沙尘暴次数猛增反映出中国西北土壤沙漠化、森林砍伐现象严重和城市房地产开发毁坏绿地植被的多元因素。

3.建议或未来发展趋势

针对第二段分析的原因提出合理建议，基本思路可遵循以下两点：政府指定法规扭转(推进)现有局面；个人树立某种意识主动参与解决问题。最后展望一下人类解决问题后的美好明天，一篇议的格局已了然于胸。

(二)下笔创作过程(20—25分钟)

1.丰富提纲内容

有把握的同学可以立即动笔创作，把已定的思路充分表达出来。但思路还是不清楚、害怕跑题或无话可说的同学应把提纲丰富起来，如用汉语简单写出每段的三个方面，用简洁的词或符号代替即可，提纲具体化可以让自己沿着一个严谨的框架前行，避免天马行空、意识流主宰思维的危险。

2.每段按一定句数创作

200词的作文不等于长篇大论，又有明确的提纲控制，考生必须做到言简意赅。达到字数要求不难，要看自己有限的语言是否言之有物，表达切题且有力度。对规模作出合理控制只需有以下的意识：3段式作文开篇段落引出话题，评价现状或描述图画图表，尽量用3-4句完成任务，其中设置一个长句，使得第一段达到50—60个单词。

中间拓展段是论述主题并展现实力的黄金段落，要阐明图画图表寓意并且深刻分析原因背景，点出几个方面，结构有层次感，语言有闪光点和深度，写出7-8句比较合理，总字数控制到80-100字。

结论段不止下结论，还要提出2-3点解决问题的建议。并且设置一个漂亮的结束句，使用排比、强调、倒装、虚拟句型体现句式变化，写出5-6句不算太多，总字数在70-80字左右。

3.创作有气势的开篇句

由于考研阅卷往往在写作第一段确定文章分数档次，最后一段往往被考官忽视，开篇的三句话要有爆发力，充分表现考生的语言水平和写作实力。因此要把平时积累的优秀句型应用到第一段开篇，如：it is universally acknowledged that……as is vividly depicted in the picture, a lovely american girl is dressed in traditional chinese costume…

4.注意2、3两段的段首句和层次感

议写作讲究拓展阐述部分有段首句和支持段首句的若干论据。分层次表达又要避免数字排列的机械感，讲究启承转合的多样化表达，因此2、3两段就有可以依据的优秀表达模型。

5.尽量长短句搭配，每段构造1—2个长句

都是短句的作文略显水平稚嫩，写作功力尚需磨练，都是长句的作文又显得罗嗦冗赘，卖弄不成反倒做作。真正的优秀文章应做到长短句搭配合理，行文流畅，难简结合，曲径通幽，平实中见功力。大批考生缺乏写作训练，往往在作文中忽视运用长句。要试试在每段中设置出1个有特色的长句，如并列句、排比句、定语从句、状语从句等，使得文章流畅而不失难度。文章的结尾不好，苍白平淡，则给人虎头蛇尾的感觉，很有可能因为一句话而减弱前面的文采印象，所以要有意识安排一个闪光句型在结尾，让考官读到结尾时能眼睛一亮。如：only in this way can laid-off workers completely shrug off poverty and regain their dignity in life.6.注意笔迹工整

写作中笔迹是否工整美观直接影响成绩，因为没有时间打草稿，学生的创作基本上是一气呵成，如果字体潦草，则大大淹没了文字内容的魅力，极有可能一败涂地。所以要有细心落笔的意识，动笔节奏慢而沉稳，仔细写每一句话。只要具备了一定的句型知识，200词的作文很容易完成。不要仓促下笔，一路狂草，造成悲剧结果。

(三)修改润色过程(5—10分钟)

写作完成后不要急于放松休息，以下的语言文字润饰工作可以让你的作品锦上添花，不留遗憾。taking every detailsintosconsideration,让精心设计的文章突破16分也就有希望了。浏览检查不可能推翻全部内容，因为时间有限，也为了保持卷面整洁，修改工作要以纠正明显的语法拼写错误为主。为了避免用语单调重复，也可将若干机械平淡的语言替换掉，实现语言的丰富多变。要对以下几个角度多加注意，保证在语法用词上一丝不苟。

1.主谓一致

每句中主语名词与谓语动词的数是否一致，句法基本功较强则不会出现此类错误。但一时疏忽之下有可能写出every person have…we was的错误搭配,微不足道的小错却往往能给作文以致命的打击。

2.名词单复数

看所有名词的单复数使用是否合理。大胆运用的equipments和wildlives都属于刺眼而典型的误用复数错误。

3.时态一致

议论文讲究以现在时统一全文，描述、现状，提出原因、建议只需用一般现在时、一般将来时、现在进行时、现在完成时就可以完成规范写作。除非在图表作文中提到过去年代，如1993年等，则必须将时态调整为一般过去时。

4.搭配

介词使用往往是最敏感的语言内容之一，阅卷老师凭丰富的经验足以轻松断定用词的正误。何时应用in, on, to, with, for, at, of也涉及到语言基本功的层面。考生对不熟悉的搭配要及时放弃或替换，以免因小失大。

5.拼写

词汇量不大的同学不要贸然挑战高难词汇，否则会在拼写上漏洞百出。多字母、少字母、错字母都会成为难看的风景，让人愈加挑剔。

6.用词

用词丰富、精确到位需要长期的摸索与积累，考试时用词不当和中文式措词难免出现。但考生要对把握不住或字对字翻译的表达提高警惕，没有把握的表达则果断放弃调整。好的用词令人刮目相看，而拙劣的表达令人难以忍受。这一点只能在考试中适当把握尺度，总之不要盲目冒险。

总之，我们只有40分钟完成写作。少些即兴冒险，多些理性沉稳，把握写作流程，突破自己的一般水准。希望考生们能超常发挥，把自己的语言知识精华展现在试卷上。

第三篇：英语写作及段落素材（本站推荐）

公司发给了38个小片段，我查了一下他们所在的单元，用红体标注出来，可把他们当作【精练】，以丰富题型。

1.add(M1U1)

选用上述单词或短语完成下列小片段。

The president said it was not easy to manage a company,___(1)___ that the financial crisis(金融危机)____(2)___the difficulties.However,the dormitory(宿舍)for the workers must ___(3)___and they would __(4)____a toilet ___(4)____each room.The week before,he___(5)___all the expenses and the total____(6)___more than 100,100 yuan.【答案】（1）adding(补充说)（2）added to（增加）（3）be added to（扩建）（4）add…to（把……加到……上）（5）added up（把……加起来）（6）added up to（加起来的总和是，共计）

2.admit(M1U2)

根据括号内的汉语提示完成句子。

Though the public are against the parks ___(收门票)before they ___(许可进入)it,the park ___(不承认)that they are making a profit from the public.【答案】 charging for admission;are admitted into;make no admission

3.advice

根据上下文或括号内的汉语提示完成下列小片段。

He is a good __(1)__and he always __(2)__on how to learn English well,which helps me a lot.He _(3)_(建议朗读英语)in the morning.He also __(4)__(建议我写英语日记)every day to improve my writing.【答案】（1）advisor(2)gives me some advice(3)advises reading English aloud(4)advises me to keep an English diary

4.allow(M1U2)

根据上述词语完成下列小片段。

This private school __(1)__(不许睡觉)in class.The teachers __(2)__（不许学生上课聊天）.If a student breaks the rule,the teacher __(3)__(不让他进教室).In a word,this private school __(4)__(不许违反规定)of school rules.【答案】（1）doesn’t allow sleeping(2)won’t allow the students to chat in class(3)won’t allow him into the classroom(4)doesn’t allow violation

5.allow;permit(M1U2)

选用上述单词或短语完成下列小片段。

The salesman __(1)__the child __(2)__(buy)the cigarette in the store though the store rules didn’t __(3)__it.What’s more,he__(4)__him __(5)__(bring)more classmates here.As a result,his store was closed because in our country,cigarette __(6)__sell to the people under 18.【答案】（1）allowed(2)to buy(3)permit(4)advised(5)to bring(6)is forbidden to

6.amuse(M4U5)

用上面的词语完成句子。

Seeing everyone ____at the ____joke,he kept silent,finding it was easier to___others than to___.【答案】was amused;amusing;amuse;amuse himself

7.argue

根据括号内的汉语提示完成下列小片段。

The workers,who __(1)__(为……而争论)their own rights,__(2)__(同……争论)the boss for a few days,but failed to __(3)__him __(4)__（说服……做某事）giving them a rise in wages.1

【答案】（1）argued for(2)argued with(3)argue(4)into

8.change

选用上述短语完成下列小片段。

She looked at me as if she __(1)__:I__(2)__then and nothing could__(3)__.So she came to stand beside me,saying,“Wish you good luck,but you must__(4)__that I am waiting for you to come back.”

【答案】（1）had read my mind(2)had made up my mind(3)change my mind(4)keep it in mind

9.come up(M1U2)

用come相关的短语完成下列小片段。

The other day when I was walking in the street,I __(1)__Wang Lei,an old friend of mine.She told me a story of his brother’s.He once saw a dog __(2)__a boy,which made the boy die of a disease related to a dog disease.At that time,he __(3)__the idea to learn medicine and find a cure for the disease.In the next 10 years,he __(4)__a lot of difficulties and his dream finally __(5)__.Last month,his experiment for the drug __(6)__very successful and it was predicted that the number of people who can benefit from his research will __(7)__1,000,000 a year.【答案】（1）came across(2)come at(3)came up with(4)came over(5)came true(6)came out

(7)come to

10.compete(M2U2)

As the youngest __(1)__,John had to competed __(2)__the writing contest __(3)__30 other top students __(4)__the annual award of writing.So he must be very __(5)__so that he could win in the __(6)__.【答案】（1）competitor(2)in(3)with/against(4)for(5)competitive(6)competition

11.competition;race;game;match(M2U2)

①competition:可指各种形式的比赛与竞赛，如reading competition,chess competition等。②race:指速度上的竞赛，如relay race;horse racing等。

③game:指有一定规则的比赛或游戏，也可指多局比赛中的其中一局。其复数形式可指大型体育运动会。如：Asian Games;Olympic Games等。

④match:指体育代表团之间较重大的公开竞技赛事，如football match等。

选用上述单词完成下列小片断。

Jack was disappointed to lose the 100 metre __(1)__last Saturday,but to her great joy,he won the writing __(2)__this morning.Now the 2008 Olympic __(3)__are being held in Beijing and Jack is watching the volleyball __(4)__between China and Cuba.【答案】（1）race(2)competition(3)Games(4)match

12．concern(M1U1)

选用上述词组完成下列小片段。

Besides doing his research work,Professor Li ___(1)__(从事)social work.For example,he __(2)__(关心)world peace and human progress.He also made it clear that his research work should __(3)__（与……有关）the farmers’ income because __(4)__,to increase the farmer’s income is of greater importance than anything else.【答案】（1）concerns himself with/in;or:is concerned with/in

(2)shows concern about/for;or:is concerned about/for

(3)be concerned with;or:concern

(4)as far as he is concerned

13.content(M4U3)

根据括号内的汉语提示完成下面小片段。

Though he __(1)__（对他现在的薪水不满意），he is __(2)__(安于现状).As a matter of fact,a beer every meal __(3))__(足以使他满意了).【答案】（1）isn’t content with his present salary(2)content to remain where he is now(3)is enough to content him

14.declare(M7U2)

选用上述短语完成下列小片段。

When George Bush __(1)__Saddam Hussein __(2)__a dictator(独裁者)and he decided to __(3)__Iraq,many people in the world__(4)__war and they __(5)__that Bush was a trouble-maker.【答案】（1）declared(2)to be(3)declare war on(4)declared against(5)declared

15．depend(M3U4)

选用上述单词或短语完成下列小片段。

To Anne’s great joy,she was finally __(1)__Jack,her husband.After many years’ struggle,she gained her __(2)__and could totally __(3)__herself to lead a new life.【答案】（1）independent of(2)independence(3)depend on

16.every two days/every other day/every second day每两天

选用上述短语完成下列小片段。

She was chosen as chairman of the union on the basis of her ability(由于她的能力)and in order to know more about the situation of the union,she decided to hold a meeting __(2)__(每两个月)on a regular basis.【答案】(2)every second month

17.figure(M6U1)

选用上述词组完成下列小片段。

One day,I was having lunch at a five-star hotel,when a waiter told me that he __(1)__the cup I broke __(2)__the bill.What a mess!I totally didn’t __(3)__what on earth happened.At last,he didn’t __(4)__the money,but I decided never to eat there.【答案】（1）had figured(2)in(3)figure out(4)figure up

18.force(M3U4)

选用上述词组完成下列小片段。

It was reported that two peasant workers __(1)__(被迫)work 14 hours a day but with little money.One of them couldn’t stand it and one of them __(2)__(强行前进或进入)the boss’s house and killed him.The others__(3)__(强迫)a bank clerk __(4)__(hand)in the money.【答案】（1）were forced to(2)forced his way into(3)forced(4)into handing

19.form

选用上述单词或短语的适当形式填空。

Two years ago Andy filled in a __(1)__and became a member on his city basketball team where he could receive __(2)__training.He practised hard and was __(3)__good__(4)__,so he did win the respect of others.But last year he ate too much fat__(5)__chocolate and ice cream and he became fatter and fatter and __(6)__.Therefore he was fired when the team decided to__(7)__,which made his __(8)__fans quite disappointed.【答案】（1）form(2)formal(3)in(4)form(5)in the form of(6)out of form(7)reform(8)former

20.impress

将下列句子译成英语。

国内外游客对深圳有深刻印象。首先，他们对这个城市的道路和交通印象良好。另外，这个

城市的友好和好客也给他们留下深刻印象。最重要的是，深圳的很多名胜尤其令人印象深刻，如世界之窗、欢乐谷等。

【答案】 Shenzhen impresses tourists from home and abroad.First,they have a good impression on the city’s road and traffic.Besides,the city impresses its friendliness and hospitality upon their mind.Above all,many places of interest in this city are very impressive,such as Window of the World,the Happy Valley and so on.21.in danger of

用上述短语完成下列小片段。

Last month Jane was seriously ill and was __(1)__.Thanks to the doctors,she received the operation in time and so she was __(2)__at last.Unfortunately,when she came back to the factory,she learned that she was __(3)__losing her job because the boss thought she was too weak to do the work.【答案】（1）in danger(2)out of danger(3)in danger of

22.make

选用上述词语完成下列小片段。

John is famous for __(1)__stories.When he was young,he was so poor that nobody

would__(2)__with him and even looked down upon him,so one day he __(3)__to be wealthy.He went to London hoping to __(4)__.At first,he __(5)__by helping people write letters.It was hard work and persistence that led to his success.【答案】（1）making up(2)make friends(3)made up his mind(4)make money(5)made his living

23.mean(M8U1 means)

选用上述单词或短语完成下列小片段。

When I was young,Mother always __(1)__me to do extra exercises and my brother

__(2)__practice playing the piano.We __(3)__ give up,but Dad told us persistence__(4)__success.【答案】（1）meant(要求某人做)（2）was meant to（被要求做）（3）meant to（打算做）（4）meant（意味着）

24.persuade(M1U3)

根据上下文，用与persuade相关的词语完成下列小片段。

The other day,my husband __(1)__buy a coat as he thought it was too long.However,the assistant tried hard to __(2)__me __(3)__the good quality and fashionable style of it.Therefore,I couldn’t help__(4)__buying it.So you can see how easy it is__(5)__a woman __(6)__things that aren’t suitable for her.【答案】（1）persuaded me not to(2)persuade(3)of(4)being persuaded into(5)to persuade(6)to buy/into buying

25.possession n.(M6U1 possess)

将下列片段译成英语。

他从怀特先生那里夺去了大量珠宝，所以他拥有很多财富。可是他后来发现拥有财富并不能带来幸福。所以他卖了所有的财富，在乡下过着简朴的生活。

【答案】 He took possession of a lot of jewels from Mr.White,so he had possession of a lot of wealth.However,he later found the possession of wealth didn’t bring happiness.So he sold all the wealth in his possession and went to the country to live a simple life.26.pretend

根据括号中的提示完成下列小片段。

As Tom wasn’t interested in his lessons,whenever there was an exam,he would __(1)__(假装生

病).Last week,he__(2)__(假装头痛)when the teacher was going to give a quiz.He __(3)__（假装痛得厉害）during the quiz.An hour later,when the quiz was finished,he__(4)__（假装好了）.【答案】（1）pretend that he was ill/pretend to be ill(2)pretended a headache(3)pretended to be suffering great pain(4)pretended to have recovered

27.promise(M2U2)

选用上述单词或短语完成下列小片段。

She__(1)__to collect some money for these poor children.Everybody knew she had never __(2)__before.That is,once she__(3)__,she would try her best__(4)__.So they all believed the poor children would have a __(5)__future.【答案】（1）promised(2)broken her promise(3)made a promise(4)to keep it/to carry it out/to keep her promise(5)promising

28.put in prison(M1U5)

选用上述短语完成下列小片段。

Tom__(1)__once__(2)__for killing his wife.After he __(3)__for three years,he tried__(4)__.However,the police captured him and thus he__(5)__again.【答案】(1)was(2)put/thrown/cast in prison(3)had been in prison(4)to break out of prison

(5)was taken to prison

29.reason(M1U1)

根据上下文或括号中的提示完成下列小片段。

She said that ___(1)__(没有理由要她)to do the same job for so long and she could not __(2)__（说出理由）for her absence from work.So __(3)__(有充分的理由推断)that they were right to say she was considering changing her job.【答案】（1）there was no reason for her(2)explain the reason(3)there was every reason to reason

30.replace(M2U2)

选用上述单词或短语完成下列小片段。

She__(1)__(没有放回原处)the cup after using it,so it fell to the ground and was broken,which made her very disappointed.Her husband suggested __(2)__(用塑料杯取代它)so that it wouldn’t be so easy to be broken,but she said nothing could__(3)__(替代)this cup as it was made over 1,000 years ago.【答案】（1）didn’t replace(2)replacing it with a plastic one(3)replace

31.settle(M3U4)

选用上述词组完成下列小片段。

The millionaire decided to __(1)__(立遗嘱)when he could still think clearly,because with a lot of difficult problems __(2)__(要解决),the newly-elected CEO is having a hard time.Sometimes he was so upset that he could not __(3)__anything(安下心来做某事).He sincerely hoped to __(4)__where nobody knew him.【答案】（1）settle down his affairs(2)to settle(3)settle down to(4)settle down

32.shake(M1U3)

选用上述短语完成下列小片段。

Mr.Wang and Mrs.Li agreed on the contract finally.They __(1)__each other to__(2)__the deal,with their hands __(3)__slightly __(4)__joy.【答案】（1）shook hands with(2)shake on(3)shaking(4)with

33.survive(M2U1)

选用上述单词或短语完成下列小片段。

Mr.Green was the only__(1)__who__(2)__(在地震中幸存).He told us he__(3)__a bottle of mineral water.Everyone said his__(4)__was a miracle.【答案】（1）survivor(2)survived the earthquake(3)survived on(4)survival

34.time(M2U1)或(M3U4)

选用上述短语完成下列小片段。

__(1)__Joan and I were good friends.She was a kind girl and I could go to her for help __(2)__I had any difficulty because I knew she would always slove the problem __(3)__.Joan was clever,and __(4)__she was diligent.She liked to finish her homework __(5)__and then she could have time to practise writing.Joan also liked walking.__(6)__we would take a walk along the river bank after supper.Joan had a good memory.One day she recited more than twenty long poems __(7)__when we were walking along the river.【答案】（1）At one time(2)at any time(3)in time(4)at the same time(5)ahead of time(6)From time to time(7)at a time

35.tire(M3U2)

选用上述单词或短语完成下列小片段。

My mother never __(1)__doing housework and likes to ask me to help her,though I __(2)__doing it.But sometimes when I see my mother __(3)__without any complaint,I will blame myself and determine I won’t have her __(4)__doing housework.【答案】（1）tires of(2)get tired of(3)tire out(4)be tired with

36.total

用total的适当形式完成下列小片段。

The company used to have 230 clerks in __(1)__and their income __(2)__50,000 yuan per year.But last year things changed __(3)__and the products could not be sold out.Most of the workers became out of work,which made them in __(4)__despair.【答案】（1）total(2)totaled(3)totally(4)total

37.tough

选用上述词语完成下列小片段。

He thought it was really __(1)__that he was caught cheating in the maths examination.Since the school __(2)__cheating,he got zero in maths.Besides,he lost his face to stand in front of all the students in his school to say sorry for his mistake.During the whole winter holiday,he was __(3)__.At last he __(4)__:to leave this school and began his new life.He knew he must be __(5)_to himself if he wanted to succeed.【答案】（1）tough luck(2)took a tough line on(3)having a tough time(4)made a tough decision

(5)tougher

38.urge(M7U3)

选用上述词语完成下列小片段。

As a mother,I __(1)__(突然很想帮助他)，I wanted __(2)__(敦促他采取行动).I should also __(3)__(主张他先订一个可行的计划).Of course,I __(4)__(会鼓励他获取成功).【答案】（1）had a sudden urge to help him

(2)to urge him to take action

(3)urge that he should make a practical plan at first

(4)would urge him on success

第四篇：考研英语写作必备

考研英语：写作必备词汇(一)

中华民族的喜庆节日(Chinese Festivial)国庆节 National Day

中秋节 Mia-Autumn Festival春节 Spring Festival

元宵节 Lantern Festival儿童节 Children‘s Day

端午节 Dragon Boat Festival妇女节 Women’s Day

泼水节 Water-Splashing Day教师节 Teachers’ Day

五四青年节 Youth Day

考研英语：写作必备词汇(二)

中国独特的传统饮食(Unique Traditional Chinese Foods)

锅贴 guotie(fried jiaozi)花卷 steamed twisted rolls

套餐 set meal盒饭 box lunch;Chinese take-away米豆腐 rice tofu魔芋豆腐 konjak tofu

米粉 rice noodles馄饨 wonton

火锅 chafing dish八宝饭 eight-treasure rice pudding粉丝 glass noodles豆腐脑 jellied bean curd冰糖葫芦 a stick of sugar-coated haws(or apples, etc.)

考研英语：写作必备词汇(三)

中国新兴事物(Newly Sprouted Things)京九铁路 Beijing –Kowloon Railway中国电信 China Telecom扶贫工程 Anti-Poverty Project中国移动 China Mobile菜篮子工程 Vegetable Basket Project十五计划 the 10th Five-Year Plan温饱工程 Decent-Life Project中国电脑联网 Chinanet安居工程 Economy Housing Project三峡工程 the Three Gorges Project扫黄 Porn-Purging Campaign希望工程 Project Hope西部大开发 Go-West Campaign

考研英语：写作必备词汇(四)

大陆中国 Mainland Chin铁饭碗 iron rice bowl

红宝书 little red book大锅饭 communal pot

红色中国 socialist China关系户 closely-related units四化 Four Modernizations外出打工人员 migrant workers终生职业 job-for-life

关系网 personal nets, closely-knitted guild

五讲(讲文明、讲礼貌、讲卫生、讲秩序、讲道德)the Five Merits focus on decorum, manners, hygiene, disciplines and morals

四美(心灵美、语言美、行为美、环境美)the Four Virtues are golden heart, refined language, civilized behavior, and green environment

考研英语：写作必备词汇(五)

基层监督 grass-roots supervision婚纱摄影 bride photo

基础税率 base tariff level黑心棉 shoddy cotton

婚介所 matrimonial agency机器阅卷 machine scorin

婚外恋 extramarital love

即开型奖券 scratch-open ticket/lottery

集中精力把经济建设搞上去 go all out for economic development

价格听证会 public price hearings甲A球队 Division A Soccer Team家政服务 household management service

加强舆论监督 ensure the correct orientation is maintained in public opinion假帐 accounting fraud叫板 challenge;pick a quarrel

矫情 use lame arguments渐进式台独 gradual Taiwan independence借调 temporarily transfer

扩大中等收入者比重 Raise the proportion of the middle-income group.扩大内需，刺激消费expand domestic demand and consumption

安居工程 housing project for low-income urban residents

信息化 information-base ormationization

智力密集型 concentration of brain power knowledge-intensive

外资企业 overseas-funded enterprises下岗职工 laid-off workers分流 reposition of redundant personnel三角债 chain debts

素质教育 education for all-round development

豆腐渣工程 jerry-built projects社会治安情况 law-and-order situation民族国家 nation state台独 independence of Taiwan台湾当局 Taiwan authorities台湾同胞 Taiwan coMPAtriots台湾是中国领土不可分割的一部分。

Taiwan is an inalienable part of the Chinese territory.西部大开发 Development of the West Regions

可持续性发展 sustainable development

风险投资 risk investment通货紧缩 deflation

扩大内需 to expand domestic demand

计算机辅助教学 computer-assisted instruction(CAI)

网络空间 cyberspace网上购物 shopping online

虚拟现实 virtual reality应试教育 exam-oriented education网民 netizen(net citizen)学生减负 to reduce study load电脑犯罪 computer crime总裁助理 assistant president电子商务 the e-business综合治理 comprehensive treatment安居工程 housing project for low-income urban residents

信息化 information-based;informationization

智力密集型 concentration of brain power;knowledge-intensive

外资企业 overseas-funded enterprises

下岗职工 laid-off workers分流 reposition of redundant personnel下海 plunge into the commercial sea下网 off line

小康之家 well-off family;comfortably-off family

新秀 up-and-coming star, rising star

新新人类 New Human Being;X Generation信息港 info port形象小姐/先生 image representative of a product or a brand

虚拟网 virtual net学生处 students′ affairs division研究生毕业证/学位证 graduate diploma/graudate degree′sdiploma

摇钱树 cash cow以人为本 people oriented;people foremost义务教育 compulsory education易拉罐 pop can

应试教育 examination-oriented education system

考研英语：写作必备词汇(六)

The classification for the commodities

1.frozen food 速冻食品 5.personal-care supplies 个人护理用品

2.dairy products 牛产品6.toys 玩具

3.packaged foods 包装食品7.car-care products 汽车护理用品

4.cleaning supplies 清洁用品8.yard-care products 庭院护理用品

考研英语：写作必备词汇(七)

Different stores

1.Convienience store便利店2.Grocery store小卖部

3.Supermarke超市4.Drug store药店

5.Department store商场6.Discount store打折店

7.Factory outlets厂家直销点8.Specialty shop专卖店

9.Shopping mall/shopping center购物中心

Houshold department

dish 碟子silverware 银器cooking utensils 厨具

pots 壶pans 锅

第五篇：考研英语写作

高分范文展示：

The global economy, who is sleeping over that stretcher, like a helpless-sick wreck, is being practiced emergency treatment by worldwidebanking systems, which are trying their best to save the market intensively by cooperation.Conspicuously, that’s a horrible depiction related to/concerning the the world.the top of the list which should never be overlooked.First of all, , as the case of would make its comeback every 10-30 years on the average, so would this time.Furthermore, the overestimation of economic prosperityhas resulted in a great multitude of foams/bubbles in the securities and the realties.gues, who made use of installment policy to speculate in real estate industry, thus, only spending 30% of totally-needed funds in possessing 3 apartments, with the aggregate price over RMB 2 million.Actually, it is not the Day of Judgment.What we are glad to see is the keyword – “cooperation”and we will surely get through this tough period before long.好句写法：把句子拉长→加修饰：

(1)n.+ who/which/that… 加从句

e.g.Many peopletakeseriously the lifestyle of chasing for luxuries.那些把一个人拥有财产的数量当作评判其社会地位的唯一标准的人们，会很重视追逐奢侈品的生活方式。

(2)n./句子结尾 + v.-ed(en)(被动)/ v.-ing(主动)加分词（定语后置）

e.g.youngsters, ranging from/who range from 20 to 30 years old ranging fromwith研究发现，和十年前的5%相比，现在有近24%的年轻白领表示不清楚自己想要什么。

(3)n.+ with + n.(修饰语)加限定词

e.g.A pretty girl → a girl with an angel-like face and a fairy-like figure

e.g.Nowadays, a lot of riches like buying luxurious autos to show/display their success and existence.当今，很多有钱人喜欢通过买豪车来显示自己的成功和存在。

→These days, withdefined as the typical marks of 句型模仿：

07 阅读text3最后一段：

From the middle-class family perspective, much of this, understandably, looks far less like an opportunity to exercise more financial responsibility, and a good deal more like a frightening acceleration of the wholescale shift of financial risk onto their already overburdened shoulders.* Looks far less like… a good deal more like… 看起来不像是……而更像是……

模仿→05大作文：养老足球赛

From our conscientious and clear-minded perspective, much of this behavior, undoubtedly, looks far less like like a 依据我们的良知，毫无疑问，大多数这种行为并不能提供合理分配赡养老人义务的机会，相反，它更像是一种加剧中华传统美德“尊老爱幼”走向大规模衰败的危险行为

大作文——开头what、中间why/effect、结尾how

What——虚开头（首段首句）

(1)坊间流传多年的所谓经典套话

As can be seen in the picture given above…

→ Asgiven above…

e.g.悲观乐观 man, passion-sufficient and energy-continuous, is climbing upon a ladder to reach to his shining blue print.(2)直接描述

e.g.12002年作文：美国女孩穿着中国传统服饰

There is a beautiful American girl, who is standing over there in a Chinese traditional costume, smiling just like a flower.a Chinese traditional costume.e.g.2 2010年作文：文化“火锅”，既美味又营养

those dishes and cooking ingredients in a Chinese traditional hot-pot, including e.g.2012年作文：悲观乐观 What——[描述+宽泛、宏观的点评]（首段第二句）

It is aa significant information that 主题has been in the spotlight in current society主题 has aroused wide concern at any corner of our social consensus.e.g.家庭成员关系 * 首段第二句和第二段首句应该有一定层次感，首段第二句提出一个观点/现象，第二段首句再将其具体化/细节化，直击中心。

Why/Effect——实开头：（主题句）+ 原因/影响（内部：自身 / 外部：社会、媒体）+ 例子

(1)主题句：

Among the topic concerning主题（抽象）, as the depiction/picture shows, the most cardinal tip is related to the issue of主旨中心思想（具体）.e.g.家庭关系

Among the topic concerning the depiction shows, the most e.g.出国留学人数/考研人数/公务员人数(2)引出原因

Several factors could weigh heavily for the happening of ____, yet, suspended at the top of the list are the following two aspects.To begin with, _____.Additionally, _____.e.g.中国传统文化/美德的缺失(3)引出影响

It is hardly necessary for me to cite all the evidence of the revolutionary influences(that)the 现象 gives rise

to.To begin with, … Apart from… ,* 表示导致的短语：Contribute to Result in/trigger/induce/spell/invite

* 表示原因：inducement/incentive

e.g.人人考公务员 result in.To begin with, … Apart from … , * Apart from用法：Apart from(mentioned above), …(new information)= Besides, … , Google could owe its success to the brilliance of its founders, Sergey Brin and Larry Page.* 表示归因于：owe/ascribe/attribute… to …

(4)举例子

A good case blowing my mind now is 人/物, who/which …

e.g.慈善/真正的成功

A good case blowing my mind now is a world well-known man, whose name is Bill Gates, industry after his retirement.* 例子不能单独提出，例子前面要有一个论点，或者在例子后面要有一个点评和结论，这样才是一个完整的举例（名人名言也同理）。

How——提出建议（Suggestion）：规则、思想、行为

(1)制定规则：

Lay down/Establish the effective/reliable/available/practical regulations to …呼应主题.（敬老）（保护环境）（留学）

(2)改变思想：

Deliver the moderate 主题词 outlook to guide us both physically and mentally.e.g.Deliver the moderate outlook to guide us both physically and mentally.成功观/生活观/物质观/世界观/知识观/能源观

(3)规范行为：

Exert/Implement/Practice the rational 主题词 manners to live in a much more harmonious/compatible atmosphere/circumstance.circumstance.(4)补充说明方法：名人名言（适用于最后一段提完建议之后）

万能套话：

As a classic saying goes,千里之行，始于足下

应用：提完建议之后

Yet, it is very probable to say without any exaggerationthat depending on the lack of 主题词, many citizens/youths would have immersed in such an extreme condition for a long time.Does it have opportunities for us to make achange ? / Is it possible to make a change? Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely handle/optimize/refrain from … as long as the above mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.e.g.养老 Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely refrain from as long as the above mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.e.g.奢侈浪费

Yet, it is very probable to say without any exaggeration that depending on the lack time.Does it have opportunities for us to make a change? Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.特别讲解：主体段落的展开（第二段）

(1)单向话题：要么褒，要么贬

原因展开：

The factors contributing to… are vastly complex.Some attribute it to ….Others place the blame on / Others place the high value on ….Still the rest complain of/ attach importance to …

e.g.为什么很多年轻人最终会抽烟

The factors contributing to a big rise in are vastly complex.Some attribute it to(2)双向话题

e.g.中国传统风俗习惯的改变是好还是坏

According to my humble perspective, every sword is double-edged.is both positive and negative.To begin with, it goes without denying that the new-changed customs and habits have distinct advantages.On one hand, they On the other hand, they eliminate “culture gap” to Although / Whilebidding farewell to the bygones enjoys considerable merits, it still have their own drawbacks when the following point is taken into account.A good case coming to my mind now isof the Chinese virtues – raising seniors.After all, * 举例子的时候，要实现从手段到效果的跨越（我们要怎么做来达到什么效果）

小作文——Simplified（简明扼要）字数：100-120

* 大作文的套话和模板不能用在小作文中！

* 小作文写作时必须覆盖每个题目要求的要点

(1)Letter——邮件、信件：生活化/接地气

a)邀请信

学术邀请（充满敬意）：

开头：正式邀请（含参会时间和主题）

主体：介绍会议安排

结尾：希望得到正式回复，并确认

Dear Professor ___,It is my great honor to extend you our sincere invitation of an academic forum held on 具体时间 in/at 地点,which focuses on the topic of主题

The forum mentioned above will be arranged as followings.Firstly at 8 a.m.will start the 主题involves.Afterwards, there will be another arrangement, including ___.Then at around 时间, 另一个安排.I really hope you can make it.If it is possible, I would like to ask you for sending me your bank

account, and I’ll pay you 40 percent of the total lecture fees as the deposit.最后期限.落款

范文：

Dear Professor Liu,It is my great honor to extend you my sincere invitation of an academic forum held on Jan.1 in The Nation’s Theatre, which focuses on the topic of Chinese traditional culture.The forum mentioned above will be arranged as followings.Firstly at 8 a.m.will start the opening of the forum, which involves a brief presentation with regard to the prospects as well as plights thatthe promotion of Chinese culture may encounter.Afterwards, there will be another arrangement concerning a micro-movie of the cultural relic exhibition, which will last 15 minutes.Then at 9 to 11 o’clock, you would be highly expected to present us a lecture named “World Needs China”.I really hope you can make it.If it is possible, I would like to ask you for sending me your bank account, and I’ll pay you 40 percent of the total lecture fees as the deposit.Reply, if you please before next weekend.Li Ming,The Supervisor of XXX

b)申请信

学校组织社团评优，要写申请。你是学校创新社（Innovation Agency）的负责人，请你代表你们社参与评优，写一封申请信。

范文：

Dear Sir or Madame,Innovation Agency – “Most Improved Organization Award”.private tools’ rebuilding the living.building to make it accessible/easy to wheelchairs..Yours faithfully,Li Ming

c)回复投诉信（对别人投诉的回复和安抚）：承担责任，尝试挽回

有人投诉你负责的勤工助学中心某学生表现糟糕，部分原文：

I will not use your temporary staff any more for their disastrous performance.范文：

Dear Sir,temporary administration assistant you received from my organization,.We really care about our clients and that is why we will try to give some explanation about what happened.candidate training.work for you.Yours faithfully,Li Mingd)销售信（空格处填入产品名）

Last year, we achieved a 215% increase in the sales of our ______.We believe that this happy state of affairs be attributed to two causes.First, we managed to avoid passing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients.Second, we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have ever produced.And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season’s ____ are, if anything, more persuasive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors.We believe that your will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.We look forward for you to favor us an order.e)现场笔录证明

You’ve come across a serious crash last night when a taxi heavily knocked down a passerby.Now the police asked you to offer a certificate of witness involving following points:

1.The time and place

2.The process of this emergency

Witness on a Crash

It was 时间 in a 星期 night, 日期, when I was about to enjoy my late snack a first aid to the young and phoned ambulance at once.Signature:Li Ming

(2)Notice——通知、告示

a)失物招领（Lost and Found）：信息要有所保留，不能全部透露

Case: You’ve picked up an ED（电子辞典）

1.Time and place

2.The feature of this electronic dictionary（留一个最大特征来核实对方身份）

3.Your information for contact

Lost and Found

On the evening of 日期regular magazine.of this ED the phone number Sincerely yours,Li Ming