2005年XDF考研英语网络课堂应用文写作手记!1-3

第一篇：2005年XDF考研英语网络课堂应用文写作手记!1-3

2005年新东方考研英语网络课堂应用文写作手记

何 钢

一 作文部分新旧大纲对比：

老大纲：写一篇200字左右的文章，满分20分

新大纲：写两篇文章。第二篇作文从200个单词调整到160－200个单词，满分仍为20分；并新增加一篇文章（包括信件、便笺、备忘录等），要求写100个单词左右，满分为10分

二 应用性短文的写作方法：

应用性短文包括：信件（Letter）、便笺（Note）、备忘录（Memo）信件：应用最广，范围较宽，可长可短、可正式可非正式、可写给熟人亦可写给组织团体便笺：A note is just a short informal letter.便笺通常写给认识的熟人或朋友，一般与信件类似，但格式更加非正式化——简言之，即“短小的非正式信件”。备忘录：A memo is a short official note written to another person in the same company or organization.——简言之，即“短小的正式信件”。

因此，最关键是要掌握对于“信件”的写作方法！

三 大纲对信件的评分标准：信息点的覆盖和内容的组织——即不可以遗漏任何题目所要求的内容，必须要做到全面；语言的准确性——针对五类错误：语法错误、用词错误、句子结构混乱、标点错误以及拼写错误；格式和语域的恰当——根据写作针对的不同对象，可分为三个语域：正式语域、一般语域与非正式语域。

特别指出：对于语法结构和词汇的多样性的要求将根据具体试题做调整（与议论文写作相比较，其要求较低），并且允许考生使用提示语中出现过的关键词，但不允许出现提示语中的词组或整句。

四 书信作文的格式（the format of a letter）：称呼（salutation）

①正式称呼：

a.当写信的对象为某团体、组织、机构或不知对方姓名的时候，一般是这种写法：Dear Sir or(/)Madam,b.当写信的对象为某领导、上司、老板或校长等上级的时候，一般是以下这种写法：

Dear Mr.***（***代表姓）

Dear Ms.***

Dear Mrs.***（针对已婚妇女）

②非正式称呼：

当写信的对象是朋友或熟人的时候，一般是这种写法：Dear ***（***代表名字，即Given Name）主体（body）

要根据信件内容要求来进行细致划分——但都讲求开门见山、不绕弯子，大约写7－8句话即可。一般题目会要求写三个信息点，所以针对每个信息点可写两句话，最后写两句礼貌用语，即可完成整个信件写作。落款（complimentary close）

根据写信的对象不同，也划分为两大类：

①正式称呼：

a.当写信的对象为某团体、组织、机构或不知对方姓名的时候，一般是这种写法：Yours faithfully,b.当写信的对象为某领导、上司、老板或校长等上级的时候，一般是这种写法：Yours sincerely,注意：在美国英语中习惯写为：Sincerely yours,但考研英语对此不做如此细致的区分，即写上述三种任一即可。

②非正式称呼：当写信的对象是朋友或熟人的时候，一般是以下这种写法：

Kind regards,Best wishes,当然还可以有更多的写法，如：With best wishes, 或All the best, 但常用的为以上两种。签名（signature）

根据考研英语样题，一律要求写Li Ming

五 语域要求（register）：根据写作对象确定语域，即决定是采用正式还是非正式的语域。一般地说，正式书信倾向于采用正式的表达法，而口语信则倾向于非正式表达法。

例如：非正式的表达法：Let me know if you can come for the meeting next Wednesday.正式的表达法：Please kindly inform us of your availability for the meeting to be held next Wednesday.再如：非正式的表达法：How about coming down to stay with us for weekend?

正式的表达法：We would like to invite you for a weekend.或We would appreciate it if you could come for the weekend.区分正式与非正式表达法的标志之一是看是否有省略（非正式表达法多用省略，而正式表达法反之）。

例如：正式的表达法：I would like you to come to my office to pick up the ticket.（一般是指写给上级领导、合作伙伴等）非正式的表达法：Come to my office for a ticket.（一般是指写给非常亲密的朋友）区分正式与非正式表达法的另一标志是看是否有缩略（非正式表达法多用缩略，而正式表达法反之）。

例如：正式的表达法：I would like to...非正式的表达法：I’d like to...六 书信内容的完整：

这是书信作文中最重要的部分。要根据题目所提供的情景和所要求写的信息点，在行文中完整无缺地逐一进行交待。要注意，不可直接抄袭题目中的原词组或句子，至多可以使用几个核心词。

七 以样题为例，详解书信作文的写法：

Directions:

You are preparing for an English test and are in need of some reference books.Write a letter to the sales department of a bookstore to ask for:

1)detailed information about the books you want,2)methods of payment,3)time and way of delivery.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use “Li Ming”instead.You do not need to write the address.(10 points)

第一步：寻找关键词。（见题干标注）

第二步：思考写作的架构。

一般而言，完成整个信件的写作需要约15分钟左右时间，可以先用2分钟进行审题。用11－12分钟行文，用1－2分钟检查。即写每一句话约用1分钟时间。

称呼：由于写作对象是书店的销售部门，因此可以写为：Dear Sir or Madam,语域：正式语体。尽量避免使用缩略语或省略句。

主体：开头有两种写法：

第一种可以开门见山，直接说出自己的目的。如：I am writing this letter to ask for...第二种可以先交待一下背景，然后说出自己的目的。如：I will take CET-6 next December and quality test preparation materials are essential to success in the test.接着交待自己写信的意图和目的，可以有如下写法：

I want to know.../ I wonder if.../ I would like to know.../ Would it be possible for you to...对于该样题，可以这样接上文：

I wonder if you have the following books:

或I would like to know if you have the following books:

或 Would it be possible for you to tell me about the availability of the following books:由于要交待书的详细信息，所以至少要写清楚书名，如果可能，尽量写一下出版社。对于该样题，可以这样接上文： I wonder if you have the following books: a vocabulary book covering the 5,800 words for the CET-6 test as well as past test papers with keys and model essays and a Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English, which I can turn to for help./in which I can look up for new words.继续写题目要求的关于付款方式的内容。对于该样题，可以有两种表达接上文：

其一：Besides how do I pay for these books? 或 How should I pay for these books?——By cash or by other means?

必须要注意：英文写作非常强调连贯性，因此可以用一些代词或连接词使得句意连贯。如这句话中的Besides和these都是发挥了联系上下文的作用。另外还有许多表示补充、附加的关联词，如：in addition / additionally / moreover / furthermore /

其二：I would also like to know if you accept payment by credit card.If it is inconvenient, I will pay by cash.继续写题目要求的关于寄递时间和方式的内容。对于该样题，可以这样接上文：

Finally, if I order these books now, when can I get them? How will these books be delivered to my house?

或Finally, if I order these books now, when is the earliest time I can get them? How will these books be mailed to my house?或Finally, if I order these books now, when is the earliest time I can get them and how will these books be sent to my house? 6 按照英语信件的惯例，在信件最后要有一个礼貌的结尾（a polite ending）。可以有如下写法：

I would appreciate it if you could give me a reply as soon as possible.或 I should be grateful if you could give me an early reply.落款和签名：Sincerely yours,Li Ming

完整的样题格式及内容如下：

Dear Sir or Madam,I will take CET-6 next December and quality test preparation materials are essential to success in the test.I wonder if you have the following books: a vocabulary book covering the 5,800 words for the CET-6 test as well as past test papers with keys and model essays and a Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English, which I can turn to for help.Besides how do I pay for these books? ——By cash or by other means? Finally, if I order these books now, when can I get them? How will these books be delivered to my house?

I would appreciate it if you could give me a reply as soon as possible.Sincerely yours,Li Ming

八 总结英文询问信的结构：称呼：确定是团体、组织、上级还是自己的好朋友、亲密伙伴，以决定使用正式或非正式语体。主体：注意题目所要求信息点的完整性，不要抄袭题干的语言，要将其进行同义改写。礼貌的结尾落款和签名

九 对于其他类型信件写作的准备：投诉信（a letter of complaint）：

可以这样开头：I am writing this letter to complain about...或I am writing this letter to bring...into your attention.或I am writing concerning...如I am writing concerning the food quality and service of the students’cafeteria.注意要把投诉内容用陈述句方式表达出来（摆事实，讲道理）。

2请求信（a letter of request）：

与询问信的区别在于：询问信着重询问一些客观的事实，而请求信则涉及要麻烦到对方。

比如：给出以下场景，写出一封请求信：你在学校图书馆借了三本书，现在还书的规定时间已经到了。但由于你生病没有办法按时还送。所以需要写一封请求信，请求图书馆允许你晚几天还书并且不要罚款。（晚还书overdue 罚款fine）可以这样开头：

I am writing concerning the three books due today.Unfortunately, I caught a flu/ I caught a cold...I should be grateful if you could allow me to return the books several days later than the appointed time.3 求职信（a letter of application）：

比如去应聘秘书，可以这样开头：

I am writing concerning the position of secretary in your company.或I am writing to apply for the post of secretary advertised in China Daily yesterday.讲明自己如何胜任（qualify for）这个职位：包括自身性格特点以及以前的工作经验等。

礼貌的结尾可以这样写：

I am looking forward to your reply.I would appreciate it if you could give me an interview.或I am waiting to meet you in person.十 参考书目：

《英语写作手册》北京外国语大学出版社

《高级英语写作》外研社

《英语交际实用写作》上海外语教育出版社

十一 备忘录和便条的写法：便条与书信没有任何本质差异，唯一的区别在于：便条更加非正式一点（一般都是写给亲密朋友的）。

可以直接称呼名字。如：dear Jone, 或Jone,礼貌的结尾以及落款都可以省略掉，直接写签名即可。备忘录的本质也是书信，是一般写给同事的一种正式简短的信，常常是有关工作事宜等。

其格式如下：

To: 李四

From: 张三

Date: September 15, 2004

Subject: Request / Inquiry / Congratulations

以下与书信的主体部分完全一样，省略掉礼貌的结尾、落款和签名。

第二篇：考研英语 应用文写作

考研应用文写作(A节作文)一.应用文写作要求: 1 内容全面(覆盖面)2 语言自然(词汇丰富,衔接手段的应用)3 语法正确 语域得体(正式与非正式)5 格式正确

二.写作类型:1信件(私人及公务)备忘录摘要报告

三.写作总体把握:确定文章格式 与语域,抓住关键词,合理想象, 确定文章内容与结构

应用文分类破解 信件写作

(A)信件格式:称呼 正文 结束语

签名 第一段自我介绍句型: I am

(a staff member of)_____________.写作目的句型: I am writing the letter in purpose of _____________.感谢对方来信的句型: It is really a surprise to receive your letter of June 18.Your letter of June 18th has arrived.What a pleasing surprise!

thThank you for your letter of June 18.2 结尾段句型: 1)表示感谢:My thanks to you for your general help are beyond words.I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation to the kind assistance you render me.I apologize for all the inconvenienced I have Caused

2)期待回信

I am looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.I look forward to hearing from you soon.B 求学信写作

1首段: 自我介绍,申请原因, 说明写信目的 2 主体:自己的背景资料,询问对方学校的资料结尾: 希望尽快收到答复,表示感谢与期待

常用句型:

th1)I am writing to inquire about the entrance to your university.2)I wish to apply to your esteemed department as a postgraduate student.3)Your university is a well-staffed and well-equipped institute with a long history and a fine tradition of scholarship.4)Would you please be kind to furnish me with some related information?(P27)

C 投诉信 自我介绍,引出投诉内容 2 描述个人经历

时间、地点。First, …..then…..Later,….Next,….Soon,…..Eventually,….引起有关人员或公众注意,避免再次发生 4 希望能尽快得到满意答复 常用句型: 1 I’m writing to put forward some opinions about I’m writing to complain about I’m writing to you to express my dissatisfaction with 4 I hope that the authorities concerned will consider my suggestions and improve the situation as best as they can.We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind.D 求职信 说明信息来源,表明写作目的和应聘职位.2 详述个人经历和能力:教育程度,所学专业(或询问薪水待遇)3 希望获得面试机会,提供联系方式,感谢对方关心 常用句型: I have read your advertisement in _____, and I should be grateful if you could consider me favorable for this position.2 I am writing to apply for the position of __________ which you advertised in ____.3 I am writing to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of ___ you have advertised in I graduated from the ________ university majoring in ______.I have been working in ______ since my graduation, and therefore attained a fair knowledge and experience in this field.I would appreciate it if you could grant me an interview so that I could explain in more details.6 With the kind of experience I have accumulated, I would expect a salary of not less than ___ 7 If you want to know more about me, please contact me at ________.求职信范文

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a waitress.Enclosed with the letter is my resume, which further details my qualifications and previous work experience.Not only do my qualifications and work experience make me a perfect candidate for the job, but my personality is well suited to working as a waitress.I am a very friendly person who can quickly establish rapport with people of all ages.I would like to meet with you at your earliest convenience, to discuss the possibility of working at your restaurant.Thank you for your consideration of my application.I look forward to meeting you in the near future.Your sincerely Li Ming The principle of hard work applies to 应用文写作(二)推荐信写作

第一段:介绍自己背景,与被推荐人的关系以及为何事推荐

常用句型: As________(自己的背景或者与被推荐者的关系), I take great pleasure in recommending _________for acceptance into(for the position of)________.I am_________.I am writing with pleasure to recommend _____, one of my favorite students, as far as all that I know, for the position in your company.第二段:具体说明被推荐者的细节 常用句型: With good educational background and excellent character, ______ is qualified to apply for an appropriate position in your company.第三段:表示期待以及愿意进一步提供信息 常用句型: A long journey begins with the first step.As far as I know of him, I am very pleased to write this letter of reference to support ______, a very promising young man to apply for ________.If you want to know more information about him, please don’t hesitate to contact me at _____.According to my knowledge of him in the past three years, I believe _____is qualified for this position.Should you need any further information about this student, please feel free to contact me ______.感谢信句型

Please accept my belated thanks for__________.I really appreciated your ___________.I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for _________.备忘录写作 Date: To: From: Subject: 正文:

通知的写作

Notice /announcement All students are requested to be present at the meeting to be held in the school auditorium on Saturday , January 14, 2005 at 3:00 pm.The meeting scheduled to take place this Tuesday is postponed until further notice.写作病句回顾 There are many ways to know the society.For example, by TV, radio and newspapers.2 When he made the decision.He found he began to regret.English is a compulsory course in many colleges, and a student must pass it before he earns his degree.4 The problem is that your brain is less and less efficient, your process is slower and slower.However, there are still many students applying for teaching positions, teachers are very popular in our society.6 Take photos is my habit during travel.7 Our class has more than 200 students, often forcing me to sit on the floor.8 Because I want to be a scientist, so I worked very hard.9 I want to buy something that you will like it.Knowledge, it is the most important things of our world.To make progress, many factors have to be taken into account.12 In Nanjing, the weather is fine, you can enjoy your life here.Getting married is easy, staying married is a difficult matter.To learn English well is not an easy work.15 But it may occur many problems.16 Being a professor needs knowledge, patience and your virtue.Seeing this, many thoughts came into his mind.However people who hold the view :global shortage of fresh water On the top of that, with the increasing of the factory.(前面句号改成逗号,前面不是一个完整的句子)There will need fresh water For example , a child lives with his parent for 18 years, when he go to university , he even don’t know what clothes to wear in every seasons.there is（删除）the flower fades in the same situation without the green house.Face(facing)this situation, drastic measure have be taken to and this unhealthy trend This picture vividly depicts that the athlete rushing to the end of line that is marked “start” in front and “end” in behind.But others do not agree with it, and believe there is several opportunity in everyone.more and more people come to realize that(删除)the important of kownledge.

第三篇：考研英语应用文写作

随着2011考研报名工作的正式启动，1月份的考试离我们越来越近了，要参加2011考研的考生神经又要绷紧一些了。这里，与大家分享一下有关考研英语写作中书信写作的方法常用技巧等，掌握了这些，相信此类题型的提分会有很大帮助。

书信题型写作是应用文写作中常见的功能性写作形式，书信写作的准备一是宏观，就是要掌握它的格式，基本框架，就是先写什么，后写什么；二是微观，具体到语言如何使用。

一、书信写作考察的结构

① 日期，写信人应将写信日期(年，月，日)放在书信正文的右上角，如Jan.30th, 2010。提醒：考研书信写作没有要求考生必须写时间，如果没有把握自己的时间书写格式是正确的，建议考生不要写，以免出错反而扣分。

② 称呼，称呼是写信人对收信人的称谓，称呼可以根据收信人的性别，职务，婚姻状况，姓名等个人信息来写，如：Mr.Williams, Mrs.Bush, Professor Li, Dr.Smith, Dear Mum and Dad

如果写信人不清楚收信人的具体姓名，职务等情况，可以写：Dear Sir or Madam, To whom it may concern。

③ 正文，正文是书信的主要部分，在称呼下方隔一或两行处开始。考生写正文时，要分层次进行。书信正文通常由引言，展开段和结尾三个层次组成。

· 引言，引言表明写信人的写信目的和写信背景，一般仅限于一段，一两句话即可。

提醒：此处考生容易犯一个错误：照抄题目的表达，甚至原句，这是一个严重的错误，在阅卷过程至少会扣到2分，希望广大考生要注意。

· 展开段，展开段内容应详实，具体。可以分为若干段来写，每一段围绕一个主题展开。提醒：提醒广大考生，题干中的要点必须全部包含，考生若是在漏掉一个要点（一般小作文有3个要点）会至少扣掉3分。

· 结尾，结尾部分通常比引言部分短，使用一两句话表达一下希望或祝愿。

④ 结束语，结束语是写信人对收信人的谦称，写在正文下面二至三行处。公务等较正式的信件多采用Yours sincerely, Sincerely yours, Yours faithfully, Yours truly 等；私人信件，多采用Yours, With love, Yours affectionately 等。

⑤ 签名，签名应写在结束语的下面。

二、主体段语言的操作

书信按照指令边想边写。主体第一段一句话，开门见山，提出写信的目的，表明信的性质：是投诉信还是申请信还是请求信？我为什么要写这封信？常用句式包括：

I am writing to complain about...I am writing to thank...for.../express my gratitude for...I am writing to ask for...I am writing to apply for...正文第二段，100个字左右，8、9句话。

此段写作的中心任务是把题目中的提纲进行扩展。如果有3条提纲，可以每一条提纲扩充3句。怎么样扩充，主要是发挥点小小的想象力，有两种思路，一是将上义拆分成为若干下义，二是把一件事情说得更为形象具体。比如第一条指令，题目里面说是books，可以细化为各种各样的书，这就是下义拆分法。还可以具体描写一下这些书是什么样子的。同样第二个指令里面的methods of payment,和第三个指令里面的time and way of delivery都可以采用这两种方法进行扩展。

结尾，一般为礼貌性的套话，一般都是焦急等待着您的回信I am looking forward to your reply足以，或者I would appreciate it if you could send a replay at your earliest convenience也行。

以下为书信写作中常用的经典句型参考，希望大家在写作中活学活用。

常用起首语

1)I am much pleased to inform you that.......2)I wish to apply for the teaching position you are offering.3)Your kind letter of November 22th arrived this morning.4)In reply to your letter dated July 4, I want to say...5)Thank you for your letter dated Dec.22, 2000.6)Many thanks for your letter of Sept.5，1997.7)A thousand thanks for your kind letter of June 5,1997.8)Your letter which arrived this morning gave me great comfort.9)Thank you very much for your letter of August 2 and the gift you sent me on Christmas Eve.10)First of all,I must thank you for your kind assistance and high attention to me.11)With great delight I learn from your letter of this Sunday that...12)I am too excited and delighted at your good news.13)I am very obliged to you for your warm congratulations....常用结束语

1)Looking forward to your early reply

2)Hoping to hear from you soon

3)I hope to hear from you very soon.4)We look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.5)Your early reply will be highly appreciated.6)I hope everything will be well with you.7)Please let us know if you want more information.8)I wish you very success in the coming year.9)Please remember me to your family.10)With best regards to your family.11)All the best.12)With love and good wishes.求职申请信常用句型

1.In reply to your advertisement in ~,I respectfully offer my services for the situation.2.With reference to your advertisement in ~ for a / an ~,I offer myself for the post.3.Please consider me an applicant for the position which you advertised in ~.4.Having noticed the enclosed advertisement in ~,I wish to apply for the position referred to.5.In answer to your advertisement in ~ for a ~,I wish to tender my services.6.Your advertisement for a ~ in ~ has interested me.I feel I can fill that position.7.Shall you need an experienced ~ for your ~ next SUMMER?

8.I have been for over five years in the employment of a / an ~ company

9.I have been in the business for the last ~ years, and worked as the director of the...department.10.I've had ~ years' experience with a company as a ~.11.For the last ~ years, I have been and still am a / an ~.12.I'm ~ years of age, female / male, and have had ~ years' experience in a limited company's ~ office

13.I should be very glad to have a personal interview and can furnish references if desired.14.If you desire an interview, I shall be most happy to call in person, on any day and at any time you may appoint.15.Should you think favorably of my application, kindly grant me an interview.16.I trust that you'll give this application your favorable consideration.17.Should you give me a trial, I'll do my utmost to afford you every satisfaction.申诉信常用句型

1.I am sorry to say that we are greatly inconvenienced by the fact that ~.2.I am writing this letter to complain about ~.3.I really must complain about the quality of the ~ I recently got from your company.4.You seem to have supplied us with a product that falls far below the standard we expect.5.The ~ I ordered from your store arrived broken.Obviously, no packing had been placed in the box before it was sent from the warehouse.6.It is now over ~ since we made the above order with you, but the ~ we need badly now haven't arrived yet.7.The product I purchased from you ~ proved to be quite a disappointment.Although it looks exactly the same as the one I saw in your commercial, it actually does not perform the same way.8.As I have no interest in receiving a replacement, I am returning the product to you and demand that a full refund be made to me.9.I'd appreciate it very much if you refund the money I have paid for it.10.We would appreciate it if you would arrange for the replacement of the damaged items.感谢信常用句型

1.Let me tell you how much I liked / appreciated / enjoyed...2.I want you to know how much we / I appreciate...3.We appreciate your taking time to...4.I don't know how I would have managed without your help

5.I hope I can return the favor someday

6.Do let me know if I can ever return the favor

第四篇：考研英语应用文写作攻略

考研英语应用文写作攻略

虽然大纲中罗列了多种应用文类型，包括：投诉信，建议信，申请信，求职信，辞职信，求学信，求助信，感谢信，号召信，邀请信，道歉信，摘要，简历，备忘录，寻物启事，招领启事等，但是在具体的实践中，常常考到的是书信和摘要。尤其在近几年的考研中，应用文写作考的最多的就是书信体应用文。因此本章将详细讲解各类书信以及摘要的写作方法。

投诉信又可称为抱怨信，其主要目的是表达写信人对于某一情况的不满。人们在生活中经常会遇到一些不愉快的事情，比如消费利益受损、正常生活和工作受到干扰等等，有时写封投诉信不失为一个解决办法。

投诉信通常包括以下几个方面的内容：说明投诉的原因并表示遗憾;实事求是地阐述问题发生的经过，切忌夸大其词;指出问题引起的后果;提出批评及处理意见，或敦促对方采取措施，或提出所希望的赔偿以及补救方式。

投诉信的写作策略：说明投诉问题——描述具体情况——期待解决方案。

注意事项：写投诉信时语气要冷静、郑重、克制，不必过于礼貌。但也要就事论事，不能进行人身攻击。同时，在描述问题时尽量采用被动句式，使描述更加客观合理。

例题一

Directions:

You bought an iPhone in a store last week, and you have found that there is something wrong with it.Write a letter to the store manager to explain the problem, express your complaints and suggest a solution.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use “Li Ming”instead.Do not write the address.(10 points)

范文：

Dear Manager，I venture to write to complain about the quality of the iPhone I bought last Friday at your store.I hope I can have a good solution to the problem facing me.During the five days when the iPhone has been in my possession, problems of software have emerged one after another.For one thing, the screen is always black, making the iPhone no difference from a traditional one.For another, the battery is distressing as it supports the iPhone’s operation for only two hours.Therefore, I wish to exchange it for another one or declare a refund.I will appreciate it if my problem receives due attention.Yours，Li Ming

尊敬的经理：

我很冒昧给您写这封信，投诉我上周五在您商店里购买的iPhone手机的质量问题。我也希望我的问题能有很好的解决。

购买至今的五天中，各种软件问题一个接一个地出现。一方面，手机屏幕总是黑屏，我使用起来仿佛和传统手机没有区别。另一方面，电池的状况也不尽如人意，只能让手机工作两个小时。因此，我希望可以换一个新机，否则我要求退款。

我希望这个问题能够得到足够的重视。

李明

谨上

例题二

Directions：

You live in a room in college which you share with another student.You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting.He/She has parties in the room

and sometimes borrows your things without asking you.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college:

1)asking for a new room next term，2)stating that you would prefer a single room and

3)explaining your reasons.You should write with no less than 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use“Li Ming”instead.You do not need to write the address.(10 points)

范文

Dear Sir or Madam，I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next term.I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior.For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him;for another, he regularly holds noisy parties.In addition, he sometimes borrows my things without asking me.In these circumstances, I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind in my assignments.I am sure you will agree that the only solution for me is to move into a room of my own, where I will be free from such distractions.Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

尊敬的女士或先生：

我写此信的目的是要告诉您我希望下学期换个房间，我想要一间单人房，因为我目前合住的住所很不方便。

我提出这一要求是因为我室友做事从不考虑别人。他总有朋友来拜访，还常举行喧闹的聚会。并且，有时他还不经我同意就借走了我的东西。在这种情况下，我觉得没法专心学习，我现在功课就落后了。

我相信您也会觉得解决的办法是换个单间，那样我就不会受到这些干扰了。如果您能帮我找到一间单人房我将不胜感激。我还希望新宿舍不要和现在的宿舍在同一幢楼内，而是离学校越近越好。

第五篇：英语写作考研应用文

考研应用文范文

一.私人信函

范文1(朋友出国，问候他)Directions: One of your best friends, Mary, moved to another city a few days ago.Write a keepintouch letter to her, telling her you missed her, asking how she is going on, and introducing the latest information about yourself.Write in no less than 100 words.You don’t need to write the address.Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter, use Lily instead.Dear Mary，You’ve been on my mind a lot the past few days;I have been missing you so much.Now I feel it was time to sit down and write.Are you settled in yet? Have you met any of your new friends? Things are not a piece of cake for you in a new place.It seems as if you’ve been gone forever.One sad fact about human nature is that we don’t seem to appreciate what we have till it’s gone.That’s how I’m feeling now.So much has happened since you left;I have been to the police station once, because my wallet was stolen on the bus.And I had to prepare for the CET six, I feel extremely exhausted these days.Fortunately, the exam is over, so I get time to write to you.Be sure to write soon.I’m eager to hear from you.Affectionately，Lily

范文2（阿姨送礼，感谢她）

Directions: Your aunt subscribed 21st Century for you as a present.Write a letter to your aunt, expressing your thankfulness, telling her how you like it.Write in no less than 100 words.You don’t need to write the address.Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter, use Ella instead.Dear aunt，Thank you very much for the subscription to订阅 21st Century for me.I have received the latest edition by post mail.Someone must have told you that it is my favorite newspaper;and of course, you know it is very helpful for me to enlarge my vocabulary and enhance my reading comprehension through reading English newspapers.Every week the arrival of a new copy will mean new studying projects to me, and seeing the newspaper will remind me of your kind love.You couldn’t have chosen a better present for me.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely yours，Ella 二.邀请信

范文

Directions: You want to invite Mr.Williams to give a lecture on “American literature” in your college.Supposed you are the assistant of the English department, write a letter and say:

1)the purpose of the invitation.2)the time of the lecture.Your letter should be no less than 100 words.You don’t need to write the address.Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter, use Linda instead.Dear Mr.Williams，I am writing on behalf of the English Department(代表校英语系)to invite you to give a lecture in our college.We know that you are an expert on American literature.As English majors, our students would like to know something about American literature.We would be very grateful if you could give a talk on “Contemporary American Literature” to students of the English Department on Saturday, June 4.If this subject does not suit you, any other similar topic would be welcome as well.We have already had several very interesting talks from some distinguished visitors from various countries and we look forward early to the opportunity to benefit from your experience and wisdom.Yours truly，Linda 三.感谢信

范文

Directions: While your family was on vacation, your friend, Cathy looked after your dog, smart.Now you came back, write a letter to her to show your gratitude.Your letter should be no less than 100 words.You don’t need to write the address.Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter, use Emily instead.Dear Cathy，I am writing to express our heartfelt thanks for taking good care of Smart(狗名)while we were on holiday.He was such a happy dog when we got home;we knew he must have had lots of loving attention.When we used to pick up from the kennel（寄存中心）he would whimper（难过）and carry on for hours.You not only saved us some money, you also spared us the worry of how he was doing while we were away.Your kind help is very much appreciated, not only by smart, but also by our whole family as well.Yours truly，Emily

四.道歉信

范文

Directions: one of your pen friends, John, will be visiting your city.However, for some reasons, you can not meet him at the airport on time.Write a letter asking to wait for you at the airport and tell him how to recognize you.Your letter should be no less than 100 words.You don’t need to write the address.Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter, use Alice instead.Dear John，I am eagerly looking forward to your visit to our city.After all these years of writing to each other, I can not wait to see you.However, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to meet you at the airport on time.The reason is that your flight will arrive early in the morning, and the earliest I can reach the airport will be about an hour after you land.Will you please wait for me in the arrival lounge(旅客休息室)? You can have breakfast while you wait.By the way, as we have never met I must tell you home to identify me: I am of 165cm tall and have a long hair.In addition, I will wear a white skirt and carry a China Daily at hand.Hope we can meet soon.Sincerely yours，Alice

五.祝贺信

范文

Directions: Your friend Jack has got his master’s degree.Write a letter to show your congratulations.Your letter should be no less than 100 words.You don’t need to write the address.Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter, use Wang Li instead.Dear Jack，Heartfelt congratulations on your graduation from the Graduate School.I have good reasons to feel proud of you.I know the degree of master meant many years of assiduous study 勤奋学习and hard work.Now you have come through with flying colors and high honors胜利而光荣地.I have heard of your excellent record in research and extracurricular activities课外活动.In this you took the right road to emerge as a fully-developed young man to society.I take pride in your achievements and avail myself of this opportunity to extend to you my best wishes for your success and happiness.Yours sincerely，Wang Li

六.介绍信

范文

Directions: one of your friends Mary Brown is going to enter Mr.Johnson’s school after her graduation.Write a letter to Mr.Johnson to introduce her.Your letter should be no less than 100 words.You don’t need to write the address.Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter, use Emma instead.Dear Mr.Johnson，I take great pleasure in introducing Mary Brown one of my classmates and best friends to you.She is going to pursue her education as a postgraduate in your university after her graduation here.She and I had lived and studied together for four years.No friend deserves so much love and respect as she does.Now that we have finished our study here we had to part with each other.Will you please give her some guidance in regard to the entrance examination? Any information you can provide, as well as your introduction for him to meet the future tutor shall be appreciated very much.Yours truly，Emma 七.申请信

范文

Directions: You want to apply for a job as a personal secretary to the general manager of a company.Write a letter to the Human Resources Department of that company offering your services.Your letter should be no less than 100 words.You don’t need to write the address.Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter, use Anita instead.Dear Sir or Madam，I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a personal secretary to the general manager.I am fully confident that I am the right person for the job.I know that my future boss have lots of work each day, however, it is exactly the challenge inherent in my perspective job that attracts me and makes me to submit(投递)this application to you.I have worked as the private secretary in an insurance company for two years and gained many experiences.I believe my qualifications and work experiences will combine to produce an excellent work performance.I would like to meet you to discuss the possibility of working in your company at a continent time.I can be reached at 8976-5678.Thank you for considering my application.Please contact me at your earliest convenience.Yours sincerely，Anita

八.建议信

范文

Directions: Your local library intends to improve its service and facilities.As a regular library use, please write a letter to the chief librarian, offering your suggestions.Your letter should be no less than 100 words.You don’t need to write the address.Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter, use Donna instead.Dear Sir or Madam，I am glad to hear that the library is to take some measures to improve its service and facilities.So I am writing to offer my proposals.(建议)

We all know that libraries play a vital role in the education and entertainment of the general reader.In my opinion, our library should do its best to purchase the latest publications as well as make sure that it has a full set of classical and reference works.Another important facility I suggest is the Internet via computers（电子图书馆）.In this way, the library will expand its services to a larger number of readers.All in all, I think a library should take all necessary measures to keep up with the times.I will highly appreciate your consideration of my proposals.Yours sincerely，Donna 九.投诉信

范文

Directions: You found something wrong with the telephone bill you have received from the local post office.You made a call to inquire about this;however the person who answered the call was very rude.Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the post office, explaining the situation and giving your suggestions for improvement.Your letter should be no less than 100 words.You don’t need to write the address.Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter, use Donna instead.Dear Sir，I am writing to let you know the deplorable(可叹的)attitude of one of your staff member.I received my telephone bill for the previous month from you and thought there were some errors in calculation: I had been overcharged for two overseas calls.国际长途费用

However, when I called your Complaints Department, the girl who answered my phone was very rude.For one thing she interrupted me continually, for another she even said that the fault was my own.Needless to say, such a way of dealing with customers is unacceptable.I would like to suggest that the girl in question should be disciplined, and instructed on the proper way to deal with clients.And I hope she can make formal apology to me.An early response will be appreciated.Sincerely yours，Donna 十.咨询信

范文

Directions: You are going to study at a foreign university.Write a letter inquiring about the specific information as regards accommodation, fees and qualifications there.Your letter should be no less than 100 words.You don’t need to write the address.Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter, use Li Hua instead.Dear Sir or Madam，I am a Chinese student who wishes to pursue further study at your university.I plan to start my course next semester, and it would be highly appreciated if you would provide me with some essential information.First, how much are the tuition fees? Though I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to know if there are any scholarships available for international students.Second, I wonder what qualifications I need to follow a course at your university, now I have got a master’s degree in a Chinese university, is it enough? Third, as regards to accommodations, if possible, I would like to have a single room, but if single rooms are expensive, I would be willing to share.I am looking forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed institution.贵校

Yours sincerely，Li Hua

十一.备忘录

范文

Directions: Someone put forward a proposal to adopt the “punch-in” system打卡考勤制度 in her memo in June 12, 2006.Write a memo备忘录 to her with the information below.Your memo should be in no less than 100 words.To: Mr.Brown manager of operations

From: Betty Green Supervisor

Subject: comments on the “punchin” system

Date: September 21

This is further to your memo dated back to June 12, 2006, in which you proposed that the employees adopt the “punch-in” system.I fully agree with you that we should take measures to increase the productivity工作效率 and that we would have a tighter control over the employees if the “punch-in” system is adopted.However, honestly speaking, I don’t think that adopting a tighter system will increase productivity.The most effective way to increase productivity, in my opinion, is to give the employees more incentives鼓励 to work.I think we could further discuss other possibility of achieving this goal.Your consideration of this suggestion would be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely，Betty Green 十二.摘要

范文

Directions: Study the following essay carefully and write a summary in about 100 words.Student Rights---By Jeff Bakersfield

Who knows better than the students themselves what a university should do for them and how they should be treated? Yet how often do students have any say at all in such important issues as faculty selection, curriculum planning, and scheduling? The answer is obvious: never.If university administrations refuse to include student representatives in the decision-making process, something drastic must be done.Let’s examine what is happening right here on our own campus in the areas mentioned above.The first major issue is the selection of faculty members.Never in the history of this college has a student been permitted to interview, examine the credentials of, or even meet prospective professors.All hiring is done by a joint administrative-faculty committee, often made up of people who will not even have extensive dealings with the individuals after they begin teaching.Those who have the most at stake and whose lives and academic careers will be governed by the professorsnever even meet the new teachers until the first class meeting.No one is better equipped to evaluate a professor’s ability to communicate with students than those whom he or she intends to teach.Anyone can read curriculum vitae to ascertain the level of professional training and experience someone has had, but the best judges of a teacher’s ability to teach, which is the primary function of any professor, are undoubtedly the students themselves.www.xiexiebang.com 2005-8-13 2:39:46

Students’ interest in and commitment to appropriate curricula are even more obvious.We have come to college with very specific purposes in mind: to prepare ourselves intellectually and practically for the future.We know what we need to learn in order to compete successfully with others in our chosen fields.Why should we be kept out of the curriculum planning process? If we pay for the textbooks, spend hours in the library doing research, and burn the midnight oil studying for tests and exams, why are we not permitted to give our opinions about the materials we will spend so many hours studying? It is imperative that our views be made known to curriculum planners.Finally, the area of scheduling is of vital interest to students.The hours at which classes are offered affect the workings of our daily lives.Many of us must juggle work and class schedules, but often administrators ignore such problems when they schedule classes.Schedules must be convenient and flexible so that all students have equal opportunities to take the most popular classes and those which are most essential to their majors.If students helped with scheduling, never would there be two required courses offered at the same time for only one semester per academic year.Never would we have to wait two or three semesters to take a course that is a prerequisite for other desired courses, nor would we have to race across campus in ten minutes to get from one class to the next.Students are vitally concerned with the scheduling area.W004-5-27 22:15:08

In the 1960s and early 1970s, students were not too shy or fearful to demonstrate against the injustices they saw in the draft system and the Vietnam conflict.Why should students today be afraid to voice their opinions about the very important issues that affect their very lives? It is imperative that students act to protect their own rights.Fellow university students, I urge that you meet together and draw up demands to be presented to the administration.We must take the future in our own hands, not be led to it like passive sheep.Let us act now so that we will not be sorry later!

Summary(摘要)

In his essay, Student Rights, Jeff Bakersfield stated that students had the right to be involved in university administrative decisions.Using the current situation on his own college campus as an example, he emphasized that students should be included in decisions regarding selection of faculty, curriculum planning, and scheduling of classes.He pointed out that students not only had more vital interests in the decisions made in these areas than those who traditionally settle the issues, but that they were also better equipped through their experiences as students to make intelligent decisions about them.Bakersfield concluded by stating that it was crucial for students to become actively involved in protesting unilateral administrative decisions and proposed that they meet to discuss their mutual interests and demands.译文:

在学生的权利一文中，Jeff Bakersfield强调学生有权利参与学校行政决定的过程。他举了他所在学校作为例子，强调学生应该参与到员工招募、课程设置和课时安排等方面的决定。他指出学生对这些决定比那些做决定的人更感兴趣，另外，让他们做出关系切身利益的决定使他们更能成为好学生。Bakersfield 总结到学生应该主动要求打破原来单边决定模式，学生应该在一起讨论他们共同的兴趣和要求。

十三.报告

Directions: You are now preparing for your graduation paper on the advantage and disadvantage of electronic mail;write a progress report to your tutor telling him what you have done last week.Your report should be no less than 100 words.To: Professor Barbara Felton

From: James Green

Date: April 12, 2005

Subject: First progress report on research paper

This is the first of the two progress reports you asked me to submit about my research paper on the advantages and disadvantages of electronic mail.Last week, I gathered information from library materials and from an interview.Of the twelve references listed on my proposal, I found only nine, for others I will go to search in a larger library.As far as interview concerned, I had an extended interview with Mr.Moore of General Dynamics, who gave me some brochures as well as a copy of a report on electronic mail he wrote for General Dynamics-materials I hope to use in my paper.Starting tomorrow, I will begin organizing my paper.I will be able to submit a rough draft by the end of this month.Sincerely yours，James Green

译文

这是您要求我做的有关电子邮件的利与弊论文的两个进展报告中的第一篇。

上周我收集的资料主要来源于图书馆和采访。您建议的12本参考书，我只找到了9本，其他的我准备到大些的图书馆去找。

至于采访，我对研究基础动力学的摩尔先生进行了一次深入的采访。他给了我一些介绍，同时还有一份他写的关于电子邮件的报告，我打算放到我的论文中。

从明天开始，我要开始组织我的论文。在月底应该可以将草稿给您看。

您诚挚的：詹姆士·格林