六级作文成功例句和开头结尾方法

第一篇：六级作文成功例句和开头结尾方法

1.不可否认，动物在维持地球生态系统的微妙平衡上起到了重要作用。

It is an undeniable fact that animals play a vital role in maintaining the subtle balance of the earth’s ecological system.2.当前，大学学生毕业找工作有越来越难的势头。

These days there is a growing tendency for college students to have difficulties in finding job when they graduate.3.学校中普遍做法是，（至少在中国学校这样）学生接受老师的现有的地位，接受老师教的东西并按照老师说的去做。)

The normal practice at school(or at least in most Chinese schools)is that the students take the teachers as they are, accept what are taught and do what they are told to do.尽管双方的论点都有道理，我个人同意前一种看法。

Although both sides of the argument have their strong points, I personally agree with the former view.5.在我看来，人们生活的物质环境与他们有多快乐关系不大。

In my opinion, there is little correlation between the circumstances of people’s lives and how happy they are.6.对于支持做实验的人们来说，从某些物种中获得第一手知识和资料，足以为继续在实验室做实验提供理由。

For the people who lend their support to such experiments, the gaining of first-hand knowledge and information about certain species provides adequate justification fit continuing the killing of animals in laboratories.7.一位伟大的作家曾写到：工作是医治人间一切病痛和疾苦的万应良药。如果是这样的话，那么现在的状况应使我们想一想，强迫普通工人在50岁退休是否合理。

One of the great early writers wrote that: Work is the grand cure of all the maladies and miseries that ever beset mankind.If this is true, then the present situation should make us wonder whether the measure that the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50 is reasonable.8.越来越多的人通过互联网进入了“信息时代”。针对这一现象，一些人认为互联网消除了障碍，为人们提供了与世界即时链接的途径。但是，他们有没有意识到迅速发展的信息技术也能导致侵犯隐私？

An increasing number of people are joining the “Information Age ” via the Internet.In reaction to the phenomenon , some say the Internet has removed barriers and provided people with immediate access to the world.But do they realize that rapidly advancing information technology can also lead to intrusions of privacy ?

9.我们国家（中国）如今面临的紧迫问题之一是克服城乡收入水平之间的差距。

One of the pressing problems facing our nation(China)today is overcoming disparities in urban and rural income levels.10.也许当今困扰国家的最危险的现象是遍布各级政府的官员腐败。

Perhaps the most dangerous phenomenon gripping the nation today is official corruption , which is pervasive in all levels of government.11.通货膨胀又是一个我们必须学会面对的痛苦的新情况。

Inflation is yet another new and bitter truth we must learn to face.12.城区的迅速扩大在很多情况下侵占了宝贵的可耕地，使人们普遍认识到发展不能以

牺牲农业为代价。政府更加重视这个问题，越来越多的不必要的工程被终止。

The rapid expansion of urban areas has in many cases encroached on valuable cultivatable land , and led to a general recognition that development must not be carried at the cost of agriculture.The government has attached greater importance to the problem and an increasing number of redundant projects are being terminated.13.世界上越来越多的人认识到加强环境保护的必要性。

There is a growing worldwide awareness of the need for strengthened environmental protection.14.越来越多的人开始意识到财富不是幸福的惟一先决条件。

A growing number of people are beginning to realize that wealth is not the sole prerequisite for happiness..既然世界上许多国家仍被饥饿和贫困所困扰，为什么有的政府还坚持花费数十亿美元用于太空探索？现在越来越多的人提出这个问题。

Why do some governments persist in spending billions of dollars on space exploration when starvation and poverty continue to grip many countries throughout the world? This particular question is being raised by an ever increasing number of people.16.越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。

An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.17.说到教育，大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。

When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.18.许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。

Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person's physical fitness.19.应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量，努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。

Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.20.无可否认，空气污染是一个极其严重的问题：城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.21.考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必须采取有效的措施。

In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.22.在过去的几十年，先进的医疗技术已经使得人们比过去活的时间更长成为可能。In the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.23.我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境。We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.24.人们相信拥有计算机技术可以获得更多工作或提升的机会。

People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.25.我同意后者，有如下理由：

For my part, I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons: 26.在给出我的观点之前，我想看看双方的观点是重要的。Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.27.这一观点正受到越来越多人的质疑。

This view is now being questioned by more and more people.28.环境学家指出：持续增加的污染不仅会导致像全球变暖这样严重的问题，而且还将威胁到人类在这个星球的生存。

Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet.29.考虑到这些严重的状况，我们比以往任何时候更需要像自行车这样的环保型交通工具。

In view of such serious situation, environmental tools of transportation like bicycle are more important than any time before.尽管自行车有许多明显的优点，但是它也存在它的问题。

Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle, it is not without its problem.Chapter One 文章开头句型

1-1 对立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,适用于有争议性的主题.[1].When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that.......But I think/view a bit differently.[2].When it comes to...., some people bielive that.......Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true.There is probably some truth in both arguements/statements , but(I tend to the profer/latter...)

[3].Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that....They claim/ believe/argue that...But I wonder/doubt whether.....1-2 现象法 引出要剖析的现象或者问题, 然后评论.[1].Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of)...has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern.[2].Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of...has been brought into focus.(has been brouth to public attention)

[3].Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality...is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.-----To be continued！

1-3 观点法----开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法.[1].Never history has the change of..been as evident as...Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of..benn more visible/popular than...[2].Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginnig/coming to realize/accept/(be aware)that...[3].Now there is a growing awareness/recognation ot the necessity to......Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of......[4].Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that.......1-4 引用法-----先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 来引出文章要展开论述的观点!

[1].“Knowledge is power.” such is the remark made by Bacon.This remark has been shared by more and more people.“Education is not complete with gradulation.” Such is the opnion of a great American philosopher.Now more and more people share his opnion.[2].“.........” How often we hear such statements/words like thoses /this.In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this “......”.1-5 比较法------通过对过去,现在 两种不同的倾向,观点的比较 , 引出文章要讨论的观点.[1].For years,...had been viewed as...But people are taking a fresh look now.With the growing..., people........[2].People used to think that...(In the past,....)But people now share this new.原因结果分析

3-1-1.基本原因---分析某事物时, 用此句型说明其基本的或者多方面的原因.[1].Why...? For one thing..For another...[2].The answer to this problem invovles many factors.For one thing...For another......Still another...[3].A number of factors , both physical and psychological affect..../both individual and social contribute to....3-1-2 另一原因--------> 在分析了基本原因之后, 再补充一个次要的或者更重要时用!

[1].Another important factor is....[2]....is also responsible for the change/problem.[3].Certainly , the...is not the sole reason for.....3-1-3 后果影响---------分析某事物可能造成的后果或者带来的影响.[1].It will produce a profound/far-reaching effect/impact on....[2].In involves some serious consequence for........比较对照句型

3-2-1.两者比较---> 比较两事物, 要说出其一超过另一个, 或肯定一事物的优点, 也肯定其缺点的时候用!

[1].The advantages gained from A are much greater than the advantages we gain from B.[2].Indeed, A carries much weight when compared with B.[3].There is no doubt that it has its negative effects as well as positive effects.3-2-2.两者相同/相似------> 比较两事物共同都有或者共同都没有的特点时用!

[1].A and B have several thing in common.They are similar in that.....[2].A bears some sriking resemblance(s)to B.Chapter Three 文章结尾形式

2-1 结论性---------通过对文章前面的讨论 ,引出或重申文章的中心思想及观点.[1].From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that.....[2].In summary/In a word , it is more valuable.......2-2 后果性------揭示所讨论的问题若不解决, 将产生的严重后果.[1].We must call for an immediate method , because the current phenomenon of...,if allowed to proceed, will surely lead to the heavy cost of.......[2].Obviously , if we ignore/are blind to the problem , there is every chance that..will be put in danger.2-3 号召性--------呼吁读者行动起来, 采取行动或提请注意.[1].It is time that we urged an immediate end to the undesirable tendcy of......[2].It is essential thar effective measures should be taken to correct the tendency.2-4 建议性--------对所讨论的问题提出建议性的意见, 包括建议和具体的解决问题的方法.[1].While it cannot be solved immediately, still there are ways.The most popular is....Another method is...Still another one is.....[2].Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward the situation.2-5 方向性的结尾方式----其与建议性的唯一差别就是对问题解决提出总的, 大体的方向或者指明前景.[1].Many solutions are being offered here , all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough.The problem should be recognized in a wide way.[2].There is no quick method to the issue of.., but..might be helpful/benefical.[3].The great challenge today is......There is much difficulty , but........2--6 意义性的结尾方式--------> 文章结尾的时候,从更高的更新的角度指出所讨论的问题的重要性以及其深远的意义![1].Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success, but the pay off might be worth the effort.It will not only benefit but also benefit.....[2].In any case, whether it is posotive or negative, one thing is certain that it will undoubtedly..结尾万能公式

1． 结尾万能公式一：如此结论

Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus

Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…

2． 结尾万能公式二：如此建议

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.

第二篇：英语作文经典开头和结尾例句

古人说：“凤头豹尾”，就是说开头要写得有姿有彩，像凤凰的头那样。英语作文也是如此，好的文章的开头，应做到开门见山，用简单明白的叙述引出文章的话题，使读者了解文章要谈论什么，并饶有兴趣地沿着你的思路读下去。作文常见的开头形式大致有以下几种：

1．开门见山，揭示主题。

文章开头就交待清楚文章的主题是什么：如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎样度假)的开头是：I spent my last vacation happily.再如“Honesty”(谈诚实)一文中的开头：

Honesty is one of the best virtues．An honest man is always trusted and respecte-d．On the contrary，one who tells lies is regarded as a “liar”，and is looked upon badly by honest people．

2．交代人物、事情、时间或环境的开头。

在文章的开头，先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。例如“A Trip to Jin shan”(去金山旅游)的开头：The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan．It took three hours to ride there．The long trip made us very tired，but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us．

3．回忆性的开头。

用回忆的方法来开头。例如“A Trip to the Taishan Mountain”(泰山游)的开头是：

I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday．

4．概括性的开头。

即对在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。如“The Happiness of Reading Book-s”(读书的快乐)的开头：

People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world．But l say that to read books is more valuable.than anything else，because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power．

5．介绍环境式的开头。

即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介绍的事物。如:“An Accident”(一场事故)的开头是：

It was a rainy and windy morning．The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low，and the street was nearly empty．I was on my way back to school．Suddenly，aspeeding car came round the corner．

6．交待写作目的的开头。

在文章的一开头就交待写作目的，如通过文章要表扬谁，批评谁，或说明一个什么问题等。如“Pollution Control”(控制污染)的开头：

In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of

pollution control．

如果把开头比作“爆竹”，那么结尾就有如“撞钟”。古人说过：“好的结尾，有如咀嚼干果，品尝香茗，令人回味再三。” 文章结尾的作用是概括全文内容，进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想，使文章意义表达得更加深刻。文章结尾的形式常见的有以下几种：

1．首尾呼应，画龙点睛。

在文章的结尾，把含义较深的话放在末尾，以点明主题，深化主题，起到画龙点睛的效果。如“I Cannot Forget Her”(我忘不了她)的结尾：

After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my life.I was sad over her passing away, but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.2．重复主题句。

结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上，达到强调的效果。如“I Love My Home Town”(我爱家乡)的结尾：

I love my home town, and I love its people.They too have changed.They are going all out to do more for the good of our motherland.3.自然结尾。

随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。如“Fishing”(钓鱼)的结尾：

I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours, but my brother caught many more.Tired from fishing, we lay down on the river bank, bathing in the sun.We returned home very late.4．含蓄性的结尾。

用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接点明作者的看法，而是让读者自己去领会和思考。如“A Day of Harvesting”(收割的日子)的结尾：

Evening came before we realized it.We put down our sickles and looked at each other.Our clothes were wet with sweat, but on every face there was a smile.5．用反问结尾。

虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，并具有特别的强调作用，引起读者深思。如 “Should We Learn to Do Housework?”(我们要不要学做家务?)的结尾：

Everyone should learn to do housework.Don't you agree, boys and girls?

6．指明方向，激励读者。

结尾表示对将来的展望，或期待读者投入行动。如“Let's Go in for Sports”(让我们参加体育运动)的结尾：

As we have said above, sports can be of great value.They not only make people live happily but also help people to learn virtues and do their work bettter.A sound mind is in a sound body.Let's go in for sports

第三篇：六级作文开头结尾+作文公式

准备项目：对于社会热点问题和热议现象，四六级作文也希望大学生有自己的见解和主张，比如盗版现象，电子书，以及一次性塑料袋等。

准备重点：对于这一命题，我们主要以两种模板来应对两种写作模式。一种以社会热点引出的问题开头，着重于现象背后的缘由以及其解决方案。另一种以分析可争议问题的两面性为主体。

准备内容：

Hot Issue型

（1）模板一

With the development of modern industry, more and more people are concerned about the problem that ______________（主题问题）.Accordingly, _______________________________（伴随主题问题出现的新问题）is becoming more and more serious。

Confronted with ___________________________（主题问题），we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing, _________________________（解决方法1）.For another, _________________________________（解决方法2）.Finally, _________________________________（解决方法3）。

As far as I am concerned ,the best way out is ________________________（解决方法3）.Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because____________________（解决方法3的优点和好处）。

（2）模板二

With the development of the society, with the advent of _____________（相关事物或现象），we have to face a problem that ______________________（主题问题）。

What are the reasons for it? In the following paragraphs, I’ll venture to explore the reasons.To start with, _____________________（阐述原因1）.Moreover, __________________（阐述原因2）.In addition, _______________________（阐述原因3）。

In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures should be taken.For one thing, it is high time that people all over China realized the importance of __________________（解决主题问题）.For another, the government should issue strict laws and regulations in order to put the situation under control。

利弊型

（1）模板一

Nowadays many people prefer __________（主题）because it plays a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.On the one hand, ________________（主题的优点1）.On the other hand, ___________________（主题的优点2）。

But everything can be divided into two.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that ___________________（主题的缺点1）.To make matters worse, __________________________（主题的缺点2）。

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects far out weighits negative aspects.Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, ________（主题）itself is neither good nor bad.It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to our society。

（2）模板二

With the development of science and human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into reality.Some of them have positive effects on our life ,but some are distasteful.The phenomenon of ________（主题现象）is an example of the former / latter one。

There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects.To start with, __________________（原因1）.Furthermore, ______________________（原因2）.Eventually, __________________________（原因3）。

Good as ____________（主题现象）is, it has, unfortunately, its disadvantages.The apparent example is that ___________（缺点例子1）.In addition, ___________（缺点例子2）。

On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of the progress of the modern society.There is still a long way for us to improve / eliminate __________（主题现象）and make our life more comfortable。

时间安排：

这一部分作文是议论和说明写作方法并存，属于备考的重点，建议每个模板都可以套用2个真题或模拟题练习。

一、开头万能公式

1.开头万能公式一：

名人名言：有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？”很好办：编！原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理，而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？

经典句型：A proverb says,“ You are only young once.”（适用于已记住的名言）It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（适用于自编名言）更多经典句型：As everyone knows, No one can deny that„

2.开头万能公式二：

数字统计原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。原则上在议论文当中不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起来这个数字文绉绉的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造：

Honesty

根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。

Travel by Bike

根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。

Youth

根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。

Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?

根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。

更多句型：A recent statistics shows that „

二、结尾万能公式

1.结尾万能公式一：如此结论

说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：

Obviously（此为过渡短语），we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！

更多过渡短语：

to sum up, in conclusion ,in brief, on account of this ,thus

更多句型：

Thus, it can be concluded that„，Therefore, we can find that„

2.结尾万能公式二：如此建议

如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？更多句型：

Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.

第四篇：作文开头结尾方法

作文开头结尾建模

◆文章开头，应如“凤头”一般鲜明、生动、新颖，引人入胜。我们作文，开卷之初，当以奇句妙语夺目，使人一见而倾心拍案。

开头的总要求——

①美：精致、美丽、大气、深沉，鲜亮„„开头是给读者的最初印象，一定要精心雕刻。②短：开头要精练、简练，不可啰嗦。一般而言，少于50字为好。

③扣：开头最好或隐或显、或深或浅地扣住文章主题，以使读者即刻明了文章是切合题意的。

◆文章结尾，当如咀嚼干果，品尝香茗，令人回味再三。”考场作文，结尾绝不可等闲视之。

好的文章结尾，一般如下：

①扣题 好的结尾，一般要对开头或隐或显表达的主题“再提”一遍。据此，结尾最好再次扣题，只是，语句不得与开头完全一样，须得善于变换词句。

②简洁 语句要简短，三十字以内即可。

③悠远 结尾最好如撞钟之后，动作已停，但余音袅袅，启人深思。

◆我们以2010年全国卷“深阅读与浅阅读”材料作文为例，来说明文章的开头、结尾方法。

1.直入法 不卖关子，不绕弯子，开门见山，切入话题，语言简洁精练。

开头：看了材料，我深有感触。时代风云变幻，世事沧桑流转，浅阅读，反映出现代人急功近利的心态。（“浅阅读，反映出现代人急功近利的心态”是文章主题。）

相应结尾：结尾最好扣住主题，如匆忙收尾，可将开头语句的意思，变换方式，再说一遍。如：风云变幻，沧桑流转，你还抱着浅阅读那种急功近利的心态吗？

2.景物法 以简洁的景物描写开头，或渲染气氛，或描摹场景，以为文章主题的出现蓄势。

开头：和风吹面，柳绿桃红。桃花林里，传来清脆的读书声。此情此景，让人不禁心生感慨：尽管浅阅读风头很盛，但深阅读仍在人间。（“尽管浅阅读风头很盛，但深阅读仍在人间”是文章主题。）

相应结尾：以简洁的景物描写收尾，或渲染气氛，或描摹场景。如：芬芳的桃花林里，又传来女孩的读书声。

3.警句法 用警醒人心的句子开头，或给读者当头棒喝，或与读者丝丝心语，或柔或刚地“敲打”读者的心扉。

开头：浅阅读是蜻蜓点水，只有微微涟漪；深阅读如下潜深海，方得无限宝藏。（此句暗含褒贬，暗扣主题。）

相应结尾：可安排警句，以再一次警醒作者。如：读书治学需求深，浅阅读，毕竟还是“浅”了点吧？

4．场景法 开头设置一个场景，或静美，或激越，引领读者走进场景，与作者同喜同悲。

开头：窗外天空，疏星点点；室内书桌，茶香幽幽。我打开书，静静地开始一段美妙的心灵旅程。（此句，场景优美，读者容易被引入其中。此句，没有扣题。）

相应结尾：同样可安排优美场景，以诱发读者心灵激荡的涟漪。如：望窗外，月光如水；看室内，茶香犹存……

5．设问法 用一简短设问句开头，容易引发读者思考。开头：书中有“黄金屋”吗？有。深阅读和浅阅读相结合，就能够走进知识素养的“黄金屋”。（第二句，就是文章主题。）相应结尾：结尾可以呼应开头的设问。如：朋友，让我们不懈求索，直达“黄金屋”吧。6．引用法 引用与文章主题密切关联的诗歌、名句、名言、歌曲等开头，精彩鲜亮。开头：“几百年人家无非积善，第一等好事只是读书。”天下第一等好事，就是沉入到书籍里面。深阅读，就是天下第一等好事。（最后一句“深阅读，就是天下第一等好事”是文章主题。）

相应结尾：亦可引用诗歌、名句、名言、歌曲等。如：朱熹说：“读书有三到，谓心到，眼到，口到。”朱熹的“三到”，自然是指深阅读了。

7．时尚法 选用实际生活中的时尚场景细节开头，显得文章很“前卫”。

开头：朋友发来电子邮件，说近日不喜欢读思想深刻的文章，只喜欢阅读时尚的漫画等消遣读物。我想，朋友现在的状态，就是喜欢浅阅读吧。（时尚交际手段，点出话题；未点出中心论点。）

相应结尾：结尾可与开头呼应。如：我打开邮箱，给朋友写了以上文字。点击“发送”，瞬间直达。

8．修辞法 使用适当的修辞手段，可为开头大大增色。

开头：深阅读因其深，方有大收获；浅阅读惟其浅，只有小领悟。（对偶修辞）阅读，可以陶冶人的情操；阅读，可以激发人的志趣；阅读，可以活跃人的思维„„（排比修辞）

相应结尾：使用适当的修辞手段，可为结尾大大增色。如：惟有深阅读，才得大收获；惜哉浅阅读，只得小领悟。然否？

9．类比法 根据两种事物在某些特征上的相似性，作出它们在其他特征上也可能相似的结论。类比法能使开头新颖别致，增强吸引力和表达效果。

开头：下潜深海，方得大量宝藏；深阅读，才有无限收获。（两个分句形成类比，第一句是类体，第二句是本体。）

相应结尾：聚沙成塔，集腋成裘，不懈深阅读，必有大收获。

第五篇：作文经典开头方法及结尾方法

作文经典开头方法及结尾方法

凤头方法：

1、修辞式开头：

① 引用式。开头或引用名言警句，点明中心；或引用人物语言，突出人物性格；或引

用诗歌，唤起读者共鸣；或引用俗话谚语，说明事理等等。

人们都说“桂林山水甲天下”。——《桂林山水》

俗话说：“以历史为镜照一代人，以时间为镜照一个人；一刻是一天的缩影，一

天是一生的缩影。”我多么希望今天就是我一生的缩影啊！——《成长的缩影》

俗话说：“不听老人言，吃亏在眼前。”今天，就在我身上发生了一件这样的事

情。——《一件后悔的事》

② 对比式。通过对比，更加突出所写事物的特点，突出中心。

我喜欢生机勃勃的春天，喜欢骄阳似火的夏天，喜欢银装素裹的冬天，但我更

喜欢硕果累累的秋天。——《丰收的秋天》

我的奶奶与别人的奶奶不同。别人的奶奶面容总是那么慈祥，说话总是那么温

和，而我的奶奶却常用那张冬瓜似的脸对我微笑，用那沙哑的嗓子给我讲故事，还用那双饱经风霜的手为我洗衣做饭。——《我的奶奶》

小草虽然没有月季的娇艳欲滴，没有玫瑰的高贵华丽，没有荷花的亭亭玉立，它是无名的，但它却有独特的性格、独特的精神、独特的品质。——《无名小草》 ③ 设问式。开头就提出问题，或引起读者注意，或激发读者思考，或造成悬念引人入

胜。

咦，我们班的同学朝这边走过来了。你笑什么？哦，你一定是笑这伙人高的高，矮的矮，胖的胖，廋的廋。是的，这群人当中最矮的——一米四三，如果你不是在这一群人里发现他，你一定以为他才三年级呢！那最高的——一米七，标准的运动员模样。这最胖的六十公斤，她打破过铅球的学校记录呢！最廋的——三十二公斤。——《我班的同学》

④ 排比式。以一组排比句开头，能起到增强文势，增加感情强烈度，突出文章中心的作用。

我们带着绚丽多彩的青春梦想，带着夏日里蒸腾不尽的蓬勃气息，带着圣洁、执着的文学之梦，走进南京，走进江南画卷。——《写意南京》

2、开门见山点题式开头：开门见山，直接点明中心。

翠鸟喜欢停在水边的苇杆上。——《翠鸟》

我有一个非常好的邻居，她就是肖奶奶。她身边只有一个小孙子，儿女不经常回来。肖奶奶不但非常爱孩子，还喜欢帮助孩子。——《我的好邻居》

3、总起式开头：开头总领全文。

马克思和恩格斯是好朋友。他们共同研究学问，共同领导国际工人运动，共同办报，编杂志，共同起草文件。——《伟大的友谊》

4、描写式开头：或描写人物外貌，或描写动物外形，或描写建筑外观，或描写周围环境，或描写人物语言等，给人一个鲜明的印象。

① 描写外貌：

我的同桌名叫刘韵。圆圆的脸蛋，黑葡萄似的大眼睛，非常神气，平时还喜欢

把黑瀑布般的头发扎成“马尾巴”。怎么样，我的同桌挺可爱的吧？可是，她却有一个跟外貌极不相称的“毛病”——小气。——《小气的同桌》

② 描写动物：

一身乌黑的羽毛，光滑漂亮，一对俊俏轻快的翅膀，加上剪刀似的尾巴，这就

是活泼机灵的小燕子。——《燕子》

③ 描写环境：

四周静极了，只有风吹过树梢，发出呼呼的鸣叫。我的心沉沉的，沉沉的，世

界上仿佛只剩下我踽踽（jǔ）独行。——《那一天》

5、回忆式开头：设置悬念，吸引读者。

望着这位新来的语文老师，我不禁想起了五年级时的语文老师，想起了他给我们上的第一次语文课，想起了他那浓浓的乡音，想起了他那含泪的眼睛。——《记忆》

每当看到我那双整旧如新的布鞋，看到鞋头上那密密麻麻的针脚，我就会想起那寒风中的一幕，就会想起那位可亲可敬的补鞋老人，——《补鞋老人》

6、抒情式开头：开头直抒胸臆，以情感人。

我的故乡在佳木斯，美丽的松花江从这里蜿蜒流过。我爱佳木斯，我更爱松花江。——《我爱松花江》

豹尾方法：

1、呼应式结尾：结尾或点题，与文题遥相呼应，或与开头相呼应，总结全文，使文章结构

严谨，浑然一体，中心更加鲜明。

这件事已经过去很久了，但每次想起它，我都会觉得既好笑，又得意。

附开头：在我金色的童年里，发生过许许多多的事，但有一件事令我最得意，最开心。——《一件最得意的事》

2、抒情式结尾：结尾直接抒发作者的感情，以引起读者的共鸣，从中受到感染，受到教育。

别了，我亲爱的老师，我深深眷恋的母校。你们的教诲、你们的恩情我永志不忘。当你们曾经培育过的雏鹰终于展翅翱翔于高空，当你们亲手种下的小树终于结下累累硕果，当你们播下的种子终于在各个岗位上开出绚烂的鲜花……那时，请你们骄傲吧！我知道，那掌声永远属于你，那赞扬永远属于你，那光彩永远属于你！——《别了，老师、母校》

3、呼吁式结尾：表达的思想感情更加强烈，更能唤起读者的情感共鸣。

珍惜水资源，保护水资源，是我们人类刻不容缓的责任！希望大家都参与到我们的“环卫小组”来，为了我们美好的生活环境出一份力！——《我们的环卫小组》

4、含蓄式结尾：文章以借物或借景抒情和联想结尾，语言含蓄，不直言文章的中心，给读

者留下思考、想象的空间，使读者感到余味无穷，从而领悟文章所表达的思想情感。

擦干了眼泪，我把老班长留下的鱼钩小心地包起来，放在贴身的衣兜里。我想：等革命胜利以后，一定要把它送到革命烈士纪念馆去，让我们的子子孙孙都来瞻仰它。在这个长满红锈的鱼钩上，闪烁着灿烂的金色的光芒。——《金色的鱼钩》

5、总结式结尾：文章结尾给全文进行总结，进一步深化中心，使读者加深对全文内容的理

解，留下更深刻的印象。

多好的古井啊，它不仅为乡亲们提供着生命的泉水，还陶冶着乡亲们的品格，使他们懂得应该怎样做人。——《古井》

6、排比式结尾：围绕文章中心以一组排比句总结全文，更加突出中心，使主旨更加鲜明。

我想融进这绿色的海洋，分享这丰收的喜悦；我想插上翅膀飞向广阔的天空，轻轻地伏在云彩上俯瞰家乡清秀的脸膛；我想变成一滴小小的水珠，融入村头的小溪，欢快地唱起家乡的赞歌。——《家乡赞歌》