2014年大学英语六级写作之挑战与改变

第一篇：2014年大学英语六级写作之挑战与改变

题目：挑战与改变

范文示例：

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change.Others , however, think that change is always a good thing.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Over the last half century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations.This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis.This means that change is not always a personal option, but an inescapable fact of life, and we need to constantly adapt to keep pace with it.Those people who believe they have achieved some security by doing the same, familiar things are living in denial.Even when people believe they are resisting change themselves, they cannot stop the world around them from changing.Sooner or later they will find that the familiar jobs no longer exist, or that the ‘safe’ patterns of behavior are not longer appropriate.However, reaching the conclusion that change is inevitable is not the same as assuming that ‘change is always for the better.’ Unfortunately, it is not always the case that new things are promoted because they have good impacts for the majority of people.A lot of innovations are made with the aim of making money for a few.This is because it is the rich and powerful people in our society who are able to impose changes(such as in working conditions or property developments)that are in their own interests.In conclusion, I would say that change can be stimulating and energizing for individuals when they pursue it themselves, but that all change, including that which is imposed on people, does not necessarily have good outcomes.

第二篇：大学英语六级写作

模版1some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that 观点1.but other people take an opposite side.they firmly believe that 观点2.as for me, i agree to the former/latter idea.there are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.first of all, 论据1.more importantly, 论据2.most important of all, 论据3.in summary, 总结观点.as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心.或 from above, we can predict that 预测.模版2people hold different views about x.some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2.as far as i am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.for one thing, 论据1.for another, 论据2.last but not the least, 论据3.to conclude, 总结观点.as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心.或 from above, we can predict that 预测.模版3there is no consensus of opinions among people about x（争论的焦点）。some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。as far as i am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.the reasons are obvious.first of all, 论据1。furthermore, 论据2。among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.that is, 论据3。a natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心.或 from above, we can predict that 预测.1)We should take some effective measures.2)We should try our best to overcome(con quer)the difficulties.3)We should do our utmost in doing sth.4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.11.表示结论1)In short，it can be said that...2)It may be briefly summed up as follows.3)From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that...12.套语1)It’s well known to us that...2)As is known to us，...3)This is a topic that is being widely talked about.4)From the graph(table，chart)listed above，it can be seen that...5)As aproverb says，“Where there is a will，there is a way.)开篇1)Many nations have been faced with the problem of...2)Recently the problem has been brought into focus.3)Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.4)Recently the issue has aroused great concern among...5)Nowadays there is a growing concern over...6)Never in our history has the idea that...been so popular.7)Faced with..., quite a few people argue that...8)According to a recent survey,...9)With the rapid development of...,...八)结尾1)From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that...2)It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop...3)It is necessary that steps should be taken to...4)In conclusion, it is imperative that...5)There is no easy method, but...might be of some help.6)To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must...7)In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.8)With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.9)We might do more than identify the cause;it is important to take actions to...10)Taking all these into account, we...11)Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...二、用于描写图表和数据

1.It has increased by three times as compared with that of 1998.2.There is an increase of 20% in total this year.3.It has been increased by a factor of 4since 1995.4.It would be expected to increase 5 times.5.The table shows a three times increase over that of last year.6.It was decreased twice than that of the year 1996.7.The total number was lowered by 10%.8.It rose from 10-15 percent of the total this year.9.Compared with 1997, it fell from 15 to 10 percent.10.The number is 5 times as much as that of 1995.11.It has decreased almost two and half times, compared with…

三、用于解释性和阐述性论说文

1.Everybody knows that…

2.It can be easily proved that…

3.It is true that…

4.No one can deny that

5.One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is…

6.The chief reason is that…

7.We must recognize that…

8.There is on doubt that…

9.I am of the opinion that…

10.This can be expressed as follows;

11.To take …for an example…

12.We have reason to believe that

13.Now that we know that…

14.Among the most convincing reasons given, one should be mentioned…

15.The change in …largely results from the fact that

16.There are several causes for this significant growth in…,first …,second …,finally…

17.A number of factors could account for the development in…

18.Perhaps the primary reason is…

19.It is chiefly responsible of…

20.The reasons for…are complicated, And probably they are found in the fact…

21.Here are several possible reasons, excerpt that…

22.Somebody believes/argues/holds/insists/thinks that…

23.It is not simple to give the reason for this complicated phenomenon…

24.Different people observes it in different ways.四、用于文章的开头

1.As the proverb says…

2.It goes without saying tan…

3.Generally speaking…

4.It is quite clear than because…

5.It is often said that …

6.Many people often ask such question:“…？”

7.More and more people have come to realize…

8.There is no doubt that…

9.Some people believe that…

10.These days we are often told that, but is this really the case?

11.One great man said that…

12.Recently the issue of… has been brought to public attention.13.In the past several years there has been…

14.Now it is commonly held that… but I doubt whether…

15.Currently there is a widespread concern that…

16.Now people in growing number are coming to realize that…

17.There is a general discussion today about the issue of …

18.Faced with…, quite a few people argue that…, but other people conceive differently.五、用于文章的结尾

1.from this point of view…

2.in a word…

3.in conclusion…

4.on account of this we can find that…

5.the result is dependent on…

6.therefore, these findings reveal the following information:

7.thus, this is the reason why we must…

8.to sum up …

9.as far as…be concerned, I believe that…

10.It is obvious that…

11.There is little doubt that…

12.There is no immediate solution to the problem of …, but …might be helpful

13.None of the solutions is quite satisfactory.The problem should be examined in a new way.14.It is high time that we put considerable emphasis on…

15.Taking into account all these factors, we may safely reach the conclustion that…

●过渡性句型：

1)this is true that...2)This is true, no doubt, but...3)...also...4)It is one thing to...;it is another to...●描写图表和数据的句型

1)...rank first(both)in...2)...in proportion to...3)A is by far the largest...4)As many as....5)The number is...times as much as that of...6)The figure has nearly doubled/tripled, as against that of last year.7)It accounts for 35% of...8)By comparison with..., it decreased/increased/fell from...to...9)...rise rapidly(slowly)10)...remain level...11)...reach...12)There is a slight/slow/steady/rapid rise/increase demand./income./population./prices./production./decrease/decline/reduction/fall/drop in

13)be on the increase/decrease/rise/decline(……在不断的增加,减少,上升,下降)

●图表作文中的过渡、概括句型：

1)As can be indicated in the table,...2)As we could find out later，...3)As is revealed in the table，...4)As the survey results show，...5)This table provides several important points of comparison

between，...6)The two graphs depict the same thing in...7)The key findings taken from the surveys are as follows:8)According to the figures given in the table,...9)This chart shows that...10)As is shown by the graph,...

第三篇：大学英语六级最后冲刺之修炼写作高分

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大学英语六级最后冲刺之修炼写作高分

上海新东方汪忠平

英语写作是一个遣词造句，连句成篇，将不同信息组合排列的过程，也是体现英语运用能力的一个重要方面，因此是各类英语考试的必考题型之一。但从历年六级考试情况来看，写作作为主观题型，一直是考生的薄弱环节。

很多考生在写作过程中，出于有限的词汇水平和语言表达能力，得到的只是些杂乱无序的字、词、句，无法将其连接成一篇结构完整、逻辑性强又符合英文阅读习惯的文章。

一、词汇问题

在六级作文中，词汇量不足是影响成绩的一个重要因。很多考生由于基本词汇量极为有限，很难表达清楚自己的观点；而有部分考生，有一定的词汇量，却依然无法过写作“词汇关”，主要有以下几大问题：

1．拼写错误

正确的词形是表达语言的基础，在书面表达中，“拼写”是语言准确性的首要体现。英语是拼音文字，是由若干字母按一定的顺序排列而成的，多一个字母或少一个字母甚或是把字母顺序写颠倒了就会出错或写成别的单词。在四六级作文中，很多考生会将以下单词拼错：如把though写成through；把mental写成metal；把colleague写成 college；把explanation误拼成 explaination等。词汇拼写取决于考生平时单词基本功是否过关，别无捷径，唯有认真背单词。

2．用词不当

用词不当可以说是写作中出现的主要问题。许多考生平时机械地背词汇手册，掌握了一定的词汇量，但不知该在什么语境中使用。这些考生虽然对题目及要求非常清楚，却无法用一些恰当的词来表达自己的思想。

下面举几个例子：

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例一：Then we can have a wider choose.（choose是动词，这里应为名词choice）例二：They insist on post-graduate study is very important for them.（应改为They insist that post-graduate study is very important for them.）

例三：In the past，the price of meat was so expensive that most families could not afford it.（应改为In the past，the price of meat was so high that most families could not afford it.）

很多考生在写作时，由于时间关系，抑或是平时习惯使然，用词方面往往随心所欲，想到就用，所以作文中用词不当的错误比比皆是。因此考生在背单词的时候，应对其基本词组，同形词、同义词辨析等都有一个准确的把握。

3．词组搭配错误

词语的搭配是英语学习中的一项重要内容，要正确地认识和使用词语，就必须在词语与词语的联合上多下功夫。然而，有些考生平时不注意积累，或对一些约定俗成的词语记忆不牢，使用时模棱两可，从而影响了作文的质量。

依然通过举例来说明问题：

例一：The price should be lowered in order to meet the students„ acquires.（meet the students‟ acquires应为meet the students„ requirements.）

例二：Therefore，we shall attach great importance about this question.（attach great importance about 应为 attach great importance to）

二、基本语法问题

通过对很多考生的试卷分析，发现在写作方面，基本语法层面的问题依然层出不穷。例如：无法保持时态在全文的一致，这一现象很普遍，往往是紧接的两句，在没有任何时间状语的情况之下，就出现了时态的不一致；还有现在进行时不加ing；一般现在时第三人称单数问题；情态动词之后，动词反而不用原形等等。

很多考生缺乏基本的语法意识，作文中常犯的语法错误除了时态错误，还包括冠词错误、名词和动词单复数错误、代词不一致错误、词性错误以及句子主谓不完整错误。由于篇幅关系，这里不再赘述。

三、缺乏逻辑性

很多考生在英语写作的过程中，暴露出中文写作能力的不足，比如逻辑性、论证能力、描述能力等；例如：作文题为“A Campaign Speech”，为竞选学生会主席而进行演讲。有一位考生通篇都在传达这样的信息：如果我能当选学生会主席，就能提高我的组织能力、思维能力、沟通能力等等。这显然体现了考生缺乏逻辑性，设想你是一名学生，会选一个只想着利用这个机会来提高自己的人作学生会主席吗？

四、中式思维

中国学生学习英语摆脱不了汉语思维，通常套用汉语的结构及句式，往往是先拟好中文草稿，然后再译成英文。结果文章中出现许多Chinglish，例如：写到“食堂的菜单字太小，看不清”，很多同学会用这样的表达：The work of the menu is too small to see it clearly.这显然是囿于中式思维的框框，准确而地道的说法应为The print on the menu is too small to read.祝大家六级考试顺利通关！

第四篇：2014年大学英语六级写作（1）

My View on Fake Commodities

1.假冒伪劣商品的危害。

2.怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品。

My View on Fake Commodities

Nowadays fake commodities have flooded almost every inch of the market.Wherever you are, whatever you do, it seems that you can hardly have fallen prey to them.In other words, it is highly probable that you have bought some of those fake goods or products of inferior quality。Needless to say, fake commodities have already done great harm to our society.On the one hand, they will ruin the good reputation of genuine products and disturb the balance of the market.On the other hand, the prevalence of such products has hindered interpersonal relationship and resulted in the decline of public morality.As a consequence, they have wasted exhaustible resources, endangered people’s precious life and health, and in the long run eroded public trust。

Then, what should be done to do away with fake commodities? To start with, the government needs to tighten its inspection program and strengthen its enforcement policies.Secondly, honest businessmen should modify some long-accepted practices at the protection of their intellectual property right.Most important of all, we consumers will have to do a better job of learning how to distinguish between the genuine and the phoney and definitely say no to the fake ones.In one word, the coordinated effort of the whole society will put an end to fake commodities.

第五篇：2012年大学英语六级写作

2012年大学英语六级考试作文模板

（1）不同观点列举型（选择型）There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more _______

（2）利弊型的议论文）Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over（the issue that）___作文题目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___优点一______.And secondly ___优点二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺点一______.In addition, ____缺点二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.（3）答题性议论文）Currently, there is a widespread concern over（the issue that）__作文题目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途 径一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径 二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题

目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____ 方法_____.（4）谚语警句性议论文）It is well know to us that the proverb: “ ___谚语_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____谚语的含义_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.（also theoretically）A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.样解决（解决方案的优缺点）In recent days, we have to face I problem_____A, which is becoming more and more serious.First, ____________（说明 A 的现状）.Second, _______________（举例进一步说明现状）.Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing, _______________（解决方法一）.For another _____________（解决方法二）.Finally, ______________（解决方法三）.Personally, I believe that _____________（我的解决方法）.Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________（带来的好处）.分析并举例使其更充实。The good old proverb ________________（名言或谚语）reminds us that ________________（释义）.Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,_________________（理由一）.For example, ___________________（举例说 明）.Secondly,________________（理由二）.Another case is that

_______________（举例说 明）.Furthermore , __________________（理由三）.In my opinion, ________________（我的观点）.In short, whatever you do, please remember the say______A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.图表作文的框架 As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table（graph/picture/pie/chart）, ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease（goesup/increases/drops/decreases）,significantly/dramatically/steadily/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well_grounded.