第一篇:热 点话题2014年中考英语书面表达一三
热点话题2014年中考英语书面表达一四
2014年中考英语书面表达热点话题:低碳生活
现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活”(low-carbon life),即:降低二氧化碳的排放,采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处,请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括:你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。
提示词语:be good for, everyone, ride a bike, think, make a difference, environment, suggest, reuse
★ 范文
Low-carbon life is good for everyone.To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes.If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.
第二篇:2014年中考英语书面 表达热点话题
2014年中考英语书面 表达热点话题:如何减压让生活更美好
许 多学习生活中的 烦恼都会使人产生压力 ,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:
(1)同学 们中普遍存在的压力是什么;
(2)我的压力是什么;
(3)我是 如何成功缓解我的压力的。
注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80~100。
★ 范文
Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world.Students in our class are under too much pressure.Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.I’m always under pressure, too.M y parents want me to be the top student in class.So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends.Last Monday eveni ng, I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy.I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me a t last.SoI think a conversation with paren ts is necessary to solve the problem.That’s all.Thank you!
第三篇:2014年铜仁市中考英语预测热点话题书面表达[推荐]
2014年铜仁市中考英语预测热点话题书面表达
以下材料供英语老师参考,建议根据学生实际,从6月2日起安排学生背诵和默写。
第一篇:《中国汉字听写大会》的热播引起了人们对汉字书写的关注。假如你校将举办一次演讲比赛,请你以“传递书写文明,领略汉字之美”为主题写一篇演讲稿。内容必须包括:
1、分析汉字书写存在的问题和原因:书写能力下降;键盘的使用;
2、表达汉字书写的重要性:提高书写意识;感受汉字之美;传承中华文化;
3、提出提高汉字书写能力的方法:端正书写态度;开展书写竞赛。参考词汇:中国汉字 Chinese characters传递pass on书写竞赛:writing competition 注意: 1.词数80左右,开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数);
2.语言通顺,意思连续,条理清楚,书写规范,可适当发挥;3.词数80左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。Boys and girls, have you ever experienced this moment? You pick up a pen and start to write something down, but you can’t remember what the characters(汉字)look like.By studying Chinese characters, a window to Chinese culture and history is open to you.【答案】Possible version
Boys and girls, have you ever experience this moment? You pick up a pen and start to write something down, but you can’t remember what the characters look like.It seems that Chinese characters are in danger.Most people now write Chinese on keyboards.They now communicate with each other by e-mail or on QQ instead of writing letters.As a result they forget what a Chinese character looks like.Chinese people must understand the importance of Chinese characters, and it’s our duty to pass on Chinese culture.What’s more, we can feel the beauty of them.When we do homework, we must try to write carefully.More writing competitions can be held to help us write correctly.By studying Chinese characters, a window to Chinese culture and history
is open to you.第二篇:一个民族有自己的“民族梦”,一个国家有自己的“国家梦”,同样,每个人也应有属于自己的“美丽梦想”。最近,你班就“我们的理想职业”展开了一次调查。下表是你们小组的调查情况。请根据表格内容写一篇
注意1 100词左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分;3在必要处作适当发挥。Our ideal work Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas第三篇:今年央视春晚,一曲《时间都去哪儿了》让许多观众深受感动。假设你是九年级一班的李明,你将代表班级参加学校举行的“感恩父母”英语演讲比赛。演讲内容包括:
1.讲述一件你和父母之间难忘的事情;2.你对“感恩父母”的认识; 3.具体的感恩行动(至少两点); 4.表达祝福与愿望。注意:
1.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;3.词数80左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。【答案】Hello, everyone!I’m Li Ming from Class 1, Grade 9.Today the topic My parents do many things for me.When I was 10 years old, I caught a cold and had a high fever at midnight.I felt so terrible.My mother took me to hospital immediately.She took good care of me without a rest during the whole night.My parents give me almost everything.However, they don’t want to get any reward from me.From now on, I will help my parents do more housework.My mother’s birthday is coming;I will make a birthday card for her.I must thank her by studying hard.I hope my parents are in good health forever.第四篇:请根据以下提示内容,用英语写一篇80-100个词的短文。
新华学校实施了改善学生健康的“蛋奶工程”。Wet Hua是该学校的一名学生。这天,Wei Hua 又得到了刚发下的鸡蛋和牛奶。他打开那盒牛奶喝了一点点,就不想喝了。连续吃了一段时间的牛奶和鸡蛋,Wei Hua感到吃腻了,就偷偷地把鸡蛋和大半盒的牛奶扔进了垃圾桶里。远处的王老师看到了他的举动,并对他进行了教育。他对此感到抱歉,决定今后要节约粮食,不再浪费粮食。
参词汇rubbish bin垃圾桶,be tired of 对感到厌(腻)了,throw扔,save节约 要求1包括所有内容要点,用上所给参词,可适当发挥。
2语句通顺、语法正确,80-100个词。开头句已给出,不计入总词数。3文不得出现生真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名称。To improve students’ health, Xin Hua Middle School has carried on the Milk
【答案】To improve students’ health, Xin Hua Middle School has carried on the Milk and Eggs Project for students.Wei Hua is a student at the school.Today Wei Hua got the milk and egg again as usual.He opened the box of milk and drank a little.He felt tired of the egg and the milk.He didn’t want to have them any more.Then he threw the milk and egg into the rubbish bin.At that moment, Miss Wang saw this from far away.She came over and told him not to do this again.Wei Hua felt sorry to do so.He promised not to waste food any more.第五篇:某学校九年级(3)班举行了“读好书,促成长”的主题班会。会上同学们积极发言,请根据发言内容写一份倡议书,倡议全班同学认真读书,丰富自己的课余生活。
读书的重要读书可以获取知识,增长见识,使人聪明,使人快乐,有助
性于学习,有助于成长。
班级读书情许多同学在上网、看电视、听音乐上花费很多时间,况读书时间太少。
发出倡议多读书,读好书。
参考词汇:获取知识gain knowledge;增长见识open the mind
My dear friends,Reading plays an important part in our daily life.__________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s start reading now.【答案】书面表达
My dear friends,Reading plays an important part in our daily life.We can gain knowledge through reading.It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier.Our study can be improved if we read more books.Reading also helps us grow as a person.However, it’s a great pity that many activities such as surfing the Internet, listening to music, and watching TV and so on take up too much of our reading time.So here, I would like to suggest that everyone should spend more time in reading books and reading good books.It will do good to us.Let’s start reading now.
第四篇:2014年中考英语书面表达
2014年广东中考预测之书面表达
2007-2013年广东韶关真题写作 07广东
I think the most important invention of all the time is the mobile phone.We all know that many years ago it was very difficult for us to send and get information from one place to another.It is the mobile phone that makes it very easy to get information from all over the world.Parents can use the mobile phone to get in close touch with their kids.And we can also enjoy the music or films/a film through the mobile phone.08广东SaturdayJune 12thCloudy
badly ill when Hong was 11 and his mother left them.He had to look after his father and sister.He didn’t accept helps from others and depended on his own.He was a superman in my eyes.No one can avoid facing difficulties.But many teenagers are too weak to face troubles.Learn to be strong and never say “I can’t”, tomorrow will be another fine day.(82 words)
09广东The Teacher I Never Forget
How time flies!Three years has passed since I became a middle school student.I had very good memories of my classmates and teachers.The teacher I never forget is Mr Zhang, an English teacher.He’s a tall man with thick glasses.He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us.He’s humorous and always makes his class lively and interesting.He’s kind but is strict with us.He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don’t know.He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding.My English has greatly improved with his help.I must say many thanks to Mr Zhang.I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future.10广东How to Keep Safe in School
Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example,one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway.Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor.Therefore, he had to stay in hospital for two weeks.So I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways.And the teachers had better keep an eye on the students after class and stop them from running.At last, I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.(82 words)
11广东My Earth Hour 2011(有参与)
The Earth Hour was from 8:30 pm to 9:30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year.It was the moment my friends and I
waited for a long time.We talked and played games at home with all the lights off.We were glad to be in the Earth Hour.As a student, I have done lots of things to protect the environment.For example, I always carry a cloth bag while shopping.Besides, I often ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.I think we can care for the earth by doing so.Let's take part in the Earth Hour next year.I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in.(90 words)
12广东 社会公共行为举止 when I traveled in Guangzhou.I can't stand bad manners in public, either.In fact, I really get angry when people jump the queen and smoke in non-smoking areas.I think it's wrong to break the rules in public.In my opinion, we should know more about good manners.On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude.If we can't stop them, we can always ask the police or someone like that for help.13广东 面对谎言 Hongxing Middle School.Yesterday afternoon, the student on duty said he had to see the doctor.I offered to do the cleaning for him.Later I found him playing basketball on the playground.I was quite unhappy.He didn’t tell the lie.I would do the duty for him if he asked.As students, we should always tell the truth even if others might not agree with us.When others tell lies, we’d better make them understand that honesty is the best policy.13广东面对骗局 Hongxing Middle School.Last year, I received a chain letter saying that only kind people could receive the letter.If I sent if to as many people as possible, I would get good luck.But if I didn’t , I would die the next day.I was so scared that I sent it to
some of my friends.As students, we shouldn’t forward such chain letters.If we don’t know how to deal with them, we’d better ask our teachers or parents for help.13广东面对谣言 Hongxing Middle School.I heard a rumor of the same kind this year.It is said that a Chinese medicine called Banlangen could kill the flu of H7N9 or some diseases like that.So it was sold out in our city very soon.I thought it was so silly and I didn’t believe it at all.I would rather ask the doctor for advice than buy the medicine.As students, we should keep calm when we face such rumors.Besides, we shouldn’t believe or spread them.2014年广东中考书面表达预测——十大考点
(一)时事新闻, 国家政策, 家乡变化(六)旅游和介绍地方篇
(二)健康问题(七)新生事物评价
(三)关于环境保护问题(节约用水、用电、保护动物)(八)梦想和未来
(四)语言学习(九)烦恼篇
(五)写人记事篇(重点+好人好事)(十)社会准则, 公共道德
1.作弊问题
今年1月央视新闻频道报道,个别培训机构在2014年MBA招生考试中,通过考前发放无线电作弊器材、考中传送考试答案等方式组织考生在哈尔滨理工大学考点进行作弊。目前,学生考试作弊现象严重,请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原
因以及个人建议。原因:1.考试太滥 2.自身勤奋不够3.考生自拟4.考生自拟看法与建议:至少两点(考生自拟)
At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit-cheating in examinations.There are three main reasons.First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult.Second, some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons.Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet.So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams.Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study.We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress.Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.2.珍惜时间
2014年2月7日,国家主席习近平在俄罗斯索契接受俄罗斯电视台专访时谈到:“今年春节期间,中国央视春晚上一首《时间都去哪儿了》唱入了人们的心中。对我来说,问题在于我个人的时间都去哪儿了?当然是都被工作占去了。我经常能做到的是读书,读书已成了我的一种生活方式。”而对于我们中学生来说,又应该怎样节约时间呢?
How to save time
We have ever heard of “Time is money.Time is life.” Time is very important to everyone.But we can see people waste their time everywhere.They spend much time playing computer games, drinking, sleeping late in the morning and so on.It’s necessary for us to save our valuable time.We have to listen to our teachers carefully in class so that we can save more time to learn others after class.We should make a plan to study at home so that we can learn more with less time.If we can make good use of time, we are sure to get more.3.环境问题
在全国各地召开的2014年地方“两会”上,参会者都不约而同瞄准了“治霾”。造成雾霾这一现象的主要原因是工厂排出的废气和汽车尾气等。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示,以 “Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment”为题写一篇80词的短文。
提示:1.重要性:只有一个地球2.主要问题:污染、疾病、灾难 3.措施:停止污染、保护大自然
参考词汇:disaster n.灾难protect v.保护
Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment
We all live in the earth.The earth is our home.We have only one earth.We must take care of it.It gives us the best environment.If we harm it, it will be angry.And then we will have a terrible end.There are three problems in our earth, they are pollution, disaster and illness.It’s our duty to protect our environment.So we must plant more trees, protect the flowers and the trees, save energy, reduce the pollution.We should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.Protecting the nature is very important.It’s our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy.If everyone makes a contribution to protect the environment, the earth will become much more beautiful.4.卫生健康饮食
健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。
1.保持健康的重要性2.保持健康的方法3.保持健康的结论(你的看法?)(1)多吃水果蔬菜保持饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物(2)多锻炼健身强体(3)鄙弃不良习惯(你的看法?)
How to keep healthy?
Dear boys and girls,It's very important for the teenagers to have good health.We are growing up.We need to study hard.If we don't have good health, we can't do anything well.And it's bad for our future.Here are some of my suggestions.First we’d better do more exercise such as playing basketball, running or swimming.Then we should have a balanced diet.Don’t eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit.Third we need enoughsleep or rest.Next keep ourselves happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last we mustn’t drink wine or smoke.They are bad for our health.I hope we are healthy and enjoy our life.健康问题典型例句
1.It is very important to keep healthy.7.I didn't feel like eating anything.2.How can we keep healthy? 8.I decided to see the doctor.3.We can't go to sleep too late.We can't get up too late.9.In the doctor's office, the doctor looks over me carefully.4.We should eat the food healthily.10.A nurse gave me an injection.It was a little painful.5.We should do more exercise.11.The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a
6.Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head.day.12.He said, “Nothing is serious.” And he told me to take a rest and drink more water.13.A few days later, I felt better.From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world.5.网上购物Shopping Online
So far the Internet has been popular with people especially teenagers.People can do many kinds of interesting thing on it.With the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job.Just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished.You needn't step out of the room.It seems easy and quick.However, there's always a trap(陷阱)online.If you are careless, it will bring you some trouble.You may find the color of the article is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too big.If you want to be different, you'd better not buy clothes online.Once you put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people wear the same clothes in the street.So you must be careful, because everything has two sides.6.你有微博吗?请写一篇短文,内容包括:1)青少年使用微博的利与弊(至少两点);2)青少年应该如何使用微博。
On the one hand, it’s probably one of the fastest ways to send and receive messages.And it’s fun in playing micro-blog as well as getting the latest news.On the other hand, it takes time and energy to play it.Sometimes it’s not good for our study and health if we spend too much time on it.So I think as teenagers, we should concentrate more on our schoolwork.We should make good use of it and be careful of all the information on it because some of it is not true.7.关于汽车普及的现象的看法
目前,在中国汽车越来越普及,你对这一现象的看法,内容包括: 1)汽车普及的现象;2)它给人们带来的好处和坏处;3)你提出一些好的建议。
cheaper and cheaper.Having a car, you can travel to anywhere you like.You don’t have to wait for the bus and you can go to a far place with your family on holiday.Although cars can make people’s life easier, it brings problems.There may be more traffic jams and it will bring about more air pollution.In my opinion, some roads should be widened(拓宽)and more new roads should be constructed.The government should take measures to control the air pollution from the cars.Only in this way will people enjoy the life with cars.8.与父母相处的话题
(一)假如你是Han Mei, 下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail,请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信,与她交流看法,并帮她排忧解难。提示词语:listen to, mother's love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile写作要求:1.语句通顺,书写工整;2.可用所给提示词语,也可以适当发挥;3.词数在80左右
Dear Han Mei,I'm afraid I've got a big problem recently.My mother talks too much to me.She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school?” and so on.I'm annoyed.What shall I do?
Alice
Dear Alice,As a teenager, I met the same problem as you.But now I can get along better with my mother.Here are some ideas for you.Your mother talks much, because she cares about you.Maybe it's not a good way, but it shows your mother's love.So I think you should listen to her.If your opinions are different from your mother's, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about.If your mother doesn't take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.I hope what I say here can help you a lot.(二)对父母的感恩
Through it I know that we should live with a thankful heart.At that time, I think of my parents who are the first people I should thank.They gave me life.They give me home, bring me up and look after me.I cannot thank them too much.Maybe I should think how to pay back the love my parents give me.But now I think the best way to be appreciated of my parents is to study well and then being a useful person to the society when I grow up.9.建设和谐社会
假设你是张涛,是“某某一中”的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会’’的主题,根据下面所给出的要点提示,用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书。
要点提示:1.人与社会:祖国、家乡、学校,热爱关心2.人与人:家人、师长、同学,诚信互助
3.人与自然:能源、环境、动植物,爱惜保护4.你的态度:(内容由考生自己拟定)
Dear fellow students,Our government is aiming to build a “harmonious society”.I think it is every citizen’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal.As high school students, what should we do?
First of all, we should love our motherland.Let’s take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school and activities.Secondly, let’s fill the world with love.We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers.We should also care for each other and help those in need.More importantly, all of us must be faithful and honest in our daily life.Finally, let’s work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.As for myself, I will study even harder and try my best to do all the above.Dear fellow students, let’s start fight now and spare no effort(不遗余力地)to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!
Zhang Tao
10.计划愿望
I have made up my mind to do something meaningful after senior high school entrance examination(中考).First I amgoing to travel so that I can feel beauty of the nature and enjoy the fresh air as well as relax after the busy middle school.Nextin order to get ready for my high school life, I will preview(预习)the lessons during the summer holiday.What’ more, I willmake up English, such as reading English every morning, memorizing English words and write five sentences in English.At last I will do some chores at home for my parents.My parents are busy with their work and spend a lot of time looking after me.I want to do something for them and make them relax.I am looking forward to my coming holiday.I hope I can have a relaxing holiday.11.朋友
人的一生离不开朋友,在人生的不同阶段有着不同的朋友。初中三年的学习生活即将结束,请以“The Friendship Between My Friends and Me”为题写一篇作文。
内容包括:1)你交了几个好朋友?2)你们成为好朋友的理由(至少两条)。
The Friendship between My Friends and Me
school life, I have made three good friends.Here are the reasons why we can be good friends.First, we can learn from each other.If someone has anything in his study, we will discuss it together.Second, we can help each other.When someone is in trouble or unhappy, the others will try their best to help him out and cheer him up.Third, we mostly agree with each other and never argue with each other.I think I am so lucky to have such good friends.We will be good friends forever.12.成功与失败
Failure is so common in our life.When we fail in doing something, we often feel so sad that we have no interest in other things.Sometimes failure can also make us lose heart.Therefore, no one wants to be a failure.Success is what we all hope for, because it can bring us a sense of pride and happiness.However, failure is the mother of success.One failure doesn’t mean you can never be successful.It depends on what we do to deal with failure.Those who are always afraid of failure and can’t get over it will never win.But as long as we can get some lessons and experience from our failure, we’ll be sure to succeed.
第五篇:中考英语书面表达 命题作文
中考英语书面表达 命题作文
命题作文就是我们依据所给题目,确定中心,选择材料,写出符合题意,内容表达具体、充分的文章。
写命题作文通常要注意以下几点:
一、审准题目:文章的中心要对题目的分析来确定,一定要弄清主题的内涵,确立与文章联系的主题思想,表达不能游离于主题,否则即使内容再精彩,也是“跑题”作文,得分将会大打折扣,因此,写命题作文最重要的是先审清题目,确立要表现的中心。
二、构思结构:就是开放思路,启动联想,构想表现形式,勾勒出文章的结构层次,依次写出引言段,主题句,发展段和结尾句,努力使之新颖,别致。
三、选择材料:这一点很重要,一定要围绕想表现的中心去选择组织材料,所选的材料必须典型精要。
四、表达:就是用最确切明了的语言贯穿材料,表达自己的思想,力争用符合英语语法规则。英语表达习惯,最顺畅自然的词,句,段去表达中心思想,与表现中心无关的话即使再生动形象也不要去写。就写作的目的表现形式来看,命题作文分为三种形式:
1、记叙文类;
2、说明文类;
3、议论文类。
下面就谈一谈记叙文的写作
记叙文就是以记叙人物的经历或事物发展变化过程为主的一种文章。在初中写作训练中,记叙文是最基本,最常见,最重要的书面表达形式。记叙文有“六要素”即指“时间,地点,人物和事 件的起因,经过和结果”。一篇记叙文只要把这些要素写清楚,文章就会内容具体, 眉目清晰,中心意思明确。一般情况下,这六要素中的人物,时间,地点作为开端,要写在文章的开头。事件,原因常作为记叙文的段落发展,又称为文章的主体部分,应该放在文章的中间。结果作为记叙文的结局常放在文章的末尾处。
记叙文从写作的线索上来看,有三种表现形式:
1、以人物为主,围绕人物组织材料。
2、以事物为中心,围绕事件组织材料或围绕事件写人。
3、以写景状物,描写为主。
写好记叙文应注意以下几点:
1、明确写作目的:写文章的目的就是确切表达一个中心思想,文章的一切内容应自始自终地为展开中心服务。
2、选择细节材料:选择好的细节材料就是为了更好地表现主题,所选择的材料要有代表性,典型性。写作内容要详略得当,主要情节应详细写,次要内容要简略或概述。
1)关于写人物,一般要把某人的年龄,外貌和性格特征,人物行为,心理活动等方面简要概括出来。同时要略加点评或感想。
2)关于写事件,事件是记叙的核心,往往有它的起因,经过和结局。写事件要比较详细地交代事情的来龙去脉,同时要重点突出,表达精练,防止渲染。
3、恰当的选择写作方法:记叙文的写作方法就是指写作的顺序,文章先写什么,后写什么都要有一定顺序。
中考经典展示:
(1)以My Mother为题写一篇短文。(2003扬州)
内容要点:1.我的妈妈是护士,工作努力。2.上个月去北京,抗击SARS(fight against)。3.一个月没有回来。4.保护我们免受侵害。5.我爱妈妈,为妈妈自豪。
标题已给出,要求1.写清时间 2.要点要完整 3.可适当增加内容 4.字数在60个词左右
(2)班会上,老师要求每位同学用英语介绍自己的一位朋友,请你根据所提供的要点为题写一篇短文。(2003南京)
要点:1.Who is he / she。2.When and where did you get to know him / her。3.Why do you like him / her。注意:1.文章的开头和结尾已给出(不计入词数)2.词数60-80,须包括以上要点,可适当增加细节使短文意思通畅。3.条理清楚,语意连贯,句式规范,字迹工整。4.文中不得出现真实的人名。校名等相关信息。
写作实践范例
以“My Chinese Teacher”为标题写一篇字数为80-100之间的英语短文。提示内容如下:
1、孙老师今年36岁,中等身材。
2、她关心。热爱学生,工作认真负责。
3、她语文课讲得生动。有趣。My Chinese Teacher Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher.Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.Ms Sun works very hard.She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office.She tries to make her classes lively and interesting.And we enjoy her lessons very much.Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us.And we're getting on well with each other.But she is very strict with us in our studies.Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese.All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.新题导练
请以“My Classmate”为标题写一篇记叙文
要求:
1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。
2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索,以
一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文: My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate.He is a good student and always ready to help others.One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road.A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move.The car nearly hit her.Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm.The little girl was saved.She told him where she lived, and he took her home.When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson.He told the teacher why he was late.He was then praised for what he had done.